Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
waking up with a boner
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read and might add as an old man a custom well used to but to little avail.
February 18th, 2026 07:40
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read and might add as an old man a custom well used to but to little avail.
February 18th, 2026 07:40
i can’t be You
sorenbarrett said:
To be authentically oneself is not always socially appropriate so one must live a traitor if one wishes to live. A strong write
February 17th, 2026 13:41
sorenbarrett said:
To be authentically oneself is not always socially appropriate so one must live a traitor if one wishes to live. A strong write
February 17th, 2026 13:41
i can’t be You
Tonya Titus said:
I love this. It speaks to being authentically me, yet hoping someone still gets me. A reciprocation.
February 17th, 2026 13:33
Tonya Titus said:
I love this. It speaks to being authentically me, yet hoping someone still gets me. A reciprocation.
February 17th, 2026 13:33
You can’t be i
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen. Amen. Amen. Love this, bro! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 17th, 2026 10:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen. Amen. Amen. Love this, bro! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 17th, 2026 10:18
in pain and still make love
sorenbarrett said:
The older we get the more we loose and it seems that I have none of my childhood friends left. A good write Demar
February 16th, 2026 03:35
sorenbarrett said:
The older we get the more we loose and it seems that I have none of my childhood friends left. A good write Demar
February 16th, 2026 03:35
to make love in pain
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truly wonderful, my friend. Happy Valentine\'s Day. May we all find the wealth you speak of.
February 14th, 2026 10:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truly wonderful, my friend. Happy Valentine\'s Day. May we all find the wealth you speak of.
February 14th, 2026 10:26
to make love in pain
Friendship said:
Nicely word. Happy Anniversary to you and your wife.❤️
February 14th, 2026 07:07
Friendship said:
Nicely word. Happy Anniversary to you and your wife.❤️
February 14th, 2026 07:07
Heaven Hates Me
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this is compact but charged. The tension between condemnation and declaration resolves in a personal, unshakeable truth. That exclamation in the middle cracks the poem open before landing in certainty. Sharp, brave, and resonant. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 13th, 2026 11:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this is compact but charged. The tension between condemnation and declaration resolves in a personal, unshakeable truth. That exclamation in the middle cracks the poem open before landing in certainty. Sharp, brave, and resonant. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 13th, 2026 11:35
Heaven Hates Me
sorenbarrett said:
I question who would want to worship a god of hate. Good write Demar
February 13th, 2026 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
I question who would want to worship a god of hate. Good write Demar
February 13th, 2026 04:21
Heaven Hates Me
Just Kate said:
Not at all where I thought you were going to go!! Brilliant!!
February 13th, 2026 02:17
Just Kate said:
Not at all where I thought you were going to go!! Brilliant!!
February 13th, 2026 02:17
Earth I love you
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Deep and thought provoking and true. Well done!
February 12th, 2026 17:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Deep and thought provoking and true. Well done!
February 12th, 2026 17:30
Earth I love you
sorenbarrett said:
There is something to think about. Nicely said
February 12th, 2026 10:32
sorenbarrett said:
There is something to think about. Nicely said
February 12th, 2026 10:32
Standards Double
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes. I love the title, I love the depth...and I love the interplay between today\'s and yesterday\'s titles. Well done, bro! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 11th, 2026 13:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes. I love the title, I love the depth...and I love the interplay between today\'s and yesterday\'s titles. Well done, bro! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 11th, 2026 13:18
Standards Double
sorenbarrett said:
A great senryu Demar it describes well most individuals
February 11th, 2026 08:46
sorenbarrett said:
A great senryu Demar it describes well most individuals
February 11th, 2026 08:46
Double Standards
Friendship said:
You had me thinking on this one!🤔 Good job.
February 10th, 2026 13:12
Friendship said:
You had me thinking on this one!🤔 Good job.
February 10th, 2026 13:12
Double Standards
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The king of concise has returned and the verdict: 🤯 Powerful and true! Naming the harm done by our hypocrisy is vital...well done here, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 10th, 2026 13:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The king of concise has returned and the verdict: 🤯 Powerful and true! Naming the harm done by our hypocrisy is vital...well done here, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 10th, 2026 13:05
The Eases of Living
Friendship said:
Well written. Demar. Your revolves around the concept of love as a powerful and unifying force in life. The poet expresses a profound appreciation for various aspects of existence and emphasizes that love can connect individuals, transcending negativity and complaints about the world\'s imperfections.
February 9th, 2026 08:23
Friendship said:
Well written. Demar. Your revolves around the concept of love as a powerful and unifying force in life. The poet expresses a profound appreciation for various aspects of existence and emphasizes that love can connect individuals, transcending negativity and complaints about the world\'s imperfections.
February 9th, 2026 08:23
The Eases of Living
sorenbarrett said:
So many things large and small that can connect people in many ways. Nicely said
February 9th, 2026 03:48
sorenbarrett said:
So many things large and small that can connect people in many ways. Nicely said
February 9th, 2026 03:48
The Eases of Living
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this is tender and honest, my friend. From the simple act of breathing and speaking to the overflowing list of what you love, the poem keeps choosing gratitude even while acknowledging wonderfully written. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
February 9th, 2026 01:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, this is tender and honest, my friend. From the simple act of breathing and speaking to the overflowing list of what you love, the poem keeps choosing gratitude even while acknowledging wonderfully written. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
February 9th, 2026 01:25
The Problems of Living
Friendship said:
Well written. Demar, I am glad you\'re back.❤️🙏❤️.Your poem expresses a deep sense of frustration and sadness regarding the state of humanity and society. It contrasts the poet\'s gratitude for life with a critical examination of how people interact with one another and the world around them. The underlying message is a call for greater empathy, understanding, and connection among individuals.
February 8th, 2026 12:55
Friendship said:
Well written. Demar, I am glad you\'re back.❤️🙏❤️.Your poem expresses a deep sense of frustration and sadness regarding the state of humanity and society. It contrasts the poet\'s gratitude for life with a critical examination of how people interact with one another and the world around them. The underlying message is a call for greater empathy, understanding, and connection among individuals.
February 8th, 2026 12:55
The Problems of Living
Doggerel Dave said:
I don\'t know when you stopped preventing comments on your pieces here, but while you forgot to block, I\'d just like to ask whether you mean some, many or most people...?
February 8th, 2026 07:20
Doggerel Dave said:
I don\'t know when you stopped preventing comments on your pieces here, but while you forgot to block, I\'d just like to ask whether you mean some, many or most people...?
February 8th, 2026 07:20
The Problems of Living
sorenbarrett said:
There is mounting tension in this poem as it builds line by line over the lack of humanity in humanity. Well done Demar
February 8th, 2026 03:33
sorenbarrett said:
There is mounting tension in this poem as it builds line by line over the lack of humanity in humanity. Well done Demar
February 8th, 2026 03:33
The Problems of Living
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, it’s genuinely good to have you back, bro. This reads like a tired but faithful witness…naming the fractures without surrendering hope. The grief is real, but so is the desire for us to do better. Thank you for sharing this and looking forward to more. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 8th, 2026 00:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, it’s genuinely good to have you back, bro. This reads like a tired but faithful witness…naming the fractures without surrendering hope. The grief is real, but so is the desire for us to do better. Thank you for sharing this and looking forward to more. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 8th, 2026 00:21
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