Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA
MY STRIPED RAINBOW CAT ~ A Rhyming Sonnet
MendedFences27 said:
No matter how old a person gets to be, it is said that in their Mum\'s eyes they will always be 12 years old. This may happens by Nature or by choice I do not know. So, when you leave it is quite appropriate to receive a \"Rainbow Cat\", besides that Ted needed a friend.
Liked your rhyming here.
I\'m new here and do not know if this the norm, but might I suggest a slight change to a portion of one line. In your second stanza, line three, why not say \"searching for a mouse\"?
Hey, thanks for being the first to comment on one of my poems. So far this looks like a fun place to be.
January 29th, 2017 20:24
MendedFences27 said:
No matter how old a person gets to be, it is said that in their Mum\'s eyes they will always be 12 years old. This may happens by Nature or by choice I do not know. So, when you leave it is quite appropriate to receive a \"Rainbow Cat\", besides that Ted needed a friend.
Liked your rhyming here.
I\'m new here and do not know if this the norm, but might I suggest a slight change to a portion of one line. In your second stanza, line three, why not say \"searching for a mouse\"?
Hey, thanks for being the first to comment on one of my poems. So far this looks like a fun place to be.
January 29th, 2017 20:24
GOD PROTECTS & SUPPORTS US 24/7 AMEN !
Michael Edwards said:
Superbly written as always.
January 29th, 2017 12:03
Michael Edwards said:
Superbly written as always.
January 29th, 2017 12:03
GOD PROTECTS & SUPPORTS US 24/7 AMEN !
Augustus said:
Nice way to start out your day. And end it. Enjoy reading about your spirituality.
January 29th, 2017 11:49
Augustus said:
Nice way to start out your day. And end it. Enjoy reading about your spirituality.
January 29th, 2017 11:49
GOD PROTECTS & SUPPORTS US 24/7 AMEN !
Christina8 said:
Love your sunday poems but I really liked this one! Each one of the trio had a clear message and I loved them all! Christina
January 29th, 2017 10:22
Christina8 said:
Love your sunday poems but I really liked this one! Each one of the trio had a clear message and I loved them all! Christina
January 29th, 2017 10:22
GOD PROTECTS & SUPPORTS US 24/7 AMEN !
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A great heartwarming invocational supplication poem. I really admire such topics and u have written it so well and appealing that hats off to u. Kudos.
Soo nice to read from your pen again.
January 29th, 2017 08:37
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A great heartwarming invocational supplication poem. I really admire such topics and u have written it so well and appealing that hats off to u. Kudos.
Soo nice to read from your pen again.
January 29th, 2017 08:37
MAMMOUTH CAVE KENTUCKY
janetaylor said:
wow ~ it sounds absolutely amazing....now i have a hunkering to go to kentucky again!
January 28th, 2017 21:50
janetaylor said:
wow ~ it sounds absolutely amazing....now i have a hunkering to go to kentucky again!
January 28th, 2017 21:50
MAMMOUTH CAVE KENTUCKY
Christina8 said:
Very beautiful and educational. I have never explored caves, I guess I\'m a bit claustrophobic. But you paint a wonderful picture with your words and also combined with the picture, you have a great piece! Hugs-Christina
January 28th, 2017 16:16
Christina8 said:
Very beautiful and educational. I have never explored caves, I guess I\'m a bit claustrophobic. But you paint a wonderful picture with your words and also combined with the picture, you have a great piece! Hugs-Christina
January 28th, 2017 16:16
MAMMOUTH CAVE KENTUCKY
WriteBeLight said:
Very educational and colorful. I do not think I would like that kind of excitement, the closed-in feeling, that is. But, you make it appealing!
January 28th, 2017 10:26
WriteBeLight said:
Very educational and colorful. I do not think I would like that kind of excitement, the closed-in feeling, that is. But, you make it appealing!
January 28th, 2017 10:26
AMBITION IS NOT A DIRTY WORD ~ An Acrostic
Nori_B said:
I think people want something for nothing and sadly sit and wait for things they want to fall on lap. if they want something they take it, instead of working for it. Self entitlement has sky rocketed. Paused and made me think for a minute which is why i Truly enjoyed your poem.
January 28th, 2017 08:51
Nori_B said:
I think people want something for nothing and sadly sit and wait for things they want to fall on lap. if they want something they take it, instead of working for it. Self entitlement has sky rocketed. Paused and made me think for a minute which is why i Truly enjoyed your poem.
January 28th, 2017 08:51
MAMMOUTH CAVE KENTUCKY
Pintu Mahakul said:
Stand-stone is layered with marginal imagination of reality. More things are discovered every year. This attracts millions of visitors. Scientific approach of expression amazes mind of reader. This carries nice information. Very wisely penned poem is shared.
January 28th, 2017 07:25
Pintu Mahakul said:
Stand-stone is layered with marginal imagination of reality. More things are discovered every year. This attracts millions of visitors. Scientific approach of expression amazes mind of reader. This carries nice information. Very wisely penned poem is shared.
January 28th, 2017 07:25
MAMMOUTH CAVE KENTUCKY
P.H.Rose said:
My word that
Has got to be
One of the most
Wonderful sights
On earth...
Brilliant Brian...
Thank you...
January 28th, 2017 07:22
P.H.Rose said:
My word that
Has got to be
One of the most
Wonderful sights
On earth...
Brilliant Brian...
Thank you...
January 28th, 2017 07:22
MAMMOUTH CAVE KENTUCKY
Michael Edwards said:
And full of info too - nice one Brian
January 28th, 2017 06:07
Michael Edwards said:
And full of info too - nice one Brian
January 28th, 2017 06:07
HALF FULL OR HALF EMPTY ?
janetaylor said:
my dad once showed me a glass and asked me what it was. i said what do you mean? he said what is it? i said a glass half full of water. later he told me about the glass half empty/full story and he said that he wanted to know how I thought 😀 great write to remind us to look on the sunny side of life🌞
January 27th, 2017 16:27
janetaylor said:
my dad once showed me a glass and asked me what it was. i said what do you mean? he said what is it? i said a glass half full of water. later he told me about the glass half empty/full story and he said that he wanted to know how I thought 😀 great write to remind us to look on the sunny side of life🌞
January 27th, 2017 16:27
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Christina8 said:
Your poem was another great one indeed. Love the way it rhymed and flowed. I try to be an optimist but it does involve some work. Hugs-Christina
January 27th, 2017 09:37
Christina8 said:
Your poem was another great one indeed. Love the way it rhymed and flowed. I try to be an optimist but it does involve some work. Hugs-Christina
January 27th, 2017 09:37
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Tony36 said:
Great write, Wonderfully written and expressed.
January 27th, 2017 09:28
Tony36 said:
Great write, Wonderfully written and expressed.
January 27th, 2017 09:28
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Meggie Gultiano said:
am 100 % an optimist. And your post made me smile! Indeed, a beautiful and enjoyable sharing. Thank you
January 27th, 2017 09:23
Meggie Gultiano said:
am 100 % an optimist. And your post made me smile! Indeed, a beautiful and enjoyable sharing. Thank you
January 27th, 2017 09:23
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Michael Edwards said:
It is gem indeed and it flows so well.
January 27th, 2017 04:58
Michael Edwards said:
It is gem indeed and it flows so well.
January 27th, 2017 04:58
HALF FULL OR HALF EMPTY ?
Fay Slimm. said:
A sound piece of advice wrapped up in a linguistic parcel of humour -- a read to give thought to and thanks Brian for sharing this gem.
January 27th, 2017 04:41
Fay Slimm. said:
A sound piece of advice wrapped up in a linguistic parcel of humour -- a read to give thought to and thanks Brian for sharing this gem.
January 27th, 2017 04:41
ALPHABETIC POEM ~ AWESOME !
P.H.Rose said:
Very good Brian
Bloody well done sir
January 26th, 2017 19:53
P.H.Rose said:
Very good Brian
Bloody well done sir
January 26th, 2017 19:53
ALPHABETIC POEM ~ AWESOME !
janetaylor said:
superb! loved the author\'s note ~ you always educate us as well as entertain us with your beautiful poems :0)
January 26th, 2017 18:42
janetaylor said:
superb! loved the author\'s note ~ you always educate us as well as entertain us with your beautiful poems :0)
January 26th, 2017 18:42
ALPHABETIC POEM ~ AWESOME !
Christina8 said:
That\'s impressive! I\'ve only written abc poems using part of the alphabet. You did an outstanding job!! Hugs-Christina
January 26th, 2017 07:48
Christina8 said:
That\'s impressive! I\'ve only written abc poems using part of the alphabet. You did an outstanding job!! Hugs-Christina
January 26th, 2017 07:48
ALPHABETIC POEM ~ AWESOME !
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - - now this is so clever and the read makes good sense - - your word-use is always impressive my friend.
January 26th, 2017 07:11
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - - now this is so clever and the read makes good sense - - your word-use is always impressive my friend.
January 26th, 2017 07:11
ALPHABETIC POEM ~ AWESOME !
rrodriguez said:
Interesting form of poetry. Well done. You always bring us literary forms that are poety\'s quiver. Loved it.
January 26th, 2017 05:34
rrodriguez said:
Interesting form of poetry. Well done. You always bring us literary forms that are poety\'s quiver. Loved it.
January 26th, 2017 05:34
ALPHABETIC POEM ~ AWESOME !
Shakerite said:
Inventiveness is you\'re scene .
Great attmpt
January 26th, 2017 05:33
Shakerite said:
Inventiveness is you\'re scene .
Great attmpt
January 26th, 2017 05:33
ALPHABETIC POEM ~ AWESOME !
Michael Edwards said:
Brilliant Brian - sounds a bit like a challenge !
January 26th, 2017 05:20
Michael Edwards said:
Brilliant Brian - sounds a bit like a challenge !
January 26th, 2017 05:20
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