Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
partner in marriage
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"We are the deal\" indeed. It is a give and a take, isn\'t it? Well done on this, my friend. 🌹👏
May 26th, 2025 15:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"We are the deal\" indeed. It is a give and a take, isn\'t it? Well done on this, my friend. 🌹👏
May 26th, 2025 15:23
Social Conditioning
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Another fantastic Senryu! You are the god of gust...like a powerful, short wind...you give us truth. Well done, my friend. 🌹👏
May 26th, 2025 08:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Another fantastic Senryu! You are the god of gust...like a powerful, short wind...you give us truth. Well done, my friend. 🌹👏
May 26th, 2025 08:51
partner in marriage
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely said Demar we deal with ourselves and sell ourselves we condemn prostitution but we all are whores. Excuse the harsh words but I felt it with this poem
May 26th, 2025 04:55
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely said Demar we deal with ourselves and sell ourselves we condemn prostitution but we all are whores. Excuse the harsh words but I felt it with this poem
May 26th, 2025 04:55
Social Conditioning
Poetic Licence said:
Interesting thinking write, enjoyed the read
May 25th, 2025 05:27
Poetic Licence said:
Interesting thinking write, enjoyed the read
May 25th, 2025 05:27
Social Conditioning
sorenbarrett said:
Demar the Haiku/ Senryu master. Another good write
May 25th, 2025 05:24
sorenbarrett said:
Demar the Haiku/ Senryu master. Another good write
May 25th, 2025 05:24
Everyone takes a shit
Jerry Reynolds said:
Indeed we do
an event at my age
I look forward to
May 24th, 2025 07:14
Jerry Reynolds said:
Indeed we do
an event at my age
I look forward to
May 24th, 2025 07:14
Everyone takes a shit
Poetic Licence said:
Funny but so very true, enjoyed the read
May 24th, 2025 06:24
Poetic Licence said:
Funny but so very true, enjoyed the read
May 24th, 2025 06:24
Everyone takes a shit
sorenbarrett said:
Now there\'s a thought to start off the day. Made me feel like going LOL It is nature though and whay do we think it so disgusting when it is simply a process of life and health? Shared by all living things there should be no prejudice of shame there. Eating is more destructive. Thought provoking write
May 24th, 2025 06:20
sorenbarrett said:
Now there\'s a thought to start off the day. Made me feel like going LOL It is nature though and whay do we think it so disgusting when it is simply a process of life and health? Shared by all living things there should be no prejudice of shame there. Eating is more destructive. Thought provoking write
May 24th, 2025 06:20
alive in uncertainty
Salvia.S said:
Love how it blends humor with a deep truth—nicely done.
May 23rd, 2025 10:20
Salvia.S said:
Love how it blends humor with a deep truth—nicely done.
May 23rd, 2025 10:20
alive in uncertainty
sorenbarrett said:
This one is one of my favorites of yours Demar it made me smile.
May 23rd, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
This one is one of my favorites of yours Demar it made me smile.
May 23rd, 2025 04:33
value of family
Muse of Calliope said:
Friends are just as valuable as blood-relatives, sometimes even more so. Great write
May 20th, 2025 13:56
Muse of Calliope said:
Friends are just as valuable as blood-relatives, sometimes even more so. Great write
May 20th, 2025 13:56
we are soup
sorenbarrett said:
I love this one Demar it adds a bit of humor to a serious topic. Well written and a fave
May 19th, 2025 06:45
sorenbarrett said:
I love this one Demar it adds a bit of humor to a serious topic. Well written and a fave
May 19th, 2025 06:45
Who is sending nukes?
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and amusing all at the same time. A fun read Demar
May 18th, 2025 04:55
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and amusing all at the same time. A fun read Demar
May 18th, 2025 04:55
I must pimp myself!
sorenbarrett said:
This one to true to laugh made me laugh just the same. A great thought and for once get the jump on them but sadly any profit gained is still subject to taxation
May 17th, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
This one to true to laugh made me laugh just the same. A great thought and for once get the jump on them but sadly any profit gained is still subject to taxation
May 17th, 2025 04:30
to be mixed in the USA!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truth! Sad, but very true. Well done, Demar! 🌹👏
May 16th, 2025 20:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truth! Sad, but very true. Well done, Demar! 🌹👏
May 16th, 2025 20:53
1 day left to live
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sleeping! 💤 They say it is the best way to go! 🤣 Then again, no one has woke up from it to tell otherwise! 😳🤣 Great job, my friend. Very thought-provoking. 🌹👏
May 16th, 2025 20:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sleeping! 💤 They say it is the best way to go! 🤣 Then again, no one has woke up from it to tell otherwise! 😳🤣 Great job, my friend. Very thought-provoking. 🌹👏
May 16th, 2025 20:35
1 day left to live
sorenbarrett said:
Another Senryu that opens the mind and clears the air. Well done Demar
May 16th, 2025 12:14
sorenbarrett said:
Another Senryu that opens the mind and clears the air. Well done Demar
May 16th, 2025 12:14
to be mixed in the USA!
vicecream said:
Reading through the lens of each of the triple entendre; mixed as in race, mixed in as in incorporated into, and free mixing; you’re an amazing poet truly
May 15th, 2025 14:57
vicecream said:
Reading through the lens of each of the triple entendre; mixed as in race, mixed in as in incorporated into, and free mixing; you’re an amazing poet truly
May 15th, 2025 14:57
to be mixed in the USA!
sorenbarrett said:
This poses the question of are your referring to matrimony or society in general/ A good write Demar.
May 15th, 2025 05:33
sorenbarrett said:
This poses the question of are your referring to matrimony or society in general/ A good write Demar.
May 15th, 2025 05:33
Today I saw a tree fall
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful poem that is devastating both literally and metaphorically. Well done, my friend. 🌹👏
May 14th, 2025 11:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful poem that is devastating both literally and metaphorically. Well done, my friend. 🌹👏
May 14th, 2025 11:31
Tycoon to be
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Preach it brother! Another reality check from the King of Concise! Bravo! 🌹👏
May 14th, 2025 10:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Preach it brother! Another reality check from the King of Concise! Bravo! 🌹👏
May 14th, 2025 10:58
Today I saw a tree fall
sorenbarrett said:
I can\'t help wonder what the humble giant is. A fun read.
May 14th, 2025 10:30
sorenbarrett said:
I can\'t help wonder what the humble giant is. A fun read.
May 14th, 2025 10:30
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