Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
New York City
Melancholic~Onion said:
I sincerely like the \'Yuck\' at the end
December 18th, 2024 04:20
Melancholic~Onion said:
I sincerely like the \'Yuck\' at the end
December 18th, 2024 04:20
New York City
arqios said:
Indeed, all cities and places have their distinct characters and personalities!
December 18th, 2024 03:04
arqios said:
Indeed, all cities and places have their distinct characters and personalities!
December 18th, 2024 03:04
$0.01 in my bank account
arqios said:
My balance has moved up lightly to $07.71, having crawled out of credit card debt, learnt not to use them.
December 17th, 2024 23:20
arqios said:
My balance has moved up lightly to $07.71, having crawled out of credit card debt, learnt not to use them.
December 17th, 2024 23:20
The Prophet’s Eye
vicecream said:
Loveee this one, thank you for the reminder
December 17th, 2024 12:32
vicecream said:
Loveee this one, thank you for the reminder
December 17th, 2024 12:32
$0.01 in my bank account
sorenbarrett said:
What a thought does God give out credit cards? I know, that was not the intention. A sad but fun write.
December 17th, 2024 10:10
sorenbarrett said:
What a thought does God give out credit cards? I know, that was not the intention. A sad but fun write.
December 17th, 2024 10:10
in the mood for love
Mutley Ravishes said:
Ah, if only I could redirect all that force upwards.
December 16th, 2024 18:28
Mutley Ravishes said:
Ah, if only I could redirect all that force upwards.
December 16th, 2024 18:28
in the mood for love
Cassie58 said:
Much here to read between the lines. Brevity which makes the mind wander. Well penned.
December 16th, 2024 12:41
Cassie58 said:
Much here to read between the lines. Brevity which makes the mind wander. Well penned.
December 16th, 2024 12:41
in the mood for love
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The king of concise comes through again. If only indeed! Well done friend!
December 16th, 2024 09:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The king of concise comes through again. If only indeed! Well done friend!
December 16th, 2024 09:47
in the mood for love
sorenbarrett said:
Those if only\'s wishes linger in many of our minds. So short it says so much. Lovely
December 16th, 2024 09:35
sorenbarrett said:
Those if only\'s wishes linger in many of our minds. So short it says so much. Lovely
December 16th, 2024 09:35
I hate everything
Poetic Licence said:
Questions that very often asked, not all are answered, Enjoyable read
December 15th, 2024 08:19
Poetic Licence said:
Questions that very often asked, not all are answered, Enjoyable read
December 15th, 2024 08:19
I hate everything
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love that you\'ve written this in couplets and they really are effective. Wonderful job, my friend. I get this expression, very much! 🌹👏
December 15th, 2024 07:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love that you\'ve written this in couplets and they really are effective. Wonderful job, my friend. I get this expression, very much! 🌹👏
December 15th, 2024 07:55
The Prophet’s Eye
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love how profoundly your titles connect to your words, my brother. Well done! 🌹👏
December 14th, 2024 10:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love how profoundly your titles connect to your words, my brother. Well done! 🌹👏
December 14th, 2024 10:59
The Prophet’s Eye
Poetic Licence said:
As they say anything worth having is worth waiting for, enjoyable read.
December 14th, 2024 09:12
Poetic Licence said:
As they say anything worth having is worth waiting for, enjoyable read.
December 14th, 2024 09:12
The Prophet’s Eye
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like a teaching of Lao Tzu. So nicely said
December 14th, 2024 08:58
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like a teaching of Lao Tzu. So nicely said
December 14th, 2024 08:58
Today a person begged
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful few words that sadly a lot of people will be hearing at this time of year. Good read
December 14th, 2024 07:37
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful few words that sadly a lot of people will be hearing at this time of year. Good read
December 14th, 2024 07:37
Today a person begged
arqios said:
Terrible on either side of the negotiating. Hope it works out for you and all concerned. It can be a nightmare for employees who are trapped by this. Been there, it still bothers me at times.
December 13th, 2024 21:51
arqios said:
Terrible on either side of the negotiating. Hope it works out for you and all concerned. It can be a nightmare for employees who are trapped by this. Been there, it still bothers me at times.
December 13th, 2024 21:51
Today a person begged
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! I feel your frustration! Good for you in expressing this both poetically and to your boss! Rock on bro! 😎
December 13th, 2024 19:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! I feel your frustration! Good for you in expressing this both poetically and to your boss! Rock on bro! 😎
December 13th, 2024 19:52
Today a person begged
sorenbarrett said:
Trapped in the middle between customer and management. A terrible place to be. A bleeding heart and powerless. A great senyru
December 13th, 2024 14:57
sorenbarrett said:
Trapped in the middle between customer and management. A terrible place to be. A bleeding heart and powerless. A great senyru
December 13th, 2024 14:57
Work vs. Purpose
sorenbarrett said:
Deeper thought in this poem than at first evident. So few words for so much
December 12th, 2024 10:22
sorenbarrett said:
Deeper thought in this poem than at first evident. So few words for so much
December 12th, 2024 10:22
Work vs. Purpose
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wise wise wise! Well done my friend!
December 12th, 2024 07:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wise wise wise! Well done my friend!
December 12th, 2024 07:08
$0.65 in my bank account
Mutley Ravishes said:
Nothing like some gratitude!
December 11th, 2024 18:26
Mutley Ravishes said:
Nothing like some gratitude!
December 11th, 2024 18:26
$0.65 in my bank account
Demar Desu said:
The profile picture makes these type of poems so funny 😭😭
December 11th, 2024 16:38
Demar Desu said:
The profile picture makes these type of poems so funny 😭😭
December 11th, 2024 16:38
$0.65 in my bank account
sorenbarrett said:
Short but to the point and where are all of our minds should be. A beautiful expression.
December 11th, 2024 16:02
sorenbarrett said:
Short but to the point and where are all of our minds should be. A beautiful expression.
December 11th, 2024 16:02
$0.65 in my bank account
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yikes...been there! Well, thank God writing and posting are free, so long as the internet and electric are paid on the posting part! LOL! Hope you get paid soon bro!
December 11th, 2024 14:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yikes...been there! Well, thank God writing and posting are free, so long as the internet and electric are paid on the posting part! LOL! Hope you get paid soon bro!
December 11th, 2024 14:11
Living in Epicaricacy
rin said:
Once you understand that, you will become an enlightened Demar Desu.
December 10th, 2024 10:01
rin said:
Once you understand that, you will become an enlightened Demar Desu.
December 10th, 2024 10:01
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