Comments received on poems by Maplespal
She visited
sorenbarrett said:
Whether lover, child, grandchild this poem tells its tale of how a smile can light up the day and make it something to look forward to with their visits. Nicely written
December 20th, 2025 15:31
sorenbarrett said:
Whether lover, child, grandchild this poem tells its tale of how a smile can light up the day and make it something to look forward to with their visits. Nicely written
December 20th, 2025 15:31
I can see
Katie B. said:
lOVELY, PEACEFUL, SERENE. BEAUTIFUL POEM. ENJOYABLE READ. THANK YOU, MAPLESPAL
December 19th, 2025 09:43
Katie B. said:
lOVELY, PEACEFUL, SERENE. BEAUTIFUL POEM. ENJOYABLE READ. THANK YOU, MAPLESPAL
December 19th, 2025 09:43
I can see
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of being. A declaration of existence and with it hope and the experiencing of all that is wonderful
December 19th, 2025 08:37
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of being. A declaration of existence and with it hope and the experiencing of all that is wonderful
December 19th, 2025 08:37
I climbed
sorenbarrett said:
Definitely metaphoric this poem presents the change with age and the different view point now. A lovely write
December 18th, 2025 09:43
sorenbarrett said:
Definitely metaphoric this poem presents the change with age and the different view point now. A lovely write
December 18th, 2025 09:43
I\'ve grown
Doggerel Dave said:
Muscular and enigmatic your words may be, but they would describe much of my life, experience and attitudes too.
Worthwhile to me.
December 17th, 2025 17:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Muscular and enigmatic your words may be, but they would describe much of my life, experience and attitudes too.
Worthwhile to me.
December 17th, 2025 17:28
I\'ve grown
sorenbarrett said:
We all have to grow as we live and it seems that we never stop growing. Well done
December 17th, 2025 14:55
sorenbarrett said:
We all have to grow as we live and it seems that we never stop growing. Well done
December 17th, 2025 14:55
Fainted
sorenbarrett said:
This is a sad and dark poem of addiction. Well written with good rhyme
December 15th, 2025 09:38
sorenbarrett said:
This is a sad and dark poem of addiction. Well written with good rhyme
December 15th, 2025 09:38
My mood swung
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of variations in mood cycles and the downward fall. Nicely done
December 14th, 2025 09:13
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of variations in mood cycles and the downward fall. Nicely done
December 14th, 2025 09:13
Questioning it
sorenbarrett said:
Human nature from violence that has led to war is getting harder and harder to defend in a modern world. Nicely written
December 13th, 2025 09:02
sorenbarrett said:
Human nature from violence that has led to war is getting harder and harder to defend in a modern world. Nicely written
December 13th, 2025 09:02
Winter sleeping
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds very cozy and nice. I\'ve been there before and it is a very different feel than summer. Nicely done
December 12th, 2025 11:00
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds very cozy and nice. I\'ve been there before and it is a very different feel than summer. Nicely done
December 12th, 2025 11:00
Watching a feather
Atticus_made said:
The poem has a welcoming feel to it, it gives me time to puzzle, I enjoy it
December 11th, 2025 15:16
Atticus_made said:
The poem has a welcoming feel to it, it gives me time to puzzle, I enjoy it
December 11th, 2025 15:16
Watching a feather
sorenbarrett said:
A very beautiful poem with such meaning. Well written. Well rhymed and so felt.
December 11th, 2025 15:05
sorenbarrett said:
A very beautiful poem with such meaning. Well written. Well rhymed and so felt.
December 11th, 2025 15:05
My days moments
sorenbarrett said:
Now that\'s a dark one with a little humor mixed in. A fun read
December 10th, 2025 17:29
sorenbarrett said:
Now that\'s a dark one with a little humor mixed in. A fun read
December 10th, 2025 17:29
Silent yelling
sorenbarrett said:
Here the absence of naming the person of object make this poem all the more powerful. Nicely done
December 7th, 2025 09:35
sorenbarrett said:
Here the absence of naming the person of object make this poem all the more powerful. Nicely done
December 7th, 2025 09:35
Man\'s best friend
Bella Shepard said:
Your words ring so very true. If we cannot believe in ourselves, trust our judgement and actually like who we are, then who are we? A wonderful poem of total self reflection. Kudos!
December 6th, 2025 12:03
Bella Shepard said:
Your words ring so very true. If we cannot believe in ourselves, trust our judgement and actually like who we are, then who are we? A wonderful poem of total self reflection. Kudos!
December 6th, 2025 12:03
Man\'s best friend
sorenbarrett said:
Man\'s best friend in this poem is all that is needed in life. A wonderful write.
December 6th, 2025 07:28
sorenbarrett said:
Man\'s best friend in this poem is all that is needed in life. A wonderful write.
December 6th, 2025 07:28
The other three
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that invites the reader to step back and see the other perspectives in who they are. I see one as self, the other of one\'s intimate family and friends, another of those we know for business, and the last those we don\'t know but pass on the street. Well that is my view. Nicely done
December 3rd, 2025 06:56
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that invites the reader to step back and see the other perspectives in who they are. I see one as self, the other of one\'s intimate family and friends, another of those we know for business, and the last those we don\'t know but pass on the street. Well that is my view. Nicely done
December 3rd, 2025 06:56
Fallen
sorenbarrett said:
The distance of communication can be great. Sometimes we can not get through. A wonderful write.
December 2nd, 2025 14:35
sorenbarrett said:
The distance of communication can be great. Sometimes we can not get through. A wonderful write.
December 2nd, 2025 14:35
Enough
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of refusing to give up what one knows. A lovely work about change and sticking with what one knows. A nice balance in this work
December 1st, 2025 18:34
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of refusing to give up what one knows. A lovely work about change and sticking with what one knows. A nice balance in this work
December 1st, 2025 18:34
Needed this out
sorenbarrett said:
Time passes so quickly a wonderful write
November 30th, 2025 16:51
sorenbarrett said:
Time passes so quickly a wonderful write
November 30th, 2025 16:51
Watching stupidity
Doggerel Dave said:
Series of individual pieces on each of those stupidities would be good
November 25th, 2025 16:45
Doggerel Dave said:
Series of individual pieces on each of those stupidities would be good
November 25th, 2025 16:45
Watching stupidity
sorenbarrett said:
The message is clear in this poem of changes that have taken place and how we compare them to the past. Well done
November 25th, 2025 08:48
sorenbarrett said:
The message is clear in this poem of changes that have taken place and how we compare them to the past. Well done
November 25th, 2025 08:48
Double, Double please
sorenbarrett said:
A fun short where bitter meets sweet whether in a pastry bite or sugar in the coffee. I prefer mine black.
November 24th, 2025 06:16
sorenbarrett said:
A fun short where bitter meets sweet whether in a pastry bite or sugar in the coffee. I prefer mine black.
November 24th, 2025 06:16
Shoes
sorenbarrett said:
Clever with a great metaphor this poem sends its message with great verse and rhyme
November 23rd, 2025 12:18
sorenbarrett said:
Clever with a great metaphor this poem sends its message with great verse and rhyme
November 23rd, 2025 12:18
Night terrors
sorenbarrett said:
A terrible disorder night terrors frightening beyond belief where heart rate may easily exceed 200. Images of being crushed or whatever invade ones dreams
November 21st, 2025 16:35
sorenbarrett said:
A terrible disorder night terrors frightening beyond belief where heart rate may easily exceed 200. Images of being crushed or whatever invade ones dreams
November 21st, 2025 16:35
Radio life
sorenbarrett said:
A veery nice write of love through distance and the course of approximation. Most lovely
November 20th, 2025 14:24
sorenbarrett said:
A veery nice write of love through distance and the course of approximation. Most lovely
November 20th, 2025 14:24
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