Comments received on poems by Maplespal
Thirteen treasons - I drink
sorenbarrett said:
a most interesting introduction to this piece that implies metaphor in that that is what magic is based on. Lovely
June 22nd, 2025 09:49
sorenbarrett said:
a most interesting introduction to this piece that implies metaphor in that that is what magic is based on. Lovely
June 22nd, 2025 09:49
A moment: Traumatized
sorenbarrett said:
Memory affected by post traumatic stress and possible amnesia. Sad and dark.
June 21st, 2025 08:43
sorenbarrett said:
Memory affected by post traumatic stress and possible amnesia. Sad and dark.
June 21st, 2025 08:43
A Thought: Let us
sorenbarrett said:
Technology has changed life and not always for the better. Going back sometimes is a good thing. Lovely
June 20th, 2025 16:38
sorenbarrett said:
Technology has changed life and not always for the better. Going back sometimes is a good thing. Lovely
June 20th, 2025 16:38
Shaken
sorenbarrett said:
We all have choices but not all of us are good with whichever one is made. When one is good with either choice then one is at peace. A lovely write
June 19th, 2025 18:04
sorenbarrett said:
We all have choices but not all of us are good with whichever one is made. When one is good with either choice then one is at peace. A lovely write
June 19th, 2025 18:04
Visiting
sorenbarrett said:
Another interesting thought. I often wondered if life forms from another world would even recognize us as more than bacteria or virus\' and even worth considering. A fun read
June 18th, 2025 16:55
sorenbarrett said:
Another interesting thought. I often wondered if life forms from another world would even recognize us as more than bacteria or virus\' and even worth considering. A fun read
June 18th, 2025 16:55
A misted morning
sorenbarrett said:
Clever the use of mist that is analogues to the morning mist in ones mind and eyes. There is a sense of calm in this poem as should accompany one\'s awakening. A most lovely poem of quiet and peace
June 17th, 2025 06:57
sorenbarrett said:
Clever the use of mist that is analogues to the morning mist in ones mind and eyes. There is a sense of calm in this poem as should accompany one\'s awakening. A most lovely poem of quiet and peace
June 17th, 2025 06:57
A moment: I grin
Poetic Licence said:
A deep and meaning write, clevery crafted from a different perspective, enjoyed the read
June 16th, 2025 21:09
Poetic Licence said:
A deep and meaning write, clevery crafted from a different perspective, enjoyed the read
June 16th, 2025 21:09
A moment: I grin
sorenbarrett said:
Such a feeling of knowledge kept that shifts power in a relationship to that of the viewer. A deep and lovely write
June 16th, 2025 16:11
sorenbarrett said:
Such a feeling of knowledge kept that shifts power in a relationship to that of the viewer. A deep and lovely write
June 16th, 2025 16:11
Let\'s tonight
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that is full of metaphor and runs to a conclusion that is implied
June 15th, 2025 07:15
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that is full of metaphor and runs to a conclusion that is implied
June 15th, 2025 07:15
Let us dance
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem in metaphor as well as literal. I speaks of closeness, understanding, love and cooperation. A fave
June 14th, 2025 08:12
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem in metaphor as well as literal. I speaks of closeness, understanding, love and cooperation. A fave
June 14th, 2025 08:12
Reflecting through
sorenbarrett said:
It was Narcissus that was infatuated with his own reflection and yet here self reflection is not one of vanity but of understanding.. A lovely poem well written.
June 13th, 2025 05:02
sorenbarrett said:
It was Narcissus that was infatuated with his own reflection and yet here self reflection is not one of vanity but of understanding.. A lovely poem well written.
June 13th, 2025 05:02
Central fire
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor this poem speaks of culture and beliefs that hole it together and the society it comes from. Very nice
June 12th, 2025 06:53
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor this poem speaks of culture and beliefs that hole it together and the society it comes from. Very nice
June 12th, 2025 06:53
Story my night
sorenbarrett said:
Enticing, inviting, with such a home and safe feel. It makes one feel a child again yet brings up the emotion of young love and fairytale endings. So nice
June 11th, 2025 06:37
sorenbarrett said:
Enticing, inviting, with such a home and safe feel. It makes one feel a child again yet brings up the emotion of young love and fairytale endings. So nice
June 11th, 2025 06:37
Teach me
sorenbarrett said:
This is a lovely write with such good rhyme and flow from beginning to end. Nicely done
June 10th, 2025 05:10
sorenbarrett said:
This is a lovely write with such good rhyme and flow from beginning to end. Nicely done
June 10th, 2025 05:10
This is what
sorenbarrett said:
A clever write that utilizes the sense as a numbering system to elucidate the ways in which thought is used. Very nicely done
June 9th, 2025 05:21
sorenbarrett said:
A clever write that utilizes the sense as a numbering system to elucidate the ways in which thought is used. Very nicely done
June 9th, 2025 05:21
Now I live
RSM0812 said:
This poem conveys to me a transition of 2 to 1. A broken relationship and the hope to move on. Also about a person\'s limititations and self awareness. Great write.
June 8th, 2025 08:45
RSM0812 said:
This poem conveys to me a transition of 2 to 1. A broken relationship and the hope to move on. Also about a person\'s limititations and self awareness. Great write.
June 8th, 2025 08:45
Now I live
sorenbarrett said:
I could feel the pain of individuality in this poem and the lack of acceptance by others. The power of this poem comes in its declaration of being oneself as more important than affiliation and bending to the desires of others. Lovely
June 8th, 2025 07:16
sorenbarrett said:
I could feel the pain of individuality in this poem and the lack of acceptance by others. The power of this poem comes in its declaration of being oneself as more important than affiliation and bending to the desires of others. Lovely
June 8th, 2025 07:16
3 more dumps
sorenbarrett said:
A great set that each present conflicting images that counterbalance each other. Very nice presentation of beauty and illusion
June 7th, 2025 06:58
sorenbarrett said:
A great set that each present conflicting images that counterbalance each other. Very nice presentation of beauty and illusion
June 7th, 2025 06:58
Rumour my night
sorenbarrett said:
So identifiable it seems one\'s own thoughts not that of the poet. Well worded in images familiar it speaks to the inner self. Images well painted call up visions of the past, dreamlike it speaks from visions best left undisturbed awakening the slumbering dead. It bleeds unrest and weakening from the hemorrhage it sleeps. A wonderful poem that deserves a fave
June 5th, 2025 05:52
sorenbarrett said:
So identifiable it seems one\'s own thoughts not that of the poet. Well worded in images familiar it speaks to the inner self. Images well painted call up visions of the past, dreamlike it speaks from visions best left undisturbed awakening the slumbering dead. It bleeds unrest and weakening from the hemorrhage it sleeps. A wonderful poem that deserves a fave
June 5th, 2025 05:52
The levee breaks
sorenbarrett said:
Such transitions are not easy and this poem worded them well
June 4th, 2025 05:45
sorenbarrett said:
Such transitions are not easy and this poem worded them well
June 4th, 2025 05:45
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