Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
Do you drink?
MendedFences27 said:
Alcohol ruins lives. It is a monster that is difficult to control. Keep it at bay at all costs. - Phil A.
February 25th, 2026 22:17
MendedFences27 said:
Alcohol ruins lives. It is a monster that is difficult to control. Keep it at bay at all costs. - Phil A.
February 25th, 2026 22:17
Do you drink?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Nope. Not anymore. But thank you for offering! Shirley Temple, with cherries, please! 🙏🤣
February 25th, 2026 19:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Nope. Not anymore. But thank you for offering! Shirley Temple, with cherries, please! 🙏🤣
February 25th, 2026 19:14
Do you drink?
Allie561 said:
Hmmm not very often, though some wine here and now is alright for me.
February 25th, 2026 19:02
Allie561 said:
Hmmm not very often, though some wine here and now is alright for me.
February 25th, 2026 19:02
Do you drink?
Zak McKay said:
I would have to say I do not drink for I am sixteen and that is illegal
February 25th, 2026 14:00
Zak McKay said:
I would have to say I do not drink for I am sixteen and that is illegal
February 25th, 2026 14:00
Do you drink?
sorenbarrett said:
A question that is best answered by offering one. Nicely written Demar
February 25th, 2026 13:58
sorenbarrett said:
A question that is best answered by offering one. Nicely written Demar
February 25th, 2026 13:58
Men Hating Women
Paul Bell said:
Yes, man needs woman.
I certainly do, she knows where everything is in the house.
Don\'t know how they do it.
February 25th, 2026 13:55
Paul Bell said:
Yes, man needs woman.
I certainly do, she knows where everything is in the house.
Don\'t know how they do it.
February 25th, 2026 13:55
What’s your favorite movie?
Allie561 said:
I always enjoyed the Christopher Nolan movies although Inception was my favorite. The Batman trilogy is a good choice as well.
February 25th, 2026 01:50
Allie561 said:
I always enjoyed the Christopher Nolan movies although Inception was my favorite. The Batman trilogy is a good choice as well.
February 25th, 2026 01:50
How much money do you have?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this works because of its tone shift. Bold demand…quick apology…then that sly “I hope you’re not shy.” It feels like social commentary hiding inside a flirt. Minimal, but pointed. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 24th, 2026 08:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this works because of its tone shift. Bold demand…quick apology…then that sly “I hope you’re not shy.” It feels like social commentary hiding inside a flirt. Minimal, but pointed. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 24th, 2026 08:20
How much money do you have?
sorenbarrett said:
Another write Demar that sets one\'s mind to working well done
February 24th, 2026 07:05
sorenbarrett said:
Another write Demar that sets one\'s mind to working well done
February 24th, 2026 07:05
What’s your favorite movie?
Mutley Ravishes said:
LOTR trilogy, Airplane, The Big Blue, Used Cars, Doin` Time, When We Were Kings, Joan Of Arc, Akahige etc!
February 23rd, 2026 20:12
Mutley Ravishes said:
LOTR trilogy, Airplane, The Big Blue, Used Cars, Doin` Time, When We Were Kings, Joan Of Arc, Akahige etc!
February 23rd, 2026 20:12
What’s your favorite movie?
sorenbarrett said:
A most unique senryu Demar it speaks for itself. To read my poems is to know me.
February 23rd, 2026 12:37
sorenbarrett said:
A most unique senryu Demar it speaks for itself. To read my poems is to know me.
February 23rd, 2026 12:37
What’s your favorite movie?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Not sure my fave but The Lord of the Rings Trilogy, The Witch (2015), and Nosferatu (1922) are among them.
February 23rd, 2026 10:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Not sure my fave but The Lord of the Rings Trilogy, The Witch (2015), and Nosferatu (1922) are among them.
February 23rd, 2026 10:20
What’s your favorite food?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ha! Yes! The same even in our differences. Well done, my friend!
February 23rd, 2026 10:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ha! Yes! The same even in our differences. Well done, my friend!
February 23rd, 2026 10:00
What’s your favorite food?
marissa said:
This is so deep,i’m hungry right now
February 22nd, 2026 13:08
marissa said:
This is so deep,i’m hungry right now
February 22nd, 2026 13:08
What’s your favorite food?
sorenbarrett said:
Yes we are all living beings.
February 22nd, 2026 11:50
sorenbarrett said:
Yes we are all living beings.
February 22nd, 2026 11:50
Men Hating Women
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, I love how you balance everything out. Yes, it is foolishness on both sides of the battle of the sexes, isn\'t it? Well done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 21st, 2026 10:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, I love how you balance everything out. Yes, it is foolishness on both sides of the battle of the sexes, isn\'t it? Well done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 21st, 2026 10:40
Men Hating Women
sorenbarrett said:
Very clever Demar. The syllable count and thought in this poem are a fave. True it is.
February 21st, 2026 03:33
sorenbarrett said:
Very clever Demar. The syllable count and thought in this poem are a fave. True it is.
February 21st, 2026 03:33
Men Hating Women
Allie561 said:
Like before, there are too many sour blueberries. I understand why men can hate women and the other way around. There have been plenty of incidences between both to cause skepticism, and unfortunately some people won’t look deeper if they don’t like the surface.
February 21st, 2026 00:23
Allie561 said:
Like before, there are too many sour blueberries. I understand why men can hate women and the other way around. There have been plenty of incidences between both to cause skepticism, and unfortunately some people won’t look deeper if they don’t like the surface.
February 21st, 2026 00:23
Women Hating Men
Allie561 said:
I try not to judge a book by its cover but it’s hard to keep eating blueberries when all the rest have been sour. Unfortunately for both women and men, people have ruined our expectations for people. I hope that people look deeper into knowing you rather than choosing not to because of appearance.
February 20th, 2026 19:45
Allie561 said:
I try not to judge a book by its cover but it’s hard to keep eating blueberries when all the rest have been sour. Unfortunately for both women and men, people have ruined our expectations for people. I hope that people look deeper into knowing you rather than choosing not to because of appearance.
February 20th, 2026 19:45
Women Hating Men
Mutley Ravishes said:
I once read that women are (mostly) so angry at men because many guys have been overtaken by lust, and cannot give to their women anymore, only take. Then the woman turns off sex, and the guy gets even more frustrated. Not to lay all the blame at our door though. Trying to deal with the awesome power of the sexual force is a cross to bear for sure, isn`t it?
February 20th, 2026 17:28
Mutley Ravishes said:
I once read that women are (mostly) so angry at men because many guys have been overtaken by lust, and cannot give to their women anymore, only take. Then the woman turns off sex, and the guy gets even more frustrated. Not to lay all the blame at our door though. Trying to deal with the awesome power of the sexual force is a cross to bear for sure, isn`t it?
February 20th, 2026 17:28
Women Hating Men
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting response type senryu that is an answer in a question
February 20th, 2026 12:27
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting response type senryu that is an answer in a question
February 20th, 2026 12:27
Women Hating Men
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this captures the feeling of being reduced to a category instead of seen as a person. It’s uncomfortable and honest at the same time. The brevity makes it feel like something blurted in the middle of real emotion. Well done. Your reign of being the king of concise continues! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 20th, 2026 11:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this captures the feeling of being reduced to a category instead of seen as a person. It’s uncomfortable and honest at the same time. The brevity makes it feel like something blurted in the middle of real emotion. Well done. Your reign of being the king of concise continues! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 20th, 2026 11:24
waking up groggy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yessss! Bro! Title? Will totally support!
February 20th, 2026 11:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yessss! Bro! Title? Will totally support!
February 20th, 2026 11:01
waking up groggy
Friendship said:
I hear you. I kept my best friend up late on the phone last night.🤣😂,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Congratulations on your Book.👍🌹
February 19th, 2026 11:14
Friendship said:
I hear you. I kept my best friend up late on the phone last night.🤣😂,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Congratulations on your Book.👍🌹
February 19th, 2026 11:14
waking up groggy
sorenbarrett said:
How late is too late? A thought provoking write Demar
February 19th, 2026 09:04
sorenbarrett said:
How late is too late? A thought provoking write Demar
February 19th, 2026 09:04
waking up with a boner
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Healthy and/or annoying...which one, depends on who you wake up next to, I suppose! 🤣 This made me laugh, my friend! Basic biology is humorous, no? Well done, Demar! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 18th, 2026 11:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Healthy and/or annoying...which one, depends on who you wake up next to, I suppose! 🤣 This made me laugh, my friend! Basic biology is humorous, no? Well done, Demar! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 18th, 2026 11:27
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