Comments received on poems by Kevin Michael Bloor
The Poet\'s Ploy
Doggerel Dave said:
A \'little\' sonnet with an incisive analysis of an aspiring poet\'s ways and means.
Not \'little\' at all, the subject as realised by you.
Dave
January 12th, 2021 22:33
Doggerel Dave said:
A \'little\' sonnet with an incisive analysis of an aspiring poet\'s ways and means.
Not \'little\' at all, the subject as realised by you.
Dave
January 12th, 2021 22:33
The Poet\'s Ploy
FredPeyer said:
That is exactly what we all are trying to do, Kevin. Well said.
January 12th, 2021 13:01
FredPeyer said:
That is exactly what we all are trying to do, Kevin. Well said.
January 12th, 2021 13:01
Pilgrim\'s Prayer
L. B. Mek said:
\'And I, a mortal, dare to dream,
although I’m quintessential clay;
beneath the sky, in vain, I scheme
to conjure one who went away.\'
what an eloquent verse of poetry you\'ve penned here, encapsulating your poems entire message with such crisp brevity,
Brilliant!
Happy New Year dear Poet
January 5th, 2021 05:13
L. B. Mek said:
\'And I, a mortal, dare to dream,
although I’m quintessential clay;
beneath the sky, in vain, I scheme
to conjure one who went away.\'
what an eloquent verse of poetry you\'ve penned here, encapsulating your poems entire message with such crisp brevity,
Brilliant!
Happy New Year dear Poet
January 5th, 2021 05:13
Pilgrim\'s Prayer
Goldfinch60 said:
He will be waiting for you Kevin as mine is for me - but not yet!
Andy
January 5th, 2021 01:59
Goldfinch60 said:
He will be waiting for you Kevin as mine is for me - but not yet!
Andy
January 5th, 2021 01:59
Pilgrim\'s Prayer
orchidee said:
A sensitive write Kevin.
There you are - in your pic in the title! lol.
January 4th, 2021 14:17
orchidee said:
A sensitive write Kevin.
There you are - in your pic in the title! lol.
January 4th, 2021 14:17
Jesus-Fire
orchidee said:
Ahh, there you are today - the one on the left.
Dunno who that bloke is on the right! lol.
January 4th, 2021 02:59
orchidee said:
Ahh, there you are today - the one on the left.
Dunno who that bloke is on the right! lol.
January 4th, 2021 02:59
Jesus-Fire
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
I really like your verse, a rousing poulter\'s measure (iambic heptameter couplets) that deftly avoids sounding like Edgar A. Guest.
To my eye, this verse would be better set up with left justification rather than with the middle axis MyPoeticSide defaults to if not strongly dissuaded from it.
The only reason I\'d want to learn Russian would be to be able to read Pushkin. My foreign language is German.
January 3rd, 2021 11:59
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
I really like your verse, a rousing poulter\'s measure (iambic heptameter couplets) that deftly avoids sounding like Edgar A. Guest.
To my eye, this verse would be better set up with left justification rather than with the middle axis MyPoeticSide defaults to if not strongly dissuaded from it.
The only reason I\'d want to learn Russian would be to be able to read Pushkin. My foreign language is German.
January 3rd, 2021 11:59
One Brighter Day
Goldfinch60 said:
A very profound write Kevin and your words \"(not found in church, with steeple)\" are so meaningful as organised religion is a farce, I dismissed organised religion when my wife was taken from me by dementia and eventually passed. She had been singing the christian praises all her life, I was a Chaplain at one point but once I dismissed organise religion it was as though a weight ha been lifted from me.
I still believe in god, but it is my god. I also believe that Jesus existed but look upon him as the first Hippie making love not war.
As Dave Allen always said \"May your God go with you\"
Andy
January 3rd, 2021 02:06
Goldfinch60 said:
A very profound write Kevin and your words \"(not found in church, with steeple)\" are so meaningful as organised religion is a farce, I dismissed organised religion when my wife was taken from me by dementia and eventually passed. She had been singing the christian praises all her life, I was a Chaplain at one point but once I dismissed organise religion it was as though a weight ha been lifted from me.
I still believe in god, but it is my god. I also believe that Jesus existed but look upon him as the first Hippie making love not war.
As Dave Allen always said \"May your God go with you\"
Andy
January 3rd, 2021 02:06
Happy New Year!
FineB said:
Happy New Year Kevin.
A superb write.
May 2021 be a good year.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
January 2nd, 2021 11:37
FineB said:
Happy New Year Kevin.
A superb write.
May 2021 be a good year.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
January 2nd, 2021 11:37
One Brighter Day
Fay Slimm. said:
A piece of honest and very well rhymed appeal which not only moves the heart of this reader but will inspire those who lonely need its penned advice. A fine write Kevin.
January 2nd, 2021 06:53
Fay Slimm. said:
A piece of honest and very well rhymed appeal which not only moves the heart of this reader but will inspire those who lonely need its penned advice. A fine write Kevin.
January 2nd, 2021 06:53
Happy New Year!
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you Kevin for your meaningful words. This year WILL be a good year.
Andy
January 2nd, 2021 01:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you Kevin for your meaningful words. This year WILL be a good year.
Andy
January 2nd, 2021 01:57
Happy New Year!
Poetic Dan said:
As it has always been! As simply said do it die my friend!
May we keep doing the do for as long as we can!
Much peace and respect!
Little can be grand...
January 1st, 2021 08:10
Poetic Dan said:
As it has always been! As simply said do it die my friend!
May we keep doing the do for as long as we can!
Much peace and respect!
Little can be grand...
January 1st, 2021 08:10
Shadowland
Jerry Reynolds said:
Very good read. Have a Happy Holiday and Stay Safe.
December 24th, 2020 16:48
Jerry Reynolds said:
Very good read. Have a Happy Holiday and Stay Safe.
December 24th, 2020 16:48
Shadowland
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful dedication,
Happy holidays dear Poet
December 24th, 2020 06:57
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful dedication,
Happy holidays dear Poet
December 24th, 2020 06:57
Lovesick lines composed on a rainy day
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
The first poem I\'ve read on MyPoeticSide where the middle-axis line justification seems to work with the poem, which is really well-constructed metrically.
I don\'t use middle-axis myself - it can be quite a chore to get MyPoeticSide to left-justify.
\"If we\'d only knew\" is ungrammatical.
December 19th, 2020 16:22
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
The first poem I\'ve read on MyPoeticSide where the middle-axis line justification seems to work with the poem, which is really well-constructed metrically.
I don\'t use middle-axis myself - it can be quite a chore to get MyPoeticSide to left-justify.
\"If we\'d only knew\" is ungrammatical.
December 19th, 2020 16:22
Lovesick lines composed on a rainy day
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write Kevin.
Andy
December 19th, 2020 15:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write Kevin.
Andy
December 19th, 2020 15:38
Lovesick lines composed on a rainy day
FredPeyer said:
Well written, Kevin, one can feel the pain.
December 19th, 2020 12:19
FredPeyer said:
Well written, Kevin, one can feel the pain.
December 19th, 2020 12:19
Poet of the Peaks
L. B. Mek said:
You\'re a rare Poet, I\'ll proudly admit
as I witness each line of truth, your finger\'s bleed,
to serenade aching heart\'s, you\'ve never met
and share that solace, you\'ve mined from within...
what a wonderful melody you\'ve weaved dear Poet,
thank you for sharing, Happy Holidays
December 18th, 2020 05:35
L. B. Mek said:
You\'re a rare Poet, I\'ll proudly admit
as I witness each line of truth, your finger\'s bleed,
to serenade aching heart\'s, you\'ve never met
and share that solace, you\'ve mined from within...
what a wonderful melody you\'ve weaved dear Poet,
thank you for sharing, Happy Holidays
December 18th, 2020 05:35
Poet of the Peaks
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
I\'ve been on MyPoeticSide just three days. You actually know how to write a poem! And you have a real name. Let\'s follow each other.
Including how to format on this WordPress site. You can even evade the middle axis, though it takes work.
Right now I\'m playing with the format.
December 17th, 2020 20:38
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
I\'ve been on MyPoeticSide just three days. You actually know how to write a poem! And you have a real name. Let\'s follow each other.
Including how to format on this WordPress site. You can even evade the middle axis, though it takes work.
Right now I\'m playing with the format.
December 17th, 2020 20:38
Poet of the Peaks
Doggerel Dave said:
I know you will keep it going (I hope so, anyway)
Regards Dave
December 17th, 2020 19:30
Doggerel Dave said:
I know you will keep it going (I hope so, anyway)
Regards Dave
December 17th, 2020 19:30
Lines composed on a summer\'s day walk in the Manifold Valley
Suresh said:
Let me walk that path, and rest a while in your words
December 11th, 2020 14:00
Suresh said:
Let me walk that path, and rest a while in your words
December 11th, 2020 14:00
Lines composed on a summer\'s day walk in the Manifold Valley
L. B. Mek said:
good read, like the imagery and relatability
November 30th, 2020 05:59
L. B. Mek said:
good read, like the imagery and relatability
November 30th, 2020 05:59
Lines composed on a summer\'s day walk in the Manifold Valley
Doggerel Dave said:
Manifest your pleasures that day in the Manifold Valley.
Felt and enjoyed very much.
All the best, Dave
November 29th, 2020 19:45
Doggerel Dave said:
Manifest your pleasures that day in the Manifold Valley.
Felt and enjoyed very much.
All the best, Dave
November 29th, 2020 19:45
Lines composed on a summer\'s day walk in the Manifold Valley
RDS said:
Nice contemplations and a good read Kevin. Yes it\'s clear you spent an hour listening to a field of flowers growing as it nearly takes that long to get your ear in. It\'s a bit like night vision that takes a bit of time to tune in.
Thanks man!
J
November 29th, 2020 11:35
RDS said:
Nice contemplations and a good read Kevin. Yes it\'s clear you spent an hour listening to a field of flowers growing as it nearly takes that long to get your ear in. It\'s a bit like night vision that takes a bit of time to tune in.
Thanks man!
J
November 29th, 2020 11:35
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