Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
In some African cultures there is no roles of mom dad sister brother grandma grandpa etc.
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write, enjoyed the read
April 18th, 2025 07:16
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write, enjoyed the read
April 18th, 2025 07:16
The things you can’t buy…
Tristan Robert Lange said:
In this world, nothing is without price. Well done, Demar! 🌹👏
April 17th, 2025 08:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
In this world, nothing is without price. Well done, Demar! 🌹👏
April 17th, 2025 08:34
The things you can’t buy…
sorenbarrett said:
Everything has a price it is only a matter of determining what the price is. Very good Demar
April 17th, 2025 05:01
sorenbarrett said:
Everything has a price it is only a matter of determining what the price is. Very good Demar
April 17th, 2025 05:01
Love bounded
vicecream said:
I think the thing to do is try to understand why; always dig deeper and deeper- keep looking underneath underneath underneath
April 16th, 2025 08:19
vicecream said:
I think the thing to do is try to understand why; always dig deeper and deeper- keep looking underneath underneath underneath
April 16th, 2025 08:19
$0.00 in my bank account
sorenbarrett said:
Penniless and penny-wise although joy is related to money it is not caused by it. Good write.
April 15th, 2025 08:54
sorenbarrett said:
Penniless and penny-wise although joy is related to money it is not caused by it. Good write.
April 15th, 2025 08:54
$0.00 in my bank account
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It\'s now 9:05 AM. good morning, sir! May your day rock and your funds rise! 😉 Forward looking is the only way. 🌹👏
April 15th, 2025 08:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It\'s now 9:05 AM. good morning, sir! May your day rock and your funds rise! 😉 Forward looking is the only way. 🌹👏
April 15th, 2025 08:05
Boogers on paper
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🤧🤣 This, um, really sticks! Glad everything checked out, bro! Thank you for the laugh!
April 13th, 2025 13:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
🤧🤣 This, um, really sticks! Glad everything checked out, bro! Thank you for the laugh!
April 13th, 2025 13:30
Boogers on paper
sorenbarrett said:
Dried fruit has its merits. A poem hard to read but it flows.
April 13th, 2025 08:28
sorenbarrett said:
Dried fruit has its merits. A poem hard to read but it flows.
April 13th, 2025 08:28
Love bounded
dimpy said:
there shouldn\'t be any conditions in love, but sometimes it\'s necessary...
April 13th, 2025 02:44
dimpy said:
there shouldn\'t be any conditions in love, but sometimes it\'s necessary...
April 13th, 2025 02:44
Love bounded
sorenbarrett said:
We call love many things or rather we call many things love and some of these come with conditions. For me what I call love has no conditions but I\'m not sure anyone has ever found, if so very few.
April 12th, 2025 10:26
sorenbarrett said:
We call love many things or rather we call many things love and some of these come with conditions. For me what I call love has no conditions but I\'m not sure anyone has ever found, if so very few.
April 12th, 2025 10:26
Love bounded
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hm. Other things as well...indeed. Is love conditional? In some senses yes, but there are endless examples where that is not the case, which gets to the heart of what pure love is. A most profound write that causes the reader to pause and ponder the nature of love. Wonderful job on this.
April 12th, 2025 09:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hm. Other things as well...indeed. Is love conditional? In some senses yes, but there are endless examples where that is not the case, which gets to the heart of what pure love is. A most profound write that causes the reader to pause and ponder the nature of love. Wonderful job on this.
April 12th, 2025 09:30
AHHHH!! I WON THE LOTTERY!!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Followed by:
Shit I\'m Broke Again, Except Worse
Oh no! Not again.
\"The Man\" came in and robbed me
By letting me win.
Or something to that effect! 🤣 Forgive my imagination, but that is exactly the point I am getting from this brilliant poem. Wonderfully done, my friend! And all too true! 🌹
April 8th, 2025 18:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Followed by:
Shit I\'m Broke Again, Except Worse
Oh no! Not again.
\"The Man\" came in and robbed me
By letting me win.
Or something to that effect! 🤣 Forgive my imagination, but that is exactly the point I am getting from this brilliant poem. Wonderfully done, my friend! And all too true! 🌹
April 8th, 2025 18:29
AHHHH!! I WON THE LOTTERY!!
Poetic Licence said:
How we all dream, enjoyed the read
April 8th, 2025 06:00
Poetic Licence said:
How we all dream, enjoyed the read
April 8th, 2025 06:00
AHHHH!! I WON THE LOTTERY!!
sorenbarrett said:
The war cry of the common man. A fun read.
April 8th, 2025 03:41
sorenbarrett said:
The war cry of the common man. A fun read.
April 8th, 2025 03:41
Roller Skating Dreams
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Motion is the only way across the ocean...so to speak. Though in that case, I hope you are skating (safely) on a cruise ship. Otherwise, not going work. 🤣 All jokes aside, 100% true your poem is my friend! 😀 Well done! 🌹👏
April 7th, 2025 09:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Motion is the only way across the ocean...so to speak. Though in that case, I hope you are skating (safely) on a cruise ship. Otherwise, not going work. 🤣 All jokes aside, 100% true your poem is my friend! 😀 Well done! 🌹👏
April 7th, 2025 09:26
Roller Skating Dreams
sorenbarrett said:
A great short that paints a picture of action toward one\'s goal. Lovely
April 7th, 2025 07:05
sorenbarrett said:
A great short that paints a picture of action toward one\'s goal. Lovely
April 7th, 2025 07:05
to the thoughts that die
sorenbarrett said:
So hard when there is nothing to write on and a thought comes through. Has happened many times.
April 6th, 2025 12:06
sorenbarrett said:
So hard when there is nothing to write on and a thought comes through. Has happened many times.
April 6th, 2025 12:06
the fade haircut
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ha! I just do the close, clean shave, all across the dome. I\'m a pro! 🤣 Well done on this, bro!
April 4th, 2025 18:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ha! I just do the close, clean shave, all across the dome. I\'m a pro! 🤣 Well done on this, bro!
April 4th, 2025 18:08
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