Comments received on poems by Hey!
The world goes around
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling of helplessness in this poem. Clearly written
October 9th, 2025 20:16
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling of helplessness in this poem. Clearly written
October 9th, 2025 20:16
The darkest moment
Cheeky Missy said:
Hang in there. It\'s not the end. Yet. Excellently rendered with perfect imagery and a painful poignancy.
May 5th, 2025 10:28
Cheeky Missy said:
Hang in there. It\'s not the end. Yet. Excellently rendered with perfect imagery and a painful poignancy.
May 5th, 2025 10:28
The darkest moment
sorenbarrett said:
There is anger and rage in this poem that speaks out. Nicely done
May 5th, 2025 05:38
sorenbarrett said:
There is anger and rage in this poem that speaks out. Nicely done
May 5th, 2025 05:38
Trump won.....
rainbow 1 said:
well trump is doing really good right now and making the right decisions
April 22nd, 2025 23:54
rainbow 1 said:
well trump is doing really good right now and making the right decisions
April 22nd, 2025 23:54
The letter I wrote to John to express my love!
rainbow 1 said:
this brings back memories those were some paragraphs makes me laugh
April 22nd, 2025 23:52
rainbow 1 said:
this brings back memories those were some paragraphs makes me laugh
April 22nd, 2025 23:52
The biggest fight yet.
sorenbarrett said:
What a nice message of what friendship is. I enjoyed the rhyme punctuated with some internal rhyme as well and the flow was easy. Very nice
April 11th, 2025 05:54
sorenbarrett said:
What a nice message of what friendship is. I enjoyed the rhyme punctuated with some internal rhyme as well and the flow was easy. Very nice
April 11th, 2025 05:54
How?
rainbow 1 said:
free from whose grasp was someone hearting you or something otherwise this doesent make since
April 7th, 2025 11:27
rainbow 1 said:
free from whose grasp was someone hearting you or something otherwise this doesent make since
April 7th, 2025 11:27
How?
sorenbarrett said:
A good write about feeling good about who one is and the freedom this gives. Others resent this and also resent others they can not control. People just tend to find this threatening a lovely write
April 7th, 2025 05:44
sorenbarrett said:
A good write about feeling good about who one is and the freedom this gives. Others resent this and also resent others they can not control. People just tend to find this threatening a lovely write
April 7th, 2025 05:44
Umm yea
sorenbarrett said:
A call for reunion and return to past unity. Very nice
March 28th, 2025 18:50
sorenbarrett said:
A call for reunion and return to past unity. Very nice
March 28th, 2025 18:50
Cant do anything right
sorenbarrett said:
A sad point of view. When one doesn\'t believe in themselves no one else does either. Change the story and start to believe in you. This poem leaves one feeling hopeless and angry. It conveys the feelings well and seems written from the heart. Well done.
March 11th, 2025 19:57
sorenbarrett said:
A sad point of view. When one doesn\'t believe in themselves no one else does either. Change the story and start to believe in you. This poem leaves one feeling hopeless and angry. It conveys the feelings well and seems written from the heart. Well done.
March 11th, 2025 19:57
Cant do anything right
sheta said:
lil every 2 in 10 people think that way same as me but we just gotta make the most of it
March 11th, 2025 19:31
sheta said:
lil every 2 in 10 people think that way same as me but we just gotta make the most of it
March 11th, 2025 19:31
Cant do anything right
Mutley Ravishes said:
You\'re writing poetry at what, 14? You\'re doing something right!
Here\'s something to think on: the body never makes mistakes, or tries too hard. Same goes for our awareness of being.
Have you checked out the song \"Power\" by Ren? You can find it on Youtube. Have a great day!
March 11th, 2025 19:09
Mutley Ravishes said:
You\'re writing poetry at what, 14? You\'re doing something right!
Here\'s something to think on: the body never makes mistakes, or tries too hard. Same goes for our awareness of being.
Have you checked out the song \"Power\" by Ren? You can find it on Youtube. Have a great day!
March 11th, 2025 19:09
It there but its not
sorenbarrett said:
Here then gone. Things come and go. Nothing lasts but then in a way it does.
March 10th, 2025 18:04
sorenbarrett said:
Here then gone. Things come and go. Nothing lasts but then in a way it does.
March 10th, 2025 18:04
Help
sheta said:
lil he is gone you don\'t have to worry
and what john said about you is not true
you are a special person that deserves love in every way possible
March 10th, 2025 16:39
sheta said:
lil he is gone you don\'t have to worry
and what john said about you is not true
you are a special person that deserves love in every way possible
March 10th, 2025 16:39
Help
NinjaGirl said:
Oh my, don\'t worry you\'re going to be alright I\'ve got you
March 9th, 2025 22:00
NinjaGirl said:
Oh my, don\'t worry you\'re going to be alright I\'ve got you
March 9th, 2025 22:00
Help
sorenbarrett said:
I hear a lot of pain and anger in this work. It screams at the reader.
March 9th, 2025 12:13
sorenbarrett said:
I hear a lot of pain and anger in this work. It screams at the reader.
March 9th, 2025 12:13
Maybe
sorenbarrett said:
One must learn to be good to oneself before one good to others. One can not give what one does not have. A sad and hurtful poem of pain.
March 7th, 2025 19:41
sorenbarrett said:
One must learn to be good to oneself before one good to others. One can not give what one does not have. A sad and hurtful poem of pain.
March 7th, 2025 19:41
Maybe
sheta said:
very sad lil but you are not better off gone
you will be special to someone someday
and they will love you so much you will be happy
i hope for your sake you find an amazing person that will forever love you
March 7th, 2025 18:43
sheta said:
very sad lil but you are not better off gone
you will be special to someone someday
and they will love you so much you will be happy
i hope for your sake you find an amazing person that will forever love you
March 7th, 2025 18:43
John ( The unexpected heartbreak)
sheta said:
lil you are something
and im sure love will find you a perfect someone
March 6th, 2025 14:51
sheta said:
lil you are something
and im sure love will find you a perfect someone
March 6th, 2025 14:51
John ( The unexpected heartbreak)
rainbow 1 said:
yet you forget the fact you left me for Mr snaggletooth when you get mad at me I let you unload it no Diddy take your own advice and think for once I know your smart lillian Michele Moore the smartest person I know its not about revenge its what I wanna do for once no one can tell me what to do because I\'m not chasing you I don\'t have to listen to you anymore I\'m free I\'m sick and tired of getting blamed for every little thing and then when I need a little help you abandon me I needed you to calm me down and instead you instantly went to Clayton
March 6th, 2025 07:45
rainbow 1 said:
yet you forget the fact you left me for Mr snaggletooth when you get mad at me I let you unload it no Diddy take your own advice and think for once I know your smart lillian Michele Moore the smartest person I know its not about revenge its what I wanna do for once no one can tell me what to do because I\'m not chasing you I don\'t have to listen to you anymore I\'m free I\'m sick and tired of getting blamed for every little thing and then when I need a little help you abandon me I needed you to calm me down and instead you instantly went to Clayton
March 6th, 2025 07:45
John ( The unexpected heartbreak)
sorenbarrett said:
Anger can be heard in this poem and it runs in desire for revenge. Hot from the oven this one sizzles
March 6th, 2025 06:30
sorenbarrett said:
Anger can be heard in this poem and it runs in desire for revenge. Hot from the oven this one sizzles
March 6th, 2025 06:30
« Return to the profile of Hey!
