Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
being an adult
ms.divine said:
Yes but there reality is your illusion u created your reality ⭐🫶🏾🫂
April 25th, 2026 10:12
ms.divine said:
Yes but there reality is your illusion u created your reality ⭐🫶🏾🫂
April 25th, 2026 10:12
being an adult
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, some of us do...tell stories of hope, anyway. But yeah...adulthood seems to = filters, among other things. Question, is adulthood a social construct? You\'ve left me pondering. Methinks it, in many ways, is. Great write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 25th, 2026 09:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, some of us do...tell stories of hope, anyway. But yeah...adulthood seems to = filters, among other things. Question, is adulthood a social construct? You\'ve left me pondering. Methinks it, in many ways, is. Great write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 25th, 2026 09:09
being an adult
Mutley Ravishes said:
Yes, we`re still alive. And is the lost Eden of Imagination waiting for our return?!
April 25th, 2026 06:14
Mutley Ravishes said:
Yes, we`re still alive. And is the lost Eden of Imagination waiting for our return?!
April 25th, 2026 06:14
being an adult
sorenbarrett said:
That says it pretty well but I have to ask how do we know we are alive
April 25th, 2026 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
That says it pretty well but I have to ask how do we know we are alive
April 25th, 2026 04:54
What else is there to do?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this holds that tension between restraint and pull…between what we push away and what still calls to us. It doesn’t resolve it, and that’s what makes it real. I’ve been in that space too…where desire doesn’t listen to reason. You kept it simple and let it speak. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 23rd, 2026 08:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this holds that tension between restraint and pull…between what we push away and what still calls to us. It doesn’t resolve it, and that’s what makes it real. I’ve been in that space too…where desire doesn’t listen to reason. You kept it simple and let it speak. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 23rd, 2026 08:40
What else is there to do?
Allie561 said:
Baking is a nice pastime, but writing feeds my soul.
April 22nd, 2026 22:29
Allie561 said:
Baking is a nice pastime, but writing feeds my soul.
April 22nd, 2026 22:29
あい Seikatsu
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hahaha! What can I say, 💩 happens! LOL! Love it, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 22nd, 2026 09:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hahaha! What can I say, 💩 happens! LOL! Love it, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 22nd, 2026 09:02
あい Seikatsu
Mutley Ravishes said:
I wonder what the background story is to your Imagination being capture by dog poop, Demar?!
April 21st, 2026 18:22
Mutley Ravishes said:
I wonder what the background story is to your Imagination being capture by dog poop, Demar?!
April 21st, 2026 18:22
あい Seikatsu
sorenbarrett said:
Every day is different we never know what each holds in store
April 21st, 2026 11:21
sorenbarrett said:
Every day is different we never know what each holds in store
April 21st, 2026 11:21
あい Seikatsu
Allie561 said:
And it seems the most interesting thing I’ve been doing is staring at the clock waiting for it to hit the hour.
April 21st, 2026 10:29
Allie561 said:
And it seems the most interesting thing I’ve been doing is staring at the clock waiting for it to hit the hour.
April 21st, 2026 10:29
Having to earn things
Allie561 said:
It always seems to hit harder when you try and still fail, but good things are to come.
April 21st, 2026 10:28
Allie561 said:
It always seems to hit harder when you try and still fail, but good things are to come.
April 21st, 2026 10:28
Some traditions are nice
Allie561 said:
Not all traditions are bad, nicely said Demar
April 21st, 2026 10:27
Allie561 said:
Not all traditions are bad, nicely said Demar
April 21st, 2026 10:27
Having to earn things
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, yeah…on the surface it makes sense, but it never really plays out that clean. I’ve seen the same effort lead to very different outcomes, and that tension sticks with me. You touched something real here, my friend. Thought-provoking write as always. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 20th, 2026 10:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, yeah…on the surface it makes sense, but it never really plays out that clean. I’ve seen the same effort lead to very different outcomes, and that tension sticks with me. You touched something real here, my friend. Thought-provoking write as always. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 20th, 2026 10:35
Some traditions are nice
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes, some traditions can be nice indeed. Well said, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 20th, 2026 10:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes, some traditions can be nice indeed. Well said, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 20th, 2026 10:23
Having to earn things
arqios said:
The idiom \'earning a living\' always was elusive. It must be the inflation and avarice co-venturing together. 🕊️🙏
April 20th, 2026 06:45
arqios said:
The idiom \'earning a living\' always was elusive. It must be the inflation and avarice co-venturing together. 🕊️🙏
April 20th, 2026 06:45
Some traditions are nice
sorenbarrett said:
Sport are a big part of US culture
April 19th, 2026 19:48
sorenbarrett said:
Sport are a big part of US culture
April 19th, 2026 19:48
Say no to gambling
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this lands clean and direct…there’s no noise around it, just a clear warning that sticks. It feels like something said from experience, not theory. One thing I know, being broke helps with that cause! LOL! Strong piece.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 18th, 2026 21:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this lands clean and direct…there’s no noise around it, just a clear warning that sticks. It feels like something said from experience, not theory. One thing I know, being broke helps with that cause! LOL! Strong piece.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 18th, 2026 21:00
Say no to gambling
sorenbarrett said:
A good question I would say a full stomach a quenched thirst and a soft bed.
April 18th, 2026 17:02
sorenbarrett said:
A good question I would say a full stomach a quenched thirst and a soft bed.
April 18th, 2026 17:02
Say no to gambling
arqios said:
The void in my pocket reflects the vastness of what the world does not owe me… a truth of gambling dilemma
April 18th, 2026 16:44
arqios said:
The void in my pocket reflects the vastness of what the world does not owe me… a truth of gambling dilemma
April 18th, 2026 16:44
Looking good vs. feeling good
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Feeling good wins...but I feel good when I look good...so 🤷♂️😅🤣 Thought-provoking write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 18th, 2026 13:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Feeling good wins...but I feel good when I look good...so 🤷♂️😅🤣 Thought-provoking write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 18th, 2026 13:58
Looking good vs. feeling good
Allie561 said:
I would rather feel good than look good. There’s no point of making myself sick to look better.
April 18th, 2026 10:19
Allie561 said:
I would rather feel good than look good. There’s no point of making myself sick to look better.
April 18th, 2026 10:19
and who am I to complain?
Allie561 said:
There is so much to be thankful for, the list goes on and on. I really like this poem Demar.
April 18th, 2026 10:18
Allie561 said:
There is so much to be thankful for, the list goes on and on. I really like this poem Demar.
April 18th, 2026 10:18
What are my goals?
Allie561 said:
I make so many but I feel like I never complete them
April 18th, 2026 10:17
Allie561 said:
I make so many but I feel like I never complete them
April 18th, 2026 10:17
do you value life?
NafisaSB said:
each life is valuable - it\'s sad if one thinks only of self, and gives two hoots about others..though that is the trend in the world today unfortunately
April 17th, 2026 23:54
NafisaSB said:
each life is valuable - it\'s sad if one thinks only of self, and gives two hoots about others..though that is the trend in the world today unfortunately
April 17th, 2026 23:54
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