Comments received on poems by Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏
to be mixed in the USA!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truth! Sad, but very true. Well done, Demar! 🌹👏
May 16th, 2025 20:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truth! Sad, but very true. Well done, Demar! 🌹👏
May 16th, 2025 20:53
1 day left to live
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sleeping! 💤 They say it is the best way to go! 🤣 Then again, no one has woke up from it to tell otherwise! 😳🤣 Great job, my friend. Very thought-provoking. 🌹👏
May 16th, 2025 20:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sleeping! 💤 They say it is the best way to go! 🤣 Then again, no one has woke up from it to tell otherwise! 😳🤣 Great job, my friend. Very thought-provoking. 🌹👏
May 16th, 2025 20:35
1 day left to live
sorenbarrett said:
Another Senryu that opens the mind and clears the air. Well done Demar
May 16th, 2025 12:14
sorenbarrett said:
Another Senryu that opens the mind and clears the air. Well done Demar
May 16th, 2025 12:14
to be mixed in the USA!
vicecream said:
Reading through the lens of each of the triple entendre; mixed as in race, mixed in as in incorporated into, and free mixing; you’re an amazing poet truly
May 15th, 2025 14:57
vicecream said:
Reading through the lens of each of the triple entendre; mixed as in race, mixed in as in incorporated into, and free mixing; you’re an amazing poet truly
May 15th, 2025 14:57
to be mixed in the USA!
sorenbarrett said:
This poses the question of are your referring to matrimony or society in general/ A good write Demar.
May 15th, 2025 05:33
sorenbarrett said:
This poses the question of are your referring to matrimony or society in general/ A good write Demar.
May 15th, 2025 05:33
Today I saw a tree fall
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful poem that is devastating both literally and metaphorically. Well done, my friend. 🌹👏
May 14th, 2025 11:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful poem that is devastating both literally and metaphorically. Well done, my friend. 🌹👏
May 14th, 2025 11:31
Tycoon to be
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Preach it brother! Another reality check from the King of Concise! Bravo! 🌹👏
May 14th, 2025 10:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Preach it brother! Another reality check from the King of Concise! Bravo! 🌹👏
May 14th, 2025 10:58
Today I saw a tree fall
sorenbarrett said:
I can\'t help wonder what the humble giant is. A fun read.
May 14th, 2025 10:30
sorenbarrett said:
I can\'t help wonder what the humble giant is. A fun read.
May 14th, 2025 10:30
God, Universe and Nature
NafisaSB said:
happy belated birthday
may you keep celebrating life, and composing beautiful verse
God bless
May 13th, 2025 01:05
NafisaSB said:
happy belated birthday
may you keep celebrating life, and composing beautiful verse
God bless
May 13th, 2025 01:05
Politically Speaking
MLHnow said:
I looked it up! I too feel on a toe hold balance
Wondering why I am up here at all!
Right left up down all a balance that most fall off from!
May 12th, 2025 12:35
MLHnow said:
I looked it up! I too feel on a toe hold balance
Wondering why I am up here at all!
Right left up down all a balance that most fall off from!
May 12th, 2025 12:35
My best friend
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The only way marriage truly works. Rock on, bro! You\'re a lucky man. 🌹👏 What\'s not to fave about that?
May 11th, 2025 07:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The only way marriage truly works. Rock on, bro! You\'re a lucky man. 🌹👏 What\'s not to fave about that?
May 11th, 2025 07:44
My best friend
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful senryu and on a special day. Very nicely done
May 11th, 2025 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful senryu and on a special day. Very nicely done
May 11th, 2025 04:58
I am afraid
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is confessional and professional at the same time. Fragmented, but collected. This is an amazing write. Faved! 🌹👏
May 10th, 2025 15:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is confessional and professional at the same time. Fragmented, but collected. This is an amazing write. Faved! 🌹👏
May 10th, 2025 15:29
I am afraid
sorenbarrett said:
So many fragments of a piece broken. A lovely write and a fave
May 10th, 2025 06:32
sorenbarrett said:
So many fragments of a piece broken. A lovely write and a fave
May 10th, 2025 06:32
my taxes came!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
In that order. Though for some, it\'s death, money, taxes. Aka, you die broke, then it costs money to cremate you, which comes out of tax-paying dollars. 🤣 Great poem, my friend! Short and true. 🌹👏
May 9th, 2025 09:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
In that order. Though for some, it\'s death, money, taxes. Aka, you die broke, then it costs money to cremate you, which comes out of tax-paying dollars. 🤣 Great poem, my friend! Short and true. 🌹👏
May 9th, 2025 09:28
my taxes came!
Poetic Licence said:
Just about sums life up to a T, enjoyed the read
May 9th, 2025 06:24
Poetic Licence said:
Just about sums life up to a T, enjoyed the read
May 9th, 2025 06:24
my taxes came!
sorenbarrett said:
A read too close to the truth to be funny and too sad to be happy. Very nice
May 9th, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
A read too close to the truth to be funny and too sad to be happy. Very nice
May 9th, 2025 04:33
God, Universe and Nature
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fuck yes! Bro, never thought of GUN through the lens of that acronym. This gets a huge amen from me! Damn, I have a G.U.N too! Thanks for that! Powerful. A must fave! 🌹👏
May 7th, 2025 10:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fuck yes! Bro, never thought of GUN through the lens of that acronym. This gets a huge amen from me! Damn, I have a G.U.N too! Thanks for that! Powerful. A must fave! 🌹👏
May 7th, 2025 10:50
God, Universe and Nature
sorenbarrett said:
Clever anachronym in another short write. Nicely done
May 7th, 2025 03:44
sorenbarrett said:
Clever anachronym in another short write. Nicely done
May 7th, 2025 03:44
God, Universe and Nature
Poetic Licence said:
That is an interesting take, and happy birthday
May 7th, 2025 02:57
Poetic Licence said:
That is an interesting take, and happy birthday
May 7th, 2025 02:57
Tomorrow is my birthday
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Can\'t answer the last question for myself, let alone anyone else, but here\'s to hoping and trying...That said, your poems are doing right! Happy Birthday, my friend! 🎂🎉🌹👏
May 6th, 2025 20:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Can\'t answer the last question for myself, let alone anyone else, but here\'s to hoping and trying...That said, your poems are doing right! Happy Birthday, my friend! 🎂🎉🌹👏
May 6th, 2025 20:33
Tomorrow is my birthday
sorenbarrett said:
This Senryu took me by surprise well made and yes as long as you are on the green side of the grass you are doing just fine.
May 6th, 2025 06:07
sorenbarrett said:
This Senryu took me by surprise well made and yes as long as you are on the green side of the grass you are doing just fine.
May 6th, 2025 06:07
Autistic Brother
NafisaSB said:
you have hit the nail on the head - the differently abled people are some of the most sensitive , beautiful and talented souls i have come across
May 6th, 2025 00:18
NafisaSB said:
you have hit the nail on the head - the differently abled people are some of the most sensitive , beautiful and talented souls i have come across
May 6th, 2025 00:18
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