Comments received on poems by Maplespal
6 poorly written poems sorry
sorenbarrett said:
I can feel the pain in these and the sense of loss. Expression of this pain and loss hopefully helps heal the wound. Nicely done
October 30th, 2024 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
I can feel the pain in these and the sense of loss. Expression of this pain and loss hopefully helps heal the wound. Nicely done
October 30th, 2024 05:05
4 different poems
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Love all 4 of them! Last ones my favorite, good write! ❤️
October 29th, 2024 07:59
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Love all 4 of them! Last ones my favorite, good write! ❤️
October 29th, 2024 07:59
Cold it is
sorenbarrett said:
Been there done that but no more cold for me. Nicely written in verse this poem brought back old memories. Thanks for the memories
October 28th, 2024 10:01
sorenbarrett said:
Been there done that but no more cold for me. Nicely written in verse this poem brought back old memories. Thanks for the memories
October 28th, 2024 10:01
That day\'s call
sorenbarrett said:
A great set up to the story in this poem. We often blame others for our own mistakes what a great message and told so well. Lovely
October 27th, 2024 06:07
sorenbarrett said:
A great set up to the story in this poem. We often blame others for our own mistakes what a great message and told so well. Lovely
October 27th, 2024 06:07
Darkness\'s trap & Endless Night
sorenbarrett said:
Some similarity to Dylan Thomas here. having had general anesthesia before I imagine it something like that. Things go black. Very nicely worded
October 25th, 2024 05:14
sorenbarrett said:
Some similarity to Dylan Thomas here. having had general anesthesia before I imagine it something like that. Things go black. Very nicely worded
October 25th, 2024 05:14
2 poems, 2 views
sorenbarrett said:
Deep philosophically with a great message set poetically with some great lines in verse. Most wonderfull
October 23rd, 2024 18:06
sorenbarrett said:
Deep philosophically with a great message set poetically with some great lines in verse. Most wonderfull
October 23rd, 2024 18:06
3 poems on time
sorenbarrett said:
Time from different perspectives each well written
October 22nd, 2024 20:27
sorenbarrett said:
Time from different perspectives each well written
October 22nd, 2024 20:27
A sheltering shell
sorenbarrett said:
A most enjoyable read this poem notes how we exploit the world around us without any remorse. nicely done
October 21st, 2024 17:30
sorenbarrett said:
A most enjoyable read this poem notes how we exploit the world around us without any remorse. nicely done
October 21st, 2024 17:30
Trapped in a lies noose
sorenbarrett said:
Life is complicated and one has to ask if lies are better than truth some times. A poignant write
October 20th, 2024 06:31
sorenbarrett said:
Life is complicated and one has to ask if lies are better than truth some times. A poignant write
October 20th, 2024 06:31
Under a crying tree
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphoric and melancholicly sad. A great use of metaphor here. Nicely done
October 19th, 2024 07:42
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphoric and melancholicly sad. A great use of metaphor here. Nicely done
October 19th, 2024 07:42
The darkness creeps
sorenbarrett said:
Dark indeed this poem has a feel of being taken over in oblivion and a foreboding sense to it. Nicely expressed
October 18th, 2024 06:59
sorenbarrett said:
Dark indeed this poem has a feel of being taken over in oblivion and a foreboding sense to it. Nicely expressed
October 18th, 2024 06:59
She rests her wings
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor cast in realistic nature. It starts so soft and ends so abruptly and violently. Sad but so well written
October 17th, 2024 17:38
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor cast in realistic nature. It starts so soft and ends so abruptly and violently. Sad but so well written
October 17th, 2024 17:38
I won\'t say the words
Bobby O said:
Before the reaper took your moves
Wow, they explain so much with such a simple metaphor and maybe we all gotta go through it so it applies everywhere every day really nice.way to extend a point
October 16th, 2024 04:01
Bobby O said:
Before the reaper took your moves
Wow, they explain so much with such a simple metaphor and maybe we all gotta go through it so it applies everywhere every day really nice.way to extend a point
October 16th, 2024 04:01
I won\'t say the words
Doggerel Dave said:
The multisensorial nature of memory clear here in a rich tribute just long enough and complete unto itself.
October 15th, 2024 23:08
Doggerel Dave said:
The multisensorial nature of memory clear here in a rich tribute just long enough and complete unto itself.
October 15th, 2024 23:08
Wandering
sorenbarrett said:
A thought that occurs to many and yet, eccept in rare cases, one always goes first. A poem with a haunting feel
October 13th, 2024 15:28
sorenbarrett said:
A thought that occurs to many and yet, eccept in rare cases, one always goes first. A poem with a haunting feel
October 13th, 2024 15:28
Where I you will find
Dan Williams said:
All is nice, \"all while the sun, its heavy head it lifts\" is special. Very nice.
October 12th, 2024 23:43
Dan Williams said:
All is nice, \"all while the sun, its heavy head it lifts\" is special. Very nice.
October 12th, 2024 23:43
Stopped drops
The Learning Poet said:
This poem has a nice rhythm to it! Reminds me of the sound of a dripping faucet.
October 12th, 2024 06:31
The Learning Poet said:
This poem has a nice rhythm to it! Reminds me of the sound of a dripping faucet.
October 12th, 2024 06:31
Where I you will find
peet said:
Captures the mornings very well. Nice write. Keep it coming,
October 11th, 2024 13:47
peet said:
Captures the mornings very well. Nice write. Keep it coming,
October 11th, 2024 13:47
Where I you will find
sorenbarrett said:
When one loves someone they are always near. A very nice write beautiful
October 11th, 2024 08:05
sorenbarrett said:
When one loves someone they are always near. A very nice write beautiful
October 11th, 2024 08:05
Echoing across
Dan Williams said:
That\'s the thing; after all the mental gymnastics you ended up still thinking of your lover. Nice, true.
October 4th, 2024 00:35
Dan Williams said:
That\'s the thing; after all the mental gymnastics you ended up still thinking of your lover. Nice, true.
October 4th, 2024 00:35
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