Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
airport privileges
Mutley Ravishes said:
People showing that machines don’t have the power to bring true freedom!
My flight to the Andromeda Galaxy has been delayed! I’m so angry!!
January 3rd, 2025 02:02
Mutley Ravishes said:
People showing that machines don’t have the power to bring true freedom!
My flight to the Andromeda Galaxy has been delayed! I’m so angry!!
January 3rd, 2025 02:02
airport privileges
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Even when at work, poets be poets! LOL! Love it bro! And truth...status holds ZERO weight! In fact, to the back of the line. Buh-bye. Next! 🤣 Loved the Senryu, my friend. A perfect example of one, actually! 🙏❤️
January 2nd, 2025 22:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Even when at work, poets be poets! LOL! Love it bro! And truth...status holds ZERO weight! In fact, to the back of the line. Buh-bye. Next! 🤣 Loved the Senryu, my friend. A perfect example of one, actually! 🙏❤️
January 2nd, 2025 22:41
airport privileges
rin said:
He says some really good things. I am grateful to those who do so.
January 2nd, 2025 21:45
rin said:
He says some really good things. I am grateful to those who do so.
January 2nd, 2025 21:45
airport privileges
arqios said:
Like someone said, they breathe the same recycled air, use the same avgas, and arrive at the same time and destination as everyone else. Good stuff, sugoi des neh 🙏🏻👍🏻
January 2nd, 2025 21:26
arqios said:
Like someone said, they breathe the same recycled air, use the same avgas, and arrive at the same time and destination as everyone else. Good stuff, sugoi des neh 🙏🏻👍🏻
January 2nd, 2025 21:26
airport privileges
sorenbarrett said:
All should be treated the same with respect and kindness. Love the write
January 2nd, 2025 18:04
sorenbarrett said:
All should be treated the same with respect and kindness. Love the write
January 2nd, 2025 18:04
Real or Fake
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, speak truth why don\'t you! LOL! Happy New Year, bro!
December 31st, 2024 08:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, speak truth why don\'t you! LOL! Happy New Year, bro!
December 31st, 2024 08:59
Real or Fake
sorenbarrett said:
The touch of skin once a sin now can no longer be felt except through touch screens. We have lost the human out of humanity it seems. Lovely write. Happy New Year
December 31st, 2024 03:59
sorenbarrett said:
The touch of skin once a sin now can no longer be felt except through touch screens. We have lost the human out of humanity it seems. Lovely write. Happy New Year
December 31st, 2024 03:59
Real or Fake
arqios said:
Can\'t say it twice I\'m afraid, that would repetitiously redundant.... 😆
December 31st, 2024 03:32
arqios said:
Can\'t say it twice I\'m afraid, that would repetitiously redundant.... 😆
December 31st, 2024 03:32
I love my wife
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I know. I hate how possessive language is. My this, their\'s that! Love is not one-sided ownership; it is mutuality. So, I love this because I too cringe when I say \"my\" [anyone]. Well done my 😬 friend. 🤣 🌹👏
December 30th, 2024 08:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I know. I hate how possessive language is. My this, their\'s that! Love is not one-sided ownership; it is mutuality. So, I love this because I too cringe when I say \"my\" [anyone]. Well done my 😬 friend. 🤣 🌹👏
December 30th, 2024 08:21
I love my wife
sorenbarrett said:
A clever use of language to make an important point. Language quietly colors the way we see the world and my does imply ownership, a concept that shouldn\'t apply in relationships. Nicely written
December 30th, 2024 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
A clever use of language to make an important point. Language quietly colors the way we see the world and my does imply ownership, a concept that shouldn\'t apply in relationships. Nicely written
December 30th, 2024 04:42
beauty in front of me
sorenbarrett said:
A guy is a dog and it would not be normal not to look. A fun read
December 27th, 2024 12:02
sorenbarrett said:
A guy is a dog and it would not be normal not to look. A fun read
December 27th, 2024 12:02
The Problem of Monogamy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very thought-provoking write, my friend...and I see what you did in terms of juxtaposition...a poem on the problem of polyamory and a follow up on the problem of monogamy. It makes for a neat dialogue between the two poems and the issues that may arise in the two forms of marital relations and customs. Brilliantly done, my friend! 🌹👏
December 26th, 2024 16:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very thought-provoking write, my friend...and I see what you did in terms of juxtaposition...a poem on the problem of polyamory and a follow up on the problem of monogamy. It makes for a neat dialogue between the two poems and the issues that may arise in the two forms of marital relations and customs. Brilliantly done, my friend! 🌹👏
December 26th, 2024 16:48
The Problem of Monogamy
sorenbarrett said:
A very poignant, write Humans were not meant to be monogamous. This was forced upon a by society, religion and personal need for domination. It is a beautiful thing when given freely but ugly when demanded.
December 26th, 2024 14:31
sorenbarrett said:
A very poignant, write Humans were not meant to be monogamous. This was forced upon a by society, religion and personal need for domination. It is a beautiful thing when given freely but ugly when demanded.
December 26th, 2024 14:31
The Problem of Monogamy
Cassie58 said:
Ah love, the many facets of it. You raise some interesting points here in your lines about monogamy Demar Desu. All I can say is that infidelity causes massive heartbreak. All the best.
December 26th, 2024 13:25
Cassie58 said:
Ah love, the many facets of it. You raise some interesting points here in your lines about monogamy Demar Desu. All I can say is that infidelity causes massive heartbreak. All the best.
December 26th, 2024 13:25
washing dishes
arqios said:
no wash, no eat,
no wash, no cook
no wash, no sanitise
yin-yang indeed
December 26th, 2024 03:57
arqios said:
no wash, no eat,
no wash, no cook
no wash, no sanitise
yin-yang indeed
December 26th, 2024 03:57
The Problem of Polyamory
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Of course, this is my own cultural opinion I am throwing out there, but me too, brother! One is more than enough! Well written and Merry Christmas, you’re not married 10 times over! 🤣🎄🎁
December 25th, 2024 08:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Of course, this is my own cultural opinion I am throwing out there, but me too, brother! One is more than enough! Well written and Merry Christmas, you’re not married 10 times over! 🤣🎄🎁
December 25th, 2024 08:03
The Problem of Polyamory
sorenbarrett said:
Clever write and fun read. Well done
December 25th, 2024 03:28
sorenbarrett said:
Clever write and fun read. Well done
December 25th, 2024 03:28
washing dishes
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The metaphor works! Very well! Another brilliant poem in its brevity, bro!
December 24th, 2024 11:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The metaphor works! Very well! Another brilliant poem in its brevity, bro!
December 24th, 2024 11:14
washing dishes
sorenbarrett said:
And so it is in all things the good the bad and the ugly. A fun read
December 24th, 2024 10:22
sorenbarrett said:
And so it is in all things the good the bad and the ugly. A fun read
December 24th, 2024 10:22
United Health Death
sorenbarrett said:
It is difficult to stop the machinery of society and not even death can get in its way. A poignant write
December 23rd, 2024 11:28
sorenbarrett said:
It is difficult to stop the machinery of society and not even death can get in its way. A poignant write
December 23rd, 2024 11:28
United Health Death
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Spot on, friend. Spot on! The freshest take on this tragic event yet! Wake up people! 🌹👏
December 23rd, 2024 10:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Spot on, friend. Spot on! The freshest take on this tragic event yet! Wake up people! 🌹👏
December 23rd, 2024 10:16
words unsaid
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Totally get this! Hear hear! Well done! 🌹👏
December 23rd, 2024 09:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Totally get this! Hear hear! Well done! 🌹👏
December 23rd, 2024 09:44
words unsaid
sorenbarrett said:
I thought for sure that the last line would not rhyme. A fun poem of philisophical questions that provoke thought. Lovely
December 23rd, 2024 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
I thought for sure that the last line would not rhyme. A fun poem of philisophical questions that provoke thought. Lovely
December 23rd, 2024 03:55
words unsaid
arqios said:
sigh. Totally get you…. Got a rising pile of poems that await their opportunity, among other things. Best of luck on your journeys!
December 23rd, 2024 02:58
arqios said:
sigh. Totally get you…. Got a rising pile of poems that await their opportunity, among other things. Best of luck on your journeys!
December 23rd, 2024 02:58
ignorance among ignorance
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is so Socratic, it makes me smile. */Nervously looks around for hemlock/* Whew, all in the clear! LOL! Seriously, this is ABSOLUTELY the first sign of wisdom! 💯 Well done, bro! 🌹👏
December 22nd, 2024 07:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is so Socratic, it makes me smile. */Nervously looks around for hemlock/* Whew, all in the clear! LOL! Seriously, this is ABSOLUTELY the first sign of wisdom! 💯 Well done, bro! 🌹👏
December 22nd, 2024 07:15
ignorance among ignorance
sorenbarrett said:
A wise statement put in senryu form with so much said in so few words. Lovely!
December 22nd, 2024 03:34
sorenbarrett said:
A wise statement put in senryu form with so much said in so few words. Lovely!
December 22nd, 2024 03:34
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