Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Writers Doubt
orchidee said:
Ohh, just follow me - write any old rubbish, as I do at intervals! LOL. Now, now, poets, I didn\'t say rubbish my EVERY poem! Heehee.
But seriously, we can sometimes write poems hoping they will \'fit in\' and be acceptable to others. But we can\'t please all the people all of the time, and we would lose our individuality if we tried to do that, I think. And that\'s quite a long word for this time of day - individuality. Got headache now, thinking that word up! lol.
March 22nd, 2025 03:26
orchidee said:
Ohh, just follow me - write any old rubbish, as I do at intervals! LOL. Now, now, poets, I didn\'t say rubbish my EVERY poem! Heehee.
But seriously, we can sometimes write poems hoping they will \'fit in\' and be acceptable to others. But we can\'t please all the people all of the time, and we would lose our individuality if we tried to do that, I think. And that\'s quite a long word for this time of day - individuality. Got headache now, thinking that word up! lol.
March 22nd, 2025 03:26
Lie In a Truth.
Goldfinch60 said:
Truth and respect seem to have died in our world Tobani.
Andy
March 22nd, 2025 02:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Truth and respect seem to have died in our world Tobani.
Andy
March 22nd, 2025 02:54
Half A Bag Of S... !!!
Quemis said:
Agony carried in turns.
Pains a part of love, and the trend these days to act like there should be zero suffering at all in knowing others is insane.
March 21st, 2025 19:29
Quemis said:
Agony carried in turns.
Pains a part of love, and the trend these days to act like there should be zero suffering at all in knowing others is insane.
March 21st, 2025 19:29
Lie In a Truth.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent my friend! Simple, yet profound and rings wonderfully! Well done, Tobani!!! 🌹👏
March 21st, 2025 08:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent my friend! Simple, yet profound and rings wonderfully! Well done, Tobani!!! 🌹👏
March 21st, 2025 08:34
Lie In a Truth.
arqios said:
Interesting dynamic! How much lie stains or cancels out a truth or how much truth to make a lie plausible… thought provoking 🕊🙏🏻
March 21st, 2025 05:29
arqios said:
Interesting dynamic! How much lie stains or cancels out a truth or how much truth to make a lie plausible… thought provoking 🕊🙏🏻
March 21st, 2025 05:29
Lie In a Truth.
David Wakeling said:
I think it is hard to know what is real. So many different opinions.Good poem made me think
March 21st, 2025 04:53
David Wakeling said:
I think it is hard to know what is real. So many different opinions.Good poem made me think
March 21st, 2025 04:53
Lie In a Truth.
sorenbarrett said:
In truth it may have never been born. A great play on words and woven wisdom and another way of looking at how we see the world. Nicely written.
March 21st, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
In truth it may have never been born. A great play on words and woven wisdom and another way of looking at how we see the world. Nicely written.
March 21st, 2025 04:08
Lie In a Truth.
Caring dove said:
Some people tell you somethings true when it’s not .. as it’s just another lie . Sometimes clear when someone’s being honest , other times you might be able to tell if their not being truthful
March 21st, 2025 03:30
Caring dove said:
Some people tell you somethings true when it’s not .. as it’s just another lie . Sometimes clear when someone’s being honest , other times you might be able to tell if their not being truthful
March 21st, 2025 03:30
Am I Alone.
Goldfinch60 said:
Open that window and door and walk into life with others Tobani. Clever thoughtful write.
Andy
March 21st, 2025 02:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Open that window and door and walk into life with others Tobani. Clever thoughtful write.
Andy
March 21st, 2025 02:42
Am I Alone.
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
We have more conversations in our head than with real people! Good one
March 20th, 2025 10:38
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
We have more conversations in our head than with real people! Good one
March 20th, 2025 10:38
Am I Alone.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
First. WOW! I LOVE THE STRUCTURE! Sorry for YELLING that at you, but I love experimental poems and this was beautifully structured to feel very much like passing observations before the eyes and in the mind. Well done. Second, this is so my home. I relate to this so much. Alone, but not alone....Not alone, but alone. Thank you for this expression my friend! 🙏🌹👏
March 20th, 2025 09:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
First. WOW! I LOVE THE STRUCTURE! Sorry for YELLING that at you, but I love experimental poems and this was beautifully structured to feel very much like passing observations before the eyes and in the mind. Well done. Second, this is so my home. I relate to this so much. Alone, but not alone....Not alone, but alone. Thank you for this expression my friend! 🙏🌹👏
March 20th, 2025 09:03
Today Is Tomorrows History.
Tom Dylan said:
A thought-provoking write. Nicely done.
March 20th, 2025 08:33
Tom Dylan said:
A thought-provoking write. Nicely done.
March 20th, 2025 08:33
Turmoil In a Crazy Mind
Poetic Dan said:
Wow that was powerful and a beautiful flow, my mind rested even if just for a mo.
Thank you
March 20th, 2025 07:00
Poetic Dan said:
Wow that was powerful and a beautiful flow, my mind rested even if just for a mo.
Thank you
March 20th, 2025 07:00
Am I Alone.
John Prophet said:
I find being alone enjoyable. Free of drama, floating freely in my thoughts. Fertile ground for poetry.
Creative piece.
March 20th, 2025 06:15
John Prophet said:
I find being alone enjoyable. Free of drama, floating freely in my thoughts. Fertile ground for poetry.
Creative piece.
March 20th, 2025 06:15
Am I Alone.
Mutley Ravishes said:
Good question. I look forward to the day when I can see myself looking at myself through another\'s eyes!
March 20th, 2025 05:32
Mutley Ravishes said:
Good question. I look forward to the day when I can see myself looking at myself through another\'s eyes!
March 20th, 2025 05:32
Am I Alone.
sorenbarrett said:
A point made that each term is by itself emphasizes the aloneness of it. There appears to be a pattern in the words which if I stretch may be the panes of a window. Creative. No we are not alone we always have ourselves, thoughts, and emotions.
March 20th, 2025 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
A point made that each term is by itself emphasizes the aloneness of it. There appears to be a pattern in the words which if I stretch may be the panes of a window. Creative. No we are not alone we always have ourselves, thoughts, and emotions.
March 20th, 2025 04:00
Am I Alone.
arqios said:
Alone in our togetherness, modern day angst, all with our private joys and fears🙏🏻🕊️
March 20th, 2025 03:21
arqios said:
Alone in our togetherness, modern day angst, all with our private joys and fears🙏🏻🕊️
March 20th, 2025 03:21
Am I Alone.
Caring dove said:
We can feel very alone with our emotions thoughts and feelings .. and even around other people .. it can make one very sad .
I can feel very alone , sometimes when I’m around others .. isn’t a nice feeling
March 20th, 2025 03:21
Caring dove said:
We can feel very alone with our emotions thoughts and feelings .. and even around other people .. it can make one very sad .
I can feel very alone , sometimes when I’m around others .. isn’t a nice feeling
March 20th, 2025 03:21
Today Is Tomorrows History.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Tobani, do something unforgettable today to be remembered by all.
Andy
March 20th, 2025 02:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Tobani, do something unforgettable today to be remembered by all.
Andy
March 20th, 2025 02:20
Today Is Tomorrows History.
Neilton said:
Allow me to thank you for this poem! I needed it to remind me the importance of goodness since everyday life sometimes makes you forget it ! I loved your poem
March 19th, 2025 15:32
Neilton said:
Allow me to thank you for this poem! I needed it to remind me the importance of goodness since everyday life sometimes makes you forget it ! I loved your poem
March 19th, 2025 15:32
Today Is Tomorrows History.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen! By and by amen! If people would heed this advice, the world would be utopia. Wonderful way to start the day. Thank you, my friend! 🌹👏
March 19th, 2025 08:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen! By and by amen! If people would heed this advice, the world would be utopia. Wonderful way to start the day. Thank you, my friend! 🌹👏
March 19th, 2025 08:38
Today Is Tomorrows History.
Salvia.S said:
A powerful reminder to make today count!
March 19th, 2025 07:45
Salvia.S said:
A powerful reminder to make today count!
March 19th, 2025 07:45
Today Is Tomorrows History.
David Wakeling said:
Some wisdom here.I think the poem is excellent.Well done mi amigo
March 19th, 2025 05:20
David Wakeling said:
Some wisdom here.I think the poem is excellent.Well done mi amigo
March 19th, 2025 05:20
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