Comments received on poems by Hey!



The Love
sorenbarrett said:

There is a feeling of comfort in this write that speaks for itself. Nicely done

January 2nd, 2026 03:29

Merry Christmas
Katie B. said:

lovely, merry Christmas to you and yours!!

December 25th, 2025 07:46

Merry Christmas
sorenbarrett said:

A most important part of Christmas is the seeing of family. Nicely written. Merry Christmas to you

December 25th, 2025 04:19

Life Hurts but it Works.
sorenbarrett said:

This poem seems to send the message that it is what it is. That people can\'t help being who they are. Nicely done

December 23rd, 2025 03:41

Life Isnt that Bad When You Give it a Chance.
sorenbarrett said:

A cute approach to a view on life. Well done

December 13th, 2025 14:45

The world goes around
sorenbarrett said:

There is a feeling of helplessness in this poem. Clearly written

October 9th, 2025 20:16

The darkest moment
Cheeky Missy said:

Hang in there. It\'s not the end. Yet. Excellently rendered with perfect imagery and a painful poignancy.

May 5th, 2025 10:28

The darkest moment
sorenbarrett said:

There is anger and rage in this poem that speaks out. Nicely done

May 5th, 2025 05:38

Him its him
rainbow 1 said:

memories

April 22nd, 2025 23:58

Sound of love
rainbow 1 said:

so sweet

April 22nd, 2025 23:56

Hey John??
rainbow 1 said:

hahahah

April 22nd, 2025 23:56

Trump won.....
rainbow 1 said:

well trump is doing really good right now and making the right decisions

April 22nd, 2025 23:54

The letter I wrote to John to express my love!
rainbow 1 said:

this brings back memories those were some paragraphs makes me laugh

April 22nd, 2025 23:52

Help
Avi said:

Ugh John is being mean to you lily

April 17th, 2025 04:35

Umm yea
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

great write

April 16th, 2025 05:50

The biggest fight yet.
sorenbarrett said:

What a nice message of what friendship is. I enjoyed the rhyme punctuated with some internal rhyme as well and the flow was easy. Very nice

April 11th, 2025 05:54

The biggest fight yet.
Libellule said:

Nice flow... very engaging...

April 11th, 2025 05:41

How?
rainbow 1 said:

free from whose grasp was someone hearting you or something otherwise this doesent make since

April 7th, 2025 11:27

How?
sorenbarrett said:

A good write about feeling good about who one is and the freedom this gives. Others resent this and also resent others they can not control. People just tend to find this threatening a lovely write

April 7th, 2025 05:44

Umm yea
sorenbarrett said:

A call for reunion and return to past unity. Very nice

March 28th, 2025 18:50

Cant do anything right
sorenbarrett said:

A sad point of view. When one doesn\'t believe in themselves no one else does either. Change the story and start to believe in you. This poem leaves one feeling hopeless and angry. It conveys the feelings well and seems written from the heart. Well done.

March 11th, 2025 19:57

Cant do anything right
sheta said:

lil every 2 in 10 people think that way same as me but we just gotta make the most of it

March 11th, 2025 19:31

Cant do anything right
Mutley Ravishes said:

You\'re writing poetry at what, 14? You\'re doing something right!
Here\'s something to think on: the body never makes mistakes, or tries too hard. Same goes for our awareness of being.
Have you checked out the song \"Power\" by Ren? You can find it on Youtube. Have a great day!


March 11th, 2025 19:09

It there but its not
sheta said:

i love it

March 10th, 2025 19:28

It there but its not
sorenbarrett said:

Here then gone. Things come and go. Nothing lasts but then in a way it does.

March 10th, 2025 18:04

Help
sheta said:

lil he is gone you don\'t have to worry
and what john said about you is not true
you are a special person that deserves love in every way possible

March 10th, 2025 16:39

Help
Gracie🍯 said:

holy crap girl. I hope ur ok

March 10th, 2025 12:57

Help
NinjaGirl said:

Oh my, don\'t worry you\'re going to be alright I\'ve got you

March 9th, 2025 22:00

Help
sorenbarrett said:

I hear a lot of pain and anger in this work. It screams at the reader.

March 9th, 2025 12:13

Maybe
sorenbarrett said:

One must learn to be good to oneself before one good to others. One can not give what one does not have. A sad and hurtful poem of pain.

March 7th, 2025 19:41

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