Comments received on poems by Maplespal
Your calming song
sorenbarrett said:
Loss and missing the departed remains the theme in this poem. Nicely written
September 8th, 2024 06:29
sorenbarrett said:
Loss and missing the departed remains the theme in this poem. Nicely written
September 8th, 2024 06:29
I have to wait
sorenbarrett said:
This was a fun read. It has a somewhat nihilistic or I don’t care approach which I like. Dialogue type form fits this well. Nicely done.
September 6th, 2024 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
This was a fun read. It has a somewhat nihilistic or I don’t care approach which I like. Dialogue type form fits this well. Nicely done.
September 6th, 2024 04:44
What is the word?
Dan Williams said:
Damned if I know. Gets a person thinking though.
September 6th, 2024 01:08
Dan Williams said:
Damned if I know. Gets a person thinking though.
September 6th, 2024 01:08
How do I speak to you?
orchidee said:
Good write M.
Meanwhile in cuckoo land - I\'m horrible - don\'t speak to me. I only say \'Go away!\' (heehee).
September 5th, 2024 08:54
orchidee said:
Good write M.
Meanwhile in cuckoo land - I\'m horrible - don\'t speak to me. I only say \'Go away!\' (heehee).
September 5th, 2024 08:54
How do I speak to you?
sorenbarrett said:
A very poignant question. What do we say to one who is gone? What words can make a difference very nicely written
September 5th, 2024 06:10
sorenbarrett said:
A very poignant question. What do we say to one who is gone? What words can make a difference very nicely written
September 5th, 2024 06:10
What is the word?
sorenbarrett said:
I search for the same word. It seems somehow buried deep inside, but my memory cannot retrieve it. Weather in poems or in conversation I often search for it.. I think it sometimes is generosity charity love but no word can express it. Nicely done.
September 5th, 2024 05:56
sorenbarrett said:
I search for the same word. It seems somehow buried deep inside, but my memory cannot retrieve it. Weather in poems or in conversation I often search for it.. I think it sometimes is generosity charity love but no word can express it. Nicely done.
September 5th, 2024 05:56
What is the word?
Cheeky Missy said:
It was on the tip of my tongue until you asked. Um, just give me...an eternity. I\'ll get back to you.
September 4th, 2024 19:18
Cheeky Missy said:
It was on the tip of my tongue until you asked. Um, just give me...an eternity. I\'ll get back to you.
September 4th, 2024 19:18
What is the word?
sorenbarrett said:
As I get older, I find that I have this word finding problem. I identify with this poem and that I guess makes it very good. Loved it.
September 4th, 2024 12:51
sorenbarrett said:
As I get older, I find that I have this word finding problem. I identify with this poem and that I guess makes it very good. Loved it.
September 4th, 2024 12:51
Solitude with my you
sorenbarrett said:
Being true to a memory is a choice we at times need to make. Lovely write
August 31st, 2024 09:35
sorenbarrett said:
Being true to a memory is a choice we at times need to make. Lovely write
August 31st, 2024 09:35
a little insane
Bella Shepard said:
A little insanity can lead to some really good things, point in fact this poem; rhyming, timing, absolutely shining. Loved it!
August 30th, 2024 10:23
Bella Shepard said:
A little insanity can lead to some really good things, point in fact this poem; rhyming, timing, absolutely shining. Loved it!
August 30th, 2024 10:23
Just one more
sorenbarrett said:
One is never enough. Always the need for one more
August 28th, 2024 06:51
sorenbarrett said:
One is never enough. Always the need for one more
August 28th, 2024 06:51
I want one
sorenbarrett said:
Ah a last dance that is what life is about singing and dancing and a last dance is so final. Nice write my friend
August 27th, 2024 05:38
sorenbarrett said:
Ah a last dance that is what life is about singing and dancing and a last dance is so final. Nice write my friend
August 27th, 2024 05:38
Stepped in a puddle
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read on the surface. Deeper meaning is reflected and in its depths is a metaphor for life in general. I love the ending for many times we fear what is not to be feared and don\'t make the waves we thought they would. Loved it
August 26th, 2024 09:18
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read on the surface. Deeper meaning is reflected and in its depths is a metaphor for life in general. I love the ending for many times we fear what is not to be feared and don\'t make the waves we thought they would. Loved it
August 26th, 2024 09:18
Biorhythms
Bella Shepard said:
The physical, the emotional and the intellectual, neatly done.
August 25th, 2024 09:42
Bella Shepard said:
The physical, the emotional and the intellectual, neatly done.
August 25th, 2024 09:42
Biorhythms
sorenbarrett said:
Biorhythms below the surface of awareness flow in music unheard but danced to. Nicely done
August 25th, 2024 05:59
sorenbarrett said:
Biorhythms below the surface of awareness flow in music unheard but danced to. Nicely done
August 25th, 2024 05:59
The number of times
sorenbarrett said:
A longing and melancholic write. It provokes mixes feelings and general melancholy.
August 24th, 2024 09:26
sorenbarrett said:
A longing and melancholic write. It provokes mixes feelings and general melancholy.
August 24th, 2024 09:26
Your description & how without
sorenbarrett said:
Touching and such a sense of loss is conveyed. Sad but nicely written.
August 23rd, 2024 06:13
sorenbarrett said:
Touching and such a sense of loss is conveyed. Sad but nicely written.
August 23rd, 2024 06:13
Morning pep talk
sorenbarrett said:
Surprisingly refreshing the ending puts a whole new view upon the situation. Great message. Loved it.
August 22nd, 2024 05:23
sorenbarrett said:
Surprisingly refreshing the ending puts a whole new view upon the situation. Great message. Loved it.
August 22nd, 2024 05:23
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