Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
but damn it I feel like I should
sorenbarrett said:
Write from the heart Demar despite what style it is
April 8th, 2026 15:11
sorenbarrett said:
Write from the heart Demar despite what style it is
April 8th, 2026 15:11
I don’t want to write anymore
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a set of reflections that may seem returning waves but I would hate to see you go Demar keep up the fight and write
April 8th, 2026 15:11
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a set of reflections that may seem returning waves but I would hate to see you go Demar keep up the fight and write
April 8th, 2026 15:11
but damn it I feel like I should
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love your style, bro. I love your inquisitive nature and the community you build. Keep it up, my friend. My first poem was not a haiku, but I have grown to love the form because it is an exercise in word economy. Not an easy task to distill a deep, profound idea down to 17 syllables. Your style is your style...it\'s your voice...and no one can take that from you, unless you let them. So, write on, bro! Write on!
April 8th, 2026 08:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love your style, bro. I love your inquisitive nature and the community you build. Keep it up, my friend. My first poem was not a haiku, but I have grown to love the form because it is an exercise in word economy. Not an easy task to distill a deep, profound idea down to 17 syllables. Your style is your style...it\'s your voice...and no one can take that from you, unless you let them. So, write on, bro! Write on!
April 8th, 2026 08:10
I don’t want to write anymore
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, I hear you…that tension between wanting to pull back and still believing in something real underneath it all. Especially when you say “there is no me without you”…that tells me you haven’t lost it, even if it feels like you have.
I also saw this wasn’t your last piece…whew 😅
There’s more in you, and it shows. Not everything needs to land for everyone…that’s never been the point. Your presence here matters, my friend.
And yeah…kind of love the paradox here—the king of concise letting it all run a bit longer this time. It fits.
Strong piece, bro. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 8th, 2026 07:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, I hear you…that tension between wanting to pull back and still believing in something real underneath it all. Especially when you say “there is no me without you”…that tells me you haven’t lost it, even if it feels like you have.
I also saw this wasn’t your last piece…whew 😅
There’s more in you, and it shows. Not everything needs to land for everyone…that’s never been the point. Your presence here matters, my friend.
And yeah…kind of love the paradox here—the king of concise letting it all run a bit longer this time. It fits.
Strong piece, bro. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 8th, 2026 07:40
but damn it I feel like I should
Katie B. said:
I love haiku because they get to the point. Lovely work!
April 8th, 2026 04:16
Katie B. said:
I love haiku because they get to the point. Lovely work!
April 8th, 2026 04:16
what is ethics, morals, and truth?
Kora said:
Our truest selves, and the chips fall where they may.
April 8th, 2026 01:00
Kora said:
Our truest selves, and the chips fall where they may.
April 8th, 2026 01:00
Do you enjoy sex?
Kora said:
For me, sex is intimacy, and intimacy is love. Love comes in many forms, but I find that physically, I always gravitate back to the sensual. As with all things, there are two sides of the coin, and the duality of it all is what makes it so beautiful.
April 8th, 2026 00:56
Kora said:
For me, sex is intimacy, and intimacy is love. Love comes in many forms, but I find that physically, I always gravitate back to the sensual. As with all things, there are two sides of the coin, and the duality of it all is what makes it so beautiful.
April 8th, 2026 00:56
I don’t want to write anymore
Kora said:
Some things are worth repeating ♥️
Loved this one.
April 8th, 2026 00:50
Kora said:
Some things are worth repeating ♥️
Loved this one.
April 8th, 2026 00:50
Housed vs. Unhoused
Allie561 said:
There is yet another subdivision being built by my house. It used to be this beautiful orchard and they tore it up to put houses in, I’m really disappointed about it. We keep adding more and more homes and ruining the land. We’re not going to have much of it soon.
April 7th, 2026 08:33
Allie561 said:
There is yet another subdivision being built by my house. It used to be this beautiful orchard and they tore it up to put houses in, I’m really disappointed about it. We keep adding more and more homes and ruining the land. We’re not going to have much of it soon.
April 7th, 2026 08:33
everything out of context
Allie561 said:
This was so intriguing Demar. I love how you captured emotion and the sort of cause and effect rhythm you had going on. That second to last line really stuck with me, it gives extra layers to the poem of how you can seek wisdom but natural things can stand in the way.
April 5th, 2026 11:44
Allie561 said:
This was so intriguing Demar. I love how you captured emotion and the sort of cause and effect rhythm you had going on. That second to last line really stuck with me, it gives extra layers to the poem of how you can seek wisdom but natural things can stand in the way.
April 5th, 2026 11:44
everything out of context
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, my friend, I resonate with that tension…knowing what you value, and still not always living it cleanly. That gap between intention and action…yeah, that’s human. This speaks. Strong piece, my friend. Definitely a fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 5th, 2026 10:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, my friend, I resonate with that tension…knowing what you value, and still not always living it cleanly. That gap between intention and action…yeah, that’s human. This speaks. Strong piece, my friend. Definitely a fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 5th, 2026 10:45
everything out of context
Abdullah123 said:
Amazing write... truly thought-provoking. I especially empathized with the part about not learning from our histories... It\'s something I\'ve been thinking about quite a lot recently myself
April 5th, 2026 09:44
Abdullah123 said:
Amazing write... truly thought-provoking. I especially empathized with the part about not learning from our histories... It\'s something I\'ve been thinking about quite a lot recently myself
April 5th, 2026 09:44
everything out of context
Salvia.S said:
Your poem is a wild ride, calling out the absurdities of life and society while embracing raw human emotions. It\'s like you\'re screaming truths . The contrast between seeking wisdom and getting blocked by life\'s distractions is real 😊. Very well written!!!
April 5th, 2026 09:08
Salvia.S said:
Your poem is a wild ride, calling out the absurdities of life and society while embracing raw human emotions. It\'s like you\'re screaming truths . The contrast between seeking wisdom and getting blocked by life\'s distractions is real 😊. Very well written!!!
April 5th, 2026 09:08
everything out of context
sorenbarrett said:
Deep thoughts my friend nicely outlined in poetic form. As for me I write for myself. A fave
April 5th, 2026 08:42
sorenbarrett said:
Deep thoughts my friend nicely outlined in poetic form. As for me I write for myself. A fave
April 5th, 2026 08:42
and surely I am blessed
Allie561 said:
Thank goodness we have something to express our emotions. Poetry has definitely saved me from acting out on anger. Great poem Demar!
April 4th, 2026 14:10
Allie561 said:
Thank goodness we have something to express our emotions. Poetry has definitely saved me from acting out on anger. Great poem Demar!
April 4th, 2026 14:10
and surely I am blessed
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen, bro! Right there with you! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 4th, 2026 13:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen, bro! Right there with you! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 4th, 2026 13:00
and surely I am blessed
mvvenkataraman said:
Reading and writing develop our brain,
Sibling rivalry is always there occurring,
Even today, I don\'t remember those days,
My brother physically punched me often,
I love your poem and the end mainly,
No more complaining- What a truth ?
April 4th, 2026 10:25
mvvenkataraman said:
Reading and writing develop our brain,
Sibling rivalry is always there occurring,
Even today, I don\'t remember those days,
My brother physically punched me often,
I love your poem and the end mainly,
No more complaining- What a truth ?
April 4th, 2026 10:25
and surely I am blessed
sorenbarrett said:
Taking liberty takes on new meaning with this poem. Well done Demar
April 4th, 2026 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
Taking liberty takes on new meaning with this poem. Well done Demar
April 4th, 2026 04:03
and surely I am blessed
Mutley Ravishes said:
It could all be so much worse. Let`s cherish this short time we have.
April 4th, 2026 03:27
Mutley Ravishes said:
It could all be so much worse. Let`s cherish this short time we have.
April 4th, 2026 03:27
Do you hate me because I’m…?
Allie561 said:
Well Demar, that’s a hard question to answer. I think how we are treated shouldn’t reflect our worth because an opinion is just an opinion. People can be evil these days either ignoring you or treating you with absolutely no kindness. The other day I reached out to one of my old colleagues and they responded to only one of my texts and I never received any more replies. It stung a bit at first but hey I can only control how I feel about it. I assure you that you are somebody, in the real world and on this site. I hope people come to treat you better.
April 3rd, 2026 11:36
Allie561 said:
Well Demar, that’s a hard question to answer. I think how we are treated shouldn’t reflect our worth because an opinion is just an opinion. People can be evil these days either ignoring you or treating you with absolutely no kindness. The other day I reached out to one of my old colleagues and they responded to only one of my texts and I never received any more replies. It stung a bit at first but hey I can only control how I feel about it. I assure you that you are somebody, in the real world and on this site. I hope people come to treat you better.
April 3rd, 2026 11:36
Do you hate me because I’m…?
sorenbarrett said:
A disparaging look at oneself but then the author\'s note may be more true people that hate others often hate things about themselves. Well written Demar
April 3rd, 2026 08:23
sorenbarrett said:
A disparaging look at oneself but then the author\'s note may be more true people that hate others often hate things about themselves. Well written Demar
April 3rd, 2026 08:23
Do you hate me because I’m…?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, yeah…maybe they do. That kind of judgment usually says more about them than it ever does about you. The way you strip this down to “I am nobody”…that lands. Stay rooted in who you are, my friend…that matters more than anything they project. As you can see, I relate to this one a lot. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 3rd, 2026 08:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, yeah…maybe they do. That kind of judgment usually says more about them than it ever does about you. The way you strip this down to “I am nobody”…that lands. Stay rooted in who you are, my friend…that matters more than anything they project. As you can see, I relate to this one a lot. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 3rd, 2026 08:23
thundering in the mountains
Allie561 said:
Sometimes it’s not meant to be revealed. I often wonder if we’re supposed to figure out the answer for ourselves, maybe it’s meant to have a different meaning for everyone. Also, are you possibly writing about an earthquake or was it just describing a storm?
April 2nd, 2026 11:32
Allie561 said:
Sometimes it’s not meant to be revealed. I often wonder if we’re supposed to figure out the answer for ourselves, maybe it’s meant to have a different meaning for everyone. Also, are you possibly writing about an earthquake or was it just describing a storm?
April 2nd, 2026 11:32
thundering in the mountains
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, I’ve felt that kind of question before… standing in something bigger than yourself and not having an answer for it. The way you leave it open, unresolved… that’s what makes it real. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
April 2nd, 2026 08:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, I’ve felt that kind of question before… standing in something bigger than yourself and not having an answer for it. The way you leave it open, unresolved… that’s what makes it real. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
April 2nd, 2026 08:59
thundering in the mountains
sorenbarrett said:
Why not indeed I love to be in your first two lines
April 2nd, 2026 07:46
sorenbarrett said:
Why not indeed I love to be in your first two lines
April 2nd, 2026 07:46
I’m done asking questions
Mutley Ravishes said:
Take a rest
Then I guarantee
You\'ll once again want to ask
Myriad Quest-ions!
April 1st, 2026 18:50
Mutley Ravishes said:
Take a rest
Then I guarantee
You\'ll once again want to ask
Myriad Quest-ions!
April 1st, 2026 18:50
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