Comments received on poems by Maplespal
Just one more
sorenbarrett said:
One is never enough. Always the need for one more
August 28th, 2024 06:51
sorenbarrett said:
One is never enough. Always the need for one more
August 28th, 2024 06:51
I want one
sorenbarrett said:
Ah a last dance that is what life is about singing and dancing and a last dance is so final. Nice write my friend
August 27th, 2024 05:38
sorenbarrett said:
Ah a last dance that is what life is about singing and dancing and a last dance is so final. Nice write my friend
August 27th, 2024 05:38
Stepped in a puddle
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read on the surface. Deeper meaning is reflected and in its depths is a metaphor for life in general. I love the ending for many times we fear what is not to be feared and don\'t make the waves we thought they would. Loved it
August 26th, 2024 09:18
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read on the surface. Deeper meaning is reflected and in its depths is a metaphor for life in general. I love the ending for many times we fear what is not to be feared and don\'t make the waves we thought they would. Loved it
August 26th, 2024 09:18
Biorhythms
Bella Shepard said:
The physical, the emotional and the intellectual, neatly done.
August 25th, 2024 09:42
Bella Shepard said:
The physical, the emotional and the intellectual, neatly done.
August 25th, 2024 09:42
Biorhythms
sorenbarrett said:
Biorhythms below the surface of awareness flow in music unheard but danced to. Nicely done
August 25th, 2024 05:59
sorenbarrett said:
Biorhythms below the surface of awareness flow in music unheard but danced to. Nicely done
August 25th, 2024 05:59
The number of times
sorenbarrett said:
A longing and melancholic write. It provokes mixes feelings and general melancholy.
August 24th, 2024 09:26
sorenbarrett said:
A longing and melancholic write. It provokes mixes feelings and general melancholy.
August 24th, 2024 09:26
Your description & how without
sorenbarrett said:
Touching and such a sense of loss is conveyed. Sad but nicely written.
August 23rd, 2024 06:13
sorenbarrett said:
Touching and such a sense of loss is conveyed. Sad but nicely written.
August 23rd, 2024 06:13
Morning pep talk
sorenbarrett said:
Surprisingly refreshing the ending puts a whole new view upon the situation. Great message. Loved it.
August 22nd, 2024 05:23
sorenbarrett said:
Surprisingly refreshing the ending puts a whole new view upon the situation. Great message. Loved it.
August 22nd, 2024 05:23
It’s without you
sorenbarrett said:
A clever use of language to illustrate the different aspects of the individual. Nicely worded it is thought provoking. Loved it
August 21st, 2024 05:11
sorenbarrett said:
A clever use of language to illustrate the different aspects of the individual. Nicely worded it is thought provoking. Loved it
August 21st, 2024 05:11
It’s without you
kwrites said:
This has to be my today\'s best read! loved it
August 21st, 2024 04:33
kwrites said:
This has to be my today\'s best read! loved it
August 21st, 2024 04:33
Torpedoes
Bella Shepard said:
Mistakes can happen and things go awry, but I\'m sure it doesn\'t lessen the remorse or regret when something such as catastrophic as this happens. A fine write from one who knows firsthand the perils of war.
August 20th, 2024 13:19
Bella Shepard said:
Mistakes can happen and things go awry, but I\'m sure it doesn\'t lessen the remorse or regret when something such as catastrophic as this happens. A fine write from one who knows firsthand the perils of war.
August 20th, 2024 13:19
Torpedoes
Doggerel Dave said:
You\'ve cracked the fact, and made it real that this happens more frequently in war than many times anyone lets on.
August 20th, 2024 07:48
Doggerel Dave said:
You\'ve cracked the fact, and made it real that this happens more frequently in war than many times anyone lets on.
August 20th, 2024 07:48
Torpedoes
sorenbarrett said:
Mistakes can be costly and here in few words this strikes home. Sounds historical but could be metaphorical. Nicely written
August 20th, 2024 06:14
sorenbarrett said:
Mistakes can be costly and here in few words this strikes home. Sounds historical but could be metaphorical. Nicely written
August 20th, 2024 06:14
The Unfinished House of Stone
Bella Shepard said:
Sometimes the simplest answer is the best. Good for you!
August 19th, 2024 09:28
Bella Shepard said:
Sometimes the simplest answer is the best. Good for you!
August 19th, 2024 09:28
The Unfinished House of Stone
Doggerel Dave said:
Up there with all other explanations i\'ve ever heard.
Neat simple explanation may well win the day.
August 19th, 2024 06:36
Doggerel Dave said:
Up there with all other explanations i\'ve ever heard.
Neat simple explanation may well win the day.
August 19th, 2024 06:36
The Unfinished House of Stone
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read and different indeed. Nicely done
August 19th, 2024 05:59
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read and different indeed. Nicely done
August 19th, 2024 05:59
Cushion, The Wait, & The Tea
sorenbarrett said:
I have know such people that continue to set the table for two after one is no longer there. Habit of wishful thinking.
August 18th, 2024 06:59
sorenbarrett said:
I have know such people that continue to set the table for two after one is no longer there. Habit of wishful thinking.
August 18th, 2024 06:59
The Beat & Saint-Tropez
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images and memories of beautiful places. Lovely
August 17th, 2024 09:02
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images and memories of beautiful places. Lovely
August 17th, 2024 09:02
Lowered
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and even heart rending this poem shows devotion and love of one lost. Nicely written
August 16th, 2024 05:16
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and even heart rending this poem shows devotion and love of one lost. Nicely written
August 16th, 2024 05:16
Heavy Steps
sorenbarrett said:
A sad write of parting with a lifetime companion. Well expressed
August 15th, 2024 05:26
sorenbarrett said:
A sad write of parting with a lifetime companion. Well expressed
August 15th, 2024 05:26
Sleepless
Bella Shepard said:
The overwhelming sadness of death, compounded by its inevitable aftermath is so well presented in this poem. My deepest symapthy for what you\'ve been through.
August 14th, 2024 08:12
Bella Shepard said:
The overwhelming sadness of death, compounded by its inevitable aftermath is so well presented in this poem. My deepest symapthy for what you\'ve been through.
August 14th, 2024 08:12
Sleepless
sorenbarrett said:
The bureaucracy of death. Incredible that even in death there is no peace. A wonderful write.
August 14th, 2024 06:35
sorenbarrett said:
The bureaucracy of death. Incredible that even in death there is no peace. A wonderful write.
August 14th, 2024 06:35
14th poem for: “T.N.D” - Cent or Dollar
sorenbarrett said:
An innovative approach to telling someone that you will remember them when no one else will. A fun read.
August 13th, 2024 05:57
sorenbarrett said:
An innovative approach to telling someone that you will remember them when no one else will. A fun read.
August 13th, 2024 05:57
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