Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
NBA 2k25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
All statements of facts from the poem to the note. 🤣 Well done bro! 👏
February 28th, 2025 21:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
All statements of facts from the poem to the note. 🤣 Well done bro! 👏
February 28th, 2025 21:22
NBA 2k25
sorenbarrett said:
A fun Senryu. It seems that all games have deteriorated over the years to money making nothing of what they used to be.
February 28th, 2025 21:21
sorenbarrett said:
A fun Senryu. It seems that all games have deteriorated over the years to money making nothing of what they used to be.
February 28th, 2025 21:21
internet! What have you done!
sheta said:
I literally couldent stop laughing
February 27th, 2025 21:08
sheta said:
I literally couldent stop laughing
February 27th, 2025 21:08
internet! What have you done!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Makes some less ignorant...but also puts many others\' ignorance on full display. 🤣 Well expressed in this truthful and funny poem, friend. 👏🌹
February 27th, 2025 18:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Makes some less ignorant...but also puts many others\' ignorance on full display. 🤣 Well expressed in this truthful and funny poem, friend. 👏🌹
February 27th, 2025 18:31
internet! What have you done!
sorenbarrett said:
The good and bad all things have. This is portrayed in this poem. Yes we sometimes forget the bad and embrace the good if it is for our benefit and embrace the bad forgetting the good if it supports our feelings about ourself or the world. A good write.
February 27th, 2025 14:30
sorenbarrett said:
The good and bad all things have. This is portrayed in this poem. Yes we sometimes forget the bad and embrace the good if it is for our benefit and embrace the bad forgetting the good if it supports our feelings about ourself or the world. A good write.
February 27th, 2025 14:30
commodifying myself
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Count me in bro. Purchased! Broke artists support broke artists. It\'s a thing! 😂 So, your book is on the way! 📦🚚
February 26th, 2025 11:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Count me in bro. Purchased! Broke artists support broke artists. It\'s a thing! 😂 So, your book is on the way! 📦🚚
February 26th, 2025 11:00
commodifying myself
sorenbarrett said:
Thought provoking this one had to be thought about for a while. So much said in so few words. Nicely done
February 26th, 2025 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
Thought provoking this one had to be thought about for a while. So much said in so few words. Nicely done
February 26th, 2025 04:22
being poor
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truth! The American Dream should really be called American Proapaganda! It’s held up by the 1% in power, with some scraps of opportunity thrown to the dogs. When one of the dogs catches the scraps. They say, “Good boy/girl”, look how great America is! Feel lucky!” Then they make posters, put that one lucky dog on a billboard, while the rest of us dogs drool and fight over the thought of the scraps. And all of this is guarded by an ignorant pack of dogs, who still believe they’re gonna have some scraps trickled down. Poverty isn’t just a mindset.. It’s how the rich keep their control and stay masters of the pack. Well done, friend, this is truth! 🌹🙏
February 23rd, 2025 07:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truth! The American Dream should really be called American Proapaganda! It’s held up by the 1% in power, with some scraps of opportunity thrown to the dogs. When one of the dogs catches the scraps. They say, “Good boy/girl”, look how great America is! Feel lucky!” Then they make posters, put that one lucky dog on a billboard, while the rest of us dogs drool and fight over the thought of the scraps. And all of this is guarded by an ignorant pack of dogs, who still believe they’re gonna have some scraps trickled down. Poverty isn’t just a mindset.. It’s how the rich keep their control and stay masters of the pack. Well done, friend, this is truth! 🌹🙏
February 23rd, 2025 07:12
anger transfers
Melancholic~Onion said:
I liked the fact that you didn\'t talk about the anger itself but continued, as if in a conversation.
February 23rd, 2025 06:56
Melancholic~Onion said:
I liked the fact that you didn\'t talk about the anger itself but continued, as if in a conversation.
February 23rd, 2025 06:56
anger transfers
whats write for me said:
A stark reminder, life is too short to live angry. Great work.
February 23rd, 2025 06:14
whats write for me said:
A stark reminder, life is too short to live angry. Great work.
February 23rd, 2025 06:14
anger transfers
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting approach and thought provoking poem. Nicely done
February 23rd, 2025 05:50
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting approach and thought provoking poem. Nicely done
February 23rd, 2025 05:50
being poor
sorenbarrett said:
As Dolly says in her song \"you are only poor if you choose to be\" It is a state of mind in comparison to others. A most poignant write in these days of keeping up with the Jones.
February 22nd, 2025 19:20
sorenbarrett said:
As Dolly says in her song \"you are only poor if you choose to be\" It is a state of mind in comparison to others. A most poignant write in these days of keeping up with the Jones.
February 22nd, 2025 19:20
cyclones spirals whirlpools
vicecream said:
The answer I’m still exploring it goes so deep.. language of circle
February 22nd, 2025 09:23
vicecream said:
The answer I’m still exploring it goes so deep.. language of circle
February 22nd, 2025 09:23
The Love of Lichen
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Bro, I want to believe this; however, it seems so far from EVER happening. Still, I believe this to be true, not matter how discouraging it can get. If it exists in nature, how can it be impossible for humans? Well done, my friend! ❤️
February 20th, 2025 08:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Bro, I want to believe this; however, it seems so far from EVER happening. Still, I believe this to be true, not matter how discouraging it can get. If it exists in nature, how can it be impossible for humans? Well done, my friend! ❤️
February 20th, 2025 08:18
The Love of Lichen
sorenbarrett said:
Another great Haiku with meaning that is layered. Nice and multifaceted.
February 20th, 2025 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
Another great Haiku with meaning that is layered. Nice and multifaceted.
February 20th, 2025 04:48
Kaizen
sorenbarrett said:
There is greater depth to this Haiku than at first glance. Loved it
February 19th, 2025 05:18
sorenbarrett said:
There is greater depth to this Haiku than at first glance. Loved it
February 19th, 2025 05:18
poetry in time
sorenbarrett said:
It appears that you have captured more than a couple. Your writes are nuggets of delight in the cookie of the day.
February 16th, 2025 03:51
sorenbarrett said:
It appears that you have captured more than a couple. Your writes are nuggets of delight in the cookie of the day.
February 16th, 2025 03:51
anniversary tomorrow
sorenbarrett said:
The best gifts are those that come from the heart to the hands and back to the heart. Nicely written
February 14th, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
The best gifts are those that come from the heart to the hands and back to the heart. Nicely written
February 14th, 2025 04:30
Internet Capes
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Deep and thought-provoking, my friend.
February 12th, 2025 21:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Deep and thought-provoking, my friend.
February 12th, 2025 21:46
cyclones spirals whirlpools
sorenbarrett said:
This may apply to many things and is thought provoking.
February 10th, 2025 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
This may apply to many things and is thought provoking.
February 10th, 2025 03:50
falling in love again
Kevin Hulme said:
Let’s face it, #’You can’t help it’#
Good write.
February 8th, 2025 20:30
Kevin Hulme said:
Let’s face it, #’You can’t help it’#
Good write.
February 8th, 2025 20:30
falling in love again
sorenbarrett said:
Cycle of the moon, change in hormones, something you ate, poems you\'ve read? Don\'t question what is for the better. A fun read
February 8th, 2025 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
Cycle of the moon, change in hormones, something you ate, poems you\'ve read? Don\'t question what is for the better. A fun read
February 8th, 2025 04:18
Mindless Mindfulness
Mutley Ravishes said:
De ja vus?
Haven\'t me and you
Been through this experience before?
It\'s becoming a laborious
Chore
February 6th, 2025 18:13
Mutley Ravishes said:
De ja vus?
Haven\'t me and you
Been through this experience before?
It\'s becoming a laborious
Chore
February 6th, 2025 18:13
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