Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
a first date for the ages
sorenbarrett said:
I hear excitement in this poem. A sense of thrill. Nicely said.
January 25th, 2025 16:13
sorenbarrett said:
I hear excitement in this poem. A sense of thrill. Nicely said.
January 25th, 2025 16:13
rainbows in the night
sorenbarrett said:
Water is needed for life to exist. Written most clearly.
January 24th, 2025 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
Water is needed for life to exist. Written most clearly.
January 24th, 2025 04:18
intercourse isn’t everything
Tristan Robert Lange said:
When one is so fortunate, there is nothing like it. Well done, bro! 🌹👏
January 23rd, 2025 09:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
When one is so fortunate, there is nothing like it. Well done, bro! 🌹👏
January 23rd, 2025 09:07
intercourse isn’t everything
sorenbarrett said:
And is that not sex? Foreplay maybe? But then there are the words that like a fragrance from a blossom carries on the wind to alure the bee. The world is briming with sex and it is what sustains life. Ah yes there is much more than what the wold calls sex in a universe of passion. Lovely thought provoking read
January 23rd, 2025 06:09
sorenbarrett said:
And is that not sex? Foreplay maybe? But then there are the words that like a fragrance from a blossom carries on the wind to alure the bee. The world is briming with sex and it is what sustains life. Ah yes there is much more than what the wold calls sex in a universe of passion. Lovely thought provoking read
January 23rd, 2025 06:09
Pronunciation
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the flow of this. Really makes you think, bro!
January 22nd, 2025 09:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the flow of this. Really makes you think, bro!
January 22nd, 2025 09:22
Pronunciation
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that makes one think and rethink. Nicely done
January 22nd, 2025 09:13
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that makes one think and rethink. Nicely done
January 22nd, 2025 09:13
expectations causing depression
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Another dynamite, relatable senryu, my friend! Well done! 🌹👏
January 21st, 2025 08:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Another dynamite, relatable senryu, my friend! Well done! 🌹👏
January 21st, 2025 08:54
expectations causing depression
sorenbarrett said:
A mind teaser this haiku or maybe senryu makes one think
January 21st, 2025 08:41
sorenbarrett said:
A mind teaser this haiku or maybe senryu makes one think
January 21st, 2025 08:41
bad dreams
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! What a way to interpret a dream...toward self-improvement! Must\'ve been a hell of a dream. Rock on, bro! Well done! 🌹👏
January 20th, 2025 09:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! What a way to interpret a dream...toward self-improvement! Must\'ve been a hell of a dream. Rock on, bro! Well done! 🌹👏
January 20th, 2025 09:36
bad dreams
sorenbarrett said:
I like the use of negatives in this poem to trite cliche to something novel. Very nicely done
January 20th, 2025 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
I like the use of negatives in this poem to trite cliche to something novel. Very nicely done
January 20th, 2025 04:39
Puerto Rico!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I am taking it this is where you are vacationing. If so, enjoy it, my friend!
January 19th, 2025 16:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I am taking it this is where you are vacationing. If so, enjoy it, my friend!
January 19th, 2025 16:39
Flight Benefits
Tristan Robert Lange said:
No...not your fault. Companies that offer benefits should come through on said benefits. Corporations can really suck! Enjoy your vacay bro...as for Delta 🖕🤣
January 18th, 2025 11:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
No...not your fault. Companies that offer benefits should come through on said benefits. Corporations can really suck! Enjoy your vacay bro...as for Delta 🖕🤣
January 18th, 2025 11:36
Flight Benefits
sorenbarrett said:
Capitalism based on greed is a profit first operation and there is no equality or tagging out. Hope you have a wonderful vaction where ever you go
January 18th, 2025 07:58
sorenbarrett said:
Capitalism based on greed is a profit first operation and there is no equality or tagging out. Hope you have a wonderful vaction where ever you go
January 18th, 2025 07:58
damn you networks
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah! I hate it when this happens! And, as a Mac guy, don\'t get me started on Safari! LOL! Feeling your frustration, bro! 🤬🌹👏
January 17th, 2025 09:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah! I hate it when this happens! And, as a Mac guy, don\'t get me started on Safari! LOL! Feeling your frustration, bro! 🤬🌹👏
January 17th, 2025 09:03
damn you networks
sorenbarrett said:
What good is a Safari if you can not see the animals? Have had this happen on various occasions and am booking no more safaries. Great write
January 17th, 2025 05:36
sorenbarrett said:
What good is a Safari if you can not see the animals? Have had this happen on various occasions and am booking no more safaries. Great write
January 17th, 2025 05:36
Aliens are coming!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
YES!!!!! Space folk, baffoons, space folk...not human beings who happen to decide to move and live elsewhere on the same damn planet! 🤦♂️ That specification is brilliant, my friend, because the poem both piques outer space curiosity while critiquing our own human stupidity in the way we treat other human beings. What\'s more, aren\'t we all space folk, being that we live on a planet in outer space? Anyway, it\'s scientifically curious and social commentary at its best. Well done! 🌹👏
January 16th, 2025 09:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
YES!!!!! Space folk, baffoons, space folk...not human beings who happen to decide to move and live elsewhere on the same damn planet! 🤦♂️ That specification is brilliant, my friend, because the poem both piques outer space curiosity while critiquing our own human stupidity in the way we treat other human beings. What\'s more, aren\'t we all space folk, being that we live on a planet in outer space? Anyway, it\'s scientifically curious and social commentary at its best. Well done! 🌹👏
January 16th, 2025 09:19
Aliens are coming!
sorenbarrett said:
Another fun read. Makes one think and wonder are we not all aliens?
January 16th, 2025 07:28
sorenbarrett said:
Another fun read. Makes one think and wonder are we not all aliens?
January 16th, 2025 07:28
Beauty of Living
Mutley Ravishes said:
Can Satan\'s tail
Penetrate the Holy Grail
Without defiling it?
January 15th, 2025 22:32
Mutley Ravishes said:
Can Satan\'s tail
Penetrate the Holy Grail
Without defiling it?
January 15th, 2025 22:32
Beauty of Living
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very deep, my friend. This gives me lots to think about. Well done!
January 15th, 2025 16:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very deep, my friend. This gives me lots to think about. Well done!
January 15th, 2025 16:56
Beauty of Living
sorenbarrett said:
This was quite cryptic but after reading your note it became quite clear and made a lot of sense. Deep very deep.
January 15th, 2025 13:48
sorenbarrett said:
This was quite cryptic but after reading your note it became quite clear and made a lot of sense. Deep very deep.
January 15th, 2025 13:48
$1.86 in my bank account
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I feel you bro. Hey, here\'s to sharing a payday! LOL! Yay us tomorrow!
January 14th, 2025 08:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I feel you bro. Hey, here\'s to sharing a payday! LOL! Yay us tomorrow!
January 14th, 2025 08:13
$1.86 in my bank account
sorenbarrett said:
A dollar short and a day long seems to be the tone of this poem. A fun poem but one we all can equate with as well and then it is not so fun.
January 14th, 2025 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
A dollar short and a day long seems to be the tone of this poem. A fun poem but one we all can equate with as well and then it is not so fun.
January 14th, 2025 04:10
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