Comments received on poems by Maplespal
Watching the rain
sorenbarrett said:
I normally like the rain, unless I have to go out in it. It does produce different feelings and for some depression. Nicely worded this poem leaves the feelings
January 4th, 2025 15:34
sorenbarrett said:
I normally like the rain, unless I have to go out in it. It does produce different feelings and for some depression. Nicely worded this poem leaves the feelings
January 4th, 2025 15:34
Watching the rain
Poetic Licence said:
And without those drops we and the planet would slowly die, enjoyable read
January 4th, 2025 10:47
Poetic Licence said:
And without those drops we and the planet would slowly die, enjoyable read
January 4th, 2025 10:47
A site so blue
Bella Shepard said:
As you express very eloquently in this poem, depression is a process. I believe part of that process is the ability to examine it and try to understand what it does to you, and for you. Good write!
January 3rd, 2025 09:57
Bella Shepard said:
As you express very eloquently in this poem, depression is a process. I believe part of that process is the ability to examine it and try to understand what it does to you, and for you. Good write!
January 3rd, 2025 09:57
A site so blue
Poetic Licence said:
A poignant reminder to those who do not suffer from it, that depression is a powerful thing and once in it, it controls everything, mood, reaction, emotion, feeling and belief, and is very hard to break away from from. Well written piece
January 3rd, 2025 08:51
Poetic Licence said:
A poignant reminder to those who do not suffer from it, that depression is a powerful thing and once in it, it controls everything, mood, reaction, emotion, feeling and belief, and is very hard to break away from from. Well written piece
January 3rd, 2025 08:51
Thank you silence
Poetic Licence said:
It is Deafening or quiet to different people, those who enjoy real silence can have some peace, really enjoyed the read.
January 2nd, 2025 09:31
Poetic Licence said:
It is Deafening or quiet to different people, those who enjoy real silence can have some peace, really enjoyed the read.
January 2nd, 2025 09:31
Thank you silence
sorenbarrett said:
A most wonderful write on the power of silence. It is in silence that we hear. Very nice
January 2nd, 2025 08:10
sorenbarrett said:
A most wonderful write on the power of silence. It is in silence that we hear. Very nice
January 2nd, 2025 08:10
Thank you silence
arqios said:
Deafening and times and comforting at others. Thanks for sharing 👍🏻
January 2nd, 2025 07:01
arqios said:
Deafening and times and comforting at others. Thanks for sharing 👍🏻
January 2nd, 2025 07:01
For the images
Bella Shepard said:
We do seem to live in two worlds at times, and I think your poem \"reflects\" this beautifully. Great write!
January 1st, 2025 10:18
Bella Shepard said:
We do seem to live in two worlds at times, and I think your poem \"reflects\" this beautifully. Great write!
January 1st, 2025 10:18
For the images
Poetic Licence said:
A very enjoyable read, i think reminding us that you can be controlled by what you first see and it is always good to look at things from a different angle and consider both sides.
January 1st, 2025 08:54
Poetic Licence said:
A very enjoyable read, i think reminding us that you can be controlled by what you first see and it is always good to look at things from a different angle and consider both sides.
January 1st, 2025 08:54
For the images
sorenbarrett said:
Here the image of the sky reflected like the speaker\'s eyes in puddles and reflections provide a double but transposed view a great metaphor as well to see things from both sides. Very nice
January 1st, 2025 08:40
sorenbarrett said:
Here the image of the sky reflected like the speaker\'s eyes in puddles and reflections provide a double but transposed view a great metaphor as well to see things from both sides. Very nice
January 1st, 2025 08:40
Let me see
Poetic Licence said:
Thank fully they are only whispers, enjoyed the read.
December 31st, 2024 16:45
Poetic Licence said:
Thank fully they are only whispers, enjoyed the read.
December 31st, 2024 16:45
Let me see
sorenbarrett said:
Haunting in the most pleasant way. This poem speaks from beyond. Lovely. Happy New Year to you
December 31st, 2024 14:35
sorenbarrett said:
Haunting in the most pleasant way. This poem speaks from beyond. Lovely. Happy New Year to you
December 31st, 2024 14:35
Questions
Poetic Licence said:
Ones we will all ponder at times, are there answers, not sure, enjoyed the read
December 30th, 2024 15:56
Poetic Licence said:
Ones we will all ponder at times, are there answers, not sure, enjoyed the read
December 30th, 2024 15:56
Questions
sorenbarrett said:
Questions that many have asked but no one has answered. Questions that echo in the mind. Good write
December 30th, 2024 13:40
sorenbarrett said:
Questions that many have asked but no one has answered. Questions that echo in the mind. Good write
December 30th, 2024 13:40
Come inside
Bella Shepard said:
Food for thought here, those inner selves we struggle with, ever present. Great write!
December 29th, 2024 12:15
Bella Shepard said:
Food for thought here, those inner selves we struggle with, ever present. Great write!
December 29th, 2024 12:15
Come inside
Poetic Licence said:
An invitation to all to have a proper look inside, it might not be as bad as you think, Enjoyed the read.
December 29th, 2024 08:49
Poetic Licence said:
An invitation to all to have a proper look inside, it might not be as bad as you think, Enjoyed the read.
December 29th, 2024 08:49
Come inside
sorenbarrett said:
An invitation to inner exploration a gentle call to one and all to not fear what is most near. A gentle touching poem to look at oneself
December 29th, 2024 08:15
sorenbarrett said:
An invitation to inner exploration a gentle call to one and all to not fear what is most near. A gentle touching poem to look at oneself
December 29th, 2024 08:15
Other suns
sorenbarrett said:
Literally a message to all to take care of where we live and metaphorically as well to take care of our mental social and emotional world
December 28th, 2024 12:21
sorenbarrett said:
Literally a message to all to take care of where we live and metaphorically as well to take care of our mental social and emotional world
December 28th, 2024 12:21
Other suns
Bella Shepard said:
We still find wonderment in the heavens, even when we know our days are numbered, it can\'t be helped. A very thought provoking write my friend.
December 28th, 2024 12:17
Bella Shepard said:
We still find wonderment in the heavens, even when we know our days are numbered, it can\'t be helped. A very thought provoking write my friend.
December 28th, 2024 12:17
Other suns
Poetic Licence said:
We have no choice but to make do, enjoyed the read
December 28th, 2024 12:16
Poetic Licence said:
We have no choice but to make do, enjoyed the read
December 28th, 2024 12:16
Other suns
2781 said:
\"And they that be wise shall shine as the brightness of the firmament; and they that turn many to righteousness as the stars for ever and ever.\"
December 28th, 2024 07:24
2781 said:
\"And they that be wise shall shine as the brightness of the firmament; and they that turn many to righteousness as the stars for ever and ever.\"
December 28th, 2024 07:24
It\'s just a dream
2781 said:
\"For a dream comes through the multitude of business;
December 27th, 2024 09:44
2781 said:
\"For a dream comes through the multitude of business;
December 27th, 2024 09:44
It\'s just a dream
sorenbarrett said:
People plagued by nightmares suffer. This poem presents the author as a waiting source of help and safety. So nicely written as if watching from above. Lovely whether directed to a companion or a child.
December 27th, 2024 08:40
sorenbarrett said:
People plagued by nightmares suffer. This poem presents the author as a waiting source of help and safety. So nicely written as if watching from above. Lovely whether directed to a companion or a child.
December 27th, 2024 08:40
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