Comments received on poems by Demar Desu



America should annex Canada
Tristan Robert Lange said:

The title brings one in...and let\'s them stew on the reality of what is said in the title. Well done, my friend! You are brilliant at this very thing and I really admire it. 🌹👏

April 27th, 2025 07:49

America should annex Canada
sorenbarrett said:

So much said in so little.

April 27th, 2025 06:17

America should annex Canada
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, DD.

April 27th, 2025 06:08

financially stable is the goal
Tristan Robert Lange said:

I am in the same dream zone as you, my friend. You have my vote! 😉🌹👏

April 26th, 2025 19:56

financially stable is the goal
sorenbarrett said:

How nice would it be. Very nice poem Demar

April 26th, 2025 13:57

ableism is the foundation for fascism
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

April 22nd, 2025 09:54

ableism is the foundation for fascism
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Isms suck and racism really sucks. For sure dumb. Truth, brother! 🌹👏

April 22nd, 2025 08:01

ableism is the foundation for fascism
sorenbarrett said:

Yes Demar I agree racism is dumb. A good read

April 22nd, 2025 04:47

In some African cultures there is no roles of mom dad sister brother grandma grandpa etc.
vicecream said:

Wow amazing I love that that exists, I love your pondering and poem about it. So good

April 21st, 2025 09:36

The things you can’t buy…
vicecream said:

A book I’m reading defined the Sacred as something that is beyond price, I thought that was an interesting take

April 21st, 2025 09:34

can’t sleep!
Tristan Robert Lange said:

No cannabis to smoke, that will not do, bro! That really helps me sleep at night. If we were neighbors I\'d be caring by sharing! Sorry to hear about the addiction bro. That sucks. Stay strong!

April 19th, 2025 09:24

can’t sleep!
teardrop said:

Short yet, understood. LOL, should be here, I\'d smoke with ya!

April 19th, 2025 06:12

can’t sleep!
sorenbarrett said:

We all become addicted to what we love. A fun short

April 19th, 2025 04:16

In some African cultures there is no roles of mom dad sister brother grandma grandpa etc.
maydanae said:

I love this reflection on different cultures! It\'s very interesting to learn about! Wonderful job :)

April 18th, 2025 21:22

In some African cultures there is no roles of mom dad sister brother grandma grandpa etc.
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wow a wonderful cross-cultural poetic musing, bro! Love this! 🌹👏 A must fave.

April 18th, 2025 21:07


In some African cultures there is no roles of mom dad sister brother grandma grandpa etc.
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful thought tied into this cultural difference. In native American tribes one\'s name changed as they grew, often several times. It would change for the quality that they displayed at times in their life. A name to suit the person and their actions.

April 18th, 2025 07:33


The things you can’t buy…
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

April 17th, 2025 09:59

The things you can’t buy…
Tristan Robert Lange said:

In this world, nothing is without price. Well done, Demar! 🌹👏

April 17th, 2025 08:34

The things you can’t buy…
sorenbarrett said:

Everything has a price it is only a matter of determining what the price is. Very good Demar

April 17th, 2025 05:01

The things you can’t buy…
dimpy said:

hmmm interesting...

April 17th, 2025 04:29

$0.00 in my bank account
vicecream said:

Heck yeah

April 16th, 2025 08:21

Love bounded
vicecream said:

I think the thing to do is try to understand why; always dig deeper and deeper- keep looking underneath underneath underneath

April 16th, 2025 08:19

Roller Skating Dreams
vicecream said:

Ease of movement

April 16th, 2025 08:15

$0.00 in my bank account
sorenbarrett said:

Penniless and penny-wise although joy is related to money it is not caused by it. Good write.

April 15th, 2025 08:54

$0.00 in my bank account
Tristan Robert Lange said:

It\'s now 9:05 AM. good morning, sir! May your day rock and your funds rise! 😉 Forward looking is the only way. 🌹👏

April 15th, 2025 08:05

Boogers on paper
Tristan Robert Lange said:

🤧🤣 This, um, really sticks! Glad everything checked out, bro! Thank you for the laugh!

April 13th, 2025 13:30

Boogers on paper
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

April 13th, 2025 13:29

Boogers on paper
sorenbarrett said:

Dried fruit has its merits. A poem hard to read but it flows.

April 13th, 2025 08:28

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