Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
I apologize for my harshness, brashness, and foolishness…
sorenbarrett said:
That is about the only thing that we have control over. Nicely said
August 11th, 2026 20:52
sorenbarrett said:
That is about the only thing that we have control over. Nicely said
August 11th, 2026 20:52
Can we really achieve what we put our mind to?
Allie561 said:
Well I think there’s room for both, and as for the title; If you believe you can achieve. This one is a fav of mine Demar
August 10th, 2026 11:54
Allie561 said:
Well I think there’s room for both, and as for the title; If you believe you can achieve. This one is a fav of mine Demar
August 10th, 2026 11:54
Can we really achieve what we put our mind to?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hahaha, Demar...apparently gratitude didn’t get the memo that it was supposed to eliminate wanting! 😂 I think there’s something healthy in allowing both to coexist: thankful for what is while remaining honest about what we still desire. Nicely done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 10th, 2026 10:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hahaha, Demar...apparently gratitude didn’t get the memo that it was supposed to eliminate wanting! 😂 I think there’s something healthy in allowing both to coexist: thankful for what is while remaining honest about what we still desire. Nicely done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 10th, 2026 10:54
Can we really achieve what we put our mind to?
sorenbarrett said:
Ok Demar nothing wrong with a desire.
August 10th, 2026 09:39
sorenbarrett said:
Ok Demar nothing wrong with a desire.
August 10th, 2026 09:39
sex, sex, sex!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hahaha, Demar! 😂 Nothing like deploying the oldest attention-grabber in the book and then immediately discovering you’ve lost control of the situation. That ending got me, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
August 9th, 2026 05:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hahaha, Demar! 😂 Nothing like deploying the oldest attention-grabber in the book and then immediately discovering you’ve lost control of the situation. That ending got me, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
August 9th, 2026 05:44
And if I ever leave America
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, what a powerful little declaration. There’s devotion here, but also responsibility…the sense that loving a place means staying engaged with it rather than simply walking away. This really connected with me, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 8th, 2026 20:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, what a powerful little declaration. There’s devotion here, but also responsibility…the sense that loving a place means staying engaged with it rather than simply walking away. This really connected with me, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 8th, 2026 20:35
And if I ever leave America
sorenbarrett said:
A noble thought expressed here. Well done
August 8th, 2026 15:19
sorenbarrett said:
A noble thought expressed here. Well done
August 8th, 2026 15:19
And if I stay alive tomorrow
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this really moved me. So little said, yet it carries gratitude, fragility, and the determination to keep going. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
August 8th, 2026 08:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this really moved me. So little said, yet it carries gratitude, fragility, and the determination to keep going. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
August 8th, 2026 08:38
And if I die today
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Demar...so much life packed into so few words. Messy, contradictory, unresolved...and somehow love still gets the final say. Beautiful, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 7th, 2026 08:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Demar...so much life packed into so few words. Messy, contradictory, unresolved...and somehow love still gets the final say. Beautiful, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 7th, 2026 08:30
And if I die today
sorenbarrett said:
It leaves a soft feeling and is warm Demar
August 7th, 2026 03:47
sorenbarrett said:
It leaves a soft feeling and is warm Demar
August 7th, 2026 03:47
why am I still angry?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, what a powerful senryu! I know the anger of watching cruelty flourish…only to have people condemn the reaction instead of confronting its cause. This one lands, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 6th, 2026 08:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, what a powerful senryu! I know the anger of watching cruelty flourish…only to have people condemn the reaction instead of confronting its cause. This one lands, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 6th, 2026 08:00
I see the reason in all your eyes
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, what a thoughtful senryu. I especially love the movement from seeing to feeling to touching…it suggests that understanding isn’t a destination but an ever-deepening experience. There’s a quiet wisdom packed into these few words. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 5th, 2026 22:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, what a thoughtful senryu. I especially love the movement from seeing to feeling to touching…it suggests that understanding isn’t a destination but an ever-deepening experience. There’s a quiet wisdom packed into these few words. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 5th, 2026 22:51
why am I still angry?
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with a mystery and a question unanswered. Well done Demar
August 5th, 2026 09:41
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with a mystery and a question unanswered. Well done Demar
August 5th, 2026 09:41
I see the reason in all your eyes
sorenbarrett said:
In touch with oneself indeed. Nicely written Demar
August 5th, 2026 03:41
sorenbarrett said:
In touch with oneself indeed. Nicely written Demar
August 5th, 2026 03:41
Why am I afraid?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a quietly devastating piece, Demar. The weariness feels palpable...and its unresolved honesty is precisely what makes it so deeply human. Powerful writing, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 4th, 2026 07:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a quietly devastating piece, Demar. The weariness feels palpable...and its unresolved honesty is precisely what makes it so deeply human. Powerful writing, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 4th, 2026 07:49
Why am I afraid?
sorenbarrett said:
A senryu of betrayal where all things are possible and nothing is known.
August 4th, 2026 02:51
sorenbarrett said:
A senryu of betrayal where all things are possible and nothing is known.
August 4th, 2026 02:51
And ah… we moan, groan, and sigh…
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this deeply moved me. Such quiet gratitude in the face of human limitation. Beautifully expressed, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 2nd, 2026 06:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this deeply moved me. Such quiet gratitude in the face of human limitation. Beautifully expressed, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 2nd, 2026 06:48
And ah… we moan, groan, and sigh…
sorenbarrett said:
Everyone has to be somewhere
August 1st, 2026 13:51
sorenbarrett said:
Everyone has to be somewhere
August 1st, 2026 13:51
$265.08 in my bank account
sorenbarrett said:
A good one my friend. Yes Those are the things that a constitution never intended and for which it had to be amended. How the amendment got through only God knows.
July 31st, 2026 09:28
sorenbarrett said:
A good one my friend. Yes Those are the things that a constitution never intended and for which it had to be amended. How the amendment got through only God knows.
July 31st, 2026 09:28
$265.08 in my bank account
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hilarious poem, Demar! That perfectly timed turn converts financial triumph into economic horror. As a pastor handling self-employment obligations, I know the peculiar cruelty of receiving money while already knowing a chunk belongs to the government. Short, sharp, and painfully relatable, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 31st, 2026 08:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hilarious poem, Demar! That perfectly timed turn converts financial triumph into economic horror. As a pastor handling self-employment obligations, I know the peculiar cruelty of receiving money while already knowing a chunk belongs to the government. Short, sharp, and painfully relatable, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 31st, 2026 08:30
love and tragedy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this really moved me. Each young person carries an irreplaceable world within them, making their absence immeasurable...yet hope quietly persists as life continues creating new possibilities. Profound and beautifully expressed, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 09:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this really moved me. Each young person carries an irreplaceable world within them, making their absence immeasurable...yet hope quietly persists as life continues creating new possibilities. Profound and beautifully expressed, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 09:59
tragedy and love
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed we dicotomize and in such clarity comes. Well done Demar
July 30th, 2026 03:15
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed we dicotomize and in such clarity comes. Well done Demar
July 30th, 2026 03:15
love and tragedy
sorenbarrett said:
Now Demar you have dove deeply with this one. All life is precious but at the same time although irreplaceable unstoppable. Nicely said
July 30th, 2026 03:13
sorenbarrett said:
Now Demar you have dove deeply with this one. All life is precious but at the same time although irreplaceable unstoppable. Nicely said
July 30th, 2026 03:13
Is a samurai still a samurai without their sword?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, you got me with this one! Clever, playful, and wonderfully self-aware. Excellent senryu, my friend. ⚔️👅😂🙏
July 29th, 2026 08:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, you got me with this one! Clever, playful, and wonderfully self-aware. Excellent senryu, my friend. ⚔️👅😂🙏
July 29th, 2026 08:16
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