Comments received on poems by Maplespal
“Just, until” & “A drop waiting”
sorenbarrett said:
A plea for company and I like even more the reworked second poem it holds more promise and brightness
November 3rd, 2024 09:23
sorenbarrett said:
A plea for company and I like even more the reworked second poem it holds more promise and brightness
November 3rd, 2024 09:23
Waiting for snow
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the personification of the snowflake and the metaphor of people being alone as well. Death upon impact most interesting. A beautiful poem
November 2nd, 2024 10:14
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the personification of the snowflake and the metaphor of people being alone as well. Death upon impact most interesting. A beautiful poem
November 2nd, 2024 10:14
Sorry 3 poems
Cheeky Missy said:
Very lovely. Each is a beauty in its own right, together expressive of a larger reality unfolding throughout, the queries posed and unspoken tempting answers. Charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and haunting poignancy.
November 1st, 2024 13:35
Cheeky Missy said:
Very lovely. Each is a beauty in its own right, together expressive of a larger reality unfolding throughout, the queries posed and unspoken tempting answers. Charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and haunting poignancy.
November 1st, 2024 13:35
A drop\'s view
sorenbarrett said:
This to me held a strong metaphor of how the sea in this life separates the sailor from his love as death does as well but how both are temporary until reuniting. Lovely
October 31st, 2024 05:00
sorenbarrett said:
This to me held a strong metaphor of how the sea in this life separates the sailor from his love as death does as well but how both are temporary until reuniting. Lovely
October 31st, 2024 05:00
6 poorly written poems sorry
sorenbarrett said:
I can feel the pain in these and the sense of loss. Expression of this pain and loss hopefully helps heal the wound. Nicely done
October 30th, 2024 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
I can feel the pain in these and the sense of loss. Expression of this pain and loss hopefully helps heal the wound. Nicely done
October 30th, 2024 05:05
4 different poems
Mase ♪ said:
Love all 4 of them! Last ones my favorite, good write! ❤️
October 29th, 2024 07:59
Mase ♪ said:
Love all 4 of them! Last ones my favorite, good write! ❤️
October 29th, 2024 07:59
Cold it is
sorenbarrett said:
Been there done that but no more cold for me. Nicely written in verse this poem brought back old memories. Thanks for the memories
October 28th, 2024 10:01
sorenbarrett said:
Been there done that but no more cold for me. Nicely written in verse this poem brought back old memories. Thanks for the memories
October 28th, 2024 10:01
That day\'s call
sorenbarrett said:
A great set up to the story in this poem. We often blame others for our own mistakes what a great message and told so well. Lovely
October 27th, 2024 06:07
sorenbarrett said:
A great set up to the story in this poem. We often blame others for our own mistakes what a great message and told so well. Lovely
October 27th, 2024 06:07
Darkness\'s trap & Endless Night
sorenbarrett said:
Some similarity to Dylan Thomas here. having had general anesthesia before I imagine it something like that. Things go black. Very nicely worded
October 25th, 2024 05:14
sorenbarrett said:
Some similarity to Dylan Thomas here. having had general anesthesia before I imagine it something like that. Things go black. Very nicely worded
October 25th, 2024 05:14
2 poems, 2 views
sorenbarrett said:
Deep philosophically with a great message set poetically with some great lines in verse. Most wonderfull
October 23rd, 2024 18:06
sorenbarrett said:
Deep philosophically with a great message set poetically with some great lines in verse. Most wonderfull
October 23rd, 2024 18:06
3 poems on time
sorenbarrett said:
Time from different perspectives each well written
October 22nd, 2024 20:27
sorenbarrett said:
Time from different perspectives each well written
October 22nd, 2024 20:27
A sheltering shell
sorenbarrett said:
A most enjoyable read this poem notes how we exploit the world around us without any remorse. nicely done
October 21st, 2024 17:30
sorenbarrett said:
A most enjoyable read this poem notes how we exploit the world around us without any remorse. nicely done
October 21st, 2024 17:30
Trapped in a lies noose
sorenbarrett said:
Life is complicated and one has to ask if lies are better than truth some times. A poignant write
October 20th, 2024 06:31
sorenbarrett said:
Life is complicated and one has to ask if lies are better than truth some times. A poignant write
October 20th, 2024 06:31
Under a crying tree
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphoric and melancholicly sad. A great use of metaphor here. Nicely done
October 19th, 2024 07:42
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphoric and melancholicly sad. A great use of metaphor here. Nicely done
October 19th, 2024 07:42
The darkness creeps
sorenbarrett said:
Dark indeed this poem has a feel of being taken over in oblivion and a foreboding sense to it. Nicely expressed
October 18th, 2024 06:59
sorenbarrett said:
Dark indeed this poem has a feel of being taken over in oblivion and a foreboding sense to it. Nicely expressed
October 18th, 2024 06:59
She rests her wings
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor cast in realistic nature. It starts so soft and ends so abruptly and violently. Sad but so well written
October 17th, 2024 17:38
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor cast in realistic nature. It starts so soft and ends so abruptly and violently. Sad but so well written
October 17th, 2024 17:38
I won\'t say the words
Bobby O said:
Before the reaper took your moves
Wow, they explain so much with such a simple metaphor and maybe we all gotta go through it so it applies everywhere every day really nice.way to extend a point
October 16th, 2024 04:01
Bobby O said:
Before the reaper took your moves
Wow, they explain so much with such a simple metaphor and maybe we all gotta go through it so it applies everywhere every day really nice.way to extend a point
October 16th, 2024 04:01
I won\'t say the words
Doggerel Dave said:
The multisensorial nature of memory clear here in a rich tribute just long enough and complete unto itself.
October 15th, 2024 23:08
Doggerel Dave said:
The multisensorial nature of memory clear here in a rich tribute just long enough and complete unto itself.
October 15th, 2024 23:08
Wandering
sorenbarrett said:
A thought that occurs to many and yet, eccept in rare cases, one always goes first. A poem with a haunting feel
October 13th, 2024 15:28
sorenbarrett said:
A thought that occurs to many and yet, eccept in rare cases, one always goes first. A poem with a haunting feel
October 13th, 2024 15:28
Where I you will find
Dan Williams said:
All is nice, \"all while the sun, its heavy head it lifts\" is special. Very nice.
October 12th, 2024 23:43
Dan Williams said:
All is nice, \"all while the sun, its heavy head it lifts\" is special. Very nice.
October 12th, 2024 23:43
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