Comments received on poems by Maplespal
To the fire
Bella Shepard said:
Quite a tribute! Were we not born of fire in the beginning, must be something we have to have. Good write!
July 16th, 2025 12:09
Bella Shepard said:
Quite a tribute! Were we not born of fire in the beginning, must be something we have to have. Good write!
July 16th, 2025 12:09
To the fire
sorenbarrett said:
Don\'t get burned in this relationship I would say. A most interesting read
July 16th, 2025 05:19
sorenbarrett said:
Don\'t get burned in this relationship I would say. A most interesting read
July 16th, 2025 05:19
A thought: Of my mom
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful memories and a feeling conveyed. Lovely
July 15th, 2025 09:34
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful memories and a feeling conveyed. Lovely
July 15th, 2025 09:34
One thought stirs
Bella Shepard said:
The overwhelming despair of loss in this poem is powerful. The loss a loved one seems unconscionable, and yet it must be born, or not. For many it is insurmountable. Good write!
July 14th, 2025 10:21
Bella Shepard said:
The overwhelming despair of loss in this poem is powerful. The loss a loved one seems unconscionable, and yet it must be born, or not. For many it is insurmountable. Good write!
July 14th, 2025 10:21
One thought stirs
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! this one moves from gentle to explosive. A poem of loss and difficulty adapting with dire consequences. Very well done and with a powerful feel to the ending.
July 14th, 2025 05:23
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! this one moves from gentle to explosive. A poem of loss and difficulty adapting with dire consequences. Very well done and with a powerful feel to the ending.
July 14th, 2025 05:23
The old man waits
Bella Shepard said:
The moon has it\'s own special charm, that in our illuminated world we seem to loose sight of. Thank you for this beautiful tribute to the orb that circles us and keeps us stable. What would we do without it?
July 13th, 2025 15:03
Bella Shepard said:
The moon has it\'s own special charm, that in our illuminated world we seem to loose sight of. Thank you for this beautiful tribute to the orb that circles us and keeps us stable. What would we do without it?
July 13th, 2025 15:03
The old man waits
sorenbarrett said:
I love this poem that is so soothing in its rhythmic rhyme and seems to rock a child to sleep as a lullaby so nicely done.
July 13th, 2025 04:53
sorenbarrett said:
I love this poem that is so soothing in its rhythmic rhyme and seems to rock a child to sleep as a lullaby so nicely done.
July 13th, 2025 04:53
Stand your crawl
sorenbarrett said:
A plea and a tribute at the same time. A sense of want and desire. Well written
July 12th, 2025 09:56
sorenbarrett said:
A plea and a tribute at the same time. A sense of want and desire. Well written
July 12th, 2025 09:56
Rare inspiration
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem for sure. All the little things that may go unnoticed yet make memories. Lovely
July 11th, 2025 07:21
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem for sure. All the little things that may go unnoticed yet make memories. Lovely
July 11th, 2025 07:21
I want I desire
sorenbarrett said:
They all seem to have a common theme that of choice and control. A wonderful write of what we desire and how some we will never acquire.
July 10th, 2025 14:36
sorenbarrett said:
They all seem to have a common theme that of choice and control. A wonderful write of what we desire and how some we will never acquire.
July 10th, 2025 14:36
Aging
sorenbarrett said:
I feel this poem not only in the mind but in the body and bones. Nicely said
July 8th, 2025 06:55
sorenbarrett said:
I feel this poem not only in the mind but in the body and bones. Nicely said
July 8th, 2025 06:55
2 again: Roar & Choices
sorenbarrett said:
I have met the tiger and as for choices I am all for that but one should know that the choices one makes affect others the suicide rate in children whose parents committed suicide are significantly higher than those who\'s parents did not. Well written
July 7th, 2025 05:45
sorenbarrett said:
I have met the tiger and as for choices I am all for that but one should know that the choices one makes affect others the suicide rate in children whose parents committed suicide are significantly higher than those who\'s parents did not. Well written
July 7th, 2025 05:45
Dreamily absurd
sorenbarrett said:
Yes the vision of Nicola Tesla before Rockefeller got in the way. Free power for all transported wirelessly. They say it is impossible but they said the same of his AC motor. Too bad greed got in the way. Lovely poem
July 6th, 2025 07:00
sorenbarrett said:
Yes the vision of Nicola Tesla before Rockefeller got in the way. Free power for all transported wirelessly. They say it is impossible but they said the same of his AC motor. Too bad greed got in the way. Lovely poem
July 6th, 2025 07:00
A moment: Cut palm
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes we all need a little space to deal with difficulties. Give the man a moment and some breathing room. Well said
July 5th, 2025 07:01
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes we all need a little space to deal with difficulties. Give the man a moment and some breathing room. Well said
July 5th, 2025 07:01
The suns warmth
Caring dove said:
That’s lovely )) especially like the mention of that sun
Very nicely expressed !
And true .. doesn’t always help to look back at our past
July 4th, 2025 07:20
Caring dove said:
That’s lovely )) especially like the mention of that sun
Very nicely expressed !
And true .. doesn’t always help to look back at our past
July 4th, 2025 07:20
The suns warmth
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of dwelling on the past as opposed to living in the present. That we have choice of what memories we dwell on good or bad and that enjoying the sun of the present is best. A wonderful metaphor blended into message is made. A fave
July 4th, 2025 06:55
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of dwelling on the past as opposed to living in the present. That we have choice of what memories we dwell on good or bad and that enjoying the sun of the present is best. A wonderful metaphor blended into message is made. A fave
July 4th, 2025 06:55
Can we
sorenbarrett said:
Great questions that seem to have a right answer but the reality is far from it. Nicely said
July 3rd, 2025 06:03
sorenbarrett said:
Great questions that seem to have a right answer but the reality is far from it. Nicely said
July 3rd, 2025 06:03
Let\'s start a war
sorenbarrett said:
So many wrathful gods of war. Why then when God preached peace do his follower practice war? A poem that gives pause for thought. Well written.
July 2nd, 2025 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
So many wrathful gods of war. Why then when God preached peace do his follower practice war? A poem that gives pause for thought. Well written.
July 2nd, 2025 04:57
Repeating my phrase
sorenbarrett said:
Mechanically haunting as if a dead chant from the grave. It echoes in the mind. Well done
July 1st, 2025 06:56
sorenbarrett said:
Mechanically haunting as if a dead chant from the grave. It echoes in the mind. Well done
July 1st, 2025 06:56
Blurred vision
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem and the metaphor is true. We see through the filter of our own experience. Well done.
June 30th, 2025 09:13
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem and the metaphor is true. We see through the filter of our own experience. Well done.
June 30th, 2025 09:13
Just ignore what I said
sorenbarrett said:
Loose lips sink ships and a slip of the tongue disaster has brung. A good read
June 29th, 2025 06:55
sorenbarrett said:
Loose lips sink ships and a slip of the tongue disaster has brung. A good read
June 29th, 2025 06:55
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