Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
Lettuce prey
GoddessEYES said:
That bug in the lettuce gon have you looking like a snack 😋 you gon lose weight 😅
July 22nd, 2026 11:08
GoddessEYES said:
That bug in the lettuce gon have you looking like a snack 😋 you gon lose weight 😅
July 22nd, 2026 11:08
Lettuce prey
sorenbarrett said:
It is the unfinished part to this that gives it its charm. No meat is quite vegan but where is the protein coming from.
July 22nd, 2026 09:59
sorenbarrett said:
It is the unfinished part to this that gives it its charm. No meat is quite vegan but where is the protein coming from.
July 22nd, 2026 09:59
It’s hard to please everyone
Tristan Robert Lange said:
One heck of a senryu, Demar! The congregation may forgive poor theology, a dreadful sermon, and three extra verses of the closing hymn…but one badly timed blast, and suddenly the minister’s credibility is gone with the wind! I can hear them now, “frankly, Pastor, we don’t give a damn” as he tries to explain away the loud rumble.🤣🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 21st, 2026 00:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
One heck of a senryu, Demar! The congregation may forgive poor theology, a dreadful sermon, and three extra verses of the closing hymn…but one badly timed blast, and suddenly the minister’s credibility is gone with the wind! I can hear them now, “frankly, Pastor, we don’t give a damn” as he tries to explain away the loud rumble.🤣🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 21st, 2026 00:29
It’s hard to please everyone
sorenbarrett said:
I thought it was going to be (and people do pray). Good one my friend
July 20th, 2026 16:27
sorenbarrett said:
I thought it was going to be (and people do pray). Good one my friend
July 20th, 2026 16:27
Do you play video games?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this, Demar! Life is better when we follow what genuinely brings us alive. 🏀🖤🙏🌹
July 20th, 2026 07:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this, Demar! Life is better when we follow what genuinely brings us alive. 🏀🖤🙏🌹
July 20th, 2026 07:53
Do you play video games?
Allie561 said:
I’d also rather do a sport! Lacrosse is what I would choose.
July 19th, 2026 11:54
Allie561 said:
I’d also rather do a sport! Lacrosse is what I would choose.
July 19th, 2026 11:54
Do you play video games?
sorenbarrett said:
May you one day be
A great basketball player
Like Abdul Jabbar
July 19th, 2026 06:47
sorenbarrett said:
May you one day be
A great basketball player
Like Abdul Jabbar
July 19th, 2026 06:47
And do you really think I’m a fool?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this carries real defiance! A change of ground does not require surrendering the very thing that enables someone to cultivate it. Sharp piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 18th, 2026 09:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this carries real defiance! A change of ground does not require surrendering the very thing that enables someone to cultivate it. Sharp piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 18th, 2026 09:41
And do you really think I’m a fool?
sorenbarrett said:
You mean renting the plough or the house and land? Good one Demar
July 18th, 2026 09:38
sorenbarrett said:
You mean renting the plough or the house and land? Good one Demar
July 18th, 2026 09:38
a good deal is a good deal
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this carries such simple humility...receive the blessing, remain grateful, and leave judgment alone. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 18th, 2026 09:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this carries such simple humility...receive the blessing, remain grateful, and leave judgment alone. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 18th, 2026 09:19
a good deal is a good deal
sorenbarrett said:
Well said Demar no one should judge
July 17th, 2026 17:36
sorenbarrett said:
Well said Demar no one should judge
July 17th, 2026 17:36
The backbiting has to stop
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Demar, this is short but vicious in the best possible way! The wordplay cuts straight into the cowardice behind attacking someone from the shadows. Absolutely nailed it, my friend. A total fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 17th, 2026 08:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Demar, this is short but vicious in the best possible way! The wordplay cuts straight into the cowardice behind attacking someone from the shadows. Absolutely nailed it, my friend. A total fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 17th, 2026 08:10
The backbiting has to stop
sorenbarrett said:
Guilt or shame one or the other Demar
July 16th, 2026 10:54
sorenbarrett said:
Guilt or shame one or the other Demar
July 16th, 2026 10:54
all our lives are complicated… so don’t complicate mine or yours
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, haha…I enjoyed this. There’s an easygoing self-awareness here that doesn’t try to be anything it isn’t. Short, witty, and fun, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 15th, 2026 22:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, haha…I enjoyed this. There’s an easygoing self-awareness here that doesn’t try to be anything it isn’t. Short, witty, and fun, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 15th, 2026 22:38
Subsidies vs. Tax Breaks vs. Welfare
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this has some bite. In just a few lines, you turn the spotlight away from the people and back toward those setting the example. Short, sharp, and thought-provoking, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 15th, 2026 20:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this has some bite. In just a few lines, you turn the spotlight away from the people and back toward those setting the example. Short, sharp, and thought-provoking, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 15th, 2026 20:42
all our lives are complicated… so don’t complicate mine or yours
Allie561 said:
I feel this one Demar!
July 15th, 2026 13:20
Allie561 said:
I feel this one Demar!
July 15th, 2026 13:20
all our lives are complicated… so don’t complicate mine or yours
Friendship said:
I hear you
July 15th, 2026 13:15
Friendship said:
I hear you
July 15th, 2026 13:15
all our lives are complicated… so don’t complicate mine or yours
sorenbarrett said:
I\'ll take one too preferably a lager or pilsen, not too strong on hops please and not too bitter. Good write Demar
July 15th, 2026 08:08
sorenbarrett said:
I\'ll take one too preferably a lager or pilsen, not too strong on hops please and not too bitter. Good write Demar
July 15th, 2026 08:08
Subsidies vs. Tax Breaks vs. Welfare
Allie561 said:
For better or for worse, I still think it’s bad. I’d rather go do my own thing but some people don’t know how to form their own opinions. Great write Demar
July 14th, 2026 22:39
Allie561 said:
For better or for worse, I still think it’s bad. I’d rather go do my own thing but some people don’t know how to form their own opinions. Great write Demar
July 14th, 2026 22:39
why am I smoking and drinking?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I used to think the same thing...then DUI. Now, cannabis and soil! 😗💨 I was on the wrong meds, it turned out! 🤷♀️😅 My faux pas aside...Demar, this is beautifully restrained. You trust a handful of words to carry a much larger truth, and they do. That closing thought stays with me because it\'s honest without trying to resolve the hurt. I\'ve been right there, my friend. Wonderful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 14th, 2026 19:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I used to think the same thing...then DUI. Now, cannabis and soil! 😗💨 I was on the wrong meds, it turned out! 🤷♀️😅 My faux pas aside...Demar, this is beautifully restrained. You trust a handful of words to carry a much larger truth, and they do. That closing thought stays with me because it\'s honest without trying to resolve the hurt. I\'ve been right there, my friend. Wonderful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 14th, 2026 19:06
Subsidies vs. Tax Breaks vs. Welfare
sorenbarrett said:
Sad but true a community of sheep. Nicely said Demar
July 14th, 2026 05:52
sorenbarrett said:
Sad but true a community of sheep. Nicely said Demar
July 14th, 2026 05:52
why am I smoking and drinking?
sorenbarrett said:
Love is a razor and as for wisdom what you don\'t know can\'t hurt you. Well written Demar
July 14th, 2026 03:13
sorenbarrett said:
Love is a razor and as for wisdom what you don\'t know can\'t hurt you. Well written Demar
July 14th, 2026 03:13
sometimes I hate the fakeness
rhmn_7 said:
Few words with an immense message Tristan!
July 12th, 2026 07:25
rhmn_7 said:
Few words with an immense message Tristan!
July 12th, 2026 07:25
sometimes I hate the fakeness
Allie561 said:
I feel this Demar, always seems there’s an excuse.
July 11th, 2026 14:09
Allie561 said:
I feel this Demar, always seems there’s an excuse.
July 11th, 2026 14:09
sometimes I hate the fakeness
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this one lands with a quiet sting...there\'s frustration here, but also vulnerability. You said a lot with very few words. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 11th, 2026 08:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this one lands with a quiet sting...there\'s frustration here, but also vulnerability. You said a lot with very few words. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 11th, 2026 08:05
Got love?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, I like how much you leave unsaid here...it\'s brief, but it captures that familiar progression of attraction in just a few lines. The King of Concise strikes again! Nicely done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 11th, 2026 07:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, I like how much you leave unsaid here...it\'s brief, but it captures that familiar progression of attraction in just a few lines. The King of Concise strikes again! Nicely done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 11th, 2026 07:40
sometimes I hate the fakeness
Mutley Ravishes said:
Not too f`d up to play the willful ignorance/avoidance game, right Demar?! Great write.
July 11th, 2026 07:34
Mutley Ravishes said:
Not too f`d up to play the willful ignorance/avoidance game, right Demar?! Great write.
July 11th, 2026 07:34
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