Comments received on poems by Gloria Denise
the reflection lacking perspective
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully done! The juxtaposing tomorrow and yesterday...odd and even chapters...all to lead up to a deep, existential, philosophical question that leaves you pondering late into the night. Hello Gloria! Nice to make your acquaintance and I am so glad I saw your poem. Excellent title that drew me in to an even more profound read. Well done! 🖤🌹👏
October 5th, 2024 21:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully done! The juxtaposing tomorrow and yesterday...odd and even chapters...all to lead up to a deep, existential, philosophical question that leaves you pondering late into the night. Hello Gloria! Nice to make your acquaintance and I am so glad I saw your poem. Excellent title that drew me in to an even more profound read. Well done! 🖤🌹👏
October 5th, 2024 21:46
The Inevitable Revolving Door
sorenbarrett said:
Never predict the future your beliefs can lead things to happen. Think positive and positive will occur. Nice write.
August 9th, 2024 20:26
sorenbarrett said:
Never predict the future your beliefs can lead things to happen. Think positive and positive will occur. Nice write.
August 9th, 2024 20:26
Painfully Passing the Time
sorenbarrett said:
Distraction is a marvelous way to keep one\'s mind off of the undesirable. Nice write.
August 7th, 2024 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
Distraction is a marvelous way to keep one\'s mind off of the undesirable. Nice write.
August 7th, 2024 04:02
A Come to Jesus Moment
Mutley Ravishes said:
The last two lines are really on it, Gloria! Thanks for the reminder.
July 30th, 2024 22:10
Mutley Ravishes said:
The last two lines are really on it, Gloria! Thanks for the reminder.
July 30th, 2024 22:10
THIS IS NOT A DREAM
sorenbarrett said:
The dissonance between one who cares and another who doesn\'t is a difficult chasm to cross. Nicely written
July 29th, 2024 18:06
sorenbarrett said:
The dissonance between one who cares and another who doesn\'t is a difficult chasm to cross. Nicely written
July 29th, 2024 18:06
THIS IS NOT A DREAM
Maplespal said:
thank you for writing this nice to see the other side of the pain. Being a man, your point of view is meaningful.
have this as a favorite.
makes me think of my ex and her side of things.
July 29th, 2024 17:27
Maplespal said:
thank you for writing this nice to see the other side of the pain. Being a man, your point of view is meaningful.
have this as a favorite.
makes me think of my ex and her side of things.
July 29th, 2024 17:27
What is your Someone
sorenbarrett said:
Looking for that perfect person that fits one\'s needs to be desired, cared for, fought for, loyal to, held in esteem, worshiped, in fine loved. Good write
July 29th, 2024 09:28
sorenbarrett said:
Looking for that perfect person that fits one\'s needs to be desired, cared for, fought for, loyal to, held in esteem, worshiped, in fine loved. Good write
July 29th, 2024 09:28
the space in between you and i
sorenbarrett said:
This was very well composed with good rhyme. Nicely done.
July 27th, 2024 20:38
sorenbarrett said:
This was very well composed with good rhyme. Nicely done.
July 27th, 2024 20:38
Where are you my love
Thoughtless said:
Abandonment is truly painful, especially by one who leads another on as a side dish.
July 26th, 2024 14:32
Thoughtless said:
Abandonment is truly painful, especially by one who leads another on as a side dish.
July 26th, 2024 14:32
Where are you my love
sorenbarrett said:
This poem leaves me with feelings of abandonment which is always frightening and painful. An out pouring of the heart.
July 26th, 2024 12:58
sorenbarrett said:
This poem leaves me with feelings of abandonment which is always frightening and painful. An out pouring of the heart.
July 26th, 2024 12:58
…. my darling
sorenbarrett said:
A pledge of love that seems most likely romantic but could be to a child as well. Nicely done
July 26th, 2024 05:56
sorenbarrett said:
A pledge of love that seems most likely romantic but could be to a child as well. Nicely done
July 26th, 2024 05:56
For you
sorenbarrett said:
We all want to be special to someone we want to be valued, cared for, needed and wanted. A good write
July 25th, 2024 06:22
sorenbarrett said:
We all want to be special to someone we want to be valued, cared for, needed and wanted. A good write
July 25th, 2024 06:22
Brick by boring brick
Doggerel Dave said:
I know....I like the concept \'brick by boring brick\" ...evidence of some insight.
July 24th, 2024 08:46
Doggerel Dave said:
I know....I like the concept \'brick by boring brick\" ...evidence of some insight.
July 24th, 2024 08:46
Brick by boring brick
sorenbarrett said:
Tragic and sad but a lesson to be taught. Well expressed where I hear the anger that still remains.
July 24th, 2024 06:38
sorenbarrett said:
Tragic and sad but a lesson to be taught. Well expressed where I hear the anger that still remains.
July 24th, 2024 06:38
