Comments received on poems by Kevin Michael Bloor



A Land of Dreams
Lorna said:

I\'m off to Llandudno in my dreams....... maybe I\'ll put on my bucket list!

April 9th, 2018 04:45

Girl on the Wall
Classicmister said:

So sad and so beautifully penned for a beautiful woman.

April 2nd, 2018 06:12

Shadowland
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Blue-eyed Bolla,
I can definitely relate to your excellent penned poem!(as others can too, Iā€™m sure)

And yes...
Miracles DO happen!
I can relate to that also!

Thank you for sharing!

~Laura~



March 26th, 2018 10:25

Desideratum
Lorna said:

My! Does she EVER take a bad picture!!!

March 25th, 2018 07:03

Desideratum
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Blue-eyed Bolla,
A beautiful dedication for
your beautiful Lorraine!
Exceptional!

~Laura~


March 25th, 2018 06:52

When I Was First a Poet
LaurašŸŒ» said:

This poem is EXTRAORDINARILY
well penned! While reading it, I could feel that pain you seem to have endured! The ending of your poem gives me the impression that you are in a much better place now than in your past!
I wish you all the best!

~Laura~

March 24th, 2018 09:16

My Children
LaurašŸŒ» said:

A fine write and a great
pic to be saved and
cherished, Blue-eyed Bolla!

At the end of it all,
as Michael said...
ā€œwhere would we be
without family.ā€
I enjoyed the read!
Thank you for sharing!

~Laura~


March 24th, 2018 08:23

My Children
Michael Edwards said:

A sad thought but a lovely thought - where would we be without family?

March 23rd, 2018 11:03

My Children
Lorna said:

My uncle just died - lovely man of great age! He has scores of children, grand and great grand! And this is what they are doing right now.............terrific poem for your family Blue.....

March 23rd, 2018 06:59

When I Set Out to Sail the Sea
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Blue-eyed Bolla,
This truly brought tears to my eyes! It made me think of me and my son! Thank you for sharing!

~Laura~

March 20th, 2018 17:50

When I Set Out to Sail the Sea
Michael Edwards said:

Superb structure and a great write with a humerous if not sad twist.

March 20th, 2018 14:37

When I Set Out to Sail the Sea
willyweed said:

nice flow and structure on a sad piece...ww

March 20th, 2018 10:18

When I Set Out to Sail the Sea
Classicmister said:

I enjoy your poems very much - They scan so well with traditional rhyme and meter. The structure of your \"Me and Mother T\" reminded me of Tennyson\'s \"Two Voices\" though he used just three lines per stanza! I studied him for 0 Level many years ago!

March 20th, 2018 08:13

When I Set Out to Sail the Sea
Lorna said:

Tough one.... so good........

March 20th, 2018 06:51

Land of Dreams
willyweed said:

good flow and rhyme

March 19th, 2018 15:24

Land of Dreams
Lorna said:

I love the image of a seaweed shroud........die with the mermaids.......

March 19th, 2018 08:01

Noble Truth
willyweed said:

well done good flow structure and rhyme. ww

March 17th, 2018 11:03

Noble Truth
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Blue-eyed Bolla,
I concur with Lorna.
Sheā€™s spot on with her
comment...
ā€˜a double whammy of
an aching heartā€™...
Indeed!

~Laura~

March 17th, 2018 08:38

Noble Truth
Lorna said:

This is poignant and a double whammy of an aching heart..... I love the Buddha quote about suffering......

March 17th, 2018 06:09

Poet Boy
Nicholas Browning said:

Nothing I can say to you that you yourself don\'t already know.
It takes strength to talk about things like that, much less write about it.
Well done sir.

March 16th, 2018 19:08

Poet Boy
willyweed said:

nicely written

March 16th, 2018 18:20

Poet Boy
MaddieJ said:

This was excellent! Thank you for sharing a poem about such a personal and profound topic. Sorry to hear of the \"bitter blow.\"

March 16th, 2018 16:10

Lorraine, My Lady Love
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Blue-eyed Bolla,
Wow...this is a great dedication to Lorraine! To be able to melt ā€œthe heart set hard as stonesā€ is powerful! She is a beautiful lady! I enjoyed this share very much!

~Laura~

March 15th, 2018 07:24

Lorraine, My Lady Love
Lorna said:

So many beautiful images of Lorraine for us!

March 15th, 2018 06:07

Love Lines
Mona Lisa said:

Absolutely beautiful^^

March 13th, 2018 13:29

Love Lines
Lorna said:

Really good Bolla - and the last stanza was heartbreaking........

March 13th, 2018 04:06

Love Lines
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Blue-eyed Bolla,
This reminds me of Dante and his beloved Beatrice...unrequited love...a love so deep...indeed! Your write resonates within my soul! Sad but beautiful!

~Laura~

March 13th, 2018 04:01

Secret Sin
Leisa Niamh said:

This fills me with sadness, but also a great empathy, as it conjures up thoughts of my own family and things that have happened. If this poem is personal to you, then I hope that expressing through poetry helps you.

March 4th, 2018 07:59

Secret Sin
Lorna said:

How very sad....... it puts us there with you and your family........ what is the secret sin?

March 4th, 2018 07:11

Dreamland
Lorna said:

What a beautiful tribute to both of them Blue.......

March 4th, 2018 06:42



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