Comments received on poems by Maplespal
Deep breaths and pants
sorenbarrett said:
I our limited dictionary we have ruled out life for many things including planets, solar systems, galaxies but we need to stretch our minds a bit and realize that our view does not make it so. A mind opening write that I happen to agree with. Lovely
March 16th, 2025 07:37
sorenbarrett said:
I our limited dictionary we have ruled out life for many things including planets, solar systems, galaxies but we need to stretch our minds a bit and realize that our view does not make it so. A mind opening write that I happen to agree with. Lovely
March 16th, 2025 07:37
First dance
sorenbarrett said:
Many stories appear but the one I chose is of two young lovers who in the dance of life found that it burned out too quickly. A lovely write
March 15th, 2025 07:23
sorenbarrett said:
Many stories appear but the one I chose is of two young lovers who in the dance of life found that it burned out too quickly. A lovely write
March 15th, 2025 07:23
Tragedy
sorenbarrett said:
An open ended poem as to who the victim is stranger, daughter, girlfriend, wife, mother, grandmother each would carry a different feeling and meaning. Also the reason for the drowning not mentioned and again with varied feelings depending on what. A tragedy it is indeed and the last line tells that it was very important to him. Well written I love the open ending to all the facts
March 14th, 2025 11:36
sorenbarrett said:
An open ended poem as to who the victim is stranger, daughter, girlfriend, wife, mother, grandmother each would carry a different feeling and meaning. Also the reason for the drowning not mentioned and again with varied feelings depending on what. A tragedy it is indeed and the last line tells that it was very important to him. Well written I love the open ending to all the facts
March 14th, 2025 11:36
Tragedy
Poetic Licence said:
Sad and touching write,seeing a tragedy unfold before your eyes, then the realization life still has to go on, well written write
March 14th, 2025 11:27
Poetic Licence said:
Sad and touching write,seeing a tragedy unfold before your eyes, then the realization life still has to go on, well written write
March 14th, 2025 11:27
Some issues
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of a bit of emotional battles going on, as correctly said in the write we are only human, nicely expressed
March 14th, 2025 02:57
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of a bit of emotional battles going on, as correctly said in the write we are only human, nicely expressed
March 14th, 2025 02:57
Some issues
sorenbarrett said:
Confusion is the first word that comes to mind that is confusion of the author as to what has he done. The rational explanations are understood but the repercussions are too vast for comprehension and lead to a questioning of the mind. Emotional turmoil is the result. Well written
March 13th, 2025 19:34
sorenbarrett said:
Confusion is the first word that comes to mind that is confusion of the author as to what has he done. The rational explanations are understood but the repercussions are too vast for comprehension and lead to a questioning of the mind. Emotional turmoil is the result. Well written
March 13th, 2025 19:34
Dry Lipped
Poetic Licence said:
This is a wonderful write, get the sense of someone badly wounded or injured who thinks that\'s it time is up, but they survive on that day, Knowing though on another day they might not be so lucky, well written
March 13th, 2025 03:14
Poetic Licence said:
This is a wonderful write, get the sense of someone badly wounded or injured who thinks that\'s it time is up, but they survive on that day, Knowing though on another day they might not be so lucky, well written
March 13th, 2025 03:14
Dry Lipped
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor is this poem. A great write of love and death. Very nice
March 12th, 2025 15:47
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor is this poem. A great write of love and death. Very nice
March 12th, 2025 15:47
I\'m waiting here
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of someone still hoping but are just left waiting, nicely expressed
March 12th, 2025 03:11
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of someone still hoping but are just left waiting, nicely expressed
March 12th, 2025 03:11
I\'m waiting here
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of loss and longing pervades this poem and extends a hand of hope in waiting. Lovely
March 11th, 2025 15:54
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of loss and longing pervades this poem and extends a hand of hope in waiting. Lovely
March 11th, 2025 15:54
Robust and vast
Poetic Licence said:
A true mixture of wonderful imagery as you read, confirmation that imagination is a wonderful and endless thing, enjoyed the read
March 10th, 2025 07:41
Poetic Licence said:
A true mixture of wonderful imagery as you read, confirmation that imagination is a wonderful and endless thing, enjoyed the read
March 10th, 2025 07:41
Robust and vast
sorenbarrett said:
Varied thoughts are introduced as the poem evolves. Imagination is shown in the great imagery of the universe and familiar objects. A lovely cacophony of imagery in this poem
March 10th, 2025 05:02
sorenbarrett said:
Varied thoughts are introduced as the poem evolves. Imagination is shown in the great imagery of the universe and familiar objects. A lovely cacophony of imagery in this poem
March 10th, 2025 05:02
Low waged & A soldiers need
sorenbarrett said:
Two different stories but similar in some ways. Both under paid both with little hope and a bit dark.
March 9th, 2025 08:18
sorenbarrett said:
Two different stories but similar in some ways. Both under paid both with little hope and a bit dark.
March 9th, 2025 08:18
Kept in a dream
sorenbarrett said:
Dreams keep memories of beauty from the past and imagination. Very nicely stated in this poem
March 8th, 2025 09:22
sorenbarrett said:
Dreams keep memories of beauty from the past and imagination. Very nicely stated in this poem
March 8th, 2025 09:22
2 Brain dumps sorry
sorenbarrett said:
i There the dot is in its spot. I loved the poems they were cleverly worded and hold a truth. Nicely done
March 7th, 2025 06:21
sorenbarrett said:
i There the dot is in its spot. I loved the poems they were cleverly worded and hold a truth. Nicely done
March 7th, 2025 06:21
Lost in the ocean
Poetic Licence said:
A write full of sadness and loneliness, with possibly dark intentions, emotions expressed well in this write
March 6th, 2025 11:26
Poetic Licence said:
A write full of sadness and loneliness, with possibly dark intentions, emotions expressed well in this write
March 6th, 2025 11:26
Lost in the ocean
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds lost, lonely and sad. Very nice
March 6th, 2025 09:11
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds lost, lonely and sad. Very nice
March 6th, 2025 09:11
Bread
sorenbarrett said:
There are all types of breads from sweet breads to sour dough. I love the metaphor it seems to fit well.
March 5th, 2025 06:19
sorenbarrett said:
There are all types of breads from sweet breads to sour dough. I love the metaphor it seems to fit well.
March 5th, 2025 06:19
Watching a smirk
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of reflection and being surprised by a memory you thought you had forgotten, enjoyed the read
March 4th, 2025 08:18
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of reflection and being surprised by a memory you thought you had forgotten, enjoyed the read
March 4th, 2025 08:18
Watching a smirk
sorenbarrett said:
Sad nostalgia and well written in this poem of loss and having to be in the right spot to see, remember and feel the past. Lovely
March 4th, 2025 06:52
sorenbarrett said:
Sad nostalgia and well written in this poem of loss and having to be in the right spot to see, remember and feel the past. Lovely
March 4th, 2025 06:52
Watching a smirk
Natalie Gladmir said:
How sweet that you are so observant, and how wonderful that you have not lost the ability to be pleasantly surprised by someone\'s unexpected appearance.
March 4th, 2025 06:41
Natalie Gladmir said:
How sweet that you are so observant, and how wonderful that you have not lost the ability to be pleasantly surprised by someone\'s unexpected appearance.
March 4th, 2025 06:41
Watching a smirk
MDStone said:
They sure do, don’t they? A painful memory or a pleasant smirk… Catching us at the spot we happen to be. Great writing. Thanks for sharing!
March 4th, 2025 06:30
MDStone said:
They sure do, don’t they? A painful memory or a pleasant smirk… Catching us at the spot we happen to be. Great writing. Thanks for sharing!
March 4th, 2025 06:30
Replay
Poetic Licence said:
Enjoyed the way this was written , some memories do take us to places we would rather not be, enjoyed the read
March 3rd, 2025 06:11
Poetic Licence said:
Enjoyed the way this was written , some memories do take us to places we would rather not be, enjoyed the read
March 3rd, 2025 06:11
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