Comments received on poems by Maplespal
Dry Lipped
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor is this poem. A great write of love and death. Very nice
March 12th, 2025 15:47
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor is this poem. A great write of love and death. Very nice
March 12th, 2025 15:47
I\'m waiting here
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of someone still hoping but are just left waiting, nicely expressed
March 12th, 2025 03:11
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of someone still hoping but are just left waiting, nicely expressed
March 12th, 2025 03:11
I\'m waiting here
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of loss and longing pervades this poem and extends a hand of hope in waiting. Lovely
March 11th, 2025 15:54
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of loss and longing pervades this poem and extends a hand of hope in waiting. Lovely
March 11th, 2025 15:54
Robust and vast
Poetic Licence said:
A true mixture of wonderful imagery as you read, confirmation that imagination is a wonderful and endless thing, enjoyed the read
March 10th, 2025 07:41
Poetic Licence said:
A true mixture of wonderful imagery as you read, confirmation that imagination is a wonderful and endless thing, enjoyed the read
March 10th, 2025 07:41
Robust and vast
sorenbarrett said:
Varied thoughts are introduced as the poem evolves. Imagination is shown in the great imagery of the universe and familiar objects. A lovely cacophony of imagery in this poem
March 10th, 2025 05:02
sorenbarrett said:
Varied thoughts are introduced as the poem evolves. Imagination is shown in the great imagery of the universe and familiar objects. A lovely cacophony of imagery in this poem
March 10th, 2025 05:02
Low waged & A soldiers need
sorenbarrett said:
Two different stories but similar in some ways. Both under paid both with little hope and a bit dark.
March 9th, 2025 08:18
sorenbarrett said:
Two different stories but similar in some ways. Both under paid both with little hope and a bit dark.
March 9th, 2025 08:18
Kept in a dream
sorenbarrett said:
Dreams keep memories of beauty from the past and imagination. Very nicely stated in this poem
March 8th, 2025 09:22
sorenbarrett said:
Dreams keep memories of beauty from the past and imagination. Very nicely stated in this poem
March 8th, 2025 09:22
2 Brain dumps sorry
sorenbarrett said:
i There the dot is in its spot. I loved the poems they were cleverly worded and hold a truth. Nicely done
March 7th, 2025 06:21
sorenbarrett said:
i There the dot is in its spot. I loved the poems they were cleverly worded and hold a truth. Nicely done
March 7th, 2025 06:21
Lost in the ocean
Poetic Licence said:
A write full of sadness and loneliness, with possibly dark intentions, emotions expressed well in this write
March 6th, 2025 11:26
Poetic Licence said:
A write full of sadness and loneliness, with possibly dark intentions, emotions expressed well in this write
March 6th, 2025 11:26
Lost in the ocean
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds lost, lonely and sad. Very nice
March 6th, 2025 09:11
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds lost, lonely and sad. Very nice
March 6th, 2025 09:11
Bread
sorenbarrett said:
There are all types of breads from sweet breads to sour dough. I love the metaphor it seems to fit well.
March 5th, 2025 06:19
sorenbarrett said:
There are all types of breads from sweet breads to sour dough. I love the metaphor it seems to fit well.
March 5th, 2025 06:19
Watching a smirk
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of reflection and being surprised by a memory you thought you had forgotten, enjoyed the read
March 4th, 2025 08:18
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of reflection and being surprised by a memory you thought you had forgotten, enjoyed the read
March 4th, 2025 08:18
Watching a smirk
sorenbarrett said:
Sad nostalgia and well written in this poem of loss and having to be in the right spot to see, remember and feel the past. Lovely
March 4th, 2025 06:52
sorenbarrett said:
Sad nostalgia and well written in this poem of loss and having to be in the right spot to see, remember and feel the past. Lovely
March 4th, 2025 06:52
Watching a smirk
Natalie Gladmir said:
How sweet that you are so observant, and how wonderful that you have not lost the ability to be pleasantly surprised by someone\'s unexpected appearance.
March 4th, 2025 06:41
Natalie Gladmir said:
How sweet that you are so observant, and how wonderful that you have not lost the ability to be pleasantly surprised by someone\'s unexpected appearance.
March 4th, 2025 06:41
Watching a smirk
MDStone said:
They sure do, don’t they? A painful memory or a pleasant smirk… Catching us at the spot we happen to be. Great writing. Thanks for sharing!
March 4th, 2025 06:30
MDStone said:
They sure do, don’t they? A painful memory or a pleasant smirk… Catching us at the spot we happen to be. Great writing. Thanks for sharing!
March 4th, 2025 06:30
Replay
Poetic Licence said:
Enjoyed the way this was written , some memories do take us to places we would rather not be, enjoyed the read
March 3rd, 2025 06:11
Poetic Licence said:
Enjoyed the way this was written , some memories do take us to places we would rather not be, enjoyed the read
March 3rd, 2025 06:11
Replay
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is haunting and sad. Past memories can be sad but they can also be happy and cheerful depending what we choose to focus on. Loved this poem and its sense of distance and haze in the memory that seems to fade away at the end of the poem. Most lovely
March 3rd, 2025 05:47
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is haunting and sad. Past memories can be sad but they can also be happy and cheerful depending what we choose to focus on. Loved this poem and its sense of distance and haze in the memory that seems to fade away at the end of the poem. Most lovely
March 3rd, 2025 05:47
I write & The situation
sorenbarrett said:
Your first poem seen as an oblation and accepted with gratitude, A lovely write of dedication to all. The second one of resignation and sacrifice a deterministic end. Very nicely done.
March 2nd, 2025 06:27
sorenbarrett said:
Your first poem seen as an oblation and accepted with gratitude, A lovely write of dedication to all. The second one of resignation and sacrifice a deterministic end. Very nicely done.
March 2nd, 2025 06:27
2 Thoughts from a bird
Poetic Licence said:
I often wonder wouldn\'t it be nice to just have freedom a bird has and be able view the world from their view, enjoyed the read
March 1st, 2025 06:40
Poetic Licence said:
I often wonder wouldn\'t it be nice to just have freedom a bird has and be able view the world from their view, enjoyed the read
March 1st, 2025 06:40
2 Thoughts from a bird
sorenbarrett said:
Not only a great write from a birds perspective but as a metaphor. Loved the images in this poem
March 1st, 2025 05:34
sorenbarrett said:
Not only a great write from a birds perspective but as a metaphor. Loved the images in this poem
March 1st, 2025 05:34
The last 3 of the River story
sorenbarrett said:
Each with its own form of sadness, forlorn they cast shadows and darken. Very sad
February 28th, 2025 06:49
sorenbarrett said:
Each with its own form of sadness, forlorn they cast shadows and darken. Very sad
February 28th, 2025 06:49
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