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sorenbarrett said:
Wow! Love is moving on, forgiveness is moving on. A most beautiful write of letting go and growth. Bushes need to be pruned to gather strength and so do we. A wonderful poem.
January 9th, 2025 06:18
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! Love is moving on, forgiveness is moving on. A most beautiful write of letting go and growth. Bushes need to be pruned to gather strength and so do we. A wonderful poem.
January 9th, 2025 06:18
Cesium\'s glow
Poetic Licence said:
A touching reflection of their fading memories, well written piece, enjoyed the read
January 8th, 2025 10:26
Poetic Licence said:
A touching reflection of their fading memories, well written piece, enjoyed the read
January 8th, 2025 10:26
Cesium\'s glow
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the development of this poem and the last lines that emphasize the meaning. Time dims all things and with its wear images fade. A lovely piece and worth a Fave
January 8th, 2025 07:19
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the development of this poem and the last lines that emphasize the meaning. Time dims all things and with its wear images fade. A lovely piece and worth a Fave
January 8th, 2025 07:19
One of those days
sorenbarrett said:
Wondering if the broken broom is a metaphor or literal or both. Waiting is doing thoughts become action. A poem dysphoric and moving in that all of us have been there and out of existential crisis are paths to other horizons. Moving
January 7th, 2025 07:11
sorenbarrett said:
Wondering if the broken broom is a metaphor or literal or both. Waiting is doing thoughts become action. A poem dysphoric and moving in that all of us have been there and out of existential crisis are paths to other horizons. Moving
January 7th, 2025 07:11
Understanding
Bella Shepard said:
Perfectly profound my friend, loved every line.
January 6th, 2025 10:46
Bella Shepard said:
Perfectly profound my friend, loved every line.
January 6th, 2025 10:46
I\'ll be going home
Poetic Licence said:
A well written piece on looking back and what is behind after passing on, enjoyed the read
January 5th, 2025 10:00
Poetic Licence said:
A well written piece on looking back and what is behind after passing on, enjoyed the read
January 5th, 2025 10:00
I\'ll be going home
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of moving on and the transience of existence in one state or another. Very nicely stated
January 5th, 2025 07:27
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of moving on and the transience of existence in one state or another. Very nicely stated
January 5th, 2025 07:27
Watching the rain
sorenbarrett said:
I normally like the rain, unless I have to go out in it. It does produce different feelings and for some depression. Nicely worded this poem leaves the feelings
January 4th, 2025 15:34
sorenbarrett said:
I normally like the rain, unless I have to go out in it. It does produce different feelings and for some depression. Nicely worded this poem leaves the feelings
January 4th, 2025 15:34
Watching the rain
Poetic Licence said:
And without those drops we and the planet would slowly die, enjoyable read
January 4th, 2025 10:47
Poetic Licence said:
And without those drops we and the planet would slowly die, enjoyable read
January 4th, 2025 10:47
A site so blue
Bella Shepard said:
As you express very eloquently in this poem, depression is a process. I believe part of that process is the ability to examine it and try to understand what it does to you, and for you. Good write!
January 3rd, 2025 09:57
Bella Shepard said:
As you express very eloquently in this poem, depression is a process. I believe part of that process is the ability to examine it and try to understand what it does to you, and for you. Good write!
January 3rd, 2025 09:57
A site so blue
Poetic Licence said:
A poignant reminder to those who do not suffer from it, that depression is a powerful thing and once in it, it controls everything, mood, reaction, emotion, feeling and belief, and is very hard to break away from from. Well written piece
January 3rd, 2025 08:51
Poetic Licence said:
A poignant reminder to those who do not suffer from it, that depression is a powerful thing and once in it, it controls everything, mood, reaction, emotion, feeling and belief, and is very hard to break away from from. Well written piece
January 3rd, 2025 08:51
Thank you silence
Poetic Licence said:
It is Deafening or quiet to different people, those who enjoy real silence can have some peace, really enjoyed the read.
January 2nd, 2025 09:31
Poetic Licence said:
It is Deafening or quiet to different people, those who enjoy real silence can have some peace, really enjoyed the read.
January 2nd, 2025 09:31
Thank you silence
sorenbarrett said:
A most wonderful write on the power of silence. It is in silence that we hear. Very nice
January 2nd, 2025 08:10
sorenbarrett said:
A most wonderful write on the power of silence. It is in silence that we hear. Very nice
January 2nd, 2025 08:10
Thank you silence
arqios said:
Deafening and times and comforting at others. Thanks for sharing 👍🏻
January 2nd, 2025 07:01
arqios said:
Deafening and times and comforting at others. Thanks for sharing 👍🏻
January 2nd, 2025 07:01
For the images
Bella Shepard said:
We do seem to live in two worlds at times, and I think your poem \"reflects\" this beautifully. Great write!
January 1st, 2025 10:18
Bella Shepard said:
We do seem to live in two worlds at times, and I think your poem \"reflects\" this beautifully. Great write!
January 1st, 2025 10:18
For the images
Poetic Licence said:
A very enjoyable read, i think reminding us that you can be controlled by what you first see and it is always good to look at things from a different angle and consider both sides.
January 1st, 2025 08:54
Poetic Licence said:
A very enjoyable read, i think reminding us that you can be controlled by what you first see and it is always good to look at things from a different angle and consider both sides.
January 1st, 2025 08:54
For the images
sorenbarrett said:
Here the image of the sky reflected like the speaker\'s eyes in puddles and reflections provide a double but transposed view a great metaphor as well to see things from both sides. Very nice
January 1st, 2025 08:40
sorenbarrett said:
Here the image of the sky reflected like the speaker\'s eyes in puddles and reflections provide a double but transposed view a great metaphor as well to see things from both sides. Very nice
January 1st, 2025 08:40
Let me see
Poetic Licence said:
Thank fully they are only whispers, enjoyed the read.
December 31st, 2024 16:45
Poetic Licence said:
Thank fully they are only whispers, enjoyed the read.
December 31st, 2024 16:45
Let me see
sorenbarrett said:
Haunting in the most pleasant way. This poem speaks from beyond. Lovely. Happy New Year to you
December 31st, 2024 14:35
sorenbarrett said:
Haunting in the most pleasant way. This poem speaks from beyond. Lovely. Happy New Year to you
December 31st, 2024 14:35
Questions
Poetic Licence said:
Ones we will all ponder at times, are there answers, not sure, enjoyed the read
December 30th, 2024 15:56
Poetic Licence said:
Ones we will all ponder at times, are there answers, not sure, enjoyed the read
December 30th, 2024 15:56
Questions
sorenbarrett said:
Questions that many have asked but no one has answered. Questions that echo in the mind. Good write
December 30th, 2024 13:40
sorenbarrett said:
Questions that many have asked but no one has answered. Questions that echo in the mind. Good write
December 30th, 2024 13:40
Come inside
Bella Shepard said:
Food for thought here, those inner selves we struggle with, ever present. Great write!
December 29th, 2024 12:15
Bella Shepard said:
Food for thought here, those inner selves we struggle with, ever present. Great write!
December 29th, 2024 12:15
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