Comments received on poems by Maplespal
Influenced by Woodkid
Poetic Licence said:
I always write listening to music, it seems to open up the old mind and left things flow easier, enjoyed the read
January 13th, 2025 12:30
Poetic Licence said:
I always write listening to music, it seems to open up the old mind and left things flow easier, enjoyed the read
January 13th, 2025 12:30
Influenced by Woodkid
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful poem of where one can be taken with the magic of music. Wonderful images here.
January 13th, 2025 12:26
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful poem of where one can be taken with the magic of music. Wonderful images here.
January 13th, 2025 12:26
A question on time
sorenbarrett said:
A most difficult concept to grasp. It is philisophical and you have looked at several clever worded aspects yet the last question remains a good one for which I have no answer
January 12th, 2025 12:20
sorenbarrett said:
A most difficult concept to grasp. It is philisophical and you have looked at several clever worded aspects yet the last question remains a good one for which I have no answer
January 12th, 2025 12:20
A question on time
Poetic Licence said:
One to get your head around, if not defined what would in then be, enjoyed the read
January 12th, 2025 12:11
Poetic Licence said:
One to get your head around, if not defined what would in then be, enjoyed the read
January 12th, 2025 12:11
Last mans grave
Bella Shepard said:
It takes a man of insight, and dare I say courage to pen these words. I\'ve often wondered what the world would be like if the female perspective were given a chance to blossom. I harken back Robin Williams\'s quote \" If women ran the world, we wouldn\'t have wars, just intense negotiations every 28 days\". I say give it a try. Thank you my friend!!
January 11th, 2025 13:32
Bella Shepard said:
It takes a man of insight, and dare I say courage to pen these words. I\'ve often wondered what the world would be like if the female perspective were given a chance to blossom. I harken back Robin Williams\'s quote \" If women ran the world, we wouldn\'t have wars, just intense negotiations every 28 days\". I say give it a try. Thank you my friend!!
January 11th, 2025 13:32
Last mans grave
sorenbarrett said:
Thought provoking yes women are the prototype and theoretically men may not be needed, it is so among several species.
January 11th, 2025 07:41
sorenbarrett said:
Thought provoking yes women are the prototype and theoretically men may not be needed, it is so among several species.
January 11th, 2025 07:41
Last mans grave
Poetic Licence said:
A serious issue of the non value and worth of women that still exists in cultures around the world, man should be verry careful, we are not needed anymore. Enjoyed the read
January 11th, 2025 06:36
Poetic Licence said:
A serious issue of the non value and worth of women that still exists in cultures around the world, man should be verry careful, we are not needed anymore. Enjoyed the read
January 11th, 2025 06:36
Behind the kiss
Bella Shepard said:
The kiss is sweet, but the conversation is priceless. Beautifully expressed, enjoyed to the max.
January 10th, 2025 10:24
Bella Shepard said:
The kiss is sweet, but the conversation is priceless. Beautifully expressed, enjoyed to the max.
January 10th, 2025 10:24
Behind the kiss
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely thank you for the passion and love once shared, nicely written
January 10th, 2025 07:54
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely thank you for the passion and love once shared, nicely written
January 10th, 2025 07:54
Behind the kiss
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem I took the voice to symbolize friendship and the kiss passion. It is friendship that is missed over time. Lovely
January 10th, 2025 06:22
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem I took the voice to symbolize friendship and the kiss passion. It is friendship that is missed over time. Lovely
January 10th, 2025 06:22
Changes
Poetic Licence said:
It is sometimes very difficult to except things have changed and that makes it very difficult to move on, this poem highlights that issue in a caring and sensitive way, lovely read
January 9th, 2025 11:53
Poetic Licence said:
It is sometimes very difficult to except things have changed and that makes it very difficult to move on, this poem highlights that issue in a caring and sensitive way, lovely read
January 9th, 2025 11:53
Changes
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! Love is moving on, forgiveness is moving on. A most beautiful write of letting go and growth. Bushes need to be pruned to gather strength and so do we. A wonderful poem.
January 9th, 2025 06:18
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! Love is moving on, forgiveness is moving on. A most beautiful write of letting go and growth. Bushes need to be pruned to gather strength and so do we. A wonderful poem.
January 9th, 2025 06:18
Cesium\'s glow
Poetic Licence said:
A touching reflection of their fading memories, well written piece, enjoyed the read
January 8th, 2025 10:26
Poetic Licence said:
A touching reflection of their fading memories, well written piece, enjoyed the read
January 8th, 2025 10:26
Cesium\'s glow
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the development of this poem and the last lines that emphasize the meaning. Time dims all things and with its wear images fade. A lovely piece and worth a Fave
January 8th, 2025 07:19
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the development of this poem and the last lines that emphasize the meaning. Time dims all things and with its wear images fade. A lovely piece and worth a Fave
January 8th, 2025 07:19
One of those days
sorenbarrett said:
Wondering if the broken broom is a metaphor or literal or both. Waiting is doing thoughts become action. A poem dysphoric and moving in that all of us have been there and out of existential crisis are paths to other horizons. Moving
January 7th, 2025 07:11
sorenbarrett said:
Wondering if the broken broom is a metaphor or literal or both. Waiting is doing thoughts become action. A poem dysphoric and moving in that all of us have been there and out of existential crisis are paths to other horizons. Moving
January 7th, 2025 07:11
Understanding
Bella Shepard said:
Perfectly profound my friend, loved every line.
January 6th, 2025 10:46
Bella Shepard said:
Perfectly profound my friend, loved every line.
January 6th, 2025 10:46
I\'ll be going home
Poetic Licence said:
A well written piece on looking back and what is behind after passing on, enjoyed the read
January 5th, 2025 10:00
Poetic Licence said:
A well written piece on looking back and what is behind after passing on, enjoyed the read
January 5th, 2025 10:00
I\'ll be going home
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of moving on and the transience of existence in one state or another. Very nicely stated
January 5th, 2025 07:27
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of moving on and the transience of existence in one state or another. Very nicely stated
January 5th, 2025 07:27
Watching the rain
sorenbarrett said:
I normally like the rain, unless I have to go out in it. It does produce different feelings and for some depression. Nicely worded this poem leaves the feelings
January 4th, 2025 15:34
sorenbarrett said:
I normally like the rain, unless I have to go out in it. It does produce different feelings and for some depression. Nicely worded this poem leaves the feelings
January 4th, 2025 15:34
Watching the rain
Poetic Licence said:
And without those drops we and the planet would slowly die, enjoyable read
January 4th, 2025 10:47
Poetic Licence said:
And without those drops we and the planet would slowly die, enjoyable read
January 4th, 2025 10:47
A site so blue
Bella Shepard said:
As you express very eloquently in this poem, depression is a process. I believe part of that process is the ability to examine it and try to understand what it does to you, and for you. Good write!
January 3rd, 2025 09:57
Bella Shepard said:
As you express very eloquently in this poem, depression is a process. I believe part of that process is the ability to examine it and try to understand what it does to you, and for you. Good write!
January 3rd, 2025 09:57
A site so blue
Poetic Licence said:
A poignant reminder to those who do not suffer from it, that depression is a powerful thing and once in it, it controls everything, mood, reaction, emotion, feeling and belief, and is very hard to break away from from. Well written piece
January 3rd, 2025 08:51
Poetic Licence said:
A poignant reminder to those who do not suffer from it, that depression is a powerful thing and once in it, it controls everything, mood, reaction, emotion, feeling and belief, and is very hard to break away from from. Well written piece
January 3rd, 2025 08:51
Thank you silence
Poetic Licence said:
It is Deafening or quiet to different people, those who enjoy real silence can have some peace, really enjoyed the read.
January 2nd, 2025 09:31
Poetic Licence said:
It is Deafening or quiet to different people, those who enjoy real silence can have some peace, really enjoyed the read.
January 2nd, 2025 09:31
Thank you silence
sorenbarrett said:
A most wonderful write on the power of silence. It is in silence that we hear. Very nice
January 2nd, 2025 08:10
sorenbarrett said:
A most wonderful write on the power of silence. It is in silence that we hear. Very nice
January 2nd, 2025 08:10
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