Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA



ALPHABETIC POEM ~ AWESOME !
nicolerobinson said:

That is great, I bet i couldnt do that but im going to do it and give it ago x

January 26th, 2017 04:45

LA LA LAND ~ An Acrostic
AlitaOpal said:

Great piece as always Brian..
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January 26th, 2017 04:20

LA LA LAND ~ An Acrostic
Augustus said:

Lived there for 20 years. Now too expensive. But my heart is there too. Will look forward to the flick. P.S. You\'re teaching American history to Americans.( just thinking about some of your other poems and the notes accompanying them) no complaints. Love it.

January 25th, 2017 18:53

LA LA LAND ~ An Acrostic
WriteBeLight said:

Very colorful Brian!

January 25th, 2017 12:26

LA LA LAND ~ An Acrostic
janetaylor said:

i used to me mormon (no longer am) but if you have seen those pesky missionaries knocking door to door ~ that was me. i was called to go on a mission in california. i was called to a spanish speaking mission and served in the ghettos. i learned a lot needless to say :0) la la land was a very interesting well done film. the actors did an amazing job. very nostalgic. the ending made my so sad....and yet made me ponder.....which was the point i suppose. but i naively believe that we can have all of our dreams come true. to me it\'s not an either/or. yet i get that the writers demonstrated what great losses many artists suffer at times to realize their lofty dreams. you write beautifully of the states....took a gander at your fusion as well. a job very well done. i love it when i learn a great deal in a few lines. thank you for sharing!

January 25th, 2017 11:40

LA LA LAND ~ An Acrostic
Tony36 said:

Great write, haven\'t seen it yet but plan to

January 25th, 2017 09:50

LA LA LAND ~ An Acrostic
Christina8 said:

Great job on your acrostic! Haven\'t seen the movie yet, but it\'s on my \"to do\" list. Haven\'t been to LA but I do travel close to there and the traffic is overwhelming! California is a beautiful place. Very well done! Hugs-Christina

January 25th, 2017 08:09

LA LA LAND ~ An Acrostic
Fay Slimm. said:

Oh what a dream-land.Sounds a place to put on my visit-list for when my fortunes take turns for the better - a really great read Brian.

January 25th, 2017 05:56

LA LA LAND ~ An Acrostic
Michael Edwards said:

Haven\'t seen it yet - so topical Brian and well structured as always.

January 25th, 2017 05:00

TANKAS (57577) FOR ALL SEASONS
ron parrish aka wordman said:

lovely description of the seasons !

January 24th, 2017 22:53

TANKAS (57577) FOR ALL SEASONS
Tony36 said:

Wonderful write

January 24th, 2017 17:01

MY STRIPED RAINBOW CAT ~ A Rhyming Sonnet
yellowbee said:

this poem is so sweet, my view of the poem means a lot to me because when my granddad passed (I was a baby) my mother bought me a teddy to remember him by, my grandma has recently passed and my mother did the same again

January 24th, 2017 13:35

KENTUCKY ~ A GREAT STATE TO BE IN ~ An Acrostic
janetaylor said:

i was accepted to a law school in kentucky and when i went to visit the campus i was blown over by the beauty of the state ~ it was so green and full of birds and flowers. the people were incredibly southern friendly. nicely rendered!

January 24th, 2017 12:31

TANKAS (57577) FOR ALL SEASONS
Augustus said:

Great lesson and poem.

January 24th, 2017 12:28

TANKAS (57577) FOR ALL SEASONS
Christina8 said:

Very nice Tankas! I like how they rhyme! Very good job on all of them. I like how you wrote a \"Haiku with attitude\". I might have to try one. Hugs-_Christina

January 24th, 2017 10:13

KENTUCKY ~ A GREAT STATE TO BE IN ~ An Acrostic
Augustus said:

Lots of neat facts. Thanks.

January 23rd, 2017 17:45

KENTUCKY ~ A GREAT STATE TO BE IN ~ An Acrostic
Christina8 said:

I think I\'ve only driven through Kentucky but what a beautiful drive it was. Great job on the acrostic and the info in your comments section. You put in a lot of work! Great job! Hugs-Christina

January 23rd, 2017 15:00

KENTUCKY ~ A GREAT STATE TO BE IN ~ An Acrostic
WriteBeLight said:

You covered it all :)


January 23rd, 2017 11:10

KENTUCKY ~ A GREAT STATE TO BE IN ~ An Acrostic
Tony36 said:

Great write. Kentucky has always been one of my favorite states to visit

January 23rd, 2017 09:28

KENTUCKY ~ A GREAT STATE TO BE IN ~ An Acrostic
Shakerite said:

You should work for the Tourism centre .
You\'ve made ME want to visit from the UK.

January 23rd, 2017 08:39

KENTUCKY ~ A GREAT STATE TO BE IN ~ An Acrostic
Michael Edwards said:

Another well crafted piece Brian - I often wonder where they all come from - an active and fertile mind I guess

January 23rd, 2017 07:59

R I G H T E O U S N E S S EXALTS A NATION ~ AMEN ~ A Sonnet
ron parrish aka wordman said:

the format is great,the words are right on

January 22nd, 2017 14:32

AMBITION IS NOT A DIRTY WORD ~ An Acrostic
AshleyBerkelmans said:

Very good :)

January 22nd, 2017 13:03

R I G H T E O U S N E S S EXALTS A NATION ~ AMEN ~ A Sonnet
Augustus said:

Troubled times, troubled men, we all pray for peace again. Nicely done.

January 22nd, 2017 12:57

R I G H T E O U S N E S S EXALTS A NATION ~ AMEN ~ A Sonnet
Christina8 said:

Great acrostic, Brian! I hope our countries work together for the greater good! Basing them on spiritual values would be great. As Michael said, this poem is well expressed. Great job! Hugs in spirit-Christina

January 22nd, 2017 12:34

R I G H T E O U S N E S S EXALTS A NATION ~ AMEN ~ A Sonnet
tadpole said:

Hello Brian, a very cleverly worked out poem and one that gives us all hope for the future. Thank you for your comment. Nice to meet you.

January 22nd, 2017 12:06

R I G H T E O U S N E S S EXALTS A NATION ~ AMEN ~ A Sonnet
WriteBeLight said:

Two great countries!

January 22nd, 2017 07:47

R I G H T E O U S N E S S EXALTS A NATION ~ AMEN ~ A Sonnet
Fay Slimm. said:

Spiritual values win out every time Brian - - a wonderful encouragement to put righteousness first. A really compelling read.

January 22nd, 2017 05:08

R I G H T E O U S N E S S EXALTS A NATION ~ AMEN ~ A Sonnet
Michael Edwards said:

Such interesting times for both our countries both of which now have new mandates - well expressed Brian

January 22nd, 2017 04:26

FUSIONS ARE FUN ~ PLEASE PARTICIPATE & INITIATE ~ OK
Sefrin said:

Splendid write! It is always a joy to read your work.

January 21st, 2017 15:48



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