Comments received on poems by Hey!
Umm yea
sorenbarrett said:
A call for reunion and return to past unity. Very nice
March 28th, 2025 18:50
sorenbarrett said:
A call for reunion and return to past unity. Very nice
March 28th, 2025 18:50
Cant do anything right
sorenbarrett said:
A sad point of view. When one doesn\'t believe in themselves no one else does either. Change the story and start to believe in you. This poem leaves one feeling hopeless and angry. It conveys the feelings well and seems written from the heart. Well done.
March 11th, 2025 19:57
sorenbarrett said:
A sad point of view. When one doesn\'t believe in themselves no one else does either. Change the story and start to believe in you. This poem leaves one feeling hopeless and angry. It conveys the feelings well and seems written from the heart. Well done.
March 11th, 2025 19:57
Cant do anything right
sheta said:
lil every 2 in 10 people think that way same as me but we just gotta make the most of it
March 11th, 2025 19:31
sheta said:
lil every 2 in 10 people think that way same as me but we just gotta make the most of it
March 11th, 2025 19:31
Cant do anything right
Mutley Ravishes said:
You\'re writing poetry at what, 14? You\'re doing something right!
Here\'s something to think on: the body never makes mistakes, or tries too hard. Same goes for our awareness of being.
Have you checked out the song \"Power\" by Ren? You can find it on Youtube. Have a great day!
March 11th, 2025 19:09
Mutley Ravishes said:
You\'re writing poetry at what, 14? You\'re doing something right!
Here\'s something to think on: the body never makes mistakes, or tries too hard. Same goes for our awareness of being.
Have you checked out the song \"Power\" by Ren? You can find it on Youtube. Have a great day!
March 11th, 2025 19:09
It there but its not
sorenbarrett said:
Here then gone. Things come and go. Nothing lasts but then in a way it does.
March 10th, 2025 18:04
sorenbarrett said:
Here then gone. Things come and go. Nothing lasts but then in a way it does.
March 10th, 2025 18:04
Help
sheta said:
lil he is gone you don\'t have to worry
and what john said about you is not true
you are a special person that deserves love in every way possible
March 10th, 2025 16:39
sheta said:
lil he is gone you don\'t have to worry
and what john said about you is not true
you are a special person that deserves love in every way possible
March 10th, 2025 16:39
Help
NinjaGirl said:
Oh my, don\'t worry you\'re going to be alright I\'ve got you
March 9th, 2025 22:00
NinjaGirl said:
Oh my, don\'t worry you\'re going to be alright I\'ve got you
March 9th, 2025 22:00
Help
sorenbarrett said:
I hear a lot of pain and anger in this work. It screams at the reader.
March 9th, 2025 12:13
sorenbarrett said:
I hear a lot of pain and anger in this work. It screams at the reader.
March 9th, 2025 12:13
Maybe
sorenbarrett said:
One must learn to be good to oneself before one good to others. One can not give what one does not have. A sad and hurtful poem of pain.
March 7th, 2025 19:41
sorenbarrett said:
One must learn to be good to oneself before one good to others. One can not give what one does not have. A sad and hurtful poem of pain.
March 7th, 2025 19:41
Maybe
sheta said:
very sad lil but you are not better off gone
you will be special to someone someday
and they will love you so much you will be happy
i hope for your sake you find an amazing person that will forever love you
March 7th, 2025 18:43
sheta said:
very sad lil but you are not better off gone
you will be special to someone someday
and they will love you so much you will be happy
i hope for your sake you find an amazing person that will forever love you
March 7th, 2025 18:43
John ( The unexpected heartbreak)
sheta said:
lil you are something
and im sure love will find you a perfect someone
March 6th, 2025 14:51
sheta said:
lil you are something
and im sure love will find you a perfect someone
March 6th, 2025 14:51
John ( The unexpected heartbreak)
rainbow 1 said:
yet you forget the fact you left me for Mr snaggletooth when you get mad at me I let you unload it no Diddy take your own advice and think for once I know your smart lillian Michele Moore the smartest person I know its not about revenge its what I wanna do for once no one can tell me what to do because I\'m not chasing you I don\'t have to listen to you anymore I\'m free I\'m sick and tired of getting blamed for every little thing and then when I need a little help you abandon me I needed you to calm me down and instead you instantly went to Clayton
March 6th, 2025 07:45
rainbow 1 said:
yet you forget the fact you left me for Mr snaggletooth when you get mad at me I let you unload it no Diddy take your own advice and think for once I know your smart lillian Michele Moore the smartest person I know its not about revenge its what I wanna do for once no one can tell me what to do because I\'m not chasing you I don\'t have to listen to you anymore I\'m free I\'m sick and tired of getting blamed for every little thing and then when I need a little help you abandon me I needed you to calm me down and instead you instantly went to Clayton
March 6th, 2025 07:45
John ( The unexpected heartbreak)
sorenbarrett said:
Anger can be heard in this poem and it runs in desire for revenge. Hot from the oven this one sizzles
March 6th, 2025 06:30
sorenbarrett said:
Anger can be heard in this poem and it runs in desire for revenge. Hot from the oven this one sizzles
March 6th, 2025 06:30
The Problem Within
Poetic Licence said:
A very heartfelt and extremely honest write declaring their ongoing love but acknowledging that the pain needs to stop. You can feel the honest remorse throughout the read, well expressed
March 4th, 2025 08:14
Poetic Licence said:
A very heartfelt and extremely honest write declaring their ongoing love but acknowledging that the pain needs to stop. You can feel the honest remorse throughout the read, well expressed
March 4th, 2025 08:14
The Problem Within
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of remorse and pain for what is seen as unpardonable flaws and deeds. Heart felt and wrenching it speaks of love for another greater than one\'s own desires and wisdom that knows that causing more pain does not make sense. Nicely worded in rhyme this piece is sad but all too true for many. Nicely done
March 4th, 2025 06:09
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of remorse and pain for what is seen as unpardonable flaws and deeds. Heart felt and wrenching it speaks of love for another greater than one\'s own desires and wisdom that knows that causing more pain does not make sense. Nicely worded in rhyme this piece is sad but all too true for many. Nicely done
March 4th, 2025 06:09
A Heart Torn in Two
Natalie Gladmir said:
What a dilemma! But first we need to determine if this girl is not confusing the concepts of LOVE and CODEPENDENCY. Why? Because a cruel disappointment will tear her heart into four.
March 4th, 2025 06:05
Natalie Gladmir said:
What a dilemma! But first we need to determine if this girl is not confusing the concepts of LOVE and CODEPENDENCY. Why? Because a cruel disappointment will tear her heart into four.
March 4th, 2025 06:05
A Heart Torn in Two
Poetic Licence said:
We all have choices to take and do not know if they are right or wrong until we have taken them, if wrong then hopefully we learn and get right next time, just ensure the choices are your choices, well written
March 4th, 2025 03:14
Poetic Licence said:
We all have choices to take and do not know if they are right or wrong until we have taken them, if wrong then hopefully we learn and get right next time, just ensure the choices are your choices, well written
March 4th, 2025 03:14
A Heart Torn in Two
rainbow 1 said:
I\'m dead so pick Clayton btw guys she a bully lol
March 3rd, 2025 19:58
rainbow 1 said:
I\'m dead so pick Clayton btw guys she a bully lol
March 3rd, 2025 19:58
A Heart Torn in Two
sorenbarrett said:
Choices are what this life is made of and no matter which it is it is a matter of point of view as to whether it was right or wrong. On can never travel both roads so one can never know for sure whether the choice was right or wrong. I always believe I took the right road.
March 3rd, 2025 16:28
sorenbarrett said:
Choices are what this life is made of and no matter which it is it is a matter of point of view as to whether it was right or wrong. On can never travel both roads so one can never know for sure whether the choice was right or wrong. I always believe I took the right road.
March 3rd, 2025 16:28
A Heart Torn in Two
Cheeky Missy said:
Superbly rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting, resonating, exquisite poignancy, this leaves the reader breathless and uncertain, hanging on her choice. I\'d vote for the one who offers a secure sense of home over adventure, yet wish the heroine the best, whichever she chooses. Thank you for sharing.
March 3rd, 2025 16:27
Cheeky Missy said:
Superbly rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting, resonating, exquisite poignancy, this leaves the reader breathless and uncertain, hanging on her choice. I\'d vote for the one who offers a secure sense of home over adventure, yet wish the heroine the best, whichever she chooses. Thank you for sharing.
March 3rd, 2025 16:27
As the days go by
rainbow 1 said:
the answer is no we don\'t it only lets you send 100 messages a day sorry night Lillie see you tommorow we talk more ok
March 1st, 2025 19:50
rainbow 1 said:
the answer is no we don\'t it only lets you send 100 messages a day sorry night Lillie see you tommorow we talk more ok
March 1st, 2025 19:50
The Heart\'s Dilemma
NafisaSB said:
you are right -trust your heart to find its soulmate - and here\'s wishing you the right choice
March 1st, 2025 00:20
NafisaSB said:
you are right -trust your heart to find its soulmate - and here\'s wishing you the right choice
March 1st, 2025 00:20
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