Comments received on poems by Lil
A Challenge To The Dark.
aDarkerMind said:
sad......touching....
dark and honest;
worthy of much applause;
November 15th, 2023 13:13
aDarkerMind said:
sad......touching....
dark and honest;
worthy of much applause;
November 15th, 2023 13:13
My Rage, My hate for you will never fade, Little Glass Bottle ,and Where Do Broken Hearts Go? ( 4 poems)
2781 said:
The Lord is nigh unto them with a broken heart; and saveth such as be of a contrite spirit.
November 14th, 2023 19:47
2781 said:
The Lord is nigh unto them with a broken heart; and saveth such as be of a contrite spirit.
November 14th, 2023 19:47
My Rage, My hate for you will never fade, Little Glass Bottle ,and Where Do Broken Hearts Go? ( 4 poems)
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful poem, I\'m glad you came through.
November 14th, 2023 19:44
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful poem, I\'m glad you came through.
November 14th, 2023 19:44
My Rage, My hate for you will never fade, Little Glass Bottle ,and Where Do Broken Hearts Go? ( 4 poems)
Tiffany_Arnold said:
I love this sooo much
November 14th, 2023 19:22
Tiffany_Arnold said:
I love this sooo much
November 14th, 2023 19:22
My Rage, My hate for you will never fade, Little Glass Bottle ,and Where Do Broken Hearts Go? ( 4 poems)
Tiffany_Arnold said:
November 14th, 2023 19:22
Tiffany_Arnold said:
November 14th, 2023 19:22
My Rage, My hate for you will never fade, Little Glass Bottle ,and Where Do Broken Hearts Go? ( 4 poems)
JuneM said:
Some of the best poems I\'ve read yet.
November 14th, 2023 10:25
JuneM said:
Some of the best poems I\'ve read yet.
November 14th, 2023 10:25
My Rage, My hate for you will never fade, Little Glass Bottle ,and Where Do Broken Hearts Go? ( 4 poems)
Lorenz said:
Broken hearts go to healing through resilience and perceptions of causes .
November 14th, 2023 07:31
Lorenz said:
Broken hearts go to healing through resilience and perceptions of causes .
November 14th, 2023 07:31
Parents war!!!!
JuneM said:
I feel you, my parents got divorced, and have been yelling and fighting nonstop. Sometimes I can\'t even hear my own thoughts
November 13th, 2023 10:12
JuneM said:
I feel you, my parents got divorced, and have been yelling and fighting nonstop. Sometimes I can\'t even hear my own thoughts
November 13th, 2023 10:12
2 poems
JuneM said:
I\'m so sorry for what your going through right now, and I understand. Over the last years I\'ve lost a lot of people close to me, and its never been the same since. Hopefully it gets better
November 13th, 2023 10:08
JuneM said:
I\'m so sorry for what your going through right now, and I understand. Over the last years I\'ve lost a lot of people close to me, and its never been the same since. Hopefully it gets better
November 13th, 2023 10:08
Carry On
JuneM said:
Beautifully and truthfully written, and I can relate, for my heart has also been broken many, many times. I still feel the hole in my chest, but as the days pass, it eases a bit. I hope it does the same for you
November 13th, 2023 10:06
JuneM said:
Beautifully and truthfully written, and I can relate, for my heart has also been broken many, many times. I still feel the hole in my chest, but as the days pass, it eases a bit. I hope it does the same for you
November 13th, 2023 10:06
You Cheated & Broken heart (two poems)
Positive Girl said:
Written very well. Nice work.
November 9th, 2023 09:42
Positive Girl said:
Written very well. Nice work.
November 9th, 2023 09:42
What is a dad?
Positive Girl said:
This is a great family poem. I enjoyed reading it.
November 7th, 2023 13:35
Positive Girl said:
This is a great family poem. I enjoyed reading it.
November 7th, 2023 13:35
Dark Night
sahildhobalepoetry said:
Don\'t worry lil. Everything will be alright. I hope God heals you. Wonderful poem!
November 5th, 2023 23:05
sahildhobalepoetry said:
Don\'t worry lil. Everything will be alright. I hope God heals you. Wonderful poem!
November 5th, 2023 23:05
Dark Night
Thomas W Case said:
Pray, God hears you and loves you. Good poem, honest. Life is hard sometimes.
November 5th, 2023 19:02
Thomas W Case said:
Pray, God hears you and loves you. Good poem, honest. Life is hard sometimes.
November 5th, 2023 19:02
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