Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
anger transfers
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting approach and thought provoking poem. Nicely done
February 23rd, 2025 05:50
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting approach and thought provoking poem. Nicely done
February 23rd, 2025 05:50
being poor
sorenbarrett said:
As Dolly says in her song \"you are only poor if you choose to be\" It is a state of mind in comparison to others. A most poignant write in these days of keeping up with the Jones.
February 22nd, 2025 19:20
sorenbarrett said:
As Dolly says in her song \"you are only poor if you choose to be\" It is a state of mind in comparison to others. A most poignant write in these days of keeping up with the Jones.
February 22nd, 2025 19:20
cyclones spirals whirlpools
vicecream said:
The answer I’m still exploring it goes so deep.. language of circle
February 22nd, 2025 09:23
vicecream said:
The answer I’m still exploring it goes so deep.. language of circle
February 22nd, 2025 09:23
The Love of Lichen
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Bro, I want to believe this; however, it seems so far from EVER happening. Still, I believe this to be true, not matter how discouraging it can get. If it exists in nature, how can it be impossible for humans? Well done, my friend! ❤️
February 20th, 2025 08:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Bro, I want to believe this; however, it seems so far from EVER happening. Still, I believe this to be true, not matter how discouraging it can get. If it exists in nature, how can it be impossible for humans? Well done, my friend! ❤️
February 20th, 2025 08:18
The Love of Lichen
sorenbarrett said:
Another great Haiku with meaning that is layered. Nice and multifaceted.
February 20th, 2025 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
Another great Haiku with meaning that is layered. Nice and multifaceted.
February 20th, 2025 04:48
Kaizen
sorenbarrett said:
There is greater depth to this Haiku than at first glance. Loved it
February 19th, 2025 05:18
sorenbarrett said:
There is greater depth to this Haiku than at first glance. Loved it
February 19th, 2025 05:18
poetry in time
sorenbarrett said:
It appears that you have captured more than a couple. Your writes are nuggets of delight in the cookie of the day.
February 16th, 2025 03:51
sorenbarrett said:
It appears that you have captured more than a couple. Your writes are nuggets of delight in the cookie of the day.
February 16th, 2025 03:51
anniversary tomorrow
sorenbarrett said:
The best gifts are those that come from the heart to the hands and back to the heart. Nicely written
February 14th, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
The best gifts are those that come from the heart to the hands and back to the heart. Nicely written
February 14th, 2025 04:30
Internet Capes
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Deep and thought-provoking, my friend.
February 12th, 2025 21:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Deep and thought-provoking, my friend.
February 12th, 2025 21:46
cyclones spirals whirlpools
sorenbarrett said:
This may apply to many things and is thought provoking.
February 10th, 2025 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
This may apply to many things and is thought provoking.
February 10th, 2025 03:50
falling in love again
Kevin Hulme said:
Let’s face it, #’You can’t help it’#
Good write.
February 8th, 2025 20:30
Kevin Hulme said:
Let’s face it, #’You can’t help it’#
Good write.
February 8th, 2025 20:30
falling in love again
sorenbarrett said:
Cycle of the moon, change in hormones, something you ate, poems you\'ve read? Don\'t question what is for the better. A fun read
February 8th, 2025 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
Cycle of the moon, change in hormones, something you ate, poems you\'ve read? Don\'t question what is for the better. A fun read
February 8th, 2025 04:18
Mindless Mindfulness
Mutley Ravishes said:
De ja vus?
Haven\'t me and you
Been through this experience before?
It\'s becoming a laborious
Chore
February 6th, 2025 18:13
Mutley Ravishes said:
De ja vus?
Haven\'t me and you
Been through this experience before?
It\'s becoming a laborious
Chore
February 6th, 2025 18:13
The next day
sorenbarrett said:
Another filled with hidden meaning. Nicely worded.
February 5th, 2025 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
Another filled with hidden meaning. Nicely worded.
February 5th, 2025 04:35
-$120.74 in my bank account
Cassie58 said:
Sadly, I can remember being that broke too. Long time ago but never forgotten. Meaningful brevity.
February 4th, 2025 09:00
Cassie58 said:
Sadly, I can remember being that broke too. Long time ago but never forgotten. Meaningful brevity.
February 4th, 2025 09:00
-$120.74 in my bank account
sorenbarrett said:
Been there and feel that. Nicely done
February 4th, 2025 08:22
sorenbarrett said:
Been there and feel that. Nicely done
February 4th, 2025 08:22
world is not perfect
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truth! Now, how do I get in? 🤣 Well done bro!
February 2nd, 2025 19:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truth! Now, how do I get in? 🤣 Well done bro!
February 2nd, 2025 19:21
world is not perfect
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed there are and don\'t forget the patrons who paid to get in. A wonderful senryu
February 2nd, 2025 14:16
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed there are and don\'t forget the patrons who paid to get in. A wonderful senryu
February 2nd, 2025 14:16
world is not perfect
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed there are and don\'t forget the patrons who paid to get in. A wonderful senryu
February 2nd, 2025 14:16
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed there are and don\'t forget the patrons who paid to get in. A wonderful senryu
February 2nd, 2025 14:16
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