Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
What am I meant for?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, methinks you answered your own question in one word…precious…meaning invaluable. The how of that lies within you, in that place of your soul…where God’s breath, God’s spirit lives in us all…at least as I understand it, not to project onto you. And it is yours to discover. May it be so, my brother. Very profound poem…thankful you shared. 🖤🙏🦇🐦⬛
May 2nd, 2026 11:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, methinks you answered your own question in one word…precious…meaning invaluable. The how of that lies within you, in that place of your soul…where God’s breath, God’s spirit lives in us all…at least as I understand it, not to project onto you. And it is yours to discover. May it be so, my brother. Very profound poem…thankful you shared. 🖤🙏🦇🐦⬛
May 2nd, 2026 11:02
What am I meant for?
Mutley Ravishes said:
You are worth all the Imagination, awareness, energy, memory, mobility, intuition, humor, emotion, intellect, reproductive energy, will, and mystery that has been invested in you, Demar! Who is the Investor? I have no idea!
May 2nd, 2026 08:36
Mutley Ravishes said:
You are worth all the Imagination, awareness, energy, memory, mobility, intuition, humor, emotion, intellect, reproductive energy, will, and mystery that has been invested in you, Demar! Who is the Investor? I have no idea!
May 2nd, 2026 08:36
Mmmmm distractions
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, I’ve felt that same kind of overload…where everything is pulling for attention and it just won’t quiet down. The distractions, the questioning, even asking why you’re writing at all…that hits close. You captured that space honestly. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 1st, 2026 07:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, I’ve felt that same kind of overload…where everything is pulling for attention and it just won’t quiet down. The distractions, the questioning, even asking why you’re writing at all…that hits close. You captured that space honestly. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 1st, 2026 07:33
Mmmmm distractions
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the tension between modern distractions and the desire for a simpler, more meaningful life. It reflects on the overwhelming influence of consumer culture, technology, and societal pressures, contrasting this with a longing for community, moderation, and deeper connections, particularly through the lens of parenthood.
May 1st, 2026 06:44
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the tension between modern distractions and the desire for a simpler, more meaningful life. It reflects on the overwhelming influence of consumer culture, technology, and societal pressures, contrasting this with a longing for community, moderation, and deeper connections, particularly through the lens of parenthood.
May 1st, 2026 06:44
Mmmmm distractions
sorenbarrett said:
This seems the adventures of a normal day full of distractions. Well done
April 30th, 2026 21:47
sorenbarrett said:
This seems the adventures of a normal day full of distractions. Well done
April 30th, 2026 21:47
rest in peace to my cat
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful expression of love and grief of the loss of a beloved pet, sad in subject but touching in it\'s content
April 29th, 2026 22:08
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful expression of love and grief of the loss of a beloved pet, sad in subject but touching in it\'s content
April 29th, 2026 22:08
rest in peace to my cat
Allie561 said:
I’m sending you my sympathy Demar, I hope you’re doing well.
April 29th, 2026 19:41
Allie561 said:
I’m sending you my sympathy Demar, I hope you’re doing well.
April 29th, 2026 19:41
rest in peace to my cat
arqios said:
...sympathies, dear Demar. brings back memories of lost felines over the years. 🕊️🙏
April 29th, 2026 19:35
arqios said:
...sympathies, dear Demar. brings back memories of lost felines over the years. 🕊️🙏
April 29th, 2026 19:35
rest in peace to my cat
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Awww. Sorry to hear, my friend. It sounds like this happened in the past, but regardless, one never \"gets over\" losing the ones we love. Grief is for real and you expressed it well here. Beautiful, reflective write, my friend. As Soren said, this one leaves you thinking. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 29th, 2026 06:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Awww. Sorry to hear, my friend. It sounds like this happened in the past, but regardless, one never \"gets over\" losing the ones we love. Grief is for real and you expressed it well here. Beautiful, reflective write, my friend. As Soren said, this one leaves you thinking. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 29th, 2026 06:23
rest in peace to my cat
sorenbarrett said:
Demar this one has me thinking a bit. Nicely done
April 29th, 2026 05:31
sorenbarrett said:
Demar this one has me thinking a bit. Nicely done
April 29th, 2026 05:31
being an adult
Teddy.15 said:
Gosh this has the reality factor it\'s very liberating. 🌹
April 29th, 2026 05:30
Teddy.15 said:
Gosh this has the reality factor it\'s very liberating. 🌹
April 29th, 2026 05:30
with pulp please
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Coconut water with the pulp...the only way! Love Thai, my friend. Hope you enjoyed!
April 28th, 2026 05:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Coconut water with the pulp...the only way! Love Thai, my friend. Hope you enjoyed!
April 28th, 2026 05:31
and here we are strange together
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shout out right back atch, bro! Love being strange together! Let\'s get stranger! Hahahaha! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🌹
April 26th, 2026 09:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shout out right back atch, bro! Love being strange together! Let\'s get stranger! Hahahaha! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🌹
April 26th, 2026 09:25
and here we are strange together
sorenbarrett said:
We all are animals and so are our profiles Demar good one my friend
April 26th, 2026 06:39
sorenbarrett said:
We all are animals and so are our profiles Demar good one my friend
April 26th, 2026 06:39
being an adult
Allie561 said:
Are the stories to entertain others or to create a reality for ourselves? Maybe a little bit of both.
April 25th, 2026 10:43
Allie561 said:
Are the stories to entertain others or to create a reality for ourselves? Maybe a little bit of both.
April 25th, 2026 10:43
being an adult
ms.divine said:
Yes but there reality is your illusion u created your reality ⭐🫶🏾🫂
April 25th, 2026 10:12
ms.divine said:
Yes but there reality is your illusion u created your reality ⭐🫶🏾🫂
April 25th, 2026 10:12
being an adult
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, some of us do...tell stories of hope, anyway. But yeah...adulthood seems to = filters, among other things. Question, is adulthood a social construct? You\'ve left me pondering. Methinks it, in many ways, is. Great write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 25th, 2026 09:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, some of us do...tell stories of hope, anyway. But yeah...adulthood seems to = filters, among other things. Question, is adulthood a social construct? You\'ve left me pondering. Methinks it, in many ways, is. Great write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 25th, 2026 09:09
being an adult
Mutley Ravishes said:
Yes, we`re still alive. And is the lost Eden of Imagination waiting for our return?!
April 25th, 2026 06:14
Mutley Ravishes said:
Yes, we`re still alive. And is the lost Eden of Imagination waiting for our return?!
April 25th, 2026 06:14
being an adult
sorenbarrett said:
That says it pretty well but I have to ask how do we know we are alive
April 25th, 2026 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
That says it pretty well but I have to ask how do we know we are alive
April 25th, 2026 04:54
What else is there to do?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this holds that tension between restraint and pull…between what we push away and what still calls to us. It doesn’t resolve it, and that’s what makes it real. I’ve been in that space too…where desire doesn’t listen to reason. You kept it simple and let it speak. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 23rd, 2026 08:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this holds that tension between restraint and pull…between what we push away and what still calls to us. It doesn’t resolve it, and that’s what makes it real. I’ve been in that space too…where desire doesn’t listen to reason. You kept it simple and let it speak. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 23rd, 2026 08:40
What else is there to do?
Allie561 said:
Baking is a nice pastime, but writing feeds my soul.
April 22nd, 2026 22:29
Allie561 said:
Baking is a nice pastime, but writing feeds my soul.
April 22nd, 2026 22:29
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