Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Love and Hate
Poetic Licence said:
Thank you for your feedback, much appreciated, what did the last mean?
January 9th, 2025 02:57
Poetic Licence said:
Thank you for your feedback, much appreciated, what did the last mean?
January 9th, 2025 02:57
Love and Hate
arqios said:
So true! You can’t have one without the other. 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻 Now to walk away and rethink this.
January 9th, 2025 02:55
arqios said:
So true! You can’t have one without the other. 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻 Now to walk away and rethink this.
January 9th, 2025 02:55
Which Did You Choose
Thad Wilk said:
With one eye 👁️ good I would see! 👍
One ear 👂 I would hear only good.
One heart, stil i\'d choose the same. 🤔
Awesome poem, mind blowing
my friend!🤩
Thanks for sharing! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 8th, 2025 19:44
Thad Wilk said:
With one eye 👁️ good I would see! 👍
One ear 👂 I would hear only good.
One heart, stil i\'d choose the same. 🤔
Awesome poem, mind blowing
my friend!🤩
Thanks for sharing! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 8th, 2025 19:44
Which Did You Choose
Brian Otucho said:
Marvelous, you can\'t choose both at once but only one
January 8th, 2025 09:48
Brian Otucho said:
Marvelous, you can\'t choose both at once but only one
January 8th, 2025 09:48
Which Did You Choose
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Bravo! Profound, pognant, and this will ALWAYS be timely. Well done! 🌹🌹👏👏 You get the double rose and clap on this, dear Tobani!
January 8th, 2025 08:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Bravo! Profound, pognant, and this will ALWAYS be timely. Well done! 🌹🌹👏👏 You get the double rose and clap on this, dear Tobani!
January 8th, 2025 08:14
Which Did You Choose
arqios said:
Bam 💥 that was a one -two combo, so nice to be set up in such poetic manner!
January 8th, 2025 07:18
arqios said:
Bam 💥 that was a one -two combo, so nice to be set up in such poetic manner!
January 8th, 2025 07:18
Which Did You Choose
sorenbarrett said:
With two eyes is see both evil and good, with two ears I hear both evil and good with one heart I may choose only one and it is all or nothing a great message you send and a great illustration you make.
January 8th, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
With two eyes is see both evil and good, with two ears I hear both evil and good with one heart I may choose only one and it is all or nothing a great message you send and a great illustration you make.
January 8th, 2025 04:33
Hope in Those Smiling Eyes
Dan Williams said:
Sadly, this might all too likely come to pass. What a poor job we humans have done, what a good job you have done detailing it. Nice work.
January 8th, 2025 01:09
Dan Williams said:
Sadly, this might all too likely come to pass. What a poor job we humans have done, what a good job you have done detailing it. Nice work.
January 8th, 2025 01:09
Hope in Those Smiling Eyes
Thad Wilk said:
Wow! 😳
A powerful and
poignant poem 😢
of the horrors of
war and how it changed
the hope in those,
once smiling eyes..
Outstanding imagery
throughout,
terrific presentation! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 7th, 2025 20:48
Thad Wilk said:
Wow! 😳
A powerful and
poignant poem 😢
of the horrors of
war and how it changed
the hope in those,
once smiling eyes..
Outstanding imagery
throughout,
terrific presentation! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 7th, 2025 20:48
Hope in Those Smiling Eyes
RSM0812 said:
That\'s sad. Really emotionally impactful.
January 7th, 2025 16:01
RSM0812 said:
That\'s sad. Really emotionally impactful.
January 7th, 2025 16:01
Hope in Those Smiling Eyes
Tristan Robert Lange said:
War is awful and its consequences are so far reaching. A wonderful and poignant poem that describes the horror of war. Wonderful write, my friend! 🌹👏
January 7th, 2025 15:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
War is awful and its consequences are so far reaching. A wonderful and poignant poem that describes the horror of war. Wonderful write, my friend! 🌹👏
January 7th, 2025 15:19
Hope in Those Smiling Eyes
xqw said:
Damn, this has such intense emotional weight. It feels really raw and honest. Loss is such a painful experience it\'s hard to put it into words, but your poem reflects it really well
January 7th, 2025 10:26
xqw said:
Damn, this has such intense emotional weight. It feels really raw and honest. Loss is such a painful experience it\'s hard to put it into words, but your poem reflects it really well
January 7th, 2025 10:26
Hope in Those Smiling Eyes
arqios said:
War is never a good thing, both victor and vanquished loss a great deal, for me it’s always a Pyrrhic victory. And no one can tell me otherwise, the amount of lives, property, resources and peace that we had lost as a family alone are not and possibly will never be compensated by the so called resulting benefits gained. It’s just not worth it in the end.
January 7th, 2025 06:42
arqios said:
War is never a good thing, both victor and vanquished loss a great deal, for me it’s always a Pyrrhic victory. And no one can tell me otherwise, the amount of lives, property, resources and peace that we had lost as a family alone are not and possibly will never be compensated by the so called resulting benefits gained. It’s just not worth it in the end.
January 7th, 2025 06:42
Hope in Those Smiling Eyes
David Wakeling said:
Sadly it is the world we live in.War is always somewhere.Hope is all we can cling to
January 7th, 2025 05:22
David Wakeling said:
Sadly it is the world we live in.War is always somewhere.Hope is all we can cling to
January 7th, 2025 05:22
Hope in Those Smiling Eyes
rin said:
In the case of this poem, I think that it is a creation that can find hope in the main character.
January 7th, 2025 04:47
rin said:
In the case of this poem, I think that it is a creation that can find hope in the main character.
January 7th, 2025 04:47
Hope in Those Smiling Eyes
sorenbarrett said:
The human condition is a social one and one of our fears is being alone. War and death threaten this and this poem portrays that fear. Nicely written
January 7th, 2025 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
The human condition is a social one and one of our fears is being alone. War and death threaten this and this poem portrays that fear. Nicely written
January 7th, 2025 04:17
Are The Words Still Healing
Thad Wilk said:
A captivating poem
and questionnaire i\'d say! 🤔
Very thought provoking
the words are still
healing day by day! 👍🤩
Much enjoyed thank you!! ☺️
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 5th, 2025 23:37
Thad Wilk said:
A captivating poem
and questionnaire i\'d say! 🤔
Very thought provoking
the words are still
healing day by day! 👍🤩
Much enjoyed thank you!! ☺️
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 5th, 2025 23:37
My Heart Still Beats The Same
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Feelings of being isolated and being misunderstood are universal and resonated with me immediately. Lovely poem, enjoyed the read thoroughly
January 5th, 2025 09:01
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Feelings of being isolated and being misunderstood are universal and resonated with me immediately. Lovely poem, enjoyed the read thoroughly
January 5th, 2025 09:01
Are The Words Still Healing
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This poem probes deep thought and self-reflection. A most wonderful, wise write Tobani! 🌹👏
January 5th, 2025 07:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This poem probes deep thought and self-reflection. A most wonderful, wise write Tobani! 🌹👏
January 5th, 2025 07:58
Are The Words Still Healing
arqios said:
The word on words and our emotional journey, in a rhythmic and contemplative flow. Good use of repetition.
January 5th, 2025 05:28
arqios said:
The word on words and our emotional journey, in a rhythmic and contemplative flow. Good use of repetition.
January 5th, 2025 05:28
Are The Words Still Healing
sorenbarrett said:
A most intersting format that makes good sense for the theme of the poem. Each question in a type of duality not answered but implied in a gentle way. Very nice it seemes quite eastern in its approach to teaching
January 5th, 2025 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
A most intersting format that makes good sense for the theme of the poem. Each question in a type of duality not answered but implied in a gentle way. Very nice it seemes quite eastern in its approach to teaching
January 5th, 2025 04:58
Are The Words Still Healing
rin said:
I read and asked myself questions one by one. I think it\'s a good poem.
January 5th, 2025 04:38
rin said:
I read and asked myself questions one by one. I think it\'s a good poem.
January 5th, 2025 04:38
My Heart Still Beats The Same
Thad Wilk said:
A very poignant 😢
poem, some children
can be very cruel, in school! 🏫
Can result in very
terrible consequences in the end! 😞
Thanks for sharing my friend!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 4th, 2025 21:42
Thad Wilk said:
A very poignant 😢
poem, some children
can be very cruel, in school! 🏫
Can result in very
terrible consequences in the end! 😞
Thanks for sharing my friend!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 4th, 2025 21:42
My Heart Still Beats The Same
David Wakeling said:
Sticks and stones will break your bones but your heart still beats the same. Rise above. Wonderful poem
January 4th, 2025 15:16
David Wakeling said:
Sticks and stones will break your bones but your heart still beats the same. Rise above. Wonderful poem
January 4th, 2025 15:16
My Heart Still Beats The Same
Cassie58 said:
Children can be so cruel. I can remember being ridiculed because I looked like a stick insect. It hurt at the time, but I do believe I grew in strength as a result of those experiences. A touching write dear Tobani, which resonated with me.
January 4th, 2025 11:25
Cassie58 said:
Children can be so cruel. I can remember being ridiculed because I looked like a stick insect. It hurt at the time, but I do believe I grew in strength as a result of those experiences. A touching write dear Tobani, which resonated with me.
January 4th, 2025 11:25
My Heart Still Beats The Same
Tristan Robert Lange said:
For some, childhood was a dream, for others a nightmarish horror. I had a mix of the two. My home life was stable overall, but my school/social life was a living horror. Abusive teachers, bullied by my peers, a social outcast (not even sure why)…then add in a Traumatic Brain Injury, depression, anxiety, suicidal ideations, substance use, etc. Poetry, faith and a few very beloved friends got me through…but some of that may have been more luck than anything. We all know those who did not survive those times…well, at least I do. 😢 I could have been, came close to being, one of them. Anyway, your poem touches my heart because it hits a heart that has wide cracks in it from experiencing its content. In some ways, this heart stopped beating the same way as a result. It misses beats now. I know these words, deeply and personally, and I am sorry you or anyone else has had to go through it. This can be a cold harsh world and that harshness can certainly manifest in the worst ways in children as well as adults. 😔 A wonderful, moving expression of an ugly, horrific reality. 🌹👏❤️🩹
January 4th, 2025 10:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
For some, childhood was a dream, for others a nightmarish horror. I had a mix of the two. My home life was stable overall, but my school/social life was a living horror. Abusive teachers, bullied by my peers, a social outcast (not even sure why)…then add in a Traumatic Brain Injury, depression, anxiety, suicidal ideations, substance use, etc. Poetry, faith and a few very beloved friends got me through…but some of that may have been more luck than anything. We all know those who did not survive those times…well, at least I do. 😢 I could have been, came close to being, one of them. Anyway, your poem touches my heart because it hits a heart that has wide cracks in it from experiencing its content. In some ways, this heart stopped beating the same way as a result. It misses beats now. I know these words, deeply and personally, and I am sorry you or anyone else has had to go through it. This can be a cold harsh world and that harshness can certainly manifest in the worst ways in children as well as adults. 😔 A wonderful, moving expression of an ugly, horrific reality. 🌹👏❤️🩹
January 4th, 2025 10:06
My Heart Still Beats The Same
arqios said:
Being different is a distinction but there is great comfort in being the same, it’s a crowd thing, in every observable culture. There is a strong pull to go either direction and a strong sense of self and trusted support community can make things easier.
January 4th, 2025 07:47
arqios said:
Being different is a distinction but there is great comfort in being the same, it’s a crowd thing, in every observable culture. There is a strong pull to go either direction and a strong sense of self and trusted support community can make things easier.
January 4th, 2025 07:47
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