Comments received on poems by Maplespal
Where I you will find
Dan Williams said:
All is nice, \"all while the sun, its heavy head it lifts\" is special. Very nice.
October 12th, 2024 23:43
Dan Williams said:
All is nice, \"all while the sun, its heavy head it lifts\" is special. Very nice.
October 12th, 2024 23:43
Stopped drops
The Learning Poet said:
This poem has a nice rhythm to it! Reminds me of the sound of a dripping faucet.
October 12th, 2024 06:31
The Learning Poet said:
This poem has a nice rhythm to it! Reminds me of the sound of a dripping faucet.
October 12th, 2024 06:31
Where I you will find
peet said:
Captures the mornings very well. Nice write. Keep it coming,
October 11th, 2024 13:47
peet said:
Captures the mornings very well. Nice write. Keep it coming,
October 11th, 2024 13:47
Where I you will find
sorenbarrett said:
When one loves someone they are always near. A very nice write beautiful
October 11th, 2024 08:05
sorenbarrett said:
When one loves someone they are always near. A very nice write beautiful
October 11th, 2024 08:05
Echoing across
Dan Williams said:
That\'s the thing; after all the mental gymnastics you ended up still thinking of your lover. Nice, true.
October 4th, 2024 00:35
Dan Williams said:
That\'s the thing; after all the mental gymnastics you ended up still thinking of your lover. Nice, true.
October 4th, 2024 00:35
Echoing across
sorenbarrett said:
Obcessive preoccupation that comes with seperation or loss. Touching
October 3rd, 2024 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
Obcessive preoccupation that comes with seperation or loss. Touching
October 3rd, 2024 04:35
Level the fields, I always feared, & the other side
sorenbarrett said:
Three poems intertwined that proceed to resolve in the last. Nicely written.
September 29th, 2024 06:57
sorenbarrett said:
Three poems intertwined that proceed to resolve in the last. Nicely written.
September 29th, 2024 06:57
You allow, why?
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Wow, beautiful write Maple! I\'m impressed, this touched me. Thanks for sharing!!👍
September 24th, 2024 09:50
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Wow, beautiful write Maple! I\'m impressed, this touched me. Thanks for sharing!!👍
September 24th, 2024 09:50
last nights end
Dan Williams said:
Dare I add \"easily read\"? Clever and even amusing.
September 22nd, 2024 01:23
Dan Williams said:
Dare I add \"easily read\"? Clever and even amusing.
September 22nd, 2024 01:23
last nights end
Cheeky Missy said:
Ooh! This is so charming and verily quite beautiful, so much so it nearly takes away my breath! How winsomely rendered with a warming poignancy which takes away all reservations in the glow of sweet rest. Thank you so very much for sharing.
September 21st, 2024 16:11
Cheeky Missy said:
Ooh! This is so charming and verily quite beautiful, so much so it nearly takes away my breath! How winsomely rendered with a warming poignancy which takes away all reservations in the glow of sweet rest. Thank you so very much for sharing.
September 21st, 2024 16:11
Where you belong
Doggerel Dave said:
Colonialism and the big carve up. Africa never stood a chance.
September 19th, 2024 17:31
Doggerel Dave said:
Colonialism and the big carve up. Africa never stood a chance.
September 19th, 2024 17:31
A feeling to write
arial said:
Don\'t need to make it pretty and that\'s the hidden beauty of poetry ..just write your mind..and you will see a masterpiece yourself presents to you..as an intellectual being..
September 13th, 2024 12:15
arial said:
Don\'t need to make it pretty and that\'s the hidden beauty of poetry ..just write your mind..and you will see a masterpiece yourself presents to you..as an intellectual being..
September 13th, 2024 12:15
A feeling to write
sorenbarrett said:
I too feel compelled to write things and it doesn\'t matter if they mean anything to others as long as they do to you.
September 13th, 2024 06:02
sorenbarrett said:
I too feel compelled to write things and it doesn\'t matter if they mean anything to others as long as they do to you.
September 13th, 2024 06:02
Me described by-way-of “in & out”
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re too fun thus delineated to effect, this ramble through the years and days of your life in such a fashion delightful. Thank you very much for sharing! Beautifully rendered with excellent details and a subtle poignancy.
September 11th, 2024 08:47
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re too fun thus delineated to effect, this ramble through the years and days of your life in such a fashion delightful. Thank you very much for sharing! Beautifully rendered with excellent details and a subtle poignancy.
September 11th, 2024 08:47
Me described by-way-of “in & out”
Doggerel Dave said:
After that I would have felt better, but how do you feel? (In monorhyme please🙃)
Enjoyed.
September 11th, 2024 07:20
Doggerel Dave said:
After that I would have felt better, but how do you feel? (In monorhyme please🙃)
Enjoyed.
September 11th, 2024 07:20
Me described by-way-of “in & out”
sorenbarrett said:
That\'s a lot of ins and outs. A most fun read
September 11th, 2024 06:13
sorenbarrett said:
That\'s a lot of ins and outs. A most fun read
September 11th, 2024 06:13
The power of belief & They are only painted
Mutley Ravishes said:
So many taking it all
Literally
Not looking at it
Symbolically
September 10th, 2024 18:49
Mutley Ravishes said:
So many taking it all
Literally
Not looking at it
Symbolically
September 10th, 2024 18:49
99 Red balloons
2781 said:
I heard that in Ukraine the fighters are now in their 50\'s.
They\'ve lost their youth.
September 9th, 2024 07:48
2781 said:
I heard that in Ukraine the fighters are now in their 50\'s.
They\'ve lost their youth.
September 9th, 2024 07:48
99 Red balloons
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful commemoration of the madness of war. Wars fought for misplaced religious beliefs, greed, and power. All illusions and lies. Very nicely written.
September 9th, 2024 06:48
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful commemoration of the madness of war. Wars fought for misplaced religious beliefs, greed, and power. All illusions and lies. Very nicely written.
September 9th, 2024 06:48
Your calming song
Cheeky Missy said:
Aww, I am at a loss for words! This is so heartbreaking! You\'re killing me! I cannot go there with my father or my mother, for it kills me. Oh, how gently you frame a heartwrenching reality which haunts hour after hour interminably, the subtly growing poignancy driving the facts into place with that perfect conclusion. Thank si very much for sharing.
September 8th, 2024 18:58
Cheeky Missy said:
Aww, I am at a loss for words! This is so heartbreaking! You\'re killing me! I cannot go there with my father or my mother, for it kills me. Oh, how gently you frame a heartwrenching reality which haunts hour after hour interminably, the subtly growing poignancy driving the facts into place with that perfect conclusion. Thank si very much for sharing.
September 8th, 2024 18:58
Your calming song
sorenbarrett said:
Loss and missing the departed remains the theme in this poem. Nicely written
September 8th, 2024 06:29
sorenbarrett said:
Loss and missing the departed remains the theme in this poem. Nicely written
September 8th, 2024 06:29
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