Comments received on poems by Maplespal
Her words
sorenbarrett said:
Dark but mischievous and fun but a bit brutal. A good write with such mixture
April 9th, 2026 06:22
sorenbarrett said:
Dark but mischievous and fun but a bit brutal. A good write with such mixture
April 9th, 2026 06:22
I break myself
sorenbarrett said:
It is often ourselves that do the most damage to ourselves. well written
April 8th, 2026 16:56
sorenbarrett said:
It is often ourselves that do the most damage to ourselves. well written
April 8th, 2026 16:56
I break myself
Katie B. said:
Their can be advantages and disadvantages to being alone. Well written.
April 8th, 2026 05:13
Katie B. said:
Their can be advantages and disadvantages to being alone. Well written.
April 8th, 2026 05:13
Some thoughts
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reads well. It speaks to the heart of reopening wounds. War seems to never be justified. Nicely written.
April 7th, 2026 05:38
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reads well. It speaks to the heart of reopening wounds. War seems to never be justified. Nicely written.
April 7th, 2026 05:38
Saved laughs
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely composed the words of a true poet that writes for himself and not for praise. Well done and a fave
April 6th, 2026 06:58
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely composed the words of a true poet that writes for himself and not for praise. Well done and a fave
April 6th, 2026 06:58
Painting #1
sorenbarrett said:
Sadly humorous and most creative in a poetic rhyme. Well done
April 5th, 2026 07:27
sorenbarrett said:
Sadly humorous and most creative in a poetic rhyme. Well done
April 5th, 2026 07:27
Another 3
sorenbarrett said:
Three good poems here the first speaks to me of disorganization that comes together even randomly seeming to fit as one\'s life is a puzzle that seems to fit from the internal view of things but may just be random after the fact or from outside view. The second speaks of differences then tries to compare them in value or weight. If asked how many oranges make an apple one is hard pressed because they can not be compared and their value is judged in the mind of the responder. In the third follows from the first two choices can\'t be made without proper foundation and information yet we make them and seed them as if nuggets of truth to grow in others. A lovely set of writes and a fave
April 4th, 2026 06:49
sorenbarrett said:
Three good poems here the first speaks to me of disorganization that comes together even randomly seeming to fit as one\'s life is a puzzle that seems to fit from the internal view of things but may just be random after the fact or from outside view. The second speaks of differences then tries to compare them in value or weight. If asked how many oranges make an apple one is hard pressed because they can not be compared and their value is judged in the mind of the responder. In the third follows from the first two choices can\'t be made without proper foundation and information yet we make them and seed them as if nuggets of truth to grow in others. A lovely set of writes and a fave
April 4th, 2026 06:49
Lets give ya 3 again
sorenbarrett said:
Here a trio of poems that seem unrelated but maybe not. choices lead to foolishness and finally destruction. Nicely done
April 3rd, 2026 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
Here a trio of poems that seem unrelated but maybe not. choices lead to foolishness and finally destruction. Nicely done
April 3rd, 2026 04:12
About you
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that words heard about another are confirmed in personal view. It is charming and in its sense romantic. Breath taking is the feeling I get. Nicely done
April 2nd, 2026 05:35
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that words heard about another are confirmed in personal view. It is charming and in its sense romantic. Breath taking is the feeling I get. Nicely done
April 2nd, 2026 05:35
Waiting
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of taking advantage of the moment and living it and when it is passed missing it with fond memories. Nicely done
April 1st, 2026 05:38
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of taking advantage of the moment and living it and when it is passed missing it with fond memories. Nicely done
April 1st, 2026 05:38
A clover
lunarchloedip said:
clover is a nickname of mine and now it feels even more special :). thank you for sharing!
March 31st, 2026 19:31
lunarchloedip said:
clover is a nickname of mine and now it feels even more special :). thank you for sharing!
March 31st, 2026 19:31
A clover
sorenbarrett said:
Charming and cute it relies on the common superstition of wishing on a four leaf clover. Romantic and well written in rhyme well done
March 31st, 2026 13:44
sorenbarrett said:
Charming and cute it relies on the common superstition of wishing on a four leaf clover. Romantic and well written in rhyme well done
March 31st, 2026 13:44
Damn angels
sorenbarrett said:
The temptation of Job? Demons menace us all and we ascribe blame where we may. Nicely written.
March 30th, 2026 06:03
sorenbarrett said:
The temptation of Job? Demons menace us all and we ascribe blame where we may. Nicely written.
March 30th, 2026 06:03
Migraine
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries with it feelings of illness both mental and physical of lethargy and resignation. It is a sad write
March 29th, 2026 07:24
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries with it feelings of illness both mental and physical of lethargy and resignation. It is a sad write
March 29th, 2026 07:24
Wishes
sorenbarrett said:
This poem begins with a nursery rhyme and evolves into memories and forgotten childhood wishes. Do we forget them? Nicely done it makes me wonder and I like that in a poem
March 28th, 2026 06:52
sorenbarrett said:
This poem begins with a nursery rhyme and evolves into memories and forgotten childhood wishes. Do we forget them? Nicely done it makes me wonder and I like that in a poem
March 28th, 2026 06:52
Had to give you 2
Demar Desu said:
Don’t be sorry, this is a gift two in one! Great work
March 27th, 2026 17:26
Demar Desu said:
Don’t be sorry, this is a gift two in one! Great work
March 27th, 2026 17:26
Had to give you 2
sorenbarrett said:
The killer rabbits of the dark ages the one from Monty Python and the Holy Grail. A most interesting write
March 27th, 2026 13:57
sorenbarrett said:
The killer rabbits of the dark ages the one from Monty Python and the Holy Grail. A most interesting write
March 27th, 2026 13:57
Perfect square
sorenbarrett said:
A geometric poem of meaning that is surreal in a way and absurd in another but still intrigues the mind. Nicely done
March 26th, 2026 06:46
sorenbarrett said:
A geometric poem of meaning that is surreal in a way and absurd in another but still intrigues the mind. Nicely done
March 26th, 2026 06:46
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