Comments received on poems by Lil
Break ups
peto said:
An epic well worth the read
Particularly enjoyed number 5
Keep lifting that pen
Great writing though tinged with sadness
November 26th, 2023 20:38
peto said:
An epic well worth the read
Particularly enjoyed number 5
Keep lifting that pen
Great writing though tinged with sadness
November 26th, 2023 20:38
Hi Lily
Parisab said:
Your words reflect the panic and chaos of your experiences. Yet you are shining through with your powerful poetry and art…keep practicing your creative voice!
November 26th, 2023 18:21
Parisab said:
Your words reflect the panic and chaos of your experiences. Yet you are shining through with your powerful poetry and art…keep practicing your creative voice!
November 26th, 2023 18:21
Cry like you Forgot You ,They Flee from Me & Him and her.
Kinsley Lee said:
Hi! Lily
Thank you for sharing poem. it\'s great. Have a nice day!
November 22nd, 2023 09:38
Kinsley Lee said:
Hi! Lily
Thank you for sharing poem. it\'s great. Have a nice day!
November 22nd, 2023 09:38
Cry like you Forgot You ,They Flee from Me & Him and her.
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work.
November 21st, 2023 09:47
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work.
November 21st, 2023 09:47
7 poems.
Tiffany_Arnold said:
I like this it was dark and kept me on my toes
November 20th, 2023 15:32
Tiffany_Arnold said:
I like this it was dark and kept me on my toes
November 20th, 2023 15:32
7 poems.
aDarkerMind said:
a very dark write Lily
powerful and sad.
very well written;
November 20th, 2023 14:46
aDarkerMind said:
a very dark write Lily
powerful and sad.
very well written;
November 20th, 2023 14:46
Hurt And Pain, How Could I Be So Lonely, Silent Tears, We Wear The Mask and The Charge Of The Light Brigade
2781 said:
You have grown up very fast.
November 18th, 2023 15:47
2781 said:
You have grown up very fast.
November 18th, 2023 15:47
Our Hearts Are Broken Forever & Missing My Sister And Best Friend.
aDarkerMind said:
very touching as always Lily
November 18th, 2023 09:36
aDarkerMind said:
very touching as always Lily
November 18th, 2023 09:36
Grandma.
Lil said:
We heard about my grandma and she currently has a HUGE infection. And will be in the hospital for a while.
November 17th, 2023 06:41
Lil said:
We heard about my grandma and she currently has a HUGE infection. And will be in the hospital for a while.
November 17th, 2023 06:41
The FAMILY’s Trust
Lil said:
It is not Fantasy I didn\'t mean to press that. Sorry..........
November 16th, 2023 15:49
Lil said:
It is not Fantasy I didn\'t mean to press that. Sorry..........
November 16th, 2023 15:49
A Challenge To The Dark.
aDarkerMind said:
sad......touching....
dark and honest;
worthy of much applause;
November 15th, 2023 13:13
aDarkerMind said:
sad......touching....
dark and honest;
worthy of much applause;
November 15th, 2023 13:13
My Rage, My hate for you will never fade, Little Glass Bottle ,and Where Do Broken Hearts Go? ( 4 poems)
2781 said:
The Lord is nigh unto them with a broken heart; and saveth such as be of a contrite spirit.
November 14th, 2023 19:47
2781 said:
The Lord is nigh unto them with a broken heart; and saveth such as be of a contrite spirit.
November 14th, 2023 19:47
My Rage, My hate for you will never fade, Little Glass Bottle ,and Where Do Broken Hearts Go? ( 4 poems)
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful poem, I\'m glad you came through.
November 14th, 2023 19:44
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful poem, I\'m glad you came through.
November 14th, 2023 19:44
My Rage, My hate for you will never fade, Little Glass Bottle ,and Where Do Broken Hearts Go? ( 4 poems)
Tiffany_Arnold said:
I love this sooo much
November 14th, 2023 19:22
Tiffany_Arnold said:
I love this sooo much
November 14th, 2023 19:22
My Rage, My hate for you will never fade, Little Glass Bottle ,and Where Do Broken Hearts Go? ( 4 poems)
Tiffany_Arnold said:
November 14th, 2023 19:22
Tiffany_Arnold said:
November 14th, 2023 19:22
My Rage, My hate for you will never fade, Little Glass Bottle ,and Where Do Broken Hearts Go? ( 4 poems)
JuneM said:
Some of the best poems I\'ve read yet.
November 14th, 2023 10:25
JuneM said:
Some of the best poems I\'ve read yet.
November 14th, 2023 10:25
My Rage, My hate for you will never fade, Little Glass Bottle ,and Where Do Broken Hearts Go? ( 4 poems)
Lorenz said:
Broken hearts go to healing through resilience and perceptions of causes .
November 14th, 2023 07:31
Lorenz said:
Broken hearts go to healing through resilience and perceptions of causes .
November 14th, 2023 07:31
Parents war!!!!
JuneM said:
I feel you, my parents got divorced, and have been yelling and fighting nonstop. Sometimes I can\'t even hear my own thoughts
November 13th, 2023 10:12
JuneM said:
I feel you, my parents got divorced, and have been yelling and fighting nonstop. Sometimes I can\'t even hear my own thoughts
November 13th, 2023 10:12
2 poems
JuneM said:
I\'m so sorry for what your going through right now, and I understand. Over the last years I\'ve lost a lot of people close to me, and its never been the same since. Hopefully it gets better
November 13th, 2023 10:08
JuneM said:
I\'m so sorry for what your going through right now, and I understand. Over the last years I\'ve lost a lot of people close to me, and its never been the same since. Hopefully it gets better
November 13th, 2023 10:08
Carry On
JuneM said:
Beautifully and truthfully written, and I can relate, for my heart has also been broken many, many times. I still feel the hole in my chest, but as the days pass, it eases a bit. I hope it does the same for you
November 13th, 2023 10:06
JuneM said:
Beautifully and truthfully written, and I can relate, for my heart has also been broken many, many times. I still feel the hole in my chest, but as the days pass, it eases a bit. I hope it does the same for you
November 13th, 2023 10:06
You Cheated & Broken heart (two poems)
Positive Girl said:
Written very well. Nice work.
November 9th, 2023 09:42
Positive Girl said:
Written very well. Nice work.
November 9th, 2023 09:42
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