Comments received on poems by Kevin Michael Bloor
Snowdrops
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, I love your poem. It brings back memories of looking for the first \"Schnee-Gloeckchen\" (\'Snow-Bells\', German for this flower) when growing up in Switzerland. Alas, we don\'t have them in Hawaii and no snow either!
February 3rd, 2021 12:41
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, I love your poem. It brings back memories of looking for the first \"Schnee-Gloeckchen\" (\'Snow-Bells\', German for this flower) when growing up in Switzerland. Alas, we don\'t have them in Hawaii and no snow either!
February 3rd, 2021 12:41
Snowdrops
orchidee said:
Ooh I dunno Kevin. Hardly feeble! if ya had not told me of them galanthus, I\'d never have known. heehee.
I could set this to a hymn tune is you wish, with minor adjustments?
And an omen? An elderly lady passed away age 95 last year (not covid). Snowdrops were one of her favourite flowers.
February 3rd, 2021 10:45
orchidee said:
Ooh I dunno Kevin. Hardly feeble! if ya had not told me of them galanthus, I\'d never have known. heehee.
I could set this to a hymn tune is you wish, with minor adjustments?
And an omen? An elderly lady passed away age 95 last year (not covid). Snowdrops were one of her favourite flowers.
February 3rd, 2021 10:45
Overcomer
L. B. Mek said:
.... Eventually!
I too, \'choose\': to believe
and intrust in that greater good - which
has always found a way to prevail...
such an uplifting write, thanks for sharing
January 28th, 2021 04:27
L. B. Mek said:
.... Eventually!
I too, \'choose\': to believe
and intrust in that greater good - which
has always found a way to prevail...
such an uplifting write, thanks for sharing
January 28th, 2021 04:27
Overcomer
Goldfinch60 said:
And that joy will forever be with you Kevin.
Andy
January 28th, 2021 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
And that joy will forever be with you Kevin.
Andy
January 28th, 2021 01:31
Tough Love
L. B. Mek said:
\'but pen pours on paper pain’s past pent-up passion
and fighting my foes hasn’t gone out of fashion!\',
wonderful alliteration, a good read: \'giv em hell!\'
January 21st, 2021 05:50
L. B. Mek said:
\'but pen pours on paper pain’s past pent-up passion
and fighting my foes hasn’t gone out of fashion!\',
wonderful alliteration, a good read: \'giv em hell!\'
January 21st, 2021 05:50
Tough Love
jarcher54 said:
Wait, I thought Rudyard Kipling was deceased? Very witty! Thanks.
January 20th, 2021 10:43
jarcher54 said:
Wait, I thought Rudyard Kipling was deceased? Very witty! Thanks.
January 20th, 2021 10:43
The Poet\'s Ploy
Doggerel Dave said:
A \'little\' sonnet with an incisive analysis of an aspiring poet\'s ways and means.
Not \'little\' at all, the subject as realised by you.
Dave
January 12th, 2021 22:33
Doggerel Dave said:
A \'little\' sonnet with an incisive analysis of an aspiring poet\'s ways and means.
Not \'little\' at all, the subject as realised by you.
Dave
January 12th, 2021 22:33
The Poet\'s Ploy
FredPeyer said:
That is exactly what we all are trying to do, Kevin. Well said.
January 12th, 2021 13:01
FredPeyer said:
That is exactly what we all are trying to do, Kevin. Well said.
January 12th, 2021 13:01
Pilgrim\'s Prayer
L. B. Mek said:
\'And I, a mortal, dare to dream,
although I’m quintessential clay;
beneath the sky, in vain, I scheme
to conjure one who went away.\'
what an eloquent verse of poetry you\'ve penned here, encapsulating your poems entire message with such crisp brevity,
Brilliant!
Happy New Year dear Poet
January 5th, 2021 05:13
L. B. Mek said:
\'And I, a mortal, dare to dream,
although I’m quintessential clay;
beneath the sky, in vain, I scheme
to conjure one who went away.\'
what an eloquent verse of poetry you\'ve penned here, encapsulating your poems entire message with such crisp brevity,
Brilliant!
Happy New Year dear Poet
January 5th, 2021 05:13
Pilgrim\'s Prayer
Goldfinch60 said:
He will be waiting for you Kevin as mine is for me - but not yet!
Andy
January 5th, 2021 01:59
Goldfinch60 said:
He will be waiting for you Kevin as mine is for me - but not yet!
Andy
January 5th, 2021 01:59
Pilgrim\'s Prayer
orchidee said:
A sensitive write Kevin.
There you are - in your pic in the title! lol.
January 4th, 2021 14:17
orchidee said:
A sensitive write Kevin.
There you are - in your pic in the title! lol.
January 4th, 2021 14:17
Jesus-Fire
orchidee said:
Ahh, there you are today - the one on the left.
Dunno who that bloke is on the right! lol.
January 4th, 2021 02:59
orchidee said:
Ahh, there you are today - the one on the left.
Dunno who that bloke is on the right! lol.
January 4th, 2021 02:59
Jesus-Fire
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
I really like your verse, a rousing poulter\'s measure (iambic heptameter couplets) that deftly avoids sounding like Edgar A. Guest.
To my eye, this verse would be better set up with left justification rather than with the middle axis MyPoeticSide defaults to if not strongly dissuaded from it.
The only reason I\'d want to learn Russian would be to be able to read Pushkin. My foreign language is German.
January 3rd, 2021 11:59
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
I really like your verse, a rousing poulter\'s measure (iambic heptameter couplets) that deftly avoids sounding like Edgar A. Guest.
To my eye, this verse would be better set up with left justification rather than with the middle axis MyPoeticSide defaults to if not strongly dissuaded from it.
The only reason I\'d want to learn Russian would be to be able to read Pushkin. My foreign language is German.
January 3rd, 2021 11:59
One Brighter Day
Goldfinch60 said:
A very profound write Kevin and your words \"(not found in church, with steeple)\" are so meaningful as organised religion is a farce, I dismissed organised religion when my wife was taken from me by dementia and eventually passed. She had been singing the christian praises all her life, I was a Chaplain at one point but once I dismissed organise religion it was as though a weight ha been lifted from me.
I still believe in god, but it is my god. I also believe that Jesus existed but look upon him as the first Hippie making love not war.
As Dave Allen always said \"May your God go with you\"
Andy
January 3rd, 2021 02:06
Goldfinch60 said:
A very profound write Kevin and your words \"(not found in church, with steeple)\" are so meaningful as organised religion is a farce, I dismissed organised religion when my wife was taken from me by dementia and eventually passed. She had been singing the christian praises all her life, I was a Chaplain at one point but once I dismissed organise religion it was as though a weight ha been lifted from me.
I still believe in god, but it is my god. I also believe that Jesus existed but look upon him as the first Hippie making love not war.
As Dave Allen always said \"May your God go with you\"
Andy
January 3rd, 2021 02:06
Happy New Year!
FineB said:
Happy New Year Kevin.
A superb write.
May 2021 be a good year.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
January 2nd, 2021 11:37
FineB said:
Happy New Year Kevin.
A superb write.
May 2021 be a good year.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
January 2nd, 2021 11:37
One Brighter Day
Fay Slimm. said:
A piece of honest and very well rhymed appeal which not only moves the heart of this reader but will inspire those who lonely need its penned advice. A fine write Kevin.
January 2nd, 2021 06:53
Fay Slimm. said:
A piece of honest and very well rhymed appeal which not only moves the heart of this reader but will inspire those who lonely need its penned advice. A fine write Kevin.
January 2nd, 2021 06:53
Happy New Year!
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you Kevin for your meaningful words. This year WILL be a good year.
Andy
January 2nd, 2021 01:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you Kevin for your meaningful words. This year WILL be a good year.
Andy
January 2nd, 2021 01:57
Happy New Year!
Poetic Dan said:
As it has always been! As simply said do it die my friend!
May we keep doing the do for as long as we can!
Much peace and respect!
Little can be grand...
January 1st, 2021 08:10
Poetic Dan said:
As it has always been! As simply said do it die my friend!
May we keep doing the do for as long as we can!
Much peace and respect!
Little can be grand...
January 1st, 2021 08:10
Shadowland
Jerry Reynolds said:
Very good read. Have a Happy Holiday and Stay Safe.
December 24th, 2020 16:48
Jerry Reynolds said:
Very good read. Have a Happy Holiday and Stay Safe.
December 24th, 2020 16:48
Shadowland
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful dedication,
Happy holidays dear Poet
December 24th, 2020 06:57
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful dedication,
Happy holidays dear Poet
December 24th, 2020 06:57
Lovesick lines composed on a rainy day
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
The first poem I\'ve read on MyPoeticSide where the middle-axis line justification seems to work with the poem, which is really well-constructed metrically.
I don\'t use middle-axis myself - it can be quite a chore to get MyPoeticSide to left-justify.
\"If we\'d only knew\" is ungrammatical.
December 19th, 2020 16:22
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
The first poem I\'ve read on MyPoeticSide where the middle-axis line justification seems to work with the poem, which is really well-constructed metrically.
I don\'t use middle-axis myself - it can be quite a chore to get MyPoeticSide to left-justify.
\"If we\'d only knew\" is ungrammatical.
December 19th, 2020 16:22
Lovesick lines composed on a rainy day
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write Kevin.
Andy
December 19th, 2020 15:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write Kevin.
Andy
December 19th, 2020 15:38
Lovesick lines composed on a rainy day
FredPeyer said:
Well written, Kevin, one can feel the pain.
December 19th, 2020 12:19
FredPeyer said:
Well written, Kevin, one can feel the pain.
December 19th, 2020 12:19
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