Comments received on poems by Your Girlfriend



Listen to my heart.............Mom&Dad
Sam.C said:

This is really good, I have a poem kinda similar that I\'m gonna be posting later if you wanna read it.

December 1st, 2023 07:44

Mom & Dad
Goldfinch60 said:

Very sad and emotive words Lil, I do hope it sorts itself out soon.

Andy

December 1st, 2023 02:02

Mom & Dad
2781 said:

Use capital\'s.

November 30th, 2023 06:50

I am sorry , I\'m Tired and Broken wings.
Lorenz said:

Fly away in the magic of words ,your wings regain !

November 28th, 2023 09:41

3 poems
Your Girlfriend said:

Thank you hotidris sir.

November 27th, 2023 17:35

My Rage, My hate for you will never fade, Little Glass Bottle ,and Where Do Broken Hearts Go? ( 4 poems)
MCarman said:

Very powerful , thank you for sharing this. You should be very proud!

November 27th, 2023 16:55

3 poems
2781 said:

That was a novel. You write like an adult.

November 27th, 2023 07:43

Break ups
peto said:

An epic well worth the read
Particularly enjoyed number 5
Keep lifting that pen
Great writing though tinged with sadness

November 26th, 2023 20:38

Hi Lily
Parisab said:

Your words reflect the panic and chaos of your experiences. Yet you are shining through with your powerful poetry and art…keep practicing your creative voice!

November 26th, 2023 18:21

Hi Lily
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work.

November 22nd, 2023 22:15

Cry like you Forgot You ,They Flee from Me & Him and her.
Kinsley Lee said:

Hi! Lily
Thank you for sharing poem. it\'s great. Have a nice day!

November 22nd, 2023 09:38

Cry like you Forgot You ,They Flee from Me & Him and her.
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work.

November 21st, 2023 09:47

7 poems.
Tiffany_Arnold said:

I like this it was dark and kept me on my toes

November 20th, 2023 15:32

7 poems.
aDarkerMind said:

a very dark write Lily

powerful and sad.

very well written;

November 20th, 2023 14:46


Our Hearts Are Broken Forever & Missing My Sister And Best Friend.
aDarkerMind said:

very touching as always Lily

November 18th, 2023 09:36

Grandma.
Your Girlfriend said:

We heard about my grandma and she currently has a HUGE infection. And will be in the hospital for a while.

November 17th, 2023 06:41

The FAMILY’s Trust
Your Girlfriend said:

It is not Fantasy I didn\'t mean to press that. Sorry..........

November 16th, 2023 15:49

Grandma.
2781 said:

The greatest among them shall be your servant.

November 16th, 2023 14:47

Grandma.
aDarkerMind said:

you have a talent.....

keep writing.

November 16th, 2023 11:27

Grandma.
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful picture you paint. Great imagery.

November 16th, 2023 09:09

A Challenge To The Dark.
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful and honest.

November 15th, 2023 13:25

A Challenge To The Dark.
aDarkerMind said:

sad......touching....

dark and honest;

worthy of much applause;

November 15th, 2023 13:13

Parents war!!!!
Muse Gong said:

Doing well. Practice and Pracice

November 15th, 2023 05:32

My Rage, My hate for you will never fade, Little Glass Bottle ,and Where Do Broken Hearts Go? ( 4 poems)
2781 said:

The Lord is nigh unto them with a broken heart; and saveth such as be of a contrite spirit.

November 14th, 2023 19:47




My Rage, My hate for you will never fade, Little Glass Bottle ,and Where Do Broken Hearts Go? ( 4 poems)
Lorenz said:

Broken hearts go to healing through resilience and perceptions of causes .

November 14th, 2023 07:31

Parents war!!!!
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful write.

November 12th, 2023 15:08

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