Comments received on poems by Maplespal
I\'ve Lied
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of sadness and regret that lives on in the absence of the other. We lie to ourselves at time about things that we want too much and force ourselves to believe and in believing others believe as well. Nicely written
April 13th, 2025 09:59
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of sadness and regret that lives on in the absence of the other. We lie to ourselves at time about things that we want too much and force ourselves to believe and in believing others believe as well. Nicely written
April 13th, 2025 09:59
Listening to silence
sorenbarrett said:
So much in so little. As the noise diminishes the acuteness of hearing increases and so it is with many things. A lovely write
April 12th, 2025 10:29
sorenbarrett said:
So much in so little. As the noise diminishes the acuteness of hearing increases and so it is with many things. A lovely write
April 12th, 2025 10:29
Shaking feeling
sorenbarrett said:
A traumatic loss is most difficult to overcome and putting the feelings on paper is sometimes the best way. Wishing you a mending day. Thank you for sharing.
April 11th, 2025 05:57
sorenbarrett said:
A traumatic loss is most difficult to overcome and putting the feelings on paper is sometimes the best way. Wishing you a mending day. Thank you for sharing.
April 11th, 2025 05:57
Shaking feeling
MDStone said:
I’m so sorry for the pain you feel. But I agree that we cannot avoid it. I only hope that in your pain are the good memories like old movies. Where we can sit and both cry and laugh at the same time. An excellent write. I’d say you played your hand well! Thanks for sharing.
April 11th, 2025 05:26
MDStone said:
I’m so sorry for the pain you feel. But I agree that we cannot avoid it. I only hope that in your pain are the good memories like old movies. Where we can sit and both cry and laugh at the same time. An excellent write. I’d say you played your hand well! Thanks for sharing.
April 11th, 2025 05:26
Shaking feeling
Libellule said:
Nicely done... the repetition works so well with this
April 11th, 2025 05:24
Libellule said:
Nicely done... the repetition works so well with this
April 11th, 2025 05:24
What are you thinking?
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of drifting thoughts falling through a sifter. Well stated and penned
April 10th, 2025 13:53
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of drifting thoughts falling through a sifter. Well stated and penned
April 10th, 2025 13:53
Alone I think
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely rhymed and composed this poem speaks with quiet loneliness and brings feelings of melancholy. Beautifully penned
April 9th, 2025 08:33
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely rhymed and composed this poem speaks with quiet loneliness and brings feelings of melancholy. Beautifully penned
April 9th, 2025 08:33
Alone I think
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Hello,
This poem has many different layers within it, there was a past present and eventually perhaps future part of this piece. I liked that you left it to the reader to fill in who it is or what that you are writing about. The ghost line can be a reference to the self also, meaning transformation. I enjoyed the read!
April 9th, 2025 06:59
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Hello,
This poem has many different layers within it, there was a past present and eventually perhaps future part of this piece. I liked that you left it to the reader to fill in who it is or what that you are writing about. The ghost line can be a reference to the self also, meaning transformation. I enjoyed the read!
April 9th, 2025 06:59
A good life
sorenbarrett said:
Every one has their definition of what the good life is. A good write
April 8th, 2025 12:59
sorenbarrett said:
Every one has their definition of what the good life is. A good write
April 8th, 2025 12:59
Distantly heard
sorenbarrett said:
A fun story of which myths are woven and fanciful though it be more truth than one can see. A lovely write.
April 7th, 2025 06:49
sorenbarrett said:
A fun story of which myths are woven and fanciful though it be more truth than one can see. A lovely write.
April 7th, 2025 06:49
Just a drink
sorenbarrett said:
Real and metaphoric my favorite type of poetry. The feeling is not just poverty but freedom, when you have nothing there is nothing to loose. A beautiful poem in its imagery and rhyme it seems to flow from the heart that is drained but still beats a fave
April 6th, 2025 07:59
sorenbarrett said:
Real and metaphoric my favorite type of poetry. The feeling is not just poverty but freedom, when you have nothing there is nothing to loose. A beautiful poem in its imagery and rhyme it seems to flow from the heart that is drained but still beats a fave
April 6th, 2025 07:59
Forgotten and lost
sorenbarrett said:
Some memories need a trigger to detonate others duds lay buried beneath time and never resurface. A thoughtful poem of loss
April 5th, 2025 07:13
sorenbarrett said:
Some memories need a trigger to detonate others duds lay buried beneath time and never resurface. A thoughtful poem of loss
April 5th, 2025 07:13
The angers burn
sorenbarrett said:
Lies burn both the sender and receiver like a hot iron grabbed by two people at both ends. This poem seeps with emotion making it poetic.
April 4th, 2025 05:56
sorenbarrett said:
Lies burn both the sender and receiver like a hot iron grabbed by two people at both ends. This poem seeps with emotion making it poetic.
April 4th, 2025 05:56
Blinded
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely penned this poem speaks of darkness and the spark of truth can light the way. Nicely done.
April 3rd, 2025 07:20
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely penned this poem speaks of darkness and the spark of truth can light the way. Nicely done.
April 3rd, 2025 07:20
Painted
sorenbarrett said:
We see what we want to see let it be of love, charity, kindness to oneself and all around you. A wonderful poem
April 2nd, 2025 06:48
sorenbarrett said:
We see what we want to see let it be of love, charity, kindness to oneself and all around you. A wonderful poem
April 2nd, 2025 06:48
Arching death
sorenbarrett said:
In the war of life death falls indiscriminately on all. We kill without seeing and die without knowing. A sad and powerful poem
April 1st, 2025 05:42
sorenbarrett said:
In the war of life death falls indiscriminately on all. We kill without seeing and die without knowing. A sad and powerful poem
April 1st, 2025 05:42
With birds
Poetic Licence said:
The desire to be free, nicely expressed, enjoyed the read
March 31st, 2025 08:31
Poetic Licence said:
The desire to be free, nicely expressed, enjoyed the read
March 31st, 2025 08:31
With birds
sorenbarrett said:
I think that most people have dreamed of being birds whether in dreams or as pilots of planes we long to soar. A lovely poem
March 31st, 2025 07:54
sorenbarrett said:
I think that most people have dreamed of being birds whether in dreams or as pilots of planes we long to soar. A lovely poem
March 31st, 2025 07:54
3 for thee
sorenbarrett said:
Although disjointed these three poems seem related. Very nice
March 30th, 2025 08:57
sorenbarrett said:
Although disjointed these three poems seem related. Very nice
March 30th, 2025 08:57
A thing I do
sorenbarrett said:
Imagination knows no bounds and with it one can rationalize almost anything. A fun write
March 29th, 2025 07:24
sorenbarrett said:
Imagination knows no bounds and with it one can rationalize almost anything. A fun write
March 29th, 2025 07:24
I will always
Poetic Licence said:
A passionate statement of their pride and dedication to their country, enjoyed the read
March 28th, 2025 20:43
Poetic Licence said:
A passionate statement of their pride and dedication to their country, enjoyed the read
March 28th, 2025 20:43
The day to come
Poetic Licence said:
That is simply a wonderful write, enjoyed the read
March 27th, 2025 07:38
Poetic Licence said:
That is simply a wonderful write, enjoyed the read
March 27th, 2025 07:38
The day to come
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful poetic description of the cycle of light and day. Masterful!
March 27th, 2025 06:28
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful poetic description of the cycle of light and day. Masterful!
March 27th, 2025 06:28
It peers
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great metaphor and so well penned in this magnificent poem a fave
March 26th, 2025 05:43
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great metaphor and so well penned in this magnificent poem a fave
March 26th, 2025 05:43
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