Comments received on poems by Maplespal
It’s without you
kwrites said:
This has to be my today\'s best read! loved it
August 21st, 2024 04:33
kwrites said:
This has to be my today\'s best read! loved it
August 21st, 2024 04:33
Torpedoes
Bella Shepard said:
Mistakes can happen and things go awry, but I\'m sure it doesn\'t lessen the remorse or regret when something such as catastrophic as this happens. A fine write from one who knows firsthand the perils of war.
August 20th, 2024 13:19
Bella Shepard said:
Mistakes can happen and things go awry, but I\'m sure it doesn\'t lessen the remorse or regret when something such as catastrophic as this happens. A fine write from one who knows firsthand the perils of war.
August 20th, 2024 13:19
Torpedoes
Doggerel Dave said:
You\'ve cracked the fact, and made it real that this happens more frequently in war than many times anyone lets on.
August 20th, 2024 07:48
Doggerel Dave said:
You\'ve cracked the fact, and made it real that this happens more frequently in war than many times anyone lets on.
August 20th, 2024 07:48
Torpedoes
sorenbarrett said:
Mistakes can be costly and here in few words this strikes home. Sounds historical but could be metaphorical. Nicely written
August 20th, 2024 06:14
sorenbarrett said:
Mistakes can be costly and here in few words this strikes home. Sounds historical but could be metaphorical. Nicely written
August 20th, 2024 06:14
The Unfinished House of Stone
Bella Shepard said:
Sometimes the simplest answer is the best. Good for you!
August 19th, 2024 09:28
Bella Shepard said:
Sometimes the simplest answer is the best. Good for you!
August 19th, 2024 09:28
The Unfinished House of Stone
Doggerel Dave said:
Up there with all other explanations i\'ve ever heard.
Neat simple explanation may well win the day.
August 19th, 2024 06:36
Doggerel Dave said:
Up there with all other explanations i\'ve ever heard.
Neat simple explanation may well win the day.
August 19th, 2024 06:36
The Unfinished House of Stone
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read and different indeed. Nicely done
August 19th, 2024 05:59
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read and different indeed. Nicely done
August 19th, 2024 05:59
Cushion, The Wait, & The Tea
sorenbarrett said:
I have know such people that continue to set the table for two after one is no longer there. Habit of wishful thinking.
August 18th, 2024 06:59
sorenbarrett said:
I have know such people that continue to set the table for two after one is no longer there. Habit of wishful thinking.
August 18th, 2024 06:59
The Beat & Saint-Tropez
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images and memories of beautiful places. Lovely
August 17th, 2024 09:02
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images and memories of beautiful places. Lovely
August 17th, 2024 09:02
Lowered
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and even heart rending this poem shows devotion and love of one lost. Nicely written
August 16th, 2024 05:16
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and even heart rending this poem shows devotion and love of one lost. Nicely written
August 16th, 2024 05:16
Heavy Steps
sorenbarrett said:
A sad write of parting with a lifetime companion. Well expressed
August 15th, 2024 05:26
sorenbarrett said:
A sad write of parting with a lifetime companion. Well expressed
August 15th, 2024 05:26
Sleepless
Bella Shepard said:
The overwhelming sadness of death, compounded by its inevitable aftermath is so well presented in this poem. My deepest symapthy for what you\'ve been through.
August 14th, 2024 08:12
Bella Shepard said:
The overwhelming sadness of death, compounded by its inevitable aftermath is so well presented in this poem. My deepest symapthy for what you\'ve been through.
August 14th, 2024 08:12
Sleepless
sorenbarrett said:
The bureaucracy of death. Incredible that even in death there is no peace. A wonderful write.
August 14th, 2024 06:35
sorenbarrett said:
The bureaucracy of death. Incredible that even in death there is no peace. A wonderful write.
August 14th, 2024 06:35
14th poem for: “T.N.D” - Cent or Dollar
sorenbarrett said:
An innovative approach to telling someone that you will remember them when no one else will. A fun read.
August 13th, 2024 05:57
sorenbarrett said:
An innovative approach to telling someone that you will remember them when no one else will. A fun read.
August 13th, 2024 05:57
13th poem for: “T.N.D” - Quiet morning
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and dark a poem of loss and death. Nicely rhymed and in good meter it flows well all the way to the tragic end.
August 12th, 2024 06:06
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and dark a poem of loss and death. Nicely rhymed and in good meter it flows well all the way to the tragic end.
August 12th, 2024 06:06
12th poem for: “T.N.D” - Please Stay
sorenbarrett said:
A plea for continued union in verse. The message is clearly sent and I hope heard.
August 11th, 2024 06:50
sorenbarrett said:
A plea for continued union in verse. The message is clearly sent and I hope heard.
August 11th, 2024 06:50
Dinner Date
Bella Shepard said:
Memory can be deceptive, especially when love is concerned. So sad, but so well written.
August 10th, 2024 10:06
Bella Shepard said:
Memory can be deceptive, especially when love is concerned. So sad, but so well written.
August 10th, 2024 10:06
Dinner Date
sorenbarrett said:
A most fun read where expectations were exceeded in the last of the poem. Memory is a problem at times, especially as we grow older. Thanks for the share.
August 10th, 2024 07:03
sorenbarrett said:
A most fun read where expectations were exceeded in the last of the poem. Memory is a problem at times, especially as we grow older. Thanks for the share.
August 10th, 2024 07:03
11th poem for - “T.N.D” - Trinkets
2781 said:
I spent two years crying after losing someone, but the memories and messages were ultimately healing.
There\'s always a new dawn.
August 9th, 2024 06:35
2781 said:
I spent two years crying after losing someone, but the memories and messages were ultimately healing.
There\'s always a new dawn.
August 9th, 2024 06:35
11th poem for - “T.N.D” - Trinkets
sorenbarrett said:
Well rhymed this poem of parting. It is unclear if this is metaphoric of final departure of literal of a temporary one either way it works. Lovely
August 9th, 2024 06:02
sorenbarrett said:
Well rhymed this poem of parting. It is unclear if this is metaphoric of final departure of literal of a temporary one either way it works. Lovely
August 9th, 2024 06:02
What Makes us Superior?
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed point of view does determine what we call superior. It is all in a point of view. Nicely written
August 8th, 2024 07:06
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed point of view does determine what we call superior. It is all in a point of view. Nicely written
August 8th, 2024 07:06
What Makes us Superior?
Doggerel Dave said:
Not sure what you are saying with this. Superior? Mankind has made a right fuck up of it then. .
August 8th, 2024 05:27
Doggerel Dave said:
Not sure what you are saying with this. Superior? Mankind has made a right fuck up of it then. .
August 8th, 2024 05:27
10th poem for - “T.N.D” - How I Feel
Bella Shepard said:
This is so poignant and sad, yet the wonderful memories you recount are so sweet and full of love. A beautiful write!
August 7th, 2024 15:23
Bella Shepard said:
This is so poignant and sad, yet the wonderful memories you recount are so sweet and full of love. A beautiful write!
August 7th, 2024 15:23
10th poem for - “T.N.D” - How I Feel
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and moving a poem of loss and missing the one that is lost. Feelings of sorrow are portrayed here.
August 7th, 2024 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and moving a poem of loss and missing the one that is lost. Feelings of sorrow are portrayed here.
August 7th, 2024 04:37
9th poem for - “T.N.D” - Silenced
Bella Shepard said:
This poem speaks to a wonderful relationship grounded in mutual respect and love. There is the sadness of loss, yet the memory of all that was shared. Beautiful!
August 6th, 2024 13:09
Bella Shepard said:
This poem speaks to a wonderful relationship grounded in mutual respect and love. There is the sadness of loss, yet the memory of all that was shared. Beautiful!
August 6th, 2024 13:09
9th poem for - “T.N.D” - Silenced
2781 said:
It\'s hard for me to be concise, because of the last few lines....
I loved the way you seemed to get along with your differences-
If only...
August 6th, 2024 08:10
2781 said:
It\'s hard for me to be concise, because of the last few lines....
I loved the way you seemed to get along with your differences-
If only...
August 6th, 2024 08:10
9th poem for - “T.N.D” - Silenced
sorenbarrett said:
Sad the tone to this poem, one of loss and the missing of what once was.
August 6th, 2024 05:35
sorenbarrett said:
Sad the tone to this poem, one of loss and the missing of what once was.
August 6th, 2024 05:35
8th poem for - “T.N.D” - Roots
sorenbarrett said:
Nice memories contained in this short piece. Well expressed.
August 5th, 2024 07:32
sorenbarrett said:
Nice memories contained in this short piece. Well expressed.
August 5th, 2024 07:32
« Return to the profile of Maplespal
