Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
I don’t go out at night
sorenbarrett said:
Another wonderful senryu that deserves much contemplation. Nicely worded
January 8th, 2025 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
Another wonderful senryu that deserves much contemplation. Nicely worded
January 8th, 2025 04:22
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Mutley Ravishes said:
Lets not give any more food
To the tempting snake
In the end it takes
Everything
That was a challenging haiku you wrote! Great work.
January 6th, 2025 21:48
Mutley Ravishes said:
Lets not give any more food
To the tempting snake
In the end it takes
Everything
That was a challenging haiku you wrote! Great work.
January 6th, 2025 21:48
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sorenbarrett said:
This one was both humerous and true and that is hard to do. A great one here.
January 6th, 2025 20:25
sorenbarrett said:
This one was both humerous and true and that is hard to do. A great one here.
January 6th, 2025 20:25
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed. Judge not, I believe the old, seldom-actualized adage is. Well done, bro! 🌹👏
January 6th, 2025 19:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed. Judge not, I believe the old, seldom-actualized adage is. Well done, bro! 🌹👏
January 6th, 2025 19:29
Video Games!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love video games...and I have a MetaQuest2 (haven\'t upgraded yet...ah finances), but yeah, tons of fun! Enjoyed this much, bro!
January 6th, 2025 10:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love video games...and I have a MetaQuest2 (haven\'t upgraded yet...ah finances), but yeah, tons of fun! Enjoyed this much, bro!
January 6th, 2025 10:04
Video Games!
sorenbarrett said:
Aye aye AI, What a fun write this one was. Too real for comfort
January 5th, 2025 20:28
sorenbarrett said:
Aye aye AI, What a fun write this one was. Too real for comfort
January 5th, 2025 20:28
-$7.27 in my bank account
Mutley Ravishes said:
Careful now. Don’t wanna get programmed, right?!
January 4th, 2025 20:38
Mutley Ravishes said:
Careful now. Don’t wanna get programmed, right?!
January 4th, 2025 20:38
-$7.27 in my bank account
sorenbarrett said:
Been there done that and said in a great Haiku
January 4th, 2025 15:28
sorenbarrett said:
Been there done that and said in a great Haiku
January 4th, 2025 15:28
-$7.27 in my bank account
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love your $$$ poems. I laugh because I\'ve done the same thing and have ended up negative in my account. It sure does come and it sure does go. And the amount in the account isn\'t always reflective of unwise purchases. Still, bro, it\'s yours now...so enjoy that sucker! A new TV is worth it (once you get paid again 🤣).
January 4th, 2025 10:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love your $$$ poems. I laugh because I\'ve done the same thing and have ended up negative in my account. It sure does come and it sure does go. And the amount in the account isn\'t always reflective of unwise purchases. Still, bro, it\'s yours now...so enjoy that sucker! A new TV is worth it (once you get paid again 🤣).
January 4th, 2025 10:23
airport privileges
Mutley Ravishes said:
People showing that machines don’t have the power to bring true freedom!
My flight to the Andromeda Galaxy has been delayed! I’m so angry!!
January 3rd, 2025 02:02
Mutley Ravishes said:
People showing that machines don’t have the power to bring true freedom!
My flight to the Andromeda Galaxy has been delayed! I’m so angry!!
January 3rd, 2025 02:02
airport privileges
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Even when at work, poets be poets! LOL! Love it bro! And truth...status holds ZERO weight! In fact, to the back of the line. Buh-bye. Next! 🤣 Loved the Senryu, my friend. A perfect example of one, actually! 🙏❤️
January 2nd, 2025 22:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Even when at work, poets be poets! LOL! Love it bro! And truth...status holds ZERO weight! In fact, to the back of the line. Buh-bye. Next! 🤣 Loved the Senryu, my friend. A perfect example of one, actually! 🙏❤️
January 2nd, 2025 22:41
airport privileges
rin said:
He says some really good things. I am grateful to those who do so.
January 2nd, 2025 21:45
rin said:
He says some really good things. I am grateful to those who do so.
January 2nd, 2025 21:45
airport privileges
arqios said:
Like someone said, they breathe the same recycled air, use the same avgas, and arrive at the same time and destination as everyone else. Good stuff, sugoi des neh 🙏🏻👍🏻
January 2nd, 2025 21:26
arqios said:
Like someone said, they breathe the same recycled air, use the same avgas, and arrive at the same time and destination as everyone else. Good stuff, sugoi des neh 🙏🏻👍🏻
January 2nd, 2025 21:26
airport privileges
sorenbarrett said:
All should be treated the same with respect and kindness. Love the write
January 2nd, 2025 18:04
sorenbarrett said:
All should be treated the same with respect and kindness. Love the write
January 2nd, 2025 18:04
Real or Fake
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, speak truth why don\'t you! LOL! Happy New Year, bro!
December 31st, 2024 08:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, speak truth why don\'t you! LOL! Happy New Year, bro!
December 31st, 2024 08:59
Real or Fake
sorenbarrett said:
The touch of skin once a sin now can no longer be felt except through touch screens. We have lost the human out of humanity it seems. Lovely write. Happy New Year
December 31st, 2024 03:59
sorenbarrett said:
The touch of skin once a sin now can no longer be felt except through touch screens. We have lost the human out of humanity it seems. Lovely write. Happy New Year
December 31st, 2024 03:59
Real or Fake
arqios said:
Can\'t say it twice I\'m afraid, that would repetitiously redundant.... 😆
December 31st, 2024 03:32
arqios said:
Can\'t say it twice I\'m afraid, that would repetitiously redundant.... 😆
December 31st, 2024 03:32
I love my wife
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I know. I hate how possessive language is. My this, their\'s that! Love is not one-sided ownership; it is mutuality. So, I love this because I too cringe when I say \"my\" [anyone]. Well done my 😬 friend. 🤣 🌹👏
December 30th, 2024 08:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I know. I hate how possessive language is. My this, their\'s that! Love is not one-sided ownership; it is mutuality. So, I love this because I too cringe when I say \"my\" [anyone]. Well done my 😬 friend. 🤣 🌹👏
December 30th, 2024 08:21
I love my wife
sorenbarrett said:
A clever use of language to make an important point. Language quietly colors the way we see the world and my does imply ownership, a concept that shouldn\'t apply in relationships. Nicely written
December 30th, 2024 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
A clever use of language to make an important point. Language quietly colors the way we see the world and my does imply ownership, a concept that shouldn\'t apply in relationships. Nicely written
December 30th, 2024 04:42
beauty in front of me
sorenbarrett said:
A guy is a dog and it would not be normal not to look. A fun read
December 27th, 2024 12:02
sorenbarrett said:
A guy is a dog and it would not be normal not to look. A fun read
December 27th, 2024 12:02
The Problem of Monogamy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very thought-provoking write, my friend...and I see what you did in terms of juxtaposition...a poem on the problem of polyamory and a follow up on the problem of monogamy. It makes for a neat dialogue between the two poems and the issues that may arise in the two forms of marital relations and customs. Brilliantly done, my friend! 🌹👏
December 26th, 2024 16:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very thought-provoking write, my friend...and I see what you did in terms of juxtaposition...a poem on the problem of polyamory and a follow up on the problem of monogamy. It makes for a neat dialogue between the two poems and the issues that may arise in the two forms of marital relations and customs. Brilliantly done, my friend! 🌹👏
December 26th, 2024 16:48
The Problem of Monogamy
sorenbarrett said:
A very poignant, write Humans were not meant to be monogamous. This was forced upon a by society, religion and personal need for domination. It is a beautiful thing when given freely but ugly when demanded.
December 26th, 2024 14:31
sorenbarrett said:
A very poignant, write Humans were not meant to be monogamous. This was forced upon a by society, religion and personal need for domination. It is a beautiful thing when given freely but ugly when demanded.
December 26th, 2024 14:31
The Problem of Monogamy
Cassie58 said:
Ah love, the many facets of it. You raise some interesting points here in your lines about monogamy Demar Desu. All I can say is that infidelity causes massive heartbreak. All the best.
December 26th, 2024 13:25
Cassie58 said:
Ah love, the many facets of it. You raise some interesting points here in your lines about monogamy Demar Desu. All I can say is that infidelity causes massive heartbreak. All the best.
December 26th, 2024 13:25
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