Comments received on poems by Lil



I ruin everything
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Another excellent showing Lil! I could feel your emotions in this! I know the feeling and the experience of being bullied and misunderstood, and you know what? This is exactly how I got through it! I pray the bullying stops, but I also pray your writing never stops! Keep it coming! Again, well done! Excellent job!

November 7th, 2024 08:31

Trump won.....
sorenbarrett said:

I could sense the emotion in this write and yet the control over it to express it in a level minded and fair manner. Nicely done

November 7th, 2024 03:50

Trump won.....
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Thank you for expressing your concerns. They are real and heard...and yes, next time you WILL be able to vote. In the meantime, you can certainly continue to write. Keep using your voice to unflinchingly speak truth to the world. \"The pen is truly mightier than the sword.\" --Edward Bulwer-Lytton Brava! Great job and I share in your concerns!

November 6th, 2024 23:53

Trump won.....
Doggerel Dave said:

I would lower the voting age right now on the strength of your rant, Lil.
But no - because not all your contemporaries would be so aware.
Just so long as YOU stay the course.

November 6th, 2024 16:16

Trump won.....
2781 said:

I listened to his speak, he seemed genuine, I thought.

November 6th, 2024 08:37

Trump won.....
Tony36 said:

Don\'t worry, I hate him as well. Great write

November 6th, 2024 07:35

I ruin everything
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

November 6th, 2024 07:18

Trump won.....
Lorenz said:

I\'ts ridiculous to reduce this election to the abortion issue.The world doesn\'t stop at California !

November 6th, 2024 06:20

I ruin everything
MR.apocalypse said:

sto get over this feeling. you must first accept the way things are. i have spent my whole child hood going home to home. i was even adopted once but they also gave me up. i turned 18 in a group home. truth is for you most likely nothing will change and the only thing you can change is yourself. there is no easy way out. and there is for sure no easy happy ending unless you do it yourself.

read some of my poems they were made for people like you

never take it to the heart
when your home gets torn apart
when you feel like its your fault
its not, because your not the adult

November 5th, 2024 22:15

I ruin everything
NinjaGirl said:

maybe the things fall apart so we can take the pieces and build something better

November 5th, 2024 21:15

Gotcha day #4
MR.apocalypse said:

good to see someone being thankful for the things they have. and its good to see someone understand what life has given them

October 30th, 2024 21:08

The fear of being alone (Autophobia or Monophobia)
Ezekiel Olayemi said:

Powerful and heartfelt ❤️

October 28th, 2024 16:40

The fear of being alone (Autophobia or Monophobia)
Tony36 said:

Excellent

October 28th, 2024 09:59

Parents in Florida!! ( Mac and Olivia)
Mase ♪ said:

Beautiful write.

October 26th, 2024 18:04

Another suicidal....
Demar Desu said:

You must be a good friend for them to trust you with their lives

October 22nd, 2024 10:20



Happy Birthday to Me?
peet said:

Happy b\'day and well written,

October 17th, 2024 11:48

Happy Birthday to Me?
Demar Desu said:

Happy birthday

October 17th, 2024 08:57

Happy Birthday to Me?
Tony36 said:

Brilliant

October 17th, 2024 07:49

Happy Birthday to Me?
2781 said:

We are all victims.

October 17th, 2024 06:32

(just a random poem idk what to name it.)
peet said:

Nice rhyme that you have in those few lines. Nice work.

October 16th, 2024 13:17

Emotionless FREAK
Dan Williams said:

Wow. A real wagon load of hurt here. Hopefully spelling it put like this will sooth it some. Wishing you some relief.

October 7th, 2024 00:15

Emotionless FREAK
Lyn32 said:

Nice poem! We gotta make wise decisions, based on the lives were living, especially who we hang out with.

October 6th, 2024 18:03

Emotionless FREAK
David Wakeling said:

Guys are the Worst!. You need to get a kitten or Puppy. Get those happy emotions back

October 6th, 2024 02:22

Hurt
Mase ♪ said:

So true Lil, it\'s a good poem.

October 1st, 2024 20:52

Him its him
Dan Williams said:

I would have to change the gender but it makes perfect sense to me. Nicely done.

September 27th, 2024 13:16

Him its him
Mase ♪ said:

Beautiful write Lil. ☺️

September 26th, 2024 19:04

Him its him
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

September 26th, 2024 13:30

Him its him
Cassie58 said:

You know Lil, there is an excitement in your words. I can feel it. You make perfect sense to me. Happy Thursday.

September 26th, 2024 08:23

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