Comments received on poems by Lil
Happy Birthday to Me?
TobaniNataiella said:
A clever and enjoyable piece of writing, thank you
December 4th, 2024 16:51
TobaniNataiella said:
A clever and enjoyable piece of writing, thank you
December 4th, 2024 16:51
Trump won.....
MR.apocalypse said:
this is why i write about misinformation of the news and the fight between the party\'s. every party says things about the other and most people just take what the news says as fact. people accepting things and do no research. and that is why ae are in the state we are in this country .
trump has never been convicted of a crime.
trump has never said once he plans on completely eliminating abortion.
trump plans on keeping abortion up to the state you live in.
im not a supporter of either but what i am is someone who deals in fact not feelings.
and this election there is a lot of people getting the two mixed up
November 7th, 2024 21:37
MR.apocalypse said:
this is why i write about misinformation of the news and the fight between the party\'s. every party says things about the other and most people just take what the news says as fact. people accepting things and do no research. and that is why ae are in the state we are in this country .
trump has never been convicted of a crime.
trump has never said once he plans on completely eliminating abortion.
trump plans on keeping abortion up to the state you live in.
im not a supporter of either but what i am is someone who deals in fact not feelings.
and this election there is a lot of people getting the two mixed up
November 7th, 2024 21:37
I ruin everything
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Another excellent showing Lil! I could feel your emotions in this! I know the feeling and the experience of being bullied and misunderstood, and you know what? This is exactly how I got through it! I pray the bullying stops, but I also pray your writing never stops! Keep it coming! Again, well done! Excellent job!
November 7th, 2024 08:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Another excellent showing Lil! I could feel your emotions in this! I know the feeling and the experience of being bullied and misunderstood, and you know what? This is exactly how I got through it! I pray the bullying stops, but I also pray your writing never stops! Keep it coming! Again, well done! Excellent job!
November 7th, 2024 08:31
Trump won.....
sorenbarrett said:
I could sense the emotion in this write and yet the control over it to express it in a level minded and fair manner. Nicely done
November 7th, 2024 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
I could sense the emotion in this write and yet the control over it to express it in a level minded and fair manner. Nicely done
November 7th, 2024 03:50
Trump won.....
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Thank you for expressing your concerns. They are real and heard...and yes, next time you WILL be able to vote. In the meantime, you can certainly continue to write. Keep using your voice to unflinchingly speak truth to the world. \"The pen is truly mightier than the sword.\" --Edward Bulwer-Lytton Brava! Great job and I share in your concerns!
November 6th, 2024 23:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Thank you for expressing your concerns. They are real and heard...and yes, next time you WILL be able to vote. In the meantime, you can certainly continue to write. Keep using your voice to unflinchingly speak truth to the world. \"The pen is truly mightier than the sword.\" --Edward Bulwer-Lytton Brava! Great job and I share in your concerns!
November 6th, 2024 23:53
Trump won.....
Doggerel Dave said:
I would lower the voting age right now on the strength of your rant, Lil.
But no - because not all your contemporaries would be so aware.
Just so long as YOU stay the course.
November 6th, 2024 16:16
Doggerel Dave said:
I would lower the voting age right now on the strength of your rant, Lil.
But no - because not all your contemporaries would be so aware.
Just so long as YOU stay the course.
November 6th, 2024 16:16
Trump won.....
2781 said:
I listened to his speak, he seemed genuine, I thought.
November 6th, 2024 08:37
2781 said:
I listened to his speak, he seemed genuine, I thought.
November 6th, 2024 08:37
Trump won.....
Lorenz said:
I\'ts ridiculous to reduce this election to the abortion issue.The world doesn\'t stop at California !
November 6th, 2024 06:20
Lorenz said:
I\'ts ridiculous to reduce this election to the abortion issue.The world doesn\'t stop at California !
November 6th, 2024 06:20
I ruin everything
MR.apocalypse said:
sto get over this feeling. you must first accept the way things are. i have spent my whole child hood going home to home. i was even adopted once but they also gave me up. i turned 18 in a group home. truth is for you most likely nothing will change and the only thing you can change is yourself. there is no easy way out. and there is for sure no easy happy ending unless you do it yourself.
read some of my poems they were made for people like you
never take it to the heart
when your home gets torn apart
when you feel like its your fault
its not, because your not the adult
November 5th, 2024 22:15
MR.apocalypse said:
sto get over this feeling. you must first accept the way things are. i have spent my whole child hood going home to home. i was even adopted once but they also gave me up. i turned 18 in a group home. truth is for you most likely nothing will change and the only thing you can change is yourself. there is no easy way out. and there is for sure no easy happy ending unless you do it yourself.
read some of my poems they were made for people like you
never take it to the heart
when your home gets torn apart
when you feel like its your fault
its not, because your not the adult
November 5th, 2024 22:15
I ruin everything
NinjaGirl said:
maybe the things fall apart so we can take the pieces and build something better
November 5th, 2024 21:15
NinjaGirl said:
maybe the things fall apart so we can take the pieces and build something better
November 5th, 2024 21:15
Gotcha day #4
MR.apocalypse said:
good to see someone being thankful for the things they have. and its good to see someone understand what life has given them
October 30th, 2024 21:08
MR.apocalypse said:
good to see someone being thankful for the things they have. and its good to see someone understand what life has given them
October 30th, 2024 21:08
The fear of being alone (Autophobia or Monophobia)
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
Powerful and heartfelt ❤️
October 28th, 2024 16:40
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
Powerful and heartfelt ❤️
October 28th, 2024 16:40
Another suicidal....
Demar Desu said:
You must be a good friend for them to trust you with their lives
October 22nd, 2024 10:20
Demar Desu said:
You must be a good friend for them to trust you with their lives
October 22nd, 2024 10:20
A few letters I wrote to my bio papaw (bc I found the last 3)
Tony36 said:
Beautiful
October 21st, 2024 07:58
Tony36 said:
Beautiful
October 21st, 2024 07:58
A few letters I wrote to my bio papaw (bc I cant find the last 3)
Tony36 said:
Beautiful
October 20th, 2024 09:45
Tony36 said:
Beautiful
October 20th, 2024 09:45
(just a random poem idk what to name it.)
peet said:
Nice rhyme that you have in those few lines. Nice work.
October 16th, 2024 13:17
peet said:
Nice rhyme that you have in those few lines. Nice work.
October 16th, 2024 13:17
Emotionless FREAK
Dan Williams said:
Wow. A real wagon load of hurt here. Hopefully spelling it put like this will sooth it some. Wishing you some relief.
October 7th, 2024 00:15
Dan Williams said:
Wow. A real wagon load of hurt here. Hopefully spelling it put like this will sooth it some. Wishing you some relief.
October 7th, 2024 00:15
Emotionless FREAK
Lyn32 said:
Nice poem! We gotta make wise decisions, based on the lives were living, especially who we hang out with.
October 6th, 2024 18:03
Lyn32 said:
Nice poem! We gotta make wise decisions, based on the lives were living, especially who we hang out with.
October 6th, 2024 18:03
Emotionless FREAK
David Wakeling said:
Guys are the Worst!. You need to get a kitten or Puppy. Get those happy emotions back
October 6th, 2024 02:22
David Wakeling said:
Guys are the Worst!. You need to get a kitten or Puppy. Get those happy emotions back
October 6th, 2024 02:22
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