Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
my taxes came!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
In that order. Though for some, it\'s death, money, taxes. Aka, you die broke, then it costs money to cremate you, which comes out of tax-paying dollars. 🤣 Great poem, my friend! Short and true. 🌹👏
May 9th, 2025 09:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
In that order. Though for some, it\'s death, money, taxes. Aka, you die broke, then it costs money to cremate you, which comes out of tax-paying dollars. 🤣 Great poem, my friend! Short and true. 🌹👏
May 9th, 2025 09:28
my taxes came!
Poetic Licence said:
Just about sums life up to a T, enjoyed the read
May 9th, 2025 06:24
Poetic Licence said:
Just about sums life up to a T, enjoyed the read
May 9th, 2025 06:24
my taxes came!
sorenbarrett said:
A read too close to the truth to be funny and too sad to be happy. Very nice
May 9th, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
A read too close to the truth to be funny and too sad to be happy. Very nice
May 9th, 2025 04:33
God, Universe and Nature
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fuck yes! Bro, never thought of GUN through the lens of that acronym. This gets a huge amen from me! Damn, I have a G.U.N too! Thanks for that! Powerful. A must fave! 🌹👏
May 7th, 2025 10:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fuck yes! Bro, never thought of GUN through the lens of that acronym. This gets a huge amen from me! Damn, I have a G.U.N too! Thanks for that! Powerful. A must fave! 🌹👏
May 7th, 2025 10:50
God, Universe and Nature
sorenbarrett said:
Clever anachronym in another short write. Nicely done
May 7th, 2025 03:44
sorenbarrett said:
Clever anachronym in another short write. Nicely done
May 7th, 2025 03:44
God, Universe and Nature
Poetic Licence said:
That is an interesting take, and happy birthday
May 7th, 2025 02:57
Poetic Licence said:
That is an interesting take, and happy birthday
May 7th, 2025 02:57
Tomorrow is my birthday
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Can\'t answer the last question for myself, let alone anyone else, but here\'s to hoping and trying...That said, your poems are doing right! Happy Birthday, my friend! 🎂🎉🌹👏
May 6th, 2025 20:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Can\'t answer the last question for myself, let alone anyone else, but here\'s to hoping and trying...That said, your poems are doing right! Happy Birthday, my friend! 🎂🎉🌹👏
May 6th, 2025 20:33
Tomorrow is my birthday
sorenbarrett said:
This Senryu took me by surprise well made and yes as long as you are on the green side of the grass you are doing just fine.
May 6th, 2025 06:07
sorenbarrett said:
This Senryu took me by surprise well made and yes as long as you are on the green side of the grass you are doing just fine.
May 6th, 2025 06:07
Autistic Brother
NafisaSB said:
you have hit the nail on the head - the differently abled people are some of the most sensitive , beautiful and talented souls i have come across
May 6th, 2025 00:18
NafisaSB said:
you have hit the nail on the head - the differently abled people are some of the most sensitive , beautiful and talented souls i have come across
May 6th, 2025 00:18
$2.37 in my bank account
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Who invented money, anyway? 🤣 Like can we have Bill & Ted Save the World, where they finally travel back in time to steal the greedy dude who invented money? Whoa! 🤣 Not sure that would actually save it, or another greedy dude would replace him, though! So, we might have to, after all, hire Boba Fett or the Mandalorian or someone like that, to go collect the bounty! All jokes aside, though, I totally hear you bro! Oh...and, may the 4th and the force be with you too! 🌹👏
May 4th, 2025 18:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Who invented money, anyway? 🤣 Like can we have Bill & Ted Save the World, where they finally travel back in time to steal the greedy dude who invented money? Whoa! 🤣 Not sure that would actually save it, or another greedy dude would replace him, though! So, we might have to, after all, hire Boba Fett or the Mandalorian or someone like that, to go collect the bounty! All jokes aside, though, I totally hear you bro! Oh...and, may the 4th and the force be with you too! 🌹👏
May 4th, 2025 18:31
$2.37 in my bank account
sorenbarrett said:
So many illiterate with money, you would think that they would teach that alphabet in school. Good write Demar
May 4th, 2025 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
So many illiterate with money, you would think that they would teach that alphabet in school. Good write Demar
May 4th, 2025 05:05
all the birds are awake
Tristan Robert Lange said:
And that crow thanks you with a resounding caw, before it flies off to steel another rooster\'s meal! 🤣 At least seeds shouldn\'t attract a murder of crows! Well done, bro. Crow jokes aside, this haiku, paired with its title, is a powerful metaphor. A fave! 🌹👏
May 3rd, 2025 08:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
And that crow thanks you with a resounding caw, before it flies off to steel another rooster\'s meal! 🤣 At least seeds shouldn\'t attract a murder of crows! Well done, bro. Crow jokes aside, this haiku, paired with its title, is a powerful metaphor. A fave! 🌹👏
May 3rd, 2025 08:28
all the birds are awake
lewisgale mental hospital said:
your poems are very short. :) the birds are awake here too and noisy.
May 3rd, 2025 08:24
lewisgale mental hospital said:
your poems are very short. :) the birds are awake here too and noisy.
May 3rd, 2025 08:24
all the birds are awake
sorenbarrett said:
Another wonderful Haiku that holds more meaning than is instantly available to the reader. Deeper than it appears on the surface
May 3rd, 2025 06:43
sorenbarrett said:
Another wonderful Haiku that holds more meaning than is instantly available to the reader. Deeper than it appears on the surface
May 3rd, 2025 06:43
Autistic Brother
jarcher54 said:
He\'s lucky to have you... you can be my brother any time.
May 2nd, 2025 21:20
jarcher54 said:
He\'s lucky to have you... you can be my brother any time.
May 2nd, 2025 21:20
Autistic Brother
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen, brother. I have a special needs family member, myself, and I would do anything for them. A wondeful soul that has taught me much. This poem has all the right heart. An instant fave. 🌹👏
May 2nd, 2025 11:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen, brother. I have a special needs family member, myself, and I would do anything for them. A wondeful soul that has taught me much. This poem has all the right heart. An instant fave. 🌹👏
May 2nd, 2025 11:10
Autistic Brother
sorenbarrett said:
A most loving poem. Most autistic people I have known are just such, sensitive, at times funny and although they don\'t show it as much loving indeed.
May 2nd, 2025 09:54
sorenbarrett said:
A most loving poem. Most autistic people I have known are just such, sensitive, at times funny and although they don\'t show it as much loving indeed.
May 2nd, 2025 09:54
I like to eat my cake and have it too
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
Gentle and thoughtful. I like how it shows the struggle between wanting to soar and stay grounded at the same time.
May 1st, 2025 12:07
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
Gentle and thoughtful. I like how it shows the struggle between wanting to soar and stay grounded at the same time.
May 1st, 2025 12:07
I like to eat my cake and have it too
sorenbarrett said:
A great question and the answer only with technology. Nicely written
May 1st, 2025 10:42
sorenbarrett said:
A great question and the answer only with technology. Nicely written
May 1st, 2025 10:42
Information Hoarders
Tristan Robert Lange said:
*Hides data down pants (is that a thing anymore?)* Who me? 🤷♂️ I don\'t have nothin\'! I swear! 🤣 All jokes aside, love it, my friend. An awesome poem that makes it\'s point well and with few words. Well done! 🌹👏
April 28th, 2025 15:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
*Hides data down pants (is that a thing anymore?)* Who me? 🤷♂️ I don\'t have nothin\'! I swear! 🤣 All jokes aside, love it, my friend. An awesome poem that makes it\'s point well and with few words. Well done! 🌹👏
April 28th, 2025 15:02
Information Hoarders
vicecream said:
For what you ask? You’ll have to pay to find out
April 28th, 2025 12:12
vicecream said:
For what you ask? You’ll have to pay to find out
April 28th, 2025 12:12
Information Hoarders
sorenbarrett said:
Trivia hoarders like squirls in the trees burring bits and pieces that they latter forget where they put. A fun and fine write Demar
April 28th, 2025 09:22
sorenbarrett said:
Trivia hoarders like squirls in the trees burring bits and pieces that they latter forget where they put. A fun and fine write Demar
April 28th, 2025 09:22
America should annex Canada
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The title brings one in...and let\'s them stew on the reality of what is said in the title. Well done, my friend! You are brilliant at this very thing and I really admire it. 🌹👏
April 27th, 2025 07:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The title brings one in...and let\'s them stew on the reality of what is said in the title. Well done, my friend! You are brilliant at this very thing and I really admire it. 🌹👏
April 27th, 2025 07:49
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