Comments received on poems by Maplespal
From here: direction 1
sorenbarrett said:
Sexual, sensual, errotic and romantic it calls out for physical touch
December 2nd, 2024 09:42
sorenbarrett said:
Sexual, sensual, errotic and romantic it calls out for physical touch
December 2nd, 2024 09:42
From here: direction 1
2781 said:
Well, after 30 years probably to your own room.
December 2nd, 2024 06:49
2781 said:
Well, after 30 years probably to your own room.
December 2nd, 2024 06:49
From here
sorenbarrett said:
Sexy and erotic, romantic, and sensual. Where else can we go from here? A love poem, indeed
December 1st, 2024 09:20
sorenbarrett said:
Sexy and erotic, romantic, and sensual. Where else can we go from here? A love poem, indeed
December 1st, 2024 09:20
Progress
Poetic Licence said:
I really enjoyed this read, i can totally connect to it.
November 30th, 2024 22:02
Poetic Licence said:
I really enjoyed this read, i can totally connect to it.
November 30th, 2024 22:02
Progress
sorenbarrett said:
We all need a way to de-escalate and diffuse ourselves from the world we live in. I tend to use poetry, although I’ve used meditation in the past as well some use fantasy and others social interactions. This poem explains it well.
November 30th, 2024 12:48
sorenbarrett said:
We all need a way to de-escalate and diffuse ourselves from the world we live in. I tend to use poetry, although I’ve used meditation in the past as well some use fantasy and others social interactions. This poem explains it well.
November 30th, 2024 12:48
Flashback
sorenbarrett said:
Post traumatic stress disorder is a terrible thing. It takes one out of reality and places one back in a spot. One wishes never had occurred. This descriptive poem, paints a picture of such an instance.
November 29th, 2024 12:09
sorenbarrett said:
Post traumatic stress disorder is a terrible thing. It takes one out of reality and places one back in a spot. One wishes never had occurred. This descriptive poem, paints a picture of such an instance.
November 29th, 2024 12:09
Confused hands
sorenbarrett said:
I have been there. As I have been reading your poems I have noticed their growth and improvement. You have progressed immensely, and your poems are wonderful
November 28th, 2024 16:50
sorenbarrett said:
I have been there. As I have been reading your poems I have noticed their growth and improvement. You have progressed immensely, and your poems are wonderful
November 28th, 2024 16:50
Kill it next life
rin said:
It is thought-provoking, boldly addressing and describing the agenda of the social function of religion in our time.
November 27th, 2024 08:57
rin said:
It is thought-provoking, boldly addressing and describing the agenda of the social function of religion in our time.
November 27th, 2024 08:57
Kill it next life
2781 said:
And what do I have here? declares the Lord. For my people have been taken away for nothing, and those that rule them mock, declares the Lord.
And all day long my name is constantly blasphemed.\"
November 27th, 2024 08:54
2781 said:
And what do I have here? declares the Lord. For my people have been taken away for nothing, and those that rule them mock, declares the Lord.
And all day long my name is constantly blasphemed.\"
November 27th, 2024 08:54
Kill it next life
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting in logical poem. Logic and belief have always been at odds. Let others believe what they wish and find happiness in delusions. Very nicely, composed it drips with anger.
November 27th, 2024 06:20
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting in logical poem. Logic and belief have always been at odds. Let others believe what they wish and find happiness in delusions. Very nicely, composed it drips with anger.
November 27th, 2024 06:20
Stuck in a noose & Inaccessible
sorenbarrett said:
Two points about two different points. Nevertheless, I have seen many use their religion as an excuse and sometimes to swindle others. Very nicely said
November 26th, 2024 06:38
sorenbarrett said:
Two points about two different points. Nevertheless, I have seen many use their religion as an excuse and sometimes to swindle others. Very nicely said
November 26th, 2024 06:38
The last part of that day
Cassie58 said:
A sad poem of loss. Nicely penned lines.
November 25th, 2024 17:20
Cassie58 said:
A sad poem of loss. Nicely penned lines.
November 25th, 2024 17:20
The last part of that day
sorenbarrett said:
Your poem again of loss past memories that provoked continued mourning
November 25th, 2024 05:40
sorenbarrett said:
Your poem again of loss past memories that provoked continued mourning
November 25th, 2024 05:40
Second part of that day
Cassie58 said:
Made me tearful remembering the days we buried our pets over the years. So much pain and loss. I truly felt this poem. It hit a soft spot. Beautiful and heartfelt.
November 24th, 2024 17:47
Cassie58 said:
Made me tearful remembering the days we buried our pets over the years. So much pain and loss. I truly felt this poem. It hit a soft spot. Beautiful and heartfelt.
November 24th, 2024 17:47
Second part of that day
2781 said:
We buried sooty in the back yard.
She died around 2am, with my son by her side.
We rolled her up on her towel and used a 4x4 iron bark post for a headstone.
Now we grow lettuce over her.
November 24th, 2024 08:17
2781 said:
We buried sooty in the back yard.
She died around 2am, with my son by her side.
We rolled her up on her towel and used a 4x4 iron bark post for a headstone.
Now we grow lettuce over her.
November 24th, 2024 08:17
Second part of that day
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of loss. It has its melancholy and sad features. It is dark even in its setting. Nicely written.
November 24th, 2024 07:22
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of loss. It has its melancholy and sad features. It is dark even in its setting. Nicely written.
November 24th, 2024 07:22
One part of that day
sorenbarrett said:
Many creatures feel loss. We are not the only ones that mourn. Sad poem.
November 23rd, 2024 07:12
sorenbarrett said:
Many creatures feel loss. We are not the only ones that mourn. Sad poem.
November 23rd, 2024 07:12
In the puddle I see
sorenbarrett said:
A child’s imagination in the reflection of a puddle wonderfully written
November 22nd, 2024 12:56
sorenbarrett said:
A child’s imagination in the reflection of a puddle wonderfully written
November 22nd, 2024 12:56
3 poems 2 make you think
sorenbarrett said:
These are all great poems. They are fun to read and have a child like quality to the questions in their innocence and simplicity they hold a complexity and philosophical depth nicely written.
November 21st, 2024 23:10
sorenbarrett said:
These are all great poems. They are fun to read and have a child like quality to the questions in their innocence and simplicity they hold a complexity and philosophical depth nicely written.
November 21st, 2024 23:10
We wait & Ahead
Doggerel Dave said:
Irony - nothing much to enjoy in the first, a clear gut wrenching picture.
November 20th, 2024 08:10
Doggerel Dave said:
Irony - nothing much to enjoy in the first, a clear gut wrenching picture.
November 20th, 2024 08:10
We wait & Ahead
sorenbarrett said:
Disaster, greater and lesser social and personal both poems contain a degree of suffering. Suffering from outside sources, spirit, fire, or water to the basic elements nicely done.
November 20th, 2024 06:16
sorenbarrett said:
Disaster, greater and lesser social and personal both poems contain a degree of suffering. Suffering from outside sources, spirit, fire, or water to the basic elements nicely done.
November 20th, 2024 06:16
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