Comments received on poems by Maplespal
Distracted
sorenbarrett said:
An unperceived theft in this write. Well done in rhyme.
February 28th, 2026 10:14
sorenbarrett said:
An unperceived theft in this write. Well done in rhyme.
February 28th, 2026 10:14
Take
sorenbarrett said:
Taking control of oneself is the most important thing that one can do. Nicely worded
February 27th, 2026 18:46
sorenbarrett said:
Taking control of oneself is the most important thing that one can do. Nicely worded
February 27th, 2026 18:46
A high fall
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling of sudden recognition of being alone comes through in this poem. Nicely penned
February 26th, 2026 17:00
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling of sudden recognition of being alone comes through in this poem. Nicely penned
February 26th, 2026 17:00
Then I
sorenbarrett said:
Joy turned to loss leaving feelings of sadness. Nicely written
February 25th, 2026 15:39
sorenbarrett said:
Joy turned to loss leaving feelings of sadness. Nicely written
February 25th, 2026 15:39
What situation?
sorenbarrett said:
Different people different perspectives no two alike. The truth is what everyone decides it to be and if there is no unanimity there is no truth.
February 24th, 2026 15:00
sorenbarrett said:
Different people different perspectives no two alike. The truth is what everyone decides it to be and if there is no unanimity there is no truth.
February 24th, 2026 15:00
Now I cry
NafisaSB said:
a sad story, well told...and the brevity makes it all the more impressive
February 24th, 2026 00:44
NafisaSB said:
a sad story, well told...and the brevity makes it all the more impressive
February 24th, 2026 00:44
If you
sorenbarrett said:
The allure of love how strong that magnetic pull. Well expressed in this poem. Very nicely done
February 23rd, 2026 06:06
sorenbarrett said:
The allure of love how strong that magnetic pull. Well expressed in this poem. Very nicely done
February 23rd, 2026 06:06
Now I cry
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgic, powerful, sad it has it all. Nicely written
February 22nd, 2026 09:51
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgic, powerful, sad it has it all. Nicely written
February 22nd, 2026 09:51
As we hug
sorenbarrett said:
The fear of loosing what is most important one of the biggest impediments to progress and living a life as who you are. A lovely poem
February 21st, 2026 09:05
sorenbarrett said:
The fear of loosing what is most important one of the biggest impediments to progress and living a life as who you are. A lovely poem
February 21st, 2026 09:05
Hidden
sorenbarrett said:
So solitary this poem makes a point of it. It feels lonely not sad but lonely
February 20th, 2026 15:10
sorenbarrett said:
So solitary this poem makes a point of it. It feels lonely not sad but lonely
February 20th, 2026 15:10
How?
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderfully written this short poem has poetic meaning
February 13th, 2026 19:07
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderfully written this short poem has poetic meaning
February 13th, 2026 19:07
Who?
sorenbarrett said:
A haunting question in the word who. The element of control seems to raised in this poem. Nicely written
February 12th, 2026 21:12
sorenbarrett said:
A haunting question in the word who. The element of control seems to raised in this poem. Nicely written
February 12th, 2026 21:12
When?
sorenbarrett said:
Clever indeed this piece is tightly woven and neatly sewn. Well done
February 11th, 2026 20:54
sorenbarrett said:
Clever indeed this piece is tightly woven and neatly sewn. Well done
February 11th, 2026 20:54
Shiver
sorenbarrett said:
A shiver of loneliness is a sad shiver indeed. Well expressed.
February 1st, 2026 16:42
sorenbarrett said:
A shiver of loneliness is a sad shiver indeed. Well expressed.
February 1st, 2026 16:42
Yummy!
sorenbarrett said:
War always justified by both sides. It is started and ordered by those that never fight it. A good write my friend
January 22nd, 2026 19:09
sorenbarrett said:
War always justified by both sides. It is started and ordered by those that never fight it. A good write my friend
January 22nd, 2026 19:09
Ceiling shards
sorenbarrett said:
Such interesting images in this write and with each wondering what the meaning is. Lovely write
January 21st, 2026 19:22
sorenbarrett said:
Such interesting images in this write and with each wondering what the meaning is. Lovely write
January 21st, 2026 19:22
Lost words
sorenbarrett said:
I often search the house from top to bottom looking for dishes left around to be done. This may apply to tasks in general.
January 20th, 2026 20:03
sorenbarrett said:
I often search the house from top to bottom looking for dishes left around to be done. This may apply to tasks in general.
January 20th, 2026 20:03
Flickering flame
sorenbarrett said:
The candle and light such timeless images and metaphors. A most lovely write with good rhyme and flow. Nicely done
January 19th, 2026 08:12
sorenbarrett said:
The candle and light such timeless images and metaphors. A most lovely write with good rhyme and flow. Nicely done
January 19th, 2026 08:12
Morning thoughts
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphoric poem of images of culinary delight to fill the stomach and tickle the tastebuds, they warm the soul but soon will be hungry again
January 18th, 2026 07:18
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphoric poem of images of culinary delight to fill the stomach and tickle the tastebuds, they warm the soul but soon will be hungry again
January 18th, 2026 07:18
Be patient
sorenbarrett said:
A poem poignant in its message noting that the earth too has its needs to be heard. Well done
January 17th, 2026 07:49
sorenbarrett said:
A poem poignant in its message noting that the earth too has its needs to be heard. Well done
January 17th, 2026 07:49
Sympathy card
sorenbarrett said:
A sad comment on relationships and the sentiment between people. Well written with good rhyme and meter
January 16th, 2026 07:54
sorenbarrett said:
A sad comment on relationships and the sentiment between people. Well written with good rhyme and meter
January 16th, 2026 07:54
Missing
sorenbarrett said:
Lost things to be found and how, where to look. A great poem of how we find what we need or want. Easier said that done. Nicely written
January 15th, 2026 06:52
sorenbarrett said:
Lost things to be found and how, where to look. A great poem of how we find what we need or want. Easier said that done. Nicely written
January 15th, 2026 06:52
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