Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
rest in peace to my cat
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Awww. Sorry to hear, my friend. It sounds like this happened in the past, but regardless, one never \"gets over\" losing the ones we love. Grief is for real and you expressed it well here. Beautiful, reflective write, my friend. As Soren said, this one leaves you thinking. Well done. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
April 29th, 2026 06:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Awww. Sorry to hear, my friend. It sounds like this happened in the past, but regardless, one never \"gets over\" losing the ones we love. Grief is for real and you expressed it well here. Beautiful, reflective write, my friend. As Soren said, this one leaves you thinking. Well done. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
April 29th, 2026 06:23
rest in peace to my cat
sorenbarrett said:
Demar this one has me thinking a bit. Nicely done
April 29th, 2026 05:31
sorenbarrett said:
Demar this one has me thinking a bit. Nicely done
April 29th, 2026 05:31
being an adult
Teddy.15 said:
Gosh this has the reality factor it\'s very liberating. ๐น
April 29th, 2026 05:30
Teddy.15 said:
Gosh this has the reality factor it\'s very liberating. ๐น
April 29th, 2026 05:30
with pulp please
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Coconut water with the pulp...the only way! Love Thai, my friend. Hope you enjoyed!
April 28th, 2026 05:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Coconut water with the pulp...the only way! Love Thai, my friend. Hope you enjoyed!
April 28th, 2026 05:31
and here we are strange together
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shout out right back atch, bro! Love being strange together! Let\'s get stranger! Hahahaha! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐น
April 26th, 2026 09:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Shout out right back atch, bro! Love being strange together! Let\'s get stranger! Hahahaha! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐น
April 26th, 2026 09:25
and here we are strange together
sorenbarrett said:
We all are animals and so are our profiles Demar good one my friend
April 26th, 2026 06:39
sorenbarrett said:
We all are animals and so are our profiles Demar good one my friend
April 26th, 2026 06:39
being an adult
Allie561 said:
Are the stories to entertain others or to create a reality for ourselves? Maybe a little bit of both.
April 25th, 2026 10:43
Allie561 said:
Are the stories to entertain others or to create a reality for ourselves? Maybe a little bit of both.
April 25th, 2026 10:43
being an adult
ms.divine said:
Yes but there reality is your illusion u created your reality โญ๐ซถ๐พ๐ซ
April 25th, 2026 10:12
ms.divine said:
Yes but there reality is your illusion u created your reality โญ๐ซถ๐พ๐ซ
April 25th, 2026 10:12
being an adult
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, some of us do...tell stories of hope, anyway. But yeah...adulthood seems to = filters, among other things. Question, is adulthood a social construct? You\'ve left me pondering. Methinks it, in many ways, is. Great write, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
April 25th, 2026 09:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, some of us do...tell stories of hope, anyway. But yeah...adulthood seems to = filters, among other things. Question, is adulthood a social construct? You\'ve left me pondering. Methinks it, in many ways, is. Great write, my friend. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
April 25th, 2026 09:09
being an adult
Mutley Ravishes said:
Yes, we`re still alive. And is the lost Eden of Imagination waiting for our return?!
April 25th, 2026 06:14
Mutley Ravishes said:
Yes, we`re still alive. And is the lost Eden of Imagination waiting for our return?!
April 25th, 2026 06:14
being an adult
sorenbarrett said:
That says it pretty well but I have to ask how do we know we are alive
April 25th, 2026 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
That says it pretty well but I have to ask how do we know we are alive
April 25th, 2026 04:54
What else is there to do?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this holds that tension between restraint and pullโฆbetween what we push away and what still calls to us. It doesnโt resolve it, and thatโs what makes it real. Iโve been in that space tooโฆwhere desire doesnโt listen to reason. You kept it simple and let it speak. Powerful write. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
April 23rd, 2026 08:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this holds that tension between restraint and pullโฆbetween what we push away and what still calls to us. It doesnโt resolve it, and thatโs what makes it real. Iโve been in that space tooโฆwhere desire doesnโt listen to reason. You kept it simple and let it speak. Powerful write. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
April 23rd, 2026 08:40
What else is there to do?
Allie561 said:
Baking is a nice pastime, but writing feeds my soul.
April 22nd, 2026 22:29
Allie561 said:
Baking is a nice pastime, but writing feeds my soul.
April 22nd, 2026 22:29
ใใ Seikatsu
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hahaha! What can I say, ๐ฉ happens! LOL! Love it, my friend! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
April 22nd, 2026 09:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hahaha! What can I say, ๐ฉ happens! LOL! Love it, my friend! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
April 22nd, 2026 09:02
ใใ Seikatsu
Mutley Ravishes said:
I wonder what the background story is to your Imagination being capture by dog poop, Demar?!
April 21st, 2026 18:22
Mutley Ravishes said:
I wonder what the background story is to your Imagination being capture by dog poop, Demar?!
April 21st, 2026 18:22
ใใ Seikatsu
sorenbarrett said:
Every day is different we never know what each holds in store
April 21st, 2026 11:21
sorenbarrett said:
Every day is different we never know what each holds in store
April 21st, 2026 11:21
ใใ Seikatsu
Allie561 said:
And it seems the most interesting thing Iโve been doing is staring at the clock waiting for it to hit the hour.
April 21st, 2026 10:29
Allie561 said:
And it seems the most interesting thing Iโve been doing is staring at the clock waiting for it to hit the hour.
April 21st, 2026 10:29
Having to earn things
Allie561 said:
It always seems to hit harder when you try and still fail, but good things are to come.
April 21st, 2026 10:28
Allie561 said:
It always seems to hit harder when you try and still fail, but good things are to come.
April 21st, 2026 10:28
Some traditions are nice
Allie561 said:
Not all traditions are bad, nicely said Demar
April 21st, 2026 10:27
Allie561 said:
Not all traditions are bad, nicely said Demar
April 21st, 2026 10:27
Having to earn things
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, yeahโฆon the surface it makes sense, but it never really plays out that clean. Iโve seen the same effort lead to very different outcomes, and that tension sticks with me. You touched something real here, my friend. Thought-provoking write as always. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
April 20th, 2026 10:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, yeahโฆon the surface it makes sense, but it never really plays out that clean. Iโve seen the same effort lead to very different outcomes, and that tension sticks with me. You touched something real here, my friend. Thought-provoking write as always. ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
April 20th, 2026 10:35
Some traditions are nice
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes, some traditions can be nice indeed. Well said, my friend! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
April 20th, 2026 10:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes, some traditions can be nice indeed. Well said, my friend! ๐น๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
April 20th, 2026 10:23
Having to earn things
arqios said:
The idiom \'earning a living\' always was elusive. It must be the inflation and avarice co-venturing together. ๐๏ธ๐
April 20th, 2026 06:45
arqios said:
The idiom \'earning a living\' always was elusive. It must be the inflation and avarice co-venturing together. ๐๏ธ๐
April 20th, 2026 06:45
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