Comments received on poems by Maplespal
Aging
sorenbarrett said:
I feel this poem not only in the mind but in the body and bones. Nicely said
July 8th, 2025 06:55
sorenbarrett said:
I feel this poem not only in the mind but in the body and bones. Nicely said
July 8th, 2025 06:55
2 again: Roar & Choices
sorenbarrett said:
I have met the tiger and as for choices I am all for that but one should know that the choices one makes affect others the suicide rate in children whose parents committed suicide are significantly higher than those who\'s parents did not. Well written
July 7th, 2025 05:45
sorenbarrett said:
I have met the tiger and as for choices I am all for that but one should know that the choices one makes affect others the suicide rate in children whose parents committed suicide are significantly higher than those who\'s parents did not. Well written
July 7th, 2025 05:45
Dreamily absurd
sorenbarrett said:
Yes the vision of Nicola Tesla before Rockefeller got in the way. Free power for all transported wirelessly. They say it is impossible but they said the same of his AC motor. Too bad greed got in the way. Lovely poem
July 6th, 2025 07:00
sorenbarrett said:
Yes the vision of Nicola Tesla before Rockefeller got in the way. Free power for all transported wirelessly. They say it is impossible but they said the same of his AC motor. Too bad greed got in the way. Lovely poem
July 6th, 2025 07:00
A moment: Cut palm
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes we all need a little space to deal with difficulties. Give the man a moment and some breathing room. Well said
July 5th, 2025 07:01
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes we all need a little space to deal with difficulties. Give the man a moment and some breathing room. Well said
July 5th, 2025 07:01
The suns warmth
Caring dove said:
That’s lovely )) especially like the mention of that sun
Very nicely expressed !
And true .. doesn’t always help to look back at our past
July 4th, 2025 07:20
Caring dove said:
That’s lovely )) especially like the mention of that sun
Very nicely expressed !
And true .. doesn’t always help to look back at our past
July 4th, 2025 07:20
The suns warmth
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of dwelling on the past as opposed to living in the present. That we have choice of what memories we dwell on good or bad and that enjoying the sun of the present is best. A wonderful metaphor blended into message is made. A fave
July 4th, 2025 06:55
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of dwelling on the past as opposed to living in the present. That we have choice of what memories we dwell on good or bad and that enjoying the sun of the present is best. A wonderful metaphor blended into message is made. A fave
July 4th, 2025 06:55
Can we
sorenbarrett said:
Great questions that seem to have a right answer but the reality is far from it. Nicely said
July 3rd, 2025 06:03
sorenbarrett said:
Great questions that seem to have a right answer but the reality is far from it. Nicely said
July 3rd, 2025 06:03
Let\'s start a war
sorenbarrett said:
So many wrathful gods of war. Why then when God preached peace do his follower practice war? A poem that gives pause for thought. Well written.
July 2nd, 2025 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
So many wrathful gods of war. Why then when God preached peace do his follower practice war? A poem that gives pause for thought. Well written.
July 2nd, 2025 04:57
Repeating my phrase
sorenbarrett said:
Mechanically haunting as if a dead chant from the grave. It echoes in the mind. Well done
July 1st, 2025 06:56
sorenbarrett said:
Mechanically haunting as if a dead chant from the grave. It echoes in the mind. Well done
July 1st, 2025 06:56
Blurred vision
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem and the metaphor is true. We see through the filter of our own experience. Well done.
June 30th, 2025 09:13
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem and the metaphor is true. We see through the filter of our own experience. Well done.
June 30th, 2025 09:13
Just ignore what I said
sorenbarrett said:
Loose lips sink ships and a slip of the tongue disaster has brung. A good read
June 29th, 2025 06:55
sorenbarrett said:
Loose lips sink ships and a slip of the tongue disaster has brung. A good read
June 29th, 2025 06:55
Be the first
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like the words of a mass murderer. Psychopathic, not to angry just looking for a good time
June 27th, 2025 11:23
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like the words of a mass murderer. Psychopathic, not to angry just looking for a good time
June 27th, 2025 11:23
Have you fallen?
sorenbarrett said:
Ups and downs, highs and lows, mania and depression, drugs and sobriety nicely done
June 26th, 2025 11:19
sorenbarrett said:
Ups and downs, highs and lows, mania and depression, drugs and sobriety nicely done
June 26th, 2025 11:19
What the devil does to me
sorenbarrett said:
This poem opens the door of temptation and is a sad read of pain that tempts. Nicely worded
June 25th, 2025 06:49
sorenbarrett said:
This poem opens the door of temptation and is a sad read of pain that tempts. Nicely worded
June 25th, 2025 06:49
A snippet of thought
sorenbarrett said:
Living in one\'s head is not the most comfortable place to reside but then where to go the vacation home of emotions? Also the not so comfortable place to reside. Nicely written
June 24th, 2025 05:42
sorenbarrett said:
Living in one\'s head is not the most comfortable place to reside but then where to go the vacation home of emotions? Also the not so comfortable place to reside. Nicely written
June 24th, 2025 05:42
Thirteen treasons - I drink
sorenbarrett said:
a most interesting introduction to this piece that implies metaphor in that that is what magic is based on. Lovely
June 22nd, 2025 09:49
sorenbarrett said:
a most interesting introduction to this piece that implies metaphor in that that is what magic is based on. Lovely
June 22nd, 2025 09:49
A moment: Traumatized
sorenbarrett said:
Memory affected by post traumatic stress and possible amnesia. Sad and dark.
June 21st, 2025 08:43
sorenbarrett said:
Memory affected by post traumatic stress and possible amnesia. Sad and dark.
June 21st, 2025 08:43
A Thought: Let us
sorenbarrett said:
Technology has changed life and not always for the better. Going back sometimes is a good thing. Lovely
June 20th, 2025 16:38
sorenbarrett said:
Technology has changed life and not always for the better. Going back sometimes is a good thing. Lovely
June 20th, 2025 16:38
Shaken
sorenbarrett said:
We all have choices but not all of us are good with whichever one is made. When one is good with either choice then one is at peace. A lovely write
June 19th, 2025 18:04
sorenbarrett said:
We all have choices but not all of us are good with whichever one is made. When one is good with either choice then one is at peace. A lovely write
June 19th, 2025 18:04
Visiting
sorenbarrett said:
Another interesting thought. I often wondered if life forms from another world would even recognize us as more than bacteria or virus\' and even worth considering. A fun read
June 18th, 2025 16:55
sorenbarrett said:
Another interesting thought. I often wondered if life forms from another world would even recognize us as more than bacteria or virus\' and even worth considering. A fun read
June 18th, 2025 16:55
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