Comments received on poems by Maplespal
Share the light
sorenbarrett said:
Words with meaning but a meaning that one can not comprehend entirely all at once. It speaks in the rhyme of a riddle to be understood with time. Lovely
October 25th, 2025 19:30
sorenbarrett said:
Words with meaning but a meaning that one can not comprehend entirely all at once. It speaks in the rhyme of a riddle to be understood with time. Lovely
October 25th, 2025 19:30
Cloud fun
sorenbarrett said:
This is very good I loved it a great mental trick on oneself or on nature however you see it. Lovely
October 24th, 2025 15:50
sorenbarrett said:
This is very good I loved it a great mental trick on oneself or on nature however you see it. Lovely
October 24th, 2025 15:50
Fallen dream
sorenbarrett said:
When we speak of fallen angels we think of someone that was doing right and then did something wrong. This poem metaphorically speaks of this fall and the anguish that goes with it. Nicely done
October 23rd, 2025 19:29
sorenbarrett said:
When we speak of fallen angels we think of someone that was doing right and then did something wrong. This poem metaphorically speaks of this fall and the anguish that goes with it. Nicely done
October 23rd, 2025 19:29
Brain dump # 391
sorenbarrett said:
They do all have an association with each other outside of the rhyme and near rhyme at the end of the line in an ABAB pattern. The first word a measure of the second a defining element. Well done
October 22nd, 2025 17:26
sorenbarrett said:
They do all have an association with each other outside of the rhyme and near rhyme at the end of the line in an ABAB pattern. The first word a measure of the second a defining element. Well done
October 22nd, 2025 17:26
My fault
Doggerel Dave said:
It was fair warning, after all.
Good, short to the point write.
October 21st, 2025 19:27
Doggerel Dave said:
It was fair warning, after all.
Good, short to the point write.
October 21st, 2025 19:27
My fault
sorenbarrett said:
The effects of drinking too much. Well rhymed and metered. Well done
October 21st, 2025 19:18
sorenbarrett said:
The effects of drinking too much. Well rhymed and metered. Well done
October 21st, 2025 19:18
A moment of love
RSM0812 said:
A good ✍️ about love and sensuality. I enjoyed the read.
October 20th, 2025 13:41
RSM0812 said:
A good ✍️ about love and sensuality. I enjoyed the read.
October 20th, 2025 13:41
A moment of love
sorenbarrett said:
Erotic and sensual it speaks to the listener in sexual tones. Lovely
October 20th, 2025 11:51
sorenbarrett said:
Erotic and sensual it speaks to the listener in sexual tones. Lovely
October 20th, 2025 11:51
Winter thoughts
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images painted in this poem of the onset of winter and its onset. Although this appears literal it may be metaphorical as well regarding age. Nicely done
October 20th, 2025 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images painted in this poem of the onset of winter and its onset. Although this appears literal it may be metaphorical as well regarding age. Nicely done
October 20th, 2025 04:40
Where I wait
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of missing someone lost in this life but retained in memory. There is a sense of longing in this poem that leaves a wistful feeling and a sadness. Nicely written
October 18th, 2025 06:38
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of missing someone lost in this life but retained in memory. There is a sense of longing in this poem that leaves a wistful feeling and a sadness. Nicely written
October 18th, 2025 06:38
This vision
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of reflection upon one\'s deeds and hopes as well as fears. Very nicely said
October 17th, 2025 06:59
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of reflection upon one\'s deeds and hopes as well as fears. Very nicely said
October 17th, 2025 06:59
Hiding view
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful an assertion of self image as evil and bad but I hear anger and defiance as well. Well penned
October 16th, 2025 16:14
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful an assertion of self image as evil and bad but I hear anger and defiance as well. Well penned
October 16th, 2025 16:14
Footsteps
sorenbarrett said:
I can take this two ways Maplespal either the obvious ghosts in the dark or less obvious the aging process and the fear of going soon. Loved it either way.
October 15th, 2025 15:52
sorenbarrett said:
I can take this two ways Maplespal either the obvious ghosts in the dark or less obvious the aging process and the fear of going soon. Loved it either way.
October 15th, 2025 15:52
Cherished memories
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of pleasures whether tactile, olfactory, gustatory, visual or auditory even memories bring such. A lovely warm and comforting write
October 14th, 2025 07:12
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of pleasures whether tactile, olfactory, gustatory, visual or auditory even memories bring such. A lovely warm and comforting write
October 14th, 2025 07:12
Walled
sorenbarrett said:
Clever, logical and practical but with deeper meaning. Lovely
October 13th, 2025 07:25
sorenbarrett said:
Clever, logical and practical but with deeper meaning. Lovely
October 13th, 2025 07:25
Thoughts #178
sorenbarrett said:
This is a sad poem where abuse is encouraged as a means of dealing with it. Maybe I misunderstand the intent or maybe it is the old adage of what ever doesn\'t kill you makes you stronger. A tough read. Nicely and poetically worded
October 12th, 2025 09:55
sorenbarrett said:
This is a sad poem where abuse is encouraged as a means of dealing with it. Maybe I misunderstand the intent or maybe it is the old adage of what ever doesn\'t kill you makes you stronger. A tough read. Nicely and poetically worded
October 12th, 2025 09:55
Silence the words
sorenbarrett said:
A great write about the ways words pass on knowledge and feelings and how sound is not necessary by virtue of the alphabet and words written. Well done.
October 11th, 2025 09:21
sorenbarrett said:
A great write about the ways words pass on knowledge and feelings and how sound is not necessary by virtue of the alphabet and words written. Well done.
October 11th, 2025 09:21
Sagging
Friendship said:
The poem \"Sagging\" revolves around the struggle with mental and physical awareness, highlighting the relationship between the mind and body. The subject matter delves into the heaviness of thought and the feeling of being weighed down by one\'s own mental state, while also acknowledging the complex interactions between neurological functions and physical sensations. It portrays a sense of introspection, where the speaker reflects on their mental condition and the realities of existence.
October 10th, 2025 17:39
Friendship said:
The poem \"Sagging\" revolves around the struggle with mental and physical awareness, highlighting the relationship between the mind and body. The subject matter delves into the heaviness of thought and the feeling of being weighed down by one\'s own mental state, while also acknowledging the complex interactions between neurological functions and physical sensations. It portrays a sense of introspection, where the speaker reflects on their mental condition and the realities of existence.
October 10th, 2025 17:39
Sagging
Poetic Licence said:
I found this a bit of a conundrum of a write, slightly surreal and slightly off beat, which makes you think more about it and makes it more enjoyable
October 10th, 2025 16:21
Poetic Licence said:
I found this a bit of a conundrum of a write, slightly surreal and slightly off beat, which makes you think more about it and makes it more enjoyable
October 10th, 2025 16:21
Sagging
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal in a way and a bit of a twisted read with strange images. Well done
October 10th, 2025 13:08
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal in a way and a bit of a twisted read with strange images. Well done
October 10th, 2025 13:08
Spots
sorenbarrett said:
It is funny that we do have some places where thinking is easier. A fun read
October 9th, 2025 18:12
sorenbarrett said:
It is funny that we do have some places where thinking is easier. A fun read
October 9th, 2025 18:12
Fluffed thoughts
sorenbarrett said:
This is a most wonderful poem of perspective and from my perspective I have seen your poems climb to where they are now above the clouds
October 8th, 2025 14:50
sorenbarrett said:
This is a most wonderful poem of perspective and from my perspective I have seen your poems climb to where they are now above the clouds
October 8th, 2025 14:50
I alone
sorenbarrett said:
So much wisdom in a short poem that sees right through the self. Loved it a fave
October 7th, 2025 05:19
sorenbarrett said:
So much wisdom in a short poem that sees right through the self. Loved it a fave
October 7th, 2025 05:19
Those inner thoughts #89
sorenbarrett said:
A fun poem almost with a childlike feel but beneath is a far deeper meaning. Lovely
October 6th, 2025 05:57
sorenbarrett said:
A fun poem almost with a childlike feel but beneath is a far deeper meaning. Lovely
October 6th, 2025 05:57
Unsecure power
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Love it when the fridge gets warm and the food deteriorates. Need a larger town or you have no choice?
Neat rant.
October 6th, 2025 00:21
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Love it when the fridge gets warm and the food deteriorates. Need a larger town or you have no choice?
Neat rant.
October 6th, 2025 00:21
Unsecure power
sorenbarrett said:
Not so much by power but by internet itself I have gone though this. Irritation and aggravation are not sufficient words for it. Nicely said.
October 5th, 2025 08:45
sorenbarrett said:
Not so much by power but by internet itself I have gone though this. Irritation and aggravation are not sufficient words for it. Nicely said.
October 5th, 2025 08:45
Random thoughts #32
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of revulsion with humanity but juxtaposed to love for flowers. Is this symbolic? A love for certain people and not others. Gathering and selecting the flowers to water and take home. Nicely done
October 4th, 2025 09:15
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of revulsion with humanity but juxtaposed to love for flowers. Is this symbolic? A love for certain people and not others. Gathering and selecting the flowers to water and take home. Nicely done
October 4th, 2025 09:15
Odd thought #21
sorenbarrett said:
Geometry in overlay comes to mind although in mentally applying this the question of size comes to play and still it does not work its way out in my poor mind. Loved the word play and rhyme
October 3rd, 2025 06:14
sorenbarrett said:
Geometry in overlay comes to mind although in mentally applying this the question of size comes to play and still it does not work its way out in my poor mind. Loved the word play and rhyme
October 3rd, 2025 06:14
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