Comments received on poems by Maplespal
Other suns
sorenbarrett said:
Literally a message to all to take care of where we live and metaphorically as well to take care of our mental social and emotional world
December 28th, 2024 12:21
sorenbarrett said:
Literally a message to all to take care of where we live and metaphorically as well to take care of our mental social and emotional world
December 28th, 2024 12:21
Other suns
Bella Shepard said:
We still find wonderment in the heavens, even when we know our days are numbered, it can\'t be helped. A very thought provoking write my friend.
December 28th, 2024 12:17
Bella Shepard said:
We still find wonderment in the heavens, even when we know our days are numbered, it can\'t be helped. A very thought provoking write my friend.
December 28th, 2024 12:17
Other suns
Poetic Licence said:
We have no choice but to make do, enjoyed the read
December 28th, 2024 12:16
Poetic Licence said:
We have no choice but to make do, enjoyed the read
December 28th, 2024 12:16
Other suns
2781 said:
\"And they that be wise shall shine as the brightness of the firmament; and they that turn many to righteousness as the stars for ever and ever.\"
December 28th, 2024 07:24
2781 said:
\"And they that be wise shall shine as the brightness of the firmament; and they that turn many to righteousness as the stars for ever and ever.\"
December 28th, 2024 07:24
It\'s just a dream
2781 said:
\"For a dream comes through the multitude of business;
December 27th, 2024 09:44
2781 said:
\"For a dream comes through the multitude of business;
December 27th, 2024 09:44
It\'s just a dream
sorenbarrett said:
People plagued by nightmares suffer. This poem presents the author as a waiting source of help and safety. So nicely written as if watching from above. Lovely whether directed to a companion or a child.
December 27th, 2024 08:40
sorenbarrett said:
People plagued by nightmares suffer. This poem presents the author as a waiting source of help and safety. So nicely written as if watching from above. Lovely whether directed to a companion or a child.
December 27th, 2024 08:40
It\'s just a dream
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful but also tender poem of watching some one suffering recurring nightmares, very nicely written
December 27th, 2024 07:21
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful but also tender poem of watching some one suffering recurring nightmares, very nicely written
December 27th, 2024 07:21
It\'s just a dream
arqios said:
That was gripping and riveting; a powerful expression, to say the least.
December 27th, 2024 07:16
arqios said:
That was gripping and riveting; a powerful expression, to say the least.
December 27th, 2024 07:16
Silent drinks
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed the read, but kinda it is not real!!!
December 26th, 2024 12:05
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed the read, but kinda it is not real!!!
December 26th, 2024 12:05
Her own present
Poetic Licence said:
A nice bit of fun, my chuckle for the day.
December 25th, 2024 15:33
Poetic Licence said:
A nice bit of fun, my chuckle for the day.
December 25th, 2024 15:33
Her own present
sorenbarrett said:
Kids had hamsters and they got loose found them under the washer after a week or two. They made a second break and went back. The only place safe from the cat. A fun read well written
December 25th, 2024 14:07
sorenbarrett said:
Kids had hamsters and they got loose found them under the washer after a week or two. They made a second break and went back. The only place safe from the cat. A fun read well written
December 25th, 2024 14:07
The Visions\' view
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of longing and sadness a wistful look at the past. Well rhymed and worded this poem draws emotion from the reader
December 24th, 2024 14:23
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of longing and sadness a wistful look at the past. Well rhymed and worded this poem draws emotion from the reader
December 24th, 2024 14:23
The Visions\' view
Poetic Licence said:
A very clever piece of writing which i enjoyed reading, Thank you
December 24th, 2024 14:22
Poetic Licence said:
A very clever piece of writing which i enjoyed reading, Thank you
December 24th, 2024 14:22
Motion
rin said:
I walk along the walking path in my heart, yawning leisurely.
``Tenderness to You\\\\\\\'\\\\\\\' After reading this, I want you to post these words in the comments of other poems and spread them around like chain mail.
December 24th, 2024 01:27
rin said:
I walk along the walking path in my heart, yawning leisurely.
``Tenderness to You\\\\\\\'\\\\\\\' After reading this, I want you to post these words in the comments of other poems and spread them around like chain mail.
December 24th, 2024 01:27
Motion
sorenbarrett said:
A deeper thought than it would appear. I always go backwards when I\'m backing up, things fall down not up. Not only a fun read but a pensive one
December 23rd, 2024 15:43
sorenbarrett said:
A deeper thought than it would appear. I always go backwards when I\'m backing up, things fall down not up. Not only a fun read but a pensive one
December 23rd, 2024 15:43
The haunting game
Poetic Licence said:
A poem of some one looking in on their insecurities, well written
December 23rd, 2024 02:35
Poetic Licence said:
A poem of some one looking in on their insecurities, well written
December 23rd, 2024 02:35
The haunting game
sorenbarrett said:
The aspect of self reflection and evaluation comes through in this poem. Very nicely written
December 22nd, 2024 20:25
sorenbarrett said:
The aspect of self reflection and evaluation comes through in this poem. Very nicely written
December 22nd, 2024 20:25
No Eggs
Cassie58 said:
Happy to have a bacon sarney without an egg. I guess you are a bacon and eggs guy. Not a great start to your day, although your poem was fun to read and enjoyed.
December 21st, 2024 13:01
Cassie58 said:
Happy to have a bacon sarney without an egg. I guess you are a bacon and eggs guy. Not a great start to your day, although your poem was fun to read and enjoyed.
December 21st, 2024 13:01
No Eggs
sorenbarrett said:
Great use of familiar sayings and nursery rhymes to make a valid point that some things go together and are not the same when a part is missing.
December 21st, 2024 09:11
sorenbarrett said:
Great use of familiar sayings and nursery rhymes to make a valid point that some things go together and are not the same when a part is missing.
December 21st, 2024 09:11
Mind displays
Poetic Licence said:
A clever way to express ones desire to write poetry, and i think you do it well.
December 20th, 2024 12:45
Poetic Licence said:
A clever way to express ones desire to write poetry, and i think you do it well.
December 20th, 2024 12:45
Mind displays
sorenbarrett said:
Language is the paint our tongue the brush and we print it on paper for our eyes to see. Very nicely expessed in this poem
December 20th, 2024 11:35
sorenbarrett said:
Language is the paint our tongue the brush and we print it on paper for our eyes to see. Very nicely expessed in this poem
December 20th, 2024 11:35
I am up
sorenbarrett said:
A fun play on words with a great meaning and most uplifting.
December 19th, 2024 14:39
sorenbarrett said:
A fun play on words with a great meaning and most uplifting.
December 19th, 2024 14:39
Thought 2
Poetic Licence said:
Echo`s my sentiments exactly regarding exercise, clever and funny ditty
December 18th, 2024 18:32
Poetic Licence said:
Echo`s my sentiments exactly regarding exercise, clever and funny ditty
December 18th, 2024 18:32
Thought 2
sorenbarrett said:
What a truism for us and our society. Well said in such few words
December 18th, 2024 17:12
sorenbarrett said:
What a truism for us and our society. Well said in such few words
December 18th, 2024 17:12
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