Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
New York City
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah…NYC. Fun to visit, happy to not live there.
Anyway, wonderful poem my friend! Hope the trip went well!
December 18th, 2024 17:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah…NYC. Fun to visit, happy to not live there.
Anyway, wonderful poem my friend! Hope the trip went well!
December 18th, 2024 17:52
New York City
TobaniNataiella said:
Reminder of home is always home, enjoyed the read
December 18th, 2024 05:14
TobaniNataiella said:
Reminder of home is always home, enjoyed the read
December 18th, 2024 05:14
New York City
Melancholic~Onion said:
I sincerely like the \'Yuck\' at the end
December 18th, 2024 04:20
Melancholic~Onion said:
I sincerely like the \'Yuck\' at the end
December 18th, 2024 04:20
New York City
arqios said:
Indeed, all cities and places have their distinct characters and personalities!
December 18th, 2024 03:04
arqios said:
Indeed, all cities and places have their distinct characters and personalities!
December 18th, 2024 03:04
$0.01 in my bank account
arqios said:
My balance has moved up lightly to $07.71, having crawled out of credit card debt, learnt not to use them.
December 17th, 2024 23:20
arqios said:
My balance has moved up lightly to $07.71, having crawled out of credit card debt, learnt not to use them.
December 17th, 2024 23:20
The Prophet’s Eye
vicecream said:
Loveee this one, thank you for the reminder
December 17th, 2024 12:32
vicecream said:
Loveee this one, thank you for the reminder
December 17th, 2024 12:32
$0.01 in my bank account
sorenbarrett said:
What a thought does God give out credit cards? I know, that was not the intention. A sad but fun write.
December 17th, 2024 10:10
sorenbarrett said:
What a thought does God give out credit cards? I know, that was not the intention. A sad but fun write.
December 17th, 2024 10:10
in the mood for love
Mutley Ravishes said:
Ah, if only I could redirect all that force upwards.
December 16th, 2024 18:28
Mutley Ravishes said:
Ah, if only I could redirect all that force upwards.
December 16th, 2024 18:28
in the mood for love
Cassie58 said:
Much here to read between the lines. Brevity which makes the mind wander. Well penned.
December 16th, 2024 12:41
Cassie58 said:
Much here to read between the lines. Brevity which makes the mind wander. Well penned.
December 16th, 2024 12:41
in the mood for love
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The king of concise comes through again. If only indeed! Well done friend!
December 16th, 2024 09:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The king of concise comes through again. If only indeed! Well done friend!
December 16th, 2024 09:47
in the mood for love
sorenbarrett said:
Those if only\'s wishes linger in many of our minds. So short it says so much. Lovely
December 16th, 2024 09:35
sorenbarrett said:
Those if only\'s wishes linger in many of our minds. So short it says so much. Lovely
December 16th, 2024 09:35
I hate everything
TobaniNataiella said:
Questions that very often asked, not all are answered, Enjoyable read
December 15th, 2024 08:19
TobaniNataiella said:
Questions that very often asked, not all are answered, Enjoyable read
December 15th, 2024 08:19
I hate everything
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love that you\'ve written this in couplets and they really are effective. Wonderful job, my friend. I get this expression, very much! 🌹👏
December 15th, 2024 07:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love that you\'ve written this in couplets and they really are effective. Wonderful job, my friend. I get this expression, very much! 🌹👏
December 15th, 2024 07:55
The Prophet’s Eye
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love how profoundly your titles connect to your words, my brother. Well done! 🌹👏
December 14th, 2024 10:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love how profoundly your titles connect to your words, my brother. Well done! 🌹👏
December 14th, 2024 10:59
The Prophet’s Eye
TobaniNataiella said:
As they say anything worth having is worth waiting for, enjoyable read.
December 14th, 2024 09:12
TobaniNataiella said:
As they say anything worth having is worth waiting for, enjoyable read.
December 14th, 2024 09:12
The Prophet’s Eye
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like a teaching of Lao Tzu. So nicely said
December 14th, 2024 08:58
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like a teaching of Lao Tzu. So nicely said
December 14th, 2024 08:58
Today a person begged
TobaniNataiella said:
A powerful few words that sadly a lot of people will be hearing at this time of year. Good read
December 14th, 2024 07:37
TobaniNataiella said:
A powerful few words that sadly a lot of people will be hearing at this time of year. Good read
December 14th, 2024 07:37
Today a person begged
arqios said:
Terrible on either side of the negotiating. Hope it works out for you and all concerned. It can be a nightmare for employees who are trapped by this. Been there, it still bothers me at times.
December 13th, 2024 21:51
arqios said:
Terrible on either side of the negotiating. Hope it works out for you and all concerned. It can be a nightmare for employees who are trapped by this. Been there, it still bothers me at times.
December 13th, 2024 21:51
Today a person begged
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! I feel your frustration! Good for you in expressing this both poetically and to your boss! Rock on bro! 😎
December 13th, 2024 19:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! I feel your frustration! Good for you in expressing this both poetically and to your boss! Rock on bro! 😎
December 13th, 2024 19:52
Today a person begged
sorenbarrett said:
Trapped in the middle between customer and management. A terrible place to be. A bleeding heart and powerless. A great senyru
December 13th, 2024 14:57
sorenbarrett said:
Trapped in the middle between customer and management. A terrible place to be. A bleeding heart and powerless. A great senyru
December 13th, 2024 14:57
Work vs. Purpose
sorenbarrett said:
Deeper thought in this poem than at first evident. So few words for so much
December 12th, 2024 10:22
sorenbarrett said:
Deeper thought in this poem than at first evident. So few words for so much
December 12th, 2024 10:22
Work vs. Purpose
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wise wise wise! Well done my friend!
December 12th, 2024 07:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wise wise wise! Well done my friend!
December 12th, 2024 07:08
$0.65 in my bank account
Mutley Ravishes said:
Nothing like some gratitude!
December 11th, 2024 18:26
Mutley Ravishes said:
Nothing like some gratitude!
December 11th, 2024 18:26
$0.65 in my bank account
Demar Desu said:
The profile picture makes these type of poems so funny 😭😭
December 11th, 2024 16:38
Demar Desu said:
The profile picture makes these type of poems so funny 😭😭
December 11th, 2024 16:38
$0.65 in my bank account
sorenbarrett said:
Short but to the point and where are all of our minds should be. A beautiful expression.
December 11th, 2024 16:02
sorenbarrett said:
Short but to the point and where are all of our minds should be. A beautiful expression.
December 11th, 2024 16:02
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