Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA
GOING HOME ~ A Blank Verse FLOW SONNET
Fay Slimm. said:
Your pen makes the best of this style and subject dear Brian - so clear indeed that I feel chilly after seeing with mind\'s eye that snow everywhere - great example of a blank verse sonnet.
July 18th, 2018 04:24
Fay Slimm. said:
Your pen makes the best of this style and subject dear Brian - so clear indeed that I feel chilly after seeing with mind\'s eye that snow everywhere - great example of a blank verse sonnet.
July 18th, 2018 04:24
GOING HOME ~ A Blank Verse FLOW SONNET
orchidee said:
A fine write Brian. By the time I\'ve sorted out iambic-wotsits and all the stuff you\'ve said - should I give up writing the poem?! lol. Or press on?
I\'m busy fussing about metres and syllables!
July 18th, 2018 03:00
orchidee said:
A fine write Brian. By the time I\'ve sorted out iambic-wotsits and all the stuff you\'ve said - should I give up writing the poem?! lol. Or press on?
I\'m busy fussing about metres and syllables!
July 18th, 2018 03:00
GOING HOME ~ A Blank Verse FLOW SONNET
Goldfinch60 said:
I feel that the colours of Autumn are the most profound of Natures Canvas.
July 18th, 2018 02:04
Goldfinch60 said:
I feel that the colours of Autumn are the most profound of Natures Canvas.
July 18th, 2018 02:04
FUSION POETRY RULES ~ OK ~ A 4 4 4 2 Rhyming Sonnet
Goldfinch60 said:
I do do them occasionally but I have put it on \'the list\' to do and then moved onto something else, this age thing you know.
July 18th, 2018 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
I do do them occasionally but I have put it on \'the list\' to do and then moved onto something else, this age thing you know.
July 18th, 2018 00:39
FUSION POETRY RULES ~ OK ~ A 4 4 4 2 Rhyming Sonnet
orchidee said:
I dunno what to write on them sometimes.
July 17th, 2018 06:46
orchidee said:
I dunno what to write on them sometimes.
July 17th, 2018 06:46
FUSION POETRY RULES ~ OK ~ A 4 4 4 2 Rhyming Sonnet
Poetic Dan said:
I hear your plea, but I do find it a bit scary
I\'ve done one or two so this is for you
When you say it should be 4 4 4 2
I switch off as I just write what I do
Now I\'m going to just think of a smile
As I break my mould and post in my style
I love the meaning, it still may take a while
Riddled with anxiety knowing I\'m in denial
July 17th, 2018 05:30
Poetic Dan said:
I hear your plea, but I do find it a bit scary
I\'ve done one or two so this is for you
When you say it should be 4 4 4 2
I switch off as I just write what I do
Now I\'m going to just think of a smile
As I break my mould and post in my style
I love the meaning, it still may take a while
Riddled with anxiety knowing I\'m in denial
July 17th, 2018 05:30
CHESS ~ A GAME FOR THE BRAIN ! A 4 5 5 Blank Verse Sonnet
Fay Slimm. said:
Lovely voice and words - - very telling
- - interesting info. on chess too Brian --- knowing nothing about the game I was intrigued to read the differing moves - love your new duo image.. ..........
July 16th, 2018 12:12
Fay Slimm. said:
Lovely voice and words - - very telling
- - interesting info. on chess too Brian --- knowing nothing about the game I was intrigued to read the differing moves - love your new duo image.. ..........
July 16th, 2018 12:12
CHESS ~ A GAME FOR THE BRAIN ! A 4 5 5 Blank Verse Sonnet
Goldfinch60 said:
I too have always been able to play chess but my favourite board game is backgammon. Good write Brian.
July 16th, 2018 08:03
Goldfinch60 said:
I too have always been able to play chess but my favourite board game is backgammon. Good write Brian.
July 16th, 2018 08:03
CHESS ~ A GAME FOR THE BRAIN ! A 4 5 5 Blank Verse Sonnet
Heartwriter said:
I love all games. Chinese checkers is one of my favs. Chess is a great game. Thanks for sharing.
July 16th, 2018 06:44
Heartwriter said:
I love all games. Chinese checkers is one of my favs. Chess is a great game. Thanks for sharing.
July 16th, 2018 06:44
CHESS ~ A GAME FOR THE BRAIN ! A 4 5 5 Blank Verse Sonnet
ForeverJesus7 said:
I love chess. It is a great pass time that keeps you thinking. I have a nice wooden chess set on my dining room table. I try to teach my niece and nephew the game, but my nephew does not really care for it. In all my twenty years of playing the game, I never understood the castle and king switch.
Keep writing.
Persistence is key
July 16th, 2018 06:30
ForeverJesus7 said:
I love chess. It is a great pass time that keeps you thinking. I have a nice wooden chess set on my dining room table. I try to teach my niece and nephew the game, but my nephew does not really care for it. In all my twenty years of playing the game, I never understood the castle and king switch.
Keep writing.
Persistence is key
July 16th, 2018 06:30
CHESS ~ A GAME FOR THE BRAIN ! A 4 5 5 Blank Verse Sonnet
Michael Edwards said:
I love the game too and used to play as a schoolboy. A good chess set can also be a work of art worthy of display in anyone\'s home.
July 16th, 2018 04:23
Michael Edwards said:
I love the game too and used to play as a schoolboy. A good chess set can also be a work of art worthy of display in anyone\'s home.
July 16th, 2018 04:23
CHESS ~ A GAME FOR THE BRAIN ! A 4 5 5 Blank Verse Sonnet
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOOD MORNING BRIAN! (Its 8pm here and cool) You know I love CHESS mi Papa taught me too with his lovely antique Spanish Chess Set. They love CHESS in NZ and one day I will beat you! They have OPEN AIR Chess Sets with big pieces which I love. There are Maori Chess Sets with lovely carvings I have bought one to bring home! All my Love ANGELA XXXX
July 16th, 2018 03:47
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOOD MORNING BRIAN! (Its 8pm here and cool) You know I love CHESS mi Papa taught me too with his lovely antique Spanish Chess Set. They love CHESS in NZ and one day I will beat you! They have OPEN AIR Chess Sets with big pieces which I love. There are Maori Chess Sets with lovely carvings I have bought one to bring home! All my Love ANGELA XXXX
July 16th, 2018 03:47
CHESS ~ A GAME FOR THE BRAIN ! A 4 5 5 Blank Verse Sonnet
Poetic Dan said:
Now that\'s got to be my sign to have one in my house, it\'s been on my mind for years that the kids should know how.
Thank you my friend and the next time I see one it\'s coming back to my den!
July 16th, 2018 03:33
Poetic Dan said:
Now that\'s got to be my sign to have one in my house, it\'s been on my mind for years that the kids should know how.
Thank you my friend and the next time I see one it\'s coming back to my den!
July 16th, 2018 03:33
CHESS ~ A GAME FOR THE BRAIN ! A 4 5 5 Blank Verse Sonnet
orchidee said:
A fine write Brian. I found the knights/horses the most difficult. Also castles might be called rooks.
I not got the hang of the \'castling the King\' move. Do you know it?
Arrghh - now chess is sexy. Swoon!
July 16th, 2018 01:33
orchidee said:
A fine write Brian. I found the knights/horses the most difficult. Also castles might be called rooks.
I not got the hang of the \'castling the King\' move. Do you know it?
Arrghh - now chess is sexy. Swoon!
July 16th, 2018 01:33
HOW GREAT THOU ART ~ IN MAORI ~ LOVE ANGELA XXXX
Christina8 said:
A really beautiful song Angela! Thanks so much for sharing! Sister Christina. Hugs!
July 15th, 2018 20:46
Christina8 said:
A really beautiful song Angela! Thanks so much for sharing! Sister Christina. Hugs!
July 15th, 2018 20:46
A TIME FOR EVERYTHING !
Christina8 said:
This is a wonderful poem and message! Loved it!
July 15th, 2018 20:44
Christina8 said:
This is a wonderful poem and message! Loved it!
July 15th, 2018 20:44
HOW GREAT THOU ART ~ IN MAORI ~ LOVE ANGELA XXXX
ForeverJesus7 said:
This song is also one of my favorite hymns. My first is, \'Turn Your Eyes Upon Jesus\'.
Persistence is key.
July 15th, 2018 19:31
ForeverJesus7 said:
This song is also one of my favorite hymns. My first is, \'Turn Your Eyes Upon Jesus\'.
Persistence is key.
July 15th, 2018 19:31
HOW GREAT THOU ART ~ IN MAORI ~ LOVE ANGELA XXXX
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRIEND, these days I think people spell how they wish. It arises from texting etc. Thanks for your comment hope my spelling is OK! Yours ANGELA (I\'m Brian\'s Fiancee and we share this site).
July 15th, 2018 16:32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRIEND, these days I think people spell how they wish. It arises from texting etc. Thanks for your comment hope my spelling is OK! Yours ANGELA (I\'m Brian\'s Fiancee and we share this site).
July 15th, 2018 16:32
HOW GREAT THOU ART ~ IN MAORI ~ LOVE ANGELA XXXX
orchidee said:
Thanks Brian/Angela. Times for more wanderings through them woods and forest glades, me thinks - If we have the time!
July 15th, 2018 07:37
orchidee said:
Thanks Brian/Angela. Times for more wanderings through them woods and forest glades, me thinks - If we have the time!
July 15th, 2018 07:37
HOW GREAT THOU ART ~ IN MAORI ~ LOVE ANGELA XXXX
Heartwriter said:
One of my fav songs. Beautiful. Thanks for sharing.
July 15th, 2018 04:19
Heartwriter said:
One of my fav songs. Beautiful. Thanks for sharing.
July 15th, 2018 04:19
A TIME FOR EVERYTHING !
Michael Edwards said:
And a time to reply on MPS - half time during the Belgium England game.
July 14th, 2018 10:00
Michael Edwards said:
And a time to reply on MPS - half time during the Belgium England game.
July 14th, 2018 10:00
A TIME FOR EVERYTHING !
orchidee said:
A fine write Brian. Big ben don\'t look like this now. it\'s all being refurbished. Saw it in person a couple of weeks ago.
Oh - a time to sing; unfortunately it\'s me singing, but that can\'t be helped! How they look forward to \'a time not to sing!\' lol.
July 14th, 2018 08:45
orchidee said:
A fine write Brian. Big ben don\'t look like this now. it\'s all being refurbished. Saw it in person a couple of weeks ago.
Oh - a time to sing; unfortunately it\'s me singing, but that can\'t be helped! How they look forward to \'a time not to sing!\' lol.
July 14th, 2018 08:45
A TIME FOR EVERYTHING !
Heartwriter said:
A time for everything even this great read!
July 14th, 2018 07:36
Heartwriter said:
A time for everything even this great read!
July 14th, 2018 07:36
A TIME FOR EVERYTHING !
kevin browne said:
And amen to this poem, my friend. lovely to read.
July 14th, 2018 02:38
kevin browne said:
And amen to this poem, my friend. lovely to read.
July 14th, 2018 02:38
BIOCHEMISTRY OF LOVE !
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOOD EVENING SWEETHEART : It\'s 9am Saturday Morning here in NZ no clinics today! Love this poem and the Jim Reeves Song you have dedicated to me (it made me cry) I love it. AS you know I have studied UNITS in Biochemistry in my Physiotherapy Degree and Beauty Therapy (Aromatherapy) Courses. I agree with your answer to Andy, Biochemicals do affect emotions and in Aromatherapy there are sensual oils like Musk Lang-Lang and Jasmine etc. Sensual Attraction and Libido raising etc is the basis of Perfumery. Essential Oil molecules are small most are MONOTERPENES (C10 units) so are small enough to penetrate the pores of the skin. The MAORIS are very sensual and love AROMATHERAPY! However being a Christian I agree that GOD is LOVE and the basis of all Human Love is Spiritual. When I have Senior clients for PHYSIOTHERAPY, I always PRAY WITH them which shows LOVE and accelerates the HEALING. Loved the whole package! All my LOVE, talk later ANGELA XXXX
July 13th, 2018 16:03
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOOD EVENING SWEETHEART : It\'s 9am Saturday Morning here in NZ no clinics today! Love this poem and the Jim Reeves Song you have dedicated to me (it made me cry) I love it. AS you know I have studied UNITS in Biochemistry in my Physiotherapy Degree and Beauty Therapy (Aromatherapy) Courses. I agree with your answer to Andy, Biochemicals do affect emotions and in Aromatherapy there are sensual oils like Musk Lang-Lang and Jasmine etc. Sensual Attraction and Libido raising etc is the basis of Perfumery. Essential Oil molecules are small most are MONOTERPENES (C10 units) so are small enough to penetrate the pores of the skin. The MAORIS are very sensual and love AROMATHERAPY! However being a Christian I agree that GOD is LOVE and the basis of all Human Love is Spiritual. When I have Senior clients for PHYSIOTHERAPY, I always PRAY WITH them which shows LOVE and accelerates the HEALING. Loved the whole package! All my LOVE, talk later ANGELA XXXX
July 13th, 2018 16:03
BIOCHEMISTRY OF LOVE !
Heartwriter said:
Beautiful write Brian. Love looks good on you.
July 13th, 2018 15:16
Heartwriter said:
Beautiful write Brian. Love looks good on you.
July 13th, 2018 15:16
BIOCHEMISTRY OF LOVE !
Christina8 said:
I agree that it takes all those things to make people have good \"Chemistry\"---it amazes me that we aren\'t attracted to more people! I agree with Andy--love comes from the soul. Abrazos.
July 13th, 2018 11:29
Christina8 said:
I agree that it takes all those things to make people have good \"Chemistry\"---it amazes me that we aren\'t attracted to more people! I agree with Andy--love comes from the soul. Abrazos.
July 13th, 2018 11:29
BIOCHEMISTRY OF LOVE !
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Brian but I believe that love comes from the Soul and chemistry is physical not emotional.
July 13th, 2018 08:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Brian but I believe that love comes from the Soul and chemistry is physical not emotional.
July 13th, 2018 08:27
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