Comments received on poems by Maplespal
Winter thoughts
Bella Shepard said:
We have our favorite seasons, and I commiserate with your feelings of winter coming on. Although I must admit, I do love to walk in the falling snow, when all is white and peaceful. A good write, stay warm and safe.
November 15th, 2025 12:58
Bella Shepard said:
We have our favorite seasons, and I commiserate with your feelings of winter coming on. Although I must admit, I do love to walk in the falling snow, when all is white and peaceful. A good write, stay warm and safe.
November 15th, 2025 12:58
Winter thoughts
sorenbarrett said:
We always seem to long for what we don\'t have and that applies to the seasons as well. A wonderful write of winter coming on. Nicely done
November 15th, 2025 10:44
sorenbarrett said:
We always seem to long for what we don\'t have and that applies to the seasons as well. A wonderful write of winter coming on. Nicely done
November 15th, 2025 10:44
Strong flame
sorenbarrett said:
A challenge and a dare in a poem that is opposed to its opposite in love. Maybe the act of sacrifice as a love offering may come into play as well. Nicely done
November 11th, 2025 19:28
sorenbarrett said:
A challenge and a dare in a poem that is opposed to its opposite in love. Maybe the act of sacrifice as a love offering may come into play as well. Nicely done
November 11th, 2025 19:28
I tried to understand
NinjaGirl said:
It\'s so hard when the only thing we can do is speculate on the reasons why...well done!
November 10th, 2025 13:08
NinjaGirl said:
It\'s so hard when the only thing we can do is speculate on the reasons why...well done!
November 10th, 2025 13:08
I tried to understand
sorenbarrett said:
A confusing place that I have been before. Lovely lines grace this poem with wonderful rhyme and easy flow. Nicely done and a fave
November 10th, 2025 08:05
sorenbarrett said:
A confusing place that I have been before. Lovely lines grace this poem with wonderful rhyme and easy flow. Nicely done and a fave
November 10th, 2025 08:05
A moment: The end
Bella Shepard said:
You capture metaphorically the sin of betrayal in love, where the stab to the heart is the unkindest cut of all. Good write.
November 9th, 2025 10:37
Bella Shepard said:
You capture metaphorically the sin of betrayal in love, where the stab to the heart is the unkindest cut of all. Good write.
November 9th, 2025 10:37
A moment: The end
sorenbarrett said:
Guilt by association a short write about not hanging with the wrong people. A good read
November 9th, 2025 10:21
sorenbarrett said:
Guilt by association a short write about not hanging with the wrong people. A good read
November 9th, 2025 10:21
Halved
sorenbarrett said:
So true how few the memories before we could speak. Memories have language keys that unlock their vault. I have a few snap shot flashes of memories from when I was just a toddler confirmed by those that were there at the time but only a few before age four. A wonderful poem
November 7th, 2025 11:52
sorenbarrett said:
So true how few the memories before we could speak. Memories have language keys that unlock their vault. I have a few snap shot flashes of memories from when I was just a toddler confirmed by those that were there at the time but only a few before age four. A wonderful poem
November 7th, 2025 11:52
What now
sorenbarrett said:
Tears often a manipulation can be annoying. It makes it difficult to tell the difference from legitimate and manipulative. Sometimes kids can be demanding. Lovely
November 6th, 2025 17:15
sorenbarrett said:
Tears often a manipulation can be annoying. It makes it difficult to tell the difference from legitimate and manipulative. Sometimes kids can be demanding. Lovely
November 6th, 2025 17:15
The iron run
sorenbarrett said:
I have to say that this one puzzled me I had visions of a man with a nine iron chasing down the hill. I guess it could be iron man but I haven\'t followed the comics too much. Very interesting
November 5th, 2025 14:49
sorenbarrett said:
I have to say that this one puzzled me I had visions of a man with a nine iron chasing down the hill. I guess it could be iron man but I haven\'t followed the comics too much. Very interesting
November 5th, 2025 14:49
Wet pillow
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor and also in reverse. I love to sleep to the sound of the rain and many say that they cry themselves to sleep. Is sleep a defense against pain or threat well written
November 4th, 2025 19:16
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor and also in reverse. I love to sleep to the sound of the rain and many say that they cry themselves to sleep. Is sleep a defense against pain or threat well written
November 4th, 2025 19:16
The rain
NinjaGirl said:
Rain is so beautiful it\'s true, and with everywhere it\'s been it does have a lot to say! I love this concept!
November 2nd, 2025 21:49
NinjaGirl said:
Rain is so beautiful it\'s true, and with everywhere it\'s been it does have a lot to say! I love this concept!
November 2nd, 2025 21:49
The rain
Bella Shepard said:
Your graphic description conjures memories of my youth, when I loved to pop open an umbrella and take long walks in the rain. Each line creates a blissful experience, beautifully and lovingly written.
November 2nd, 2025 09:55
Bella Shepard said:
Your graphic description conjures memories of my youth, when I loved to pop open an umbrella and take long walks in the rain. Each line creates a blissful experience, beautifully and lovingly written.
November 2nd, 2025 09:55
The rain
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful pouring of words that fall like the rain. Each drop and word forming pools and rivulets to the next following the stream of consciousness. Nicely done
November 2nd, 2025 09:25
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful pouring of words that fall like the rain. Each drop and word forming pools and rivulets to the next following the stream of consciousness. Nicely done
November 2nd, 2025 09:25
A thought: Leaves
sorenbarrett said:
This one is lovely both in the literal sense and as a metaphor. It rocks a fave
November 1st, 2025 11:02
sorenbarrett said:
This one is lovely both in the literal sense and as a metaphor. It rocks a fave
November 1st, 2025 11:02
The cat plays
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed they do. Have had cats and know. A fun read.
October 31st, 2025 17:07
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed they do. Have had cats and know. A fun read.
October 31st, 2025 17:07
Salted
sorenbarrett said:
I feel that this journey is a metaphor for life itself and the cracks we suffer during the journey taking on water and the question of whether we will reach our destination. A lovely write
October 29th, 2025 11:22
sorenbarrett said:
I feel that this journey is a metaphor for life itself and the cracks we suffer during the journey taking on water and the question of whether we will reach our destination. A lovely write
October 29th, 2025 11:22
Always
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely said Maplespal this poem recounts a relationship deeper than flesh
October 28th, 2025 05:47
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely said Maplespal this poem recounts a relationship deeper than flesh
October 28th, 2025 05:47
What I did
sorenbarrett said:
This poem a statement in time with reflection and hope as well as resignation. Nicely done
October 27th, 2025 16:17
sorenbarrett said:
This poem a statement in time with reflection and hope as well as resignation. Nicely done
October 27th, 2025 16:17
Jitters
sorenbarrett said:
I see the title in this poem itself. We all get them from time to time under certain circumstances. A lovely write
October 26th, 2025 07:29
sorenbarrett said:
I see the title in this poem itself. We all get them from time to time under certain circumstances. A lovely write
October 26th, 2025 07:29
Share the light
sorenbarrett said:
Words with meaning but a meaning that one can not comprehend entirely all at once. It speaks in the rhyme of a riddle to be understood with time. Lovely
October 25th, 2025 19:30
sorenbarrett said:
Words with meaning but a meaning that one can not comprehend entirely all at once. It speaks in the rhyme of a riddle to be understood with time. Lovely
October 25th, 2025 19:30
Cloud fun
sorenbarrett said:
This is very good I loved it a great mental trick on oneself or on nature however you see it. Lovely
October 24th, 2025 15:50
sorenbarrett said:
This is very good I loved it a great mental trick on oneself or on nature however you see it. Lovely
October 24th, 2025 15:50
Fallen dream
sorenbarrett said:
When we speak of fallen angels we think of someone that was doing right and then did something wrong. This poem metaphorically speaks of this fall and the anguish that goes with it. Nicely done
October 23rd, 2025 19:29
sorenbarrett said:
When we speak of fallen angels we think of someone that was doing right and then did something wrong. This poem metaphorically speaks of this fall and the anguish that goes with it. Nicely done
October 23rd, 2025 19:29
Brain dump # 391
sorenbarrett said:
They do all have an association with each other outside of the rhyme and near rhyme at the end of the line in an ABAB pattern. The first word a measure of the second a defining element. Well done
October 22nd, 2025 17:26
sorenbarrett said:
They do all have an association with each other outside of the rhyme and near rhyme at the end of the line in an ABAB pattern. The first word a measure of the second a defining element. Well done
October 22nd, 2025 17:26
My fault
Doggerel Dave said:
It was fair warning, after all.
Good, short to the point write.
October 21st, 2025 19:27
Doggerel Dave said:
It was fair warning, after all.
Good, short to the point write.
October 21st, 2025 19:27
My fault
sorenbarrett said:
The effects of drinking too much. Well rhymed and metered. Well done
October 21st, 2025 19:18
sorenbarrett said:
The effects of drinking too much. Well rhymed and metered. Well done
October 21st, 2025 19:18
A moment of love
RSM0812 said:
A good ✍️ about love and sensuality. I enjoyed the read.
October 20th, 2025 13:41
RSM0812 said:
A good ✍️ about love and sensuality. I enjoyed the read.
October 20th, 2025 13:41
A moment of love
sorenbarrett said:
Erotic and sensual it speaks to the listener in sexual tones. Lovely
October 20th, 2025 11:51
sorenbarrett said:
Erotic and sensual it speaks to the listener in sexual tones. Lovely
October 20th, 2025 11:51
Winter thoughts
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images painted in this poem of the onset of winter and its onset. Although this appears literal it may be metaphorical as well regarding age. Nicely done
October 20th, 2025 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images painted in this poem of the onset of winter and its onset. Although this appears literal it may be metaphorical as well regarding age. Nicely done
October 20th, 2025 04:40
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