Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
all our lives are complicated… so don’t complicate mine or yours
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, haha…I enjoyed this. There’s an easygoing self-awareness here that doesn’t try to be anything it isn’t. Short, witty, and fun, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 15th, 2026 22:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, haha…I enjoyed this. There’s an easygoing self-awareness here that doesn’t try to be anything it isn’t. Short, witty, and fun, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 15th, 2026 22:38
Subsidies vs. Tax Breaks vs. Welfare
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this has some bite. In just a few lines, you turn the spotlight away from the people and back toward those setting the example. Short, sharp, and thought-provoking, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 15th, 2026 20:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this has some bite. In just a few lines, you turn the spotlight away from the people and back toward those setting the example. Short, sharp, and thought-provoking, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 15th, 2026 20:42
all our lives are complicated… so don’t complicate mine or yours
Allie561 said:
I feel this one Demar!
July 15th, 2026 13:20
Allie561 said:
I feel this one Demar!
July 15th, 2026 13:20
all our lives are complicated… so don’t complicate mine or yours
Friendship said:
I hear you
July 15th, 2026 13:15
Friendship said:
I hear you
July 15th, 2026 13:15
all our lives are complicated… so don’t complicate mine or yours
sorenbarrett said:
I\'ll take one too preferably a lager or pilsen, not too strong on hops please and not too bitter. Good write Demar
July 15th, 2026 08:08
sorenbarrett said:
I\'ll take one too preferably a lager or pilsen, not too strong on hops please and not too bitter. Good write Demar
July 15th, 2026 08:08
Subsidies vs. Tax Breaks vs. Welfare
Allie561 said:
For better or for worse, I still think it’s bad. I’d rather go do my own thing but some people don’t know how to form their own opinions. Great write Demar
July 14th, 2026 22:39
Allie561 said:
For better or for worse, I still think it’s bad. I’d rather go do my own thing but some people don’t know how to form their own opinions. Great write Demar
July 14th, 2026 22:39
why am I smoking and drinking?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I used to think the same thing...then DUI. Now, cannabis and soil! 😗💨 I was on the wrong meds, it turned out! 🤷♀️😅 My faux pas aside...Demar, this is beautifully restrained. You trust a handful of words to carry a much larger truth, and they do. That closing thought stays with me because it\'s honest without trying to resolve the hurt. I\'ve been right there, my friend. Wonderful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 14th, 2026 19:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I used to think the same thing...then DUI. Now, cannabis and soil! 😗💨 I was on the wrong meds, it turned out! 🤷♀️😅 My faux pas aside...Demar, this is beautifully restrained. You trust a handful of words to carry a much larger truth, and they do. That closing thought stays with me because it\'s honest without trying to resolve the hurt. I\'ve been right there, my friend. Wonderful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 14th, 2026 19:06
Subsidies vs. Tax Breaks vs. Welfare
sorenbarrett said:
Sad but true a community of sheep. Nicely said Demar
July 14th, 2026 05:52
sorenbarrett said:
Sad but true a community of sheep. Nicely said Demar
July 14th, 2026 05:52
why am I smoking and drinking?
sorenbarrett said:
Love is a razor and as for wisdom what you don\'t know can\'t hurt you. Well written Demar
July 14th, 2026 03:13
sorenbarrett said:
Love is a razor and as for wisdom what you don\'t know can\'t hurt you. Well written Demar
July 14th, 2026 03:13
sometimes I hate the fakeness
rhmn_7 said:
Few words with an immense message Tristan!
July 12th, 2026 07:25
rhmn_7 said:
Few words with an immense message Tristan!
July 12th, 2026 07:25
sometimes I hate the fakeness
Allie561 said:
I feel this Demar, always seems there’s an excuse.
July 11th, 2026 14:09
Allie561 said:
I feel this Demar, always seems there’s an excuse.
July 11th, 2026 14:09
sometimes I hate the fakeness
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this one lands with a quiet sting...there\'s frustration here, but also vulnerability. You said a lot with very few words. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 11th, 2026 08:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this one lands with a quiet sting...there\'s frustration here, but also vulnerability. You said a lot with very few words. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 11th, 2026 08:05
Got love?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, I like how much you leave unsaid here...it\'s brief, but it captures that familiar progression of attraction in just a few lines. The King of Concise strikes again! Nicely done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 11th, 2026 07:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, I like how much you leave unsaid here...it\'s brief, but it captures that familiar progression of attraction in just a few lines. The King of Concise strikes again! Nicely done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 11th, 2026 07:40
sometimes I hate the fakeness
Mutley Ravishes said:
Not too f`d up to play the willful ignorance/avoidance game, right Demar?! Great write.
July 11th, 2026 07:34
Mutley Ravishes said:
Not too f`d up to play the willful ignorance/avoidance game, right Demar?! Great write.
July 11th, 2026 07:34
sometimes I hate the fakeness
sorenbarrett said:
Creative Demar this one is one of the first where I have seen letters of an anachronym used as syllables. Well done my friend
July 11th, 2026 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
Creative Demar this one is one of the first where I have seen letters of an anachronym used as syllables. Well done my friend
July 11th, 2026 05:03
Got love?
sorenbarrett said:
A good read my friend I am the opposite first the face then the body. Well done
July 10th, 2026 07:42
sorenbarrett said:
A good read my friend I am the opposite first the face then the body. Well done
July 10th, 2026 07:42
The Taste of Tea
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this reminds me how often creation teaches us lessons we overlook. Your haiku slowed me down for a moment, and I\'m grateful for that. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 9th, 2026 22:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this reminds me how often creation teaches us lessons we overlook. Your haiku slowed me down for a moment, and I\'m grateful for that. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 9th, 2026 22:55
The Taste of Tea
Mutley Ravishes said:
The early bird catches the worm! (and the early morning sun rays)
July 9th, 2026 20:09
Mutley Ravishes said:
The early bird catches the worm! (and the early morning sun rays)
July 9th, 2026 20:09
I do not know how to live
Teddy.15 said:
we live in such a material world that it\'s become overwhelmed with so much junk and electronics that global warming is heating up with speed. 🌹 Great theme 🌹and yes moderation is a great example.
July 9th, 2026 01:57
Teddy.15 said:
we live in such a material world that it\'s become overwhelmed with so much junk and electronics that global warming is heating up with speed. 🌹 Great theme 🌹and yes moderation is a great example.
July 9th, 2026 01:57
my favorite quote from a book
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Taken as a whole, this is a beautiful piece, my friend. It’s reverent, honest, and deeply humble all at once…moving from gratitude for the oceans and stars to a genuine confession of our poverty of spirit. As for faith and religion, we grow into those as we do when the time is right. God is good, my friend, all the time. Beautifully done, Demar! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 8th, 2026 19:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Taken as a whole, this is a beautiful piece, my friend. It’s reverent, honest, and deeply humble all at once…moving from gratitude for the oceans and stars to a genuine confession of our poverty of spirit. As for faith and religion, we grow into those as we do when the time is right. God is good, my friend, all the time. Beautifully done, Demar! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 8th, 2026 19:22
I do not know how to live
Friendship said:
So true, my friend, it\'s called life.❤️
July 8th, 2026 12:12
Friendship said:
So true, my friend, it\'s called life.❤️
July 8th, 2026 12:12
I do not know how to live
arqios said:
moderation is modernation, too much of the avant garde recedes as flash noveau. a fad quickly forgotten. 🙏🕊️
July 8th, 2026 06:49
arqios said:
moderation is modernation, too much of the avant garde recedes as flash noveau. a fad quickly forgotten. 🙏🕊️
July 8th, 2026 06:49
I do not know how to live
sorenbarrett said:
Well said Demar we may call it live but then we have nothing else to compare it to. Well done
July 8th, 2026 06:01
sorenbarrett said:
Well said Demar we may call it live but then we have nothing else to compare it to. Well done
July 8th, 2026 06:01
my favorite quote from a book
sorenbarrett said:
This is definitely a poem in a prayer. Well worded
July 7th, 2026 18:41
sorenbarrett said:
This is definitely a poem in a prayer. Well worded
July 7th, 2026 18:41
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