Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA



AROMATHERAPY ~ OK
Fay Slimm. said:

Oh the lovely perfume wafts from your every word on the art of Aromatherapy - well said Brian that the essence of each wonderful gift is extended when massage occurs - a refreshing read.

November 7th, 2017 06:02

GROWING OLDER ~ A Reverse & Revamp Poem
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

GRACIA CARA MIA ~ It is not as easy as I make it look ~ but I like a WORDSSMITH challenge ! I always like to make you smile ! Besos y Abrazos Picantes ~ BRIAN Tu Primo Amigo en MPS !

November 6th, 2017 18:08

GROWING OLDER ~ A Reverse & Revamp Poem
orchidee said:

That young heart there (yours!) ain\'t beating non-rhythmically. You must be positively young, cos I\'m millions of years old! lol

November 6th, 2017 11:18

GROWING OLDER ~ A Reverse & Revamp Poem
orchidee said:

A fine write Brian. I shall sing me hymn-poems backwards AND forwards. oh no! Meoowwwoo! I\'ve started. lol.

November 6th, 2017 11:15

GROWING OLDER ~ A Reverse & Revamp Poem
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks M & M ~ Yes it is difficult ~ but satisfying when it works OK although the language structure in Stanza 2 is a little antiquated ~ BUT it still makes sense. Next time I post one (A Reverse & Revamp Poem) I will compose it in manuscript and then post it with Stanza 2 FIRST ! Thanks BRIAN

November 6th, 2017 10:25

GROWING OLDER ~ A Reverse & Revamp Poem
myself and me said:

It is such a difficult structure to follow and you did it. \"growing older\", no one could avoid.

November 6th, 2017 09:03

GROWING OLDER ~ A Reverse & Revamp Poem
Goldfinch60 said:

It is the one thing we cannot stop but I am going to have a good try at enjoying all the life I have left.

Just one thing that always pleases me though is that although I have a few grey hairs I have fewer than my YOUNGER brother.

November 6th, 2017 09:02

GROWING OLDER ~ A Reverse & Revamp Poem
Christina8 said:

Interesting structure Brian! Very neat poem. I think the same goes with mirrors and ladies! lol kidding. Sisterly hugs-Christina

November 6th, 2017 07:17

GROWING OLDER ~ A Reverse & Revamp Poem
SunSearcher said:

Excellent point! I really enjoyed this one. I may give this a whirl sometime, seems fun!

~SS

November 6th, 2017 07:10

GROWING OLDER ~ A Reverse & Revamp Poem
Accidental Poet said:

We\'re all on the conveyer belt of life. Great words of wisdom Brian. I love your mantra - \"Be your AGE ~ But look your BEST !\" Great advice. ; )

November 6th, 2017 05:56

GROWING OLDER ~ A Reverse & Revamp Poem
FredPeyer said:

Interesting structure, and cannot argue with your points. Am getting there myself.

November 6th, 2017 03:12

ALL CREATION PRAISES GOD ~ A Sonnet
Fay Slimm. said:

A gem of a write which puts the praise for creation\'s great order in the right place - - with an Intelligence beyond all our imaginings - - Love personified -- a good reminder of humanity\'s true beginnings in this finely crafted sonnet my dear Brian.

November 5th, 2017 17:27

ALL CREATION PRAISES GOD ~ A Sonnet
orchidee said:

A fine write Brian. Yes, though apes and the ape family have intelligence etc, I don\'t subscribe to evolution either.

November 5th, 2017 09:13

ALL CREATION PRAISES GOD ~ A Sonnet
Christina8 said:

Another great sunday write Brian! He created us a little lower than the angels? That\'s beautiful. Great poem. Sunday hugs-Christina

November 5th, 2017 08:49

ALL CREATION PRAISES GOD ~ A Sonnet
FredPeyer said:

God did NOT create us? Did NOT make us in his image? Brian, you lost me halfway through your poem.

November 5th, 2017 04:38

DRINKA PINTA DAY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
Christina8 said:

Very good write Brian. Your heart is always in the right place during Christmas and throughout the year! Sisterly hugs-Christina

November 4th, 2017 08:23

DRINKA PINTA DAY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
ShannonXx said:

A very good write! love the style of this

November 4th, 2017 07:00

DRINKA PINTA DAY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
FredPeyer said:

For babies, mother milk is the BEST! Nice write, Brian, and thank you for reminding everybody that the time to give is now.

November 4th, 2017 03:41

DRINKA PINTA DAY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
orchidee said:

Good write Brian. Ooh, but I wanted a nice cardy. Send them the needed cow, and send me the cardy! lol.
A pint of sherry for me please (??)!!

November 4th, 2017 02:44

ANGELA ON A BEACH ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
myself and me said:

You are so lucky to have such a lovely lady, and she is so lucky to have your love. Nice writing.

November 3rd, 2017 20:32

ANGELA ON A BEACH ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
Simple-Man87 said:

Very well done. I enjoyed it. What a lovely romantic start to the day.

November 3rd, 2017 10:32

ANGELA ON A BEACH ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
Anna Marg said:

She sounds like a lovely woman! Hope you two are happy!

November 3rd, 2017 10:27

ANGELA ON A BEACH ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for your incisiveness ANDY it is an bursting with Vitality & Love ~ because of the Subject ~ ANGELA. Thanks for caring ~ Yours Angela & Brian.

November 3rd, 2017 09:44

ANGELA ON A BEACH ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful living write Brian.

November 3rd, 2017 09:10

ANGELA ON A BEACH ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
Christina8 said:

You are a lucky man and Angela is a lucky woman! It is wonderful to be in love! You must be so proud. What a lovely read. Great watercolor! Wow! --Christina

November 3rd, 2017 06:32

ANGELA ON A BEACH ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
Laura🌻 said:

Buongiorno
Caro Amico Brian!
Beautiful poem for
your beautiful Angela!
Saluti e abbracci...
~Laura~


November 3rd, 2017 05:48

ANGELA ON A BEACH ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
FredPeyer said:

Brian, no kidding, your poem reminds me of my wife walking the beaches with me here in Hawaii. There are so many beautiful girls and ladies, but for me there was always only one: her!

November 3rd, 2017 04:12

ANGELA ON A BEACH ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
Michael Edwards said:

She must be some lady - the poem serves her so well.

November 3rd, 2017 03:36

ANGELA ON A BEACH ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
orchidee said:

Good write Brian. I\'m not seeing it very well. It seems fuzzy. (Well, change the contrast, Orchi!). But I can see other poems clearly.

November 3rd, 2017 02:47

SEASONS OF JOY
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write on all the seasons. I have to disagree with the wine selection just in the winter, I drink wine in all the seasons.

November 3rd, 2017 01:57



« Return to the profile of BRIAN & ANGELA