Comments received on poems by Maplespal
Questions for you (1) & You\'re Mine
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
These poems are so deep and emotional. I love how they tie dreams, thoughts, and even survival to connection with another person. It feels haunting but beautiful at the same time.
September 7th, 2025 08:39
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
These poems are so deep and emotional. I love how they tie dreams, thoughts, and even survival to connection with another person. It feels haunting but beautiful at the same time.
September 7th, 2025 08:39
Questions for you (1) & You\'re Mine
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting concept that is so commonly voiced. It is meant as an endearment but in meaning can be taken as possession. Very thought provoking and well written
September 7th, 2025 08:17
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting concept that is so commonly voiced. It is meant as an endearment but in meaning can be taken as possession. Very thought provoking and well written
September 7th, 2025 08:17
A couple for ya
sorenbarrett said:
How different we behave in private. The way we treat others governed by how we wish to be perceived. Good write
September 6th, 2025 07:22
sorenbarrett said:
How different we behave in private. The way we treat others governed by how we wish to be perceived. Good write
September 6th, 2025 07:22
Portraits
sorenbarrett said:
Ah now here we have a group of adjectives talking and interacting in a most understandable manner. Out of the chaos of the crowd it feels very relatable and identifiable. Personification makes this a wonderful poem a fave
September 5th, 2025 06:03
sorenbarrett said:
Ah now here we have a group of adjectives talking and interacting in a most understandable manner. Out of the chaos of the crowd it feels very relatable and identifiable. Personification makes this a wonderful poem a fave
September 5th, 2025 06:03
Watching fire
sorenbarrett said:
Yes I do and in its hypnotic flames and the seduction of the raising smoke many a poem is born. A fave
September 4th, 2025 06:08
sorenbarrett said:
Yes I do and in its hypnotic flames and the seduction of the raising smoke many a poem is born. A fave
September 4th, 2025 06:08
Plates
sorenbarrett said:
This was a most enjoyable light read that left a smile. Very nice
September 3rd, 2025 06:09
sorenbarrett said:
This was a most enjoyable light read that left a smile. Very nice
September 3rd, 2025 06:09
A good morning to us
sorenbarrett said:
A bright greeting for all this poem starts the day with sun and light. A lovely beginning to another day of life
September 2nd, 2025 05:23
sorenbarrett said:
A bright greeting for all this poem starts the day with sun and light. A lovely beginning to another day of life
September 2nd, 2025 05:23
It hit hard
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem with feelings of loss, loneliness and longing. A mournful poem that hits hard. Well written
September 1st, 2025 09:58
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem with feelings of loss, loneliness and longing. A mournful poem that hits hard. Well written
September 1st, 2025 09:58
Yesterday
sorenbarrett said:
Charon\'s boat in a sled. Quite a ride and quite a poem. Nice one
August 28th, 2025 08:18
sorenbarrett said:
Charon\'s boat in a sled. Quite a ride and quite a poem. Nice one
August 28th, 2025 08:18
Angered moments - Watching steps
sorenbarrett said:
Standing up to a threat often is sufficient. A good read
August 27th, 2025 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
Standing up to a threat often is sufficient. A good read
August 27th, 2025 05:05
Spaceships
sorenbarrett said:
We all had space ships and some that never grew up still have them I envy them sometimes. A lovely write
August 26th, 2025 06:51
sorenbarrett said:
We all had space ships and some that never grew up still have them I envy them sometimes. A lovely write
August 26th, 2025 06:51
It\'s a bedtime thing
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with dharm and a sense of familiarity that gives it a home like feeling of familiarity. Very nicely done.
August 25th, 2025 05:54
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with dharm and a sense of familiarity that gives it a home like feeling of familiarity. Very nicely done.
August 25th, 2025 05:54
Why not share 4 poems
sorenbarrett said:
A wide diversity in these poems from missing someone lost to tripping over a cat into the pool. Several shorts nicely done
August 24th, 2025 06:39
sorenbarrett said:
A wide diversity in these poems from missing someone lost to tripping over a cat into the pool. Several shorts nicely done
August 24th, 2025 06:39
Jealous sun
sorenbarrett said:
Jealous sun reminds me of an old Louis Armstrong song (That lucky old sun). A bit sad and a bit nostalgic a wonderful write
August 23rd, 2025 07:18
sorenbarrett said:
Jealous sun reminds me of an old Louis Armstrong song (That lucky old sun). A bit sad and a bit nostalgic a wonderful write
August 23rd, 2025 07:18
Staying silent
sorenbarrett said:
Silence the verbal hiding that is option to prey under attack. Run fight or freeze as an attempt to disguise oneself. Here freezing in speech is that hiding. A lovely write.
August 22nd, 2025 08:21
sorenbarrett said:
Silence the verbal hiding that is option to prey under attack. Run fight or freeze as an attempt to disguise oneself. Here freezing in speech is that hiding. A lovely write.
August 22nd, 2025 08:21
Pay up
sorenbarrett said:
And so it is. We all have different gods and each is believed to be stronger and better than others. How many wars over this. A wonderful write
August 21st, 2025 14:40
sorenbarrett said:
And so it is. We all have different gods and each is believed to be stronger and better than others. How many wars over this. A wonderful write
August 21st, 2025 14:40
Never forgotten
sorenbarrett said:
A tender poem of missing that special someone that gave us birth and nurtured us through trial and growth. Well done and heart felt
August 20th, 2025 15:39
sorenbarrett said:
A tender poem of missing that special someone that gave us birth and nurtured us through trial and growth. Well done and heart felt
August 20th, 2025 15:39
Thoughts of seams
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of lost love that is not understood. The love itself misunderstood and the falling apart hard to accept. Heart breaking. Nicely written
August 19th, 2025 14:52
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of lost love that is not understood. The love itself misunderstood and the falling apart hard to accept. Heart breaking. Nicely written
August 19th, 2025 14:52
Past messages
sorenbarrett said:
This brought to mind the Kabalistic view of the angel\'s alphabet where it is believed that the answers to all questions and history lies in the stars and that one that understands it can read all knowledge. A fun read
August 18th, 2025 06:37
sorenbarrett said:
This brought to mind the Kabalistic view of the angel\'s alphabet where it is believed that the answers to all questions and history lies in the stars and that one that understands it can read all knowledge. A fun read
August 18th, 2025 06:37
Where the mind is
sorenbarrett said:
Imagination a powerful and wonderful tool. Very nicely done
August 17th, 2025 09:03
sorenbarrett said:
Imagination a powerful and wonderful tool. Very nicely done
August 17th, 2025 09:03
Where the mind is
Demar Desu said:
Like a puppy having to train the mind to sit still and enjoy where we are….but now I ask myself How did I get in this trash can?
This is a great poem I love it…
August 17th, 2025 08:07
Demar Desu said:
Like a puppy having to train the mind to sit still and enjoy where we are….but now I ask myself How did I get in this trash can?
This is a great poem I love it…
August 17th, 2025 08:07
Confession
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful and gentle expression of growing fondness and love for another. Nicely expressed in tender almost shy poetic words
August 16th, 2025 08:39
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful and gentle expression of growing fondness and love for another. Nicely expressed in tender almost shy poetic words
August 16th, 2025 08:39
and how are you?
sorenbarrett said:
I love the conversive nature of this poem as it gos on to describe the pain and confusion then simply asks (and how are you) that feel makes it a fave
August 15th, 2025 05:27
sorenbarrett said:
I love the conversive nature of this poem as it gos on to describe the pain and confusion then simply asks (and how are you) that feel makes it a fave
August 15th, 2025 05:27
3 different ones
sorenbarrett said:
Three poems in logical succession that tell a story of pain and loss of fading memories and trauma. This poem speaks from the shadows. Heartfelt and sad it calls out in whispers and cries.
August 14th, 2025 07:34
sorenbarrett said:
Three poems in logical succession that tell a story of pain and loss of fading memories and trauma. This poem speaks from the shadows. Heartfelt and sad it calls out in whispers and cries.
August 14th, 2025 07:34
What to paint
sorenbarrett said:
A most thoughtful poem that poses the question of would another\'s painting of themself help one understand better than the picture one paints in their own mind. Very nicely done
August 13th, 2025 06:47
sorenbarrett said:
A most thoughtful poem that poses the question of would another\'s painting of themself help one understand better than the picture one paints in their own mind. Very nicely done
August 13th, 2025 06:47
It\'s drying
sorenbarrett said:
A question with only the answer because. It leaves the reader asking what is frozen to dry. It has a ring to the rhyme that comes around and around as if frozen in the air. Nice
August 12th, 2025 16:03
sorenbarrett said:
A question with only the answer because. It leaves the reader asking what is frozen to dry. It has a ring to the rhyme that comes around and around as if frozen in the air. Nice
August 12th, 2025 16:03
Manifested view
sorenbarrett said:
Too many people fit this description nicely worded in verse and rhyme. A fun read that needs to be said
August 11th, 2025 05:38
sorenbarrett said:
Too many people fit this description nicely worded in verse and rhyme. A fun read that needs to be said
August 11th, 2025 05:38
Watching you
Bella Shepard said:
I love the suspense. Constant vigilance required in an age of, as some like to say, alternative facts, who to believe? Great write!!
August 10th, 2025 09:38
Bella Shepard said:
I love the suspense. Constant vigilance required in an age of, as some like to say, alternative facts, who to believe? Great write!!
August 10th, 2025 09:38
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