Comments received on poems by Lil



Grandma.
aDarkerMind said:

you have a talent.....

keep writing.

November 16th, 2023 11:27

Grandma.
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful picture you paint. Great imagery.

November 16th, 2023 09:09

A Challenge To The Dark.
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful and honest.

November 15th, 2023 13:25

A Challenge To The Dark.
aDarkerMind said:

sad......touching....

dark and honest;

worthy of much applause;

November 15th, 2023 13:13

Parents war!!!!
Muse Gong said:

Doing well. Practice and Pracice

November 15th, 2023 05:32

My Rage, My hate for you will never fade, Little Glass Bottle ,and Where Do Broken Hearts Go? ( 4 poems)
2781 said:

The Lord is nigh unto them with a broken heart; and saveth such as be of a contrite spirit.

November 14th, 2023 19:47





My Rage, My hate for you will never fade, Little Glass Bottle ,and Where Do Broken Hearts Go? ( 4 poems)
Lorenz said:

Broken hearts go to healing through resilience and perceptions of causes .

November 14th, 2023 07:31

Parents war!!!!
JuneM said:

I feel you, my parents got divorced, and have been yelling and fighting nonstop. Sometimes I can\'t even hear my own thoughts

November 13th, 2023 10:12

2 poems
JuneM said:

I\'m so sorry for what your going through right now, and I understand. Over the last years I\'ve lost a lot of people close to me, and its never been the same since. Hopefully it gets better

November 13th, 2023 10:08

Carry On
JuneM said:

Beautifully and truthfully written, and I can relate, for my heart has also been broken many, many times. I still feel the hole in my chest, but as the days pass, it eases a bit. I hope it does the same for you

November 13th, 2023 10:06

Alone in my head.
JuneM said:

So true, I relate to how you\'re feeling.

November 13th, 2023 10:03

Parents war!!!!
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful write.

November 12th, 2023 15:08

2 poems
Thomas W Case said:

Very sad. My condolences.

November 10th, 2023 09:59

You Cheated & Broken heart (two poems)
Positive Girl said:

Written very well. Nice work.

November 9th, 2023 09:42

Carry On
2781 said:

You were going strong until the last lines!

November 8th, 2023 07:20

What is a dad?
Positive Girl said:

This is a great family poem. I enjoyed reading it.

November 7th, 2023 13:35

Alone in my head.
2781 said:

It\'s sacred.

November 6th, 2023 07:34

Dark Night
sahildhobalepoetry said:

Don\'t worry lil. Everything will be alright. I hope God heals you. Wonderful poem!

November 5th, 2023 23:05

Dark Night
Thomas W Case said:

Pray, God hears you and loves you. Good poem, honest. Life is hard sometimes.

November 5th, 2023 19:02

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