Comments received on poems by Maplespal
For the images
Bella Shepard said:
We do seem to live in two worlds at times, and I think your poem \"reflects\" this beautifully. Great write!
January 1st, 2025 10:18
Bella Shepard said:
We do seem to live in two worlds at times, and I think your poem \"reflects\" this beautifully. Great write!
January 1st, 2025 10:18
For the images
Poetic Licence said:
A very enjoyable read, i think reminding us that you can be controlled by what you first see and it is always good to look at things from a different angle and consider both sides.
January 1st, 2025 08:54
Poetic Licence said:
A very enjoyable read, i think reminding us that you can be controlled by what you first see and it is always good to look at things from a different angle and consider both sides.
January 1st, 2025 08:54
For the images
sorenbarrett said:
Here the image of the sky reflected like the speaker\'s eyes in puddles and reflections provide a double but transposed view a great metaphor as well to see things from both sides. Very nice
January 1st, 2025 08:40
sorenbarrett said:
Here the image of the sky reflected like the speaker\'s eyes in puddles and reflections provide a double but transposed view a great metaphor as well to see things from both sides. Very nice
January 1st, 2025 08:40
Let me see
Poetic Licence said:
Thank fully they are only whispers, enjoyed the read.
December 31st, 2024 16:45
Poetic Licence said:
Thank fully they are only whispers, enjoyed the read.
December 31st, 2024 16:45
Let me see
sorenbarrett said:
Haunting in the most pleasant way. This poem speaks from beyond. Lovely. Happy New Year to you
December 31st, 2024 14:35
sorenbarrett said:
Haunting in the most pleasant way. This poem speaks from beyond. Lovely. Happy New Year to you
December 31st, 2024 14:35
Questions
Poetic Licence said:
Ones we will all ponder at times, are there answers, not sure, enjoyed the read
December 30th, 2024 15:56
Poetic Licence said:
Ones we will all ponder at times, are there answers, not sure, enjoyed the read
December 30th, 2024 15:56
Questions
sorenbarrett said:
Questions that many have asked but no one has answered. Questions that echo in the mind. Good write
December 30th, 2024 13:40
sorenbarrett said:
Questions that many have asked but no one has answered. Questions that echo in the mind. Good write
December 30th, 2024 13:40
Come inside
Bella Shepard said:
Food for thought here, those inner selves we struggle with, ever present. Great write!
December 29th, 2024 12:15
Bella Shepard said:
Food for thought here, those inner selves we struggle with, ever present. Great write!
December 29th, 2024 12:15
Come inside
Poetic Licence said:
An invitation to all to have a proper look inside, it might not be as bad as you think, Enjoyed the read.
December 29th, 2024 08:49
Poetic Licence said:
An invitation to all to have a proper look inside, it might not be as bad as you think, Enjoyed the read.
December 29th, 2024 08:49
Come inside
sorenbarrett said:
An invitation to inner exploration a gentle call to one and all to not fear what is most near. A gentle touching poem to look at oneself
December 29th, 2024 08:15
sorenbarrett said:
An invitation to inner exploration a gentle call to one and all to not fear what is most near. A gentle touching poem to look at oneself
December 29th, 2024 08:15
Other suns
sorenbarrett said:
Literally a message to all to take care of where we live and metaphorically as well to take care of our mental social and emotional world
December 28th, 2024 12:21
sorenbarrett said:
Literally a message to all to take care of where we live and metaphorically as well to take care of our mental social and emotional world
December 28th, 2024 12:21
Other suns
Bella Shepard said:
We still find wonderment in the heavens, even when we know our days are numbered, it can\'t be helped. A very thought provoking write my friend.
December 28th, 2024 12:17
Bella Shepard said:
We still find wonderment in the heavens, even when we know our days are numbered, it can\'t be helped. A very thought provoking write my friend.
December 28th, 2024 12:17
Other suns
Poetic Licence said:
We have no choice but to make do, enjoyed the read
December 28th, 2024 12:16
Poetic Licence said:
We have no choice but to make do, enjoyed the read
December 28th, 2024 12:16
Other suns
2781 said:
\"And they that be wise shall shine as the brightness of the firmament; and they that turn many to righteousness as the stars for ever and ever.\"
December 28th, 2024 07:24
2781 said:
\"And they that be wise shall shine as the brightness of the firmament; and they that turn many to righteousness as the stars for ever and ever.\"
December 28th, 2024 07:24
It\'s just a dream
2781 said:
\"For a dream comes through the multitude of business;
December 27th, 2024 09:44
2781 said:
\"For a dream comes through the multitude of business;
December 27th, 2024 09:44
It\'s just a dream
sorenbarrett said:
People plagued by nightmares suffer. This poem presents the author as a waiting source of help and safety. So nicely written as if watching from above. Lovely whether directed to a companion or a child.
December 27th, 2024 08:40
sorenbarrett said:
People plagued by nightmares suffer. This poem presents the author as a waiting source of help and safety. So nicely written as if watching from above. Lovely whether directed to a companion or a child.
December 27th, 2024 08:40
It\'s just a dream
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful but also tender poem of watching some one suffering recurring nightmares, very nicely written
December 27th, 2024 07:21
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful but also tender poem of watching some one suffering recurring nightmares, very nicely written
December 27th, 2024 07:21
It\'s just a dream
arqios said:
That was gripping and riveting; a powerful expression, to say the least.
December 27th, 2024 07:16
arqios said:
That was gripping and riveting; a powerful expression, to say the least.
December 27th, 2024 07:16
Silent drinks
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed the read, but kinda it is not real!!!
December 26th, 2024 12:05
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed the read, but kinda it is not real!!!
December 26th, 2024 12:05
Her own present
Poetic Licence said:
A nice bit of fun, my chuckle for the day.
December 25th, 2024 15:33
Poetic Licence said:
A nice bit of fun, my chuckle for the day.
December 25th, 2024 15:33
Her own present
sorenbarrett said:
Kids had hamsters and they got loose found them under the washer after a week or two. They made a second break and went back. The only place safe from the cat. A fun read well written
December 25th, 2024 14:07
sorenbarrett said:
Kids had hamsters and they got loose found them under the washer after a week or two. They made a second break and went back. The only place safe from the cat. A fun read well written
December 25th, 2024 14:07
The Visions\' view
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of longing and sadness a wistful look at the past. Well rhymed and worded this poem draws emotion from the reader
December 24th, 2024 14:23
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of longing and sadness a wistful look at the past. Well rhymed and worded this poem draws emotion from the reader
December 24th, 2024 14:23
The Visions\' view
Poetic Licence said:
A very clever piece of writing which i enjoyed reading, Thank you
December 24th, 2024 14:22
Poetic Licence said:
A very clever piece of writing which i enjoyed reading, Thank you
December 24th, 2024 14:22
Motion
rin said:
I walk along the walking path in my heart, yawning leisurely.
``Tenderness to You\\\\\\\'\\\\\\\' After reading this, I want you to post these words in the comments of other poems and spread them around like chain mail.
December 24th, 2024 01:27
rin said:
I walk along the walking path in my heart, yawning leisurely.
``Tenderness to You\\\\\\\'\\\\\\\' After reading this, I want you to post these words in the comments of other poems and spread them around like chain mail.
December 24th, 2024 01:27
Motion
sorenbarrett said:
A deeper thought than it would appear. I always go backwards when I\'m backing up, things fall down not up. Not only a fun read but a pensive one
December 23rd, 2024 15:43
sorenbarrett said:
A deeper thought than it would appear. I always go backwards when I\'m backing up, things fall down not up. Not only a fun read but a pensive one
December 23rd, 2024 15:43
The haunting game
Poetic Licence said:
A poem of some one looking in on their insecurities, well written
December 23rd, 2024 02:35
Poetic Licence said:
A poem of some one looking in on their insecurities, well written
December 23rd, 2024 02:35
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