Comments received on poems by Maplespal
A feeling to write
sorenbarrett said:
I too feel compelled to write things and it doesn\'t matter if they mean anything to others as long as they do to you.
September 13th, 2024 06:02
sorenbarrett said:
I too feel compelled to write things and it doesn\'t matter if they mean anything to others as long as they do to you.
September 13th, 2024 06:02
Me described by-way-of “in & out”
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re too fun thus delineated to effect, this ramble through the years and days of your life in such a fashion delightful. Thank you very much for sharing! Beautifully rendered with excellent details and a subtle poignancy.
September 11th, 2024 08:47
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re too fun thus delineated to effect, this ramble through the years and days of your life in such a fashion delightful. Thank you very much for sharing! Beautifully rendered with excellent details and a subtle poignancy.
September 11th, 2024 08:47
Me described by-way-of “in & out”
Doggerel Dave said:
After that I would have felt better, but how do you feel? (In monorhyme please🙃)
Enjoyed.
September 11th, 2024 07:20
Doggerel Dave said:
After that I would have felt better, but how do you feel? (In monorhyme please🙃)
Enjoyed.
September 11th, 2024 07:20
Me described by-way-of “in & out”
sorenbarrett said:
That\'s a lot of ins and outs. A most fun read
September 11th, 2024 06:13
sorenbarrett said:
That\'s a lot of ins and outs. A most fun read
September 11th, 2024 06:13
The power of belief & They are only painted
Mutley Ravishes said:
So many taking it all
Literally
Not looking at it
Symbolically
September 10th, 2024 18:49
Mutley Ravishes said:
So many taking it all
Literally
Not looking at it
Symbolically
September 10th, 2024 18:49
99 Red balloons
2781 said:
I heard that in Ukraine the fighters are now in their 50\'s.
They\'ve lost their youth.
September 9th, 2024 07:48
2781 said:
I heard that in Ukraine the fighters are now in their 50\'s.
They\'ve lost their youth.
September 9th, 2024 07:48
99 Red balloons
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful commemoration of the madness of war. Wars fought for misplaced religious beliefs, greed, and power. All illusions and lies. Very nicely written.
September 9th, 2024 06:48
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful commemoration of the madness of war. Wars fought for misplaced religious beliefs, greed, and power. All illusions and lies. Very nicely written.
September 9th, 2024 06:48
Your calming song
Cheeky Missy said:
Aww, I am at a loss for words! This is so heartbreaking! You\'re killing me! I cannot go there with my father or my mother, for it kills me. Oh, how gently you frame a heartwrenching reality which haunts hour after hour interminably, the subtly growing poignancy driving the facts into place with that perfect conclusion. Thank si very much for sharing.
September 8th, 2024 18:58
Cheeky Missy said:
Aww, I am at a loss for words! This is so heartbreaking! You\'re killing me! I cannot go there with my father or my mother, for it kills me. Oh, how gently you frame a heartwrenching reality which haunts hour after hour interminably, the subtly growing poignancy driving the facts into place with that perfect conclusion. Thank si very much for sharing.
September 8th, 2024 18:58
Your calming song
sorenbarrett said:
Loss and missing the departed remains the theme in this poem. Nicely written
September 8th, 2024 06:29
sorenbarrett said:
Loss and missing the departed remains the theme in this poem. Nicely written
September 8th, 2024 06:29
I have to wait
sorenbarrett said:
This was a fun read. It has a somewhat nihilistic or I don’t care approach which I like. Dialogue type form fits this well. Nicely done.
September 6th, 2024 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
This was a fun read. It has a somewhat nihilistic or I don’t care approach which I like. Dialogue type form fits this well. Nicely done.
September 6th, 2024 04:44
What is the word?
Dan Williams said:
Damned if I know. Gets a person thinking though.
September 6th, 2024 01:08
Dan Williams said:
Damned if I know. Gets a person thinking though.
September 6th, 2024 01:08
How do I speak to you?
orchidee said:
Good write M.
Meanwhile in cuckoo land - I\'m horrible - don\'t speak to me. I only say \'Go away!\' (heehee).
September 5th, 2024 08:54
orchidee said:
Good write M.
Meanwhile in cuckoo land - I\'m horrible - don\'t speak to me. I only say \'Go away!\' (heehee).
September 5th, 2024 08:54
How do I speak to you?
sorenbarrett said:
A very poignant question. What do we say to one who is gone? What words can make a difference very nicely written
September 5th, 2024 06:10
sorenbarrett said:
A very poignant question. What do we say to one who is gone? What words can make a difference very nicely written
September 5th, 2024 06:10
What is the word?
sorenbarrett said:
I search for the same word. It seems somehow buried deep inside, but my memory cannot retrieve it. Weather in poems or in conversation I often search for it.. I think it sometimes is generosity charity love but no word can express it. Nicely done.
September 5th, 2024 05:56
sorenbarrett said:
I search for the same word. It seems somehow buried deep inside, but my memory cannot retrieve it. Weather in poems or in conversation I often search for it.. I think it sometimes is generosity charity love but no word can express it. Nicely done.
September 5th, 2024 05:56
What is the word?
Cheeky Missy said:
It was on the tip of my tongue until you asked. Um, just give me...an eternity. I\'ll get back to you.
September 4th, 2024 19:18
Cheeky Missy said:
It was on the tip of my tongue until you asked. Um, just give me...an eternity. I\'ll get back to you.
September 4th, 2024 19:18
What is the word?
sorenbarrett said:
As I get older, I find that I have this word finding problem. I identify with this poem and that I guess makes it very good. Loved it.
September 4th, 2024 12:51
sorenbarrett said:
As I get older, I find that I have this word finding problem. I identify with this poem and that I guess makes it very good. Loved it.
September 4th, 2024 12:51
Solitude with my you
sorenbarrett said:
Being true to a memory is a choice we at times need to make. Lovely write
August 31st, 2024 09:35
sorenbarrett said:
Being true to a memory is a choice we at times need to make. Lovely write
August 31st, 2024 09:35
a little insane
Bella Shepard said:
A little insanity can lead to some really good things, point in fact this poem; rhyming, timing, absolutely shining. Loved it!
August 30th, 2024 10:23
Bella Shepard said:
A little insanity can lead to some really good things, point in fact this poem; rhyming, timing, absolutely shining. Loved it!
August 30th, 2024 10:23
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