Comments received on poems by Maplespal
Some nights (2)
sorenbarrett said:
Expectations precede the terror. Well written
March 15th, 2026 09:06
sorenbarrett said:
Expectations precede the terror. Well written
March 15th, 2026 09:06
I\'ll just whisper
sorenbarrett said:
Some feelings can not be given up. Nicely said
March 14th, 2026 09:45
sorenbarrett said:
Some feelings can not be given up. Nicely said
March 14th, 2026 09:45
I\'ll just whisper
Katie B. said:
Heavy message and deep. Well written
Blessings~Katie
March 14th, 2026 08:41
Katie B. said:
Heavy message and deep. Well written
Blessings~Katie
March 14th, 2026 08:41
Let it end
sorenbarrett said:
From nature and its natural course to destruction to devastation. A poem of entropy accelerated. Well done
March 13th, 2026 16:32
sorenbarrett said:
From nature and its natural course to destruction to devastation. A poem of entropy accelerated. Well done
March 13th, 2026 16:32
Layers
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting poem of layers. A layer of lines. Well done
March 12th, 2026 19:41
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting poem of layers. A layer of lines. Well done
March 12th, 2026 19:41
I believe
sorenbarrett said:
A dark world of bias and hate against which one must fight. Nicely written
March 11th, 2026 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
A dark world of bias and hate against which one must fight. Nicely written
March 11th, 2026 04:47
Masked
sorenbarrett said:
When we live with a mask for long enough we forget who we are. A lovely write about the lives we are encouraged to live. Few have the strength to not put on the mask.
March 10th, 2026 08:28
sorenbarrett said:
When we live with a mask for long enough we forget who we are. A lovely write about the lives we are encouraged to live. Few have the strength to not put on the mask.
March 10th, 2026 08:28
Ready. So try.
HerTime said:
A beautifully written work capturing personal growth and resilience.
March 9th, 2026 21:57
HerTime said:
A beautifully written work capturing personal growth and resilience.
March 9th, 2026 21:57
Ready. So try.
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of defiance and strength. A lovely write
March 9th, 2026 08:58
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of defiance and strength. A lovely write
March 9th, 2026 08:58
Tantalizing
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of what one can do to the feelings and even perceptions of another and the desire to experience more. Well said
March 8th, 2026 13:43
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of what one can do to the feelings and even perceptions of another and the desire to experience more. Well said
March 8th, 2026 13:43
And I listen
sorenbarrett said:
We all do and what is worse most like it. Well written
March 7th, 2026 09:11
sorenbarrett said:
We all do and what is worse most like it. Well written
March 7th, 2026 09:11
Weakness
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
with your profile picture it really seems like a poem a dog would write LOL great stuff
March 6th, 2026 09:11
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
with your profile picture it really seems like a poem a dog would write LOL great stuff
March 6th, 2026 09:11
Weakness
sorenbarrett said:
At first sounding like a lover it becomes spiritual and like looking to a greater power. Nicely written in such brief form it is given power by its brevity
March 6th, 2026 08:49
sorenbarrett said:
At first sounding like a lover it becomes spiritual and like looking to a greater power. Nicely written in such brief form it is given power by its brevity
March 6th, 2026 08:49
Un Ghost
sorenbarrett said:
We all wish a vision to become a reality and in this poem there is a longing that reaches into the dream realm. Well done
March 5th, 2026 08:15
sorenbarrett said:
We all wish a vision to become a reality and in this poem there is a longing that reaches into the dream realm. Well done
March 5th, 2026 08:15
Now I cry
RSM0812 said:
Love and loss. Loss of love. Sent to heaven up above. Man or dog is always of, the purist spirit such to move. Now they have passed, my eyes are dead. At least i loved in stead.
March 4th, 2026 23:18
RSM0812 said:
Love and loss. Loss of love. Sent to heaven up above. Man or dog is always of, the purist spirit such to move. Now they have passed, my eyes are dead. At least i loved in stead.
March 4th, 2026 23:18
It takes a whisper
sorenbarrett said:
Anxiety so many carry that needs to be quelled for life to continue in a healthy and harmonious manner. Well said
March 4th, 2026 06:54
sorenbarrett said:
Anxiety so many carry that needs to be quelled for life to continue in a healthy and harmonious manner. Well said
March 4th, 2026 06:54
I could, but!
sorenbarrett said:
Trust or lack of it exercised in this poem nicely worded
March 3rd, 2026 09:30
sorenbarrett said:
Trust or lack of it exercised in this poem nicely worded
March 3rd, 2026 09:30
Then I write
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely worded that process of writing a poem or thought. Indeed it works pretty much like that on most occasions. Well done
March 2nd, 2026 11:10
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely worded that process of writing a poem or thought. Indeed it works pretty much like that on most occasions. Well done
March 2nd, 2026 11:10
Then I write
HerTime said:
Beautifully written. \"loss of dying ink\" is a great line!
March 2nd, 2026 09:06
HerTime said:
Beautifully written. \"loss of dying ink\" is a great line!
March 2nd, 2026 09:06
I did it
sorenbarrett said:
I thank you for the effort and thought. A very nice piece of gratitude well written
March 1st, 2026 08:16
sorenbarrett said:
I thank you for the effort and thought. A very nice piece of gratitude well written
March 1st, 2026 08:16
Distracted
sorenbarrett said:
An unperceived theft in this write. Well done in rhyme.
February 28th, 2026 10:14
sorenbarrett said:
An unperceived theft in this write. Well done in rhyme.
February 28th, 2026 10:14
Take
sorenbarrett said:
Taking control of oneself is the most important thing that one can do. Nicely worded
February 27th, 2026 18:46
sorenbarrett said:
Taking control of oneself is the most important thing that one can do. Nicely worded
February 27th, 2026 18:46
A high fall
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling of sudden recognition of being alone comes through in this poem. Nicely penned
February 26th, 2026 17:00
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling of sudden recognition of being alone comes through in this poem. Nicely penned
February 26th, 2026 17:00
Then I
sorenbarrett said:
Joy turned to loss leaving feelings of sadness. Nicely written
February 25th, 2026 15:39
sorenbarrett said:
Joy turned to loss leaving feelings of sadness. Nicely written
February 25th, 2026 15:39
What situation?
sorenbarrett said:
Different people different perspectives no two alike. The truth is what everyone decides it to be and if there is no unanimity there is no truth.
February 24th, 2026 15:00
sorenbarrett said:
Different people different perspectives no two alike. The truth is what everyone decides it to be and if there is no unanimity there is no truth.
February 24th, 2026 15:00
Now I cry
NafisaSB said:
a sad story, well told...and the brevity makes it all the more impressive
February 24th, 2026 00:44
NafisaSB said:
a sad story, well told...and the brevity makes it all the more impressive
February 24th, 2026 00:44
If you
sorenbarrett said:
The allure of love how strong that magnetic pull. Well expressed in this poem. Very nicely done
February 23rd, 2026 06:06
sorenbarrett said:
The allure of love how strong that magnetic pull. Well expressed in this poem. Very nicely done
February 23rd, 2026 06:06
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