Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
$38.58 in my bank account
Tristan Robert Lange said:
OOh. A new direction. Out of the red and into the black. Whatever are you doing wrong!?!? 🤣 All jokes aside. This haiku delivers bro. Whether we are in the red or in the black, it\'s the same shit keeping us right where \"the man\" wants us. Well done on this! A fave for sure!
April 1st, 2025 11:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
OOh. A new direction. Out of the red and into the black. Whatever are you doing wrong!?!? 🤣 All jokes aside. This haiku delivers bro. Whether we are in the red or in the black, it\'s the same shit keeping us right where \"the man\" wants us. Well done on this! A fave for sure!
April 1st, 2025 11:24
$38.58 in my bank account
sorenbarrett said:
I didn\'t have to ask it eloped in the night before I checked in the morning. A fun read
April 1st, 2025 06:57
sorenbarrett said:
I didn\'t have to ask it eloped in the night before I checked in the morning. A fun read
April 1st, 2025 06:57
Poetry for Plants
sorenbarrett said:
Depending on what we mean about consciousness I agree and such a nice write.
March 30th, 2025 08:45
sorenbarrett said:
Depending on what we mean about consciousness I agree and such a nice write.
March 30th, 2025 08:45
Consumerism Mind Control
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truth in three words! Well done bro!
March 29th, 2025 10:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truth in three words! Well done bro!
March 29th, 2025 10:58
Consumerism Mind Control
sorenbarrett said:
Must be another telemarketer, or my credit card company . Another fun read.
March 29th, 2025 04:36
sorenbarrett said:
Must be another telemarketer, or my credit card company . Another fun read.
March 29th, 2025 04:36
Tilling or no tilling
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you I do some and it is not an easy task. i believe most people would rather pay to eat artificial fertilizer and pesticides with waxed produce and hormone pumped meat than do their own. A sad state of affairs. Good write
March 22nd, 2025 08:13
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you I do some and it is not an easy task. i believe most people would rather pay to eat artificial fertilizer and pesticides with waxed produce and hormone pumped meat than do their own. A sad state of affairs. Good write
March 22nd, 2025 08:13
Capitalism in Crisis
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Profound question that has no answer? We are figuring this out in real time. Great write, my friend, as always! 🌹👏
March 20th, 2025 08:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Profound question that has no answer? We are figuring this out in real time. Great write, my friend, as always! 🌹👏
March 20th, 2025 08:47
Capitalism in Crisis
Poetic Dan said:
I\'ve been having this thought! Does anyone really want to help or is it just because we get paid for it.
Keep up the write
Thanks for sharing
Much peace and respect
March 19th, 2025 23:51
Poetic Dan said:
I\'ve been having this thought! Does anyone really want to help or is it just because we get paid for it.
Keep up the write
Thanks for sharing
Much peace and respect
March 19th, 2025 23:51
Capitalism in Crisis
sorenbarrett said:
A good question that remains to be answered. Well said
March 19th, 2025 20:01
sorenbarrett said:
A good question that remains to be answered. Well said
March 19th, 2025 20:01
Conscious sexual engagement advancement
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent, my friend! A fave for sure! 🌹👏
March 18th, 2025 17:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent, my friend! A fave for sure! 🌹👏
March 18th, 2025 17:08
Conscious sexual engagement advancement
sorenbarrett said:
A good idea I think I\'ll steal. A fun read
March 18th, 2025 10:45
sorenbarrett said:
A good idea I think I\'ll steal. A fun read
March 18th, 2025 10:45
washed up
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very thought-provoking. BTW, love your book bro! Did you do the artwork in it? Either way, well done! 🌹👏
March 13th, 2025 19:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very thought-provoking. BTW, love your book bro! Did you do the artwork in it? Either way, well done! 🌹👏
March 13th, 2025 19:55
Organic vs Artificial
sorenbarrett said:
Got it I think, how hard to eat rocks. Very nice.
March 11th, 2025 05:06
sorenbarrett said:
Got it I think, how hard to eat rocks. Very nice.
March 11th, 2025 05:06
A Poet’s Poet
Cassie58 said:
We all need to make a crust. Good luck for your book. Have a happy Sunday.
March 9th, 2025 07:08
Cassie58 said:
We all need to make a crust. Good luck for your book. Have a happy Sunday.
March 9th, 2025 07:08
$16.44 in my bank account
sorenbarrett said:
Not going on a date is a long term savings that compounds over time. A fun read
March 8th, 2025 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
Not going on a date is a long term savings that compounds over time. A fun read
March 8th, 2025 04:49
winter of demar
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds like a poem of the national past time. Fun read
March 6th, 2025 09:16
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds like a poem of the national past time. Fun read
March 6th, 2025 09:16
hard to do
sorenbarrett said:
May be a good place to be. Another short but provocative poem to make the mind think
March 1st, 2025 14:42
sorenbarrett said:
May be a good place to be. Another short but provocative poem to make the mind think
March 1st, 2025 14:42
NBA 2k25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
All statements of facts from the poem to the note. 🤣 Well done bro! 👏
February 28th, 2025 21:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
All statements of facts from the poem to the note. 🤣 Well done bro! 👏
February 28th, 2025 21:22
NBA 2k25
sorenbarrett said:
A fun Senryu. It seems that all games have deteriorated over the years to money making nothing of what they used to be.
February 28th, 2025 21:21
sorenbarrett said:
A fun Senryu. It seems that all games have deteriorated over the years to money making nothing of what they used to be.
February 28th, 2025 21:21
internet! What have you done!
sheta said:
I literally couldent stop laughing
February 27th, 2025 21:08
sheta said:
I literally couldent stop laughing
February 27th, 2025 21:08
internet! What have you done!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Makes some less ignorant...but also puts many others\' ignorance on full display. 🤣 Well expressed in this truthful and funny poem, friend. 👏🌹
February 27th, 2025 18:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Makes some less ignorant...but also puts many others\' ignorance on full display. 🤣 Well expressed in this truthful and funny poem, friend. 👏🌹
February 27th, 2025 18:31
internet! What have you done!
sorenbarrett said:
The good and bad all things have. This is portrayed in this poem. Yes we sometimes forget the bad and embrace the good if it is for our benefit and embrace the bad forgetting the good if it supports our feelings about ourself or the world. A good write.
February 27th, 2025 14:30
sorenbarrett said:
The good and bad all things have. This is portrayed in this poem. Yes we sometimes forget the bad and embrace the good if it is for our benefit and embrace the bad forgetting the good if it supports our feelings about ourself or the world. A good write.
February 27th, 2025 14:30
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