Comments received on poems by Maplespal



Bluntly
sorenbarrett said:

This poem speaks with a sense of frustration but about what one does not know another possibly. Well written

May 12th, 2026 05:20

Wet spine
sorenbarrett said:

This is a powerful write about the abuse of power in any chain of command. Well written.

May 11th, 2026 07:41

Not yet
Katie B. said:

This resonates with me. I have long periods of pain but sometimes I\'m able to cope better than others not that it doesn\'t hurt.

May 10th, 2026 10:39

Not yet
sorenbarrett said:

Choice and control in timing is part of this poem. Nicely done

May 10th, 2026 07:43

Drink on
Friendship said:

nicely said

May 9th, 2026 09:19

Drink on
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful toast to life and its passing well written and a fave

May 9th, 2026 07:19

Cancelled
sorenbarrett said:

This seems either a polo match or war. Well written

May 8th, 2026 17:57

Cheating on her
sorenbarrett said:

Seductive and sensuous this short write speaks of desire to be fulfilled. Well done

May 6th, 2026 20:49

I still visit you
sorenbarrett said:

So hard to forget love. A strong poem my friend

May 5th, 2026 06:40

Thoughts of six
Katie B. said:

Great, clever!

May 4th, 2026 15:11

Thoughts of six
Friendship said:

Nicely done

May 4th, 2026 07:47

Thoughts of six
sorenbarrett said:

Cleverly written in good rhyme. Loved it. It is also one number in 369 the number that Tesla felt held the key to the universe. A fun read

May 4th, 2026 05:42

Growl
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent work.

May 3rd, 2026 08:00

Growl
Demar Desu said:

There’s no way this account isn’t ran by a DOG

May 3rd, 2026 07:30

Growl
sorenbarrett said:

Hunger strikes and the body speaks. Well done

May 3rd, 2026 06:25

Growl
Friendship said:

I am glad you fed your dog. Nicely done. Your poem addresses themes of addiction, neglect, and the human condition, showcasing the internal conflict between physical needs and the desire for temporary escape through substances like marijuana and coffee.

May 3rd, 2026 06:08

An explanation to self
sorenbarrett said:

Well written entropy prevails in nature and in all things. We all must fall. Nicely done

May 2nd, 2026 12:35

An explanation to self
Ogunisjustice said:

Diabolical 👀

May 2nd, 2026 12:07

I thought it?
sorenbarrett said:

Short and to the point and a good question indeed. Well written

May 1st, 2026 16:14

I thought it?
Friendship said:

Nicely said.

May 1st, 2026 05:59

The rally
sorenbarrett said:

A fave for how well written this is. It is quite clear what this refers to and seems to apply quite well.

April 30th, 2026 05:47

Hungry
Friendship said:

Nicely said.

April 29th, 2026 07:10

Hungry
sorenbarrett said:

Clever cannibalistic chatter contrived in this fun read

April 29th, 2026 05:26

Let me go
Friendship said:

Well done, very creative

April 28th, 2026 08:38

Let me go
Katie B. said:

Great, good imagery!

April 28th, 2026 07:51

Let me go
sorenbarrett said:

Decisions, decisions in this poem of not staying as it is. Well done

April 28th, 2026 04:57

If only
Katie B. said:



April 27th, 2026 13:25

If only
Katie B. said:

Great read!

April 27th, 2026 13:25

If only
Friendship said:

Nicely done

April 27th, 2026 07:16

If only
sorenbarrett said:

Synchronous dreaming and thoughts liked by sleep. A most interesting thought. Well written

April 27th, 2026 06:31

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