Comments received on poems by Maplespal
The 4 I love
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording and dramatic in its presentation it tells its tale well. Very nicely done
June 3rd, 2026 08:43
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording and dramatic in its presentation it tells its tale well. Very nicely done
June 3rd, 2026 08:43
One last
Katie B. said:
Beautiful whether the longing is for the actual moon or a love. Well-crafted.
June 2nd, 2026 06:09
Katie B. said:
Beautiful whether the longing is for the actual moon or a love. Well-crafted.
June 2nd, 2026 06:09
One last
sorenbarrett said:
The moon can leave one with different impressions. A good write
June 2nd, 2026 05:27
sorenbarrett said:
The moon can leave one with different impressions. A good write
June 2nd, 2026 05:27
The math of it
sorenbarrett said:
More complex than it appears a negative divided by a positive is a bit mind boggling as evidenced in the answer for all whole numbers summed from one to infinity being -1 over twelve.
June 1st, 2026 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
More complex than it appears a negative divided by a positive is a bit mind boggling as evidenced in the answer for all whole numbers summed from one to infinity being -1 over twelve.
June 1st, 2026 04:33
Ready for departure
sorenbarrett said:
A most creative way to say what many feel and reiterated several times in different creative ways for emphasis
May 31st, 2026 05:55
sorenbarrett said:
A most creative way to say what many feel and reiterated several times in different creative ways for emphasis
May 31st, 2026 05:55
Where are you
Friendship said:
Nicely done. The poet expresses a deep emotional connection to the moon, which serves as a metaphor for a loved one who is often absent or difficult to understand.
May 30th, 2026 08:50
Friendship said:
Nicely done. The poet expresses a deep emotional connection to the moon, which serves as a metaphor for a loved one who is often absent or difficult to understand.
May 30th, 2026 08:50
Where are you
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that is worded well and flows well. It is call for a lost love. Nicely done
May 30th, 2026 07:37
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that is worded well and flows well. It is call for a lost love. Nicely done
May 30th, 2026 07:37
Rotating days
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last line and its rhyme with the previous that cemented the fave on this one. It is wistful and a bit haunting and that last line did it.
May 29th, 2026 08:18
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last line and its rhyme with the previous that cemented the fave on this one. It is wistful and a bit haunting and that last line did it.
May 29th, 2026 08:18
I beg and I plea
Paul Bell said:
Ah the old late night movies.
Keeps you going into the next day, and the next.
May 28th, 2026 14:33
Paul Bell said:
Ah the old late night movies.
Keeps you going into the next day, and the next.
May 28th, 2026 14:33
I beg and I plea
sorenbarrett said:
Whether literal or metaphoric this poem speaks of connections. Well done
May 28th, 2026 08:17
sorenbarrett said:
Whether literal or metaphoric this poem speaks of connections. Well done
May 28th, 2026 08:17
Lost voice
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely the building of a conscience from past words of a mother. So nicely told it feels right and is a fave
May 27th, 2026 07:34
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely the building of a conscience from past words of a mother. So nicely told it feels right and is a fave
May 27th, 2026 07:34
Trapped mind
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sense of suffering in this poem that is resolved on in death
May 26th, 2026 05:31
sorenbarrett said:
There is a sense of suffering in this poem that is resolved on in death
May 26th, 2026 05:31
Chills
sorenbarrett said:
A write of ghosts that exist in different forms. Nicely written
May 25th, 2026 15:49
sorenbarrett said:
A write of ghosts that exist in different forms. Nicely written
May 25th, 2026 15:49
Faded & For the cats
sorenbarrett said:
Two poems each with its merit and appeal. Well done
May 24th, 2026 06:21
sorenbarrett said:
Two poems each with its merit and appeal. Well done
May 24th, 2026 06:21
Maybe
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem that uses close internal rhyme and ending to form a feeling of unity. Well done
May 23rd, 2026 07:00
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem that uses close internal rhyme and ending to form a feeling of unity. Well done
May 23rd, 2026 07:00
Scrap piece #1
sorenbarrett said:
A really cool rhyme that ends rather abruptly. Well done
May 22nd, 2026 05:51
sorenbarrett said:
A really cool rhyme that ends rather abruptly. Well done
May 22nd, 2026 05:51
She is
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of admiration that falls in each line and rhyme. Lovely
May 21st, 2026 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of admiration that falls in each line and rhyme. Lovely
May 21st, 2026 05:05
A future trip
sorenbarrett said:
Marvelous rhyme in this message so poetically said in wonderful rhyme. Well done
May 20th, 2026 05:26
sorenbarrett said:
Marvelous rhyme in this message so poetically said in wonderful rhyme. Well done
May 20th, 2026 05:26
Keep digging
RSM0812 said:
Nice rhyme scheme. I also like the message. Good write.
May 19th, 2026 06:40
RSM0812 said:
Nice rhyme scheme. I also like the message. Good write.
May 19th, 2026 06:40
Keep digging
sorenbarrett said:
Archeology uncovers past societies, beliefs and religions that many would say decrease present religious beliefs. Seeing how nature worship developed into belief in gods and the similarities evolving from one to another with one societies exposure to the next as in Adonis and Mithra to Christ shakes the beliefs of present day Christians. Well written
May 19th, 2026 05:10
sorenbarrett said:
Archeology uncovers past societies, beliefs and religions that many would say decrease present religious beliefs. Seeing how nature worship developed into belief in gods and the similarities evolving from one to another with one societies exposure to the next as in Adonis and Mithra to Christ shakes the beliefs of present day Christians. Well written
May 19th, 2026 05:10
Thoughts of her
sorenbarrett said:
A warning a proclamation of destruction well written and most lovely worded.
May 18th, 2026 06:13
sorenbarrett said:
A warning a proclamation of destruction well written and most lovely worded.
May 18th, 2026 06:13
A choice
Friendship said:
A very sad poem. Your poem explores themes of mortality, the human experience of illness, and the ethical dilemmas surrounding end-of-life decisions.
May 17th, 2026 08:55
Friendship said:
A very sad poem. Your poem explores themes of mortality, the human experience of illness, and the ethical dilemmas surrounding end-of-life decisions.
May 17th, 2026 08:55
A choice
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries for me a picture of someone on a machine to sustain life. It is sad and presents the picture of someone that does not want to be carried by machinery but let life take its course. Well done
May 17th, 2026 06:29
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries for me a picture of someone on a machine to sustain life. It is sad and presents the picture of someone that does not want to be carried by machinery but let life take its course. Well done
May 17th, 2026 06:29
Cough for her
sorenbarrett said:
Although it seems directly personal this poem can well be taken as metaphoric about the species as well. Nicely done
May 16th, 2026 07:17
sorenbarrett said:
Although it seems directly personal this poem can well be taken as metaphoric about the species as well. Nicely done
May 16th, 2026 07:17
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