Comments received on poems by Kevin Michael Bloor



Sappho\'s Lost Lyrics
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words about a fine poet Kevin. Her words are not lost they are speaking throughout the ether.

Andy

March 31st, 2021 01:26

Love Story
L. B. Mek said:

\'A low lament, on broken strings,
my bitterness betrayed.\'
this line and that last verse hit home for me, a wonderful read..
I liked your play on a fairy tale theme as well, inclusive of that essential happy ending
it reinforces that surreal element of disbelief your voice conveys

March 30th, 2021 04:16

Love Story
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good loving words Kevin.

Andy

March 30th, 2021 00:53

Love Story
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Lovely words

March 29th, 2021 12:52

Love Story
orchidee said:

A nice write Kevin.

March 29th, 2021 09:49

Little Songbird
L. B. Mek said:

how much of what we perceive is curated by our need to cultivate a reality that matches our state of emotionality? (is the profound question your write whispered to me)..
a great read, I liked how you incorporated so many diverse aspects of poetry in this one write,
a stream of consciousness feel
steeped in melancholy
citing our thirst for nature
train journey, as setting and theme
all versed in your trademark flow

March 29th, 2021 05:00

Little Songbird
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good emotive words Kevin.

Andy

March 29th, 2021 00:47

Little Songbird
Fay Slimm. said:

A really engaging read and with such tender care for a little bird this verse must be to me one of your most appealing writes Kevin.

March 28th, 2021 06:46

Little Songbird
orchidee said:

Good write Kevin.

March 28th, 2021 06:36

Little Songbird
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Lovely well thought out words ... but a sad tone . Birds are beautiful ..,

I hate to think of a bird feeling sad wounded or scared



March 28th, 2021 05:23

Little Songbird
Doggerel Dave said:

You have nothing to reproach yourself for Kevin - either with respect to the ultimate fate of the bird or the quality of your verse.
Good stuff.

March 28th, 2021 05:19

Song
orchidee said:

Good write Kevin.

March 26th, 2021 09:34

Song
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Birds have a way of making one smile ... even when there is sadness within

A beautiful poem

March 26th, 2021 06:56

Death\'s Dark Dreamless Rest
L. B. Mek said:

\'beneath a weeping star.
Forgotten in a lonely vale,\'..
a wonderful dedication weaved within nuanced gentle expressions of impassioned sincerity

March 25th, 2021 06:04

Death\'s Dark Dreamless Rest
Goldfinch60 said:

May that dream be a long time away. Mine are already with me after my Joyce\'s passing 15 moths ago.

Andy

March 24th, 2021 06:25

fighter
Goldfinch60 said:

May that pen never cease to write Kevin.

Andy

March 20th, 2021 01:31

fighter
Fay Slimm. said:

That last line says it all Kevin - whatever life throws at us we can as poets pick up a pen and allow fighting words to flow.

March 19th, 2021 16:59

Dead Man\'s Bones
L. B. Mek said:

\'grew cold as steel and wouldn’t grieve
or wear my heart upon my sleeve,\'..
how well I relate:
\'I have never shed a tear at a funeral
and yet
many a night I\'ve slept
on pillows
soaked with regret\'..
a great write dear poet!
I\'m sorry for your loss but know, the mere fact you have a father worth those tears that wait and accumulate, is a source for gratitude and in some small way,
may - one day, represent a modicum of solace

March 18th, 2021 05:20

Dead Man\'s Bones
Fay Slimm. said:

Honest and so well rhymed Kevin this confession of youthful neglect when grief affects others and ending in such poignant questions your write has such an appeal.

March 18th, 2021 04:08

Dead Man\'s Bones
Goldfinch60 said:

It is never too late.

Andy

March 18th, 2021 01:32

Beauty\'s Daughter
Jerry Reynolds said:

Well written, Kevin. You still are on the hook for a gift.

March 16th, 2021 09:45

Beauty\'s Daughter
orchidee said:

Good write Kevin.

March 16th, 2021 06:53

Love\'s Insanity
Goldfinch60 said:

Good emotive write Kevin.

Andy

March 16th, 2021 01:32

Love\'s Insanity
L. B. Mek said:

am I right in remembering this write from before, dear poet?
if I had time I would search and verify for myself..
either way a bravely revealing read and a poignantly emotive dedication, as ever - skilfully executed

March 15th, 2021 07:30

Free Birds
L. B. Mek said:

oh I\'m not so sure, dear poet
at times
in the hue of sunset
and rage of dawn
I sometimes, stumble
upon peak\'s of life, that resemble
heaven\'s picturesque gates: as well

March 15th, 2021 06:31

Love\'s Insanity
dusk arising said:

Blimey ! There\'s so much going on in this poem. I\'m full of questions.

Whereas this is a statement of heartfelt pain, it is also a heck of a tease, for each reader will want to know more.

March 15th, 2021 06:28

Free Birds
Goldfinch60 said:

Some neighbour can be right plebs who do not care for others, fortunately I have good neighbours but one lot is about to move and another set will be moving in, I hope they are good as well.

Andy

March 15th, 2021 01:35

Free Birds
Doggerel Dave said:

The problems of urban living exemplified, Kevin - haven\'t
we all got one (or if we drew the short straw, two!)
In my case it\'s down stairs; apartment living is a whole added dimension which I might explore here one day...
Your neat write has the subject covered...for now...

March 14th, 2021 19:19

Free Birds
orchidee said:

Do shut up, neighbour! lol.

March 14th, 2021 10:00

Nikita, Little Star
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful write Kevin, I am not surprised this has been framed.

Andy

March 13th, 2021 01:16



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