Comments received on poems by Demar Desu
and surely I am blessed
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen, bro! Right there with you! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 4th, 2026 13:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen, bro! Right there with you! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 4th, 2026 13:00
and surely I am blessed
mvvenkataraman said:
Reading and writing develop our brain,
Sibling rivalry is always there occurring,
Even today, I don\'t remember those days,
My brother physically punched me often,
I love your poem and the end mainly,
No more complaining- What a truth ?
April 4th, 2026 10:25
mvvenkataraman said:
Reading and writing develop our brain,
Sibling rivalry is always there occurring,
Even today, I don\'t remember those days,
My brother physically punched me often,
I love your poem and the end mainly,
No more complaining- What a truth ?
April 4th, 2026 10:25
and surely I am blessed
sorenbarrett said:
Taking liberty takes on new meaning with this poem. Well done Demar
April 4th, 2026 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
Taking liberty takes on new meaning with this poem. Well done Demar
April 4th, 2026 04:03
and surely I am blessed
Mutley Ravishes said:
It could all be so much worse. Let`s cherish this short time we have.
April 4th, 2026 03:27
Mutley Ravishes said:
It could all be so much worse. Let`s cherish this short time we have.
April 4th, 2026 03:27
Do you hate me because I’m…?
Allie561 said:
Well Demar, that’s a hard question to answer. I think how we are treated shouldn’t reflect our worth because an opinion is just an opinion. People can be evil these days either ignoring you or treating you with absolutely no kindness. The other day I reached out to one of my old colleagues and they responded to only one of my texts and I never received any more replies. It stung a bit at first but hey I can only control how I feel about it. I assure you that you are somebody, in the real world and on this site. I hope people come to treat you better.
April 3rd, 2026 11:36
Allie561 said:
Well Demar, that’s a hard question to answer. I think how we are treated shouldn’t reflect our worth because an opinion is just an opinion. People can be evil these days either ignoring you or treating you with absolutely no kindness. The other day I reached out to one of my old colleagues and they responded to only one of my texts and I never received any more replies. It stung a bit at first but hey I can only control how I feel about it. I assure you that you are somebody, in the real world and on this site. I hope people come to treat you better.
April 3rd, 2026 11:36
Do you hate me because I’m…?
sorenbarrett said:
A disparaging look at oneself but then the author\'s note may be more true people that hate others often hate things about themselves. Well written Demar
April 3rd, 2026 08:23
sorenbarrett said:
A disparaging look at oneself but then the author\'s note may be more true people that hate others often hate things about themselves. Well written Demar
April 3rd, 2026 08:23
Do you hate me because I’m…?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, yeah…maybe they do. That kind of judgment usually says more about them than it ever does about you. The way you strip this down to “I am nobody”…that lands. Stay rooted in who you are, my friend…that matters more than anything they project. As you can see, I relate to this one a lot. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 3rd, 2026 08:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, yeah…maybe they do. That kind of judgment usually says more about them than it ever does about you. The way you strip this down to “I am nobody”…that lands. Stay rooted in who you are, my friend…that matters more than anything they project. As you can see, I relate to this one a lot. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 3rd, 2026 08:23
thundering in the mountains
Allie561 said:
Sometimes it’s not meant to be revealed. I often wonder if we’re supposed to figure out the answer for ourselves, maybe it’s meant to have a different meaning for everyone. Also, are you possibly writing about an earthquake or was it just describing a storm?
April 2nd, 2026 11:32
Allie561 said:
Sometimes it’s not meant to be revealed. I often wonder if we’re supposed to figure out the answer for ourselves, maybe it’s meant to have a different meaning for everyone. Also, are you possibly writing about an earthquake or was it just describing a storm?
April 2nd, 2026 11:32
thundering in the mountains
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, I’ve felt that kind of question before… standing in something bigger than yourself and not having an answer for it. The way you leave it open, unresolved… that’s what makes it real. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
April 2nd, 2026 08:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Demar, I’ve felt that kind of question before… standing in something bigger than yourself and not having an answer for it. The way you leave it open, unresolved… that’s what makes it real. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
April 2nd, 2026 08:59
thundering in the mountains
sorenbarrett said:
Why not indeed I love to be in your first two lines
April 2nd, 2026 07:46
sorenbarrett said:
Why not indeed I love to be in your first two lines
April 2nd, 2026 07:46
I’m done asking questions
Mutley Ravishes said:
Take a rest
Then I guarantee
You\'ll once again want to ask
Myriad Quest-ions!
April 1st, 2026 18:50
Mutley Ravishes said:
Take a rest
Then I guarantee
You\'ll once again want to ask
Myriad Quest-ions!
April 1st, 2026 18:50
I’m done asking questions
Allie561 said:
This disappoints me Demar, I hope my answers have been sufficient enough. Maybe I’ll start asking you questions after all it doesn’t take much. Do you prefer reading books of action or books of horror? Do not worry I don’t believe you to be entitled, all you’re asking is for a response.
April 1st, 2026 16:44
Allie561 said:
This disappoints me Demar, I hope my answers have been sufficient enough. Maybe I’ll start asking you questions after all it doesn’t take much. Do you prefer reading books of action or books of horror? Do not worry I don’t believe you to be entitled, all you’re asking is for a response.
April 1st, 2026 16:44
Do you have your passport?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What one has vs. what one needs...and whether it matters at all. Love this one, my friend. And, yes, I do have mine. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 1st, 2026 14:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What one has vs. what one needs...and whether it matters at all. Love this one, my friend. And, yes, I do have mine. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 1st, 2026 14:14
I’m done asking questions
sorenbarrett said:
Answers can never be given they must be found. A good write Demar
April 1st, 2026 13:55
sorenbarrett said:
Answers can never be given they must be found. A good write Demar
April 1st, 2026 13:55
Do you have your passport?
Allie561 said:
Maybe? I haven’t had the need to use it and I hope it’s still in my drawer. Oh well, it’s not like I’ll be leaving anytime soon
March 31st, 2026 11:22
Allie561 said:
Maybe? I haven’t had the need to use it and I hope it’s still in my drawer. Oh well, it’s not like I’ll be leaving anytime soon
March 31st, 2026 11:22
Do you have your passport?
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed it should be such we are all citizens of the world we were born in. It is man that has made the borders
March 31st, 2026 09:32
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed it should be such we are all citizens of the world we were born in. It is man that has made the borders
March 31st, 2026 09:32
What is a de ja vu?
Mutley Ravishes said:
It`s been said that energy cannot be destroyed or created, only transformed, or in other words transferred.
March 30th, 2026 20:07
Mutley Ravishes said:
It`s been said that energy cannot be destroyed or created, only transformed, or in other words transferred.
March 30th, 2026 20:07
What is a de ja vu?
Allie561 said:
That second line hit hard Demar… how can it be that we see them in every person? After one of my first heartbreaks, I kept seeing people that looked similar to him or had a shirt that he had. I would get a sense of excitement thinking it was him and then realizing that it was only my imagination. It sure is hard to keep seeing them in other people.
March 30th, 2026 11:13
Allie561 said:
That second line hit hard Demar… how can it be that we see them in every person? After one of my first heartbreaks, I kept seeing people that looked similar to him or had a shirt that he had. I would get a sense of excitement thinking it was him and then realizing that it was only my imagination. It sure is hard to keep seeing them in other people.
March 30th, 2026 11:13
What is a de ja vu?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow. Profound and deep. A mighty fine senryu, my friend. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 30th, 2026 10:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow. Profound and deep. A mighty fine senryu, my friend. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 30th, 2026 10:08
What is a de ja vu?
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely senryu Demar and it has a bit of humor with the meaning
March 30th, 2026 07:04
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely senryu Demar and it has a bit of humor with the meaning
March 30th, 2026 07:04
what is satisfaction?
Allie561 said:
Sadly we’re always left wanting more, hard to have self control. Nice poem Demar.
March 29th, 2026 13:22
Allie561 said:
Sadly we’re always left wanting more, hard to have self control. Nice poem Demar.
March 29th, 2026 13:22
what is satisfaction?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yeah. This tracks and hits exactly as it should. Bravo! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 29th, 2026 09:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yeah. This tracks and hits exactly as it should. Bravo! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 29th, 2026 09:35
They say no kings, but what about queens?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ha! I had Freddy Mercury and Queen in mind at first when I saw the title and the first line. That aside, great write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 29th, 2026 09:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ha! I had Freddy Mercury and Queen in mind at first when I saw the title and the first line. That aside, great write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 29th, 2026 09:34
what is satisfaction?
sorenbarrett said:
This senryu is a commentary on avarice and greed in society. Nicely done Demar
March 29th, 2026 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
This senryu is a commentary on avarice and greed in society. Nicely done Demar
March 29th, 2026 04:59
what is satisfaction?
Mutley Ravishes said:
Never enough! And who would want to be sentenced to that kind of a life? Not that I haven`t wrestled with insatiable hungers myself.
March 29th, 2026 03:35
Mutley Ravishes said:
Never enough! And who would want to be sentenced to that kind of a life? Not that I haven`t wrestled with insatiable hungers myself.
March 29th, 2026 03:35
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