Comments received on poems by Lil



Panic Attacks
jarcher54 said:

Is it your drawing?


January 15th, 2024 01:26

Panic Attacks
jarcher54 said:

A powerful description... I hope you can find some respite!

January 15th, 2024 01:22

Goodbye.
Dev Parth said:

nice one
Keep trying

January 9th, 2024 08:05

In the name of Amelia and Nathaniel.
Lil said:

Thank you to the both of you.

January 8th, 2024 14:13

In the name of Amelia and Nathaniel.
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful and moving tribute.

January 8th, 2024 07:40

In the name of Amelia and Nathaniel.
2781 said:

Unbelievable.

January 8th, 2024 06:57

Dear you.Yes you. part 1
Kinsley Lee said:

Dear Lil
Hi! Thank you for sharing your poem. Happy New Year!

January 5th, 2024 10:03

Dear you.Yes you. part 1
Tooway said:

I am too old and cynical to remember these romances, but where i know how a very short form of poetry, this exactly how my poems at your age looked, a million words just bursting out. Thanks to me it\'s like looking through a time glass.

January 1st, 2024 08:17

Dear you.Yes you. part 1
vividvoid14 said:

Wow i have not read something this amazing for a while u got potential

December 31st, 2023 21:07

Dear you.Yes you. part 1
Cassie58 said:

Dear you, you are besotted with this guy. I hope he takes notice. An epic write. Good to get that off your chest and into the open. I love your honesty here.

December 31st, 2023 01:43

I like you. Do you like me?
GON said:

ha cute write, keep it up

December 29th, 2023 17:26

Friends/enimes
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful.

December 20th, 2023 21:09

Children of the streets
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful and poignant.

December 17th, 2023 20:03

Giving up on god.
Daye Writes said:

Hey Lil, I know sometimes it feels like God isn\'t there but He is. He has never left you, just pray and trust in Jesus, He is closer than you can Imagine.
Jesus loves you

December 16th, 2023 07:39

Giving up on god.
Bobby O said:

I can relate. The Entity gets the credit but always ducks the blame. I’m hoping things have come together for you.

December 15th, 2023 09:49

Giving up on god.
Lorenz said:

dog\'s fiction .

December 15th, 2023 02:22

Giving up on god.
NinjaGirl said:

Did you draw that? If so, it\'s SO good.

December 14th, 2023 17:54

2 poems
Mason Vollman said:

❤️Love it.


December 8th, 2023 17:54

I Want To Die, and Nothing But Death
Mason Vollman said:

:|

December 7th, 2023 15:12

LOOK AT ME!!!!!!
JuneM said:

Powerful poem, hang in there friend, I will always look and care for you ;)

December 6th, 2023 10:23

3 poems number 3
JuneM said:

I love these so much, they\'re beautiful and so truthful!

December 4th, 2023 13:15

3 poems number 3
2781 said:

It\'s always the way, I can keep a secret, it\'s the people I tell that can\'t.

December 4th, 2023 07:10

Listen to my heart.............Mom&Dad
Goldfinch60 said:

Strong words Lil, I do hope they can sort their lives out and bring the pleasure and love to you.

Andy

December 2nd, 2023 02:15

Listen to my heart.............Mom&Dad
Sam.C said:

This is really good, I have a poem kinda similar that I\'m gonna be posting later if you wanna read it.

December 1st, 2023 07:44

Mom & Dad
Goldfinch60 said:

Very sad and emotive words Lil, I do hope it sorts itself out soon.

Andy

December 1st, 2023 02:02

Mom & Dad
2781 said:

Use capital\'s.

November 30th, 2023 06:50

I am sorry , I\'m Tired and Broken wings.
Lorenz said:

Fly away in the magic of words ,your wings regain !

November 28th, 2023 09:41

3 poems
Lil said:

Thank you hotidris sir.

November 27th, 2023 17:35

My Rage, My hate for you will never fade, Little Glass Bottle ,and Where Do Broken Hearts Go? ( 4 poems)
MCarman said:

Very powerful , thank you for sharing this. You should be very proud!

November 27th, 2023 16:55

3 poems
2781 said:

That was a novel. You write like an adult.

November 27th, 2023 07:43

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