Comments received on poems by Hey!
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sorenbarrett said:
Heartfelt powerful, emotive this reads of turmoil and despair. Emotion so strong that it breeches the floodgates and pours over all below.
February 16th, 2025 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
Heartfelt powerful, emotive this reads of turmoil and despair. Emotion so strong that it breeches the floodgates and pours over all below.
February 16th, 2025 04:05
Would anyone care?
RSM0812 said:
Sounds like a lot of choice. Makes me be thankful for how many fish are in the sea. Lol
February 15th, 2025 10:34
RSM0812 said:
Sounds like a lot of choice. Makes me be thankful for how many fish are in the sea. Lol
February 15th, 2025 10:34
Would anyone care?
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re both struggling. Just hang in there, please? Excellently rendered with a frightening poignancy and touch of imagery. Thank you for sharing.
February 14th, 2025 11:51
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re both struggling. Just hang in there, please? Excellently rendered with a frightening poignancy and touch of imagery. Thank you for sharing.
February 14th, 2025 11:51
Would anyone care?
sorenbarrett said:
So important what others think. We are more than our social circle. Emotions run deep and fast at a young age. All spoken in this poem. I can feel the urgency
February 14th, 2025 06:09
sorenbarrett said:
So important what others think. We are more than our social circle. Emotions run deep and fast at a young age. All spoken in this poem. I can feel the urgency
February 14th, 2025 06:09
I cant, I don\'t want to.
Poetic Licence said:
A slightly dark read of despair and pain which you feel as read through the write, very well expressed
February 13th, 2025 18:32
Poetic Licence said:
A slightly dark read of despair and pain which you feel as read through the write, very well expressed
February 13th, 2025 18:32
I cant, I don\'t want to.
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful rhyme and stark images are presented in this poem that ozzes despair and pain. Heart felt and dark it speaks of the author\'s suffering/
February 13th, 2025 17:11
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful rhyme and stark images are presented in this poem that ozzes despair and pain. Heart felt and dark it speaks of the author\'s suffering/
February 13th, 2025 17:11
Confused, but scared.
sorenbarrett said:
Such beautiful words reflecting so much thought and emotion. Highly existential and self probing it speaks to the heart.
February 12th, 2025 20:01
sorenbarrett said:
Such beautiful words reflecting so much thought and emotion. Highly existential and self probing it speaks to the heart.
February 12th, 2025 20:01
Hurt the ones I love
sorenbarrett said:
A great thought that should be explored with the one you love. Very well written
February 11th, 2025 19:23
sorenbarrett said:
A great thought that should be explored with the one you love. Very well written
February 11th, 2025 19:23
Hurt the ones I love
Cassie58 said:
Oh young love. How it hurts the soul. You remind me of my first sweetheart. I still shed a tear for him now, but I moved on and loved again. I hear you Lil. Heartfelt writing.
February 11th, 2025 19:13
Cassie58 said:
Oh young love. How it hurts the soul. You remind me of my first sweetheart. I still shed a tear for him now, but I moved on and loved again. I hear you Lil. Heartfelt writing.
February 11th, 2025 19:13
Hurt the ones I love
Distant View said:
A heartfelt write! Life can be confusing and frustrating when you are young. Writing helps you to cope with it all! Keep on writing!
February 11th, 2025 16:32
Distant View said:
A heartfelt write! Life can be confusing and frustrating when you are young. Writing helps you to cope with it all! Keep on writing!
February 11th, 2025 16:32
For I am loyal
Poetic Licence said:
You can feel the loss and pain as you read through a very emotional write, trying to come to terms with true heartbreak. Powerful piece
February 10th, 2025 15:58
Poetic Licence said:
You can feel the loss and pain as you read through a very emotional write, trying to come to terms with true heartbreak. Powerful piece
February 10th, 2025 15:58
For I am loyal
sorenbarrett said:
Time is a heavy opponent. I can hear the pain of loss in this poem a sense of deception. Very emotional and powerful
February 10th, 2025 15:18
sorenbarrett said:
Time is a heavy opponent. I can hear the pain of loss in this poem a sense of deception. Very emotional and powerful
February 10th, 2025 15:18
I wanna, but just cant
teardrop said:
Wow, I tru;ly understand your words. I started writing at age 12. It was my only release as far as letting my feelings out. If I didn\'t have pen and paper, I think I would have exploded. Writing actually became my best friend. Hope your writing helps you funnel some of your confusing feelings. Keep writing!
February 10th, 2025 03:24
teardrop said:
Wow, I tru;ly understand your words. I started writing at age 12. It was my only release as far as letting my feelings out. If I didn\'t have pen and paper, I think I would have exploded. Writing actually became my best friend. Hope your writing helps you funnel some of your confusing feelings. Keep writing!
February 10th, 2025 03:24
Why cant everyone leave me alone?
orchidee said:
Cooeee! It\'s me interfering, not leaving you alone! Ooohh, heehee.
February 10th, 2025 03:10
orchidee said:
Cooeee! It\'s me interfering, not leaving you alone! Ooohh, heehee.
February 10th, 2025 03:10
Why cant everyone leave me alone?
David Wakeling said:
This si quite sad and powerful essay asking the question \"Why can\'t they leave me alone\". I remember the late great Audrey Hepburn said she didn\'t want to be alone she wanted to be left alone.\" The poem makes it very clear that someone is stressed.They need a holiday in the Bahamas without the kids.Just sun bake every day and party every night. Very strong emotions going on here
February 9th, 2025 21:53
David Wakeling said:
This si quite sad and powerful essay asking the question \"Why can\'t they leave me alone\". I remember the late great Audrey Hepburn said she didn\'t want to be alone she wanted to be left alone.\" The poem makes it very clear that someone is stressed.They need a holiday in the Bahamas without the kids.Just sun bake every day and party every night. Very strong emotions going on here
February 9th, 2025 21:53
Why cant everyone leave me alone?
Cheeky Missy said:
It takes a while, but if you persist, they\'ll learn and shy away from you. Miserably that\'s how people are. Don\'t ask me how I know. I hate it too. Excellently rendered with a vibrant poignancy and great imagery. Thank you for sharing. Hang in there.
February 9th, 2025 20:40
Cheeky Missy said:
It takes a while, but if you persist, they\'ll learn and shy away from you. Miserably that\'s how people are. Don\'t ask me how I know. I hate it too. Excellently rendered with a vibrant poignancy and great imagery. Thank you for sharing. Hang in there.
February 9th, 2025 20:40
I wanna, but just cant
Cheeky Missy said:
Alas, I fear this resonates far more than it should, but oh! I know how you feel. Supposedly psychology has a label for the condition, but the reality we wrestle with doesn\'t find a recurative therein. Exquisitely rendered with superb imagery and a painfully haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 9th, 2025 09:55
Cheeky Missy said:
Alas, I fear this resonates far more than it should, but oh! I know how you feel. Supposedly psychology has a label for the condition, but the reality we wrestle with doesn\'t find a recurative therein. Exquisitely rendered with superb imagery and a painfully haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 9th, 2025 09:55
I love you John
Poetic Licence said:
A passionate of pledge of love, i hope the pain eases over time, well written
February 6th, 2025 09:11
Poetic Licence said:
A passionate of pledge of love, i hope the pain eases over time, well written
February 6th, 2025 09:11
I love you John
sorenbarrett said:
Some memories never die they just grow in size or remain burried to raise out of the ground at a latter date. A nice pledge of love
February 6th, 2025 07:39
sorenbarrett said:
Some memories never die they just grow in size or remain burried to raise out of the ground at a latter date. A nice pledge of love
February 6th, 2025 07:39
He is moving!
sorenbarrett said:
Sad in its separation and hard to accept. They say that distance makes the heart grow fonder but distance and time can be a deal breaker. Maybe not though if it is ment to be it will. Feel the pain
February 4th, 2025 08:28
sorenbarrett said:
Sad in its separation and hard to accept. They say that distance makes the heart grow fonder but distance and time can be a deal breaker. Maybe not though if it is ment to be it will. Feel the pain
February 4th, 2025 08:28
Rain
sorenbarrett said:
A poem emphasizes the temporal nature of the bad and focus on good. Nicely done in poetic form
February 4th, 2025 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
A poem emphasizes the temporal nature of the bad and focus on good. Nicely done in poetic form
February 4th, 2025 04:18
Rain
Poetic Licence said:
I very much enjoyed the poem and it`s sentiment but also the information on the speech, which i have not seen before, enjoyed the read
February 3rd, 2025 16:21
Poetic Licence said:
I very much enjoyed the poem and it`s sentiment but also the information on the speech, which i have not seen before, enjoyed the read
February 3rd, 2025 16:21
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