Comments received on poems by Maplespal



I miss you
sorenbarrett said:

It is not just the person we miss but all the memories and the parts of life that go with them. Lovely

February 18th, 2025 14:26

Watching leaves fall
sorenbarrett said:

From the song \"surfin\' bird\" by the Rivintons this became the theme for Larry Bird the basketball superstar and the Twitter logo to honor the same Larry. A fun read

February 17th, 2025 08:15

Watching leaves fall
arqios said:

The feel is so real! Wonderful image movements as well. πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

February 17th, 2025 07:51

Message 3
Poetic Licence said:

A message that should be fully taken on board by all, enjoyed the read

February 16th, 2025 06:27

Message 3
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful message that should resonate in all of us

February 16th, 2025 06:18

Old songs
sorenbarrett said:

Memories of the past music resurrects past emotions and thoughts. A lovely write

February 15th, 2025 08:19

If I could sing
sorenbarrett said:

Music adds so much to the poetry of the lyrics and I too have thought if I could only write music as well as poetry what songs I\'d make. A most beautiful write.

February 14th, 2025 10:34

Touched
sorenbarrett said:

Ruminations over a past that is frozen in time. A deep dive into regret. Well spoken from the heart it is haunting

February 13th, 2025 06:29

Watching the drops
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful natural picture painted in this poem but deeper lies a metaphor of a life under storm. Very nicely written

February 12th, 2025 07:02

Watching the drops
arqios said:

I love me a rain poem, any day; not so much the rain, for there are days I’d rather it stay away. πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

February 12th, 2025 06:25

Before the cry
sorenbarrett said:

Sadness and lonliness pervade this poem. Well written

February 11th, 2025 08:40

Tuned time
sorenbarrett said:

Indeed music is closely tied to the emotions and soul. A most melodic write

February 10th, 2025 06:18

Charred
MDStone said:

Great feeling and emotion. It drew me in and caused me to feel the loneliness, the empty hole in the heart. Great writing!

February 9th, 2025 20:16

Charred
sorenbarrett said:

Touching and sad this poem reaches through time to those lost in the past. A very beautiful piece so well worded your poetry has grown immensely.

February 9th, 2025 12:35

Charred
Tony36 said:

Great write

February 9th, 2025 10:36

Behind the blink
Tony36 said:

Great write

February 8th, 2025 14:53

Behind the blink
sorenbarrett said:



February 8th, 2025 08:04

Behind the blink
sorenbarrett said:

A great write of thoughts and time and the distortion as well as missing parts of a continuation. Loved it

February 8th, 2025 08:03

Pausing the string
sorenbarrett said:

Very identifiable the images in this poem so well written in verse it lulls one to sleep and time freezes

February 7th, 2025 11:44

Pausing the string
Tony36 said:

Great write

February 7th, 2025 10:52

Shadows and rays
Tony36 said:

Beautiful

February 6th, 2025 19:53

Behind the kiss
Caring dove said:

A lovely poem gentle writing

February 6th, 2025 13:57

Shadows and rays
Caring dove said:

Very nice poem ..
sometimes I find that , when writing from a picture .. just makes you think and it’s nice to be inspired by things

I liked reading your poem

February 6th, 2025 13:55

Shadows and rays
sorenbarrett said:

Such a beautiful set of images you cast and it feels so light. Lovely and worth a fave

February 6th, 2025 13:55

Restlessly I lay
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

February 5th, 2025 18:11

Restlessly I lay
sorenbarrett said:

Lonliness pervades this poem and it is filled with a longing.very nice

February 5th, 2025 17:19

Message 2
sorenbarrett said:

A most beautiful message. Very nicely said

February 4th, 2025 18:35

Wet eyes
Poetic Licence said:

A sense of great pain at the loss of someone loved dearly, very nice write

February 3rd, 2025 16:16

Wet eyes
sorenbarrett said:

The pain of loss is great when it is someone you love. A sad poem

February 3rd, 2025 15:40

Captured view
Tony36 said:

Great write

February 1st, 2025 17:16



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