Comments received on poems by Hey!
**A Lament of Shadows**
Poetic Licence said:
A just wonderful piece of poetry, although about being in the depths of despair and weighed down by the world, it is a uplifting piece of writing about how ever small that glint of Hope, Life, Love etc is, cling on to it and you will find a way out, Really enjoyed the read.
January 28th, 2025 17:37
Poetic Licence said:
A just wonderful piece of poetry, although about being in the depths of despair and weighed down by the world, it is a uplifting piece of writing about how ever small that glint of Hope, Life, Love etc is, cling on to it and you will find a way out, Really enjoyed the read.
January 28th, 2025 17:37
A world with you gone. Plus a few more
Poetic Licence said:
I think this is a great piece of writing of being totally heartbroken at the loss of the one they loved, very well written
January 27th, 2025 03:02
Poetic Licence said:
I think this is a great piece of writing of being totally heartbroken at the loss of the one they loved, very well written
January 27th, 2025 03:02
This is s song... Lyrics that I wrote Idk what to name it
arqios said:
“Morning coffee dream”?
January 25th, 2025 20:26
arqios said:
“Morning coffee dream”?
January 25th, 2025 20:26
This is s song... Lyrics that I wrote Idk what to name it
sorenbarrett said:
I can hear this somg as it plays.It is most beautiful and one that I would put on my play list a definate hit.
January 25th, 2025 20:05
sorenbarrett said:
I can hear this somg as it plays.It is most beautiful and one that I would put on my play list a definate hit.
January 25th, 2025 20:05
What if?
Mutley Ravishes said:
This too shall pass.
What pulled me out of a downward spiral into the abyss?
Finding out who my Imagination is!
January 24th, 2025 19:47
Mutley Ravishes said:
This too shall pass.
What pulled me out of a downward spiral into the abyss?
Finding out who my Imagination is!
January 24th, 2025 19:47
What if?
Poetic Licence said:
I had noticed and clearly it is a rough time and struggle, but it is a good thing that at least you can get out on paper and read through it. It is not be all and end all of solutions for that you probably need a someone to close to you to listen, but it can help. Take care, hope it improves.
January 24th, 2025 17:47
Poetic Licence said:
I had noticed and clearly it is a rough time and struggle, but it is a good thing that at least you can get out on paper and read through it. It is not be all and end all of solutions for that you probably need a someone to close to you to listen, but it can help. Take care, hope it improves.
January 24th, 2025 17:47
Being a psychic
ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ said:
I sense auras all the time, you just gotta feel how to know what it means
January 23rd, 2025 19:26
ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ said:
I sense auras all the time, you just gotta feel how to know what it means
January 23rd, 2025 19:26
Being a psychic
Poetic Licence said:
I have no understanding of Aura`s etc, but i think this is a beautifully piece of writing, written with care and feeling, really enjoyed the read
January 23rd, 2025 17:24
Poetic Licence said:
I have no understanding of Aura`s etc, but i think this is a beautifully piece of writing, written with care and feeling, really enjoyed the read
January 23rd, 2025 17:24
No one
Cassie58 said:
Life can be such a struggle at times, especially when you are young. Hang in there. It’s worth it Lil. All good wishes.
January 22nd, 2025 13:40
Cassie58 said:
Life can be such a struggle at times, especially when you are young. Hang in there. It’s worth it Lil. All good wishes.
January 22nd, 2025 13:40
No one
Poetic Licence said:
A haunting piece on some one struggling a bit with how they are feeling inside and about themselves. Only having failures acknowledge and not their achievements or them as a person, hope it gets better
January 22nd, 2025 12:31
Poetic Licence said:
A haunting piece on some one struggling a bit with how they are feeling inside and about themselves. Only having failures acknowledge and not their achievements or them as a person, hope it gets better
January 22nd, 2025 12:31
Idk what to name....
Poetic Licence said:
Beautifully written, even when there is darkness all around and the world is a frighting place, there is still hope, Enjoyed the read
January 22nd, 2025 06:56
Poetic Licence said:
Beautifully written, even when there is darkness all around and the world is a frighting place, there is still hope, Enjoyed the read
January 22nd, 2025 06:56
Idk what to name....
NinjaGirl said:
very beautiful, each thread is a chapter in our tapestry of story.
January 21st, 2025 22:49
NinjaGirl said:
very beautiful, each thread is a chapter in our tapestry of story.
January 21st, 2025 22:49
My phobia\'\'s
Cheeky Missy said:
That was too indulgent a litany of fears eloquently delineated with superb ease, unrolling each like a red carpet to whither, fascinating and capably rendered too beautifully with gorgeous imagery and a subtly haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing. I love it.
January 19th, 2025 23:33
Cheeky Missy said:
That was too indulgent a litany of fears eloquently delineated with superb ease, unrolling each like a red carpet to whither, fascinating and capably rendered too beautifully with gorgeous imagery and a subtly haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing. I love it.
January 19th, 2025 23:33
Dangerous
NinjaGirl said:
one can so easily be the knife and the one to stitch the cut back up. beautiful write!
January 14th, 2025 13:11
NinjaGirl said:
one can so easily be the knife and the one to stitch the cut back up. beautiful write!
January 14th, 2025 13:11
Trump won.....
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
I\'m not a supporter of neither Trump nor Harris, but I feel abortion is wrong, since we\'re all children of God, and all made in His image and likeliness, He wouldn\'t want us to kill the closest thing we have to Him, the gift of creation. We are able as human beings to reproduce, and when we abort that being, that\'s killing a child of Gods. I know what it\'s like to be abandoned, and I could or would never be able to have the choice to abandon another one of Gods children and take it. The feeling you get, when you hold a newborn, knowing he or she will grow up, and be a friend one day, and soon a parent, knowing he/she has a soul, and is hand created by God, and will be able to help others in his or her life, I could never abandon him/her due to one of my mistakes.
January 2nd, 2025 15:26
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
I\'m not a supporter of neither Trump nor Harris, but I feel abortion is wrong, since we\'re all children of God, and all made in His image and likeliness, He wouldn\'t want us to kill the closest thing we have to Him, the gift of creation. We are able as human beings to reproduce, and when we abort that being, that\'s killing a child of Gods. I know what it\'s like to be abandoned, and I could or would never be able to have the choice to abandon another one of Gods children and take it. The feeling you get, when you hold a newborn, knowing he or she will grow up, and be a friend one day, and soon a parent, knowing he/she has a soul, and is hand created by God, and will be able to help others in his or her life, I could never abandon him/her due to one of my mistakes.
January 2nd, 2025 15:26
Happy Birthday to Me?
Poetic Licence said:
A clever and enjoyable piece of writing, thank you
December 4th, 2024 16:51
Poetic Licence said:
A clever and enjoyable piece of writing, thank you
December 4th, 2024 16:51
Trump won.....
MR.apocalypse said:
this is why i write about misinformation of the news and the fight between the party\'s. every party says things about the other and most people just take what the news says as fact. people accepting things and do no research. and that is why ae are in the state we are in this country .
trump has never been convicted of a crime.
trump has never said once he plans on completely eliminating abortion.
trump plans on keeping abortion up to the state you live in.
im not a supporter of either but what i am is someone who deals in fact not feelings.
and this election there is a lot of people getting the two mixed up
November 7th, 2024 21:37
MR.apocalypse said:
this is why i write about misinformation of the news and the fight between the party\'s. every party says things about the other and most people just take what the news says as fact. people accepting things and do no research. and that is why ae are in the state we are in this country .
trump has never been convicted of a crime.
trump has never said once he plans on completely eliminating abortion.
trump plans on keeping abortion up to the state you live in.
im not a supporter of either but what i am is someone who deals in fact not feelings.
and this election there is a lot of people getting the two mixed up
November 7th, 2024 21:37
I ruin everything
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Another excellent showing Lil! I could feel your emotions in this! I know the feeling and the experience of being bullied and misunderstood, and you know what? This is exactly how I got through it! I pray the bullying stops, but I also pray your writing never stops! Keep it coming! Again, well done! Excellent job!
November 7th, 2024 08:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Another excellent showing Lil! I could feel your emotions in this! I know the feeling and the experience of being bullied and misunderstood, and you know what? This is exactly how I got through it! I pray the bullying stops, but I also pray your writing never stops! Keep it coming! Again, well done! Excellent job!
November 7th, 2024 08:31
Trump won.....
sorenbarrett said:
I could sense the emotion in this write and yet the control over it to express it in a level minded and fair manner. Nicely done
November 7th, 2024 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
I could sense the emotion in this write and yet the control over it to express it in a level minded and fair manner. Nicely done
November 7th, 2024 03:50
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