Comments received on poems by Kevin Michael Bloor



The Golden Year
Goldfinch60 said:

Gret romantic write. May you and your Goddess walk together in love to eternity.

June 22nd, 2018 00:20

The Golden Year
Laura🌻 said:

Blue-eyed Bolla,
A beautiful romantic write! It must be the best feeling ever to live the dream you have dreamed for 30 years!
Happy first anniversary!🥂

~Laura~

June 21st, 2018 19:48

The Golden Year
SLR said:

Gently romantic. Great rhythm and flow. Fluid word use. Really good work. Congrats on the one year mark!

June 21st, 2018 13:11

The Days of Winged Wonder
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good romantic write.

June 21st, 2018 00:50

The Days of Winged Wonder
Laura🌻 said:

Blue-eyed Bolla,

A beautifully written poem and a beautiful pic!

Recalling the romantic past can be hurtful because it makes you think of all the years gone by without her! However, in your situation, you have reunited and your romance with your loved one is alive and well! Not too many of us can say that!

Rejoice and be the blissful couple you were destined to be!


~Laura~

June 20th, 2018 15:16

The Days of Winged Wonder
Heartwriter said:

I felt the pleasure mixed with an inkling of pain. Your words left no doubt. You\'d do it all over again, just the same. Beauty of a write!

June 20th, 2018 06:11

A Father\'s Day Elegy for a Dead Dad
Laura🌻 said:

Blue-eyed Bolla,
A wonderful heartfelt elegy for your dad! May he Rest In Peace along with mine!
A beautiful read!

~Laura~


June 17th, 2018 07:39

The Undivided
Laura🌻 said:

That is awesome! 👏🏻
HAPPY FATHER’S DAY 😊

June 17th, 2018 07:23

The Blazing Rag
SLR said:

I love this! Great descriptive write. Paints a vivid pic of the place. I\'ll join you there and we\'ll \"grab a pint\" . Is that the phrase? Good rhythmic flow, natural feeling rhymes. Great write, great post!

June 16th, 2018 22:11

The Undivided
Laura🌻 said:

Blue-eyed Bolla,

An exquisite poem gushing with love! So romantic! It does resonate of the teen years...
walking hand in hand like the boy and girl “from yesterday” reminiscing of the past while enjoying the present! True love does conquer all...
“One breath, one soul, one heart!”
May you and Lorraine enjoy and love each for the rest of your lives!

I totally enjoyed the read and the pic! Clever idea of then and now...a very handsome couple indeed! Blessings!


~Laura~

June 16th, 2018 13:30

The Blazing Rag
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, there is an open mike afternoon in one of our local pubs soon and I hope to go to it.

June 16th, 2018 12:58

The Blazing Rag
Laura🌻 said:

Blue-eyed Bolla,

I enjoyed reading your poem!
A bit of history. I like that!
I’m learning more and more about the UK because many of the writers who post on this site are from the UK! Great!

Enjoy the game!

~Laura~

June 16th, 2018 11:42

The Blazing Rag
Lalion said:

This is really good.

June 16th, 2018 05:50

The Undivided
SLR said:

Great write about true, endearing, enduring love. Great post. Romantic.

June 14th, 2018 10:21

The Undivided
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good loving write and a beautiful last line.

June 14th, 2018 09:13

My Lovebird
SLR said:

Love this. So lyrical and light. Romantic. Very nice! Great post.

June 11th, 2018 16:26

My Lovebird
Michael Edwards said:

She must be a special lady in which case we are both blessed - fine write.

June 11th, 2018 10:39

My Lovebird
Laura🌻 said:

Blue-eyed Bolla,
Such a pleasure to read your exquisitely written poem dedicated to your beautiful lovebird...
YOUR BEAUTIFUL
LADY LORRAINE!💞

May you continue to live your dream in each other’s arms!

~Laura~





June 11th, 2018 09:50

My Lovebird
Goldfinch60 said:

May your lovebird always fly into your arms.

June 11th, 2018 08:05

My Lovebird
dusk arising said:

Lyrical and sweet. Captures the enigma.

June 11th, 2018 05:36

My Lovebird
Heartwriter said:

So very beautiful. Flows as sweet and gentle as the wings of a lovebird.

June 11th, 2018 04:58

Girl From the Kissing Gate
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, I too have climbed over hills and dales with my loved one.

June 11th, 2018 00:40

Girl From the Kissing Gate
SLR said:

This is really good! I agree with the three of them! Perfect from the first line to the last. Great post!

June 10th, 2018 18:50

Girl From the Kissing Gate
w c said:

Excellent! Loved every line!

June 10th, 2018 13:52

Girl From the Kissing Gate
Laura🌻 said:

Blue-eyed Bolla,

No advice from me here!

You’ve done it!
You’ve followed your own advice in reference to being so happy now with your Dearest, darling...(I love the pic)...
“I will try to reflect this more in my poetry”...
AND YOU HAVE!

I enjoyed reading the entire poem. I especially like the last stanza! Bravo 👏🏻

~Laura~



June 10th, 2018 13:44

Girl From the Kissing Gate
Lorna said:

Perfect in every way...... so lilting......

June 10th, 2018 06:15

Bitter Breezes
Laura🌻 said:

Blue-eyed Bolla,

Your ability to write poems is phenomenal!

So...

Belt it out...
and then let it go!

When I look at your pic,
all I see is happiness!
I see two people in love.
Two people who have
finally found each other
again and will be spending
the rest of their lives together!
Let that be your focal point.
That is all that matters now!
Live in the now.
The past is no longer...
the future you don’t know...
the present is now for you and Lorraine to live and enjoy!

~Laura~

June 9th, 2018 08:53

This Son of Sorrow
Laura🌻 said:

Blue-eyed Bolla,

A beautiful heartfelt poem!
So profound! It brought tears to my eyes! I lost my dad a few years ago. There’s not one day that goes by that I don’t think of him!

Love and prayers for your dad!

~Laura~

June 6th, 2018 19:02

This Son of Sorrow
Goldfinch60 said:

It can take a long time, I can still see my father and know that I will join his Spirit with mine.

June 6th, 2018 07:56

Elegy for a Dead Dad
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good lament. He is still with you though.

June 5th, 2018 00:36



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