Comments received on poems by Demar Desu



anger transfers
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting approach and thought provoking poem. Nicely done

February 23rd, 2025 05:50

being poor
sorenbarrett said:

As Dolly says in her song \"you are only poor if you choose to be\" It is a state of mind in comparison to others. A most poignant write in these days of keeping up with the Jones.

February 22nd, 2025 19:20

Kaizen
vicecream said:

Wooooahh this one goes crazy

February 22nd, 2025 09:24

cyclones spirals whirlpools
vicecream said:

The answer I’m still exploring it goes so deep.. language of circle

February 22nd, 2025 09:23

The Love of Lichen
Mutley Ravishes said:

Awesome Haiku.

February 21st, 2025 19:43

The Love of Lichen
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

February 20th, 2025 10:20

The Love of Lichen
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Bro, I want to believe this; however, it seems so far from EVER happening. Still, I believe this to be true, not matter how discouraging it can get. If it exists in nature, how can it be impossible for humans? Well done, my friend! ❤️

February 20th, 2025 08:18

The Love of Lichen
sorenbarrett said:

Another great Haiku with meaning that is layered. Nice and multifaceted.

February 20th, 2025 04:48

Kaizen
sorenbarrett said:

There is greater depth to this Haiku than at first glance. Loved it

February 19th, 2025 05:18

poetry in time
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

February 16th, 2025 09:23

poetry in time
sorenbarrett said:

It appears that you have captured more than a couple. Your writes are nuggets of delight in the cookie of the day.

February 16th, 2025 03:51

anniversary tomorrow
sorenbarrett said:

The best gifts are those that come from the heart to the hands and back to the heart. Nicely written

February 14th, 2025 04:30

Internet Capes
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Deep and thought-provoking, my friend.

February 12th, 2025 21:46

Internet Capes
sorenbarrett said:

I wish it were so. Very nice and hopeful

February 12th, 2025 11:54

cyclones spirals whirlpools
sorenbarrett said:

This may apply to many things and is thought provoking.

February 10th, 2025 03:50

I don’t go out at night
Distant View said:

Nicely expressed!

February 9th, 2025 15:44

falling in love again
Kevin Hulme said:

Let’s face it, #’You can’t help it’#
Good write.

February 8th, 2025 20:30

falling in love again
sorenbarrett said:

Cycle of the moon, change in hormones, something you ate, poems you\'ve read? Don\'t question what is for the better. A fun read

February 8th, 2025 04:18

Mindless Mindfulness
Mutley Ravishes said:

De ja vus?
Haven\'t me and you
Been through this experience before?
It\'s becoming a laborious
Chore


February 6th, 2025 18:13

Mindless Mindfulness
Tony36 said:

BRAVO

February 6th, 2025 16:54

Mindless Mindfulness
sorenbarrett said:

A fun read

February 6th, 2025 05:51

The next day
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Well done, bro!

February 5th, 2025 09:49

The next day
sorenbarrett said:

Another filled with hidden meaning. Nicely worded.

February 5th, 2025 04:35

-$120.74 in my bank account
Tony36 said:

Been there as well, great write

February 4th, 2025 10:46

-$120.74 in my bank account
Cassie58 said:

Sadly, I can remember being that broke too. Long time ago but never forgotten. Meaningful brevity.

February 4th, 2025 09:00

-$120.74 in my bank account
sorenbarrett said:

Been there and feel that. Nicely done

February 4th, 2025 08:22

world is not perfect
DaBestPoemer said:

your realy goooooooood poemer

February 3rd, 2025 14:45

world is not perfect
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Truth! Now, how do I get in? 🤣 Well done bro!

February 2nd, 2025 19:21

world is not perfect
sorenbarrett said:

Indeed there are and don\'t forget the patrons who paid to get in. A wonderful senryu

February 2nd, 2025 14:16

world is not perfect
sorenbarrett said:

Indeed there are and don\'t forget the patrons who paid to get in. A wonderful senryu

February 2nd, 2025 14:16

Page 2 of 8«12345678»


« Return to the profile of Demar Desu