Comments received on poems by Trix
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Cassie58 said:
Where you break you grow stronger. Tell your story. You rose from the dark sea bed into the glory of sunlight. Make sure the sun always shines on you Lil.
January 17th, 2024 06:46
Cassie58 said:
Where you break you grow stronger. Tell your story. You rose from the dark sea bed into the glory of sunlight. Make sure the sun always shines on you Lil.
January 17th, 2024 06:46
Dear best \"Friend\"
Cassie58 said:
True friends are like gold dust. They stay with you through life. In the good times, in the bad times. Sadly you will encounter imposters on the way. Relatable poem Lil. You look young. Plenty of time yet to make lifelong friends. Hang in there.
January 17th, 2024 03:27
Cassie58 said:
True friends are like gold dust. They stay with you through life. In the good times, in the bad times. Sadly you will encounter imposters on the way. Relatable poem Lil. You look young. Plenty of time yet to make lifelong friends. Hang in there.
January 17th, 2024 03:27
Dear best \"Friend\"
Lorenz said:
With some friends there\'s no point in having enemies !
January 16th, 2024 17:14
Lorenz said:
With some friends there\'s no point in having enemies !
January 16th, 2024 17:14
Dear you.Yes you. part 1
Kinsley Lee said:
Dear Lil
Hi! Thank you for sharing your poem. Happy New Year!
January 5th, 2024 10:03
Kinsley Lee said:
Dear Lil
Hi! Thank you for sharing your poem. Happy New Year!
January 5th, 2024 10:03
Dear you.Yes you. part 1
Tooway said:
I am too old and cynical to remember these romances, but where i know how a very short form of poetry, this exactly how my poems at your age looked, a million words just bursting out. Thanks to me it\'s like looking through a time glass.
January 1st, 2024 08:17
Tooway said:
I am too old and cynical to remember these romances, but where i know how a very short form of poetry, this exactly how my poems at your age looked, a million words just bursting out. Thanks to me it\'s like looking through a time glass.
January 1st, 2024 08:17
Dear you.Yes you. part 1
Malachi said:
Wow i have not read something this amazing for a while u got potential
December 31st, 2023 21:07
Malachi said:
Wow i have not read something this amazing for a while u got potential
December 31st, 2023 21:07
Dear you.Yes you. part 1
Cassie58 said:
Dear you, you are besotted with this guy. I hope he takes notice. An epic write. Good to get that off your chest and into the open. I love your honesty here.
December 31st, 2023 01:43
Cassie58 said:
Dear you, you are besotted with this guy. I hope he takes notice. An epic write. Good to get that off your chest and into the open. I love your honesty here.
December 31st, 2023 01:43
Giving up on god.
Jowi said:
Hey Lil, I know sometimes it feels like God isn\'t there but He is. He has never left you, just pray and trust in Jesus, He is closer than you can Imagine.
Jesus loves you
December 16th, 2023 07:39
Jowi said:
Hey Lil, I know sometimes it feels like God isn\'t there but He is. He has never left you, just pray and trust in Jesus, He is closer than you can Imagine.
Jesus loves you
December 16th, 2023 07:39
Giving up on god.
Bobby O said:
I can relate. The Entity gets the credit but always ducks the blame. I’m hoping things have come together for you.
December 15th, 2023 09:49
Bobby O said:
I can relate. The Entity gets the credit but always ducks the blame. I’m hoping things have come together for you.
December 15th, 2023 09:49
3 poems number 3
2781 said:
It\'s always the way, I can keep a secret, it\'s the people I tell that can\'t.
December 4th, 2023 07:10
2781 said:
It\'s always the way, I can keep a secret, it\'s the people I tell that can\'t.
December 4th, 2023 07:10
Listen to my heart.............Mom&Dad
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong words Lil, I do hope they can sort their lives out and bring the pleasure and love to you.
Andy
December 2nd, 2023 02:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong words Lil, I do hope they can sort their lives out and bring the pleasure and love to you.
Andy
December 2nd, 2023 02:15
Listen to my heart.............Mom&Dad
Sam.C said:
This is really good, I have a poem kinda similar that I\'m gonna be posting later if you wanna read it.
December 1st, 2023 07:44
Sam.C said:
This is really good, I have a poem kinda similar that I\'m gonna be posting later if you wanna read it.
December 1st, 2023 07:44
Mom & Dad
Goldfinch60 said:
Very sad and emotive words Lil, I do hope it sorts itself out soon.
Andy
December 1st, 2023 02:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Very sad and emotive words Lil, I do hope it sorts itself out soon.
Andy
December 1st, 2023 02:02
I am sorry , I\'m Tired and Broken wings.
Lorenz said:
Fly away in the magic of words ,your wings regain !
November 28th, 2023 09:41
Lorenz said:
Fly away in the magic of words ,your wings regain !
November 28th, 2023 09:41
My Rage, My hate for you will never fade, Little Glass Bottle ,and Where Do Broken Hearts Go? ( 4 poems)
MCarman said:
Very powerful , thank you for sharing this. You should be very proud!
November 27th, 2023 16:55
MCarman said:
Very powerful , thank you for sharing this. You should be very proud!
November 27th, 2023 16:55
Break ups
peto said:
An epic well worth the read
Particularly enjoyed number 5
Keep lifting that pen
Great writing though tinged with sadness
November 26th, 2023 20:38
peto said:
An epic well worth the read
Particularly enjoyed number 5
Keep lifting that pen
Great writing though tinged with sadness
November 26th, 2023 20:38
Hi Lily
Parisab said:
Your words reflect the panic and chaos of your experiences. Yet you are shining through with your powerful poetry and art…keep practicing your creative voice!
November 26th, 2023 18:21
Parisab said:
Your words reflect the panic and chaos of your experiences. Yet you are shining through with your powerful poetry and art…keep practicing your creative voice!
November 26th, 2023 18:21
Cry like you Forgot You ,They Flee from Me & Him and her.
Kinsley Lee said:
Hi! Lily
Thank you for sharing poem. it\'s great. Have a nice day!
November 22nd, 2023 09:38
Kinsley Lee said:
Hi! Lily
Thank you for sharing poem. it\'s great. Have a nice day!
November 22nd, 2023 09:38
Cry like you Forgot You ,They Flee from Me & Him and her.
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work.
November 21st, 2023 09:47
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work.
November 21st, 2023 09:47
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