Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
People over Profit
vicecream said:
LOUDER FOR THE POLITICIANS IN THE BACK 🗣️🗣️
January 12th, 2025 13:29
vicecream said:
LOUDER FOR THE POLITICIANS IN THE BACK 🗣️🗣️
January 12th, 2025 13:29
People over Profit
arqios said:
Yeah, tell it to the Man! Wage slaves unite!
January 11th, 2025 18:54
arqios said:
Yeah, tell it to the Man! Wage slaves unite!
January 11th, 2025 18:54
People over Profit
sorenbarrett said:
Greed is the driving force of humanity as strong or stronger than sex it invades even communism. Others fall far behind. A powerful write. Nicely said
January 11th, 2025 13:31
sorenbarrett said:
Greed is the driving force of humanity as strong or stronger than sex it invades even communism. Others fall far behind. A powerful write. Nicely said
January 11th, 2025 13:31
People over Profit
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! You and I, my dear friend, see this fucked up world through the same lens. Indeed, the almighty dollar cannot produce itself, nor can products. People should always be valued over material goods. Brilliantly written, poignant and timely. This one will ALWAYS be timely. 🌹👏
January 11th, 2025 12:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! You and I, my dear friend, see this fucked up world through the same lens. Indeed, the almighty dollar cannot produce itself, nor can products. People should always be valued over material goods. Brilliantly written, poignant and timely. This one will ALWAYS be timely. 🌹👏
January 11th, 2025 12:33
I love women
Cassie58 said:
Nothing wrong in showing admiration for the female of the species. Well done I say. It’s a great pity that they aren’t celebrated and appreciated everywhere. A lovely positive haiku.
January 10th, 2025 13:24
Cassie58 said:
Nothing wrong in showing admiration for the female of the species. Well done I say. It’s a great pity that they aren’t celebrated and appreciated everywhere. A lovely positive haiku.
January 10th, 2025 13:24
I love women
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice wording in this piece that captures my feelings as well.
January 10th, 2025 09:06
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice wording in this piece that captures my feelings as well.
January 10th, 2025 09:06
Cayenne
Mutley Ravishes said:
What a question! It\'s been said that our lives are repetitions. Mechanical. \'bout time to wake up and get off the grinding samsaric hamster wheel?!
January 9th, 2025 23:57
Mutley Ravishes said:
What a question! It\'s been said that our lives are repetitions. Mechanical. \'bout time to wake up and get off the grinding samsaric hamster wheel?!
January 9th, 2025 23:57
Cayenne
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! The title, the words, the legend! Seriously, bro! Wonderfully done. 🌹👏
January 9th, 2025 10:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! The title, the words, the legend! Seriously, bro! Wonderfully done. 🌹👏
January 9th, 2025 10:07
Cayenne
sorenbarrett said:
A splendid Haiku deep in philosophy and so well said in so few words
January 9th, 2025 07:18
sorenbarrett said:
A splendid Haiku deep in philosophy and so well said in so few words
January 9th, 2025 07:18
I don’t go out at night
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this Senryu my friend! Well done on this! There\'s a lot of different thoughts that come to mind with this poem and multiple ways it can be interpreted as I see it. The beauty of simplicity and the beauty of the Senryu come through in profoundly deep ways. Well done, bro! ❤️
January 8th, 2025 07:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this Senryu my friend! Well done on this! There\'s a lot of different thoughts that come to mind with this poem and multiple ways it can be interpreted as I see it. The beauty of simplicity and the beauty of the Senryu come through in profoundly deep ways. Well done, bro! ❤️
January 8th, 2025 07:23
I don’t go out at night
sorenbarrett said:
Another wonderful senryu that deserves much contemplation. Nicely worded
January 8th, 2025 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
Another wonderful senryu that deserves much contemplation. Nicely worded
January 8th, 2025 04:22
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Mutley Ravishes said:
Lets not give any more food
To the tempting snake
In the end it takes
Everything
That was a challenging haiku you wrote! Great work.
January 6th, 2025 21:48
Mutley Ravishes said:
Lets not give any more food
To the tempting snake
In the end it takes
Everything
That was a challenging haiku you wrote! Great work.
January 6th, 2025 21:48
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sorenbarrett said:
This one was both humerous and true and that is hard to do. A great one here.
January 6th, 2025 20:25
sorenbarrett said:
This one was both humerous and true and that is hard to do. A great one here.
January 6th, 2025 20:25
onlyfans girls
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed. Judge not, I believe the old, seldom-actualized adage is. Well done, bro! 🌹👏
January 6th, 2025 19:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed. Judge not, I believe the old, seldom-actualized adage is. Well done, bro! 🌹👏
January 6th, 2025 19:29
Video Games!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love video games...and I have a MetaQuest2 (haven\'t upgraded yet...ah finances), but yeah, tons of fun! Enjoyed this much, bro!
January 6th, 2025 10:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love video games...and I have a MetaQuest2 (haven\'t upgraded yet...ah finances), but yeah, tons of fun! Enjoyed this much, bro!
January 6th, 2025 10:04
Video Games!
sorenbarrett said:
Aye aye AI, What a fun write this one was. Too real for comfort
January 5th, 2025 20:28
sorenbarrett said:
Aye aye AI, What a fun write this one was. Too real for comfort
January 5th, 2025 20:28
-$7.27 in my bank account
Mutley Ravishes said:
Careful now. Don’t wanna get programmed, right?!
January 4th, 2025 20:38
Mutley Ravishes said:
Careful now. Don’t wanna get programmed, right?!
January 4th, 2025 20:38
-$7.27 in my bank account
sorenbarrett said:
Been there done that and said in a great Haiku
January 4th, 2025 15:28
sorenbarrett said:
Been there done that and said in a great Haiku
January 4th, 2025 15:28
-$7.27 in my bank account
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love your $$$ poems. I laugh because I\'ve done the same thing and have ended up negative in my account. It sure does come and it sure does go. And the amount in the account isn\'t always reflective of unwise purchases. Still, bro, it\'s yours now...so enjoy that sucker! A new TV is worth it (once you get paid again 🤣).
January 4th, 2025 10:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I love your $$$ poems. I laugh because I\'ve done the same thing and have ended up negative in my account. It sure does come and it sure does go. And the amount in the account isn\'t always reflective of unwise purchases. Still, bro, it\'s yours now...so enjoy that sucker! A new TV is worth it (once you get paid again 🤣).
January 4th, 2025 10:23
airport privileges
Mutley Ravishes said:
People showing that machines don’t have the power to bring true freedom!
My flight to the Andromeda Galaxy has been delayed! I’m so angry!!
January 3rd, 2025 02:02
Mutley Ravishes said:
People showing that machines don’t have the power to bring true freedom!
My flight to the Andromeda Galaxy has been delayed! I’m so angry!!
January 3rd, 2025 02:02
airport privileges
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Even when at work, poets be poets! LOL! Love it bro! And truth...status holds ZERO weight! In fact, to the back of the line. Buh-bye. Next! 🤣 Loved the Senryu, my friend. A perfect example of one, actually! 🙏❤️
January 2nd, 2025 22:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Even when at work, poets be poets! LOL! Love it bro! And truth...status holds ZERO weight! In fact, to the back of the line. Buh-bye. Next! 🤣 Loved the Senryu, my friend. A perfect example of one, actually! 🙏❤️
January 2nd, 2025 22:41
airport privileges
rin said:
He says some really good things. I am grateful to those who do so.
January 2nd, 2025 21:45
rin said:
He says some really good things. I am grateful to those who do so.
January 2nd, 2025 21:45
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