Comments received on poems by Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏
Poems of Passion
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Another wise one my friend. Beautiful job! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 11th, 2025 19:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Another wise one my friend. Beautiful job! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 11th, 2025 19:35
Poems of Passion
Poetic Licence said:
Can\'t do one without the other, enjoyed the read
August 11th, 2025 08:16
Poetic Licence said:
Can\'t do one without the other, enjoyed the read
August 11th, 2025 08:16
Poems of Passion
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed one must explore oneself to love oneself. Nicely said Demar
August 11th, 2025 06:24
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed one must explore oneself to love oneself. Nicely said Demar
August 11th, 2025 06:24
economic animals
sorenbarrett said:
This one is mind provoking as most truths are
August 10th, 2025 08:28
sorenbarrett said:
This one is mind provoking as most truths are
August 10th, 2025 08:28
generational _____
sorenbarrett said:
End of the line. Just make sure that you spend it all before you go and leave none for the government
August 9th, 2025 11:48
sorenbarrett said:
End of the line. Just make sure that you spend it all before you go and leave none for the government
August 9th, 2025 11:48
alive again
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Aint\' that the truth bro! And yay! I can comment again! Woohoo! Hope all has been well while I\'ve been gone. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 8th, 2025 19:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Aint\' that the truth bro! And yay! I can comment again! Woohoo! Hope all has been well while I\'ve been gone. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 8th, 2025 19:44
alive again
sorenbarrett said:
Specialist in haikus you have written another marvelous senryu my friend
August 8th, 2025 08:15
sorenbarrett said:
Specialist in haikus you have written another marvelous senryu my friend
August 8th, 2025 08:15
The Deepest American Belief
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that plays off associations and assumptions well done Demar
August 4th, 2025 11:55
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that plays off associations and assumptions well done Demar
August 4th, 2025 11:55
The Deepest American Belief
Cheeky Missy said:
Yeah, and in a world my wise late father drilled into me as the opposite: \"NOTHING in life is fair.\"
August 4th, 2025 11:42
Cheeky Missy said:
Yeah, and in a world my wise late father drilled into me as the opposite: \"NOTHING in life is fair.\"
August 4th, 2025 11:42
Poor Credit
sorenbarrett said:
I have been there and if I had the courage to check my accounts I am probably there now. A most identifiable write Demar
August 3rd, 2025 07:22
sorenbarrett said:
I have been there and if I had the courage to check my accounts I am probably there now. A most identifiable write Demar
August 3rd, 2025 07:22
Ying Yang Yung
sorenbarrett said:
This one required some thought and the more I thought the more I came up with think before you act.
August 2nd, 2025 13:15
sorenbarrett said:
This one required some thought and the more I thought the more I came up with think before you act.
August 2nd, 2025 13:15
The House of the Setting Moon
sorenbarrett said:
I too take this as meaning to form a greater alliance with the east and that seems a very good idea. Nicely stated in an ambiguous way that can be taken in several ways. Very well done
August 1st, 2025 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
I too take this as meaning to form a greater alliance with the east and that seems a very good idea. Nicely stated in an ambiguous way that can be taken in several ways. Very well done
August 1st, 2025 04:58
keeping it a buck
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I concur! BUY DEMAR\'S BOOK! I did! ❤️🙃 It rocks! As for your poem, excellent, my friend. Profoundly true.
June 13th, 2025 09:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I concur! BUY DEMAR\'S BOOK! I did! ❤️🙃 It rocks! As for your poem, excellent, my friend. Profoundly true.
June 13th, 2025 09:12
keeping it a buck
sorenbarrett said:
The rich do need the poor to harvest their food and make their toys, to work in their factories as cheap labor so they can compete with their other rich neighbor. But the rich have never held the help as equals. Nicely written
June 13th, 2025 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
The rich do need the poor to harvest their food and make their toys, to work in their factories as cheap labor so they can compete with their other rich neighbor. But the rich have never held the help as equals. Nicely written
June 13th, 2025 03:56
it’s simple
sorenbarrett said:
Working for life can be taken two ways and makes this poem even more interesting. Loved it
June 12th, 2025 05:37
sorenbarrett said:
Working for life can be taken two ways and makes this poem even more interesting. Loved it
June 12th, 2025 05:37
Today I made a good decision
sorenbarrett said:
What a great thought expressed in few words
June 11th, 2025 12:18
sorenbarrett said:
What a great thought expressed in few words
June 11th, 2025 12:18
How can a monk own a gun?
sorenbarrett said:
Deep thoughts here Demar. A lovely poem about the madness in the world.
June 10th, 2025 12:40
sorenbarrett said:
Deep thoughts here Demar. A lovely poem about the madness in the world.
June 10th, 2025 12:40
sometimes things will try you
vicecream said:
This is like when a song has a beat change in the middle and does a fire 2 in 1. Love this one
June 9th, 2025 22:24
vicecream said:
This is like when a song has a beat change in the middle and does a fire 2 in 1. Love this one
June 9th, 2025 22:24
sometimes things will try you
sorenbarrett said:
A couple of haikus that speak with a bit of disbelief in governing bodies. Here here I say. Nicely done
June 9th, 2025 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
A couple of haikus that speak with a bit of disbelief in governing bodies. Here here I say. Nicely done
June 9th, 2025 04:26
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