Comments received on poems by Lil
Him its him
Dan Williams said:
I would have to change the gender but it makes perfect sense to me. Nicely done.
September 27th, 2024 13:16
Dan Williams said:
I would have to change the gender but it makes perfect sense to me. Nicely done.
September 27th, 2024 13:16
Him its him
Cassie58 said:
You know Lil, there is an excitement in your words. I can feel it. You make perfect sense to me. Happy Thursday.
September 26th, 2024 08:23
Cassie58 said:
You know Lil, there is an excitement in your words. I can feel it. You make perfect sense to me. Happy Thursday.
September 26th, 2024 08:23
World
rew4er2nail said:
i notice your absent presence and envy your status as student (probably coed) cuz this old man (me came rolling home with a knick knack paddy whack give your dog a bone, and take stock how such simple needs allow,, enable and provide succor to a friendly furry four legged friend unlike bipedal hominids who walk erect on two legs. with that atypical introduction, I attest that matthew scott harris greets thee with unexpected love and delight from southeastern pennsylvania.
September 24th, 2024 21:57
rew4er2nail said:
i notice your absent presence and envy your status as student (probably coed) cuz this old man (me came rolling home with a knick knack paddy whack give your dog a bone, and take stock how such simple needs allow,, enable and provide succor to a friendly furry four legged friend unlike bipedal hominids who walk erect on two legs. with that atypical introduction, I attest that matthew scott harris greets thee with unexpected love and delight from southeastern pennsylvania.
September 24th, 2024 21:57
Dreams
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Right! My dreams are either about people dying, or someone trying to kill me and I can\'t run... Not pleasant. Good write Lil
September 24th, 2024 03:30
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Right! My dreams are either about people dying, or someone trying to kill me and I can\'t run... Not pleasant. Good write Lil
September 24th, 2024 03:30
(just another random poem idk what to name it.)
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Beautiful poem Lil!
September 24th, 2024 03:28
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Beautiful poem Lil!
September 24th, 2024 03:28
(just a random poem idk what to name it.)
Salvia.S said:
Love this poem! I felt every word. Beautifully written....
September 22nd, 2024 00:16
Salvia.S said:
Love this poem! I felt every word. Beautifully written....
September 22nd, 2024 00:16
Dreams
Cassie58 said:
I used to have mares when I was young. Horrible. Always about being abandoned or my loved ones dying. Happy to say I grew out of them. Hope you do too. I can relate to your words Lil. Have a good day.
September 18th, 2024 06:24
Cassie58 said:
I used to have mares when I was young. Horrible. Always about being abandoned or my loved ones dying. Happy to say I grew out of them. Hope you do too. I can relate to your words Lil. Have a good day.
September 18th, 2024 06:24
You don\'t tell me what to do!
Cassie58 said:
All part of growing up Lil. Putting your emotions into poetry is a great way to deal with it. At your age I didn’t write poetry. It came so much later. Never wrote a poem till I was 40. You have got a head start. Have a good Tuesday.
September 17th, 2024 05:58
Cassie58 said:
All part of growing up Lil. Putting your emotions into poetry is a great way to deal with it. At your age I didn’t write poetry. It came so much later. Never wrote a poem till I was 40. You have got a head start. Have a good Tuesday.
September 17th, 2024 05:58
I don\'t know how to help you
orchidee said:
Oh, I don\'t know about ghosties. Disturbing to our sleep, even any friendly ghosts.
September 16th, 2024 13:10
orchidee said:
Oh, I don\'t know about ghosties. Disturbing to our sleep, even any friendly ghosts.
September 16th, 2024 13:10
I don\'t know how to help you
Cassie58 said:
What a beautiful poem Lil. Maybe she doesn’t want help. Maybe she is visiting because she is lonely. Acknowledge her presence and be happy she leaves a scent of almonds.
September 16th, 2024 05:24
Cassie58 said:
What a beautiful poem Lil. Maybe she doesn’t want help. Maybe she is visiting because she is lonely. Acknowledge her presence and be happy she leaves a scent of almonds.
September 16th, 2024 05:24
The pain caused by you
NinjaGirl said:
wishing you luck with your parents! glad to know you\'re still ok
September 11th, 2024 16:20
NinjaGirl said:
wishing you luck with your parents! glad to know you\'re still ok
September 11th, 2024 16:20
The pain caused by you
Cassie58 said:
It is good to express your feelings. Writing is great therapy. Your words convey your upset deeply. Negativity hurts. I felt your sadness here Lil. Good to see you are posting again.
September 11th, 2024 15:16
Cassie58 said:
It is good to express your feelings. Writing is great therapy. Your words convey your upset deeply. Negativity hurts. I felt your sadness here Lil. Good to see you are posting again.
September 11th, 2024 15:16
Rough times
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Good write Lil, sorry to hear about Dom. You\'ll find someone better. Liked the poem!
August 13th, 2024 14:13
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Good write Lil, sorry to hear about Dom. You\'ll find someone better. Liked the poem!
August 13th, 2024 14:13
Rough times
sorenbarrett said:
Betrayal is an ugly animal that devours trust and bites whoever it can. Sorry for the pain.
August 13th, 2024 12:10
sorenbarrett said:
Betrayal is an ugly animal that devours trust and bites whoever it can. Sorry for the pain.
August 13th, 2024 12:10
Why me??
orchidee said:
Me being daft - And now my next poem: \'Why not me?\' heehee.
August 2nd, 2024 01:28
orchidee said:
Me being daft - And now my next poem: \'Why not me?\' heehee.
August 2nd, 2024 01:28
What happens to our love?
Neilton said:
Great poem L! You convey your exasperation very good! This guy obviously doesn\'t deserve you ! HIS loss!
June 27th, 2024 12:05
Neilton said:
Great poem L! You convey your exasperation very good! This guy obviously doesn\'t deserve you ! HIS loss!
June 27th, 2024 12:05
Your Ways
orchidee said:
I never knew I was your sun in your darkest days. Noooo, you don\'t mean me! lol.
May 5th, 2024 09:37
orchidee said:
I never knew I was your sun in your darkest days. Noooo, you don\'t mean me! lol.
May 5th, 2024 09:37
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