GROWING OLDER ~ A Reverse & Revamp Poem
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks M & M ~ Yes it is difficult ~ but satisfying when it works OK although the language structure in Stanza 2 is a little antiquated ~ BUT it still makes sense. Next time I post one (A Reverse & Revamp Poem) I will compose it in manuscript and then post it with Stanza 2 FIRST ! Thanks BRIAN

November 6th, 2017 10:25

GROWING OLDER ~ A Reverse & Revamp Poem
Goldfinch60 said:

It is the one thing we cannot stop but I am going to have a good try at enjoying all the life I have left.

Just one thing that always pleases me though is that although I have a few grey hairs I have fewer than my YOUNGER brother.

November 6th, 2017 09:02

GROWING OLDER ~ A Reverse & Revamp Poem
SunSearcher said:

Excellent point! I really enjoyed this one. I may give this a whirl sometime, seems fun!

~SS

November 6th, 2017 07:10

ALL CREATION PRAISES GOD ~ A Sonnet
Fay Slimm. said:

A gem of a write which puts the praise for creation\'s great order in the right place - - with an Intelligence beyond all our imaginings - - Love personified -- a good reminder of humanity\'s true beginnings in this finely crafted sonnet my dear Brian.

November 5th, 2017 17:27

ALL CREATION PRAISES GOD ~ A Sonnet
Christina8 said:

Another great sunday write Brian! He created us a little lower than the angels? That\'s beautiful. Great poem. Sunday hugs-Christina

November 5th, 2017 08:49

DRINKA PINTA DAY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
Christina8 said:

Very good write Brian. Your heart is always in the right place during Christmas and throughout the year! Sisterly hugs-Christina

November 4th, 2017 08:23

DRINKA PINTA DAY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
FredPeyer said:

For babies, mother milk is the BEST! Nice write, Brian, and thank you for reminding everybody that the time to give is now.

November 4th, 2017 03:41

ANGELA ON A BEACH ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
myself and me said:

You are so lucky to have such a lovely lady, and she is so lucky to have your love. Nice writing.

November 3rd, 2017 20:32

ANGELA ON A BEACH ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
Anna Marg said:

She sounds like a lovely woman! Hope you two are happy!

November 3rd, 2017 10:27

ANGELA ON A BEACH ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful living write Brian.

November 3rd, 2017 09:10

ANGELA ON A BEACH ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
Laura🌻 said:

Buongiorno
Caro Amico Brian!
Beautiful poem for
your beautiful Angela!
Saluti e abbracci...
~Laura~


November 3rd, 2017 05:48

ANGELA ON A BEACH ~ An Acrostic Sonnet
Michael Edwards said:

She must be some lady - the poem serves her so well.

November 3rd, 2017 03:36

SEASONS OF JOY
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write on all the seasons. I have to disagree with the wine selection just in the winter, I drink wine in all the seasons.

November 3rd, 2017 01:57

SEASONS OF JOY
FredPeyer said:

I do miss the seasons sometimes, and your well written poem reminded me of that. But it is also nice being able to go outside in T-shirt and shorts all year long! :-)

November 2nd, 2017 13:10

SEASONS OF JOY
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic Brian.

November 2nd, 2017 09:34