Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
why am I still angry?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, what a powerful senryu! I know the anger of watching cruelty flourish…only to have people condemn the reaction instead of confronting its cause. This one lands, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 6th, 2026 08:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, what a powerful senryu! I know the anger of watching cruelty flourish…only to have people condemn the reaction instead of confronting its cause. This one lands, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 6th, 2026 08:00
I see the reason in all your eyes
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, what a thoughtful senryu. I especially love the movement from seeing to feeling to touching…it suggests that understanding isn’t a destination but an ever-deepening experience. There’s a quiet wisdom packed into these few words. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 5th, 2026 22:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, what a thoughtful senryu. I especially love the movement from seeing to feeling to touching…it suggests that understanding isn’t a destination but an ever-deepening experience. There’s a quiet wisdom packed into these few words. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 5th, 2026 22:51
why am I still angry?
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with a mystery and a question unanswered. Well done Demar
August 5th, 2026 09:41
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with a mystery and a question unanswered. Well done Demar
August 5th, 2026 09:41
I see the reason in all your eyes
sorenbarrett said:
In touch with oneself indeed. Nicely written Demar
August 5th, 2026 03:41
sorenbarrett said:
In touch with oneself indeed. Nicely written Demar
August 5th, 2026 03:41
Why am I afraid?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a quietly devastating piece, Demar. The weariness feels palpable...and its unresolved honesty is precisely what makes it so deeply human. Powerful writing, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 4th, 2026 07:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a quietly devastating piece, Demar. The weariness feels palpable...and its unresolved honesty is precisely what makes it so deeply human. Powerful writing, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 4th, 2026 07:49
Why am I afraid?
sorenbarrett said:
A senryu of betrayal where all things are possible and nothing is known.
August 4th, 2026 02:51
sorenbarrett said:
A senryu of betrayal where all things are possible and nothing is known.
August 4th, 2026 02:51
And ah… we moan, groan, and sigh…
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this deeply moved me. Such quiet gratitude in the face of human limitation. Beautifully expressed, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 2nd, 2026 06:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this deeply moved me. Such quiet gratitude in the face of human limitation. Beautifully expressed, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 2nd, 2026 06:48
And ah… we moan, groan, and sigh…
sorenbarrett said:
Everyone has to be somewhere
August 1st, 2026 13:51
sorenbarrett said:
Everyone has to be somewhere
August 1st, 2026 13:51
$265.08 in my bank account
sorenbarrett said:
A good one my friend. Yes Those are the things that a constitution never intended and for which it had to be amended. How the amendment got through only God knows.
July 31st, 2026 09:28
sorenbarrett said:
A good one my friend. Yes Those are the things that a constitution never intended and for which it had to be amended. How the amendment got through only God knows.
July 31st, 2026 09:28
$265.08 in my bank account
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hilarious poem, Demar! That perfectly timed turn converts financial triumph into economic horror. As a pastor handling self-employment obligations, I know the peculiar cruelty of receiving money while already knowing a chunk belongs to the government. Short, sharp, and painfully relatable, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 31st, 2026 08:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hilarious poem, Demar! That perfectly timed turn converts financial triumph into economic horror. As a pastor handling self-employment obligations, I know the peculiar cruelty of receiving money while already knowing a chunk belongs to the government. Short, sharp, and painfully relatable, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 31st, 2026 08:30
love and tragedy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this really moved me. Each young person carries an irreplaceable world within them, making their absence immeasurable...yet hope quietly persists as life continues creating new possibilities. Profound and beautifully expressed, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 09:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this really moved me. Each young person carries an irreplaceable world within them, making their absence immeasurable...yet hope quietly persists as life continues creating new possibilities. Profound and beautifully expressed, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 09:59
tragedy and love
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed we dicotomize and in such clarity comes. Well done Demar
July 30th, 2026 03:15
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed we dicotomize and in such clarity comes. Well done Demar
July 30th, 2026 03:15
love and tragedy
sorenbarrett said:
Now Demar you have dove deeply with this one. All life is precious but at the same time although irreplaceable unstoppable. Nicely said
July 30th, 2026 03:13
sorenbarrett said:
Now Demar you have dove deeply with this one. All life is precious but at the same time although irreplaceable unstoppable. Nicely said
July 30th, 2026 03:13
Is a samurai still a samurai without their sword?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, you got me with this one! Clever, playful, and wonderfully self-aware. Excellent senryu, my friend. ⚔️👅😂🙏
July 29th, 2026 08:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, you got me with this one! Clever, playful, and wonderfully self-aware. Excellent senryu, my friend. ⚔️👅😂🙏
July 29th, 2026 08:16
Is a samurai still a samurai without their sword?
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed the tongue is a tool upon which we can cut ourselves as well as others. Nicely done Demar
July 29th, 2026 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed the tongue is a tool upon which we can cut ourselves as well as others. Nicely done Demar
July 29th, 2026 04:07
Lettuce prey
NafisaSB said:
Thankfully though a non veg have been spared that state. All the best to you
July 29th, 2026 03:57
NafisaSB said:
Thankfully though a non veg have been spared that state. All the best to you
July 29th, 2026 03:57
I swear I’m grateful! I swear I am please you have to believe me! I am grateful!!!
sorenbarrett said:
Demar I love when the title is longer than the poem the sarcasm is wonderful. Yes eggs don\'t fit a vegan. Well done
July 27th, 2026 10:11
sorenbarrett said:
Demar I love when the title is longer than the poem the sarcasm is wonderful. Yes eggs don\'t fit a vegan. Well done
July 27th, 2026 10:11
I swear I’m grateful! I swear I am please you have to believe me! I am grateful!!!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this is absolutely hilarious! 🤣 I have encountered this peculiar species before...eternally thankful until the universe delivers something slightly different from what they ordered. Apparently, humility and brunch make very uneasy companions! Loved this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 27th, 2026 09:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this is absolutely hilarious! 🤣 I have encountered this peculiar species before...eternally thankful until the universe delivers something slightly different from what they ordered. Apparently, humility and brunch make very uneasy companions! Loved this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 27th, 2026 09:16
You’re only as good as your tools
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, the King of Concise strikes again! 🤣 A few deceptively casual words...and suddenly the entire poetry community is undergoing an existential authenticity audit. Brilliant, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2026 19:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, the King of Concise strikes again! 🤣 A few deceptively casual words...and suddenly the entire poetry community is undergoing an existential authenticity audit. Brilliant, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2026 19:23
You’re only as good as your tools
sorenbarrett said:
Pen and paper originally when I started writing in High School now a computer and digital memory. Well done Demar
July 26th, 2026 18:20
sorenbarrett said:
Pen and paper originally when I started writing in High School now a computer and digital memory. Well done Demar
July 26th, 2026 18:20
and then the shower turns on again…
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen, Demar...even when everything else falls away, the divine presence remains. Beautifully said, my friend! 👂✨🖤🙏
July 25th, 2026 09:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen, Demar...even when everything else falls away, the divine presence remains. Beautifully said, my friend! 👂✨🖤🙏
July 25th, 2026 09:17
and then the shower turns on again…
sorenbarrett said:
At such times we all fall back to calling mommy. Well written Demar
July 25th, 2026 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
At such times we all fall back to calling mommy. Well written Demar
July 25th, 2026 04:26
I got a plane to catch in 3 hours… can we wrap this up?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this gave me a proper laugh! Clever, irreverent, and delivered with perfect comic timing. Wonderful write, my friend! 🤣🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 24th, 2026 09:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this gave me a proper laugh! Clever, irreverent, and delivered with perfect comic timing. Wonderful write, my friend! 🤣🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 24th, 2026 09:41
I got a plane to catch in 3 hours… can we wrap this up?
sorenbarrett said:
Time varies depending on whom is counting. Well written Demar
July 24th, 2026 06:40
sorenbarrett said:
Time varies depending on whom is counting. Well written Demar
July 24th, 2026 06:40
To be high or not to be high!? That is the question!
Mutley Ravishes said:
How to be high
Without \"getting\" high
Is that the question?!
July 23rd, 2026 21:27
Mutley Ravishes said:
How to be high
Without \"getting\" high
Is that the question?!
July 23rd, 2026 21:27
To be high or not to be high!? That is the question!
sorenbarrett said:
Enlightenment descends
July 23rd, 2026 09:44
sorenbarrett said:
Enlightenment descends
July 23rd, 2026 09:44
To be high or not to be high!? That is the question!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
4️⃣ One heck of a senryu, Demar! You took Shakespeare’s grand meditation on existence and dragged it through the dispensary, past the bar, and directly onto the couch. Philosophy may never recover…loved it, my friend! 😂🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 23rd, 2026 08:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
4️⃣ One heck of a senryu, Demar! You took Shakespeare’s grand meditation on existence and dragged it through the dispensary, past the bar, and directly onto the couch. Philosophy may never recover…loved it, my friend! 😂🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 23rd, 2026 08:35
Lettuce prey
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, you got me with this one! A meatless worshipper wanders into an existential crisis, forgets what comes next, and leaves the congregation waiting for the dressing. Absolutely hilarious, my friend! 🤣🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 23rd, 2026 08:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, you got me with this one! A meatless worshipper wanders into an existential crisis, forgets what comes next, and leaves the congregation waiting for the dressing. Absolutely hilarious, my friend! 🤣🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 23rd, 2026 08:10
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