Comments received on poems by Lil



Giving up on god.
Jowi said:

Hey Lil, I know sometimes it feels like God isn\'t there but He is. He has never left you, just pray and trust in Jesus, He is closer than you can Imagine.
Jesus loves you

December 16th, 2023 07:39

Giving up on god.
Bobby O said:

I can relate. The Entity gets the credit but always ducks the blame. I’m hoping things have come together for you.

December 15th, 2023 09:49

Giving up on god.
Lorenz said:

dog\'s fiction .

December 15th, 2023 02:22

Giving up on god.
NinjaGirl said:

Did you draw that? If so, it\'s SO good.

December 14th, 2023 17:54

2 poems
Mase ♪ said:

❤️Love it.


December 8th, 2023 17:54

I Want To Die, and Nothing But Death
Mase ♪ said:

:|

December 7th, 2023 15:12

LOOK AT ME!!!!!!
JuneM said:

Powerful poem, hang in there friend, I will always look and care for you ;)

December 6th, 2023 10:23

3 poems number 3
JuneM said:

I love these so much, they\'re beautiful and so truthful!

December 4th, 2023 13:15

3 poems number 3
2781 said:

It\'s always the way, I can keep a secret, it\'s the people I tell that can\'t.

December 4th, 2023 07:10

Listen to my heart.............Mom&Dad
Goldfinch60 said:

Strong words Lil, I do hope they can sort their lives out and bring the pleasure and love to you.

Andy

December 2nd, 2023 02:15

Listen to my heart.............Mom&Dad
Sam.C said:

This is really good, I have a poem kinda similar that I\'m gonna be posting later if you wanna read it.

December 1st, 2023 07:44

Mom & Dad
Goldfinch60 said:

Very sad and emotive words Lil, I do hope it sorts itself out soon.

Andy

December 1st, 2023 02:02

Mom & Dad
2781 said:

Use capital\'s.

November 30th, 2023 06:50

I am sorry , I\'m Tired and Broken wings.
Lorenz said:

Fly away in the magic of words ,your wings regain !

November 28th, 2023 09:41

3 poems
Lil said:

Thank you hotidris sir.

November 27th, 2023 17:35

My Rage, My hate for you will never fade, Little Glass Bottle ,and Where Do Broken Hearts Go? ( 4 poems)
MCarman said:

Very powerful , thank you for sharing this. You should be very proud!

November 27th, 2023 16:55

3 poems
2781 said:

That was a novel. You write like an adult.

November 27th, 2023 07:43

Break ups
peto said:

An epic well worth the read
Particularly enjoyed number 5
Keep lifting that pen
Great writing though tinged with sadness

November 26th, 2023 20:38

Hi Lily
Parisab said:

Your words reflect the panic and chaos of your experiences. Yet you are shining through with your powerful poetry and art…keep practicing your creative voice!

November 26th, 2023 18:21

Hi Lily
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work.

November 22nd, 2023 22:15

Cry like you Forgot You ,They Flee from Me & Him and her.
Kinsley Lee said:

Hi! Lily
Thank you for sharing poem. it\'s great. Have a nice day!

November 22nd, 2023 09:38

Cry like you Forgot You ,They Flee from Me & Him and her.
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work.

November 21st, 2023 09:47

7 poems.
Tiffany_Arnold said:

I like this it was dark and kept me on my toes

November 20th, 2023 15:32

7 poems.
aDarkerMind said:

a very dark write Lily

powerful and sad.

very well written;

November 20th, 2023 14:46


Our Hearts Are Broken Forever & Missing My Sister And Best Friend.
aDarkerMind said:

very touching as always Lily

November 18th, 2023 09:36

Grandma.
Lil said:

We heard about my grandma and she currently has a HUGE infection. And will be in the hospital for a while.

November 17th, 2023 06:41

The FAMILY’s Trust
Lil said:

It is not Fantasy I didn\'t mean to press that. Sorry..........

November 16th, 2023 15:49

Grandma.
2781 said:

The greatest among them shall be your servant.

November 16th, 2023 14:47

Grandma.
aDarkerMind said:

you have a talent.....

keep writing.

November 16th, 2023 11:27

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