Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
in the end… we return to God
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this really touched me, my friend. I love how it begins with everyday blessings and then gently turns our attention to the greatest gift of all. Beautiful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 29th, 2026 09:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this really touched me, my friend. I love how it begins with everyday blessings and then gently turns our attention to the greatest gift of all. Beautiful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 29th, 2026 09:34
Why do the rich not understand the poor?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this really hit me. \"Do you need 8 boats?\" is such a sharp closing because it leaves the question hanging long after the poem ends. Sometimes the simplest questions expose the deepest contradictions. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 29th, 2026 09:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this really hit me. \"Do you need 8 boats?\" is such a sharp closing because it leaves the question hanging long after the poem ends. Sometimes the simplest questions expose the deepest contradictions. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 29th, 2026 09:24
in the end… we return to God
sorenbarrett said:
Gratitude in a poem for convinces as well as to a higher power for feeling at all. Well said Demar
June 29th, 2026 06:39
sorenbarrett said:
Gratitude in a poem for convinces as well as to a higher power for feeling at all. Well said Demar
June 29th, 2026 06:39
Why do the rich not understand the poor?
sorenbarrett said:
Well said Demar it is not about need but about greed. It is not necessity but wants in a society where the few have the most and the most have the least.
June 29th, 2026 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
Well said Demar it is not about need but about greed. It is not necessity but wants in a society where the few have the most and the most have the least.
June 29th, 2026 04:19
every fool for themselves
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this hit me hard. Three lines, and they tell the story of how much the world has changed. There\'s a sadness here that many people will recognize immediately. Powerful little senryu, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 27th, 2026 10:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this hit me hard. Three lines, and they tell the story of how much the world has changed. There\'s a sadness here that many people will recognize immediately. Powerful little senryu, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 27th, 2026 10:52
every fool for themselves
sorenbarrett said:
Demar my friend the first thing that came to mind as I started reading this was that now you just get jumped. A piece that speaks too much truth about change in society that we that are older find hard to accept. Well done
June 27th, 2026 08:44
sorenbarrett said:
Demar my friend the first thing that came to mind as I started reading this was that now you just get jumped. A piece that speaks too much truth about change in society that we that are older find hard to accept. Well done
June 27th, 2026 08:44
resiliency of plants
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this is beautiful. So few words, yet they carry such quiet resilience. It lingered with me long after I read it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 26th, 2026 09:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this is beautiful. So few words, yet they carry such quiet resilience. It lingered with me long after I read it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 26th, 2026 09:33
resiliency of plants
soheil khodaparasti said:
I like how the tree becomes a symbol of resilience. It reminds us that loss does not have to mean the end; sometimes it is simply part of becoming stronger.
June 26th, 2026 08:09
soheil khodaparasti said:
I like how the tree becomes a symbol of resilience. It reminds us that loss does not have to mean the end; sometimes it is simply part of becoming stronger.
June 26th, 2026 08:09
resiliency of plants
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful haiku with a message that to me seems to be that despite damage in this world the essence of us continues to go on and grow. Well said
June 26th, 2026 07:40
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful haiku with a message that to me seems to be that despite damage in this world the essence of us continues to go on and grow. Well said
June 26th, 2026 07:40
Why do the poor oppress the poor?
soheil khodaparasti said:
A powerful frustration; simple and universal.
June 25th, 2026 11:20
soheil khodaparasti said:
A powerful frustration; simple and universal.
June 25th, 2026 11:20
Why do the poor oppress the poor?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this hit me hard...in so few words you ask a question that carries real weight. The frustration comes through clearly, and it lingers long after the last line. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 25th, 2026 10:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this hit me hard...in so few words you ask a question that carries real weight. The frustration comes through clearly, and it lingers long after the last line. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 25th, 2026 10:50
Why do the poor oppress the poor?
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how we argue over something when we both are saying the same thing. Good write Demar a fave
June 25th, 2026 07:25
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how we argue over something when we both are saying the same thing. Good write Demar a fave
June 25th, 2026 07:25
a suspicious mind conjures its own demons
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen. Me too, my friend. Me too! Demar, there is something powerful in the simplicity of this, my friend. Just a few words, yet they carry gratitude, humility, and devotion all at once. Wonderful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 24th, 2026 12:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen. Me too, my friend. Me too! Demar, there is something powerful in the simplicity of this, my friend. Just a few words, yet they carry gratitude, humility, and devotion all at once. Wonderful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 24th, 2026 12:49
a suspicious mind conjures its own demons
sorenbarrett said:
This piece has a bit of a sardonic feel for being grateful for being a slave is a bit odd. Nicely done Demar
June 24th, 2026 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
This piece has a bit of a sardonic feel for being grateful for being a slave is a bit odd. Nicely done Demar
June 24th, 2026 04:04
in sickness, health and boredom
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Does dark 🍫 count? 🤣
June 23rd, 2026 22:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Does dark 🍫 count? 🤣
June 23rd, 2026 22:07
in sickness, health and boredom
sorenbarrett said:
A difficult question in that it changes with my mood and the time of day as well whether main course of desert
June 22nd, 2026 20:23
sorenbarrett said:
A difficult question in that it changes with my mood and the time of day as well whether main course of desert
June 22nd, 2026 20:23
how I long for her…
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I think most of us know what it feels like when distance seems much larger than the miles involved. Those are the moments when time itself starts moving differently. I connected with this one, Demar. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 22nd, 2026 10:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I think most of us know what it feels like when distance seems much larger than the miles involved. Those are the moments when time itself starts moving differently. I connected with this one, Demar. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 22nd, 2026 10:13
how I long for her…
not_defined said:
To mourn is to remember, and to remember is to keep those gone in our presence forever. I wish you the best, mate.
June 21st, 2026 21:30
not_defined said:
To mourn is to remember, and to remember is to keep those gone in our presence forever. I wish you the best, mate.
June 21st, 2026 21:30
Losers vs. Winners
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, interchangeable indeed! Like asking who the winners were at the ForgetFreedom 250 MMA match at the orange\'s Albino House down on Pennsylvania Avenue! Oops...did that come out in my outside voice? 🤣 Love this poem, man! Love it! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 21st, 2026 08:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, interchangeable indeed! Like asking who the winners were at the ForgetFreedom 250 MMA match at the orange\'s Albino House down on Pennsylvania Avenue! Oops...did that come out in my outside voice? 🤣 Love this poem, man! Love it! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 21st, 2026 08:56
Losers vs. Winners
sorenbarrett said:
A senryu that lambasts the double agent where loyalty is at question. Nicely done Demar
June 20th, 2026 12:54
sorenbarrett said:
A senryu that lambasts the double agent where loyalty is at question. Nicely done Demar
June 20th, 2026 12:54
Please where’s your helmet!
Allie561 said:
I see what you’re saying here (pun intended). Seems like a simple fix if we can’t fix our perception to just fix our eyesight, but the truth is people will still believe what they want to believe. Good write Demar!
June 19th, 2026 13:58
Allie561 said:
I see what you’re saying here (pun intended). Seems like a simple fix if we can’t fix our perception to just fix our eyesight, but the truth is people will still believe what they want to believe. Good write Demar!
June 19th, 2026 13:58
Please where’s your helmet!
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read my friend but I heard that Lasik leads to future problems.
June 19th, 2026 09:41
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read my friend but I heard that Lasik leads to future problems.
June 19th, 2026 09:41
even a broken clock is right twice a day…
Allie561 said:
This is a powerful idea Demar. Almost like we’re too ashamed to speak of the things once done that they’re not acknowledged. It’s a good thing to bring light to, and welcome back
June 18th, 2026 20:41
Allie561 said:
This is a powerful idea Demar. Almost like we’re too ashamed to speak of the things once done that they’re not acknowledged. It’s a good thing to bring light to, and welcome back
June 18th, 2026 20:41
even a broken clock is right twice a day…
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great to have you back, my bro. As for this gem...true story! Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 17th, 2026 11:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great to have you back, my bro. As for this gem...true story! Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 17th, 2026 11:44
even a broken clock is right twice a day…
sorenbarrett said:
Good to see you back. A thought provoking read
June 16th, 2026 19:02
sorenbarrett said:
Good to see you back. A thought provoking read
June 16th, 2026 19:02
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