Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
Are you also poisoned?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this carries a sharp contrast…that weight of being “a slave” and then the shift into “but my love… I’m free.” That final line doesn’t erase the struggle, it rises above it. It’s simple, direct, and it lands. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 23rd, 2026 09:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this carries a sharp contrast…that weight of being “a slave” and then the shift into “but my love… I’m free.” That final line doesn’t erase the struggle, it rises above it. It’s simple, direct, and it lands. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 23rd, 2026 09:17
Are you also poisoned?
Allie561 said:
I know what’s it like to feel trapped whilst in love, it’s not a pleasant feeling. I’m assuming whatever had you feeling caged is no longer, I’m glad you could get away from it. Sometimes I wish I still had someone but it’s nice to not have to worry about it, wonderful haiku Demar.
March 22nd, 2026 21:31
Allie561 said:
I know what’s it like to feel trapped whilst in love, it’s not a pleasant feeling. I’m assuming whatever had you feeling caged is no longer, I’m glad you could get away from it. Sometimes I wish I still had someone but it’s nice to not have to worry about it, wonderful haiku Demar.
March 22nd, 2026 21:31
Are you also poisoned?
sorenbarrett said:
Love they say can set you free or enslave you choose
March 22nd, 2026 20:53
sorenbarrett said:
Love they say can set you free or enslave you choose
March 22nd, 2026 20:53
What is your hypocrisy?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this lands with a sharp honesty…“they love poetry / oh! but they hate the poets” says it all. It’s that contradiction we’re quick to point out in others, but slower to own in ourselves. I feel that sting too…which is probably the point. The King of Concise clocks another one in. Rock on, bro! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 22nd, 2026 09:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this lands with a sharp honesty…“they love poetry / oh! but they hate the poets” says it all. It’s that contradiction we’re quick to point out in others, but slower to own in ourselves. I feel that sting too…which is probably the point. The King of Concise clocks another one in. Rock on, bro! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 22nd, 2026 09:25
What is your hypocrisy?
sorenbarrett said:
The man is not he poem even murderers have produced great works. Well written and a good one for poetry day
March 21st, 2026 11:33
sorenbarrett said:
The man is not he poem even murderers have produced great works. Well written and a good one for poetry day
March 21st, 2026 11:33
what is ethics, morals, and truth?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this hits close…those are the kinds of questions that don’t really let you off the hook. Pain has a way of stripping things down whether we want it to or not. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 20th, 2026 10:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this hits close…those are the kinds of questions that don’t really let you off the hook. Pain has a way of stripping things down whether we want it to or not. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 20th, 2026 10:00
what is ethics, morals, and truth?
Allie561 said:
This is an interesting thought Demar. Perhaps it’s a a fear or a confession. I’ll have to think on this.
March 20th, 2026 08:36
Allie561 said:
This is an interesting thought Demar. Perhaps it’s a a fear or a confession. I’ll have to think on this.
March 20th, 2026 08:36
what is ethics, morals, and truth?
sorenbarrett said:
I assume that what we are free to face is our pain and despair. Many do not wish to. A most interesting write
March 20th, 2026 03:44
sorenbarrett said:
I assume that what we are free to face is our pain and despair. Many do not wish to. A most interesting write
March 20th, 2026 03:44
Do you enjoy sex?
Uncle Adolf said:
The bare bones of a thought, left shivering without the skin of art.
March 19th, 2026 11:38
Uncle Adolf said:
The bare bones of a thought, left shivering without the skin of art.
March 19th, 2026 11:38
Do you enjoy sex?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I’ll answer your question the way life tends to. What’s not to love? What’s really to love? Why bother? 🤣 Funny how the answers evolve.🤣
March 19th, 2026 10:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I’ll answer your question the way life tends to. What’s not to love? What’s really to love? Why bother? 🤣 Funny how the answers evolve.🤣
March 19th, 2026 10:37
Do you enjoy sex?
Allie561 said:
I’d say for the most part yes, but I don’t always prefer it. I like hugs more personally.
March 19th, 2026 09:29
Allie561 said:
I’d say for the most part yes, but I don’t always prefer it. I like hugs more personally.
March 19th, 2026 09:29
Do you enjoy sex?
sorenbarrett said:
Those that don\'t enjoy are doomed to an evolutionary cul-de-sac. Well done
March 19th, 2026 08:00
sorenbarrett said:
Those that don\'t enjoy are doomed to an evolutionary cul-de-sac. Well done
March 19th, 2026 08:00
-$1.00 in my bank account
Allie561 said:
We often take things for granted until we don’t have it anymore. I certainly took my good knees for granted, wish I still had them lol. I hope you find peace in other things and abundance in joy rather than objects.
March 18th, 2026 13:40
Allie561 said:
We often take things for granted until we don’t have it anymore. I certainly took my good knees for granted, wish I still had them lol. I hope you find peace in other things and abundance in joy rather than objects.
March 18th, 2026 13:40
What is your religious beliefs?
Allie561 said:
I think of myself as a Christian but I don’t associate with a single church. I prefer to go on my own journey and explore my beliefs. Also, good to see you’re back.
March 18th, 2026 13:38
Allie561 said:
I think of myself as a Christian but I don’t associate with a single church. I prefer to go on my own journey and explore my beliefs. Also, good to see you’re back.
March 18th, 2026 13:38
Sometimes I hate myself
Allie561 said:
I believe you can heal yourself Demar. Don’t be too hard on yourself because we can always find faults, you’re only human.
March 18th, 2026 13:37
Allie561 said:
I believe you can heal yourself Demar. Don’t be too hard on yourself because we can always find faults, you’re only human.
March 18th, 2026 13:37
-$1.00 in my bank account
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this carries a quiet strength…laying out the nothing so plainly, then landing on “I understand worth..” like a truth no one can take. It’s restrained, but it hits deep. Beautiful piece, my friend. The king of concise comes up with a KO. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 18th, 2026 09:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this carries a quiet strength…laying out the nothing so plainly, then landing on “I understand worth..” like a truth no one can take. It’s restrained, but it hits deep. Beautiful piece, my friend. The king of concise comes up with a KO. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 18th, 2026 09:30
-$1.00 in my bank account
Mutley Ravishes said:
Can -$1.00 even be in a bank account?! Anyways, a thirsty kid knows the value of a cool drink of water.
March 18th, 2026 07:46
Mutley Ravishes said:
Can -$1.00 even be in a bank account?! Anyways, a thirsty kid knows the value of a cool drink of water.
March 18th, 2026 07:46
-$1.00 in my bank account
sorenbarrett said:
It is in times of fault that understand most what worth and value are. Nicely written
March 18th, 2026 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
It is in times of fault that understand most what worth and value are. Nicely written
March 18th, 2026 04:22
What is your religious beliefs?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, I appreciate you asking this directly… it invites something real. I’m a Christian… I believe in one God as expressed through the Trinity, and at the same time I believe God is bigger than human theology and not limited to my belief system. That’s the space I live in. Thank you for opening that door. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 17th, 2026 08:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, I appreciate you asking this directly… it invites something real. I’m a Christian… I believe in one God as expressed through the Trinity, and at the same time I believe God is bigger than human theology and not limited to my belief system. That’s the space I live in. Thank you for opening that door. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 17th, 2026 08:33
What is your religious beliefs?
sorenbarrett said:
There is always only depending on from where one is looking a great write of belief
March 17th, 2026 07:00
sorenbarrett said:
There is always only depending on from where one is looking a great write of belief
March 17th, 2026 07:00
What is your religious beliefs?
Mutley Ravishes said:
I believe in something
I know nothing
About!
March 17th, 2026 06:37
Mutley Ravishes said:
I believe in something
I know nothing
About!
March 17th, 2026 06:37
“For what shall it profit a man, if he shall gain the whole world, and lose his own soul?”
Uncle Adolf said:
You have achieved something remarkable. You have proven that with three lines, a moral cliché, and two ellipses, one can produce a literary object that resembles depth… much like a well painted on a wall resembles an abyss.
March 16th, 2026 12:14
Uncle Adolf said:
You have achieved something remarkable. You have proven that with three lines, a moral cliché, and two ellipses, one can produce a literary object that resembles depth… much like a well painted on a wall resembles an abyss.
March 16th, 2026 12:14
Sometimes I hate myself
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That ending! Yes, bro! It reminds me of the Rastafarian concept of I and I. Very holy, very apt message in its simplicity. And yes, I have often hated myself...and the only way out of that is through self-forgiveness and a measure of self-grace. Easier things to say than do. Powerful, powerful, powerful! Thank you for this! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 16th, 2026 08:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That ending! Yes, bro! It reminds me of the Rastafarian concept of I and I. Very holy, very apt message in its simplicity. And yes, I have often hated myself...and the only way out of that is through self-forgiveness and a measure of self-grace. Easier things to say than do. Powerful, powerful, powerful! Thank you for this! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 16th, 2026 08:43
“For what shall it profit a man, if he shall gain the whole world, and lose his own soul?”
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely senryu it speaks volumes in so few words and leaves the reader to conclude the message. As for me it would be (and I no better than the rest)
March 16th, 2026 08:27
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely senryu it speaks volumes in so few words and leaves the reader to conclude the message. As for me it would be (and I no better than the rest)
March 16th, 2026 08:27
Sometimes I hate myself
sorenbarrett said:
Self forgiveness is so important as is the learning that goes with it. Nicely done
March 16th, 2026 02:53
sorenbarrett said:
Self forgiveness is so important as is the learning that goes with it. Nicely done
March 16th, 2026 02:53
am I poisoned?
NafisaSB said:
high time to stop this sort of feeling before it overtakes you completely - but yes, people\'s insincerity gets me frustrated and annoyed too..good haiku..
March 11th, 2026 00:54
NafisaSB said:
high time to stop this sort of feeling before it overtakes you completely - but yes, people\'s insincerity gets me frustrated and annoyed too..good haiku..
March 11th, 2026 00:54
What is your favorite color?
RSM0812 said:
Simple, short bu great to read. Thank you for posting such a wonder ✍️. :)
March 9th, 2026 21:49
RSM0812 said:
Simple, short bu great to read. Thank you for posting such a wonder ✍️. :)
March 9th, 2026 21:49
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