Comments received on poems by Lil
A Color Poem
orchidee said:
My favourite colour was black until I fell down the stairs one night (in the pitch black) forgetting to put the light on! Doh! heehee.
Am I telling porkies?
April 25th, 2024 02:41
orchidee said:
My favourite colour was black until I fell down the stairs one night (in the pitch black) forgetting to put the light on! Doh! heehee.
Am I telling porkies?
April 25th, 2024 02:41
A Color Poem
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Right? Like what\'s the fun in killing someone? 😂 Nice write Lily.
April 24th, 2024 19:56
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Right? Like what\'s the fun in killing someone? 😂 Nice write Lily.
April 24th, 2024 19:56
A Color Poem
Orions pen said:
Great poem, I love how you expressed black as making those in the foreground seem brighter, and how when you close your eyes to get some peace, black is also the colour that you see.
April 24th, 2024 18:51
Orions pen said:
Great poem, I love how you expressed black as making those in the foreground seem brighter, and how when you close your eyes to get some peace, black is also the colour that you see.
April 24th, 2024 18:51
A Color Poem
David Wakeling said:
I read this twice but I\'m a little confused.Black is not a colour.It is the absence of all colour.It\'s the colour we wear to a funeral.But each to their own.Maybe try Chartreuse.Now that\'s a nice greeny yellow colour.Much happier
April 24th, 2024 16:55
David Wakeling said:
I read this twice but I\'m a little confused.Black is not a colour.It is the absence of all colour.It\'s the colour we wear to a funeral.But each to their own.Maybe try Chartreuse.Now that\'s a nice greeny yellow colour.Much happier
April 24th, 2024 16:55
Another fight???
mirrorball said:
god..i can sense how tired u must be. stay strong!!!!!
April 24th, 2024 08:03
mirrorball said:
god..i can sense how tired u must be. stay strong!!!!!
April 24th, 2024 08:03
Another fight???
Dev Parth said:
DON\'T WORRY ABOUT THAT GOD ALWAYS WITH THEIR CHILDREN.
I HOPE AND PRAY THAT THIS CONFLICTS END SOON AS POSSIBLE.
HAVE SUCH A GREAT DAY FOR YOU.
this poem beautifully captures the complexities of navigating familial conflicts and the search for emotional refuge and connection.
Stay around people your comfortable with.
BUT PARENTS DO NOT WANT THAT ALSO WHICH YOU HAVE SAID IN YOUR POETRY.
ALL THE BEST FOR YOUR UPCOMMING DAYS WITH HAPPINESS.
BY THE WAY, ONE DAY YOU WILL ABLE TO UNDERSTAND YOUR MOM. AND THAT YOU START RESPECTING HER WITH YOUR OWN HAPPINESS.
April 23rd, 2024 06:53
Dev Parth said:
DON\'T WORRY ABOUT THAT GOD ALWAYS WITH THEIR CHILDREN.
I HOPE AND PRAY THAT THIS CONFLICTS END SOON AS POSSIBLE.
HAVE SUCH A GREAT DAY FOR YOU.
this poem beautifully captures the complexities of navigating familial conflicts and the search for emotional refuge and connection.
Stay around people your comfortable with.
BUT PARENTS DO NOT WANT THAT ALSO WHICH YOU HAVE SAID IN YOUR POETRY.
ALL THE BEST FOR YOUR UPCOMMING DAYS WITH HAPPINESS.
BY THE WAY, ONE DAY YOU WILL ABLE TO UNDERSTAND YOUR MOM. AND THAT YOU START RESPECTING HER WITH YOUR OWN HAPPINESS.
April 23rd, 2024 06:53
Another fight???
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Your mom seems like a big load.
If I knew anything about these kinds of things I\'d try to say something that would help but I don\'t, lol. Stay around people your comfortable with. Ps nice write, kinda sad though, to know you go through these kinds of things. ❤️🙏
April 22nd, 2024 19:02
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Your mom seems like a big load.
If I knew anything about these kinds of things I\'d try to say something that would help but I don\'t, lol. Stay around people your comfortable with. Ps nice write, kinda sad though, to know you go through these kinds of things. ❤️🙏
April 22nd, 2024 19:02
ghost in my room???
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Flows so well. P.S Didn\'t know ghosts smell like almonds. Good to know.😹😹
April 17th, 2024 12:01
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Flows so well. P.S Didn\'t know ghosts smell like almonds. Good to know.😹😹
April 17th, 2024 12:01
ghost in my room???
orchidee said:
You know it was me really, with a white sheet over me head! lol.
April 16th, 2024 02:18
orchidee said:
You know it was me really, with a white sheet over me head! lol.
April 16th, 2024 02:18
Its ok
orchidee said:
Good write Lil.
Now you know my next poem is:\' It\'s not OK\'. lol.
April 13th, 2024 02:11
orchidee said:
Good write Lil.
Now you know my next poem is:\' It\'s not OK\'. lol.
April 13th, 2024 02:11
No!
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
I don\'t get it. Something you feel will last forever with someone, only goes one way. Sorry to hear Lil.
April 11th, 2024 11:49
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
I don\'t get it. Something you feel will last forever with someone, only goes one way. Sorry to hear Lil.
April 11th, 2024 11:49
No!
orchidee said:
A sad write Lil.
Meanwhile, I got one word to say - yes!! lol.
April 11th, 2024 01:57
orchidee said:
A sad write Lil.
Meanwhile, I got one word to say - yes!! lol.
April 11th, 2024 01:57
Now that we are together
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
It\'s beautiful how well it reads.😊 Good luck with Dominic. Love is beautiful!
April 10th, 2024 16:19
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
It\'s beautiful how well it reads.😊 Good luck with Dominic. Love is beautiful!
April 10th, 2024 16:19
Your Girl
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Beautiful. Nicely written. I love how you can basicly tell a story in your poems, and it still sounds soo good.
April 6th, 2024 12:47
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Beautiful. Nicely written. I love how you can basicly tell a story in your poems, and it still sounds soo good.
April 6th, 2024 12:47
Your Girl
Cassie58 said:
What a beautiful poem Lil. How lovely to have a new boyfriend. He clearly has bowled you over. Love is in the air. Have a great weekend.
April 6th, 2024 06:47
Cassie58 said:
What a beautiful poem Lil. How lovely to have a new boyfriend. He clearly has bowled you over. Love is in the air. Have a great weekend.
April 6th, 2024 06:47
The song of Alex\'s story
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Goes to show how quick things can happen...
April 3rd, 2024 20:47
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Goes to show how quick things can happen...
April 3rd, 2024 20:47
Do you ever?
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Oh boy, would I love to just hide sometimes. Tysm for sharing beautifully written Lil.
April 3rd, 2024 20:46
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Oh boy, would I love to just hide sometimes. Tysm for sharing beautifully written Lil.
April 3rd, 2024 20:46
My phobias
Doggerel Dave said:
A catalogue of phobias - thank you for enhancing my clinical vocabulary.
April 3rd, 2024 07:17
Doggerel Dave said:
A catalogue of phobias - thank you for enhancing my clinical vocabulary.
April 3rd, 2024 07:17
My phobias
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Ha, All those Phobias... Too bad Beautiphobia is not a word.
April 2nd, 2024 18:05
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Ha, All those Phobias... Too bad Beautiphobia is not a word.
April 2nd, 2024 18:05
Do you ever?
sunshine777 said:
Do I ever, almost everyday. Come to think of it everyday. Nice poem :)
March 31st, 2024 22:29
sunshine777 said:
Do I ever, almost everyday. Come to think of it everyday. Nice poem :)
March 31st, 2024 22:29
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