Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA
BOTHER SUN & SISTER MOON ~ Tankas
orchidee said:
A fine write Brian. As also St Francis of Assisi wrote about. Though we must not go as far as worshipping them.
October 18th, 2017 15:00
orchidee said:
A fine write Brian. As also St Francis of Assisi wrote about. Though we must not go as far as worshipping them.
October 18th, 2017 15:00
BOTHER SUN & SISTER MOON ~ Tankas
Louis Gibbs said:
Even without knowing what a Tanka is, I can appreciate this tribute to the orbs that keep this world going. Nice write, Brian!
October 18th, 2017 14:29
Louis Gibbs said:
Even without knowing what a Tanka is, I can appreciate this tribute to the orbs that keep this world going. Nice write, Brian!
October 18th, 2017 14:29
BOTHER SUN & SISTER MOON ~ Tankas
Fay Slimm. said:
Sun and Moon as kith and kin and brought to our eyes in tanka form too - a lovely read Brian.
October 18th, 2017 12:43
Fay Slimm. said:
Sun and Moon as kith and kin and brought to our eyes in tanka form too - a lovely read Brian.
October 18th, 2017 12:43
BOTHER SUN & SISTER MOON ~ Tankas
Christina8 said:
Well done tankas brother Brian! Great write! Sisterly hugs-Christina
October 18th, 2017 12:41
Christina8 said:
Well done tankas brother Brian! Great write! Sisterly hugs-Christina
October 18th, 2017 12:41
B I R D S ~ An Homacrostic
rrodriguez said:
I agree with Fred, you certainly know how to make those rhymes. Well done!
October 18th, 2017 12:04
rrodriguez said:
I agree with Fred, you certainly know how to make those rhymes. Well done!
October 18th, 2017 12:04
B I R D S ~ An Homacrostic
Laura🌻 said:
Beautifully done, Brian!
A gifted young man...you are!
This write reminded me of (many, many moons ago) the time I taught 7 year olds and read them a story about puffins! Colorful and adorable!
Homacrostic...I\'ll have to try it!
~Laura~
October 17th, 2017 10:26
Laura🌻 said:
Beautifully done, Brian!
A gifted young man...you are!
This write reminded me of (many, many moons ago) the time I taught 7 year olds and read them a story about puffins! Colorful and adorable!
Homacrostic...I\'ll have to try it!
~Laura~
October 17th, 2017 10:26
B I R D S ~ An Homacrostic
WL Schuett said:
Wow that’s pretty cool , I watch the birds also
October 17th, 2017 09:58
WL Schuett said:
Wow that’s pretty cool , I watch the birds also
October 17th, 2017 09:58
THE LOVE OF GOD
HEIDIKINS said:
Very nice. I enjoyed your word play and the visualization in my mind that came with it. Beautiful words written. I am a woman of strong faith and this poem sings to my heart and for our Father. Bless you always and your gift that God has given. Amen!!! ❤️❤️❤️
October 17th, 2017 06:22
HEIDIKINS said:
Very nice. I enjoyed your word play and the visualization in my mind that came with it. Beautiful words written. I am a woman of strong faith and this poem sings to my heart and for our Father. Bless you always and your gift that God has given. Amen!!! ❤️❤️❤️
October 17th, 2017 06:22
B I R D S ~ An Homacrostic
Christina8 said:
I am so immature, I laughed out loud when i saw the name of the first bird and your description of them. Great job on this homacrostic!! Sisterly hugs-Christina
October 17th, 2017 06:19
Christina8 said:
I am so immature, I laughed out loud when i saw the name of the first bird and your description of them. Great job on this homacrostic!! Sisterly hugs-Christina
October 17th, 2017 06:19
B I R D S ~ An Homacrostic
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, I have seen all those birds.
October 17th, 2017 02:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, I have seen all those birds.
October 17th, 2017 02:03
B I R D S ~ An Homacrostic
FredPeyer said:
Nicely done, Brian! You are a master at these complicated poem structures!
October 17th, 2017 01:53
FredPeyer said:
Nicely done, Brian! You are a master at these complicated poem structures!
October 17th, 2017 01:53
THE LOVE OF GOD
Fay Slimm. said:
So so true those three little words mean all the world to human believers or not - God is Love and you have rhymed that fact so beautifully dear Brian - thank you and this goes to my favourites for later reading.
October 16th, 2017 16:43
Fay Slimm. said:
So so true those three little words mean all the world to human believers or not - God is Love and you have rhymed that fact so beautifully dear Brian - thank you and this goes to my favourites for later reading.
October 16th, 2017 16:43
THE LOVE OF GOD
FredPeyer said:
A well crafted poem, Brian! Love the rhyming.
October 16th, 2017 11:23
FredPeyer said:
A well crafted poem, Brian! Love the rhyming.
October 16th, 2017 11:23
THE LOVE OF GOD
Heather T said:
Brian, wonderful work! Beautiful imagery about the love of a Father that is closer to us than we are to ourselves.
October 16th, 2017 08:40
Heather T said:
Brian, wonderful work! Beautiful imagery about the love of a Father that is closer to us than we are to ourselves.
October 16th, 2017 08:40
THE LOVE OF GOD
Laura🌻 said:
Beautiful way to start the day! As Christina said,\"uplifting and spiritual\"! Thank you!
~Laura~
October 16th, 2017 08:08
Laura🌻 said:
Beautiful way to start the day! As Christina said,\"uplifting and spiritual\"! Thank you!
~Laura~
October 16th, 2017 08:08
THE LOVE OF GOD
Christina8 said:
Nice write Brian! Needed that uplifting message today. Spiritual hugs-Christina
October 16th, 2017 07:36
Christina8 said:
Nice write Brian! Needed that uplifting message today. Spiritual hugs-Christina
October 16th, 2017 07:36
THE LOVE OF GOD
orchidee said:
Wonderful write Brian. I don\'t know the hymn! But if all done in 4 line stanzas, this fits to the tune \'Immortal love, for ever full\'. Nope, not an \'oldie\' but around the same time as your author.
And even more hymns needed than Wesley\'s 9,000+, including his unpublished hymns, I read?!
October 16th, 2017 03:15
orchidee said:
Wonderful write Brian. I don\'t know the hymn! But if all done in 4 line stanzas, this fits to the tune \'Immortal love, for ever full\'. Nope, not an \'oldie\' but around the same time as your author.
And even more hymns needed than Wesley\'s 9,000+, including his unpublished hymns, I read?!
October 16th, 2017 03:15
THE POETRY OF JESUS ~ A Rhyming Sonnet
Christina8 said:
A great Sunday write Brian! Uplifting as always. Have a happy one--Sunday hugs--Christina
October 15th, 2017 08:41
Christina8 said:
A great Sunday write Brian! Uplifting as always. Have a happy one--Sunday hugs--Christina
October 15th, 2017 08:41
THE POETRY OF JESUS ~ A Rhyming Sonnet
Louis Gibbs said:
Never thought of the bible as a book of poetry, or of Jesus as a poet. Interesting, Brian! Thanks for this new slant. Good, informative write!
October 15th, 2017 07:21
Louis Gibbs said:
Never thought of the bible as a book of poetry, or of Jesus as a poet. Interesting, Brian! Thanks for this new slant. Good, informative write!
October 15th, 2017 07:21
THE POETRY OF JESUS ~ A Rhyming Sonnet
Fay Slimm. said:
A lovely and upbuilding read for today - thanks for the reminder of the greatest of poets dear Brian.
October 15th, 2017 05:10
Fay Slimm. said:
A lovely and upbuilding read for today - thanks for the reminder of the greatest of poets dear Brian.
October 15th, 2017 05:10
THE POETRY OF JESUS ~ A Rhyming Sonnet
Laura🌻 said:
Plain clogs are good enough for me...and much more comfortable!😉
A beautiful read for a great write!
Thank you!
~Laura~
October 15th, 2017 03:09
Laura🌻 said:
Plain clogs are good enough for me...and much more comfortable!😉
A beautiful read for a great write!
Thank you!
~Laura~
October 15th, 2017 03:09
THE POETRY OF JESUS ~ A Rhyming Sonnet
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, and yes I read the Bible and have read the NIV from beginning to end. Don\'t tell Orchi but among my many versions I have the Message as well.
October 15th, 2017 02:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, and yes I read the Bible and have read the NIV from beginning to end. Don\'t tell Orchi but among my many versions I have the Message as well.
October 15th, 2017 02:38
THE POETRY OF JESUS ~ A Rhyming Sonnet
orchidee said:
Also - maybe things are update, if the AV is seen as ye olde language now. But it loses the poetic style in some modern versions. And don\'t speak to me about The Message Version! It\'s piffle in places. Arghh it appears at a church I know. Thankfully not in the main services.
October 15th, 2017 01:48
orchidee said:
Also - maybe things are update, if the AV is seen as ye olde language now. But it loses the poetic style in some modern versions. And don\'t speak to me about The Message Version! It\'s piffle in places. Arghh it appears at a church I know. Thankfully not in the main services.
October 15th, 2017 01:48
THE POETRY OF JESUS ~ A Rhyming Sonnet
orchidee said:
This might fit to a hymn tune, something like 10 .10.10.10. maybe. The first hymn with Jimmy Choo in it! A fine write Brian. Some of nature may just pass us by, and we may not \'see\' it properly every day.
October 15th, 2017 01:45
orchidee said:
This might fit to a hymn tune, something like 10 .10.10.10. maybe. The first hymn with Jimmy Choo in it! A fine write Brian. Some of nature may just pass us by, and we may not \'see\' it properly every day.
October 15th, 2017 01:45
OH MY ! POETIC SIDE ~ A 2 2 6 4 Rhyming Sonnet
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write about a good site.
October 15th, 2017 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write about a good site.
October 15th, 2017 00:43
OH MY ! POETIC SIDE ~ A 2 2 6 4 Rhyming Sonnet
Laura🌻 said:
You\'re so right Brian! This poetic side is an awesome site! I\'ve been reading some of the poems...so so interesting! An eclectic pool of writings! Very enjoyable!
~Laura~
October 14th, 2017 22:41
Laura🌻 said:
You\'re so right Brian! This poetic side is an awesome site! I\'ve been reading some of the poems...so so interesting! An eclectic pool of writings! Very enjoyable!
~Laura~
October 14th, 2017 22:41
OH MY ! POETIC SIDE ~ A 2 2 6 4 Rhyming Sonnet
orchidee said:
Cooeee,, a line from Hastings. We\'re here for the 1066 reunion. Anyone can join, as long as they were there in person, like a few of us were! Oh lol, some relatives of mine actually ARE there for a weekend. Much more of this and we\'ll go batty!
October 14th, 2017 13:56
orchidee said:
Cooeee,, a line from Hastings. We\'re here for the 1066 reunion. Anyone can join, as long as they were there in person, like a few of us were! Oh lol, some relatives of mine actually ARE there for a weekend. Much more of this and we\'ll go batty!
October 14th, 2017 13:56
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