Comments received on poems by Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏
Say no to gambling
sorenbarrett said:
A good question I would say a full stomach a quenched thirst and a soft bed.
April 18th, 2026 17:02
sorenbarrett said:
A good question I would say a full stomach a quenched thirst and a soft bed.
April 18th, 2026 17:02
Say no to gambling
arqios said:
The void in my pocket reflects the vastness of what the world does not owe me… a truth of gambling dilemma
April 18th, 2026 16:44
arqios said:
The void in my pocket reflects the vastness of what the world does not owe me… a truth of gambling dilemma
April 18th, 2026 16:44
Looking good vs. feeling good
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Feeling good wins...but I feel good when I look good...so 🤷♂️😅🤣 Thought-provoking write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 18th, 2026 13:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Feeling good wins...but I feel good when I look good...so 🤷♂️😅🤣 Thought-provoking write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 18th, 2026 13:58
Looking good vs. feeling good
Allie561 said:
I would rather feel good than look good. There’s no point of making myself sick to look better.
April 18th, 2026 10:19
Allie561 said:
I would rather feel good than look good. There’s no point of making myself sick to look better.
April 18th, 2026 10:19
and who am I to complain?
Allie561 said:
There is so much to be thankful for, the list goes on and on. I really like this poem Demar.
April 18th, 2026 10:18
Allie561 said:
There is so much to be thankful for, the list goes on and on. I really like this poem Demar.
April 18th, 2026 10:18
What are my goals?
Allie561 said:
I make so many but I feel like I never complete them
April 18th, 2026 10:17
Allie561 said:
I make so many but I feel like I never complete them
April 18th, 2026 10:17
do you value life?
NafisaSB said:
each life is valuable - it\'s sad if one thinks only of self, and gives two hoots about others..though that is the trend in the world today unfortunately
April 17th, 2026 23:54
NafisaSB said:
each life is valuable - it\'s sad if one thinks only of self, and gives two hoots about others..though that is the trend in the world today unfortunately
April 17th, 2026 23:54
Looking good vs. feeling good
arqios said:
If feeling good doesn’t make us look good, then that’s their problem and most probably looking good but not feeling so is ours…just saying🙏🏻🕊️🤩
April 17th, 2026 18:28
arqios said:
If feeling good doesn’t make us look good, then that’s their problem and most probably looking good but not feeling so is ours…just saying🙏🏻🕊️🤩
April 17th, 2026 18:28
Looking good vs. feeling good
sorenbarrett said:
Change is a difficult thing for all
April 17th, 2026 16:06
sorenbarrett said:
Change is a difficult thing for all
April 17th, 2026 16:06
and who am I to complain?
Abdullah123 said:
Truly, when we begin counting out blessings, i don\'t think we can surmise their full extent
April 17th, 2026 11:13
Abdullah123 said:
Truly, when we begin counting out blessings, i don\'t think we can surmise their full extent
April 17th, 2026 11:13
and who am I to complain?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen! Right!?!? Exactly, bro! 😎🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 17th, 2026 08:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen! Right!?!? Exactly, bro! 😎🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 17th, 2026 08:44
and who am I to complain?
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed tis true Demar and gratitude buys much in this life.
April 16th, 2026 21:29
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed tis true Demar and gratitude buys much in this life.
April 16th, 2026 21:29
What are my goals?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, I apologize for the delay…just came off finishing a composition and needed a minute to recover.
Now...your poem...do you not, though? Not even a goal like making it to the toilet instead of your pants? 🤣 All jokes and silliness aside…this takes me to those moments where you’re supposed to have direction, but nothing really forms…just that gap sitting there. It feels real in a way that’s hard to fake. Really well done, Sir King of Concise. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 15:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, I apologize for the delay…just came off finishing a composition and needed a minute to recover.
Now...your poem...do you not, though? Not even a goal like making it to the toilet instead of your pants? 🤣 All jokes and silliness aside…this takes me to those moments where you’re supposed to have direction, but nothing really forms…just that gap sitting there. It feels real in a way that’s hard to fake. Really well done, Sir King of Concise. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 15:58
What are my goals?
sorenbarrett said:
That makes us even Demar because I have no belongings
April 15th, 2026 20:08
sorenbarrett said:
That makes us even Demar because I have no belongings
April 15th, 2026 20:08
How much is to much?
Allie561 said:
And yet that simple act is enough to keep you going. Wonderful Demar!
April 14th, 2026 18:51
Allie561 said:
And yet that simple act is enough to keep you going. Wonderful Demar!
April 14th, 2026 18:51
Thank you to the garbage collectors!
James Michael said:
I was a “garbage collector” for five years. Thought of myself as a garbage man. Truly the worst job I ever had. Alcoholism and a suicide attempt involved. Thanks for the considerate recognition.
April 14th, 2026 18:33
James Michael said:
I was a “garbage collector” for five years. Thought of myself as a garbage man. Truly the worst job I ever had. Alcoholism and a suicide attempt involved. Thanks for the considerate recognition.
April 14th, 2026 18:33
How much is to much?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
And, my friend, that\'s about all us sane one\'s can do! 🤣 Ditto. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 14th, 2026 09:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
And, my friend, that\'s about all us sane one\'s can do! 🤣 Ditto. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 14th, 2026 09:08
How much is to much?
sorenbarrett said:
Thank god to go without underwear would bend the rules of society unless in a nudist colony
April 14th, 2026 07:06
sorenbarrett said:
Thank god to go without underwear would bend the rules of society unless in a nudist colony
April 14th, 2026 07:06
I love food
Mutley Ravishes said:
I love air
It doesn\'t matter where
I will be ready!
April 13th, 2026 19:34
Mutley Ravishes said:
I love air
It doesn\'t matter where
I will be ready!
April 13th, 2026 19:34
just another brick in the wall
Allie561 said:
Still working on the potato soup Demar, it’ll be out soon 😂
April 13th, 2026 17:52
Allie561 said:
Still working on the potato soup Demar, it’ll be out soon 😂
April 13th, 2026 17:52
I love food
Kevin Hulme said:
Was it Tommy Cooper that said \'I love food. I eat nothing else\'?
Nice one.
April 13th, 2026 15:51
Kevin Hulme said:
Was it Tommy Cooper that said \'I love food. I eat nothing else\'?
Nice one.
April 13th, 2026 15:51
I love food
sorenbarrett said:
Always hungry and not always for food. Well done Demar
April 13th, 2026 14:18
sorenbarrett said:
Always hungry and not always for food. Well done Demar
April 13th, 2026 14:18
just another brick in the wall
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah...the truth in this. A fave just for the juxtaposition alone. Powerful, my friend. The king of concise strikes again! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 13th, 2026 08:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah...the truth in this. A fave just for the juxtaposition alone. Powerful, my friend. The king of concise strikes again! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 13th, 2026 08:31
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