Comments received on poems by Maplespal
Being brave
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read of fear and how it is associated with a childlike searching for security. Well written
June 22nd, 2026 16:22
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read of fear and how it is associated with a childlike searching for security. Well written
June 22nd, 2026 16:22
No second time
sorenbarrett said:
It is the emotive force that gets the fave a past worked, lived now in pieces and too late to put back together the only option to leave. Well written and a fave
June 20th, 2026 06:48
sorenbarrett said:
It is the emotive force that gets the fave a past worked, lived now in pieces and too late to put back together the only option to leave. Well written and a fave
June 20th, 2026 06:48
Desperately we burn
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries a feeling of imminent danger of loss. Well written
June 19th, 2026 15:01
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries a feeling of imminent danger of loss. Well written
June 19th, 2026 15:01
Got Hungry
sorenbarrett said:
Food and the thought of it makes me hungry too. Well written
June 17th, 2026 17:59
sorenbarrett said:
Food and the thought of it makes me hungry too. Well written
June 17th, 2026 17:59
Imposing
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that requires careful reading and some thinking nicely composed with some intriguing rhyme well done
June 16th, 2026 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that requires careful reading and some thinking nicely composed with some intriguing rhyme well done
June 16th, 2026 04:16
Camping
sorenbarrett said:
Well voiced it is these sounds that I love and that relax me. Well written
June 15th, 2026 05:56
sorenbarrett said:
Well voiced it is these sounds that I love and that relax me. Well written
June 15th, 2026 05:56
Fire starter
sorenbarrett said:
This does indeed feel dream like and was nicely written with good rhyme. Well done
June 14th, 2026 14:51
sorenbarrett said:
This does indeed feel dream like and was nicely written with good rhyme. Well done
June 14th, 2026 14:51
A morning moment
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of the school child I remember it well and it was not my favorite time or tune. Well written
June 13th, 2026 06:42
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of the school child I remember it well and it was not my favorite time or tune. Well written
June 13th, 2026 06:42
Made in America
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks its sentiments regarding guns and their potential damage. Nicely said
June 11th, 2026 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks its sentiments regarding guns and their potential damage. Nicely said
June 11th, 2026 04:47
Clouded
sorenbarrett said:
This wonderful short casts the image of being carried on drugs cloud. Well done
June 10th, 2026 06:45
sorenbarrett said:
This wonderful short casts the image of being carried on drugs cloud. Well done
June 10th, 2026 06:45
Bored and gunned
sorenbarrett said:
Chilling the rhyme of a serial killer. Short and sweet but hauntingly chilling
June 9th, 2026 06:16
sorenbarrett said:
Chilling the rhyme of a serial killer. Short and sweet but hauntingly chilling
June 9th, 2026 06:16
Scrap piece #1 used
sorenbarrett said:
A good read. Just because present technology does not allow it to be seen does not mean it isn\'t there. So it is proven. Well written
June 8th, 2026 12:47
sorenbarrett said:
A good read. Just because present technology does not allow it to be seen does not mean it isn\'t there. So it is proven. Well written
June 8th, 2026 12:47
Air head me
sorenbarrett said:
A well written poem of pain and a need for its removal. Well done
June 7th, 2026 11:54
sorenbarrett said:
A well written poem of pain and a need for its removal. Well done
June 7th, 2026 11:54
Too soon
sorenbarrett said:
Clever the use of multiple meaning here can be taken literally or metaphorically to reflect a loving desire. Well done
June 6th, 2026 06:10
sorenbarrett said:
Clever the use of multiple meaning here can be taken literally or metaphorically to reflect a loving desire. Well done
June 6th, 2026 06:10
Let\'s try
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling of need in this poem and of want. well done
June 5th, 2026 16:39
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling of need in this poem and of want. well done
June 5th, 2026 16:39
Those ones
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a poem with a good deal of agitation and some anger at what one perceives as avoidance. Lovely
June 4th, 2026 07:04
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a poem with a good deal of agitation and some anger at what one perceives as avoidance. Lovely
June 4th, 2026 07:04
The 4 I love
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording and dramatic in its presentation it tells its tale well. Very nicely done
June 3rd, 2026 08:43
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording and dramatic in its presentation it tells its tale well. Very nicely done
June 3rd, 2026 08:43
One last
Katie B. said:
Beautiful whether the longing is for the actual moon or a love. Well-crafted.
June 2nd, 2026 06:09
Katie B. said:
Beautiful whether the longing is for the actual moon or a love. Well-crafted.
June 2nd, 2026 06:09
One last
sorenbarrett said:
The moon can leave one with different impressions. A good write
June 2nd, 2026 05:27
sorenbarrett said:
The moon can leave one with different impressions. A good write
June 2nd, 2026 05:27
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