Comments received on poems by Hey!
As the days go by
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of sadness and suffering feeling isolated and put down by others and oneself. Existentially dark and gender does not matter.
February 26th, 2025 21:27
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of sadness and suffering feeling isolated and put down by others and oneself. Existentially dark and gender does not matter.
February 26th, 2025 21:27
As the days go by
rainbow 1 said:
as life can be hard sometimes is important to note that part of what your fealing could be your fault every day when you wake up its a good day you are choosing to put your friends before you and not your self sometimes the best thing to do is to put yourself and if they get mad they are not your friends and your gonna have to accept that fact that some people only care about themselves as you know who I\'m talking about if someone throws all there problems at you then there not friends just using you
February 26th, 2025 20:33
rainbow 1 said:
as life can be hard sometimes is important to note that part of what your fealing could be your fault every day when you wake up its a good day you are choosing to put your friends before you and not your self sometimes the best thing to do is to put yourself and if they get mad they are not your friends and your gonna have to accept that fact that some people only care about themselves as you know who I\'m talking about if someone throws all there problems at you then there not friends just using you
February 26th, 2025 20:33
No matter
Poetic Licence said:
The important thing in life for people\'s own well being is to except, like and love themselves for who they and what they believe, once that is done it becomes easier to except the crap that comes your way, powerful and poignant write
February 26th, 2025 01:52
Poetic Licence said:
The important thing in life for people\'s own well being is to except, like and love themselves for who they and what they believe, once that is done it becomes easier to except the crap that comes your way, powerful and poignant write
February 26th, 2025 01:52
No matter
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes trying is not the way. You need to accept yourself and be who you are no matter what others thing.
February 25th, 2025 20:10
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes trying is not the way. You need to accept yourself and be who you are no matter what others thing.
February 25th, 2025 20:10
No matter
NinjaGirl said:
Everyone is always going to be against you, against us. It\'s up to us; We have to prove them wrong.
February 25th, 2025 20:06
NinjaGirl said:
Everyone is always going to be against you, against us. It\'s up to us; We have to prove them wrong.
February 25th, 2025 20:06
No matter
rainbow 1 said:
its good but the aspect of hard work does not pay off is just not true as if I was the best basketball player in the world I would have worked hard for it and I pushed my body to do that so yeah if you work hard do good and put kindness out in the world life will award you
February 25th, 2025 19:56
rainbow 1 said:
its good but the aspect of hard work does not pay off is just not true as if I was the best basketball player in the world I would have worked hard for it and I pushed my body to do that so yeah if you work hard do good and put kindness out in the world life will award you
February 25th, 2025 19:56
I cant no more. (I just cant)
sorenbarrett said:
Love gone stale and although the memories exist the ability to stay with it has gone. Love itself if it ever existed does not die but the ability to live in it may. A heart felt write.
February 24th, 2025 15:55
sorenbarrett said:
Love gone stale and although the memories exist the ability to stay with it has gone. Love itself if it ever existed does not die but the ability to live in it may. A heart felt write.
February 24th, 2025 15:55
The Heart\'s Dilemma
CelticNinja said:
Superb, uplifting and optimistic peace of romantic poetry. Excellent!
February 24th, 2025 09:26
CelticNinja said:
Superb, uplifting and optimistic peace of romantic poetry. Excellent!
February 24th, 2025 09:26
The Echos of the past
NinjaGirl said:
Truly a beautiful write, trauma can stain even our positive memories.
February 23rd, 2025 20:28
NinjaGirl said:
Truly a beautiful write, trauma can stain even our positive memories.
February 23rd, 2025 20:28
The Echos of the past
Poetic Licence said:
This a wonderfully written piece of work around the living and cycle of life,will resonate with a lot of people,
February 23rd, 2025 15:33
Poetic Licence said:
This a wonderfully written piece of work around the living and cycle of life,will resonate with a lot of people,
February 23rd, 2025 15:33
The Echos of the past
sorenbarrett said:
Here is a cycle presented and this may also be a metaphor for life itself. A well worded poem that presents vivid images and good rhyme. Nicely done.
February 23rd, 2025 11:30
sorenbarrett said:
Here is a cycle presented and this may also be a metaphor for life itself. A well worded poem that presents vivid images and good rhyme. Nicely done.
February 23rd, 2025 11:30
The Heart\'s Dilemma
sorenbarrett said:
Almost classically written in style and wording. Very nice it pushes onward to the future. Very nice
February 22nd, 2025 15:55
sorenbarrett said:
Almost classically written in style and wording. Very nice it pushes onward to the future. Very nice
February 22nd, 2025 15:55
The Heart\'s Dilemma
Hollow Enigma said:
hey great poem! i like the ending lets your heart decide and not all the anxieties that come with having the burden of options. very nice!
February 22nd, 2025 14:54
Hollow Enigma said:
hey great poem! i like the ending lets your heart decide and not all the anxieties that come with having the burden of options. very nice!
February 22nd, 2025 14:54
The Heart\'s Dilemma
rainbow 1 said:
you have done better but loves it lillie
February 22nd, 2025 14:45
rainbow 1 said:
you have done better but loves it lillie
February 22nd, 2025 14:45
You
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellently rendered with a touch of intrigue and very haunting poignancy. Hang in there and take a needed break. You\'ll be able to think more clearly later. Thank you for sharing.
February 22nd, 2025 07:55
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellently rendered with a touch of intrigue and very haunting poignancy. Hang in there and take a needed break. You\'ll be able to think more clearly later. Thank you for sharing.
February 22nd, 2025 07:55
You
sheta said:
whoa whats goin on!?!?!
some serious stuff here....
very well written poem,lil,it explains the sadness of rejection i presume?
i\'ve been rejected many times so i know how it feels
February 21st, 2025 18:30
sheta said:
whoa whats goin on!?!?!
some serious stuff here....
very well written poem,lil,it explains the sadness of rejection i presume?
i\'ve been rejected many times so i know how it feels
February 21st, 2025 18:30
You
sorenbarrett said:
Emotional control a type of abuse that is difficult to measure but separation is a good cure, temporary or permeant. Everyone needs their space. Nicely put
February 21st, 2025 17:27
sorenbarrett said:
Emotional control a type of abuse that is difficult to measure but separation is a good cure, temporary or permeant. Everyone needs their space. Nicely put
February 21st, 2025 17:27
The Reflection Stops
sorenbarrett said:
The first stanzas of rhyme are very well done with wonderful meter promoting a flow that carries the reader on. Their wonderful rhyme is masterful. Then you switch to pros and the emotion shows coming through in bursts that break the flow. Rhyme is gone as is the previous feel. It is as if the reader is standing in the room with someone who has broken. This is regained toward the end and finished well in the last lines of the poem.
February 20th, 2025 17:17
sorenbarrett said:
The first stanzas of rhyme are very well done with wonderful meter promoting a flow that carries the reader on. Their wonderful rhyme is masterful. Then you switch to pros and the emotion shows coming through in bursts that break the flow. Rhyme is gone as is the previous feel. It is as if the reader is standing in the room with someone who has broken. This is regained toward the end and finished well in the last lines of the poem.
February 20th, 2025 17:17
The Reflection Stops
Caring dove said:
Mirrors can be difficult to look into sometimes ..
February 20th, 2025 16:14
Caring dove said:
Mirrors can be difficult to look into sometimes ..
February 20th, 2025 16:14
Dangerous
rainbow 1 said:
straight cap not that dangerous guys shes capping
February 20th, 2025 13:43
rainbow 1 said:
straight cap not that dangerous guys shes capping
February 20th, 2025 13:43
Gotcha day #4
rainbow 1 said:
hey hon they banned me again friend me please love you
February 19th, 2025 18:59
rainbow 1 said:
hey hon they banned me again friend me please love you
February 19th, 2025 18:59
Just leave me alone
Salvia.S said:
Such a beautiful and relatable expression of the human need for solitude and quiet contemplation. Really amazing! Loved it ❤️.
February 18th, 2025 21:12
Salvia.S said:
Such a beautiful and relatable expression of the human need for solitude and quiet contemplation. Really amazing! Loved it ❤️.
February 18th, 2025 21:12
Just leave me alone
sorenbarrett said:
We all need personal space from time to time. Nicely written
February 18th, 2025 18:28
sorenbarrett said:
We all need personal space from time to time. Nicely written
February 18th, 2025 18:28
Love poems.
sorenbarrett said:
I can hear the anguish in this poem and the pain of separated lovers. Well written
February 16th, 2025 17:27
sorenbarrett said:
I can hear the anguish in this poem and the pain of separated lovers. Well written
February 16th, 2025 17:27
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