Comments received on poems by Maplespal
Not everyone
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of parting and it leaves a general feel of sadness some of which can be prepared for it know in advance and some can not when there is no notice. Nicely said
July 28th, 2025 05:10
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of parting and it leaves a general feel of sadness some of which can be prepared for it know in advance and some can not when there is no notice. Nicely said
July 28th, 2025 05:10
Justice kind
sorenbarrett said:
Deals made and legal or not still manipulations and just as dirty
July 27th, 2025 08:43
sorenbarrett said:
Deals made and legal or not still manipulations and just as dirty
July 27th, 2025 08:43
Stay with me
sorenbarrett said:
A plea for continued closeness in a most difficult hour. Separation is feared by most and so it is stated in this poem. Nicely done
July 26th, 2025 06:00
sorenbarrett said:
A plea for continued closeness in a most difficult hour. Separation is feared by most and so it is stated in this poem. Nicely done
July 26th, 2025 06:00
Are you like me?
Bella Shepard said:
I am like you, unhappy with what I see. Thank you for putting into such powerful words.
July 25th, 2025 08:35
Bella Shepard said:
I am like you, unhappy with what I see. Thank you for putting into such powerful words.
July 25th, 2025 08:35
Are you like me?
sorenbarrett said:
The message of this well written poem gets the fave. Well put in words it calls out for a rage against what is wrong. Very nicely put in verse and rhyme
July 25th, 2025 06:39
sorenbarrett said:
The message of this well written poem gets the fave. Well put in words it calls out for a rage against what is wrong. Very nicely put in verse and rhyme
July 25th, 2025 06:39
Our CAF
sorenbarrett said:
Most all associations and cooperatives are the same. Politics at its worst. Well done
July 24th, 2025 07:53
sorenbarrett said:
Most all associations and cooperatives are the same. Politics at its worst. Well done
July 24th, 2025 07:53
Dwelling and Swelling
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of reflections some of self blame but with the knowledge that they are not useful. Well written love the rhyme in this one
July 23rd, 2025 06:24
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of reflections some of self blame but with the knowledge that they are not useful. Well written love the rhyme in this one
July 23rd, 2025 06:24
The last straw
sorenbarrett said:
Never jump until there is a safe landing. A poem of discontent and frustration with an organization. Powerful
July 22nd, 2025 06:33
sorenbarrett said:
Never jump until there is a safe landing. A poem of discontent and frustration with an organization. Powerful
July 22nd, 2025 06:33
A thought: My minds stay
sorenbarrett said:
After an intense relationship of love it may be difficult to find another and being alone may be the choice taken. Lovely
July 21st, 2025 09:13
sorenbarrett said:
After an intense relationship of love it may be difficult to find another and being alone may be the choice taken. Lovely
July 21st, 2025 09:13
Talking to them
sorenbarrett said:
Loss can drive one to madness and although I talk to myself and nature it seldom talks back. (downwards is the only way I know.) I have felt that way before and it is not a good ride. A poem of deep inner exploration. Very well done
July 20th, 2025 12:27
sorenbarrett said:
Loss can drive one to madness and although I talk to myself and nature it seldom talks back. (downwards is the only way I know.) I have felt that way before and it is not a good ride. A poem of deep inner exploration. Very well done
July 20th, 2025 12:27
3 texts
sorenbarrett said:
The first one touched me particularly with a sense of tender longing. Most lovely
July 19th, 2025 05:44
sorenbarrett said:
The first one touched me particularly with a sense of tender longing. Most lovely
July 19th, 2025 05:44
Getting old & Pondering
sorenbarrett said:
The first poem gets a fave maybe it is just my age but it seems to fit so well.
July 18th, 2025 06:16
sorenbarrett said:
The first poem gets a fave maybe it is just my age but it seems to fit so well.
July 18th, 2025 06:16
To the fire
Bella Shepard said:
Quite a tribute! Were we not born of fire in the beginning, must be something we have to have. Good write!
July 16th, 2025 12:09
Bella Shepard said:
Quite a tribute! Were we not born of fire in the beginning, must be something we have to have. Good write!
July 16th, 2025 12:09
To the fire
sorenbarrett said:
Don\'t get burned in this relationship I would say. A most interesting read
July 16th, 2025 05:19
sorenbarrett said:
Don\'t get burned in this relationship I would say. A most interesting read
July 16th, 2025 05:19
A thought: Of my mom
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful memories and a feeling conveyed. Lovely
July 15th, 2025 09:34
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful memories and a feeling conveyed. Lovely
July 15th, 2025 09:34
One thought stirs
Bella Shepard said:
The overwhelming despair of loss in this poem is powerful. The loss a loved one seems unconscionable, and yet it must be born, or not. For many it is insurmountable. Good write!
July 14th, 2025 10:21
Bella Shepard said:
The overwhelming despair of loss in this poem is powerful. The loss a loved one seems unconscionable, and yet it must be born, or not. For many it is insurmountable. Good write!
July 14th, 2025 10:21
One thought stirs
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! this one moves from gentle to explosive. A poem of loss and difficulty adapting with dire consequences. Very well done and with a powerful feel to the ending.
July 14th, 2025 05:23
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! this one moves from gentle to explosive. A poem of loss and difficulty adapting with dire consequences. Very well done and with a powerful feel to the ending.
July 14th, 2025 05:23
The old man waits
Bella Shepard said:
The moon has it\'s own special charm, that in our illuminated world we seem to loose sight of. Thank you for this beautiful tribute to the orb that circles us and keeps us stable. What would we do without it?
July 13th, 2025 15:03
Bella Shepard said:
The moon has it\'s own special charm, that in our illuminated world we seem to loose sight of. Thank you for this beautiful tribute to the orb that circles us and keeps us stable. What would we do without it?
July 13th, 2025 15:03
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