Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
with pulp please
NafisaSB said:
l like it too, so hope you enjoyed it, as much as i do..
May 4th, 2026 23:51
NafisaSB said:
l like it too, so hope you enjoyed it, as much as i do..
May 4th, 2026 23:51
pussy for lunch, dinner and brunch?!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this caught me off guard… there’s a sharp, biting humor in it that lands quick. The title really helps it land. You come in expecting something off and you deliver something magnificent! It\'s chaotic in a way that’s intentional and pointed. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 3rd, 2026 17:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this caught me off guard… there’s a sharp, biting humor in it that lands quick. The title really helps it land. You come in expecting something off and you deliver something magnificent! It\'s chaotic in a way that’s intentional and pointed. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 3rd, 2026 17:13
What am I meant for?
Teddy.15 said:
Now this is really sad, but I\'m here to tell you from my own experience you can truly be what ever you want. We also live in a world that is much more excepting. Hopefully the Trump era won\'t take us back 100 years. 💜
May 3rd, 2026 14:34
Teddy.15 said:
Now this is really sad, but I\'m here to tell you from my own experience you can truly be what ever you want. We also live in a world that is much more excepting. Hopefully the Trump era won\'t take us back 100 years. 💜
May 3rd, 2026 14:34
pussy for lunch, dinner and brunch?!
sorenbarrett said:
Got ya Demar when the napkin is bigger than the skirt there is a problem
May 3rd, 2026 14:16
sorenbarrett said:
Got ya Demar when the napkin is bigger than the skirt there is a problem
May 3rd, 2026 14:16
Sometimes I hate myself
arqios said:
We all do! And it is so freeing not that I myself have been totally freed yet 🕊️🙏🏻
May 3rd, 2026 07:06
arqios said:
We all do! And it is so freeing not that I myself have been totally freed yet 🕊️🙏🏻
May 3rd, 2026 07:06
What am I meant for?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, methinks you answered your own question in one word…precious…meaning invaluable. The how of that lies within you, in that place of your soul…where God’s breath, God’s spirit lives in us all…at least as I understand it, not to project onto you. And it is yours to discover. May it be so, my brother. Very profound poem…thankful you shared. 🖤🙏🦇🐦⬛
May 2nd, 2026 11:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, methinks you answered your own question in one word…precious…meaning invaluable. The how of that lies within you, in that place of your soul…where God’s breath, God’s spirit lives in us all…at least as I understand it, not to project onto you. And it is yours to discover. May it be so, my brother. Very profound poem…thankful you shared. 🖤🙏🦇🐦⬛
May 2nd, 2026 11:02
What am I meant for?
Mutley Ravishes said:
You are worth all the Imagination, awareness, energy, memory, mobility, intuition, humor, emotion, intellect, reproductive energy, will, and mystery that has been invested in you, Demar! Who is the Investor? I have no idea!
May 2nd, 2026 08:36
Mutley Ravishes said:
You are worth all the Imagination, awareness, energy, memory, mobility, intuition, humor, emotion, intellect, reproductive energy, will, and mystery that has been invested in you, Demar! Who is the Investor? I have no idea!
May 2nd, 2026 08:36
Mmmmm distractions
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, I’ve felt that same kind of overload…where everything is pulling for attention and it just won’t quiet down. The distractions, the questioning, even asking why you’re writing at all…that hits close. You captured that space honestly. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 1st, 2026 07:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, I’ve felt that same kind of overload…where everything is pulling for attention and it just won’t quiet down. The distractions, the questioning, even asking why you’re writing at all…that hits close. You captured that space honestly. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 1st, 2026 07:33
Mmmmm distractions
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the tension between modern distractions and the desire for a simpler, more meaningful life. It reflects on the overwhelming influence of consumer culture, technology, and societal pressures, contrasting this with a longing for community, moderation, and deeper connections, particularly through the lens of parenthood.
May 1st, 2026 06:44
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the tension between modern distractions and the desire for a simpler, more meaningful life. It reflects on the overwhelming influence of consumer culture, technology, and societal pressures, contrasting this with a longing for community, moderation, and deeper connections, particularly through the lens of parenthood.
May 1st, 2026 06:44
Mmmmm distractions
sorenbarrett said:
This seems the adventures of a normal day full of distractions. Well done
April 30th, 2026 21:47
sorenbarrett said:
This seems the adventures of a normal day full of distractions. Well done
April 30th, 2026 21:47
rest in peace to my cat
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful expression of love and grief of the loss of a beloved pet, sad in subject but touching in it\'s content
April 29th, 2026 22:08
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful expression of love and grief of the loss of a beloved pet, sad in subject but touching in it\'s content
April 29th, 2026 22:08
rest in peace to my cat
Allie561 said:
I’m sending you my sympathy Demar, I hope you’re doing well.
April 29th, 2026 19:41
Allie561 said:
I’m sending you my sympathy Demar, I hope you’re doing well.
April 29th, 2026 19:41
rest in peace to my cat
arqios said:
...sympathies, dear Demar. brings back memories of lost felines over the years. 🕊️🙏
April 29th, 2026 19:35
arqios said:
...sympathies, dear Demar. brings back memories of lost felines over the years. 🕊️🙏
April 29th, 2026 19:35
rest in peace to my cat
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Awww. Sorry to hear, my friend. It sounds like this happened in the past, but regardless, one never \"gets over\" losing the ones we love. Grief is for real and you expressed it well here. Beautiful, reflective write, my friend. As Soren said, this one leaves you thinking. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 29th, 2026 06:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Awww. Sorry to hear, my friend. It sounds like this happened in the past, but regardless, one never \"gets over\" losing the ones we love. Grief is for real and you expressed it well here. Beautiful, reflective write, my friend. As Soren said, this one leaves you thinking. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 29th, 2026 06:23
rest in peace to my cat
sorenbarrett said:
Demar this one has me thinking a bit. Nicely done
April 29th, 2026 05:31
sorenbarrett said:
Demar this one has me thinking a bit. Nicely done
April 29th, 2026 05:31
being an adult
Teddy.15 said:
Gosh this has the reality factor it\'s very liberating. 🌹
April 29th, 2026 05:30
Teddy.15 said:
Gosh this has the reality factor it\'s very liberating. 🌹
April 29th, 2026 05:30
with pulp please
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Coconut water with the pulp...the only way! Love Thai, my friend. Hope you enjoyed!
April 28th, 2026 05:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Coconut water with the pulp...the only way! Love Thai, my friend. Hope you enjoyed!
April 28th, 2026 05:31
and here we are strange together
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shout out right back atch, bro! Love being strange together! Let\'s get stranger! Hahahaha! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🌹
April 26th, 2026 09:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shout out right back atch, bro! Love being strange together! Let\'s get stranger! Hahahaha! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🌹
April 26th, 2026 09:25
and here we are strange together
sorenbarrett said:
We all are animals and so are our profiles Demar good one my friend
April 26th, 2026 06:39
sorenbarrett said:
We all are animals and so are our profiles Demar good one my friend
April 26th, 2026 06:39
being an adult
Allie561 said:
Are the stories to entertain others or to create a reality for ourselves? Maybe a little bit of both.
April 25th, 2026 10:43
Allie561 said:
Are the stories to entertain others or to create a reality for ourselves? Maybe a little bit of both.
April 25th, 2026 10:43
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