Comments received on poems by Hey!
Why cant everyone leave me alone?
David Wakeling said:
This si quite sad and powerful essay asking the question \"Why can\'t they leave me alone\". I remember the late great Audrey Hepburn said she didn\'t want to be alone she wanted to be left alone.\" The poem makes it very clear that someone is stressed.They need a holiday in the Bahamas without the kids.Just sun bake every day and party every night. Very strong emotions going on here
February 9th, 2025 21:53
David Wakeling said:
This si quite sad and powerful essay asking the question \"Why can\'t they leave me alone\". I remember the late great Audrey Hepburn said she didn\'t want to be alone she wanted to be left alone.\" The poem makes it very clear that someone is stressed.They need a holiday in the Bahamas without the kids.Just sun bake every day and party every night. Very strong emotions going on here
February 9th, 2025 21:53
Why cant everyone leave me alone?
Cheeky Missy said:
It takes a while, but if you persist, they\'ll learn and shy away from you. Miserably that\'s how people are. Don\'t ask me how I know. I hate it too. Excellently rendered with a vibrant poignancy and great imagery. Thank you for sharing. Hang in there.
February 9th, 2025 20:40
Cheeky Missy said:
It takes a while, but if you persist, they\'ll learn and shy away from you. Miserably that\'s how people are. Don\'t ask me how I know. I hate it too. Excellently rendered with a vibrant poignancy and great imagery. Thank you for sharing. Hang in there.
February 9th, 2025 20:40
I wanna, but just cant
Cheeky Missy said:
Alas, I fear this resonates far more than it should, but oh! I know how you feel. Supposedly psychology has a label for the condition, but the reality we wrestle with doesn\'t find a recurative therein. Exquisitely rendered with superb imagery and a painfully haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 9th, 2025 09:55
Cheeky Missy said:
Alas, I fear this resonates far more than it should, but oh! I know how you feel. Supposedly psychology has a label for the condition, but the reality we wrestle with doesn\'t find a recurative therein. Exquisitely rendered with superb imagery and a painfully haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 9th, 2025 09:55
I love you John
Poetic Licence said:
A passionate of pledge of love, i hope the pain eases over time, well written
February 6th, 2025 09:11
Poetic Licence said:
A passionate of pledge of love, i hope the pain eases over time, well written
February 6th, 2025 09:11
I love you John
sorenbarrett said:
Some memories never die they just grow in size or remain burried to raise out of the ground at a latter date. A nice pledge of love
February 6th, 2025 07:39
sorenbarrett said:
Some memories never die they just grow in size or remain burried to raise out of the ground at a latter date. A nice pledge of love
February 6th, 2025 07:39
He is moving!
sorenbarrett said:
Sad in its separation and hard to accept. They say that distance makes the heart grow fonder but distance and time can be a deal breaker. Maybe not though if it is ment to be it will. Feel the pain
February 4th, 2025 08:28
sorenbarrett said:
Sad in its separation and hard to accept. They say that distance makes the heart grow fonder but distance and time can be a deal breaker. Maybe not though if it is ment to be it will. Feel the pain
February 4th, 2025 08:28
Rain
sorenbarrett said:
A poem emphasizes the temporal nature of the bad and focus on good. Nicely done in poetic form
February 4th, 2025 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
A poem emphasizes the temporal nature of the bad and focus on good. Nicely done in poetic form
February 4th, 2025 04:18
Rain
Poetic Licence said:
I very much enjoyed the poem and it`s sentiment but also the information on the speech, which i have not seen before, enjoyed the read
February 3rd, 2025 16:21
Poetic Licence said:
I very much enjoyed the poem and it`s sentiment but also the information on the speech, which i have not seen before, enjoyed the read
February 3rd, 2025 16:21
**A Lament of Shadows**
Poetic Licence said:
A just wonderful piece of poetry, although about being in the depths of despair and weighed down by the world, it is a uplifting piece of writing about how ever small that glint of Hope, Life, Love etc is, cling on to it and you will find a way out, Really enjoyed the read.
January 28th, 2025 17:37
Poetic Licence said:
A just wonderful piece of poetry, although about being in the depths of despair and weighed down by the world, it is a uplifting piece of writing about how ever small that glint of Hope, Life, Love etc is, cling on to it and you will find a way out, Really enjoyed the read.
January 28th, 2025 17:37
A world with you gone. Plus a few more
Poetic Licence said:
I think this is a great piece of writing of being totally heartbroken at the loss of the one they loved, very well written
January 27th, 2025 03:02
Poetic Licence said:
I think this is a great piece of writing of being totally heartbroken at the loss of the one they loved, very well written
January 27th, 2025 03:02
This is s song... Lyrics that I wrote Idk what to name it
arqios said:
“Morning coffee dream”?
January 25th, 2025 20:26
arqios said:
“Morning coffee dream”?
January 25th, 2025 20:26
This is s song... Lyrics that I wrote Idk what to name it
sorenbarrett said:
I can hear this somg as it plays.It is most beautiful and one that I would put on my play list a definate hit.
January 25th, 2025 20:05
sorenbarrett said:
I can hear this somg as it plays.It is most beautiful and one that I would put on my play list a definate hit.
January 25th, 2025 20:05
What if?
Mutley Ravishes said:
This too shall pass.
What pulled me out of a downward spiral into the abyss?
Finding out who my Imagination is!
January 24th, 2025 19:47
Mutley Ravishes said:
This too shall pass.
What pulled me out of a downward spiral into the abyss?
Finding out who my Imagination is!
January 24th, 2025 19:47
What if?
Poetic Licence said:
I had noticed and clearly it is a rough time and struggle, but it is a good thing that at least you can get out on paper and read through it. It is not be all and end all of solutions for that you probably need a someone to close to you to listen, but it can help. Take care, hope it improves.
January 24th, 2025 17:47
Poetic Licence said:
I had noticed and clearly it is a rough time and struggle, but it is a good thing that at least you can get out on paper and read through it. It is not be all and end all of solutions for that you probably need a someone to close to you to listen, but it can help. Take care, hope it improves.
January 24th, 2025 17:47
Being a psychic
ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ said:
I sense auras all the time, you just gotta feel how to know what it means
January 23rd, 2025 19:26
ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ said:
I sense auras all the time, you just gotta feel how to know what it means
January 23rd, 2025 19:26
Being a psychic
Poetic Licence said:
I have no understanding of Aura`s etc, but i think this is a beautifully piece of writing, written with care and feeling, really enjoyed the read
January 23rd, 2025 17:24
Poetic Licence said:
I have no understanding of Aura`s etc, but i think this is a beautifully piece of writing, written with care and feeling, really enjoyed the read
January 23rd, 2025 17:24
No one
Cassie58 said:
Life can be such a struggle at times, especially when you are young. Hang in there. It’s worth it Lil. All good wishes.
January 22nd, 2025 13:40
Cassie58 said:
Life can be such a struggle at times, especially when you are young. Hang in there. It’s worth it Lil. All good wishes.
January 22nd, 2025 13:40
No one
Poetic Licence said:
A haunting piece on some one struggling a bit with how they are feeling inside and about themselves. Only having failures acknowledge and not their achievements or them as a person, hope it gets better
January 22nd, 2025 12:31
Poetic Licence said:
A haunting piece on some one struggling a bit with how they are feeling inside and about themselves. Only having failures acknowledge and not their achievements or them as a person, hope it gets better
January 22nd, 2025 12:31
Idk what to name....
Poetic Licence said:
Beautifully written, even when there is darkness all around and the world is a frighting place, there is still hope, Enjoyed the read
January 22nd, 2025 06:56
Poetic Licence said:
Beautifully written, even when there is darkness all around and the world is a frighting place, there is still hope, Enjoyed the read
January 22nd, 2025 06:56
Idk what to name....
NinjaGirl said:
very beautiful, each thread is a chapter in our tapestry of story.
January 21st, 2025 22:49
NinjaGirl said:
very beautiful, each thread is a chapter in our tapestry of story.
January 21st, 2025 22:49
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