Comments received on poems by Maplespal
Wishes
sorenbarrett said:
This poem begins with a nursery rhyme and evolves into memories and forgotten childhood wishes. Do we forget them? Nicely done it makes me wonder and I like that in a poem
March 28th, 2026 06:52
sorenbarrett said:
This poem begins with a nursery rhyme and evolves into memories and forgotten childhood wishes. Do we forget them? Nicely done it makes me wonder and I like that in a poem
March 28th, 2026 06:52
Had to give you 2
Demar Desu said:
Don’t be sorry, this is a gift two in one! Great work
March 27th, 2026 17:26
Demar Desu said:
Don’t be sorry, this is a gift two in one! Great work
March 27th, 2026 17:26
Had to give you 2
sorenbarrett said:
The killer rabbits of the dark ages the one from Monty Python and the Holy Grail. A most interesting write
March 27th, 2026 13:57
sorenbarrett said:
The killer rabbits of the dark ages the one from Monty Python and the Holy Grail. A most interesting write
March 27th, 2026 13:57
Perfect square
sorenbarrett said:
A geometric poem of meaning that is surreal in a way and absurd in another but still intrigues the mind. Nicely done
March 26th, 2026 06:46
sorenbarrett said:
A geometric poem of meaning that is surreal in a way and absurd in another but still intrigues the mind. Nicely done
March 26th, 2026 06:46
Wordless
sorenbarrett said:
Have been there frequently and feel its weight. Here a few lines in good rhyme tell it all when the muse takes vacation. A fave
March 24th, 2026 06:06
sorenbarrett said:
Have been there frequently and feel its weight. Here a few lines in good rhyme tell it all when the muse takes vacation. A fave
March 24th, 2026 06:06
Noises
sorenbarrett said:
I often wonder what it would be like to understand animal language, not that it would be words but rather emotions, sensations, calls and warnings. It would be a wonderful perspective. Well written
March 23rd, 2026 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
I often wonder what it would be like to understand animal language, not that it would be words but rather emotions, sensations, calls and warnings. It would be a wonderful perspective. Well written
March 23rd, 2026 04:32
Somebody showed me
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic and warm it is a sweet poem of infatuation. Lovely
March 22nd, 2026 09:33
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic and warm it is a sweet poem of infatuation. Lovely
March 22nd, 2026 09:33
Lost crimes
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor or not Epstein has been too much in the news and his files have been all the rage. Well done
March 21st, 2026 07:46
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor or not Epstein has been too much in the news and his files have been all the rage. Well done
March 21st, 2026 07:46
Let\'s call it a draw
sorenbarrett said:
After a squabble maybe. Nothing like making up. Well done
March 20th, 2026 14:01
sorenbarrett said:
After a squabble maybe. Nothing like making up. Well done
March 20th, 2026 14:01
Daily
sorenbarrett said:
Worked on a dairy farm when I was young and you just described it in this poem. Well written
March 19th, 2026 16:52
sorenbarrett said:
Worked on a dairy farm when I was young and you just described it in this poem. Well written
March 19th, 2026 16:52
What then?
Demar Desu said:
Your profile picture paired with this introspective poem is so hilarious… great work
March 18th, 2026 18:20
Demar Desu said:
Your profile picture paired with this introspective poem is so hilarious… great work
March 18th, 2026 18:20
What then?
sorenbarrett said:
Clever word play in this poem. We all are what we are. Well done
March 18th, 2026 16:43
sorenbarrett said:
Clever word play in this poem. We all are what we are. Well done
March 18th, 2026 16:43
Remind me
sorenbarrett said:
Almost mystical this poem looks to images of the beyond. Well done
March 17th, 2026 14:58
sorenbarrett said:
Almost mystical this poem looks to images of the beyond. Well done
March 17th, 2026 14:58
Time is coming
sorenbarrett said:
You have captured the essence of man and his folly and determination in a poem of monorhyme very nicely rhymed
March 16th, 2026 16:17
sorenbarrett said:
You have captured the essence of man and his folly and determination in a poem of monorhyme very nicely rhymed
March 16th, 2026 16:17
Some nights (2)
sorenbarrett said:
Expectations precede the terror. Well written
March 15th, 2026 09:06
sorenbarrett said:
Expectations precede the terror. Well written
March 15th, 2026 09:06
I\'ll just whisper
sorenbarrett said:
Some feelings can not be given up. Nicely said
March 14th, 2026 09:45
sorenbarrett said:
Some feelings can not be given up. Nicely said
March 14th, 2026 09:45
I\'ll just whisper
Katie B. said:
Heavy message and deep. Well written
Blessings~Katie
March 14th, 2026 08:41
Katie B. said:
Heavy message and deep. Well written
Blessings~Katie
March 14th, 2026 08:41
Let it end
sorenbarrett said:
From nature and its natural course to destruction to devastation. A poem of entropy accelerated. Well done
March 13th, 2026 16:32
sorenbarrett said:
From nature and its natural course to destruction to devastation. A poem of entropy accelerated. Well done
March 13th, 2026 16:32
Layers
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting poem of layers. A layer of lines. Well done
March 12th, 2026 19:41
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting poem of layers. A layer of lines. Well done
March 12th, 2026 19:41
I believe
sorenbarrett said:
A dark world of bias and hate against which one must fight. Nicely written
March 11th, 2026 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
A dark world of bias and hate against which one must fight. Nicely written
March 11th, 2026 04:47
Masked
sorenbarrett said:
When we live with a mask for long enough we forget who we are. A lovely write about the lives we are encouraged to live. Few have the strength to not put on the mask.
March 10th, 2026 08:28
sorenbarrett said:
When we live with a mask for long enough we forget who we are. A lovely write about the lives we are encouraged to live. Few have the strength to not put on the mask.
March 10th, 2026 08:28
Ready. So try.
HerTime said:
A beautifully written work capturing personal growth and resilience.
March 9th, 2026 21:57
HerTime said:
A beautifully written work capturing personal growth and resilience.
March 9th, 2026 21:57
Ready. So try.
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of defiance and strength. A lovely write
March 9th, 2026 08:58
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of defiance and strength. A lovely write
March 9th, 2026 08:58
Tantalizing
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of what one can do to the feelings and even perceptions of another and the desire to experience more. Well said
March 8th, 2026 13:43
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of what one can do to the feelings and even perceptions of another and the desire to experience more. Well said
March 8th, 2026 13:43
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