Comments received on poems by Maplespal
Painting #1
sorenbarrett said:
Sadly humorous and most creative in a poetic rhyme. Well done
April 5th, 2026 07:27
sorenbarrett said:
Sadly humorous and most creative in a poetic rhyme. Well done
April 5th, 2026 07:27
Another 3
sorenbarrett said:
Three good poems here the first speaks to me of disorganization that comes together even randomly seeming to fit as one\'s life is a puzzle that seems to fit from the internal view of things but may just be random after the fact or from outside view. The second speaks of differences then tries to compare them in value or weight. If asked how many oranges make an apple one is hard pressed because they can not be compared and their value is judged in the mind of the responder. In the third follows from the first two choices can\'t be made without proper foundation and information yet we make them and seed them as if nuggets of truth to grow in others. A lovely set of writes and a fave
April 4th, 2026 06:49
sorenbarrett said:
Three good poems here the first speaks to me of disorganization that comes together even randomly seeming to fit as one\'s life is a puzzle that seems to fit from the internal view of things but may just be random after the fact or from outside view. The second speaks of differences then tries to compare them in value or weight. If asked how many oranges make an apple one is hard pressed because they can not be compared and their value is judged in the mind of the responder. In the third follows from the first two choices can\'t be made without proper foundation and information yet we make them and seed them as if nuggets of truth to grow in others. A lovely set of writes and a fave
April 4th, 2026 06:49
Lets give ya 3 again
sorenbarrett said:
Here a trio of poems that seem unrelated but maybe not. choices lead to foolishness and finally destruction. Nicely done
April 3rd, 2026 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
Here a trio of poems that seem unrelated but maybe not. choices lead to foolishness and finally destruction. Nicely done
April 3rd, 2026 04:12
About you
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that words heard about another are confirmed in personal view. It is charming and in its sense romantic. Breath taking is the feeling I get. Nicely done
April 2nd, 2026 05:35
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that words heard about another are confirmed in personal view. It is charming and in its sense romantic. Breath taking is the feeling I get. Nicely done
April 2nd, 2026 05:35
Waiting
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of taking advantage of the moment and living it and when it is passed missing it with fond memories. Nicely done
April 1st, 2026 05:38
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of taking advantage of the moment and living it and when it is passed missing it with fond memories. Nicely done
April 1st, 2026 05:38
A clover
lunarchloedip said:
clover is a nickname of mine and now it feels even more special :). thank you for sharing!
March 31st, 2026 19:31
lunarchloedip said:
clover is a nickname of mine and now it feels even more special :). thank you for sharing!
March 31st, 2026 19:31
A clover
sorenbarrett said:
Charming and cute it relies on the common superstition of wishing on a four leaf clover. Romantic and well written in rhyme well done
March 31st, 2026 13:44
sorenbarrett said:
Charming and cute it relies on the common superstition of wishing on a four leaf clover. Romantic and well written in rhyme well done
March 31st, 2026 13:44
Damn angels
sorenbarrett said:
The temptation of Job? Demons menace us all and we ascribe blame where we may. Nicely written.
March 30th, 2026 06:03
sorenbarrett said:
The temptation of Job? Demons menace us all and we ascribe blame where we may. Nicely written.
March 30th, 2026 06:03
Migraine
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries with it feelings of illness both mental and physical of lethargy and resignation. It is a sad write
March 29th, 2026 07:24
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries with it feelings of illness both mental and physical of lethargy and resignation. It is a sad write
March 29th, 2026 07:24
Wishes
sorenbarrett said:
This poem begins with a nursery rhyme and evolves into memories and forgotten childhood wishes. Do we forget them? Nicely done it makes me wonder and I like that in a poem
March 28th, 2026 06:52
sorenbarrett said:
This poem begins with a nursery rhyme and evolves into memories and forgotten childhood wishes. Do we forget them? Nicely done it makes me wonder and I like that in a poem
March 28th, 2026 06:52
Had to give you 2
Demar Desu said:
Don’t be sorry, this is a gift two in one! Great work
March 27th, 2026 17:26
Demar Desu said:
Don’t be sorry, this is a gift two in one! Great work
March 27th, 2026 17:26
Had to give you 2
sorenbarrett said:
The killer rabbits of the dark ages the one from Monty Python and the Holy Grail. A most interesting write
March 27th, 2026 13:57
sorenbarrett said:
The killer rabbits of the dark ages the one from Monty Python and the Holy Grail. A most interesting write
March 27th, 2026 13:57
Perfect square
sorenbarrett said:
A geometric poem of meaning that is surreal in a way and absurd in another but still intrigues the mind. Nicely done
March 26th, 2026 06:46
sorenbarrett said:
A geometric poem of meaning that is surreal in a way and absurd in another but still intrigues the mind. Nicely done
March 26th, 2026 06:46
Wordless
sorenbarrett said:
Have been there frequently and feel its weight. Here a few lines in good rhyme tell it all when the muse takes vacation. A fave
March 24th, 2026 06:06
sorenbarrett said:
Have been there frequently and feel its weight. Here a few lines in good rhyme tell it all when the muse takes vacation. A fave
March 24th, 2026 06:06
Noises
sorenbarrett said:
I often wonder what it would be like to understand animal language, not that it would be words but rather emotions, sensations, calls and warnings. It would be a wonderful perspective. Well written
March 23rd, 2026 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
I often wonder what it would be like to understand animal language, not that it would be words but rather emotions, sensations, calls and warnings. It would be a wonderful perspective. Well written
March 23rd, 2026 04:32
Somebody showed me
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic and warm it is a sweet poem of infatuation. Lovely
March 22nd, 2026 09:33
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic and warm it is a sweet poem of infatuation. Lovely
March 22nd, 2026 09:33
Lost crimes
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor or not Epstein has been too much in the news and his files have been all the rage. Well done
March 21st, 2026 07:46
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor or not Epstein has been too much in the news and his files have been all the rage. Well done
March 21st, 2026 07:46
Let\'s call it a draw
sorenbarrett said:
After a squabble maybe. Nothing like making up. Well done
March 20th, 2026 14:01
sorenbarrett said:
After a squabble maybe. Nothing like making up. Well done
March 20th, 2026 14:01
Daily
sorenbarrett said:
Worked on a dairy farm when I was young and you just described it in this poem. Well written
March 19th, 2026 16:52
sorenbarrett said:
Worked on a dairy farm when I was young and you just described it in this poem. Well written
March 19th, 2026 16:52
What then?
Demar Desu said:
Your profile picture paired with this introspective poem is so hilarious… great work
March 18th, 2026 18:20
Demar Desu said:
Your profile picture paired with this introspective poem is so hilarious… great work
March 18th, 2026 18:20
What then?
sorenbarrett said:
Clever word play in this poem. We all are what we are. Well done
March 18th, 2026 16:43
sorenbarrett said:
Clever word play in this poem. We all are what we are. Well done
March 18th, 2026 16:43
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