Comments received on poems by Kevin Michael Bloor
fighter
Fay Slimm. said:
That last line says it all Kevin - whatever life throws at us we can as poets pick up a pen and allow fighting words to flow.
March 19th, 2021 16:59
Fay Slimm. said:
That last line says it all Kevin - whatever life throws at us we can as poets pick up a pen and allow fighting words to flow.
March 19th, 2021 16:59
Dead Man\'s Bones
L. B. Mek said:
\'grew cold as steel and wouldn’t grieve
or wear my heart upon my sleeve,\'..
how well I relate:
\'I have never shed a tear at a funeral
and yet
many a night I\'ve slept
on pillows
soaked with regret\'..
a great write dear poet!
I\'m sorry for your loss but know, the mere fact you have a father worth those tears that wait and accumulate, is a source for gratitude and in some small way,
may - one day, represent a modicum of solace
March 18th, 2021 05:20
L. B. Mek said:
\'grew cold as steel and wouldn’t grieve
or wear my heart upon my sleeve,\'..
how well I relate:
\'I have never shed a tear at a funeral
and yet
many a night I\'ve slept
on pillows
soaked with regret\'..
a great write dear poet!
I\'m sorry for your loss but know, the mere fact you have a father worth those tears that wait and accumulate, is a source for gratitude and in some small way,
may - one day, represent a modicum of solace
March 18th, 2021 05:20
Dead Man\'s Bones
Fay Slimm. said:
Honest and so well rhymed Kevin this confession of youthful neglect when grief affects others and ending in such poignant questions your write has such an appeal.
March 18th, 2021 04:08
Fay Slimm. said:
Honest and so well rhymed Kevin this confession of youthful neglect when grief affects others and ending in such poignant questions your write has such an appeal.
March 18th, 2021 04:08
Beauty\'s Daughter
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well written, Kevin. You still are on the hook for a gift.
March 16th, 2021 09:45
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well written, Kevin. You still are on the hook for a gift.
March 16th, 2021 09:45
Love\'s Insanity
L. B. Mek said:
am I right in remembering this write from before, dear poet?
if I had time I would search and verify for myself..
either way a bravely revealing read and a poignantly emotive dedication, as ever - skilfully executed
March 15th, 2021 07:30
L. B. Mek said:
am I right in remembering this write from before, dear poet?
if I had time I would search and verify for myself..
either way a bravely revealing read and a poignantly emotive dedication, as ever - skilfully executed
March 15th, 2021 07:30
Free Birds
L. B. Mek said:
oh I\'m not so sure, dear poet
at times
in the hue of sunset
and rage of dawn
I sometimes, stumble
upon peak\'s of life, that resemble
heaven\'s picturesque gates: as well
March 15th, 2021 06:31
L. B. Mek said:
oh I\'m not so sure, dear poet
at times
in the hue of sunset
and rage of dawn
I sometimes, stumble
upon peak\'s of life, that resemble
heaven\'s picturesque gates: as well
March 15th, 2021 06:31
Love\'s Insanity
dusk arising said:
Blimey ! There\'s so much going on in this poem. I\'m full of questions.
Whereas this is a statement of heartfelt pain, it is also a heck of a tease, for each reader will want to know more.
March 15th, 2021 06:28
dusk arising said:
Blimey ! There\'s so much going on in this poem. I\'m full of questions.
Whereas this is a statement of heartfelt pain, it is also a heck of a tease, for each reader will want to know more.
March 15th, 2021 06:28
Free Birds
Goldfinch60 said:
Some neighbour can be right plebs who do not care for others, fortunately I have good neighbours but one lot is about to move and another set will be moving in, I hope they are good as well.
Andy
March 15th, 2021 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Some neighbour can be right plebs who do not care for others, fortunately I have good neighbours but one lot is about to move and another set will be moving in, I hope they are good as well.
Andy
March 15th, 2021 01:35
Free Birds
Doggerel Dave said:
The problems of urban living exemplified, Kevin - haven\'t
we all got one (or if we drew the short straw, two!)
In my case it\'s down stairs; apartment living is a whole added dimension which I might explore here one day...
Your neat write has the subject covered...for now...
March 14th, 2021 19:19
Doggerel Dave said:
The problems of urban living exemplified, Kevin - haven\'t
we all got one (or if we drew the short straw, two!)
In my case it\'s down stairs; apartment living is a whole added dimension which I might explore here one day...
Your neat write has the subject covered...for now...
March 14th, 2021 19:19
Nikita, Little Star
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Kevin, I am not surprised this has been framed.
Andy
March 13th, 2021 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Kevin, I am not surprised this has been framed.
Andy
March 13th, 2021 01:16
Nikita, Little Star
orchidee said:
A fine write Kevin, hardly poor. Framing it makes it looks \'classical\'. Not that it was poor in the first place and needed something to off-set it!
I\'m waffling on now - do shut up now Orchi. lol.
March 12th, 2021 12:04
orchidee said:
A fine write Kevin, hardly poor. Framing it makes it looks \'classical\'. Not that it was poor in the first place and needed something to off-set it!
I\'m waffling on now - do shut up now Orchi. lol.
March 12th, 2021 12:04
A Noble Truth
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
but dear poet: in those quite hours of quested self-discovery, exists a promise for those who \'choose\' to hope:
\'our understanding of those same causes to suffering, pave a path to attaining relief from - our suffering\'
and a clue
as to how we can avoid having to endure such suffering when traversing those future hurdles that inevitably, await
March 11th, 2021 07:23
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
but dear poet: in those quite hours of quested self-discovery, exists a promise for those who \'choose\' to hope:
\'our understanding of those same causes to suffering, pave a path to attaining relief from - our suffering\'
and a clue
as to how we can avoid having to endure such suffering when traversing those future hurdles that inevitably, await
March 11th, 2021 07:23
Melancholic Men
L. B. Mek said:
really well written, it reads raw yet you\'ve crafted it within that telltale sign of effortless flow, signifying how much work went into it..
a great write dear poet!
March 11th, 2021 05:55
L. B. Mek said:
really well written, it reads raw yet you\'ve crafted it within that telltale sign of effortless flow, signifying how much work went into it..
a great write dear poet!
March 11th, 2021 05:55
Melancholic Men
Fay Slimm. said:
Great flow to this well-worded lament at the miss of the Muse dear Kevin though I would say your expert rhyming proves she must have returned post haste - a very inspirational read my friend.
March 10th, 2021 17:05
Fay Slimm. said:
Great flow to this well-worded lament at the miss of the Muse dear Kevin though I would say your expert rhyming proves she must have returned post haste - a very inspirational read my friend.
March 10th, 2021 17:05
Melancholic Men
MendedFences27 said:
This is a wonderful poem. I\'ve been a melancholic man from time to time and can only say \"not to worry\" she will return. The way in which you\'ve expressed the loss should, alone, tell you that she is on her way. I\'m saving this pup for when I need inspiration. - Phil A.
March 10th, 2021 16:59
MendedFences27 said:
This is a wonderful poem. I\'ve been a melancholic man from time to time and can only say \"not to worry\" she will return. The way in which you\'ve expressed the loss should, alone, tell you that she is on her way. I\'m saving this pup for when I need inspiration. - Phil A.
March 10th, 2021 16:59
Melancholic Men
Classicmister said:
Michael - Another excellent, though sad, poem - I always admire the rhythm and structure of your poems - You have such a gift for rhyme and beat. Thank you for sharing. John
March 10th, 2021 10:24
Classicmister said:
Michael - Another excellent, though sad, poem - I always admire the rhythm and structure of your poems - You have such a gift for rhyme and beat. Thank you for sharing. John
March 10th, 2021 10:24
Sorrow\'s Season
L. B. Mek said:
even better as a revisit, read: like fine wine, my talented friend
March 9th, 2021 07:40
L. B. Mek said:
even better as a revisit, read: like fine wine, my talented friend
March 9th, 2021 07:40
Sorrow\'s Season
Doggerel Dave said:
Good \'un. I was able to power through that and get your history painlessly,
Great rhythm and rhyme, entertaining to boot.
March 9th, 2021 06:27
Doggerel Dave said:
Good \'un. I was able to power through that and get your history painlessly,
Great rhythm and rhyme, entertaining to boot.
March 9th, 2021 06:27
Planet B
orchidee said:
A fine write Kevin
A spurious version from me:
There is a planet called Cuckoo Land
They say I must live there
Cos every time I say \'I can sing\'
They say I my delusions share! heehee.
March 8th, 2021 11:48
orchidee said:
A fine write Kevin
A spurious version from me:
There is a planet called Cuckoo Land
They say I must live there
Cos every time I say \'I can sing\'
They say I my delusions share! heehee.
March 8th, 2021 11:48
a poet can\'t...
L. B. Mek said:
each verse resonates deep, a wonderful read
February 25th, 2021 05:04
L. B. Mek said:
each verse resonates deep, a wonderful read
February 25th, 2021 05:04
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