Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
I love sex
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this gave me a good laugh, my friend. 😄 I suppose I\'m the exception, because my answer is, \"I don\'t.\" It\'s a long, sad, and complicated story...but I still enjoyed thoroughly where you took this. Great write, dearest friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 6th, 2026 10:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this gave me a good laugh, my friend. 😄 I suppose I\'m the exception, because my answer is, \"I don\'t.\" It\'s a long, sad, and complicated story...but I still enjoyed thoroughly where you took this. Great write, dearest friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 6th, 2026 10:56
I love sex
sorenbarrett said:
Sex the most basic of life activities to propagate the species and life itself. One of the strongest drives next to self preservation it contains a pleasure element to make it addictive. We have generalized it in literature in metaphor. Nicely done Demar
July 5th, 2026 07:04
sorenbarrett said:
Sex the most basic of life activities to propagate the species and life itself. One of the strongest drives next to self preservation it contains a pleasure element to make it addictive. We have generalized it in literature in metaphor. Nicely done Demar
July 5th, 2026 07:04
A river cuts through rock not because of strength but because of persistence
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this really made me think. I like how each haiku builds on the last until the final one quietly brings everything together. Thoughtful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 4th, 2026 23:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this really made me think. I like how each haiku builds on the last until the final one quietly brings everything together. Thoughtful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 4th, 2026 23:18
greed is foolish
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I mean…right?!?! Well done on this, bro! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 4th, 2026 22:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I mean…right?!?! Well done on this, bro! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 4th, 2026 22:34
A river cuts through rock not because of strength but because of persistence
sorenbarrett said:
This series of senryu was quite clever Demar sending its message through their linkage. Very nicely done and a fave
July 4th, 2026 07:09
sorenbarrett said:
This series of senryu was quite clever Demar sending its message through their linkage. Very nicely done and a fave
July 4th, 2026 07:09
greed is foolish
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely said Demar. One must ask what are manners?
July 3rd, 2026 12:26
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely said Demar. One must ask what are manners?
July 3rd, 2026 12:26
some bad jokes are needed
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, what a lovely little piece. Its simplicity is its strength, and the quiet optimism at its heart lingers long after the last line. We probably all need a few more bad jokes...did you hear about the guy who invented the knock-knock joke? He won the \"No Bell\" Prize. 🤣 Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 3rd, 2026 08:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, what a lovely little piece. Its simplicity is its strength, and the quiet optimism at its heart lingers long after the last line. We probably all need a few more bad jokes...did you hear about the guy who invented the knock-knock joke? He won the \"No Bell\" Prize. 🤣 Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 3rd, 2026 08:40
lions in cages
soheil khodaparasti said:
A gentle reminder that even the fiercest are simply looking for safety.
July 2nd, 2026 14:21
soheil khodaparasti said:
A gentle reminder that even the fiercest are simply looking for safety.
July 2nd, 2026 14:21
some bad jokes are needed
sorenbarrett said:
Humor and laughter is good for the health
July 2nd, 2026 12:58
sorenbarrett said:
Humor and laughter is good for the health
July 2nd, 2026 12:58
lions in cages
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I love the quiet humanity in this. Beginning with lions in cages and arriving at the simple truth that safety is what every creature longs for gives these lines a beautiful emotional reach. Sometimes the gentlest observations carry the greatest weight. Beautiful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 1st, 2026 23:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I love the quiet humanity in this. Beginning with lions in cages and arriving at the simple truth that safety is what every creature longs for gives these lines a beautiful emotional reach. Sometimes the gentlest observations carry the greatest weight. Beautiful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 1st, 2026 23:16
the cat in the window
Tristan Robert Lange said:
And here we both are. I adore cats. Have 2 myself! Wonderful wrote, bro! A fave! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 1st, 2026 19:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
And here we both are. I adore cats. Have 2 myself! Wonderful wrote, bro! A fave! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 1st, 2026 19:13
lions in cages
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write Demar I suppose all living things want that. Well said
July 1st, 2026 14:46
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write Demar I suppose all living things want that. Well said
July 1st, 2026 14:46
the cat in the window
Mutley Ravishes said:
The cat\'s safe. And so are the birds!
June 30th, 2026 18:55
Mutley Ravishes said:
The cat\'s safe. And so are the birds!
June 30th, 2026 18:55
the cat in the window
sorenbarrett said:
A picture taken in words and another haiku senryu blend
June 30th, 2026 14:08
sorenbarrett said:
A picture taken in words and another haiku senryu blend
June 30th, 2026 14:08
resiliency of plants
NafisaSB said:
so it is with human life too - nature is really resilient...
June 30th, 2026 06:06
NafisaSB said:
so it is with human life too - nature is really resilient...
June 30th, 2026 06:06
in the end… we return to God
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this really touched me, my friend. I love how it begins with everyday blessings and then gently turns our attention to the greatest gift of all. Beautiful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 29th, 2026 09:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this really touched me, my friend. I love how it begins with everyday blessings and then gently turns our attention to the greatest gift of all. Beautiful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 29th, 2026 09:34
Why do the rich not understand the poor?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this really hit me. \"Do you need 8 boats?\" is such a sharp closing because it leaves the question hanging long after the poem ends. Sometimes the simplest questions expose the deepest contradictions. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 29th, 2026 09:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this really hit me. \"Do you need 8 boats?\" is such a sharp closing because it leaves the question hanging long after the poem ends. Sometimes the simplest questions expose the deepest contradictions. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 29th, 2026 09:24
in the end… we return to God
sorenbarrett said:
Gratitude in a poem for convinces as well as to a higher power for feeling at all. Well said Demar
June 29th, 2026 06:39
sorenbarrett said:
Gratitude in a poem for convinces as well as to a higher power for feeling at all. Well said Demar
June 29th, 2026 06:39
Why do the rich not understand the poor?
sorenbarrett said:
Well said Demar it is not about need but about greed. It is not necessity but wants in a society where the few have the most and the most have the least.
June 29th, 2026 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
Well said Demar it is not about need but about greed. It is not necessity but wants in a society where the few have the most and the most have the least.
June 29th, 2026 04:19
every fool for themselves
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this hit me hard. Three lines, and they tell the story of how much the world has changed. There\'s a sadness here that many people will recognize immediately. Powerful little senryu, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 27th, 2026 10:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this hit me hard. Three lines, and they tell the story of how much the world has changed. There\'s a sadness here that many people will recognize immediately. Powerful little senryu, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 27th, 2026 10:52
every fool for themselves
sorenbarrett said:
Demar my friend the first thing that came to mind as I started reading this was that now you just get jumped. A piece that speaks too much truth about change in society that we that are older find hard to accept. Well done
June 27th, 2026 08:44
sorenbarrett said:
Demar my friend the first thing that came to mind as I started reading this was that now you just get jumped. A piece that speaks too much truth about change in society that we that are older find hard to accept. Well done
June 27th, 2026 08:44
resiliency of plants
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this is beautiful. So few words, yet they carry such quiet resilience. It lingered with me long after I read it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 26th, 2026 09:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this is beautiful. So few words, yet they carry such quiet resilience. It lingered with me long after I read it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 26th, 2026 09:33
resiliency of plants
soheil khodaparasti said:
I like how the tree becomes a symbol of resilience. It reminds us that loss does not have to mean the end; sometimes it is simply part of becoming stronger.
June 26th, 2026 08:09
soheil khodaparasti said:
I like how the tree becomes a symbol of resilience. It reminds us that loss does not have to mean the end; sometimes it is simply part of becoming stronger.
June 26th, 2026 08:09
resiliency of plants
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful haiku with a message that to me seems to be that despite damage in this world the essence of us continues to go on and grow. Well said
June 26th, 2026 07:40
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful haiku with a message that to me seems to be that despite damage in this world the essence of us continues to go on and grow. Well said
June 26th, 2026 07:40
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