Comments received on poems by Maplespal
Blinded
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely penned this poem speaks of darkness and the spark of truth can light the way. Nicely done.
April 3rd, 2025 07:20
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely penned this poem speaks of darkness and the spark of truth can light the way. Nicely done.
April 3rd, 2025 07:20
Painted
sorenbarrett said:
We see what we want to see let it be of love, charity, kindness to oneself and all around you. A wonderful poem
April 2nd, 2025 06:48
sorenbarrett said:
We see what we want to see let it be of love, charity, kindness to oneself and all around you. A wonderful poem
April 2nd, 2025 06:48
Arching death
sorenbarrett said:
In the war of life death falls indiscriminately on all. We kill without seeing and die without knowing. A sad and powerful poem
April 1st, 2025 05:42
sorenbarrett said:
In the war of life death falls indiscriminately on all. We kill without seeing and die without knowing. A sad and powerful poem
April 1st, 2025 05:42
With birds
Poetic Licence said:
The desire to be free, nicely expressed, enjoyed the read
March 31st, 2025 08:31
Poetic Licence said:
The desire to be free, nicely expressed, enjoyed the read
March 31st, 2025 08:31
With birds
sorenbarrett said:
I think that most people have dreamed of being birds whether in dreams or as pilots of planes we long to soar. A lovely poem
March 31st, 2025 07:54
sorenbarrett said:
I think that most people have dreamed of being birds whether in dreams or as pilots of planes we long to soar. A lovely poem
March 31st, 2025 07:54
3 for thee
sorenbarrett said:
Although disjointed these three poems seem related. Very nice
March 30th, 2025 08:57
sorenbarrett said:
Although disjointed these three poems seem related. Very nice
March 30th, 2025 08:57
A thing I do
sorenbarrett said:
Imagination knows no bounds and with it one can rationalize almost anything. A fun write
March 29th, 2025 07:24
sorenbarrett said:
Imagination knows no bounds and with it one can rationalize almost anything. A fun write
March 29th, 2025 07:24
I will always
Poetic Licence said:
A passionate statement of their pride and dedication to their country, enjoyed the read
March 28th, 2025 20:43
Poetic Licence said:
A passionate statement of their pride and dedication to their country, enjoyed the read
March 28th, 2025 20:43
The day to come
Poetic Licence said:
That is simply a wonderful write, enjoyed the read
March 27th, 2025 07:38
Poetic Licence said:
That is simply a wonderful write, enjoyed the read
March 27th, 2025 07:38
The day to come
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful poetic description of the cycle of light and day. Masterful!
March 27th, 2025 06:28
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful poetic description of the cycle of light and day. Masterful!
March 27th, 2025 06:28
It peers
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great metaphor and so well penned in this magnificent poem a fave
March 26th, 2025 05:43
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great metaphor and so well penned in this magnificent poem a fave
March 26th, 2025 05:43
It peers
MDStone said:
Wow, well written with great expression and feeling… but not on the sleeve. Thanks for sharing.
March 26th, 2025 05:20
MDStone said:
Wow, well written with great expression and feeling… but not on the sleeve. Thanks for sharing.
March 26th, 2025 05:20
The label
sorenbarrett said:
A horrific image presented in how we look for the easy way out and find it is not the easy way. What we do to others when we take that path. A dark write that presents the consequences of artificial peace. Nicely written a fave
March 25th, 2025 05:34
sorenbarrett said:
A horrific image presented in how we look for the easy way out and find it is not the easy way. What we do to others when we take that path. A dark write that presents the consequences of artificial peace. Nicely written a fave
March 25th, 2025 05:34
It\'s too late
sorenbarrett said:
Some times one has to admit defeat to the clock of time and move on. A great poem of regret.
March 24th, 2025 06:50
sorenbarrett said:
Some times one has to admit defeat to the clock of time and move on. A great poem of regret.
March 24th, 2025 06:50
Processing a thought
Poetic Licence said:
This is a great write, the progress of a poem and how it developes, loved the lay out, enjoyed the read
March 23rd, 2025 11:54
Poetic Licence said:
This is a great write, the progress of a poem and how it developes, loved the lay out, enjoyed the read
March 23rd, 2025 11:54
Processing a thought
sorenbarrett said:
Ah the evolution of a poem. Many times this process occurs to me in the writing and then the process of selection. Which will it be. This is the first time that I have seen this process laid out in sequential poems. Lovely
March 23rd, 2025 06:44
sorenbarrett said:
Ah the evolution of a poem. Many times this process occurs to me in the writing and then the process of selection. Which will it be. This is the first time that I have seen this process laid out in sequential poems. Lovely
March 23rd, 2025 06:44
Lost time
Poetic Licence said:
A well written write with an individual way of reflection, enjoyed the read
March 22nd, 2025 10:38
Poetic Licence said:
A well written write with an individual way of reflection, enjoyed the read
March 22nd, 2025 10:38
Lost time
sorenbarrett said:
What a marvelous reflection on things past and learned now neglected. A great insight. Very well written this poem encapsulates wisdom seldom thought of.
March 22nd, 2025 06:39
sorenbarrett said:
What a marvelous reflection on things past and learned now neglected. A great insight. Very well written this poem encapsulates wisdom seldom thought of.
March 22nd, 2025 06:39
Focusing out of distraught
sorenbarrett said:
This poem gives a hint in the first line that the snow being mentioned is on the screen. That old time vision on the television is now lost to new generations but late night fuzz or disconnected static is easy to zone out to. Good write
March 21st, 2025 06:37
sorenbarrett said:
This poem gives a hint in the first line that the snow being mentioned is on the screen. That old time vision on the television is now lost to new generations but late night fuzz or disconnected static is easy to zone out to. Good write
March 21st, 2025 06:37
What path
Poetic Licence said:
Trees are the all seeing wise men of the world, have seen so much and would have many stories to tell, enjoyed the read
March 20th, 2025 09:33
Poetic Licence said:
Trees are the all seeing wise men of the world, have seen so much and would have many stories to tell, enjoyed the read
March 20th, 2025 09:33
What path
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write of beauty overlooked by many, stories told, a world to most unknown. Nature at its best they having millions of years head start on our species. Nicely written a fave
March 20th, 2025 05:54
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write of beauty overlooked by many, stories told, a world to most unknown. Nature at its best they having millions of years head start on our species. Nicely written a fave
March 20th, 2025 05:54
Canadian I am
Poetic Licence said:
A very valid write considering the rubbish the tango is talking, hopefully it will never happen, Canada is a much more country than America in every aspect, enjoyed the read
March 19th, 2025 13:30
Poetic Licence said:
A very valid write considering the rubbish the tango is talking, hopefully it will never happen, Canada is a much more country than America in every aspect, enjoyed the read
March 19th, 2025 13:30
Canadian I am
Poetic Licence said:
Some of your writes lately I have not been able to read, they are way over to the right of the screen,this one included
March 19th, 2025 07:09
Poetic Licence said:
Some of your writes lately I have not been able to read, they are way over to the right of the screen,this one included
March 19th, 2025 07:09
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