Comments received on poems by Maplespal
It\'s drying
sorenbarrett said:
A question with only the answer because. It leaves the reader asking what is frozen to dry. It has a ring to the rhyme that comes around and around as if frozen in the air. Nice
August 12th, 2025 16:03
sorenbarrett said:
A question with only the answer because. It leaves the reader asking what is frozen to dry. It has a ring to the rhyme that comes around and around as if frozen in the air. Nice
August 12th, 2025 16:03
Manifested view
sorenbarrett said:
Too many people fit this description nicely worded in verse and rhyme. A fun read that needs to be said
August 11th, 2025 05:38
sorenbarrett said:
Too many people fit this description nicely worded in verse and rhyme. A fun read that needs to be said
August 11th, 2025 05:38
Watching you
Bella Shepard said:
I love the suspense. Constant vigilance required in an age of, as some like to say, alternative facts, who to believe? Great write!!
August 10th, 2025 09:38
Bella Shepard said:
I love the suspense. Constant vigilance required in an age of, as some like to say, alternative facts, who to believe? Great write!!
August 10th, 2025 09:38
Watching you
sorenbarrett said:
Parent, lover or God. A most poetic write. Nicely written
August 10th, 2025 07:56
sorenbarrett said:
Parent, lover or God. A most poetic write. Nicely written
August 10th, 2025 07:56
For me & They\'re mine
sorenbarrett said:
Two poems of very different natures, the first of turmoil and destruction, a desire for the world to end the second of ownership and a desire for a private space. Maybe under it all is a need for solitude and personal space. Lovely
August 9th, 2025 06:26
sorenbarrett said:
Two poems of very different natures, the first of turmoil and destruction, a desire for the world to end the second of ownership and a desire for a private space. Maybe under it all is a need for solitude and personal space. Lovely
August 9th, 2025 06:26
A brain dump: Yours to kill
sorenbarrett said:
Self sacrifice the ultimate redemption for the giver and the other. Set in myth as well as religion. The offering accepted by the gods as worthy of redemption and a love offering. Well penned
August 8th, 2025 07:03
sorenbarrett said:
Self sacrifice the ultimate redemption for the giver and the other. Set in myth as well as religion. The offering accepted by the gods as worthy of redemption and a love offering. Well penned
August 8th, 2025 07:03
The survivor
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that can be taken more than one way. in its clearest form it seems that saying of a child but could be the metaphoric sexual position of a teen, or the defensive statement of an adult against verbal attack. Well done
August 7th, 2025 05:12
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that can be taken more than one way. in its clearest form it seems that saying of a child but could be the metaphoric sexual position of a teen, or the defensive statement of an adult against verbal attack. Well done
August 7th, 2025 05:12
You\'re like them
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful poem of relationships. There is not going back to the beginning. The do fade with time. A rather sad poem but well said
August 6th, 2025 05:21
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful poem of relationships. There is not going back to the beginning. The do fade with time. A rather sad poem but well said
August 6th, 2025 05:21
Movement, send
sorenbarrett said:
This seems to speak to fear, panic and nightmares and facing them as a way of defeating them. Nicely written
August 5th, 2025 05:31
sorenbarrett said:
This seems to speak to fear, panic and nightmares and facing them as a way of defeating them. Nicely written
August 5th, 2025 05:31
Whispering Thoughts
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks softly and in its quiet and reverence wisdom distills.
August 4th, 2025 06:16
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks softly and in its quiet and reverence wisdom distills.
August 4th, 2025 06:16
Cutting
Bella Shepard said:
The repetition of lines sounds a mantra, culminationg in an affirmation. Very well done!
August 3rd, 2025 11:47
Bella Shepard said:
The repetition of lines sounds a mantra, culminationg in an affirmation. Very well done!
August 3rd, 2025 11:47
Cutting
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and deep in meaning. The repetition makes its point and the final stanza cements it in place with a splendid metaphor.
August 3rd, 2025 07:08
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and deep in meaning. The repetition makes its point and the final stanza cements it in place with a splendid metaphor.
August 3rd, 2025 07:08
If it works
sorenbarrett said:
A poem I feel and for that a fave, furthermore some crafty wording and smooth metering make this a wonderful poem that has this worn homespun feel to it. One of my favorite of yours
August 2nd, 2025 05:42
sorenbarrett said:
A poem I feel and for that a fave, furthermore some crafty wording and smooth metering make this a wonderful poem that has this worn homespun feel to it. One of my favorite of yours
August 2nd, 2025 05:42
She screams in dreams
sorenbarrett said:
Most interesting the desire for one to be afraid so as to be needed and wanted. A poem of desire and of passions fire.
August 1st, 2025 11:37
sorenbarrett said:
Most interesting the desire for one to be afraid so as to be needed and wanted. A poem of desire and of passions fire.
August 1st, 2025 11:37
A note: I miss her
sorenbarrett said:
Loss reflected in this poem that is hard to let go. Nicely written
July 31st, 2025 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
Loss reflected in this poem that is hard to let go. Nicely written
July 31st, 2025 04:57
A note: I miss her
isa kemmy said:
oh wow am also missing someone i like the piece of art because i can connect
July 31st, 2025 04:52
isa kemmy said:
oh wow am also missing someone i like the piece of art because i can connect
July 31st, 2025 04:52
Why believe
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of disbelief well written. This poem is well organized and constructed lays out its logic. Loved it
July 30th, 2025 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of disbelief well written. This poem is well organized and constructed lays out its logic. Loved it
July 30th, 2025 04:57
Not everyone
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of parting and it leaves a general feel of sadness some of which can be prepared for it know in advance and some can not when there is no notice. Nicely said
July 28th, 2025 05:10
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of parting and it leaves a general feel of sadness some of which can be prepared for it know in advance and some can not when there is no notice. Nicely said
July 28th, 2025 05:10
Justice kind
sorenbarrett said:
Deals made and legal or not still manipulations and just as dirty
July 27th, 2025 08:43
sorenbarrett said:
Deals made and legal or not still manipulations and just as dirty
July 27th, 2025 08:43
Stay with me
sorenbarrett said:
A plea for continued closeness in a most difficult hour. Separation is feared by most and so it is stated in this poem. Nicely done
July 26th, 2025 06:00
sorenbarrett said:
A plea for continued closeness in a most difficult hour. Separation is feared by most and so it is stated in this poem. Nicely done
July 26th, 2025 06:00
Are you like me?
Bella Shepard said:
I am like you, unhappy with what I see. Thank you for putting into such powerful words.
July 25th, 2025 08:35
Bella Shepard said:
I am like you, unhappy with what I see. Thank you for putting into such powerful words.
July 25th, 2025 08:35
Are you like me?
sorenbarrett said:
The message of this well written poem gets the fave. Well put in words it calls out for a rage against what is wrong. Very nicely put in verse and rhyme
July 25th, 2025 06:39
sorenbarrett said:
The message of this well written poem gets the fave. Well put in words it calls out for a rage against what is wrong. Very nicely put in verse and rhyme
July 25th, 2025 06:39
Our CAF
sorenbarrett said:
Most all associations and cooperatives are the same. Politics at its worst. Well done
July 24th, 2025 07:53
sorenbarrett said:
Most all associations and cooperatives are the same. Politics at its worst. Well done
July 24th, 2025 07:53
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