Comments received on poems by Kevin Michael Bloor
God\'s Chosen
dusk arising said:
Have you tried escaping rhyme? Once you do i think you may find yourself a lot more freedom. You are obviously a serious and commited poet as you regularly post on mps.
Rhyming lines restricts ones available vocabulary.
September 1st, 2019 09:25
dusk arising said:
Have you tried escaping rhyme? Once you do i think you may find yourself a lot more freedom. You are obviously a serious and commited poet as you regularly post on mps.
Rhyming lines restricts ones available vocabulary.
September 1st, 2019 09:25
Pertaining to Poets
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Kevin. Poets have the power to bring all emotions into the world.
September 1st, 2019 00:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Kevin. Poets have the power to bring all emotions into the world.
September 1st, 2019 00:55
Pertaining to Poets
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ! Hi KEVIN thanks for sharing ~ Love Poems about Poets & Poetry. I was raised on Poetry & Poets in Liverpool ~ Adrian Henri - Roger McGough - Brian Pattern - John Lennon etc. Writing Poetry was natural to us ! This Poem rings true ! Sublime souls ~ Heart fluttering thoughts ~ Pens pulverising Planets ~ Joyous lives ~ Words wven on sacred wings ~ Negledted Wives ! ~ Minds merged with Muse ~ Incandescent lives ~ AWESOME. We love all sorts of Poetry and try to include soame classical forms on MPS ! I also love the Structure of your Poem ! Six Quatrains with consistent Meter and Rhyme Pattern (xaxa xbxb xcxc etc) This makes it easy to read and a delight to recite. That is the essence of GOOD POETRY ! A lot of MODERN POETRY Lacks Rhyme - Rhthym & Reason !
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA !
August 31st, 2019 17:20
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ! Hi KEVIN thanks for sharing ~ Love Poems about Poets & Poetry. I was raised on Poetry & Poets in Liverpool ~ Adrian Henri - Roger McGough - Brian Pattern - John Lennon etc. Writing Poetry was natural to us ! This Poem rings true ! Sublime souls ~ Heart fluttering thoughts ~ Pens pulverising Planets ~ Joyous lives ~ Words wven on sacred wings ~ Negledted Wives ! ~ Minds merged with Muse ~ Incandescent lives ~ AWESOME. We love all sorts of Poetry and try to include soame classical forms on MPS ! I also love the Structure of your Poem ! Six Quatrains with consistent Meter and Rhyme Pattern (xaxa xbxb xcxc etc) This makes it easy to read and a delight to recite. That is the essence of GOOD POETRY ! A lot of MODERN POETRY Lacks Rhyme - Rhthym & Reason !
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA !
August 31st, 2019 17:20
Pertaining to Poets
Clara said:
\'\'Read from a page, they sound like words
A human could not utter\'\'
This poem is wonderful. It speaks such truth. The line I\'ve copied above speaks to me. I don\'t think too much when I write, I just let my pen flow across the page and what I read back can sometimes surprise me and shock me.
Thank you for this poem!
CLARA X
August 31st, 2019 08:17
Clara said:
\'\'Read from a page, they sound like words
A human could not utter\'\'
This poem is wonderful. It speaks such truth. The line I\'ve copied above speaks to me. I don\'t think too much when I write, I just let my pen flow across the page and what I read back can sometimes surprise me and shock me.
Thank you for this poem!
CLARA X
August 31st, 2019 08:17
Pertaining to Poets
Poetic Dan said:
It felt like I didn\'t breath until the end my friend, that was spine-tingling outstanding!
Thank you!
August 31st, 2019 05:39
Poetic Dan said:
It felt like I didn\'t breath until the end my friend, that was spine-tingling outstanding!
Thank you!
August 31st, 2019 05:39
Truly
Goldfinch60 said:
Belief is so important in a relationship, good write.
August 31st, 2019 00:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Belief is so important in a relationship, good write.
August 31st, 2019 00:18
Truly
Clara said:
The fluidity in this is wonderful. Thank you for sharing this. Great work.
August 30th, 2019 15:52
Clara said:
The fluidity in this is wonderful. Thank you for sharing this. Great work.
August 30th, 2019 15:52
Sole Survivors
orchidee said:
A fine write Kevin. You two don\'t look a day older! heehee.
August 27th, 2019 02:12
orchidee said:
A fine write Kevin. You two don\'t look a day older! heehee.
August 27th, 2019 02:12
The Chosen One
Laura🌻 said:
Kevin,
My first read of the day! Truly an exceptional and appreciated dedication for your poet friends! After reading this, I know I can embrace the many difficulties I’ll be facing during this day!
Thank you for sharing!
Laura
August 12th, 2019 09:02
Laura🌻 said:
Kevin,
My first read of the day! Truly an exceptional and appreciated dedication for your poet friends! After reading this, I know I can embrace the many difficulties I’ll be facing during this day!
Thank you for sharing!
Laura
August 12th, 2019 09:02
Winds of Change
Goldfinch60 said:
Nature at is wonderful best can give us all the glory that you have shown in your words.
August 11th, 2019 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Nature at is wonderful best can give us all the glory that you have shown in your words.
August 11th, 2019 00:44
Winds of Change
FineB said:
Hi Kevin,
A great write.
Nature has a timeless beauty and character all it\'s own.
You have portrayed this beautifully in your poem.
Keep writing
FineB
August 10th, 2019 09:54
FineB said:
Hi Kevin,
A great write.
Nature has a timeless beauty and character all it\'s own.
You have portrayed this beautifully in your poem.
Keep writing
FineB
August 10th, 2019 09:54
Winds of Change
Laura🌻 said:
Kevin,
An exquisite relatable poem that will brighten my day! I immediately knew it when I read these powerful words...
“The fresh winds kiss my fevered face.
Upon my troubled brow they place
Cool fingers, Heaven’s bliss bestowing,
Unconsciously, without their knowing!”
Thank you for sharing your mighty pen!
~Laura~
August 10th, 2019 06:16
Laura🌻 said:
Kevin,
An exquisite relatable poem that will brighten my day! I immediately knew it when I read these powerful words...
“The fresh winds kiss my fevered face.
Upon my troubled brow they place
Cool fingers, Heaven’s bliss bestowing,
Unconsciously, without their knowing!”
Thank you for sharing your mighty pen!
~Laura~
August 10th, 2019 06:16
Dylan
Laura🌻 said:
Kevin,
I wholeheartedly agree with Fay! I do feel very sad that Dylan is gone...unlike your love for Lorraine! The two of you were destined to be together! It was worth all the sacrifices both of you had to make! Enjoy and celebrate your love for one another!
~Laura~
June 23rd, 2019 22:15
Laura🌻 said:
Kevin,
I wholeheartedly agree with Fay! I do feel very sad that Dylan is gone...unlike your love for Lorraine! The two of you were destined to be together! It was worth all the sacrifices both of you had to make! Enjoy and celebrate your love for one another!
~Laura~
June 23rd, 2019 22:15
Dylan
Fay Slimm. said:
A story of love despite situations so complex that only love could find a way - - now with a loved dog gone too this lament will touch the heart of every reader Kevin. Love\'s longing is indeed powerful.
June 23rd, 2019 12:05
Fay Slimm. said:
A story of love despite situations so complex that only love could find a way - - now with a loved dog gone too this lament will touch the heart of every reader Kevin. Love\'s longing is indeed powerful.
June 23rd, 2019 12:05
remnant
Fay Slimm. said:
Very appealing these winsome words of remembrance my friend - your pen captures the lament in all its poignant phrases. Saved to my favourites.
April 24th, 2019 08:09
Fay Slimm. said:
Very appealing these winsome words of remembrance my friend - your pen captures the lament in all its poignant phrases. Saved to my favourites.
April 24th, 2019 08:09
Grace and the Goddess
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, your life together will go on forever.
April 18th, 2019 00:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, your life together will go on forever.
April 18th, 2019 00:21
Freedom\'s Flame
Nicholas Browning said:
I enjoyed this quite a bit. Nice write.
March 22nd, 2019 06:23
Nicholas Browning said:
I enjoyed this quite a bit. Nice write.
March 22nd, 2019 06:23
Sublime Loving Splendor
Goldfinch60 said:
May your refound love blossom into the beauty and wonder that your words show.
March 18th, 2019 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
May your refound love blossom into the beauty and wonder that your words show.
March 18th, 2019 01:44
Sublime Loving Splendor
Nicholas Browning said:
That\'s a nice story.
Some of the descriptions were done with good care.
Best regards.
March 18th, 2019 00:57
Nicholas Browning said:
That\'s a nice story.
Some of the descriptions were done with good care.
Best regards.
March 18th, 2019 00:57
This Town\'s Poet
Goldfinch60 said:
It is so strange, here in the midlands I am surprised at how many people are interested in poetry, I often give poems to strangers and they all seem to appreciate them.
March 4th, 2019 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
It is so strange, here in the midlands I am surprised at how many people are interested in poetry, I often give poems to strangers and they all seem to appreciate them.
March 4th, 2019 01:34
Dear Dad
Goldfinch60 said:
You will meet one day but he will always be with you.
February 25th, 2019 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
You will meet one day but he will always be with you.
February 25th, 2019 01:25
Dear Dad
Michael Edwards said:
Made me feel sad and long for my own Dad who passed away a good few years ago now. A fine tribute.
February 25th, 2019 01:21
Michael Edwards said:
Made me feel sad and long for my own Dad who passed away a good few years ago now. A fine tribute.
February 25th, 2019 01:21
Dear Dad
Neville said:
This is a most beautiful tribute to a Dear Dad and certainly one for bereaved sons & daughters too...
February 24th, 2019 16:31
Neville said:
This is a most beautiful tribute to a Dear Dad and certainly one for bereaved sons & daughters too...
February 24th, 2019 16:31
Land of No More Shadow
Goldfinch60 said:
That land is in front of us and love will fulfill its promise there.
February 22nd, 2019 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
That land is in front of us and love will fulfill its promise there.
February 22nd, 2019 01:52
Land of No More Shadow
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderfully appreciative read - thank you for sharing such happiness Kevin.
February 21st, 2019 14:05
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderfully appreciative read - thank you for sharing such happiness Kevin.
February 21st, 2019 14:05
My Dearest Darling Dove of Peace
Goldfinch60 said:
Good Erie for wonderful lady.
February 19th, 2019 16:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Good Erie for wonderful lady.
February 19th, 2019 16:19
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