Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
Is a samurai still a samurai without their sword?
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed the tongue is a tool upon which we can cut ourselves as well as others. Nicely done Demar
July 29th, 2026 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed the tongue is a tool upon which we can cut ourselves as well as others. Nicely done Demar
July 29th, 2026 04:07
Lettuce prey
NafisaSB said:
Thankfully though a non veg have been spared that state. All the best to you
July 29th, 2026 03:57
NafisaSB said:
Thankfully though a non veg have been spared that state. All the best to you
July 29th, 2026 03:57
I swear I’m grateful! I swear I am please you have to believe me! I am grateful!!!
sorenbarrett said:
Demar I love when the title is longer than the poem the sarcasm is wonderful. Yes eggs don\'t fit a vegan. Well done
July 27th, 2026 10:11
sorenbarrett said:
Demar I love when the title is longer than the poem the sarcasm is wonderful. Yes eggs don\'t fit a vegan. Well done
July 27th, 2026 10:11
I swear I’m grateful! I swear I am please you have to believe me! I am grateful!!!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this is absolutely hilarious! 🤣 I have encountered this peculiar species before...eternally thankful until the universe delivers something slightly different from what they ordered. Apparently, humility and brunch make very uneasy companions! Loved this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 27th, 2026 09:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this is absolutely hilarious! 🤣 I have encountered this peculiar species before...eternally thankful until the universe delivers something slightly different from what they ordered. Apparently, humility and brunch make very uneasy companions! Loved this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 27th, 2026 09:16
You’re only as good as your tools
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, the King of Concise strikes again! 🤣 A few deceptively casual words...and suddenly the entire poetry community is undergoing an existential authenticity audit. Brilliant, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2026 19:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, the King of Concise strikes again! 🤣 A few deceptively casual words...and suddenly the entire poetry community is undergoing an existential authenticity audit. Brilliant, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2026 19:23
You’re only as good as your tools
sorenbarrett said:
Pen and paper originally when I started writing in High School now a computer and digital memory. Well done Demar
July 26th, 2026 18:20
sorenbarrett said:
Pen and paper originally when I started writing in High School now a computer and digital memory. Well done Demar
July 26th, 2026 18:20
and then the shower turns on again…
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen, Demar...even when everything else falls away, the divine presence remains. Beautifully said, my friend! 👂✨🖤🙏
July 25th, 2026 09:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen, Demar...even when everything else falls away, the divine presence remains. Beautifully said, my friend! 👂✨🖤🙏
July 25th, 2026 09:17
and then the shower turns on again…
sorenbarrett said:
At such times we all fall back to calling mommy. Well written Demar
July 25th, 2026 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
At such times we all fall back to calling mommy. Well written Demar
July 25th, 2026 04:26
I got a plane to catch in 3 hours… can we wrap this up?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this gave me a proper laugh! Clever, irreverent, and delivered with perfect comic timing. Wonderful write, my friend! 🤣🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 24th, 2026 09:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this gave me a proper laugh! Clever, irreverent, and delivered with perfect comic timing. Wonderful write, my friend! 🤣🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 24th, 2026 09:41
I got a plane to catch in 3 hours… can we wrap this up?
sorenbarrett said:
Time varies depending on whom is counting. Well written Demar
July 24th, 2026 06:40
sorenbarrett said:
Time varies depending on whom is counting. Well written Demar
July 24th, 2026 06:40
To be high or not to be high!? That is the question!
Mutley Ravishes said:
How to be high
Without \"getting\" high
Is that the question?!
July 23rd, 2026 21:27
Mutley Ravishes said:
How to be high
Without \"getting\" high
Is that the question?!
July 23rd, 2026 21:27
To be high or not to be high!? That is the question!
sorenbarrett said:
Enlightenment descends
July 23rd, 2026 09:44
sorenbarrett said:
Enlightenment descends
July 23rd, 2026 09:44
To be high or not to be high!? That is the question!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
4️⃣ One heck of a senryu, Demar! You took Shakespeare’s grand meditation on existence and dragged it through the dispensary, past the bar, and directly onto the couch. Philosophy may never recover…loved it, my friend! 😂🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 23rd, 2026 08:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
4️⃣ One heck of a senryu, Demar! You took Shakespeare’s grand meditation on existence and dragged it through the dispensary, past the bar, and directly onto the couch. Philosophy may never recover…loved it, my friend! 😂🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 23rd, 2026 08:35
Lettuce prey
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, you got me with this one! A meatless worshipper wanders into an existential crisis, forgets what comes next, and leaves the congregation waiting for the dressing. Absolutely hilarious, my friend! 🤣🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 23rd, 2026 08:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, you got me with this one! A meatless worshipper wanders into an existential crisis, forgets what comes next, and leaves the congregation waiting for the dressing. Absolutely hilarious, my friend! 🤣🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 23rd, 2026 08:10
Lettuce prey
GoddessEYES said:
That bug in the lettuce gon have you looking like a snack 😋 you gon lose weight 😅
July 22nd, 2026 11:08
GoddessEYES said:
That bug in the lettuce gon have you looking like a snack 😋 you gon lose weight 😅
July 22nd, 2026 11:08
Lettuce prey
sorenbarrett said:
It is the unfinished part to this that gives it its charm. No meat is quite vegan but where is the protein coming from.
July 22nd, 2026 09:59
sorenbarrett said:
It is the unfinished part to this that gives it its charm. No meat is quite vegan but where is the protein coming from.
July 22nd, 2026 09:59
It’s hard to please everyone
Tristan Robert Lange said:
One heck of a senryu, Demar! The congregation may forgive poor theology, a dreadful sermon, and three extra verses of the closing hymn…but one badly timed blast, and suddenly the minister’s credibility is gone with the wind! I can hear them now, “frankly, Pastor, we don’t give a damn” as he tries to explain away the loud rumble.🤣🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 21st, 2026 00:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
One heck of a senryu, Demar! The congregation may forgive poor theology, a dreadful sermon, and three extra verses of the closing hymn…but one badly timed blast, and suddenly the minister’s credibility is gone with the wind! I can hear them now, “frankly, Pastor, we don’t give a damn” as he tries to explain away the loud rumble.🤣🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 21st, 2026 00:29
It’s hard to please everyone
sorenbarrett said:
I thought it was going to be (and people do pray). Good one my friend
July 20th, 2026 16:27
sorenbarrett said:
I thought it was going to be (and people do pray). Good one my friend
July 20th, 2026 16:27
Do you play video games?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this, Demar! Life is better when we follow what genuinely brings us alive. 🏀🖤🙏🌹
July 20th, 2026 07:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this, Demar! Life is better when we follow what genuinely brings us alive. 🏀🖤🙏🌹
July 20th, 2026 07:53
Do you play video games?
Allie561 said:
I’d also rather do a sport! Lacrosse is what I would choose.
July 19th, 2026 11:54
Allie561 said:
I’d also rather do a sport! Lacrosse is what I would choose.
July 19th, 2026 11:54
Do you play video games?
sorenbarrett said:
May you one day be
A great basketball player
Like Abdul Jabbar
July 19th, 2026 06:47
sorenbarrett said:
May you one day be
A great basketball player
Like Abdul Jabbar
July 19th, 2026 06:47
And do you really think I’m a fool?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this carries real defiance! A change of ground does not require surrendering the very thing that enables someone to cultivate it. Sharp piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 18th, 2026 09:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this carries real defiance! A change of ground does not require surrendering the very thing that enables someone to cultivate it. Sharp piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 18th, 2026 09:41
And do you really think I’m a fool?
sorenbarrett said:
You mean renting the plough or the house and land? Good one Demar
July 18th, 2026 09:38
sorenbarrett said:
You mean renting the plough or the house and land? Good one Demar
July 18th, 2026 09:38
a good deal is a good deal
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this carries such simple humility...receive the blessing, remain grateful, and leave judgment alone. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 18th, 2026 09:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this carries such simple humility...receive the blessing, remain grateful, and leave judgment alone. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 18th, 2026 09:19
a good deal is a good deal
sorenbarrett said:
Well said Demar no one should judge
July 17th, 2026 17:36
sorenbarrett said:
Well said Demar no one should judge
July 17th, 2026 17:36
The backbiting has to stop
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Demar, this is short but vicious in the best possible way! The wordplay cuts straight into the cowardice behind attacking someone from the shadows. Absolutely nailed it, my friend. A total fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 17th, 2026 08:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Demar, this is short but vicious in the best possible way! The wordplay cuts straight into the cowardice behind attacking someone from the shadows. Absolutely nailed it, my friend. A total fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 17th, 2026 08:10
The backbiting has to stop
sorenbarrett said:
Guilt or shame one or the other Demar
July 16th, 2026 10:54
sorenbarrett said:
Guilt or shame one or the other Demar
July 16th, 2026 10:54
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