Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
The little atoms of light
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Who knows, right? Love those little atoms though! 🤣 📺
January 31st, 2025 23:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Who knows, right? Love those little atoms though! 🤣 📺
January 31st, 2025 23:40
I love basketball
sorenbarrett said:
Remember the song and remember going to the YMCA to swim. Brings back old times
January 30th, 2025 08:35
sorenbarrett said:
Remember the song and remember going to the YMCA to swim. Brings back old times
January 30th, 2025 08:35
The Pain of Pleasure
sorenbarrett said:
It is the contrast between to opposites that give appreciation for each. Nicely said
January 29th, 2025 13:04
sorenbarrett said:
It is the contrast between to opposites that give appreciation for each. Nicely said
January 29th, 2025 13:04
-$1.56 in my bank account
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Understood. Say no more! 🤣 Well done, bro! 🤘😎
January 28th, 2025 19:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Understood. Say no more! 🤣 Well done, bro! 🤘😎
January 28th, 2025 19:41
-$1.56 in my bank account
sorenbarrett said:
You got that nothing worse than a date ordering what you can\'t afford. On the other hand it is very rude to order what is not offered. Ialways order the least expensive thing on the menue if someone else is buying. Same with drinks. A fun read
January 28th, 2025 12:05
sorenbarrett said:
You got that nothing worse than a date ordering what you can\'t afford. On the other hand it is very rude to order what is not offered. Ialways order the least expensive thing on the menue if someone else is buying. Same with drinks. A fun read
January 28th, 2025 12:05
Days of Nothing
sorenbarrett said:
I have already laid with the couch and the couch is not faithful. A most interesting write. Short and to the point
January 27th, 2025 18:16
sorenbarrett said:
I have already laid with the couch and the couch is not faithful. A most interesting write. Short and to the point
January 27th, 2025 18:16
Sunday Blues
sorenbarrett said:
This one so easily visualized and so inviting I\'m ready to dive in deserves a Fave
January 26th, 2025 12:28
sorenbarrett said:
This one so easily visualized and so inviting I\'m ready to dive in deserves a Fave
January 26th, 2025 12:28
a first date for the ages
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ooh. Looking forward to it for you! Well done, bro...on the poem and the date! 🌹👏
January 25th, 2025 20:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ooh. Looking forward to it for you! Well done, bro...on the poem and the date! 🌹👏
January 25th, 2025 20:13
a first date for the ages
sorenbarrett said:
I hear excitement in this poem. A sense of thrill. Nicely said.
January 25th, 2025 16:13
sorenbarrett said:
I hear excitement in this poem. A sense of thrill. Nicely said.
January 25th, 2025 16:13
rainbows in the night
sorenbarrett said:
Water is needed for life to exist. Written most clearly.
January 24th, 2025 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
Water is needed for life to exist. Written most clearly.
January 24th, 2025 04:18
intercourse isn’t everything
Tristan Robert Lange said:
When one is so fortunate, there is nothing like it. Well done, bro! 🌹👏
January 23rd, 2025 09:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
When one is so fortunate, there is nothing like it. Well done, bro! 🌹👏
January 23rd, 2025 09:07
intercourse isn’t everything
sorenbarrett said:
And is that not sex? Foreplay maybe? But then there are the words that like a fragrance from a blossom carries on the wind to alure the bee. The world is briming with sex and it is what sustains life. Ah yes there is much more than what the wold calls sex in a universe of passion. Lovely thought provoking read
January 23rd, 2025 06:09
sorenbarrett said:
And is that not sex? Foreplay maybe? But then there are the words that like a fragrance from a blossom carries on the wind to alure the bee. The world is briming with sex and it is what sustains life. Ah yes there is much more than what the wold calls sex in a universe of passion. Lovely thought provoking read
January 23rd, 2025 06:09
Pronunciation
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the flow of this. Really makes you think, bro!
January 22nd, 2025 09:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the flow of this. Really makes you think, bro!
January 22nd, 2025 09:22
Pronunciation
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that makes one think and rethink. Nicely done
January 22nd, 2025 09:13
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that makes one think and rethink. Nicely done
January 22nd, 2025 09:13
expectations causing depression
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Another dynamite, relatable senryu, my friend! Well done! 🌹👏
January 21st, 2025 08:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Another dynamite, relatable senryu, my friend! Well done! 🌹👏
January 21st, 2025 08:54
expectations causing depression
sorenbarrett said:
A mind teaser this haiku or maybe senryu makes one think
January 21st, 2025 08:41
sorenbarrett said:
A mind teaser this haiku or maybe senryu makes one think
January 21st, 2025 08:41
bad dreams
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! What a way to interpret a dream...toward self-improvement! Must\'ve been a hell of a dream. Rock on, bro! Well done! 🌹👏
January 20th, 2025 09:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! What a way to interpret a dream...toward self-improvement! Must\'ve been a hell of a dream. Rock on, bro! Well done! 🌹👏
January 20th, 2025 09:36
bad dreams
sorenbarrett said:
I like the use of negatives in this poem to trite cliche to something novel. Very nicely done
January 20th, 2025 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
I like the use of negatives in this poem to trite cliche to something novel. Very nicely done
January 20th, 2025 04:39
Puerto Rico!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I am taking it this is where you are vacationing. If so, enjoy it, my friend!
January 19th, 2025 16:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I am taking it this is where you are vacationing. If so, enjoy it, my friend!
January 19th, 2025 16:39
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