Comments received on poems by Kevin Michael Bloor
the mother who I used to know
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Wonderfully structured and presented Kevin. Great rhythm and sentiment ~ a credit to you, Bravo.
Could be my mother, could be everyone\'s.
Kind regards, Alan
November 17th, 2019 07:38
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Wonderfully structured and presented Kevin. Great rhythm and sentiment ~ a credit to you, Bravo.
Could be my mother, could be everyone\'s.
Kind regards, Alan
November 17th, 2019 07:38
Angels in Disguise
FredPeyer said:
Never thought of myself as an angel, but your poem changed my mind. :-)
September 28th, 2019 14:46
FredPeyer said:
Never thought of myself as an angel, but your poem changed my mind. :-)
September 28th, 2019 14:46
Angels in Disguise
Lauraš» said:
Kevin,
A super write!
Hooray for the āangels in disguiseā...for which you are one among them! Your poetry is a testament to that!
~Laura~š»
September 28th, 2019 07:55
Lauraš» said:
Kevin,
A super write!
Hooray for the āangels in disguiseā...for which you are one among them! Your poetry is a testament to that!
~Laura~š»
September 28th, 2019 07:55
Angels in Disguise
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Wonderful words Kevin. Will save as fave.
Kind regards Alan
September 28th, 2019 05:34
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Wonderful words Kevin. Will save as fave.
Kind regards Alan
September 28th, 2019 05:34
In Whaley Bridge
Goldfinch60 said:
It is obviously your wondrous place, your heaven on earth.
September 16th, 2019 15:33
Goldfinch60 said:
It is obviously your wondrous place, your heaven on earth.
September 16th, 2019 15:33
In Whaley Bridge
Fay Slimm. said:
A beautifully compiled and rhymed tribute to a place I have never known but now will click onto the link that will show me and thank you for a delightful read Kevin.
September 16th, 2019 10:13
Fay Slimm. said:
A beautifully compiled and rhymed tribute to a place I have never known but now will click onto the link that will show me and thank you for a delightful read Kevin.
September 16th, 2019 10:13
Strange September Sunset
Goldfinch60 said:
May that wonder fill us with glory.
September 16th, 2019 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
May that wonder fill us with glory.
September 16th, 2019 00:50
This Vision
Lauraš» said:
Kevin,
An exquisite and exceptional poem inspired by one of my favorite Italian writers...Dante Alighieri!
Uno delle tre corone della letteratura Italiana...
(one of the three crowns of Italian literature)....
Danteās love for his Beatrice...
...la gentilissima e benedetta...
who captured his heart at the tender age of nine...is immortalized in one of his literary masterpieces, āLa Vita Nuovaā!
Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem!
āLa Vita Nuovaā will be revisited today!
~Laura~
September 2nd, 2019 07:51
Lauraš» said:
Kevin,
An exquisite and exceptional poem inspired by one of my favorite Italian writers...Dante Alighieri!
Uno delle tre corone della letteratura Italiana...
(one of the three crowns of Italian literature)....
Danteās love for his Beatrice...
...la gentilissima e benedetta...
who captured his heart at the tender age of nine...is immortalized in one of his literary masterpieces, āLa Vita Nuovaā!
Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem!
āLa Vita Nuovaā will be revisited today!
~Laura~
September 2nd, 2019 07:51
God\'s Chosen
dusk arising said:
Have you tried escaping rhyme? Once you do i think you may find yourself a lot more freedom. You are obviously a serious and commited poet as you regularly post on mps.
Rhyming lines restricts ones available vocabulary.
September 1st, 2019 09:25
dusk arising said:
Have you tried escaping rhyme? Once you do i think you may find yourself a lot more freedom. You are obviously a serious and commited poet as you regularly post on mps.
Rhyming lines restricts ones available vocabulary.
September 1st, 2019 09:25
Pertaining to Poets
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Kevin. Poets have the power to bring all emotions into the world.
September 1st, 2019 00:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Kevin. Poets have the power to bring all emotions into the world.
September 1st, 2019 00:55
Pertaining to Poets
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ! Hi KEVIN thanks for sharing ~ Love Poems about Poets & Poetry. I was raised on Poetry & Poets in Liverpool ~ Adrian Henri - Roger McGough - Brian Pattern - John Lennon etc. Writing Poetry was natural to us ! This Poem rings true ! Sublime souls ~ Heart fluttering thoughts ~ Pens pulverising Planets ~ Joyous lives ~ Words wven on sacred wings ~ Negledted Wives ! ~ Minds merged with Muse ~ Incandescent lives ~ AWESOME. We love all sorts of Poetry and try to include soame classical forms on MPS ! I also love the Structure of your Poem ! Six Quatrains with consistent Meter and Rhyme Pattern (xaxa xbxb xcxc etc) This makes it easy to read and a delight to recite. That is the essence of GOOD POETRY ! A lot of MODERN POETRY Lacks Rhyme - Rhthym & Reason !
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA !
August 31st, 2019 17:20
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ! Hi KEVIN thanks for sharing ~ Love Poems about Poets & Poetry. I was raised on Poetry & Poets in Liverpool ~ Adrian Henri - Roger McGough - Brian Pattern - John Lennon etc. Writing Poetry was natural to us ! This Poem rings true ! Sublime souls ~ Heart fluttering thoughts ~ Pens pulverising Planets ~ Joyous lives ~ Words wven on sacred wings ~ Negledted Wives ! ~ Minds merged with Muse ~ Incandescent lives ~ AWESOME. We love all sorts of Poetry and try to include soame classical forms on MPS ! I also love the Structure of your Poem ! Six Quatrains with consistent Meter and Rhyme Pattern (xaxa xbxb xcxc etc) This makes it easy to read and a delight to recite. That is the essence of GOOD POETRY ! A lot of MODERN POETRY Lacks Rhyme - Rhthym & Reason !
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA !
August 31st, 2019 17:20
Pertaining to Poets
Clara said:
\'\'Read from a page, they sound like words
A human could not utter\'\'
This poem is wonderful. It speaks such truth. The line I\'ve copied above speaks to me. I don\'t think too much when I write, I just let my pen flow across the page and what I read back can sometimes surprise me and shock me.
Thank you for this poem!
CLARA X
August 31st, 2019 08:17
Clara said:
\'\'Read from a page, they sound like words
A human could not utter\'\'
This poem is wonderful. It speaks such truth. The line I\'ve copied above speaks to me. I don\'t think too much when I write, I just let my pen flow across the page and what I read back can sometimes surprise me and shock me.
Thank you for this poem!
CLARA X
August 31st, 2019 08:17
Pertaining to Poets
Poetic Dan said:
It felt like I didn\'t breath until the end my friend, that was spine-tingling outstanding!
Thank you!
August 31st, 2019 05:39
Poetic Dan said:
It felt like I didn\'t breath until the end my friend, that was spine-tingling outstanding!
Thank you!
August 31st, 2019 05:39
Truly
Goldfinch60 said:
Belief is so important in a relationship, good write.
August 31st, 2019 00:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Belief is so important in a relationship, good write.
August 31st, 2019 00:18
Truly
Clara said:
The fluidity in this is wonderful. Thank you for sharing this. Great work.
August 30th, 2019 15:52
Clara said:
The fluidity in this is wonderful. Thank you for sharing this. Great work.
August 30th, 2019 15:52
Sole Survivors
orchidee said:
A fine write Kevin. You two don\'t look a day older! heehee.
August 27th, 2019 02:12
orchidee said:
A fine write Kevin. You two don\'t look a day older! heehee.
August 27th, 2019 02:12
The Chosen One
Lauraš» said:
Kevin,
My first read of the day! Truly an exceptional and appreciated dedication for your poet friends! After reading this, I know I can embrace the many difficulties Iāll be facing during this day!
Thank you for sharing!
Laura
August 12th, 2019 09:02
Lauraš» said:
Kevin,
My first read of the day! Truly an exceptional and appreciated dedication for your poet friends! After reading this, I know I can embrace the many difficulties Iāll be facing during this day!
Thank you for sharing!
Laura
August 12th, 2019 09:02
Winds of Change
Goldfinch60 said:
Nature at is wonderful best can give us all the glory that you have shown in your words.
August 11th, 2019 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Nature at is wonderful best can give us all the glory that you have shown in your words.
August 11th, 2019 00:44
Winds of Change
FineB said:
Hi Kevin,
A great write.
Nature has a timeless beauty and character all it\'s own.
You have portrayed this beautifully in your poem.
Keep writing
FineB
August 10th, 2019 09:54
FineB said:
Hi Kevin,
A great write.
Nature has a timeless beauty and character all it\'s own.
You have portrayed this beautifully in your poem.
Keep writing
FineB
August 10th, 2019 09:54
Winds of Change
Lauraš» said:
Kevin,
An exquisite relatable poem that will brighten my day! I immediately knew it when I read these powerful words...
āThe fresh winds kiss my fevered face.
Upon my troubled brow they place
Cool fingers, Heavenās bliss bestowing,
Unconsciously, without their knowing!ā
Thank you for sharing your mighty pen!
~Laura~
August 10th, 2019 06:16
Lauraš» said:
Kevin,
An exquisite relatable poem that will brighten my day! I immediately knew it when I read these powerful words...
āThe fresh winds kiss my fevered face.
Upon my troubled brow they place
Cool fingers, Heavenās bliss bestowing,
Unconsciously, without their knowing!ā
Thank you for sharing your mighty pen!
~Laura~
August 10th, 2019 06:16
Dylan
Lauraš» said:
Kevin,
I wholeheartedly agree with Fay! I do feel very sad that Dylan is gone...unlike your love for Lorraine! The two of you were destined to be together! It was worth all the sacrifices both of you had to make! Enjoy and celebrate your love for one another!
~Laura~
June 23rd, 2019 22:15
Lauraš» said:
Kevin,
I wholeheartedly agree with Fay! I do feel very sad that Dylan is gone...unlike your love for Lorraine! The two of you were destined to be together! It was worth all the sacrifices both of you had to make! Enjoy and celebrate your love for one another!
~Laura~
June 23rd, 2019 22:15
Dylan
Fay Slimm. said:
A story of love despite situations so complex that only love could find a way - - now with a loved dog gone too this lament will touch the heart of every reader Kevin. Love\'s longing is indeed powerful.
June 23rd, 2019 12:05
Fay Slimm. said:
A story of love despite situations so complex that only love could find a way - - now with a loved dog gone too this lament will touch the heart of every reader Kevin. Love\'s longing is indeed powerful.
June 23rd, 2019 12:05
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