Comments received on poems by Hey!
The Problem Within
Poetic Licence said:
A very heartfelt and extremely honest write declaring their ongoing love but acknowledging that the pain needs to stop. You can feel the honest remorse throughout the read, well expressed
March 4th, 2025 08:14
Poetic Licence said:
A very heartfelt and extremely honest write declaring their ongoing love but acknowledging that the pain needs to stop. You can feel the honest remorse throughout the read, well expressed
March 4th, 2025 08:14
The Problem Within
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of remorse and pain for what is seen as unpardonable flaws and deeds. Heart felt and wrenching it speaks of love for another greater than one\'s own desires and wisdom that knows that causing more pain does not make sense. Nicely worded in rhyme this piece is sad but all too true for many. Nicely done
March 4th, 2025 06:09
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of remorse and pain for what is seen as unpardonable flaws and deeds. Heart felt and wrenching it speaks of love for another greater than one\'s own desires and wisdom that knows that causing more pain does not make sense. Nicely worded in rhyme this piece is sad but all too true for many. Nicely done
March 4th, 2025 06:09
A Heart Torn in Two
Natalie Gladmir said:
What a dilemma! But first we need to determine if this girl is not confusing the concepts of LOVE and CODEPENDENCY. Why? Because a cruel disappointment will tear her heart into four.
March 4th, 2025 06:05
Natalie Gladmir said:
What a dilemma! But first we need to determine if this girl is not confusing the concepts of LOVE and CODEPENDENCY. Why? Because a cruel disappointment will tear her heart into four.
March 4th, 2025 06:05
A Heart Torn in Two
Poetic Licence said:
We all have choices to take and do not know if they are right or wrong until we have taken them, if wrong then hopefully we learn and get right next time, just ensure the choices are your choices, well written
March 4th, 2025 03:14
Poetic Licence said:
We all have choices to take and do not know if they are right or wrong until we have taken them, if wrong then hopefully we learn and get right next time, just ensure the choices are your choices, well written
March 4th, 2025 03:14
A Heart Torn in Two
rainbow 1 said:
I\'m dead so pick Clayton btw guys she a bully lol
March 3rd, 2025 19:58
rainbow 1 said:
I\'m dead so pick Clayton btw guys she a bully lol
March 3rd, 2025 19:58
A Heart Torn in Two
sorenbarrett said:
Choices are what this life is made of and no matter which it is it is a matter of point of view as to whether it was right or wrong. On can never travel both roads so one can never know for sure whether the choice was right or wrong. I always believe I took the right road.
March 3rd, 2025 16:28
sorenbarrett said:
Choices are what this life is made of and no matter which it is it is a matter of point of view as to whether it was right or wrong. On can never travel both roads so one can never know for sure whether the choice was right or wrong. I always believe I took the right road.
March 3rd, 2025 16:28
A Heart Torn in Two
Cheeky Missy said:
Superbly rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting, resonating, exquisite poignancy, this leaves the reader breathless and uncertain, hanging on her choice. I\'d vote for the one who offers a secure sense of home over adventure, yet wish the heroine the best, whichever she chooses. Thank you for sharing.
March 3rd, 2025 16:27
Cheeky Missy said:
Superbly rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting, resonating, exquisite poignancy, this leaves the reader breathless and uncertain, hanging on her choice. I\'d vote for the one who offers a secure sense of home over adventure, yet wish the heroine the best, whichever she chooses. Thank you for sharing.
March 3rd, 2025 16:27
As the days go by
rainbow 1 said:
the answer is no we don\'t it only lets you send 100 messages a day sorry night Lillie see you tommorow we talk more ok
March 1st, 2025 19:50
rainbow 1 said:
the answer is no we don\'t it only lets you send 100 messages a day sorry night Lillie see you tommorow we talk more ok
March 1st, 2025 19:50
The Heart\'s Dilemma
NafisaSB said:
you are right -trust your heart to find its soulmate - and here\'s wishing you the right choice
March 1st, 2025 00:20
NafisaSB said:
you are right -trust your heart to find its soulmate - and here\'s wishing you the right choice
March 1st, 2025 00:20
As the days go by
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of sadness and suffering feeling isolated and put down by others and oneself. Existentially dark and gender does not matter.
February 26th, 2025 21:27
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of sadness and suffering feeling isolated and put down by others and oneself. Existentially dark and gender does not matter.
February 26th, 2025 21:27
As the days go by
rainbow 1 said:
as life can be hard sometimes is important to note that part of what your fealing could be your fault every day when you wake up its a good day you are choosing to put your friends before you and not your self sometimes the best thing to do is to put yourself and if they get mad they are not your friends and your gonna have to accept that fact that some people only care about themselves as you know who I\'m talking about if someone throws all there problems at you then there not friends just using you
February 26th, 2025 20:33
rainbow 1 said:
as life can be hard sometimes is important to note that part of what your fealing could be your fault every day when you wake up its a good day you are choosing to put your friends before you and not your self sometimes the best thing to do is to put yourself and if they get mad they are not your friends and your gonna have to accept that fact that some people only care about themselves as you know who I\'m talking about if someone throws all there problems at you then there not friends just using you
February 26th, 2025 20:33
No matter
Poetic Licence said:
The important thing in life for people\'s own well being is to except, like and love themselves for who they and what they believe, once that is done it becomes easier to except the crap that comes your way, powerful and poignant write
February 26th, 2025 01:52
Poetic Licence said:
The important thing in life for people\'s own well being is to except, like and love themselves for who they and what they believe, once that is done it becomes easier to except the crap that comes your way, powerful and poignant write
February 26th, 2025 01:52
No matter
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes trying is not the way. You need to accept yourself and be who you are no matter what others thing.
February 25th, 2025 20:10
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes trying is not the way. You need to accept yourself and be who you are no matter what others thing.
February 25th, 2025 20:10
No matter
NinjaGirl said:
Everyone is always going to be against you, against us. It\'s up to us; We have to prove them wrong.
February 25th, 2025 20:06
NinjaGirl said:
Everyone is always going to be against you, against us. It\'s up to us; We have to prove them wrong.
February 25th, 2025 20:06
No matter
rainbow 1 said:
its good but the aspect of hard work does not pay off is just not true as if I was the best basketball player in the world I would have worked hard for it and I pushed my body to do that so yeah if you work hard do good and put kindness out in the world life will award you
February 25th, 2025 19:56
rainbow 1 said:
its good but the aspect of hard work does not pay off is just not true as if I was the best basketball player in the world I would have worked hard for it and I pushed my body to do that so yeah if you work hard do good and put kindness out in the world life will award you
February 25th, 2025 19:56
I cant no more. (I just cant)
sorenbarrett said:
Love gone stale and although the memories exist the ability to stay with it has gone. Love itself if it ever existed does not die but the ability to live in it may. A heart felt write.
February 24th, 2025 15:55
sorenbarrett said:
Love gone stale and although the memories exist the ability to stay with it has gone. Love itself if it ever existed does not die but the ability to live in it may. A heart felt write.
February 24th, 2025 15:55
The Heart\'s Dilemma
CelticNinja said:
Superb, uplifting and optimistic peace of romantic poetry. Excellent!
February 24th, 2025 09:26
CelticNinja said:
Superb, uplifting and optimistic peace of romantic poetry. Excellent!
February 24th, 2025 09:26
The Echos of the past
NinjaGirl said:
Truly a beautiful write, trauma can stain even our positive memories.
February 23rd, 2025 20:28
NinjaGirl said:
Truly a beautiful write, trauma can stain even our positive memories.
February 23rd, 2025 20:28
The Echos of the past
Poetic Licence said:
This a wonderfully written piece of work around the living and cycle of life,will resonate with a lot of people,
February 23rd, 2025 15:33
Poetic Licence said:
This a wonderfully written piece of work around the living and cycle of life,will resonate with a lot of people,
February 23rd, 2025 15:33
The Echos of the past
sorenbarrett said:
Here is a cycle presented and this may also be a metaphor for life itself. A well worded poem that presents vivid images and good rhyme. Nicely done.
February 23rd, 2025 11:30
sorenbarrett said:
Here is a cycle presented and this may also be a metaphor for life itself. A well worded poem that presents vivid images and good rhyme. Nicely done.
February 23rd, 2025 11:30
The Heart\'s Dilemma
sorenbarrett said:
Almost classically written in style and wording. Very nice it pushes onward to the future. Very nice
February 22nd, 2025 15:55
sorenbarrett said:
Almost classically written in style and wording. Very nice it pushes onward to the future. Very nice
February 22nd, 2025 15:55
The Heart\'s Dilemma
Hollow Enigma said:
hey great poem! i like the ending lets your heart decide and not all the anxieties that come with having the burden of options. very nice!
February 22nd, 2025 14:54
Hollow Enigma said:
hey great poem! i like the ending lets your heart decide and not all the anxieties that come with having the burden of options. very nice!
February 22nd, 2025 14:54
The Heart\'s Dilemma
rainbow 1 said:
you have done better but loves it lillie
February 22nd, 2025 14:45
rainbow 1 said:
you have done better but loves it lillie
February 22nd, 2025 14:45
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