Comments received on poems by Lil
Panic Attacks
jarcher54 said:
A powerful description... I hope you can find some respite!
January 15th, 2024 01:22
jarcher54 said:
A powerful description... I hope you can find some respite!
January 15th, 2024 01:22
In the name of Amelia and Nathaniel.
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and moving tribute.
January 8th, 2024 07:40
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and moving tribute.
January 8th, 2024 07:40
Dear you.Yes you. part 1
Kinsley Lee said:
Dear Lil
Hi! Thank you for sharing your poem. Happy New Year!
January 5th, 2024 10:03
Kinsley Lee said:
Dear Lil
Hi! Thank you for sharing your poem. Happy New Year!
January 5th, 2024 10:03
Dear you.Yes you. part 1
Tooway said:
I am too old and cynical to remember these romances, but where i know how a very short form of poetry, this exactly how my poems at your age looked, a million words just bursting out. Thanks to me it\'s like looking through a time glass.
January 1st, 2024 08:17
Tooway said:
I am too old and cynical to remember these romances, but where i know how a very short form of poetry, this exactly how my poems at your age looked, a million words just bursting out. Thanks to me it\'s like looking through a time glass.
January 1st, 2024 08:17
Dear you.Yes you. part 1
vividvoid14 said:
Wow i have not read something this amazing for a while u got potential
December 31st, 2023 21:07
vividvoid14 said:
Wow i have not read something this amazing for a while u got potential
December 31st, 2023 21:07
Dear you.Yes you. part 1
Cassie58 said:
Dear you, you are besotted with this guy. I hope he takes notice. An epic write. Good to get that off your chest and into the open. I love your honesty here.
December 31st, 2023 01:43
Cassie58 said:
Dear you, you are besotted with this guy. I hope he takes notice. An epic write. Good to get that off your chest and into the open. I love your honesty here.
December 31st, 2023 01:43
Giving up on god.
Jowi said:
Hey Lil, I know sometimes it feels like God isn\'t there but He is. He has never left you, just pray and trust in Jesus, He is closer than you can Imagine.
Jesus loves you
December 16th, 2023 07:39
Jowi said:
Hey Lil, I know sometimes it feels like God isn\'t there but He is. He has never left you, just pray and trust in Jesus, He is closer than you can Imagine.
Jesus loves you
December 16th, 2023 07:39
Giving up on god.
Bobby O said:
I can relate. The Entity gets the credit but always ducks the blame. I’m hoping things have come together for you.
December 15th, 2023 09:49
Bobby O said:
I can relate. The Entity gets the credit but always ducks the blame. I’m hoping things have come together for you.
December 15th, 2023 09:49
3 poems number 3
2781 said:
It\'s always the way, I can keep a secret, it\'s the people I tell that can\'t.
December 4th, 2023 07:10
2781 said:
It\'s always the way, I can keep a secret, it\'s the people I tell that can\'t.
December 4th, 2023 07:10
Listen to my heart.............Mom&Dad
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong words Lil, I do hope they can sort their lives out and bring the pleasure and love to you.
Andy
December 2nd, 2023 02:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong words Lil, I do hope they can sort their lives out and bring the pleasure and love to you.
Andy
December 2nd, 2023 02:15
Listen to my heart.............Mom&Dad
Sam.C said:
This is really good, I have a poem kinda similar that I\'m gonna be posting later if you wanna read it.
December 1st, 2023 07:44
Sam.C said:
This is really good, I have a poem kinda similar that I\'m gonna be posting later if you wanna read it.
December 1st, 2023 07:44
Mom & Dad
Goldfinch60 said:
Very sad and emotive words Lil, I do hope it sorts itself out soon.
Andy
December 1st, 2023 02:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Very sad and emotive words Lil, I do hope it sorts itself out soon.
Andy
December 1st, 2023 02:02
I am sorry , I\'m Tired and Broken wings.
Lorenz said:
Fly away in the magic of words ,your wings regain !
November 28th, 2023 09:41
Lorenz said:
Fly away in the magic of words ,your wings regain !
November 28th, 2023 09:41
My Rage, My hate for you will never fade, Little Glass Bottle ,and Where Do Broken Hearts Go? ( 4 poems)
MCarman said:
Very powerful , thank you for sharing this. You should be very proud!
November 27th, 2023 16:55
MCarman said:
Very powerful , thank you for sharing this. You should be very proud!
November 27th, 2023 16:55
Break ups
peto said:
An epic well worth the read
Particularly enjoyed number 5
Keep lifting that pen
Great writing though tinged with sadness
November 26th, 2023 20:38
peto said:
An epic well worth the read
Particularly enjoyed number 5
Keep lifting that pen
Great writing though tinged with sadness
November 26th, 2023 20:38
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