Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
The Taste of Tea
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this reminds me how often creation teaches us lessons we overlook. Your haiku slowed me down for a moment, and I\'m grateful for that. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 9th, 2026 22:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this reminds me how often creation teaches us lessons we overlook. Your haiku slowed me down for a moment, and I\'m grateful for that. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 9th, 2026 22:55
The Taste of Tea
Mutley Ravishes said:
The early bird catches the worm! (and the early morning sun rays)
July 9th, 2026 20:09
Mutley Ravishes said:
The early bird catches the worm! (and the early morning sun rays)
July 9th, 2026 20:09
I do not know how to live
Teddy.15 said:
we live in such a material world that it\'s become overwhelmed with so much junk and electronics that global warming is heating up with speed. 🌹 Great theme 🌹and yes moderation is a great example.
July 9th, 2026 01:57
Teddy.15 said:
we live in such a material world that it\'s become overwhelmed with so much junk and electronics that global warming is heating up with speed. 🌹 Great theme 🌹and yes moderation is a great example.
July 9th, 2026 01:57
my favorite quote from a book
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Taken as a whole, this is a beautiful piece, my friend. It’s reverent, honest, and deeply humble all at once…moving from gratitude for the oceans and stars to a genuine confession of our poverty of spirit. As for faith and religion, we grow into those as we do when the time is right. God is good, my friend, all the time. Beautifully done, Demar! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 8th, 2026 19:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Taken as a whole, this is a beautiful piece, my friend. It’s reverent, honest, and deeply humble all at once…moving from gratitude for the oceans and stars to a genuine confession of our poverty of spirit. As for faith and religion, we grow into those as we do when the time is right. God is good, my friend, all the time. Beautifully done, Demar! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 8th, 2026 19:22
I do not know how to live
Friendship said:
So true, my friend, it\'s called life.❤️
July 8th, 2026 12:12
Friendship said:
So true, my friend, it\'s called life.❤️
July 8th, 2026 12:12
I do not know how to live
arqios said:
moderation is modernation, too much of the avant garde recedes as flash noveau. a fad quickly forgotten. 🙏🕊️
July 8th, 2026 06:49
arqios said:
moderation is modernation, too much of the avant garde recedes as flash noveau. a fad quickly forgotten. 🙏🕊️
July 8th, 2026 06:49
I do not know how to live
sorenbarrett said:
Well said Demar we may call it live but then we have nothing else to compare it to. Well done
July 8th, 2026 06:01
sorenbarrett said:
Well said Demar we may call it live but then we have nothing else to compare it to. Well done
July 8th, 2026 06:01
my favorite quote from a book
sorenbarrett said:
This is definitely a poem in a prayer. Well worded
July 7th, 2026 18:41
sorenbarrett said:
This is definitely a poem in a prayer. Well worded
July 7th, 2026 18:41
I love sex
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this gave me a good laugh, my friend. 😄 I suppose I\'m the exception, because my answer is, \"I don\'t.\" It\'s a long, sad, and complicated story...but I still enjoyed thoroughly where you took this. Great write, dearest friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 6th, 2026 10:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this gave me a good laugh, my friend. 😄 I suppose I\'m the exception, because my answer is, \"I don\'t.\" It\'s a long, sad, and complicated story...but I still enjoyed thoroughly where you took this. Great write, dearest friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 6th, 2026 10:56
I love sex
sorenbarrett said:
Sex the most basic of life activities to propagate the species and life itself. One of the strongest drives next to self preservation it contains a pleasure element to make it addictive. We have generalized it in literature in metaphor. Nicely done Demar
July 5th, 2026 07:04
sorenbarrett said:
Sex the most basic of life activities to propagate the species and life itself. One of the strongest drives next to self preservation it contains a pleasure element to make it addictive. We have generalized it in literature in metaphor. Nicely done Demar
July 5th, 2026 07:04
A river cuts through rock not because of strength but because of persistence
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this really made me think. I like how each haiku builds on the last until the final one quietly brings everything together. Thoughtful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 4th, 2026 23:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this really made me think. I like how each haiku builds on the last until the final one quietly brings everything together. Thoughtful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 4th, 2026 23:18
greed is foolish
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I mean…right?!?! Well done on this, bro! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 4th, 2026 22:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I mean…right?!?! Well done on this, bro! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 4th, 2026 22:34
A river cuts through rock not because of strength but because of persistence
sorenbarrett said:
This series of senryu was quite clever Demar sending its message through their linkage. Very nicely done and a fave
July 4th, 2026 07:09
sorenbarrett said:
This series of senryu was quite clever Demar sending its message through their linkage. Very nicely done and a fave
July 4th, 2026 07:09
greed is foolish
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely said Demar. One must ask what are manners?
July 3rd, 2026 12:26
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely said Demar. One must ask what are manners?
July 3rd, 2026 12:26
some bad jokes are needed
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, what a lovely little piece. Its simplicity is its strength, and the quiet optimism at its heart lingers long after the last line. We probably all need a few more bad jokes...did you hear about the guy who invented the knock-knock joke? He won the \"No Bell\" Prize. 🤣 Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 3rd, 2026 08:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, what a lovely little piece. Its simplicity is its strength, and the quiet optimism at its heart lingers long after the last line. We probably all need a few more bad jokes...did you hear about the guy who invented the knock-knock joke? He won the \"No Bell\" Prize. 🤣 Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 3rd, 2026 08:40
lions in cages
soheil khodaparasti said:
A gentle reminder that even the fiercest are simply looking for safety.
July 2nd, 2026 14:21
soheil khodaparasti said:
A gentle reminder that even the fiercest are simply looking for safety.
July 2nd, 2026 14:21
some bad jokes are needed
sorenbarrett said:
Humor and laughter is good for the health
July 2nd, 2026 12:58
sorenbarrett said:
Humor and laughter is good for the health
July 2nd, 2026 12:58
lions in cages
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I love the quiet humanity in this. Beginning with lions in cages and arriving at the simple truth that safety is what every creature longs for gives these lines a beautiful emotional reach. Sometimes the gentlest observations carry the greatest weight. Beautiful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 1st, 2026 23:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I love the quiet humanity in this. Beginning with lions in cages and arriving at the simple truth that safety is what every creature longs for gives these lines a beautiful emotional reach. Sometimes the gentlest observations carry the greatest weight. Beautiful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 1st, 2026 23:16
the cat in the window
Tristan Robert Lange said:
And here we both are. I adore cats. Have 2 myself! Wonderful wrote, bro! A fave! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 1st, 2026 19:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
And here we both are. I adore cats. Have 2 myself! Wonderful wrote, bro! A fave! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 1st, 2026 19:13
lions in cages
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write Demar I suppose all living things want that. Well said
July 1st, 2026 14:46
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write Demar I suppose all living things want that. Well said
July 1st, 2026 14:46
the cat in the window
Mutley Ravishes said:
The cat\'s safe. And so are the birds!
June 30th, 2026 18:55
Mutley Ravishes said:
The cat\'s safe. And so are the birds!
June 30th, 2026 18:55
the cat in the window
sorenbarrett said:
A picture taken in words and another haiku senryu blend
June 30th, 2026 14:08
sorenbarrett said:
A picture taken in words and another haiku senryu blend
June 30th, 2026 14:08
resiliency of plants
NafisaSB said:
so it is with human life too - nature is really resilient...
June 30th, 2026 06:06
NafisaSB said:
so it is with human life too - nature is really resilient...
June 30th, 2026 06:06
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