Comments received on poems by Lil
The song of Alex\'s story
Mason Vollman said:
Goes to show how quick things can happen...
April 3rd, 2024 20:47
Mason Vollman said:
Goes to show how quick things can happen...
April 3rd, 2024 20:47
Do you ever?
Mason Vollman said:
Oh boy, would I love to just hide sometimes. Tysm for sharing beautifully written Lil.
April 3rd, 2024 20:46
Mason Vollman said:
Oh boy, would I love to just hide sometimes. Tysm for sharing beautifully written Lil.
April 3rd, 2024 20:46
My phobias
Doggerel Dave said:
A catalogue of phobias - thank you for enhancing my clinical vocabulary.
April 3rd, 2024 07:17
Doggerel Dave said:
A catalogue of phobias - thank you for enhancing my clinical vocabulary.
April 3rd, 2024 07:17
My phobias
Mason Vollman said:
Ha, All those Phobias... Too bad Beautiphobia is not a word.
April 2nd, 2024 18:05
Mason Vollman said:
Ha, All those Phobias... Too bad Beautiphobia is not a word.
April 2nd, 2024 18:05
Do you ever?
sunshine777 said:
Do I ever, almost everyday. Come to think of it everyday. Nice poem :)
March 31st, 2024 22:29
sunshine777 said:
Do I ever, almost everyday. Come to think of it everyday. Nice poem :)
March 31st, 2024 22:29
Were human
sunshine777 said:
I love the compassion you show for the human race all in 1 poem. Nice work!
March 31st, 2024 22:26
sunshine777 said:
I love the compassion you show for the human race all in 1 poem. Nice work!
March 31st, 2024 22:26
Were human
vividvoid14 said:
I liked they guy you use in the photo, is showes were flawed, and that\'s what makes us human, thanks for the great write
March 26th, 2024 22:52
vividvoid14 said:
I liked they guy you use in the photo, is showes were flawed, and that\'s what makes us human, thanks for the great write
March 26th, 2024 22:52
Why?
Mason Vollman said:
Beautiful Piece You\'ve So Percicly Thought Out. Thank You, Lil. You Have A Beautiful Talent. God Bless. P.S. Go Make A Difference In This Wicked World. ❤️
March 7th, 2024 17:07
Mason Vollman said:
Beautiful Piece You\'ve So Percicly Thought Out. Thank You, Lil. You Have A Beautiful Talent. God Bless. P.S. Go Make A Difference In This Wicked World. ❤️
March 7th, 2024 17:07
Yes or no?
Neilton said:
I don\'t know if he asked you yet but i\'m sure he will at some point!! Ms Third wheeler will not get the satisfaction!!You are amazing
March 5th, 2024 10:44
Neilton said:
I don\'t know if he asked you yet but i\'m sure he will at some point!! Ms Third wheeler will not get the satisfaction!!You are amazing
March 5th, 2024 10:44
Yes or no?
Meera Mere said:
All the best girlie. Dominic will surely be your dance partner. Don\'t let Mrs. third wheeler destroy your special moments. You got it.
March 2nd, 2024 01:46
Meera Mere said:
All the best girlie. Dominic will surely be your dance partner. Don\'t let Mrs. third wheeler destroy your special moments. You got it.
March 2nd, 2024 01:46
Mrs. third wheeler.
Meera Mere said:
Girl, I hope your are okay. She seriously ruined your special moment. But \"Break her heart and I\'ll break you\" What\'s her true intention here?
February 29th, 2024 07:25
Meera Mere said:
Girl, I hope your are okay. She seriously ruined your special moment. But \"Break her heart and I\'ll break you\" What\'s her true intention here?
February 29th, 2024 07:25
They (my parents)
Neilton said:
Wow ! Very emotional! I can feel your anger and your exasperation! Great poem.
February 26th, 2024 07:46
Neilton said:
Wow ! Very emotional! I can feel your anger and your exasperation! Great poem.
February 26th, 2024 07:46
They (my parents)
Cassie58 said:
Your lines, full of anger and hurt. I can only imagine those high charged emotions coursing through your being Lil. Best get them expressed, they lose some of their strength then. Keep writing.
February 26th, 2024 06:52
Cassie58 said:
Your lines, full of anger and hurt. I can only imagine those high charged emotions coursing through your being Lil. Best get them expressed, they lose some of their strength then. Keep writing.
February 26th, 2024 06:52
IF
Cassie58 said:
So many what ifs. Good to talk it through in your own mind. Teenage years can be problematic especially for those without a support network. Good to read you again Lil.
February 24th, 2024 23:33
Cassie58 said:
So many what ifs. Good to talk it through in your own mind. Teenage years can be problematic especially for those without a support network. Good to read you again Lil.
February 24th, 2024 23:33
Have you heard of the crooked man?
Doggerel Dave said:
Makes a change from your previous stuff - keep up the good work!
February 24th, 2024 05:30
Doggerel Dave said:
Makes a change from your previous stuff - keep up the good work!
February 24th, 2024 05:30
Have you heard of the crooked man?
Doggerel Dave said:
Great fun - enjoyed. Quite a lot of \'some stuff\' added?
February 24th, 2024 00:27
Doggerel Dave said:
Great fun - enjoyed. Quite a lot of \'some stuff\' added?
February 24th, 2024 00:27
Pain
John Lee said:
🥀 a rose petal falls, study as it sways to it\'s rest, dancing to it\'s melody, though her life ends, her memory sings the notes of her song only you can hear. Live on Brayleanna! In the hearts of those that hear your song! 🌹
February 18th, 2024 22:55
John Lee said:
🥀 a rose petal falls, study as it sways to it\'s rest, dancing to it\'s melody, though her life ends, her memory sings the notes of her song only you can hear. Live on Brayleanna! In the hearts of those that hear your song! 🌹
February 18th, 2024 22:55
Letter to my parents
John Lee said:
I can see the tears in their eyes as they read it. The honesty, the purity, the grace and the chance at reconciliation. Wonderfully written Lil.
February 18th, 2024 22:43
John Lee said:
I can see the tears in their eyes as they read it. The honesty, the purity, the grace and the chance at reconciliation. Wonderfully written Lil.
February 18th, 2024 22:43
Letter to my parents
Parisab said:
You really touched my heart with your letter poem. You are generous and compassionate for sharing about the wonderful person that you are and to be honest about your anger. I hope that you find healing in your relationship with them, being more specific about boundaries is important. Do you want them to just know or do you know of the specifics of how and if for contact, you can ask for. It’s never easy, but the more clear, the better protected you are. Thanks for sharing beautiful soul!
February 18th, 2024 12:35
Parisab said:
You really touched my heart with your letter poem. You are generous and compassionate for sharing about the wonderful person that you are and to be honest about your anger. I hope that you find healing in your relationship with them, being more specific about boundaries is important. Do you want them to just know or do you know of the specifics of how and if for contact, you can ask for. It’s never easy, but the more clear, the better protected you are. Thanks for sharing beautiful soul!
February 18th, 2024 12:35
Why are we like this
Lorenz said:
Perhaps because we are not what we should be ?
February 17th, 2024 14:40
Lorenz said:
Perhaps because we are not what we should be ?
February 17th, 2024 14:40
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