Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
tragedy and love
Jabberwocky said:
The clear and simple matter
But not alas to all
Some more prone to scatter
Confusion as they fall
😉
August 21st, 2026 09:34
Jabberwocky said:
The clear and simple matter
But not alas to all
Some more prone to scatter
Confusion as they fall
😉
August 21st, 2026 09:34
good morning beautiful people
NafisaSB said:
that\'s truly a good and inspirational message...
August 21st, 2026 01:52
NafisaSB said:
that\'s truly a good and inspirational message...
August 21st, 2026 01:52
Those who are bound by desire see only that which can be held in their hands.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a quietly resilient piece, Demar. Material circumstances may restrict the present, but they cannot possess the imagination or determine the future. The title gives those three lines tremendous depth. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 20th, 2026 20:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a quietly resilient piece, Demar. Material circumstances may restrict the present, but they cannot possess the imagination or determine the future. The title gives those three lines tremendous depth. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 20th, 2026 20:42
Those who are bound by desire see only that which can be held in their hands.
Fränz Müller said:
Onward through the fog we go!
August 20th, 2026 15:13
Fränz Müller said:
Onward through the fog we go!
August 20th, 2026 15:13
$265.08 in my bank account
Jabberwocky said:
That\'s 265 more than me!
But the kids are fed and the dishes done, and the sun is out and I can burn off dinner with a walk in the large woods behind my house. I can see them from my garden.
Life is good.
I hope you have woods in your life.
August 20th, 2026 12:30
Jabberwocky said:
That\'s 265 more than me!
But the kids are fed and the dishes done, and the sun is out and I can burn off dinner with a walk in the large woods behind my house. I can see them from my garden.
Life is good.
I hope you have woods in your life.
August 20th, 2026 12:30
Those who are bound by desire see only that which can be held in their hands.
sorenbarrett said:
Pleasure is in the mind not the pocket but a little money does help from time to time. Well said Demar
August 20th, 2026 03:39
sorenbarrett said:
Pleasure is in the mind not the pocket but a little money does help from time to time. Well said Demar
August 20th, 2026 03:39
there’s no more beers left
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last line that hooked me Demar. It seems true but then I have to ask is that true. A powerful statement that is not honored today where it is eminent domain that takes from the individual to give to needs of many. Forced taxation for the good of society. Agree or not that is how it is. Yours is a powerful statement that challenges this. I love it.
August 19th, 2026 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last line that hooked me Demar. It seems true but then I have to ask is that true. A powerful statement that is not honored today where it is eminent domain that takes from the individual to give to needs of many. Forced taxation for the good of society. Agree or not that is how it is. Yours is a powerful statement that challenges this. I love it.
August 19th, 2026 04:20
cowards get no empathy from me
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this is a compact declaration of severance. Once someone becomes willing to destroy even their own integrity, distance can become an act of self-preservation...blunt, fierce, and effective. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 18th, 2026 21:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this is a compact declaration of severance. Once someone becomes willing to destroy even their own integrity, distance can become an act of self-preservation...blunt, fierce, and effective. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 18th, 2026 21:44
Life in motion
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this carries such warmth and peace in so little space...a beautiful offering, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 18th, 2026 21:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this carries such warmth and peace in so little space...a beautiful offering, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 18th, 2026 21:22
cowards get no empathy from me
Allie561 said:
It’s all just a matter of power for them
August 18th, 2026 19:24
Allie561 said:
It’s all just a matter of power for them
August 18th, 2026 19:24
cowards get no empathy from me
sorenbarrett said:
There is disgust and anger in this write. Well said
August 18th, 2026 09:26
sorenbarrett said:
There is disgust and anger in this write. Well said
August 18th, 2026 09:26
Life in motion
sorenbarrett said:
May the yin and the yang take you from both sides
August 17th, 2026 20:12
sorenbarrett said:
May the yin and the yang take you from both sides
August 17th, 2026 20:12
Life in motion
Allie561 said:
Life is always moving, seems like I’m going in the wrong lane! Nice write Demar
August 17th, 2026 19:59
Allie561 said:
Life is always moving, seems like I’m going in the wrong lane! Nice write Demar
August 17th, 2026 19:59
-$160.58 in my bank account
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this is painfully funny. Financial disaster meets retail consolation, and somehow the purchase still wins the argument. Great little piece, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2026 18:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this is painfully funny. Financial disaster meets retail consolation, and somehow the purchase still wins the argument. Great little piece, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2026 18:51
-$160.58 in my bank account
Paul Bell said:
Don\'t look upon it as a chain.
Look upon it as a love token.
As I often get told. What yours is mine, and what\'s mine I keep.
August 17th, 2026 14:24
Paul Bell said:
Don\'t look upon it as a chain.
Look upon it as a love token.
As I often get told. What yours is mine, and what\'s mine I keep.
August 17th, 2026 14:24
-$160.58 in my bank account
Allie561 said:
Well something nice is a good investment as long as you keep wearing it!
August 16th, 2026 21:46
Allie561 said:
Well something nice is a good investment as long as you keep wearing it!
August 16th, 2026 21:46
-$160.58 in my bank account
sorenbarrett said:
Hope the chain was worth it. Well said
August 16th, 2026 20:44
sorenbarrett said:
Hope the chain was worth it. Well said
August 16th, 2026 20:44
Release the patents!
Fränz Müller said:
The tickets on my train of thought are far too expensive 😁
Great one!
August 15th, 2026 15:34
Fränz Müller said:
The tickets on my train of thought are far too expensive 😁
Great one!
August 15th, 2026 15:34
Release the patents!
sorenbarrett said:
Is pretty flower the kigo? and the dots the kireji? a good read my friend.
August 15th, 2026 07:07
sorenbarrett said:
Is pretty flower the kigo? and the dots the kireji? a good read my friend.
August 15th, 2026 07:07
Yesterday I blamed the sun for my problems
James Michael said:
A mix of haiku and senryu. Nicely done. We always strive to understand things, in reality it’s a mystery, I believe. A fave!
August 14th, 2026 22:38
James Michael said:
A mix of haiku and senryu. Nicely done. We always strive to understand things, in reality it’s a mystery, I believe. A fave!
August 14th, 2026 22:38
Yesterday I blamed the sun for my problems
Allie561 said:
This one is relatable Demar, blaming one thing and then realizing that you might’ve been wrong. I like to think I don’t do that but I do, wonderful job
August 14th, 2026 12:42
Allie561 said:
This one is relatable Demar, blaming one thing and then realizing that you might’ve been wrong. I like to think I don’t do that but I do, wonderful job
August 14th, 2026 12:42
Yesterday I blamed the sun for my problems
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this made me laugh and think at the same time. There’s something painfully human about blaming the wrong thing, realizing it, and still knowing the real lesson hasn’t quite settled in yet. Strong little piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 14th, 2026 09:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this made me laugh and think at the same time. There’s something painfully human about blaming the wrong thing, realizing it, and still knowing the real lesson hasn’t quite settled in yet. Strong little piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 14th, 2026 09:51
Yesterday I blamed the sun for my problems
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely done Demar with a cutting word as well
August 14th, 2026 09:40
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely done Demar with a cutting word as well
August 14th, 2026 09:40
the saint is simply the sinner who keeps on trying
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Demar…this is brief, but it carries real weight. There’s uncertainty, fatigue, and still this quiet sense that our obligation to one another matters. I really connected with that. Strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 13th, 2026 19:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Demar…this is brief, but it carries real weight. There’s uncertainty, fatigue, and still this quiet sense that our obligation to one another matters. I really connected with that. Strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 13th, 2026 19:54
the saint is simply the sinner who keeps on trying
sorenbarrett said:
A question and a prayer nicely done
August 13th, 2026 10:15
sorenbarrett said:
A question and a prayer nicely done
August 13th, 2026 10:15
good morning beautiful people
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A nice lovely poem to inspire, short n sweet
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
August 13th, 2026 06:18
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A nice lovely poem to inspire, short n sweet
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
August 13th, 2026 06:18
good morning beautiful people
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, what a beautiful little morning thought. There’s something deeply grounding about beginning the day remembering that dignity isn’t determined by the job we do, but by what we bring to it. Wonderful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 12th, 2026 21:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, what a beautiful little morning thought. There’s something deeply grounding about beginning the day remembering that dignity isn’t determined by the job we do, but by what we bring to it. Wonderful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 12th, 2026 21:39
I apologize for my harshness, brashness, and foolishness…
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, I’ve definitely had those moments where the mouth gets moving before the internal brakes engage. 🤣 Owning it afterward is part of being human. I felt this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 12th, 2026 21:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, I’ve definitely had those moments where the mouth gets moving before the internal brakes engage. 🤣 Owning it afterward is part of being human. I felt this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 12th, 2026 21:16
good morning beautiful people
Allie561 said:
That was nicely put Demar! There’s nothing worse than a person who hates their job
August 12th, 2026 10:43
Allie561 said:
That was nicely put Demar! There’s nothing worse than a person who hates their job
August 12th, 2026 10:43
good morning beautiful people
Paul Bell said:
To all traffic wardens, this poem is for you.
Apart from the one who booked me. C\'mon I was only two days over my time.
August 12th, 2026 07:59
Paul Bell said:
To all traffic wardens, this poem is for you.
Apart from the one who booked me. C\'mon I was only two days over my time.
August 12th, 2026 07:59
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