Comments received on poems by Lil
The pain caused by you
Cassie58 said:
It is good to express your feelings. Writing is great therapy. Your words convey your upset deeply. Negativity hurts. I felt your sadness here Lil. Good to see you are posting again.
September 11th, 2024 15:16
Cassie58 said:
It is good to express your feelings. Writing is great therapy. Your words convey your upset deeply. Negativity hurts. I felt your sadness here Lil. Good to see you are posting again.
September 11th, 2024 15:16
Rough times
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Good write Lil, sorry to hear about Dom. You\'ll find someone better. Liked the poem!
August 13th, 2024 14:13
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Good write Lil, sorry to hear about Dom. You\'ll find someone better. Liked the poem!
August 13th, 2024 14:13
Rough times
sorenbarrett said:
Betrayal is an ugly animal that devours trust and bites whoever it can. Sorry for the pain.
August 13th, 2024 12:10
sorenbarrett said:
Betrayal is an ugly animal that devours trust and bites whoever it can. Sorry for the pain.
August 13th, 2024 12:10
Why me??
orchidee said:
Me being daft - And now my next poem: \'Why not me?\' heehee.
August 2nd, 2024 01:28
orchidee said:
Me being daft - And now my next poem: \'Why not me?\' heehee.
August 2nd, 2024 01:28
What happens to our love?
Neilton said:
Great poem L! You convey your exasperation very good! This guy obviously doesn\'t deserve you ! HIS loss!
June 27th, 2024 12:05
Neilton said:
Great poem L! You convey your exasperation very good! This guy obviously doesn\'t deserve you ! HIS loss!
June 27th, 2024 12:05
Your Ways
orchidee said:
I never knew I was your sun in your darkest days. Noooo, you don\'t mean me! lol.
May 5th, 2024 09:37
orchidee said:
I never knew I was your sun in your darkest days. Noooo, you don\'t mean me! lol.
May 5th, 2024 09:37
A Color Poem
orchidee said:
My favourite colour was black until I fell down the stairs one night (in the pitch black) forgetting to put the light on! Doh! heehee.
Am I telling porkies?
April 25th, 2024 02:41
orchidee said:
My favourite colour was black until I fell down the stairs one night (in the pitch black) forgetting to put the light on! Doh! heehee.
Am I telling porkies?
April 25th, 2024 02:41
A Color Poem
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Right? Like what\'s the fun in killing someone? 😂 Nice write Lily.
April 24th, 2024 19:56
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Right? Like what\'s the fun in killing someone? 😂 Nice write Lily.
April 24th, 2024 19:56
A Color Poem
Orions pen said:
Great poem, I love how you expressed black as making those in the foreground seem brighter, and how when you close your eyes to get some peace, black is also the colour that you see.
April 24th, 2024 18:51
Orions pen said:
Great poem, I love how you expressed black as making those in the foreground seem brighter, and how when you close your eyes to get some peace, black is also the colour that you see.
April 24th, 2024 18:51
A Color Poem
David Wakeling said:
I read this twice but I\'m a little confused.Black is not a colour.It is the absence of all colour.It\'s the colour we wear to a funeral.But each to their own.Maybe try Chartreuse.Now that\'s a nice greeny yellow colour.Much happier
April 24th, 2024 16:55
David Wakeling said:
I read this twice but I\'m a little confused.Black is not a colour.It is the absence of all colour.It\'s the colour we wear to a funeral.But each to their own.Maybe try Chartreuse.Now that\'s a nice greeny yellow colour.Much happier
April 24th, 2024 16:55
Another fight???
mirrorball said:
god..i can sense how tired u must be. stay strong!!!!!
April 24th, 2024 08:03
mirrorball said:
god..i can sense how tired u must be. stay strong!!!!!
April 24th, 2024 08:03
Another fight???
Dev Parth said:
DON\'T WORRY ABOUT THAT GOD ALWAYS WITH THEIR CHILDREN.
I HOPE AND PRAY THAT THIS CONFLICTS END SOON AS POSSIBLE.
HAVE SUCH A GREAT DAY FOR YOU.
this poem beautifully captures the complexities of navigating familial conflicts and the search for emotional refuge and connection.
Stay around people your comfortable with.
BUT PARENTS DO NOT WANT THAT ALSO WHICH YOU HAVE SAID IN YOUR POETRY.
ALL THE BEST FOR YOUR UPCOMMING DAYS WITH HAPPINESS.
BY THE WAY, ONE DAY YOU WILL ABLE TO UNDERSTAND YOUR MOM. AND THAT YOU START RESPECTING HER WITH YOUR OWN HAPPINESS.
April 23rd, 2024 06:53
Dev Parth said:
DON\'T WORRY ABOUT THAT GOD ALWAYS WITH THEIR CHILDREN.
I HOPE AND PRAY THAT THIS CONFLICTS END SOON AS POSSIBLE.
HAVE SUCH A GREAT DAY FOR YOU.
this poem beautifully captures the complexities of navigating familial conflicts and the search for emotional refuge and connection.
Stay around people your comfortable with.
BUT PARENTS DO NOT WANT THAT ALSO WHICH YOU HAVE SAID IN YOUR POETRY.
ALL THE BEST FOR YOUR UPCOMMING DAYS WITH HAPPINESS.
BY THE WAY, ONE DAY YOU WILL ABLE TO UNDERSTAND YOUR MOM. AND THAT YOU START RESPECTING HER WITH YOUR OWN HAPPINESS.
April 23rd, 2024 06:53
Another fight???
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Your mom seems like a big load.
If I knew anything about these kinds of things I\'d try to say something that would help but I don\'t, lol. Stay around people your comfortable with. Ps nice write, kinda sad though, to know you go through these kinds of things. ❤️🙏
April 22nd, 2024 19:02
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Your mom seems like a big load.
If I knew anything about these kinds of things I\'d try to say something that would help but I don\'t, lol. Stay around people your comfortable with. Ps nice write, kinda sad though, to know you go through these kinds of things. ❤️🙏
April 22nd, 2024 19:02
ghost in my room???
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Flows so well. P.S Didn\'t know ghosts smell like almonds. Good to know.😹😹
April 17th, 2024 12:01
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Flows so well. P.S Didn\'t know ghosts smell like almonds. Good to know.😹😹
April 17th, 2024 12:01
ghost in my room???
orchidee said:
You know it was me really, with a white sheet over me head! lol.
April 16th, 2024 02:18
orchidee said:
You know it was me really, with a white sheet over me head! lol.
April 16th, 2024 02:18
Its ok
orchidee said:
Good write Lil.
Now you know my next poem is:\' It\'s not OK\'. lol.
April 13th, 2024 02:11
orchidee said:
Good write Lil.
Now you know my next poem is:\' It\'s not OK\'. lol.
April 13th, 2024 02:11
No!
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
I don\'t get it. Something you feel will last forever with someone, only goes one way. Sorry to hear Lil.
April 11th, 2024 11:49
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
I don\'t get it. Something you feel will last forever with someone, only goes one way. Sorry to hear Lil.
April 11th, 2024 11:49
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