Comments received on poems by Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏
just another brick in the wall
Abdullah123 said:
Loved it. Just had someone give me a sideye cuz i laughed out loud. Bravo
April 13th, 2026 07:33
Abdullah123 said:
Loved it. Just had someone give me a sideye cuz i laughed out loud. Bravo
April 13th, 2026 07:33
just another brick in the wall
sorenbarrett said:
We all wait for our soup and I am still waiting it has been on back order for years. Good write Demar
April 12th, 2026 17:50
sorenbarrett said:
We all wait for our soup and I am still waiting it has been on back order for years. Good write Demar
April 12th, 2026 17:50
Perception is not reality…
Tristan Robert Lange said:
No need to apologize. Get it out constructively, like in a poem...so fair play here, mate! As for your poem...perception is not reality. 💯 Anyone who argues otherwise is, well, deluded. 🤷♂️ Fear, all too often, does lead to perceptions that shape people into that which they\'\'d otherwise never see themselves becoming. It doesn\'t have too, but sadly it does. Your poem, blunt as it is, rightly pushes back against such fear and loathing. Great fucking 😅 job Demar! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 11th, 2026 11:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
No need to apologize. Get it out constructively, like in a poem...so fair play here, mate! As for your poem...perception is not reality. 💯 Anyone who argues otherwise is, well, deluded. 🤷♂️ Fear, all too often, does lead to perceptions that shape people into that which they\'\'d otherwise never see themselves becoming. It doesn\'t have too, but sadly it does. Your poem, blunt as it is, rightly pushes back against such fear and loathing. Great fucking 😅 job Demar! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 11th, 2026 11:07
do you value life?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
LOL! Yes! Spot on, brother! An entitled world we live in, no? Fools indeed. Powerful write! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 11th, 2026 10:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
LOL! Yes! Spot on, brother! An entitled world we live in, no? Fools indeed. Powerful write! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 11th, 2026 10:26
Perception is not reality…
sorenbarrett said:
We are all afraid of change and what we don\'t recognize. A good write Demar
April 11th, 2026 05:28
sorenbarrett said:
We are all afraid of change and what we don\'t recognize. A good write Demar
April 11th, 2026 05:28
do you value life?
Allie561 said:
So true Demar, like gosh. I needed help at work the other day and a coworker was right next to me watching me struggle and sipping her coffee, the least that could’ve been done was ask if I need help. Nobody cares except about themselves, hopefully it can change.
April 10th, 2026 21:07
Allie561 said:
So true Demar, like gosh. I needed help at work the other day and a coworker was right next to me watching me struggle and sipping her coffee, the least that could’ve been done was ask if I need help. Nobody cares except about themselves, hopefully it can change.
April 10th, 2026 21:07
do you value life?
arqios said:
The birthing of self can be such a public spectacle and inescapably self-revelatory 🙏🏻🕊️
April 10th, 2026 16:13
arqios said:
The birthing of self can be such a public spectacle and inescapably self-revelatory 🙏🏻🕊️
April 10th, 2026 16:13
What is marriage like?
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal Demar and a great image presented. Well done
April 9th, 2026 11:30
sorenbarrett said:
Surreal Demar and a great image presented. Well done
April 9th, 2026 11:30
What is marriage like?
Teddy.15 said:
Marriage sucks, it\'s true
Every now and again
husband cleans the floor 😁
On your second line may I just show what I would have put?
You need foundations
as time goes on, houses fall
If damaged, rebuild
I love 5/7/5 and yours is a great one but it\'s always good to have ideas 💡
April 9th, 2026 11:01
Teddy.15 said:
Marriage sucks, it\'s true
Every now and again
husband cleans the floor 😁
On your second line may I just show what I would have put?
You need foundations
as time goes on, houses fall
If damaged, rebuild
I love 5/7/5 and yours is a great one but it\'s always good to have ideas 💡
April 9th, 2026 11:01
What is marriage like?
Allie561 said:
How true this is Demar. A house needs repairs as time goes on, new shingles, new pipes, etc. Gotta keep it going though.
April 9th, 2026 09:14
Allie561 said:
How true this is Demar. A house needs repairs as time goes on, new shingles, new pipes, etc. Gotta keep it going though.
April 9th, 2026 09:14
but damn it I feel like I should
Allie561 said:
Ah so I see you never did truly quit. It’s good to see another haiku from you. You cannot stop what’s part of your nature lol, hope to see more from you.
April 8th, 2026 21:03
Allie561 said:
Ah so I see you never did truly quit. It’s good to see another haiku from you. You cannot stop what’s part of your nature lol, hope to see more from you.
April 8th, 2026 21:03
I don’t want to write anymore
Allie561 said:
I think you still have some poetry in you Demar, I really hope you keep writing I enjoy your poems. A.I seems to be a problem with so many things. I think you still have plenty to give and your words share a much bigger impact than those of a robot.
April 8th, 2026 21:02
Allie561 said:
I think you still have some poetry in you Demar, I really hope you keep writing I enjoy your poems. A.I seems to be a problem with so many things. I think you still have plenty to give and your words share a much bigger impact than those of a robot.
April 8th, 2026 21:02
but damn it I feel like I should
sorenbarrett said:
Write from the heart Demar despite what style it is
April 8th, 2026 15:11
sorenbarrett said:
Write from the heart Demar despite what style it is
April 8th, 2026 15:11
I don’t want to write anymore
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a set of reflections that may seem returning waves but I would hate to see you go Demar keep up the fight and write
April 8th, 2026 15:11
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a set of reflections that may seem returning waves but I would hate to see you go Demar keep up the fight and write
April 8th, 2026 15:11
but damn it I feel like I should
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love your style, bro. I love your inquisitive nature and the community you build. Keep it up, my friend. My first poem was not a haiku, but I have grown to love the form because it is an exercise in word economy. Not an easy task to distill a deep, profound idea down to 17 syllables. Your style is your style...it\'s your voice...and no one can take that from you, unless you let them. So, write on, bro! Write on!
April 8th, 2026 08:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love your style, bro. I love your inquisitive nature and the community you build. Keep it up, my friend. My first poem was not a haiku, but I have grown to love the form because it is an exercise in word economy. Not an easy task to distill a deep, profound idea down to 17 syllables. Your style is your style...it\'s your voice...and no one can take that from you, unless you let them. So, write on, bro! Write on!
April 8th, 2026 08:10
I don’t want to write anymore
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, I hear you…that tension between wanting to pull back and still believing in something real underneath it all. Especially when you say “there is no me without you”…that tells me you haven’t lost it, even if it feels like you have.
I also saw this wasn’t your last piece…whew 😅
There’s more in you, and it shows. Not everything needs to land for everyone…that’s never been the point. Your presence here matters, my friend.
And yeah…kind of love the paradox here—the king of concise letting it all run a bit longer this time. It fits.
Strong piece, bro. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 8th, 2026 07:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, I hear you…that tension between wanting to pull back and still believing in something real underneath it all. Especially when you say “there is no me without you”…that tells me you haven’t lost it, even if it feels like you have.
I also saw this wasn’t your last piece…whew 😅
There’s more in you, and it shows. Not everything needs to land for everyone…that’s never been the point. Your presence here matters, my friend.
And yeah…kind of love the paradox here—the king of concise letting it all run a bit longer this time. It fits.
Strong piece, bro. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 8th, 2026 07:40
but damn it I feel like I should
Katie B. said:
I love haiku because they get to the point. Lovely work!
April 8th, 2026 04:16
Katie B. said:
I love haiku because they get to the point. Lovely work!
April 8th, 2026 04:16
what is ethics, morals, and truth?
Kora said:
Our truest selves, and the chips fall where they may.
April 8th, 2026 01:00
Kora said:
Our truest selves, and the chips fall where they may.
April 8th, 2026 01:00
Do you enjoy sex?
Kora said:
For me, sex is intimacy, and intimacy is love. Love comes in many forms, but I find that physically, I always gravitate back to the sensual. As with all things, there are two sides of the coin, and the duality of it all is what makes it so beautiful.
April 8th, 2026 00:56
Kora said:
For me, sex is intimacy, and intimacy is love. Love comes in many forms, but I find that physically, I always gravitate back to the sensual. As with all things, there are two sides of the coin, and the duality of it all is what makes it so beautiful.
April 8th, 2026 00:56
I don’t want to write anymore
Kora said:
Some things are worth repeating ♥️
Loved this one.
April 8th, 2026 00:50
Kora said:
Some things are worth repeating ♥️
Loved this one.
April 8th, 2026 00:50
Housed vs. Unhoused
Allie561 said:
There is yet another subdivision being built by my house. It used to be this beautiful orchard and they tore it up to put houses in, I’m really disappointed about it. We keep adding more and more homes and ruining the land. We’re not going to have much of it soon.
April 7th, 2026 08:33
Allie561 said:
There is yet another subdivision being built by my house. It used to be this beautiful orchard and they tore it up to put houses in, I’m really disappointed about it. We keep adding more and more homes and ruining the land. We’re not going to have much of it soon.
April 7th, 2026 08:33
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