Comments received on poems by Maplespal
It\'s just a dream
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful but also tender poem of watching some one suffering recurring nightmares, very nicely written
December 27th, 2024 07:21
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful but also tender poem of watching some one suffering recurring nightmares, very nicely written
December 27th, 2024 07:21
It\'s just a dream
arqios said:
That was gripping and riveting; a powerful expression, to say the least.
December 27th, 2024 07:16
arqios said:
That was gripping and riveting; a powerful expression, to say the least.
December 27th, 2024 07:16
Silent drinks
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed the read, but kinda it is not real!!!
December 26th, 2024 12:05
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed the read, but kinda it is not real!!!
December 26th, 2024 12:05
Her own present
Poetic Licence said:
A nice bit of fun, my chuckle for the day.
December 25th, 2024 15:33
Poetic Licence said:
A nice bit of fun, my chuckle for the day.
December 25th, 2024 15:33
Her own present
sorenbarrett said:
Kids had hamsters and they got loose found them under the washer after a week or two. They made a second break and went back. The only place safe from the cat. A fun read well written
December 25th, 2024 14:07
sorenbarrett said:
Kids had hamsters and they got loose found them under the washer after a week or two. They made a second break and went back. The only place safe from the cat. A fun read well written
December 25th, 2024 14:07
The Visions\' view
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of longing and sadness a wistful look at the past. Well rhymed and worded this poem draws emotion from the reader
December 24th, 2024 14:23
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of longing and sadness a wistful look at the past. Well rhymed and worded this poem draws emotion from the reader
December 24th, 2024 14:23
The Visions\' view
Poetic Licence said:
A very clever piece of writing which i enjoyed reading, Thank you
December 24th, 2024 14:22
Poetic Licence said:
A very clever piece of writing which i enjoyed reading, Thank you
December 24th, 2024 14:22
Motion
rin said:
I walk along the walking path in my heart, yawning leisurely.
``Tenderness to You\\\\\\\'\\\\\\\' After reading this, I want you to post these words in the comments of other poems and spread them around like chain mail.
December 24th, 2024 01:27
rin said:
I walk along the walking path in my heart, yawning leisurely.
``Tenderness to You\\\\\\\'\\\\\\\' After reading this, I want you to post these words in the comments of other poems and spread them around like chain mail.
December 24th, 2024 01:27
Motion
sorenbarrett said:
A deeper thought than it would appear. I always go backwards when I\'m backing up, things fall down not up. Not only a fun read but a pensive one
December 23rd, 2024 15:43
sorenbarrett said:
A deeper thought than it would appear. I always go backwards when I\'m backing up, things fall down not up. Not only a fun read but a pensive one
December 23rd, 2024 15:43
The haunting game
Poetic Licence said:
A poem of some one looking in on their insecurities, well written
December 23rd, 2024 02:35
Poetic Licence said:
A poem of some one looking in on their insecurities, well written
December 23rd, 2024 02:35
The haunting game
sorenbarrett said:
The aspect of self reflection and evaluation comes through in this poem. Very nicely written
December 22nd, 2024 20:25
sorenbarrett said:
The aspect of self reflection and evaluation comes through in this poem. Very nicely written
December 22nd, 2024 20:25
No Eggs
Cassie58 said:
Happy to have a bacon sarney without an egg. I guess you are a bacon and eggs guy. Not a great start to your day, although your poem was fun to read and enjoyed.
December 21st, 2024 13:01
Cassie58 said:
Happy to have a bacon sarney without an egg. I guess you are a bacon and eggs guy. Not a great start to your day, although your poem was fun to read and enjoyed.
December 21st, 2024 13:01
No Eggs
sorenbarrett said:
Great use of familiar sayings and nursery rhymes to make a valid point that some things go together and are not the same when a part is missing.
December 21st, 2024 09:11
sorenbarrett said:
Great use of familiar sayings and nursery rhymes to make a valid point that some things go together and are not the same when a part is missing.
December 21st, 2024 09:11
Mind displays
Poetic Licence said:
A clever way to express ones desire to write poetry, and i think you do it well.
December 20th, 2024 12:45
Poetic Licence said:
A clever way to express ones desire to write poetry, and i think you do it well.
December 20th, 2024 12:45
Mind displays
sorenbarrett said:
Language is the paint our tongue the brush and we print it on paper for our eyes to see. Very nicely expessed in this poem
December 20th, 2024 11:35
sorenbarrett said:
Language is the paint our tongue the brush and we print it on paper for our eyes to see. Very nicely expessed in this poem
December 20th, 2024 11:35
I am up
sorenbarrett said:
A fun play on words with a great meaning and most uplifting.
December 19th, 2024 14:39
sorenbarrett said:
A fun play on words with a great meaning and most uplifting.
December 19th, 2024 14:39
Thought 2
Poetic Licence said:
Echo`s my sentiments exactly regarding exercise, clever and funny ditty
December 18th, 2024 18:32
Poetic Licence said:
Echo`s my sentiments exactly regarding exercise, clever and funny ditty
December 18th, 2024 18:32
Thought 2
sorenbarrett said:
What a truism for us and our society. Well said in such few words
December 18th, 2024 17:12
sorenbarrett said:
What a truism for us and our society. Well said in such few words
December 18th, 2024 17:12
Converse
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely poem showing the importance of talking, enjoyable read
December 16th, 2024 01:35
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely poem showing the importance of talking, enjoyable read
December 16th, 2024 01:35
Converse
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the evolution of this poem as it looks at conversation in all its possabilities. Nicely worded
December 15th, 2024 20:06
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the evolution of this poem as it looks at conversation in all its possabilities. Nicely worded
December 15th, 2024 20:06
thought 1
Poetic Licence said:
Clever piece of double edge writing, really like it
December 14th, 2024 15:10
Poetic Licence said:
Clever piece of double edge writing, really like it
December 14th, 2024 15:10
Empty thoughts - extended v of Empty Thought
sorenbarrett said:
Finding the right words is not always easy. Words one of only two ways of showing our emotions and finding just the right one to convey the proper meaning and feeling is not always easy. Even knowing ourself what we want to convey is difficult. Nicely written
December 14th, 2024 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
Finding the right words is not always easy. Words one of only two ways of showing our emotions and finding just the right one to convey the proper meaning and feeling is not always easy. Even knowing ourself what we want to convey is difficult. Nicely written
December 14th, 2024 04:28
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