Comments received on poems by Maplespal
I won\'t say the words
Bobby O said:
Before the reaper took your moves
Wow, they explain so much with such a simple metaphor and maybe we all gotta go through it so it applies everywhere every day really nice.way to extend a point
October 16th, 2024 04:01
Bobby O said:
Before the reaper took your moves
Wow, they explain so much with such a simple metaphor and maybe we all gotta go through it so it applies everywhere every day really nice.way to extend a point
October 16th, 2024 04:01
I won\'t say the words
Doggerel Dave said:
The multisensorial nature of memory clear here in a rich tribute just long enough and complete unto itself.
October 15th, 2024 23:08
Doggerel Dave said:
The multisensorial nature of memory clear here in a rich tribute just long enough and complete unto itself.
October 15th, 2024 23:08
Wandering
sorenbarrett said:
A thought that occurs to many and yet, eccept in rare cases, one always goes first. A poem with a haunting feel
October 13th, 2024 15:28
sorenbarrett said:
A thought that occurs to many and yet, eccept in rare cases, one always goes first. A poem with a haunting feel
October 13th, 2024 15:28
Where I you will find
Dan Williams said:
All is nice, \"all while the sun, its heavy head it lifts\" is special. Very nice.
October 12th, 2024 23:43
Dan Williams said:
All is nice, \"all while the sun, its heavy head it lifts\" is special. Very nice.
October 12th, 2024 23:43
Stopped drops
The Learning Poet said:
This poem has a nice rhythm to it! Reminds me of the sound of a dripping faucet.
October 12th, 2024 06:31
The Learning Poet said:
This poem has a nice rhythm to it! Reminds me of the sound of a dripping faucet.
October 12th, 2024 06:31
Where I you will find
peet said:
Captures the mornings very well. Nice write. Keep it coming,
October 11th, 2024 13:47
peet said:
Captures the mornings very well. Nice write. Keep it coming,
October 11th, 2024 13:47
Where I you will find
sorenbarrett said:
When one loves someone they are always near. A very nice write beautiful
October 11th, 2024 08:05
sorenbarrett said:
When one loves someone they are always near. A very nice write beautiful
October 11th, 2024 08:05
Echoing across
Dan Williams said:
That\'s the thing; after all the mental gymnastics you ended up still thinking of your lover. Nice, true.
October 4th, 2024 00:35
Dan Williams said:
That\'s the thing; after all the mental gymnastics you ended up still thinking of your lover. Nice, true.
October 4th, 2024 00:35
Echoing across
sorenbarrett said:
Obcessive preoccupation that comes with seperation or loss. Touching
October 3rd, 2024 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
Obcessive preoccupation that comes with seperation or loss. Touching
October 3rd, 2024 04:35
Level the fields, I always feared, & the other side
sorenbarrett said:
Three poems intertwined that proceed to resolve in the last. Nicely written.
September 29th, 2024 06:57
sorenbarrett said:
Three poems intertwined that proceed to resolve in the last. Nicely written.
September 29th, 2024 06:57
You allow, why?
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Wow, beautiful write Maple! I\'m impressed, this touched me. Thanks for sharing!!👍
September 24th, 2024 09:50
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Wow, beautiful write Maple! I\'m impressed, this touched me. Thanks for sharing!!👍
September 24th, 2024 09:50
last nights end
Dan Williams said:
Dare I add \"easily read\"? Clever and even amusing.
September 22nd, 2024 01:23
Dan Williams said:
Dare I add \"easily read\"? Clever and even amusing.
September 22nd, 2024 01:23
last nights end
Cheeky Missy said:
Ooh! This is so charming and verily quite beautiful, so much so it nearly takes away my breath! How winsomely rendered with a warming poignancy which takes away all reservations in the glow of sweet rest. Thank you so very much for sharing.
September 21st, 2024 16:11
Cheeky Missy said:
Ooh! This is so charming and verily quite beautiful, so much so it nearly takes away my breath! How winsomely rendered with a warming poignancy which takes away all reservations in the glow of sweet rest. Thank you so very much for sharing.
September 21st, 2024 16:11
Where you belong
Doggerel Dave said:
Colonialism and the big carve up. Africa never stood a chance.
September 19th, 2024 17:31
Doggerel Dave said:
Colonialism and the big carve up. Africa never stood a chance.
September 19th, 2024 17:31
A feeling to write
arial said:
Don\'t need to make it pretty and that\'s the hidden beauty of poetry ..just write your mind..and you will see a masterpiece yourself presents to you..as an intellectual being..
September 13th, 2024 12:15
arial said:
Don\'t need to make it pretty and that\'s the hidden beauty of poetry ..just write your mind..and you will see a masterpiece yourself presents to you..as an intellectual being..
September 13th, 2024 12:15
A feeling to write
sorenbarrett said:
I too feel compelled to write things and it doesn\'t matter if they mean anything to others as long as they do to you.
September 13th, 2024 06:02
sorenbarrett said:
I too feel compelled to write things and it doesn\'t matter if they mean anything to others as long as they do to you.
September 13th, 2024 06:02
Me described by-way-of “in & out”
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re too fun thus delineated to effect, this ramble through the years and days of your life in such a fashion delightful. Thank you very much for sharing! Beautifully rendered with excellent details and a subtle poignancy.
September 11th, 2024 08:47
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re too fun thus delineated to effect, this ramble through the years and days of your life in such a fashion delightful. Thank you very much for sharing! Beautifully rendered with excellent details and a subtle poignancy.
September 11th, 2024 08:47
Me described by-way-of “in & out”
Doggerel Dave said:
After that I would have felt better, but how do you feel? (In monorhyme please🙃)
Enjoyed.
September 11th, 2024 07:20
Doggerel Dave said:
After that I would have felt better, but how do you feel? (In monorhyme please🙃)
Enjoyed.
September 11th, 2024 07:20
Me described by-way-of “in & out”
sorenbarrett said:
That\'s a lot of ins and outs. A most fun read
September 11th, 2024 06:13
sorenbarrett said:
That\'s a lot of ins and outs. A most fun read
September 11th, 2024 06:13
The power of belief & They are only painted
Mutley Ravishes said:
So many taking it all
Literally
Not looking at it
Symbolically
September 10th, 2024 18:49
Mutley Ravishes said:
So many taking it all
Literally
Not looking at it
Symbolically
September 10th, 2024 18:49
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