Comments received on poems by Maplespal



Tuned time
sorenbarrett said:

Indeed music is closely tied to the emotions and soul. A most melodic write

February 10th, 2025 06:18

Charred
MDStone said:

Great feeling and emotion. It drew me in and caused me to feel the loneliness, the empty hole in the heart. Great writing!

February 9th, 2025 20:16

Charred
sorenbarrett said:

Touching and sad this poem reaches through time to those lost in the past. A very beautiful piece so well worded your poetry has grown immensely.

February 9th, 2025 12:35

Charred
Tony36 said:

Great write

February 9th, 2025 10:36

Behind the blink
Tony36 said:

Great write

February 8th, 2025 14:53

Behind the blink
sorenbarrett said:



February 8th, 2025 08:04

Behind the blink
sorenbarrett said:

A great write of thoughts and time and the distortion as well as missing parts of a continuation. Loved it

February 8th, 2025 08:03

Pausing the string
sorenbarrett said:

Very identifiable the images in this poem so well written in verse it lulls one to sleep and time freezes

February 7th, 2025 11:44

Pausing the string
Tony36 said:

Great write

February 7th, 2025 10:52

Shadows and rays
Tony36 said:

Beautiful

February 6th, 2025 19:53

Behind the kiss
Caring dove said:

A lovely poem gentle writing

February 6th, 2025 13:57

Shadows and rays
Caring dove said:

Very nice poem ..
sometimes I find that , when writing from a picture .. just makes you think and it’s nice to be inspired by things

I liked reading your poem

February 6th, 2025 13:55

Shadows and rays
sorenbarrett said:

Such a beautiful set of images you cast and it feels so light. Lovely and worth a fave

February 6th, 2025 13:55

Restlessly I lay
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

February 5th, 2025 18:11

Restlessly I lay
sorenbarrett said:

Lonliness pervades this poem and it is filled with a longing.very nice

February 5th, 2025 17:19

Message 2
sorenbarrett said:

A most beautiful message. Very nicely said

February 4th, 2025 18:35

Wet eyes
Poetic Licence said:

A sense of great pain at the loss of someone loved dearly, very nice write

February 3rd, 2025 16:16

Wet eyes
sorenbarrett said:

The pain of loss is great when it is someone you love. A sad poem

February 3rd, 2025 15:40

Captured view
Tony36 said:

Great write

February 1st, 2025 17:16

Message 1
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

January 30th, 2025 20:27

Message 1
sorenbarrett said:

Very nicely worded it had to be read more than once to understand,

January 30th, 2025 16:35

Here
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

January 28th, 2025 19:56

Here
Poetic Licence said:

It has a sense of someone excepting they have reached the end, nicely written

January 28th, 2025 17:30

Here
sorenbarrett said:

I get the feeling that this is the end of the road, it sounds hollow and empty. A vapid feeling comes through. Well expressed and written in verse

January 28th, 2025 17:17

It is it
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

January 20th, 2025 17:44

It is it
sorenbarrett said:

Destiny? Well could be then there are no guilty. Loved the poem a great philisophical write

January 20th, 2025 13:04

Your pictured view
sorenbarrett said:

Reminders often bring sadness. Few greater reminders than a picture. A sad but powerful write

January 18th, 2025 20:35

Thought 3
sorenbarrett said:

Very nice. Man, woman, child even animals wild we are all living things
Doesn\'t matter what race or species you are we are all equal and with the same value. A most wonderful write

January 17th, 2025 17:30

To my kind: It\'s time
sorenbarrett said:

A haunting write and a different point of view presented in this poem. Very interesting

January 15th, 2025 10:34

We are
sorenbarrett said:

A great thought and a philisophical poem as well. Nicely worded

January 14th, 2025 09:14



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