Comments received on poems by Maplespal
It peers
MDStone said:
Wow, well written with great expression and feeling… but not on the sleeve. Thanks for sharing.
March 26th, 2025 05:20
MDStone said:
Wow, well written with great expression and feeling… but not on the sleeve. Thanks for sharing.
March 26th, 2025 05:20
The label
sorenbarrett said:
A horrific image presented in how we look for the easy way out and find it is not the easy way. What we do to others when we take that path. A dark write that presents the consequences of artificial peace. Nicely written a fave
March 25th, 2025 05:34
sorenbarrett said:
A horrific image presented in how we look for the easy way out and find it is not the easy way. What we do to others when we take that path. A dark write that presents the consequences of artificial peace. Nicely written a fave
March 25th, 2025 05:34
It\'s too late
sorenbarrett said:
Some times one has to admit defeat to the clock of time and move on. A great poem of regret.
March 24th, 2025 06:50
sorenbarrett said:
Some times one has to admit defeat to the clock of time and move on. A great poem of regret.
March 24th, 2025 06:50
Processing a thought
Poetic Licence said:
This is a great write, the progress of a poem and how it developes, loved the lay out, enjoyed the read
March 23rd, 2025 11:54
Poetic Licence said:
This is a great write, the progress of a poem and how it developes, loved the lay out, enjoyed the read
March 23rd, 2025 11:54
Processing a thought
sorenbarrett said:
Ah the evolution of a poem. Many times this process occurs to me in the writing and then the process of selection. Which will it be. This is the first time that I have seen this process laid out in sequential poems. Lovely
March 23rd, 2025 06:44
sorenbarrett said:
Ah the evolution of a poem. Many times this process occurs to me in the writing and then the process of selection. Which will it be. This is the first time that I have seen this process laid out in sequential poems. Lovely
March 23rd, 2025 06:44
Lost time
Poetic Licence said:
A well written write with an individual way of reflection, enjoyed the read
March 22nd, 2025 10:38
Poetic Licence said:
A well written write with an individual way of reflection, enjoyed the read
March 22nd, 2025 10:38
Lost time
sorenbarrett said:
What a marvelous reflection on things past and learned now neglected. A great insight. Very well written this poem encapsulates wisdom seldom thought of.
March 22nd, 2025 06:39
sorenbarrett said:
What a marvelous reflection on things past and learned now neglected. A great insight. Very well written this poem encapsulates wisdom seldom thought of.
March 22nd, 2025 06:39
Focusing out of distraught
sorenbarrett said:
This poem gives a hint in the first line that the snow being mentioned is on the screen. That old time vision on the television is now lost to new generations but late night fuzz or disconnected static is easy to zone out to. Good write
March 21st, 2025 06:37
sorenbarrett said:
This poem gives a hint in the first line that the snow being mentioned is on the screen. That old time vision on the television is now lost to new generations but late night fuzz or disconnected static is easy to zone out to. Good write
March 21st, 2025 06:37
What path
Poetic Licence said:
Trees are the all seeing wise men of the world, have seen so much and would have many stories to tell, enjoyed the read
March 20th, 2025 09:33
Poetic Licence said:
Trees are the all seeing wise men of the world, have seen so much and would have many stories to tell, enjoyed the read
March 20th, 2025 09:33
What path
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write of beauty overlooked by many, stories told, a world to most unknown. Nature at its best they having millions of years head start on our species. Nicely written a fave
March 20th, 2025 05:54
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write of beauty overlooked by many, stories told, a world to most unknown. Nature at its best they having millions of years head start on our species. Nicely written a fave
March 20th, 2025 05:54
Canadian I am
Poetic Licence said:
A very valid write considering the rubbish the tango is talking, hopefully it will never happen, Canada is a much more country than America in every aspect, enjoyed the read
March 19th, 2025 13:30
Poetic Licence said:
A very valid write considering the rubbish the tango is talking, hopefully it will never happen, Canada is a much more country than America in every aspect, enjoyed the read
March 19th, 2025 13:30
Canadian I am
Poetic Licence said:
Some of your writes lately I have not been able to read, they are way over to the right of the screen,this one included
March 19th, 2025 07:09
Poetic Licence said:
Some of your writes lately I have not been able to read, they are way over to the right of the screen,this one included
March 19th, 2025 07:09
Canadian I am
2781 said:
I couldn\'t read that, it was over to the side with a black margin, for some reason?
March 19th, 2025 06:58
2781 said:
I couldn\'t read that, it was over to the side with a black margin, for some reason?
March 19th, 2025 06:58
Canadian I am
sorenbarrett said:
When I was small if one wanted to designate something as cheap or poorly made we said it was made in Japan, then it changed to made in Mexico. Today it seems that it is made in the USA quality has gone away and as for annexation Imperialism is a thing of the past. A good poem.
March 19th, 2025 06:03
sorenbarrett said:
When I was small if one wanted to designate something as cheap or poorly made we said it was made in Japan, then it changed to made in Mexico. Today it seems that it is made in the USA quality has gone away and as for annexation Imperialism is a thing of the past. A good poem.
March 19th, 2025 06:03
Manifested & I confide
Poetic Licence said:
The painful loss of someone dear and the missing of them from two perspectives, the first appears there is some hope, the second appears to be very little hope, well written write
March 18th, 2025 05:40
Poetic Licence said:
The painful loss of someone dear and the missing of them from two perspectives, the first appears there is some hope, the second appears to be very little hope, well written write
March 18th, 2025 05:40
Manifested & I confide
sorenbarrett said:
These both have a feeling of distance and loss of missing someone dear. The first retains hope of dreams the last little hope remains. A sense of the forlorn accompanies both. Well written
March 18th, 2025 05:35
sorenbarrett said:
These both have a feeling of distance and loss of missing someone dear. The first retains hope of dreams the last little hope remains. A sense of the forlorn accompanies both. Well written
March 18th, 2025 05:35
A simple thought
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting question and one with a complex answer. Nicely said
March 17th, 2025 07:11
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting question and one with a complex answer. Nicely said
March 17th, 2025 07:11
Deep breaths and pants
sorenbarrett said:
I our limited dictionary we have ruled out life for many things including planets, solar systems, galaxies but we need to stretch our minds a bit and realize that our view does not make it so. A mind opening write that I happen to agree with. Lovely
March 16th, 2025 07:37
sorenbarrett said:
I our limited dictionary we have ruled out life for many things including planets, solar systems, galaxies but we need to stretch our minds a bit and realize that our view does not make it so. A mind opening write that I happen to agree with. Lovely
March 16th, 2025 07:37
First dance
sorenbarrett said:
Many stories appear but the one I chose is of two young lovers who in the dance of life found that it burned out too quickly. A lovely write
March 15th, 2025 07:23
sorenbarrett said:
Many stories appear but the one I chose is of two young lovers who in the dance of life found that it burned out too quickly. A lovely write
March 15th, 2025 07:23
Tragedy
sorenbarrett said:
An open ended poem as to who the victim is stranger, daughter, girlfriend, wife, mother, grandmother each would carry a different feeling and meaning. Also the reason for the drowning not mentioned and again with varied feelings depending on what. A tragedy it is indeed and the last line tells that it was very important to him. Well written I love the open ending to all the facts
March 14th, 2025 11:36
sorenbarrett said:
An open ended poem as to who the victim is stranger, daughter, girlfriend, wife, mother, grandmother each would carry a different feeling and meaning. Also the reason for the drowning not mentioned and again with varied feelings depending on what. A tragedy it is indeed and the last line tells that it was very important to him. Well written I love the open ending to all the facts
March 14th, 2025 11:36
Tragedy
Poetic Licence said:
Sad and touching write,seeing a tragedy unfold before your eyes, then the realization life still has to go on, well written write
March 14th, 2025 11:27
Poetic Licence said:
Sad and touching write,seeing a tragedy unfold before your eyes, then the realization life still has to go on, well written write
March 14th, 2025 11:27
Some issues
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of a bit of emotional battles going on, as correctly said in the write we are only human, nicely expressed
March 14th, 2025 02:57
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of a bit of emotional battles going on, as correctly said in the write we are only human, nicely expressed
March 14th, 2025 02:57
Some issues
sorenbarrett said:
Confusion is the first word that comes to mind that is confusion of the author as to what has he done. The rational explanations are understood but the repercussions are too vast for comprehension and lead to a questioning of the mind. Emotional turmoil is the result. Well written
March 13th, 2025 19:34
sorenbarrett said:
Confusion is the first word that comes to mind that is confusion of the author as to what has he done. The rational explanations are understood but the repercussions are too vast for comprehension and lead to a questioning of the mind. Emotional turmoil is the result. Well written
March 13th, 2025 19:34
Dry Lipped
Poetic Licence said:
This is a wonderful write, get the sense of someone badly wounded or injured who thinks that\'s it time is up, but they survive on that day, Knowing though on another day they might not be so lucky, well written
March 13th, 2025 03:14
Poetic Licence said:
This is a wonderful write, get the sense of someone badly wounded or injured who thinks that\'s it time is up, but they survive on that day, Knowing though on another day they might not be so lucky, well written
March 13th, 2025 03:14
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