Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
all the birds are awake
lewisgale mental hospital said:
your poems are very short. :) the birds are awake here too and noisy.
May 3rd, 2025 08:24
lewisgale mental hospital said:
your poems are very short. :) the birds are awake here too and noisy.
May 3rd, 2025 08:24
all the birds are awake
sorenbarrett said:
Another wonderful Haiku that holds more meaning than is instantly available to the reader. Deeper than it appears on the surface
May 3rd, 2025 06:43
sorenbarrett said:
Another wonderful Haiku that holds more meaning than is instantly available to the reader. Deeper than it appears on the surface
May 3rd, 2025 06:43
Autistic Brother
jarcher54 said:
He\'s lucky to have you... you can be my brother any time.
May 2nd, 2025 21:20
jarcher54 said:
He\'s lucky to have you... you can be my brother any time.
May 2nd, 2025 21:20
Autistic Brother
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen, brother. I have a special needs family member, myself, and I would do anything for them. A wondeful soul that has taught me much. This poem has all the right heart. An instant fave. 🌹👏
May 2nd, 2025 11:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen, brother. I have a special needs family member, myself, and I would do anything for them. A wondeful soul that has taught me much. This poem has all the right heart. An instant fave. 🌹👏
May 2nd, 2025 11:10
Autistic Brother
sorenbarrett said:
A most loving poem. Most autistic people I have known are just such, sensitive, at times funny and although they don\'t show it as much loving indeed.
May 2nd, 2025 09:54
sorenbarrett said:
A most loving poem. Most autistic people I have known are just such, sensitive, at times funny and although they don\'t show it as much loving indeed.
May 2nd, 2025 09:54
I like to eat my cake and have it too
Salvia.S said:
Gentle and thoughtful. I like how it shows the struggle between wanting to soar and stay grounded at the same time.
May 1st, 2025 12:07
Salvia.S said:
Gentle and thoughtful. I like how it shows the struggle between wanting to soar and stay grounded at the same time.
May 1st, 2025 12:07
I like to eat my cake and have it too
sorenbarrett said:
A great question and the answer only with technology. Nicely written
May 1st, 2025 10:42
sorenbarrett said:
A great question and the answer only with technology. Nicely written
May 1st, 2025 10:42
Information Hoarders
Tristan Robert Lange said:
*Hides data down pants (is that a thing anymore?)* Who me? 🤷♂️ I don\'t have nothin\'! I swear! 🤣 All jokes aside, love it, my friend. An awesome poem that makes it\'s point well and with few words. Well done! 🌹👏
April 28th, 2025 15:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
*Hides data down pants (is that a thing anymore?)* Who me? 🤷♂️ I don\'t have nothin\'! I swear! 🤣 All jokes aside, love it, my friend. An awesome poem that makes it\'s point well and with few words. Well done! 🌹👏
April 28th, 2025 15:02
Information Hoarders
vicecream said:
For what you ask? You’ll have to pay to find out
April 28th, 2025 12:12
vicecream said:
For what you ask? You’ll have to pay to find out
April 28th, 2025 12:12
Information Hoarders
sorenbarrett said:
Trivia hoarders like squirls in the trees burring bits and pieces that they latter forget where they put. A fun and fine write Demar
April 28th, 2025 09:22
sorenbarrett said:
Trivia hoarders like squirls in the trees burring bits and pieces that they latter forget where they put. A fun and fine write Demar
April 28th, 2025 09:22
America should annex Canada
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The title brings one in...and let\'s them stew on the reality of what is said in the title. Well done, my friend! You are brilliant at this very thing and I really admire it. 🌹👏
April 27th, 2025 07:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The title brings one in...and let\'s them stew on the reality of what is said in the title. Well done, my friend! You are brilliant at this very thing and I really admire it. 🌹👏
April 27th, 2025 07:49
financially stable is the goal
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I am in the same dream zone as you, my friend. You have my vote! 😉🌹👏
April 26th, 2025 19:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I am in the same dream zone as you, my friend. You have my vote! 😉🌹👏
April 26th, 2025 19:56
financially stable is the goal
sorenbarrett said:
How nice would it be. Very nice poem Demar
April 26th, 2025 13:57
sorenbarrett said:
How nice would it be. Very nice poem Demar
April 26th, 2025 13:57
ableism is the foundation for fascism
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Isms suck and racism really sucks. For sure dumb. Truth, brother! 🌹👏
April 22nd, 2025 08:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Isms suck and racism really sucks. For sure dumb. Truth, brother! 🌹👏
April 22nd, 2025 08:01
ableism is the foundation for fascism
sorenbarrett said:
Yes Demar I agree racism is dumb. A good read
April 22nd, 2025 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
Yes Demar I agree racism is dumb. A good read
April 22nd, 2025 04:47
In some African cultures there is no roles of mom dad sister brother grandma grandpa etc.
vicecream said:
Wow amazing I love that that exists, I love your pondering and poem about it. So good
April 21st, 2025 09:36
vicecream said:
Wow amazing I love that that exists, I love your pondering and poem about it. So good
April 21st, 2025 09:36
The things you can’t buy…
vicecream said:
A book I’m reading defined the Sacred as something that is beyond price, I thought that was an interesting take
April 21st, 2025 09:34
vicecream said:
A book I’m reading defined the Sacred as something that is beyond price, I thought that was an interesting take
April 21st, 2025 09:34
can’t sleep!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
No cannabis to smoke, that will not do, bro! That really helps me sleep at night. If we were neighbors I\'d be caring by sharing! Sorry to hear about the addiction bro. That sucks. Stay strong!
April 19th, 2025 09:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
No cannabis to smoke, that will not do, bro! That really helps me sleep at night. If we were neighbors I\'d be caring by sharing! Sorry to hear about the addiction bro. That sucks. Stay strong!
April 19th, 2025 09:24
can’t sleep!
teardrop said:
Short yet, understood. LOL, should be here, I\'d smoke with ya!
April 19th, 2025 06:12
teardrop said:
Short yet, understood. LOL, should be here, I\'d smoke with ya!
April 19th, 2025 06:12
can’t sleep!
sorenbarrett said:
We all become addicted to what we love. A fun short
April 19th, 2025 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
We all become addicted to what we love. A fun short
April 19th, 2025 04:16
In some African cultures there is no roles of mom dad sister brother grandma grandpa etc.
maydanae said:
I love this reflection on different cultures! It\'s very interesting to learn about! Wonderful job :)
April 18th, 2025 21:22
maydanae said:
I love this reflection on different cultures! It\'s very interesting to learn about! Wonderful job :)
April 18th, 2025 21:22
In some African cultures there is no roles of mom dad sister brother grandma grandpa etc.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow a wonderful cross-cultural poetic musing, bro! Love this! 🌹👏 A must fave.
April 18th, 2025 21:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow a wonderful cross-cultural poetic musing, bro! Love this! 🌹👏 A must fave.
April 18th, 2025 21:07
In some African cultures there is no roles of mom dad sister brother grandma grandpa etc.
Tony36 said:
Excellent write
April 18th, 2025 09:51
Tony36 said:
Excellent write
April 18th, 2025 09:51
In some African cultures there is no roles of mom dad sister brother grandma grandpa etc.
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful thought tied into this cultural difference. In native American tribes one\'s name changed as they grew, often several times. It would change for the quality that they displayed at times in their life. A name to suit the person and their actions.
April 18th, 2025 07:33
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful thought tied into this cultural difference. In native American tribes one\'s name changed as they grew, often several times. It would change for the quality that they displayed at times in their life. A name to suit the person and their actions.
April 18th, 2025 07:33
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