Comments received on poems by Demar Desu



How much is to much?
Allie561 said:

And yet that simple act is enough to keep you going. Wonderful Demar!

April 14th, 2026 18:51

Thank you to the garbage collectors!
James Michael said:

I was a “garbage collector” for five years. Thought of myself as a garbage man. Truly the worst job I ever had. Alcoholism and a suicide attempt involved. Thanks for the considerate recognition.

April 14th, 2026 18:33

How much is to much?
Friendship said:

I hope they are clean.🤣 Great job.

April 14th, 2026 17:42

How much is to much?
Tristan Robert Lange said:

And, my friend, that\'s about all us sane one\'s can do! 🤣 Ditto. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

April 14th, 2026 09:08

I love food
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Oh...me too! 😋

April 14th, 2026 08:02

How much is to much?
sorenbarrett said:

Thank god to go without underwear would bend the rules of society unless in a nudist colony

April 14th, 2026 07:06

How much is to much?
Abdullah123 said:

Brilliant

April 14th, 2026 06:34

I love food
Mutley Ravishes said:

I love air
It doesn\'t matter where
I will be ready!

April 13th, 2026 19:34

just another brick in the wall
Allie561 said:

Still working on the potato soup Demar, it’ll be out soon 😂

April 13th, 2026 17:52

I love food
Allie561 said:

Ready to take your order lol!

April 13th, 2026 17:51

I love food
Friendship said:

Love this

April 13th, 2026 17:14

I love food
Kevin Hulme said:

Was it Tommy Cooper that said \'I love food. I eat nothing else\'?
Nice one.

April 13th, 2026 15:51

I love food
Katie B. said:

Perfect!

April 13th, 2026 14:37

I love food
sorenbarrett said:

Always hungry and not always for food. Well done Demar

April 13th, 2026 14:18

just another brick in the wall
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Ah...the truth in this. A fave just for the juxtaposition alone. Powerful, my friend. The king of concise strikes again! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

April 13th, 2026 08:31

just another brick in the wall
Abdullah123 said:

Loved it. Just had someone give me a sideye cuz i laughed out loud. Bravo

April 13th, 2026 07:33

just another brick in the wall
sorenbarrett said:

We all wait for our soup and I am still waiting it has been on back order for years. Good write Demar

April 12th, 2026 17:50

Perception is not reality…
Tristan Robert Lange said:

No need to apologize. Get it out constructively, like in a poem...so fair play here, mate! As for your poem...perception is not reality. 💯 Anyone who argues otherwise is, well, deluded. 🤷‍♂️ Fear, all too often, does lead to perceptions that shape people into that which they\'\'d otherwise never see themselves becoming. It doesn\'t have too, but sadly it does. Your poem, blunt as it is, rightly pushes back against such fear and loathing. Great fucking 😅 job Demar! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

April 11th, 2026 11:07

do you value life?
Tristan Robert Lange said:

LOL! Yes! Spot on, brother! An entitled world we live in, no? Fools indeed. Powerful write! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

April 11th, 2026 10:26

Perception is not reality…
Allie561 said:

Change is hard…we’ll get through it

April 11th, 2026 10:13

Perception is not reality…
Friendship said:

Nicely put,

April 11th, 2026 08:58

Perception is not reality…
sorenbarrett said:

We are all afraid of change and what we don\'t recognize. A good write Demar

April 11th, 2026 05:28

do you value life?
NafisaSB said:

potent message wrapped in haiku...wow

April 10th, 2026 23:55

do you value life?
Allie561 said:

So true Demar, like gosh. I needed help at work the other day and a coworker was right next to me watching me struggle and sipping her coffee, the least that could’ve been done was ask if I need help. Nobody cares except about themselves, hopefully it can change.

April 10th, 2026 21:07

do you value life?
Katie B. said:

Excellent!

April 10th, 2026 20:14

do you value life?
Kevin Hulme said:

Well said. A fine Haiku

April 10th, 2026 19:19

do you value life?
arqios said:

The birthing of self can be such a public spectacle and inescapably self-revelatory 🙏🏻🕊️

April 10th, 2026 16:13

do you value life?
sorenbarrett said:

Number one is called that for a reason

April 10th, 2026 15:30

What is marriage like?
Tristan Robert Lange said:

💯 Truth! Well done, sir!

April 10th, 2026 08:40

What is marriage like?
sorenbarrett said:

Surreal Demar and a great image presented. Well done

April 9th, 2026 11:30

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