Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
Looking good vs. feeling good
arqios said:
If feeling good doesn’t make us look good, then that’s their problem and most probably looking good but not feeling so is ours…just saying🙏🏻🕊️🤩
April 17th, 2026 18:28
arqios said:
If feeling good doesn’t make us look good, then that’s their problem and most probably looking good but not feeling so is ours…just saying🙏🏻🕊️🤩
April 17th, 2026 18:28
Looking good vs. feeling good
sorenbarrett said:
Change is a difficult thing for all
April 17th, 2026 16:06
sorenbarrett said:
Change is a difficult thing for all
April 17th, 2026 16:06
and who am I to complain?
Abdullah123 said:
Truly, when we begin counting out blessings, i don\'t think we can surmise their full extent
April 17th, 2026 11:13
Abdullah123 said:
Truly, when we begin counting out blessings, i don\'t think we can surmise their full extent
April 17th, 2026 11:13
and who am I to complain?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen! Right!?!? Exactly, bro! 😎🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 17th, 2026 08:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen! Right!?!? Exactly, bro! 😎🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 17th, 2026 08:44
and who am I to complain?
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed tis true Demar and gratitude buys much in this life.
April 16th, 2026 21:29
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed tis true Demar and gratitude buys much in this life.
April 16th, 2026 21:29
What are my goals?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, I apologize for the delay…just came off finishing a composition and needed a minute to recover.
Now...your poem...do you not, though? Not even a goal like making it to the toilet instead of your pants? 🤣 All jokes and silliness aside…this takes me to those moments where you’re supposed to have direction, but nothing really forms…just that gap sitting there. It feels real in a way that’s hard to fake. Really well done, Sir King of Concise. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 15:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, I apologize for the delay…just came off finishing a composition and needed a minute to recover.
Now...your poem...do you not, though? Not even a goal like making it to the toilet instead of your pants? 🤣 All jokes and silliness aside…this takes me to those moments where you’re supposed to have direction, but nothing really forms…just that gap sitting there. It feels real in a way that’s hard to fake. Really well done, Sir King of Concise. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 15:58
What are my goals?
sorenbarrett said:
That makes us even Demar because I have no belongings
April 15th, 2026 20:08
sorenbarrett said:
That makes us even Demar because I have no belongings
April 15th, 2026 20:08
How much is to much?
Allie561 said:
And yet that simple act is enough to keep you going. Wonderful Demar!
April 14th, 2026 18:51
Allie561 said:
And yet that simple act is enough to keep you going. Wonderful Demar!
April 14th, 2026 18:51
Thank you to the garbage collectors!
James Michael said:
I was a “garbage collector” for five years. Thought of myself as a garbage man. Truly the worst job I ever had. Alcoholism and a suicide attempt involved. Thanks for the considerate recognition.
April 14th, 2026 18:33
James Michael said:
I was a “garbage collector” for five years. Thought of myself as a garbage man. Truly the worst job I ever had. Alcoholism and a suicide attempt involved. Thanks for the considerate recognition.
April 14th, 2026 18:33
How much is to much?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
And, my friend, that\'s about all us sane one\'s can do! 🤣 Ditto. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 14th, 2026 09:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
And, my friend, that\'s about all us sane one\'s can do! 🤣 Ditto. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 14th, 2026 09:08
How much is to much?
sorenbarrett said:
Thank god to go without underwear would bend the rules of society unless in a nudist colony
April 14th, 2026 07:06
sorenbarrett said:
Thank god to go without underwear would bend the rules of society unless in a nudist colony
April 14th, 2026 07:06
I love food
Mutley Ravishes said:
I love air
It doesn\'t matter where
I will be ready!
April 13th, 2026 19:34
Mutley Ravishes said:
I love air
It doesn\'t matter where
I will be ready!
April 13th, 2026 19:34
just another brick in the wall
Allie561 said:
Still working on the potato soup Demar, it’ll be out soon 😂
April 13th, 2026 17:52
Allie561 said:
Still working on the potato soup Demar, it’ll be out soon 😂
April 13th, 2026 17:52
I love food
Kevin Hulme said:
Was it Tommy Cooper that said \'I love food. I eat nothing else\'?
Nice one.
April 13th, 2026 15:51
Kevin Hulme said:
Was it Tommy Cooper that said \'I love food. I eat nothing else\'?
Nice one.
April 13th, 2026 15:51
I love food
sorenbarrett said:
Always hungry and not always for food. Well done Demar
April 13th, 2026 14:18
sorenbarrett said:
Always hungry and not always for food. Well done Demar
April 13th, 2026 14:18
just another brick in the wall
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah...the truth in this. A fave just for the juxtaposition alone. Powerful, my friend. The king of concise strikes again! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 13th, 2026 08:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah...the truth in this. A fave just for the juxtaposition alone. Powerful, my friend. The king of concise strikes again! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 13th, 2026 08:31
just another brick in the wall
Abdullah123 said:
Loved it. Just had someone give me a sideye cuz i laughed out loud. Bravo
April 13th, 2026 07:33
Abdullah123 said:
Loved it. Just had someone give me a sideye cuz i laughed out loud. Bravo
April 13th, 2026 07:33
just another brick in the wall
sorenbarrett said:
We all wait for our soup and I am still waiting it has been on back order for years. Good write Demar
April 12th, 2026 17:50
sorenbarrett said:
We all wait for our soup and I am still waiting it has been on back order for years. Good write Demar
April 12th, 2026 17:50
Perception is not reality…
Tristan Robert Lange said:
No need to apologize. Get it out constructively, like in a poem...so fair play here, mate! As for your poem...perception is not reality. 💯 Anyone who argues otherwise is, well, deluded. 🤷♂️ Fear, all too often, does lead to perceptions that shape people into that which they\'\'d otherwise never see themselves becoming. It doesn\'t have too, but sadly it does. Your poem, blunt as it is, rightly pushes back against such fear and loathing. Great fucking 😅 job Demar! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 11th, 2026 11:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
No need to apologize. Get it out constructively, like in a poem...so fair play here, mate! As for your poem...perception is not reality. 💯 Anyone who argues otherwise is, well, deluded. 🤷♂️ Fear, all too often, does lead to perceptions that shape people into that which they\'\'d otherwise never see themselves becoming. It doesn\'t have too, but sadly it does. Your poem, blunt as it is, rightly pushes back against such fear and loathing. Great fucking 😅 job Demar! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 11th, 2026 11:07
do you value life?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
LOL! Yes! Spot on, brother! An entitled world we live in, no? Fools indeed. Powerful write! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 11th, 2026 10:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
LOL! Yes! Spot on, brother! An entitled world we live in, no? Fools indeed. Powerful write! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 11th, 2026 10:26
Perception is not reality…
sorenbarrett said:
We are all afraid of change and what we don\'t recognize. A good write Demar
April 11th, 2026 05:28
sorenbarrett said:
We are all afraid of change and what we don\'t recognize. A good write Demar
April 11th, 2026 05:28
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