Comments received on poems by Lil
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Lorenz said:
You must tame your inner anger it will become a weapon !
January 26th, 2024 14:32
Lorenz said:
You must tame your inner anger it will become a weapon !
January 26th, 2024 14:32
LOOK AT ME!!!!!!
GeekSusie said:
Ouah ! Votre poème est très puissant et triste. J\'essayais de trouver les bonnes choses à dire en réponse à votre poème et j\'ai décidé de le faire de manière poétique.
Chère âme égarée,
La vie, parfois, nous malmène,
Dans ses tourments, ses peines.
Je connais ton histoire, jeune et effrayée,
Écorchée vive, dans un monde désenchanté.
Ton nom rime avec folie,
Mais ne t\'y trompe pas, c\'est là toute la vie.
Sous les regards des passants, tu te sens perdue,
Écoutée par personne, dans les rues.
Tu as crié, appelé, mais en vain,
Ta douleur, ton désespoir, semblent sans fin.
Tes parents, tes repères, se sont éloignés,
Et dans ce tumulte, tu t\'es retrouvée isolée.
La saleté, le rejet, un fardeau si lourd,
Tes bras racontent des cauchemars, jour après jour.
L\'espoir semble mort, tes yeux ne le portent plus,
Face à tant de déceptions, tu t\'es sentie perdue.
Mais écoute-moi, s\'il te plaît, ne désespère pas,
La vie réserve des surprises, tu verras.
Il y aura des douleurs, mais aussi de l\'espoir,
Des moments de bonheur, après les histoires noires.
Ne garde pas tout cela en toi, libère ta voix,
Parle, partage, ne reste pas sous cette voix.
Il y a des âmes bienveillantes, prêtes à écouter,
Des coeurs ouverts, prêts à t\'aider.
Tu n\'es pas seule dans ce combat,
Même si tout semble sombre, ne perds pas foi.
La vie a ses mystères, ses chemins tortueux,
Mais elle offre aussi des moments merveilleux.
Alors, s\'il te plaît, si tu te sens perdue,
Cherche une main tendue, ne reste pas à la rue.
Il y a toujours de l\'espoir, même dans la nuit noire,
Des gens pour t\'écouter, te voir.
Avec tout mon soutien,
Une âme qui croit en ton chemin.
January 23rd, 2024 21:19
GeekSusie said:
Ouah ! Votre poème est très puissant et triste. J\'essayais de trouver les bonnes choses à dire en réponse à votre poème et j\'ai décidé de le faire de manière poétique.
Chère âme égarée,
La vie, parfois, nous malmène,
Dans ses tourments, ses peines.
Je connais ton histoire, jeune et effrayée,
Écorchée vive, dans un monde désenchanté.
Ton nom rime avec folie,
Mais ne t\'y trompe pas, c\'est là toute la vie.
Sous les regards des passants, tu te sens perdue,
Écoutée par personne, dans les rues.
Tu as crié, appelé, mais en vain,
Ta douleur, ton désespoir, semblent sans fin.
Tes parents, tes repères, se sont éloignés,
Et dans ce tumulte, tu t\'es retrouvée isolée.
La saleté, le rejet, un fardeau si lourd,
Tes bras racontent des cauchemars, jour après jour.
L\'espoir semble mort, tes yeux ne le portent plus,
Face à tant de déceptions, tu t\'es sentie perdue.
Mais écoute-moi, s\'il te plaît, ne désespère pas,
La vie réserve des surprises, tu verras.
Il y aura des douleurs, mais aussi de l\'espoir,
Des moments de bonheur, après les histoires noires.
Ne garde pas tout cela en toi, libère ta voix,
Parle, partage, ne reste pas sous cette voix.
Il y a des âmes bienveillantes, prêtes à écouter,
Des coeurs ouverts, prêts à t\'aider.
Tu n\'es pas seule dans ce combat,
Même si tout semble sombre, ne perds pas foi.
La vie a ses mystères, ses chemins tortueux,
Mais elle offre aussi des moments merveilleux.
Alors, s\'il te plaît, si tu te sens perdue,
Cherche une main tendue, ne reste pas à la rue.
Il y a toujours de l\'espoir, même dans la nuit noire,
Des gens pour t\'écouter, te voir.
Avec tout mon soutien,
Une âme qui croit en ton chemin.
January 23rd, 2024 21:19
Claustrophobia
Lorenz said:
The topic is inspiring (And therapeutic) I also suffer a form of claustro caused by human density around .
January 21st, 2024 15:19
Lorenz said:
The topic is inspiring (And therapeutic) I also suffer a form of claustro caused by human density around .
January 21st, 2024 15:19
Panic attacks
Parisab said:
Thanks for sharing your personal poem-panic attacks are false alarms and mean nothing-but ‘when you stay true to yourself’ they will leave and forget you…
January 20th, 2024 00:32
Parisab said:
Thanks for sharing your personal poem-panic attacks are false alarms and mean nothing-but ‘when you stay true to yourself’ they will leave and forget you…
January 20th, 2024 00:32
Dear best \"Friend\"
Ella-1427 said:
Really well written as well as really well said. I don\'t wish for anyone to relate to this poem, but for those who do you put these emotions together perfectly :)
January 18th, 2024 08:09
Ella-1427 said:
Really well written as well as really well said. I don\'t wish for anyone to relate to this poem, but for those who do you put these emotions together perfectly :)
January 18th, 2024 08:09
She
Cassie58 said:
Where you break you grow stronger. Tell your story. You rose from the dark sea bed into the glory of sunlight. Make sure the sun always shines on you Lil.
January 17th, 2024 06:46
Cassie58 said:
Where you break you grow stronger. Tell your story. You rose from the dark sea bed into the glory of sunlight. Make sure the sun always shines on you Lil.
January 17th, 2024 06:46
Dear best \"Friend\"
Cassie58 said:
True friends are like gold dust. They stay with you through life. In the good times, in the bad times. Sadly you will encounter imposters on the way. Relatable poem Lil. You look young. Plenty of time yet to make lifelong friends. Hang in there.
January 17th, 2024 03:27
Cassie58 said:
True friends are like gold dust. They stay with you through life. In the good times, in the bad times. Sadly you will encounter imposters on the way. Relatable poem Lil. You look young. Plenty of time yet to make lifelong friends. Hang in there.
January 17th, 2024 03:27
Dear best \"Friend\"
Accidental Poet said:
True, the lines between friends and enemies is a blur at best. But there are some who are true friends. Takes a long time to really know who your friends are. Written really well Lil. 😉👍
January 16th, 2024 19:17
Accidental Poet said:
True, the lines between friends and enemies is a blur at best. But there are some who are true friends. Takes a long time to really know who your friends are. Written really well Lil. 😉👍
January 16th, 2024 19:17
Dear best \"Friend\"
Lorenz said:
With some friends there\'s no point in having enemies !
January 16th, 2024 17:14
Lorenz said:
With some friends there\'s no point in having enemies !
January 16th, 2024 17:14
Panic Attacks
Tooway said:
Nice explanation, sadly these don\'t get easier with age :)
January 15th, 2024 20:02
Tooway said:
Nice explanation, sadly these don\'t get easier with age :)
January 15th, 2024 20:02
Panic Attacks
Cassie58 said:
Crushing to experience. Your posted image is powerful. Nothing remotely pleasant about finding yourself having to deal with one of these.
January 15th, 2024 13:03
Cassie58 said:
Crushing to experience. Your posted image is powerful. Nothing remotely pleasant about finding yourself having to deal with one of these.
January 15th, 2024 13:03
Panic Attacks
jarcher54 said:
A powerful description... I hope you can find some respite!
January 15th, 2024 01:22
jarcher54 said:
A powerful description... I hope you can find some respite!
January 15th, 2024 01:22
In the name of Amelia and Nathaniel.
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and moving tribute.
January 8th, 2024 07:40
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and moving tribute.
January 8th, 2024 07:40
Dear you.Yes you. part 1
Kinsley Lee said:
Dear Lil
Hi! Thank you for sharing your poem. Happy New Year!
January 5th, 2024 10:03
Kinsley Lee said:
Dear Lil
Hi! Thank you for sharing your poem. Happy New Year!
January 5th, 2024 10:03
Dear you.Yes you. part 1
Tooway said:
I am too old and cynical to remember these romances, but where i know how a very short form of poetry, this exactly how my poems at your age looked, a million words just bursting out. Thanks to me it\'s like looking through a time glass.
January 1st, 2024 08:17
Tooway said:
I am too old and cynical to remember these romances, but where i know how a very short form of poetry, this exactly how my poems at your age looked, a million words just bursting out. Thanks to me it\'s like looking through a time glass.
January 1st, 2024 08:17
Dear you.Yes you. part 1
vividvoid14 said:
Wow i have not read something this amazing for a while u got potential
December 31st, 2023 21:07
vividvoid14 said:
Wow i have not read something this amazing for a while u got potential
December 31st, 2023 21:07
Dear you.Yes you. part 1
Cassie58 said:
Dear you, you are besotted with this guy. I hope he takes notice. An epic write. Good to get that off your chest and into the open. I love your honesty here.
December 31st, 2023 01:43
Cassie58 said:
Dear you, you are besotted with this guy. I hope he takes notice. An epic write. Good to get that off your chest and into the open. I love your honesty here.
December 31st, 2023 01:43
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