Comments received on poems by Lil
My phobia\'\'s
Cheeky Missy said:
That was too indulgent a litany of fears eloquently delineated with superb ease, unrolling each like a red carpet to whither, fascinating and capably rendered too beautifully with gorgeous imagery and a subtly haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing. I love it.
January 19th, 2025 23:33
Cheeky Missy said:
That was too indulgent a litany of fears eloquently delineated with superb ease, unrolling each like a red carpet to whither, fascinating and capably rendered too beautifully with gorgeous imagery and a subtly haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing. I love it.
January 19th, 2025 23:33
Dangerous
NinjaGirl said:
one can so easily be the knife and the one to stitch the cut back up. beautiful write!
January 14th, 2025 13:11
NinjaGirl said:
one can so easily be the knife and the one to stitch the cut back up. beautiful write!
January 14th, 2025 13:11
I ruin everything
Avi said:
You haven’t ruined anything trust me your a good friend and a good person
January 13th, 2025 15:20
Avi said:
You haven’t ruined anything trust me your a good friend and a good person
January 13th, 2025 15:20
I ruin everything
Avi said:
I read the poem you don’t deserve to go through that I’ve also been bullied because of stuff I have but people are just mean
January 13th, 2025 15:01
Avi said:
I read the poem you don’t deserve to go through that I’ve also been bullied because of stuff I have but people are just mean
January 13th, 2025 15:01
Trump won.....
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
I\'m not a supporter of neither Trump nor Harris, but I feel abortion is wrong, since we\'re all children of God, and all made in His image and likeliness, He wouldn\'t want us to kill the closest thing we have to Him, the gift of creation. We are able as human beings to reproduce, and when we abort that being, that\'s killing a child of Gods. I know what it\'s like to be abandoned, and I could or would never be able to have the choice to abandon another one of Gods children and take it. The feeling you get, when you hold a newborn, knowing he or she will grow up, and be a friend one day, and soon a parent, knowing he/she has a soul, and is hand created by God, and will be able to help others in his or her life, I could never abandon him/her due to one of my mistakes.
January 2nd, 2025 15:26
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
I\'m not a supporter of neither Trump nor Harris, but I feel abortion is wrong, since we\'re all children of God, and all made in His image and likeliness, He wouldn\'t want us to kill the closest thing we have to Him, the gift of creation. We are able as human beings to reproduce, and when we abort that being, that\'s killing a child of Gods. I know what it\'s like to be abandoned, and I could or would never be able to have the choice to abandon another one of Gods children and take it. The feeling you get, when you hold a newborn, knowing he or she will grow up, and be a friend one day, and soon a parent, knowing he/she has a soul, and is hand created by God, and will be able to help others in his or her life, I could never abandon him/her due to one of my mistakes.
January 2nd, 2025 15:26
Happy Birthday to Me?
TobaniNataiella said:
A clever and enjoyable piece of writing, thank you
December 4th, 2024 16:51
TobaniNataiella said:
A clever and enjoyable piece of writing, thank you
December 4th, 2024 16:51
Trump won.....
MR.apocalypse said:
this is why i write about misinformation of the news and the fight between the party\'s. every party says things about the other and most people just take what the news says as fact. people accepting things and do no research. and that is why ae are in the state we are in this country .
trump has never been convicted of a crime.
trump has never said once he plans on completely eliminating abortion.
trump plans on keeping abortion up to the state you live in.
im not a supporter of either but what i am is someone who deals in fact not feelings.
and this election there is a lot of people getting the two mixed up
November 7th, 2024 21:37
MR.apocalypse said:
this is why i write about misinformation of the news and the fight between the party\'s. every party says things about the other and most people just take what the news says as fact. people accepting things and do no research. and that is why ae are in the state we are in this country .
trump has never been convicted of a crime.
trump has never said once he plans on completely eliminating abortion.
trump plans on keeping abortion up to the state you live in.
im not a supporter of either but what i am is someone who deals in fact not feelings.
and this election there is a lot of people getting the two mixed up
November 7th, 2024 21:37
I ruin everything
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Another excellent showing Lil! I could feel your emotions in this! I know the feeling and the experience of being bullied and misunderstood, and you know what? This is exactly how I got through it! I pray the bullying stops, but I also pray your writing never stops! Keep it coming! Again, well done! Excellent job!
November 7th, 2024 08:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Another excellent showing Lil! I could feel your emotions in this! I know the feeling and the experience of being bullied and misunderstood, and you know what? This is exactly how I got through it! I pray the bullying stops, but I also pray your writing never stops! Keep it coming! Again, well done! Excellent job!
November 7th, 2024 08:31
Trump won.....
sorenbarrett said:
I could sense the emotion in this write and yet the control over it to express it in a level minded and fair manner. Nicely done
November 7th, 2024 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
I could sense the emotion in this write and yet the control over it to express it in a level minded and fair manner. Nicely done
November 7th, 2024 03:50
Trump won.....
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Thank you for expressing your concerns. They are real and heard...and yes, next time you WILL be able to vote. In the meantime, you can certainly continue to write. Keep using your voice to unflinchingly speak truth to the world. \"The pen is truly mightier than the sword.\" --Edward Bulwer-Lytton Brava! Great job and I share in your concerns!
November 6th, 2024 23:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Thank you for expressing your concerns. They are real and heard...and yes, next time you WILL be able to vote. In the meantime, you can certainly continue to write. Keep using your voice to unflinchingly speak truth to the world. \"The pen is truly mightier than the sword.\" --Edward Bulwer-Lytton Brava! Great job and I share in your concerns!
November 6th, 2024 23:53
Trump won.....
Doggerel Dave said:
I would lower the voting age right now on the strength of your rant, Lil.
But no - because not all your contemporaries would be so aware.
Just so long as YOU stay the course.
November 6th, 2024 16:16
Doggerel Dave said:
I would lower the voting age right now on the strength of your rant, Lil.
But no - because not all your contemporaries would be so aware.
Just so long as YOU stay the course.
November 6th, 2024 16:16
Trump won.....
2781 said:
I listened to his speak, he seemed genuine, I thought.
November 6th, 2024 08:37
2781 said:
I listened to his speak, he seemed genuine, I thought.
November 6th, 2024 08:37
Trump won.....
Lorenz said:
I\'ts ridiculous to reduce this election to the abortion issue.The world doesn\'t stop at California !
November 6th, 2024 06:20
Lorenz said:
I\'ts ridiculous to reduce this election to the abortion issue.The world doesn\'t stop at California !
November 6th, 2024 06:20
I ruin everything
MR.apocalypse said:
sto get over this feeling. you must first accept the way things are. i have spent my whole child hood going home to home. i was even adopted once but they also gave me up. i turned 18 in a group home. truth is for you most likely nothing will change and the only thing you can change is yourself. there is no easy way out. and there is for sure no easy happy ending unless you do it yourself.
read some of my poems they were made for people like you
never take it to the heart
when your home gets torn apart
when you feel like its your fault
its not, because your not the adult
November 5th, 2024 22:15
MR.apocalypse said:
sto get over this feeling. you must first accept the way things are. i have spent my whole child hood going home to home. i was even adopted once but they also gave me up. i turned 18 in a group home. truth is for you most likely nothing will change and the only thing you can change is yourself. there is no easy way out. and there is for sure no easy happy ending unless you do it yourself.
read some of my poems they were made for people like you
never take it to the heart
when your home gets torn apart
when you feel like its your fault
its not, because your not the adult
November 5th, 2024 22:15
I ruin everything
NinjaGirl said:
maybe the things fall apart so we can take the pieces and build something better
November 5th, 2024 21:15
NinjaGirl said:
maybe the things fall apart so we can take the pieces and build something better
November 5th, 2024 21:15
Gotcha day #4
MR.apocalypse said:
good to see someone being thankful for the things they have. and its good to see someone understand what life has given them
October 30th, 2024 21:08
MR.apocalypse said:
good to see someone being thankful for the things they have. and its good to see someone understand what life has given them
October 30th, 2024 21:08
The fear of being alone (Autophobia or Monophobia)
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
Powerful and heartfelt ❤️
October 28th, 2024 16:40
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
Powerful and heartfelt ❤️
October 28th, 2024 16:40
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