Comments received on poems by Maplespal
The hole
sorenbarrett said:
This analogy that grows into a metaphor has meaning in its emptiness becoming a paradox in its concreteness. Well written it makes one think and is a fave
April 26th, 2026 06:54
sorenbarrett said:
This analogy that grows into a metaphor has meaning in its emptiness becoming a paradox in its concreteness. Well written it makes one think and is a fave
April 26th, 2026 06:54
Together
sorenbarrett said:
Quietly romantic this poem walks through a relationship. Well written
April 25th, 2026 06:26
sorenbarrett said:
Quietly romantic this poem walks through a relationship. Well written
April 25th, 2026 06:26
Freeze a hole & Let\'s
sorenbarrett said:
I particularly like your first poem of freeze a hole in its images and fun twist on common known lines. The second is provocative and good fun in a sense of satire. Well done
April 24th, 2026 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
I particularly like your first poem of freeze a hole in its images and fun twist on common known lines. The second is provocative and good fun in a sense of satire. Well done
April 24th, 2026 05:07
Progress?
Friendship said:
A powerful poem. Your poem revolves around the imagery of suffering, death, punishment, and the moral implications of how society deals with evil. The poem reflects on the past\'s physical brutality and compares it to contemporary practices, suggesting a persistent cycle of violence.
April 23rd, 2026 06:55
Friendship said:
A powerful poem. Your poem revolves around the imagery of suffering, death, punishment, and the moral implications of how society deals with evil. The poem reflects on the past\'s physical brutality and compares it to contemporary practices, suggesting a persistent cycle of violence.
April 23rd, 2026 06:55
Progress?
sorenbarrett said:
Wow!! Powerful the use of parallels past and present, religion and execution implied innocence of a crucified god and criminals all packed into a short that forces the question of have we really made any progress as a species. A fave
April 23rd, 2026 06:11
sorenbarrett said:
Wow!! Powerful the use of parallels past and present, religion and execution implied innocence of a crucified god and criminals all packed into a short that forces the question of have we really made any progress as a species. A fave
April 23rd, 2026 06:11
Buts!
sorenbarrett said:
It is the but that stops from happening what one dreams of. Nicely done
April 22nd, 2026 05:58
sorenbarrett said:
It is the but that stops from happening what one dreams of. Nicely done
April 22nd, 2026 05:58
Her warnings
sorenbarrett said:
A twisted view of angels and demons where one that is normally on top now seems the bottom. Nicely said
April 21st, 2026 05:01
sorenbarrett said:
A twisted view of angels and demons where one that is normally on top now seems the bottom. Nicely said
April 21st, 2026 05:01
Lost trust
sorenbarrett said:
Here there is a touch of accusation in poetic question. Well done
April 20th, 2026 06:07
sorenbarrett said:
Here there is a touch of accusation in poetic question. Well done
April 20th, 2026 06:07
Marked
sorenbarrett said:
Here the feeling of past deception carries weight and pain
April 19th, 2026 07:37
sorenbarrett said:
Here the feeling of past deception carries weight and pain
April 19th, 2026 07:37
Good citizens
sorenbarrett said:
Cannon fodder are the poor we pay the price in taxes and more. A wonderful write of the value put on the common man by those in power. Nicely done
April 18th, 2026 06:50
sorenbarrett said:
Cannon fodder are the poor we pay the price in taxes and more. A wonderful write of the value put on the common man by those in power. Nicely done
April 18th, 2026 06:50
Finally
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is a sardonic look back at the Covid era but that was just a bad joke. A fun read
April 17th, 2026 06:06
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is a sardonic look back at the Covid era but that was just a bad joke. A fun read
April 17th, 2026 06:06
Mentality
sorenbarrett said:
Well before Caligula or Hitler and to this present day man wages war with total disregard for casualties. Well written
April 15th, 2026 05:32
sorenbarrett said:
Well before Caligula or Hitler and to this present day man wages war with total disregard for casualties. Well written
April 15th, 2026 05:32
Collision
sorenbarrett said:
A piece of self discovery and brightness as music takes us over. Nicely done
April 14th, 2026 05:44
sorenbarrett said:
A piece of self discovery and brightness as music takes us over. Nicely done
April 14th, 2026 05:44
Woof
Demar Desu said:
The profile picture just convinces me this poem was written by a dog
April 13th, 2026 09:53
Demar Desu said:
The profile picture just convinces me this poem was written by a dog
April 13th, 2026 09:53
Her
ms.divine said:
Love it when I read this the song Thas a bad mamajama 💃Her body measurements are perfect in every dimension
She\'s got a figure that\'s sure enough getting attention
She\'s poetry in motion, a beautiful sight to see
I get so excited viewing her anatomy🙌
April 12th, 2026 12:08
ms.divine said:
Love it when I read this the song Thas a bad mamajama 💃Her body measurements are perfect in every dimension
She\'s got a figure that\'s sure enough getting attention
She\'s poetry in motion, a beautiful sight to see
I get so excited viewing her anatomy🙌
April 12th, 2026 12:08
Her
Katie B. said:
This is amazing, gave me chills. I love brevity. It says so much in a few words. Excellent write and a FAVE! Way to go Maplespal! A FAVE!
April 12th, 2026 07:02
Katie B. said:
This is amazing, gave me chills. I love brevity. It says so much in a few words. Excellent write and a FAVE! Way to go Maplespal! A FAVE!
April 12th, 2026 07:02
Her
sorenbarrett said:
I love this poem of nature so well portrayed in stunning images it is a fave
April 12th, 2026 06:58
sorenbarrett said:
I love this poem of nature so well portrayed in stunning images it is a fave
April 12th, 2026 06:58
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