Comments received on poems by mtrotter1

Bougie Women
Bragee said:

Sheeesh! Burned the alive with this one!

February 6th, 2024 00:18

It\'s My Birthday
orchidee said:

Happy Birthday M!
Ahh, UK and USA date format are the same for this day: 2.2.
In UK it\'s date-month-year.
In USA it\'s month-date-year.

February 2nd, 2024 12:33

Salty Lilies
2781 said:

\"And I looked, and there was none to help; and I wondered that there was none to uphold: therefore my own arm brought salvation unto me; and my fury, it upheld me.\"

January 31st, 2024 02:10

The Many Trials Of Thea Westin
ReonoxB said:

Wow another great mind. I like your work Soul Baby.

January 26th, 2024 01:44

My Addiction
Alan R said:

The first two lines are so relatable, beautiful write!

January 25th, 2024 00:27

The Insane Asylum
Thomas W Case said:


January 24th, 2024 16:17

Trish The Ish
Destined Perspectives said:

I could really feel your emotion of rage in this and I loved the imagery! I loved every line but my most favorites were:
\"Black is darkness and white is coal\"

\"Stars collide because of you
Because your heart is a wicked scheme.\"
Thank you for sharing! 😊

January 22nd, 2024 12:25

In A House Of Deranged Monkeys
Lorenz said:

fighting poetry at last !

January 21st, 2024 03:50

Moon Over Beverly
Parisab said:

Sounds like you are drawing this archetypal woman, with exact sensitivity and sensibility-she looks like a lot of women around me-I think I’m so different, yet I still try to learn about their detached and fanciful? ways

January 19th, 2024 15:44

Bloody Mary
Alan R said:

Oh Mary is your heart contrary? Reads so well!

January 16th, 2024 11:17

Bloody Mary
Cassie58 said:

A contrary Mary for sure. I have one living round the corner from me. Full of the milk of human kindness, she is not. You could have written this poem for her. Well penned poet.

January 16th, 2024 03:51

The Death Of Janet Green
jarcher54 said:

You bring Janet to life with this stunning incantation. It is an obituary, an anthem, a lamentation, and a wickedly wry commentary on the poor soul! Thank you so much poet!

January 15th, 2024 01:30

The Morning Chisleu
Lil said:

This is wonderful soul baby. Your name really fits cuz it looks like you put your soul into it. Please keep it up.

January 15th, 2024 01:18

The Wind And The Willow
orchidee said:

Are you a tree?! lol.

January 13th, 2024 03:10

Cassie58 said:

A lovely heartfelt tribute to Margaret. A kind soul who made a difference to the lives of others. Nicely written.

January 12th, 2024 06:24

People Are Evil
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:

A fine write!

January 11th, 2024 21:08

Human Jesus
Rocky Lagou said:

This is amazing. I love this message with so much passion that I can’t put it into words. I just want to say that your poem and writer’s note speak directly to the world we’re living in. This world needs more love, more hope, a Savior. “For a rose is a rose; the grandest rose” is a phenomenal line. Stay safe and blessed.

January 7th, 2024 01:18

2781 said:

The greatest among them shall be your servant.

January 3rd, 2024 01:51

A Mother And Her Child
Cedrick said:

nice write fellow poet

January 2nd, 2024 01:11

orchidee said:

Good write M.
A terrible \'game to play is \'What if.....?\'
What if - it all goes wrong, this or that negative thing happens, etc.
We can\'t know - do we want to know all of the future anyway?
Easy to say, harder to do maybe - we can only live one day at a time.
A terrible thing is that we won\'t come up with \'What if\' answers, as future things just have not happened yet. Or if we seemingly have \'answers\' we won\'t know if they are correct or not, until an event happens - or doesn\'t happen.

December 31st, 2023 03:42

My Poetic Side
lunarchloedip said:

love this!!

December 30th, 2023 07:33

The Fog
sorenbarrett said:

Such a wonderful message of love and longing. Nicely written

December 24th, 2023 14:28

Is It The Tree Or Me?
sorenbarrett said:

I liked the retrograde form of this poem getting younger not older. I too am eternal and feel this although more than 70

December 24th, 2023 06:18

Tomorrow Is My Heart\'s Being
Cassie58 said:

Broken love is painful and reconciliation for some can be out of the question. Time can soften such hurt. This reader felt your pain in your poem.

December 20th, 2023 02:56

The Curse Of Grandma Lonnie
Cassie58 said:

So painful to read, this poem of great hurt. I feel your anguish, as s reader. It pains more because I have a granddaughter myself. I want to give you a hug. Keep writing. Good to express those feelings. Get them out in the open.

December 18th, 2023 14:50

Cassie58 said:

It’s all about balance. Too much sun and you would become parched. We need the rain in our lives too. Relationships aren’t perfect. They have their strains. It helps if we have some elastic in the cupboard. I enjoyed your poem and the shape of its presentation. Thank you.

December 17th, 2023 01:00

Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work.

December 16th, 2023 21:44

Creativity Doesn\'t Make Sense
Doggerel Dave said:

There\'s something there, but I can\'t quite get a handle on it....
Creativity doesn\'t have to make (logical) sense.....?

December 10th, 2023 18:31

Is It The Dog Or Me?
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful. You aren\'t alone in your feelings. Very relatable.

December 7th, 2023 20:11

Is It The Dog Or Me?
poetryismusic said:

This is such a beautiful poem!

December 7th, 2023 20:00

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