Comments received on poems by Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏
Heaven Hates Me
Just Kate said:
Not at all where I thought you were going to go!! Brilliant!!
February 13th, 2026 02:17
Just Kate said:
Not at all where I thought you were going to go!! Brilliant!!
February 13th, 2026 02:17
Earth I love you
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Deep and thought provoking and true. Well done!
February 12th, 2026 17:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Deep and thought provoking and true. Well done!
February 12th, 2026 17:30
Earth I love you
sorenbarrett said:
There is something to think about. Nicely said
February 12th, 2026 10:32
sorenbarrett said:
There is something to think about. Nicely said
February 12th, 2026 10:32
Standards Double
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes. I love the title, I love the depth...and I love the interplay between today\'s and yesterday\'s titles. Well done, bro! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 11th, 2026 13:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes. I love the title, I love the depth...and I love the interplay between today\'s and yesterday\'s titles. Well done, bro! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 11th, 2026 13:18
Standards Double
sorenbarrett said:
A great senryu Demar it describes well most individuals
February 11th, 2026 08:46
sorenbarrett said:
A great senryu Demar it describes well most individuals
February 11th, 2026 08:46
Double Standards
Friendship said:
You had me thinking on this one!🤔 Good job.
February 10th, 2026 13:12
Friendship said:
You had me thinking on this one!🤔 Good job.
February 10th, 2026 13:12
Double Standards
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The king of concise has returned and the verdict: 🤯 Powerful and true! Naming the harm done by our hypocrisy is vital...well done here, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 10th, 2026 13:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The king of concise has returned and the verdict: 🤯 Powerful and true! Naming the harm done by our hypocrisy is vital...well done here, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 10th, 2026 13:05
The Eases of Living
Friendship said:
Well written. Demar. Your revolves around the concept of love as a powerful and unifying force in life. The poet expresses a profound appreciation for various aspects of existence and emphasizes that love can connect individuals, transcending negativity and complaints about the world\'s imperfections.
February 9th, 2026 08:23
Friendship said:
Well written. Demar. Your revolves around the concept of love as a powerful and unifying force in life. The poet expresses a profound appreciation for various aspects of existence and emphasizes that love can connect individuals, transcending negativity and complaints about the world\'s imperfections.
February 9th, 2026 08:23
The Eases of Living
sorenbarrett said:
So many things large and small that can connect people in many ways. Nicely said
February 9th, 2026 03:48
sorenbarrett said:
So many things large and small that can connect people in many ways. Nicely said
February 9th, 2026 03:48
The Eases of Living
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this is tender and honest, my friend. From the simple act of breathing and speaking to the overflowing list of what you love, the poem keeps choosing gratitude even while acknowledging wonderfully written. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
February 9th, 2026 01:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this is tender and honest, my friend. From the simple act of breathing and speaking to the overflowing list of what you love, the poem keeps choosing gratitude even while acknowledging wonderfully written. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
February 9th, 2026 01:25
The Problems of Living
Friendship said:
Well written. Demar, I am glad you\'re back.❤️🙏❤️.Your poem expresses a deep sense of frustration and sadness regarding the state of humanity and society. It contrasts the poet\'s gratitude for life with a critical examination of how people interact with one another and the world around them. The underlying message is a call for greater empathy, understanding, and connection among individuals.
February 8th, 2026 12:55
Friendship said:
Well written. Demar, I am glad you\'re back.❤️🙏❤️.Your poem expresses a deep sense of frustration and sadness regarding the state of humanity and society. It contrasts the poet\'s gratitude for life with a critical examination of how people interact with one another and the world around them. The underlying message is a call for greater empathy, understanding, and connection among individuals.
February 8th, 2026 12:55
The Problems of Living
Doggerel Dave said:
I don\'t know when you stopped preventing comments on your pieces here, but while you forgot to block, I\'d just like to ask whether you mean some, many or most people...?
February 8th, 2026 07:20
Doggerel Dave said:
I don\'t know when you stopped preventing comments on your pieces here, but while you forgot to block, I\'d just like to ask whether you mean some, many or most people...?
February 8th, 2026 07:20
The Problems of Living
sorenbarrett said:
There is mounting tension in this poem as it builds line by line over the lack of humanity in humanity. Well done Demar
February 8th, 2026 03:33
sorenbarrett said:
There is mounting tension in this poem as it builds line by line over the lack of humanity in humanity. Well done Demar
February 8th, 2026 03:33
The Problems of Living
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, it’s genuinely good to have you back, bro. This reads like a tired but faithful witness…naming the fractures without surrendering hope. The grief is real, but so is the desire for us to do better. Thank you for sharing this and looking forward to more. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 8th, 2026 00:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, it’s genuinely good to have you back, bro. This reads like a tired but faithful witness…naming the fractures without surrendering hope. The grief is real, but so is the desire for us to do better. Thank you for sharing this and looking forward to more. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 8th, 2026 00:21
Three the Hard Way
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Still missing your work, my man. One can hope for a return, right? Hope all is well, Demar! 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 18th, 2025 09:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Still missing your work, my man. One can hope for a return, right? Hope all is well, Demar! 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 18th, 2025 09:52
Three the Hard Way
Friendship said:
The poem also touches on personal struggles with debt, emphasizing the weight of financial burdens and the honor in fulfilling obligations.
August 17th, 2025 13:58
Friendship said:
The poem also touches on personal struggles with debt, emphasizing the weight of financial burdens and the honor in fulfilling obligations.
August 17th, 2025 13:58
Three the Hard Way
2781 said:
I sense a sad note? I wish I could help. Many men of meagre means could add up to a victory.
August 17th, 2025 08:22
2781 said:
I sense a sad note? I wish I could help. Many men of meagre means could add up to a victory.
August 17th, 2025 08:22
Three the Hard Way
Neville said:
Going out with a bang for sure .. but what a way to go .. Hope you change your mind ..Good luck regardless & write on ... please .. Neville
August 17th, 2025 00:30
Neville said:
Going out with a bang for sure .. but what a way to go .. Hope you change your mind ..Good luck regardless & write on ... please .. Neville
August 17th, 2025 00:30
Three the Hard Way
Cheeky Missy said:
This is very lovely, a triple offering of poems for the readers\' perusal, each charming, thought-provoking, and beautifully rendered with excellent and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 16th, 2025 20:22
Cheeky Missy said:
This is very lovely, a triple offering of poems for the readers\' perusal, each charming, thought-provoking, and beautifully rendered with excellent and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 16th, 2025 20:22
Three the Hard Way
Lorna said:
I love all the flowers in my garden and speak to them constantly........... you should keep writing........ that was lovely.
August 15th, 2025 06:57
Lorna said:
I love all the flowers in my garden and speak to them constantly........... you should keep writing........ that was lovely.
August 15th, 2025 06:57
Three the Hard Way
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oooh. Last poem? Why stop? I will miss reading them, for what it is worth, dear brother! I am glad you will still be popping on and saying hi and...if you changer your mind...we\'ll be here ready to read and support. Or, I\'ll speak for me anywho! As for your poems, thy\'re a mix of tenderness and frustration…nurturing imagery set right alongside the weight of struggle. The contrast makes the plea at the end all the more human. Well expressed, my friend. Will be missing you. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 14th, 2025 12:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oooh. Last poem? Why stop? I will miss reading them, for what it is worth, dear brother! I am glad you will still be popping on and saying hi and...if you changer your mind...we\'ll be here ready to read and support. Or, I\'ll speak for me anywho! As for your poems, thy\'re a mix of tenderness and frustration…nurturing imagery set right alongside the weight of struggle. The contrast makes the plea at the end all the more human. Well expressed, my friend. Will be missing you. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 14th, 2025 12:07
Three the Hard Way
sorenbarrett said:
Love the idea of cruelty to flowers. For years I have pushed the idea that plants as life forms deserve the same dignity as animals and in animals I include man although I think he ranks rather far down the scale. A good read Demar
August 14th, 2025 05:41
sorenbarrett said:
Love the idea of cruelty to flowers. For years I have pushed the idea that plants as life forms deserve the same dignity as animals and in animals I include man although I think he ranks rather far down the scale. A good read Demar
August 14th, 2025 05:41
why so poetic?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Another excellent, thought-provoking piece, my friend. Keep \'em coming...and I know you will! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 13th, 2025 12:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Another excellent, thought-provoking piece, my friend. Keep \'em coming...and I know you will! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 13th, 2025 12:02
why so poetic?
sorenbarrett said:
Those that are not philosophical are full of love or pain. Good one Demar made me think
August 13th, 2025 08:56
sorenbarrett said:
Those that are not philosophical are full of love or pain. Good one Demar made me think
August 13th, 2025 08:56
The light within us
Tristan Robert Lange said:
`Amen. A profoundly powerful witness to a universal spiritual truth. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 12th, 2025 09:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
`Amen. A profoundly powerful witness to a universal spiritual truth. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 12th, 2025 09:43
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