Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA
PRINCE CHARLES ~ KING IN ASPIC ! ~ A Two Dozen Tribute
orchidee said:
Maybe he will get the throne when he is 117? The age you will be! A fine write A & B.
July 21st, 2018 01:19
orchidee said:
Maybe he will get the throne when he is 117? The age you will be! A fine write A & B.
July 21st, 2018 01:19
MADE IN MICHIGAN ~ A Two Dozen Tribute !
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOOD EVENING BRIAN: Its 10am Saturday here 12C 54F (well it is the Middle of Winter in NZ!) You make me jealous with all the US STATES you have visited. Michigan sounds wonderful any Season, lots of Snow and sledging in the Winter. Love the style of the Poem and I agree Sonnets (14 lines) are a bit short for a big subject. Talk later : Love you Lots ANGELA XXXX Ruth sends her love and we are sailing this afternoon it should be dry!
July 20th, 2018 17:46
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOOD EVENING BRIAN: Its 10am Saturday here 12C 54F (well it is the Middle of Winter in NZ!) You make me jealous with all the US STATES you have visited. Michigan sounds wonderful any Season, lots of Snow and sledging in the Winter. Love the style of the Poem and I agree Sonnets (14 lines) are a bit short for a big subject. Talk later : Love you Lots ANGELA XXXX Ruth sends her love and we are sailing this afternoon it should be dry!
July 20th, 2018 17:46
MADE IN MICHIGAN ~ A Two Dozen Tribute !
Fay Slimm. said:
A really absorbing read about Michigan which makes me wish to visit one day - thanks for your research that brings in the factual - am looking forward to more of these tributes - thanks dear Brian.
July 20th, 2018 16:02
Fay Slimm. said:
A really absorbing read about Michigan which makes me wish to visit one day - thanks for your research that brings in the factual - am looking forward to more of these tributes - thanks dear Brian.
July 20th, 2018 16:02
MADE IN MICHIGAN ~ A Two Dozen Tribute !
Michael Edwards said:
Some write Brian.
July 20th, 2018 03:54
Michael Edwards said:
Some write Brian.
July 20th, 2018 03:54
THE FIRST TIME EVER ..... ? Collaboration BRIAN & ANGELA
Christina8 said:
Love this!! Wonderful lyrics---Sister Christina
July 19th, 2018 19:09
Christina8 said:
Love this!! Wonderful lyrics---Sister Christina
July 19th, 2018 19:09
THE FIRST TIME EVER ..... ? Collaboration BRIAN & ANGELA
Laura🌻 said:
Miei Cari Amici Brian ed Angela,
Una bella poesia e canzone di ELVIS!
A beautiful collaboration!
Choosing ELVIS for your collaborative piece is a perfect choice! Two and a half years ago I was in Las Vegas where I saw a performance about The Million Dollar Quartet. It was phenomenal!
Abbracci e Baci...
~Laura~
July 19th, 2018 15:27
Laura🌻 said:
Miei Cari Amici Brian ed Angela,
Una bella poesia e canzone di ELVIS!
A beautiful collaboration!
Choosing ELVIS for your collaborative piece is a perfect choice! Two and a half years ago I was in Las Vegas where I saw a performance about The Million Dollar Quartet. It was phenomenal!
Abbracci e Baci...
~Laura~
July 19th, 2018 15:27
THE FIRST TIME EVER ..... ? Collaboration BRIAN & ANGELA
Fay Slimm. said:
A duo combo like this deserves all our praise for highlighting the love which lasts \"til the end of time\" - hearty congrats to you Brian and Angela for this tenderest of reads.
July 19th, 2018 03:55
Fay Slimm. said:
A duo combo like this deserves all our praise for highlighting the love which lasts \"til the end of time\" - hearty congrats to you Brian and Angela for this tenderest of reads.
July 19th, 2018 03:55
THE FIRST TIME EVER ..... ? Collaboration BRIAN & ANGELA
Heartwriter said:
I\'m swooning too! Elvis is in the poetic house! So sweet Brian. You brought the house down this am. Loved it.
July 19th, 2018 02:52
Heartwriter said:
I\'m swooning too! Elvis is in the poetic house! So sweet Brian. You brought the house down this am. Loved it.
July 19th, 2018 02:52
THE FIRST TIME EVER ..... ? Collaboration BRIAN & ANGELA
Michael Edwards said:
Lovely tender write - congrats to both of you.
July 19th, 2018 02:50
Michael Edwards said:
Lovely tender write - congrats to both of you.
July 19th, 2018 02:50
THE FIRST TIME EVER ..... ? Collaboration BRIAN & ANGELA
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful loving interpretation from you both.
Elvis and Johnny Cash were at Sun records together and recorded an album with Carl Perkins and a newcomer called Jerry Lee Lewis, it was called The Million Dollar Quartet.
July 19th, 2018 02:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful loving interpretation from you both.
Elvis and Johnny Cash were at Sun records together and recorded an album with Carl Perkins and a newcomer called Jerry Lee Lewis, it was called The Million Dollar Quartet.
July 19th, 2018 02:13
THE FIRST TIME EVER ..... ? Collaboration BRIAN & ANGELA
orchidee said:
I didn\'t know Elvis was so swoony in singing, or so croony (crooning)?!
July 19th, 2018 01:58
orchidee said:
I didn\'t know Elvis was so swoony in singing, or so croony (crooning)?!
July 19th, 2018 01:58
THE FIRST TIME EVER ..... ? Collaboration BRIAN & ANGELA
orchidee said:
Ohhh swoon! I shall spend all day recovering now! Knew it would be too much for me. heehee. Oh. get your coat and get out more Orchi!
Poor old Orchi. What can be done for him?
July 19th, 2018 01:57
orchidee said:
Ohhh swoon! I shall spend all day recovering now! Knew it would be too much for me. heehee. Oh. get your coat and get out more Orchi!
Poor old Orchi. What can be done for him?
July 19th, 2018 01:57
GOING HOME ~ A Blank Verse FLOW SONNET
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m feeling quite cold Brian with this supper write.
July 18th, 2018 08:58
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m feeling quite cold Brian with this supper write.
July 18th, 2018 08:58
GOING HOME ~ A Blank Verse FLOW SONNET
FineB said:
Thank you Brian.
A lovely write on Autumn.
Sometimes Autumn tends to be overlooked by Spring, Summer and the ever so bleak Winter!
Keep writing
FineB
July 18th, 2018 07:17
FineB said:
Thank you Brian.
A lovely write on Autumn.
Sometimes Autumn tends to be overlooked by Spring, Summer and the ever so bleak Winter!
Keep writing
FineB
July 18th, 2018 07:17
GOING HOME ~ A Blank Verse FLOW SONNET
Heartwriter said:
Wonderful write Brian. You are so creative
Loved it.
July 18th, 2018 06:17
Heartwriter said:
Wonderful write Brian. You are so creative
Loved it.
July 18th, 2018 06:17
GOING HOME ~ A Blank Verse FLOW SONNET
Fay Slimm. said:
Your pen makes the best of this style and subject dear Brian - so clear indeed that I feel chilly after seeing with mind\'s eye that snow everywhere - great example of a blank verse sonnet.
July 18th, 2018 04:24
Fay Slimm. said:
Your pen makes the best of this style and subject dear Brian - so clear indeed that I feel chilly after seeing with mind\'s eye that snow everywhere - great example of a blank verse sonnet.
July 18th, 2018 04:24
GOING HOME ~ A Blank Verse FLOW SONNET
orchidee said:
A fine write Brian. By the time I\'ve sorted out iambic-wotsits and all the stuff you\'ve said - should I give up writing the poem?! lol. Or press on?
I\'m busy fussing about metres and syllables!
July 18th, 2018 03:00
orchidee said:
A fine write Brian. By the time I\'ve sorted out iambic-wotsits and all the stuff you\'ve said - should I give up writing the poem?! lol. Or press on?
I\'m busy fussing about metres and syllables!
July 18th, 2018 03:00
GOING HOME ~ A Blank Verse FLOW SONNET
Goldfinch60 said:
I feel that the colours of Autumn are the most profound of Natures Canvas.
July 18th, 2018 02:04
Goldfinch60 said:
I feel that the colours of Autumn are the most profound of Natures Canvas.
July 18th, 2018 02:04
FUSION POETRY RULES ~ OK ~ A 4 4 4 2 Rhyming Sonnet
Goldfinch60 said:
I do do them occasionally but I have put it on \'the list\' to do and then moved onto something else, this age thing you know.
July 18th, 2018 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
I do do them occasionally but I have put it on \'the list\' to do and then moved onto something else, this age thing you know.
July 18th, 2018 00:39
FUSION POETRY RULES ~ OK ~ A 4 4 4 2 Rhyming Sonnet
orchidee said:
I dunno what to write on them sometimes.
July 17th, 2018 06:46
orchidee said:
I dunno what to write on them sometimes.
July 17th, 2018 06:46
FUSION POETRY RULES ~ OK ~ A 4 4 4 2 Rhyming Sonnet
Poetic Dan said:
I hear your plea, but I do find it a bit scary
I\'ve done one or two so this is for you
When you say it should be 4 4 4 2
I switch off as I just write what I do
Now I\'m going to just think of a smile
As I break my mould and post in my style
I love the meaning, it still may take a while
Riddled with anxiety knowing I\'m in denial
July 17th, 2018 05:30
Poetic Dan said:
I hear your plea, but I do find it a bit scary
I\'ve done one or two so this is for you
When you say it should be 4 4 4 2
I switch off as I just write what I do
Now I\'m going to just think of a smile
As I break my mould and post in my style
I love the meaning, it still may take a while
Riddled with anxiety knowing I\'m in denial
July 17th, 2018 05:30
CHESS ~ A GAME FOR THE BRAIN ! A 4 5 5 Blank Verse Sonnet
Fay Slimm. said:
Lovely voice and words - - very telling
- - interesting info. on chess too Brian --- knowing nothing about the game I was intrigued to read the differing moves - love your new duo image.. ..........
July 16th, 2018 12:12
Fay Slimm. said:
Lovely voice and words - - very telling
- - interesting info. on chess too Brian --- knowing nothing about the game I was intrigued to read the differing moves - love your new duo image.. ..........
July 16th, 2018 12:12
CHESS ~ A GAME FOR THE BRAIN ! A 4 5 5 Blank Verse Sonnet
Goldfinch60 said:
I too have always been able to play chess but my favourite board game is backgammon. Good write Brian.
July 16th, 2018 08:03
Goldfinch60 said:
I too have always been able to play chess but my favourite board game is backgammon. Good write Brian.
July 16th, 2018 08:03
CHESS ~ A GAME FOR THE BRAIN ! A 4 5 5 Blank Verse Sonnet
Heartwriter said:
I love all games. Chinese checkers is one of my favs. Chess is a great game. Thanks for sharing.
July 16th, 2018 06:44
Heartwriter said:
I love all games. Chinese checkers is one of my favs. Chess is a great game. Thanks for sharing.
July 16th, 2018 06:44
CHESS ~ A GAME FOR THE BRAIN ! A 4 5 5 Blank Verse Sonnet
ForeverJesus7 said:
I love chess. It is a great pass time that keeps you thinking. I have a nice wooden chess set on my dining room table. I try to teach my niece and nephew the game, but my nephew does not really care for it. In all my twenty years of playing the game, I never understood the castle and king switch.
Keep writing.
Persistence is key
July 16th, 2018 06:30
ForeverJesus7 said:
I love chess. It is a great pass time that keeps you thinking. I have a nice wooden chess set on my dining room table. I try to teach my niece and nephew the game, but my nephew does not really care for it. In all my twenty years of playing the game, I never understood the castle and king switch.
Keep writing.
Persistence is key
July 16th, 2018 06:30
CHESS ~ A GAME FOR THE BRAIN ! A 4 5 5 Blank Verse Sonnet
Michael Edwards said:
I love the game too and used to play as a schoolboy. A good chess set can also be a work of art worthy of display in anyone\'s home.
July 16th, 2018 04:23
Michael Edwards said:
I love the game too and used to play as a schoolboy. A good chess set can also be a work of art worthy of display in anyone\'s home.
July 16th, 2018 04:23
CHESS ~ A GAME FOR THE BRAIN ! A 4 5 5 Blank Verse Sonnet
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOOD MORNING BRIAN! (Its 8pm here and cool) You know I love CHESS mi Papa taught me too with his lovely antique Spanish Chess Set. They love CHESS in NZ and one day I will beat you! They have OPEN AIR Chess Sets with big pieces which I love. There are Maori Chess Sets with lovely carvings I have bought one to bring home! All my Love ANGELA XXXX
July 16th, 2018 03:47
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOOD MORNING BRIAN! (Its 8pm here and cool) You know I love CHESS mi Papa taught me too with his lovely antique Spanish Chess Set. They love CHESS in NZ and one day I will beat you! They have OPEN AIR Chess Sets with big pieces which I love. There are Maori Chess Sets with lovely carvings I have bought one to bring home! All my Love ANGELA XXXX
July 16th, 2018 03:47
CHESS ~ A GAME FOR THE BRAIN ! A 4 5 5 Blank Verse Sonnet
Poetic Dan said:
Now that\'s got to be my sign to have one in my house, it\'s been on my mind for years that the kids should know how.
Thank you my friend and the next time I see one it\'s coming back to my den!
July 16th, 2018 03:33
Poetic Dan said:
Now that\'s got to be my sign to have one in my house, it\'s been on my mind for years that the kids should know how.
Thank you my friend and the next time I see one it\'s coming back to my den!
July 16th, 2018 03:33
CHESS ~ A GAME FOR THE BRAIN ! A 4 5 5 Blank Verse Sonnet
orchidee said:
A fine write Brian. I found the knights/horses the most difficult. Also castles might be called rooks.
I not got the hang of the \'castling the King\' move. Do you know it?
Arrghh - now chess is sexy. Swoon!
July 16th, 2018 01:33
orchidee said:
A fine write Brian. I found the knights/horses the most difficult. Also castles might be called rooks.
I not got the hang of the \'castling the King\' move. Do you know it?
Arrghh - now chess is sexy. Swoon!
July 16th, 2018 01:33
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