Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
God, Universe and Nature
NafisaSB said:
happy belated birthday
may you keep celebrating life, and composing beautiful verse
God bless
May 13th, 2025 01:05
NafisaSB said:
happy belated birthday
may you keep celebrating life, and composing beautiful verse
God bless
May 13th, 2025 01:05
Politically Speaking
MLHnow said:
I looked it up! I too feel on a toe hold balance
Wondering why I am up here at all!
Right left up down all a balance that most fall off from!
May 12th, 2025 12:35
MLHnow said:
I looked it up! I too feel on a toe hold balance
Wondering why I am up here at all!
Right left up down all a balance that most fall off from!
May 12th, 2025 12:35
My best friend
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The only way marriage truly works. Rock on, bro! You\'re a lucky man. 🌹👏 What\'s not to fave about that?
May 11th, 2025 07:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The only way marriage truly works. Rock on, bro! You\'re a lucky man. 🌹👏 What\'s not to fave about that?
May 11th, 2025 07:44
My best friend
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful senryu and on a special day. Very nicely done
May 11th, 2025 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful senryu and on a special day. Very nicely done
May 11th, 2025 04:58
I am afraid
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is confessional and professional at the same time. Fragmented, but collected. This is an amazing write. Faved! 🌹👏
May 10th, 2025 15:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is confessional and professional at the same time. Fragmented, but collected. This is an amazing write. Faved! 🌹👏
May 10th, 2025 15:29
I am afraid
sorenbarrett said:
So many fragments of a piece broken. A lovely write and a fave
May 10th, 2025 06:32
sorenbarrett said:
So many fragments of a piece broken. A lovely write and a fave
May 10th, 2025 06:32
my taxes came!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
In that order. Though for some, it\'s death, money, taxes. Aka, you die broke, then it costs money to cremate you, which comes out of tax-paying dollars. 🤣 Great poem, my friend! Short and true. 🌹👏
May 9th, 2025 09:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
In that order. Though for some, it\'s death, money, taxes. Aka, you die broke, then it costs money to cremate you, which comes out of tax-paying dollars. 🤣 Great poem, my friend! Short and true. 🌹👏
May 9th, 2025 09:28
my taxes came!
Poetic Licence said:
Just about sums life up to a T, enjoyed the read
May 9th, 2025 06:24
Poetic Licence said:
Just about sums life up to a T, enjoyed the read
May 9th, 2025 06:24
my taxes came!
sorenbarrett said:
A read too close to the truth to be funny and too sad to be happy. Very nice
May 9th, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
A read too close to the truth to be funny and too sad to be happy. Very nice
May 9th, 2025 04:33
God, Universe and Nature
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fuck yes! Bro, never thought of GUN through the lens of that acronym. This gets a huge amen from me! Damn, I have a G.U.N too! Thanks for that! Powerful. A must fave! 🌹👏
May 7th, 2025 10:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fuck yes! Bro, never thought of GUN through the lens of that acronym. This gets a huge amen from me! Damn, I have a G.U.N too! Thanks for that! Powerful. A must fave! 🌹👏
May 7th, 2025 10:50
God, Universe and Nature
sorenbarrett said:
Clever anachronym in another short write. Nicely done
May 7th, 2025 03:44
sorenbarrett said:
Clever anachronym in another short write. Nicely done
May 7th, 2025 03:44
God, Universe and Nature
Poetic Licence said:
That is an interesting take, and happy birthday
May 7th, 2025 02:57
Poetic Licence said:
That is an interesting take, and happy birthday
May 7th, 2025 02:57
Tomorrow is my birthday
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Can\'t answer the last question for myself, let alone anyone else, but here\'s to hoping and trying...That said, your poems are doing right! Happy Birthday, my friend! 🎂🎉🌹👏
May 6th, 2025 20:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Can\'t answer the last question for myself, let alone anyone else, but here\'s to hoping and trying...That said, your poems are doing right! Happy Birthday, my friend! 🎂🎉🌹👏
May 6th, 2025 20:33
Tomorrow is my birthday
sorenbarrett said:
This Senryu took me by surprise well made and yes as long as you are on the green side of the grass you are doing just fine.
May 6th, 2025 06:07
sorenbarrett said:
This Senryu took me by surprise well made and yes as long as you are on the green side of the grass you are doing just fine.
May 6th, 2025 06:07
Autistic Brother
NafisaSB said:
you have hit the nail on the head - the differently abled people are some of the most sensitive , beautiful and talented souls i have come across
May 6th, 2025 00:18
NafisaSB said:
you have hit the nail on the head - the differently abled people are some of the most sensitive , beautiful and talented souls i have come across
May 6th, 2025 00:18
$2.37 in my bank account
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Who invented money, anyway? 🤣 Like can we have Bill & Ted Save the World, where they finally travel back in time to steal the greedy dude who invented money? Whoa! 🤣 Not sure that would actually save it, or another greedy dude would replace him, though! So, we might have to, after all, hire Boba Fett or the Mandalorian or someone like that, to go collect the bounty! All jokes aside, though, I totally hear you bro! Oh...and, may the 4th and the force be with you too! 🌹👏
May 4th, 2025 18:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Who invented money, anyway? 🤣 Like can we have Bill & Ted Save the World, where they finally travel back in time to steal the greedy dude who invented money? Whoa! 🤣 Not sure that would actually save it, or another greedy dude would replace him, though! So, we might have to, after all, hire Boba Fett or the Mandalorian or someone like that, to go collect the bounty! All jokes aside, though, I totally hear you bro! Oh...and, may the 4th and the force be with you too! 🌹👏
May 4th, 2025 18:31
$2.37 in my bank account
sorenbarrett said:
So many illiterate with money, you would think that they would teach that alphabet in school. Good write Demar
May 4th, 2025 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
So many illiterate with money, you would think that they would teach that alphabet in school. Good write Demar
May 4th, 2025 05:05
all the birds are awake
Tristan Robert Lange said:
And that crow thanks you with a resounding caw, before it flies off to steel another rooster\'s meal! 🤣 At least seeds shouldn\'t attract a murder of crows! Well done, bro. Crow jokes aside, this haiku, paired with its title, is a powerful metaphor. A fave! 🌹👏
May 3rd, 2025 08:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
And that crow thanks you with a resounding caw, before it flies off to steel another rooster\'s meal! 🤣 At least seeds shouldn\'t attract a murder of crows! Well done, bro. Crow jokes aside, this haiku, paired with its title, is a powerful metaphor. A fave! 🌹👏
May 3rd, 2025 08:28
all the birds are awake
lewisgale mental hospital said:
your poems are very short. :) the birds are awake here too and noisy.
May 3rd, 2025 08:24
lewisgale mental hospital said:
your poems are very short. :) the birds are awake here too and noisy.
May 3rd, 2025 08:24
all the birds are awake
sorenbarrett said:
Another wonderful Haiku that holds more meaning than is instantly available to the reader. Deeper than it appears on the surface
May 3rd, 2025 06:43
sorenbarrett said:
Another wonderful Haiku that holds more meaning than is instantly available to the reader. Deeper than it appears on the surface
May 3rd, 2025 06:43
Autistic Brother
jarcher54 said:
He\'s lucky to have you... you can be my brother any time.
May 2nd, 2025 21:20
jarcher54 said:
He\'s lucky to have you... you can be my brother any time.
May 2nd, 2025 21:20
Autistic Brother
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen, brother. I have a special needs family member, myself, and I would do anything for them. A wondeful soul that has taught me much. This poem has all the right heart. An instant fave. 🌹👏
May 2nd, 2025 11:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen, brother. I have a special needs family member, myself, and I would do anything for them. A wondeful soul that has taught me much. This poem has all the right heart. An instant fave. 🌹👏
May 2nd, 2025 11:10
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