Comments received on poems by Maplespal
I escaped
sorenbarrett said:
This writing has a most familiar sound to it from your last. Again, another good seductive and sent to us poem.
December 6th, 2024 05:30
sorenbarrett said:
This writing has a most familiar sound to it from your last. Again, another good seductive and sent to us poem.
December 6th, 2024 05:30
That hot day
TobaniNataiella said:
Very clever writing, leads to where ever your imagination wants to go with it, a really good read, thank you
December 5th, 2024 14:21
TobaniNataiella said:
Very clever writing, leads to where ever your imagination wants to go with it, a really good read, thank you
December 5th, 2024 14:21
That hot day
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful beginning and entry into this poem. The drop of sweat was ingenious as it moved it provoked anticipation and arrousal. Very nicely done
December 5th, 2024 13:23
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful beginning and entry into this poem. The drop of sweat was ingenious as it moved it provoked anticipation and arrousal. Very nicely done
December 5th, 2024 13:23
Off I drove
Doggerel Dave said:
PTSD, mate. Do you feel you are working through it here OK?
December 4th, 2024 07:03
Doggerel Dave said:
PTSD, mate. Do you feel you are working through it here OK?
December 4th, 2024 07:03
Off I drove
sorenbarrett said:
Frightening thoughts that many have already had some time in their life. Although some find this disturbing, I think it is more normal than most people want to admit. A start look at one moment in life nicely written.
December 4th, 2024 05:27
sorenbarrett said:
Frightening thoughts that many have already had some time in their life. Although some find this disturbing, I think it is more normal than most people want to admit. A start look at one moment in life nicely written.
December 4th, 2024 05:27
Off I drove
TobaniNataiella said:
A emotional poem, tenderly written, Thank you
December 4th, 2024 05:23
TobaniNataiella said:
A emotional poem, tenderly written, Thank you
December 4th, 2024 05:23
2 poems again brain dump
TobaniNataiella said:
I enjoyed the read including the bonus one.
December 3rd, 2024 10:58
TobaniNataiella said:
I enjoyed the read including the bonus one.
December 3rd, 2024 10:58
2 poems again brain dump
sorenbarrett said:
Poems that grow darker. Nicely written with good rhyme and flow beautiful images as well nicely done.
December 3rd, 2024 07:48
sorenbarrett said:
Poems that grow darker. Nicely written with good rhyme and flow beautiful images as well nicely done.
December 3rd, 2024 07:48
From here: direction 1
sorenbarrett said:
Sexual, sensual, errotic and romantic it calls out for physical touch
December 2nd, 2024 09:42
sorenbarrett said:
Sexual, sensual, errotic and romantic it calls out for physical touch
December 2nd, 2024 09:42
From here: direction 1
2781 said:
Well, after 30 years probably to your own room.
December 2nd, 2024 06:49
2781 said:
Well, after 30 years probably to your own room.
December 2nd, 2024 06:49
From here
sorenbarrett said:
Sexy and erotic, romantic, and sensual. Where else can we go from here? A love poem, indeed
December 1st, 2024 09:20
sorenbarrett said:
Sexy and erotic, romantic, and sensual. Where else can we go from here? A love poem, indeed
December 1st, 2024 09:20
Progress
TobaniNataiella said:
I really enjoyed this read, i can totally connect to it.
November 30th, 2024 22:02
TobaniNataiella said:
I really enjoyed this read, i can totally connect to it.
November 30th, 2024 22:02
Progress
sorenbarrett said:
We all need a way to de-escalate and diffuse ourselves from the world we live in. I tend to use poetry, although I’ve used meditation in the past as well some use fantasy and others social interactions. This poem explains it well.
November 30th, 2024 12:48
sorenbarrett said:
We all need a way to de-escalate and diffuse ourselves from the world we live in. I tend to use poetry, although I’ve used meditation in the past as well some use fantasy and others social interactions. This poem explains it well.
November 30th, 2024 12:48
Flashback
sorenbarrett said:
Post traumatic stress disorder is a terrible thing. It takes one out of reality and places one back in a spot. One wishes never had occurred. This descriptive poem, paints a picture of such an instance.
November 29th, 2024 12:09
sorenbarrett said:
Post traumatic stress disorder is a terrible thing. It takes one out of reality and places one back in a spot. One wishes never had occurred. This descriptive poem, paints a picture of such an instance.
November 29th, 2024 12:09
Confused hands
sorenbarrett said:
I have been there. As I have been reading your poems I have noticed their growth and improvement. You have progressed immensely, and your poems are wonderful
November 28th, 2024 16:50
sorenbarrett said:
I have been there. As I have been reading your poems I have noticed their growth and improvement. You have progressed immensely, and your poems are wonderful
November 28th, 2024 16:50
Kill it next life
rin said:
It is thought-provoking, boldly addressing and describing the agenda of the social function of religion in our time.
November 27th, 2024 08:57
rin said:
It is thought-provoking, boldly addressing and describing the agenda of the social function of religion in our time.
November 27th, 2024 08:57
Kill it next life
2781 said:
And what do I have here? declares the Lord. For my people have been taken away for nothing, and those that rule them mock, declares the Lord.
And all day long my name is constantly blasphemed.\"
November 27th, 2024 08:54
2781 said:
And what do I have here? declares the Lord. For my people have been taken away for nothing, and those that rule them mock, declares the Lord.
And all day long my name is constantly blasphemed.\"
November 27th, 2024 08:54
Kill it next life
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting in logical poem. Logic and belief have always been at odds. Let others believe what they wish and find happiness in delusions. Very nicely, composed it drips with anger.
November 27th, 2024 06:20
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting in logical poem. Logic and belief have always been at odds. Let others believe what they wish and find happiness in delusions. Very nicely, composed it drips with anger.
November 27th, 2024 06:20
Stuck in a noose & Inaccessible
sorenbarrett said:
Two points about two different points. Nevertheless, I have seen many use their religion as an excuse and sometimes to swindle others. Very nicely said
November 26th, 2024 06:38
sorenbarrett said:
Two points about two different points. Nevertheless, I have seen many use their religion as an excuse and sometimes to swindle others. Very nicely said
November 26th, 2024 06:38
The last part of that day
Cassie58 said:
A sad poem of loss. Nicely penned lines.
November 25th, 2024 17:20
Cassie58 said:
A sad poem of loss. Nicely penned lines.
November 25th, 2024 17:20
The last part of that day
sorenbarrett said:
Your poem again of loss past memories that provoked continued mourning
November 25th, 2024 05:40
sorenbarrett said:
Your poem again of loss past memories that provoked continued mourning
November 25th, 2024 05:40
Second part of that day
Cassie58 said:
Made me tearful remembering the days we buried our pets over the years. So much pain and loss. I truly felt this poem. It hit a soft spot. Beautiful and heartfelt.
November 24th, 2024 17:47
Cassie58 said:
Made me tearful remembering the days we buried our pets over the years. So much pain and loss. I truly felt this poem. It hit a soft spot. Beautiful and heartfelt.
November 24th, 2024 17:47
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