Comments received on poems by Kevin Michael Bloor
Daffodils
jarcher54 said:
I was about to say what Goldfinch added... The daffodils are the herald of what\'s to come. A bright flag marking the trailhead. Much of their delight comes from their transitory nature.
April 10th, 2021 02:22
jarcher54 said:
I was about to say what Goldfinch added... The daffodils are the herald of what\'s to come. A bright flag marking the trailhead. Much of their delight comes from their transitory nature.
April 10th, 2021 02:22
Daffodils
Goldfinch60 said:
That springtime story is only just starting, the daffodils are just the start, Spring is emerging in many different ways.
Andy
April 10th, 2021 00:15
Goldfinch60 said:
That springtime story is only just starting, the daffodils are just the start, Spring is emerging in many different ways.
Andy
April 10th, 2021 00:15
Daffodils
Doggerel Dave said:
Daffodils have a special pace in my memory (and I don\'t mean \'I wandered lonely\' - though I do like it) As kid in the UK we grew them to take to school in a competition. One year I won a certificate of merit - which I still proudly possess.
But I\'m here for the rhyme and rhythm - thanks.
April 9th, 2021 07:18
Doggerel Dave said:
Daffodils have a special pace in my memory (and I don\'t mean \'I wandered lonely\' - though I do like it) As kid in the UK we grew them to take to school in a competition. One year I won a certificate of merit - which I still proudly possess.
But I\'m here for the rhyme and rhythm - thanks.
April 9th, 2021 07:18
The Horse\'s Head
L. B. Mek said:
well, not really that bad although certainly strange, lol
but depending on how light or metaphorically - deep, you want to keep it, there is room to excavate and burrow out a unique write I feel, may take a few edits and drafts I admit
April 8th, 2021 04:51
L. B. Mek said:
well, not really that bad although certainly strange, lol
but depending on how light or metaphorically - deep, you want to keep it, there is room to excavate and burrow out a unique write I feel, may take a few edits and drafts I admit
April 8th, 2021 04:51
The Horse\'s Head
Goldfinch60 said:
Dreaming of \'The Godfather\' then Kevin?
Andy
April 8th, 2021 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Dreaming of \'The Godfather\' then Kevin?
Andy
April 8th, 2021 01:28
Sappho\'s Isle of Dreams
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful, this version is more seeped in mythological glint
but your stylistic lyrical style adds that rooted connection
to her own signature words of versed musicality,
a great read!
April 2nd, 2021 04:49
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful, this version is more seeped in mythological glint
but your stylistic lyrical style adds that rooted connection
to her own signature words of versed musicality,
a great read!
April 2nd, 2021 04:49
Sappho\'s Isle of Dreams
Goldfinch60 said:
May those Sapphic words be forever with us Kevin.
Andy
April 2nd, 2021 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
May those Sapphic words be forever with us Kevin.
Andy
April 2nd, 2021 01:14
Sappho\'s Isle of Dreams
jarcher54 said:
Thanks... very smooth, melodious, and evocative. I was once a Greek scholar of sorts. Sappho would smile.
April 1st, 2021 21:50
jarcher54 said:
Thanks... very smooth, melodious, and evocative. I was once a Greek scholar of sorts. Sappho would smile.
April 1st, 2021 21:50
Sappho\'s Lost Lyrics
L. B. Mek said:
(such a brilliant and timely write my friend!
I can\'t thank you enough for inspiring
my own little scribbled dedication in reply)..
\'with poetic eloquence of Horace
and the free love utopia of Epicurus
that defiant legend of Greek Poetess brilliance, shall ever prevail!
though her works may have been conveniently, misplaced
fate insured her feats of lyrical legacy, transcend
chauvinist prejudice and archaic mindsets
to trailblaze a path for Poetry\'s Queens
imagine humanity without the poetic wisdom
of Elizabeth, Emily, Gwendolyn, Rossetti, Sylvia, Maya
(to name but a handful few), what a horror nightmare
of testosterone self importance
Sappho: saved us all from...\'
April 1st, 2021 03:33
L. B. Mek said:
(such a brilliant and timely write my friend!
I can\'t thank you enough for inspiring
my own little scribbled dedication in reply)..
\'with poetic eloquence of Horace
and the free love utopia of Epicurus
that defiant legend of Greek Poetess brilliance, shall ever prevail!
though her works may have been conveniently, misplaced
fate insured her feats of lyrical legacy, transcend
chauvinist prejudice and archaic mindsets
to trailblaze a path for Poetry\'s Queens
imagine humanity without the poetic wisdom
of Elizabeth, Emily, Gwendolyn, Rossetti, Sylvia, Maya
(to name but a handful few), what a horror nightmare
of testosterone self importance
Sappho: saved us all from...\'
April 1st, 2021 03:33
Sappho\'s Lost Lyrics
orchidee said:
You met her? She looks a feisty lass! lol.
March 31st, 2021 01:57
orchidee said:
You met her? She looks a feisty lass! lol.
March 31st, 2021 01:57
Sappho\'s Lost Lyrics
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words about a fine poet Kevin. Her words are not lost they are speaking throughout the ether.
Andy
March 31st, 2021 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words about a fine poet Kevin. Her words are not lost they are speaking throughout the ether.
Andy
March 31st, 2021 01:26
Love Story
L. B. Mek said:
\'A low lament, on broken strings,
my bitterness betrayed.\'
this line and that last verse hit home for me, a wonderful read..
I liked your play on a fairy tale theme as well, inclusive of that essential happy ending
it reinforces that surreal element of disbelief your voice conveys
March 30th, 2021 04:16
L. B. Mek said:
\'A low lament, on broken strings,
my bitterness betrayed.\'
this line and that last verse hit home for me, a wonderful read..
I liked your play on a fairy tale theme as well, inclusive of that essential happy ending
it reinforces that surreal element of disbelief your voice conveys
March 30th, 2021 04:16
Little Songbird
L. B. Mek said:
how much of what we perceive is curated by our need to cultivate a reality that matches our state of emotionality? (is the profound question your write whispered to me)..
a great read, I liked how you incorporated so many diverse aspects of poetry in this one write,
a stream of consciousness feel
steeped in melancholy
citing our thirst for nature
train journey, as setting and theme
all versed in your trademark flow
March 29th, 2021 05:00
L. B. Mek said:
how much of what we perceive is curated by our need to cultivate a reality that matches our state of emotionality? (is the profound question your write whispered to me)..
a great read, I liked how you incorporated so many diverse aspects of poetry in this one write,
a stream of consciousness feel
steeped in melancholy
citing our thirst for nature
train journey, as setting and theme
all versed in your trademark flow
March 29th, 2021 05:00
Little Songbird
Fay Slimm. said:
A really engaging read and with such tender care for a little bird this verse must be to me one of your most appealing writes Kevin.
March 28th, 2021 06:46
Fay Slimm. said:
A really engaging read and with such tender care for a little bird this verse must be to me one of your most appealing writes Kevin.
March 28th, 2021 06:46
Little Songbird
Caring dove said:
Lovely well thought out words ... but a sad tone . Birds are beautiful ..,
I hate to think of a bird feeling sad wounded or scared
March 28th, 2021 05:23
Caring dove said:
Lovely well thought out words ... but a sad tone . Birds are beautiful ..,
I hate to think of a bird feeling sad wounded or scared
March 28th, 2021 05:23
Little Songbird
Doggerel Dave said:
You have nothing to reproach yourself for Kevin - either with respect to the ultimate fate of the bird or the quality of your verse.
Good stuff.
March 28th, 2021 05:19
Doggerel Dave said:
You have nothing to reproach yourself for Kevin - either with respect to the ultimate fate of the bird or the quality of your verse.
Good stuff.
March 28th, 2021 05:19
Song
Caring dove said:
Birds have a way of making one smile ... even when there is sadness within
A beautiful poem
March 26th, 2021 06:56
Caring dove said:
Birds have a way of making one smile ... even when there is sadness within
A beautiful poem
March 26th, 2021 06:56
Death\'s Dark Dreamless Rest
L. B. Mek said:
\'beneath a weeping star.
Forgotten in a lonely vale,\'..
a wonderful dedication weaved within nuanced gentle expressions of impassioned sincerity
March 25th, 2021 06:04
L. B. Mek said:
\'beneath a weeping star.
Forgotten in a lonely vale,\'..
a wonderful dedication weaved within nuanced gentle expressions of impassioned sincerity
March 25th, 2021 06:04
Death\'s Dark Dreamless Rest
Goldfinch60 said:
May that dream be a long time away. Mine are already with me after my Joyce\'s passing 15 moths ago.
Andy
March 24th, 2021 06:25
Goldfinch60 said:
May that dream be a long time away. Mine are already with me after my Joyce\'s passing 15 moths ago.
Andy
March 24th, 2021 06:25
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