Comments received on poems by Maplespal
Staying home
MDStone said:
A haunting and yet inviting write. Speaks to my soul of memories and of good times had. Now these stories entertain my heart. Your poem entertained mine. Thank you for sharing.
February 27th, 2025 07:30
MDStone said:
A haunting and yet inviting write. Speaks to my soul of memories and of good times had. Now these stories entertain my heart. Your poem entertained mine. Thank you for sharing.
February 27th, 2025 07:30
Staying home
sorenbarrett said:
Ghosts have a way of haunting our memories. A most lovely write
February 27th, 2025 06:53
sorenbarrett said:
Ghosts have a way of haunting our memories. A most lovely write
February 27th, 2025 06:53
Past the flowers
Poetic Licence said:
Trying to resolve unresolved issues,a very touching and well written write
February 26th, 2025 08:53
Poetic Licence said:
Trying to resolve unresolved issues,a very touching and well written write
February 26th, 2025 08:53
Past the flowers
sorenbarrett said:
A write about an unresolved loss that troubles the author and water is such a great metaphor and symbol for this. Very nice
February 26th, 2025 06:45
sorenbarrett said:
A write about an unresolved loss that troubles the author and water is such a great metaphor and symbol for this. Very nice
February 26th, 2025 06:45
Unknown cause & Sorry for the nights
Poetic Licence said:
These are wonderful pieces of writing, the first describing horrific injury\'s sustained and the sense to be alive. The second trying to cope with the aftermath of the injury\'s and the effects it has on them and their loved ones, haunting, touching and emotional writing well done
February 25th, 2025 07:01
Poetic Licence said:
These are wonderful pieces of writing, the first describing horrific injury\'s sustained and the sense to be alive. The second trying to cope with the aftermath of the injury\'s and the effects it has on them and their loved ones, haunting, touching and emotional writing well done
February 25th, 2025 07:01
Unknown cause & Sorry for the nights
sorenbarrett said:
Both poems so well written. You have come a long way in your writing. The first graphic and so well expressed I thought at first you were speaking from the mouth of a deer that had been hit on the road but was mistaken to find it was you. A metaphor possibly as well. The second a continuation? Is this the trauma that left you broken? I can only wonder due to the juxtaposition. Lovely writing
February 25th, 2025 06:16
sorenbarrett said:
Both poems so well written. You have come a long way in your writing. The first graphic and so well expressed I thought at first you were speaking from the mouth of a deer that had been hit on the road but was mistaken to find it was you. A metaphor possibly as well. The second a continuation? Is this the trauma that left you broken? I can only wonder due to the juxtaposition. Lovely writing
February 25th, 2025 06:16
A typical 24
sorenbarrett said:
Between day and night feels rough. Fights all day and no sleep at night. A poem of adversity. Well done
February 24th, 2025 11:17
sorenbarrett said:
Between day and night feels rough. Fights all day and no sleep at night. A poem of adversity. Well done
February 24th, 2025 11:17
Pooled string, Current location, & It blinks
Poetic Licence said:
There is a lot of food for thought in these writes, reflection of the darker past but underlined with the message out of dark can come light, enjoyed the reads
February 23rd, 2025 12:31
Poetic Licence said:
There is a lot of food for thought in these writes, reflection of the darker past but underlined with the message out of dark can come light, enjoyed the reads
February 23rd, 2025 12:31
Pooled string, Current location, & It blinks
sorenbarrett said:
Pensive meditation in isolation is the feeling I get from these three. Yet in darkness there is light. Open the windows and let the sun in. Very nice.
February 23rd, 2025 08:24
sorenbarrett said:
Pensive meditation in isolation is the feeling I get from these three. Yet in darkness there is light. Open the windows and let the sun in. Very nice.
February 23rd, 2025 08:24
Darkened dreams & Viewing spot
sorenbarrett said:
Shadows are a favorite image of mine so easily used as a metaphor for many things. Very nicely written both of these poems.
February 22nd, 2025 13:20
sorenbarrett said:
Shadows are a favorite image of mine so easily used as a metaphor for many things. Very nicely written both of these poems.
February 22nd, 2025 13:20
Darkened dreams & Viewing spot
Poetic Licence said:
This is wonderfully written piece of writing, ladened with imagery and underlining meanings, great write
February 22nd, 2025 12:31
Poetic Licence said:
This is wonderfully written piece of writing, ladened with imagery and underlining meanings, great write
February 22nd, 2025 12:31
Lights into nights & Kissing death
sorenbarrett said:
In the first there is strong reverberations of the past and it seems that the more distant the louder the volume. A wistful write. In the second your note helps understand but reading it before I had a feeling that it was connected to the first and was an acceptance of loss so deep that death was the answer. Both lovely writes so well written in good meter that they deserve a fave
February 21st, 2025 08:43
sorenbarrett said:
In the first there is strong reverberations of the past and it seems that the more distant the louder the volume. A wistful write. In the second your note helps understand but reading it before I had a feeling that it was connected to the first and was an acceptance of loss so deep that death was the answer. Both lovely writes so well written in good meter that they deserve a fave
February 21st, 2025 08:43
1st & last Note
sorenbarrett said:
Fear a terrible thing it stops what could have been leaving us feeling we have sinned. I hear its footsteps here. Regret follows close behind a most unwanted companion and unwelcome visitor. They paralyze us and while waiting on them we loose our opportunity the visit we have been waiting for. A fine write well worded and aptly described
February 20th, 2025 06:31
sorenbarrett said:
Fear a terrible thing it stops what could have been leaving us feeling we have sinned. I hear its footsteps here. Regret follows close behind a most unwanted companion and unwelcome visitor. They paralyze us and while waiting on them we loose our opportunity the visit we have been waiting for. A fine write well worded and aptly described
February 20th, 2025 06:31
Sleepless
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the idea of noisy shadows sliding and creeping around just too clumsy to avoid making noise. A wonderful read that would in fact be quite creepy if shadows made such noise. Lovely
February 19th, 2025 05:27
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the idea of noisy shadows sliding and creeping around just too clumsy to avoid making noise. A wonderful read that would in fact be quite creepy if shadows made such noise. Lovely
February 19th, 2025 05:27
I miss you
sorenbarrett said:
It is not just the person we miss but all the memories and the parts of life that go with them. Lovely
February 18th, 2025 14:26
sorenbarrett said:
It is not just the person we miss but all the memories and the parts of life that go with them. Lovely
February 18th, 2025 14:26
Watching leaves fall
sorenbarrett said:
From the song \"surfin\' bird\" by the Rivintons this became the theme for Larry Bird the basketball superstar and the Twitter logo to honor the same Larry. A fun read
February 17th, 2025 08:15
sorenbarrett said:
From the song \"surfin\' bird\" by the Rivintons this became the theme for Larry Bird the basketball superstar and the Twitter logo to honor the same Larry. A fun read
February 17th, 2025 08:15
Watching leaves fall
arqios said:
The feel is so real! Wonderful image movements as well. šš»š
February 17th, 2025 07:51
arqios said:
The feel is so real! Wonderful image movements as well. šš»š
February 17th, 2025 07:51
Message 3
Poetic Licence said:
A message that should be fully taken on board by all, enjoyed the read
February 16th, 2025 06:27
Poetic Licence said:
A message that should be fully taken on board by all, enjoyed the read
February 16th, 2025 06:27
Message 3
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful message that should resonate in all of us
February 16th, 2025 06:18
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful message that should resonate in all of us
February 16th, 2025 06:18
Old songs
sorenbarrett said:
Memories of the past music resurrects past emotions and thoughts. A lovely write
February 15th, 2025 08:19
sorenbarrett said:
Memories of the past music resurrects past emotions and thoughts. A lovely write
February 15th, 2025 08:19
If I could sing
sorenbarrett said:
Music adds so much to the poetry of the lyrics and I too have thought if I could only write music as well as poetry what songs I\'d make. A most beautiful write.
February 14th, 2025 10:34
sorenbarrett said:
Music adds so much to the poetry of the lyrics and I too have thought if I could only write music as well as poetry what songs I\'d make. A most beautiful write.
February 14th, 2025 10:34
Touched
sorenbarrett said:
Ruminations over a past that is frozen in time. A deep dive into regret. Well spoken from the heart it is haunting
February 13th, 2025 06:29
sorenbarrett said:
Ruminations over a past that is frozen in time. A deep dive into regret. Well spoken from the heart it is haunting
February 13th, 2025 06:29
Watching the drops
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful natural picture painted in this poem but deeper lies a metaphor of a life under storm. Very nicely written
February 12th, 2025 07:02
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful natural picture painted in this poem but deeper lies a metaphor of a life under storm. Very nicely written
February 12th, 2025 07:02
Watching the drops
arqios said:
I love me a rain poem, any day; not so much the rain, for there are days Iād rather it stay away. šš»š
February 12th, 2025 06:25
arqios said:
I love me a rain poem, any day; not so much the rain, for there are days Iād rather it stay away. šš»š
February 12th, 2025 06:25
Before the cry
sorenbarrett said:
Sadness and lonliness pervade this poem. Well written
February 11th, 2025 08:40
sorenbarrett said:
Sadness and lonliness pervade this poem. Well written
February 11th, 2025 08:40
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