Comments received on poems by Maplespal



And I listen
sorenbarrett said:

We all do and what is worse most like it. Well written

March 7th, 2026 09:11

Weakness
Demar Desu said:

with your profile picture it really seems like a poem a dog would write LOL great stuff

March 6th, 2026 09:11

Weakness
sorenbarrett said:

At first sounding like a lover it becomes spiritual and like looking to a greater power. Nicely written in such brief form it is given power by its brevity

March 6th, 2026 08:49

Un Ghost
sorenbarrett said:

We all wish a vision to become a reality and in this poem there is a longing that reaches into the dream realm. Well done

March 5th, 2026 08:15

Now I cry
RSM0812 said:

Love and loss. Loss of love. Sent to heaven up above. Man or dog is always of, the purist spirit such to move. Now they have passed, my eyes are dead. At least i loved in stead.

March 4th, 2026 23:18

It takes a whisper
sorenbarrett said:

Anxiety so many carry that needs to be quelled for life to continue in a healthy and harmonious manner. Well said

March 4th, 2026 06:54

I could, but!
sorenbarrett said:

Trust or lack of it exercised in this poem nicely worded

March 3rd, 2026 09:30

I could, but!
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic work.

March 3rd, 2026 08:37

Then I write
sorenbarrett said:

Nicely worded that process of writing a poem or thought. Indeed it works pretty much like that on most occasions. Well done

March 2nd, 2026 11:10

Then I write
HerTime said:

Beautifully written. \"loss of dying ink\" is a great line!

March 2nd, 2026 09:06

I did it
sorenbarrett said:

I thank you for the effort and thought. A very nice piece of gratitude well written

March 1st, 2026 08:16

Distracted
sorenbarrett said:

An unperceived theft in this write. Well done in rhyme.

February 28th, 2026 10:14

Distracted
2781 said:

Sounded dangerous?

February 28th, 2026 09:41

Take
sorenbarrett said:

Taking control of oneself is the most important thing that one can do. Nicely worded

February 27th, 2026 18:46

A high fall
sorenbarrett said:

A feeling of sudden recognition of being alone comes through in this poem. Nicely penned

February 26th, 2026 17:00

Then I
sorenbarrett said:

Joy turned to loss leaving feelings of sadness. Nicely written

February 25th, 2026 15:39

What situation?
sorenbarrett said:

Different people different perspectives no two alike. The truth is what everyone decides it to be and if there is no unanimity there is no truth.

February 24th, 2026 15:00

Now I cry
NafisaSB said:

a sad story, well told...and the brevity makes it all the more impressive

February 24th, 2026 00:44

If you
sorenbarrett said:

The allure of love how strong that magnetic pull. Well expressed in this poem. Very nicely done

February 23rd, 2026 06:06

Now I cry
Friendship said:

Powerfully written.

February 22nd, 2026 16:18

Now I cry
marissa said:

This is quietly sweet

February 22nd, 2026 13:58

Now I cry
sorenbarrett said:

Nostalgic, powerful, sad it has it all. Nicely written

February 22nd, 2026 09:51

Now I cry
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful

February 22nd, 2026 09:07

Now I cry
2781 said:

That\'s too sad to like.

February 22nd, 2026 08:11

As we hug
sorenbarrett said:

The fear of loosing what is most important one of the biggest impediments to progress and living a life as who you are. A lovely poem

February 21st, 2026 09:05

As we hug
Demar Desu said:

great poem...feels melancholic

February 21st, 2026 07:48

Hidden
sorenbarrett said:

So solitary this poem makes a point of it. It feels lonely not sad but lonely

February 20th, 2026 15:10

Before
sorenbarrett said:

A sad write where loss prevents fulfillment

February 19th, 2026 17:32

How?
sorenbarrett said:

Wonderfully written this short poem has poetic meaning

February 13th, 2026 19:07

Who?
sorenbarrett said:

A haunting question in the word who. The element of control seems to raised in this poem. Nicely written

February 12th, 2026 21:12



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