Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence



Figment of Your Imagination
Cheeky Missy said:

Oh my word! Likeas a dark chocolate morsel packing a punch you savour, how expertly rendered in fitting brevity. Thank you very much for sharing.

February 25th, 2025 15:11

The Lies
Cheeky Missy said:

La, how this culls to mind the mutitudinous references in the Scriptures to this very pitfall. How every last one of us falls prey before we realize what\'s afoot. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy, thank you very much for sharing!

February 25th, 2025 15:08

The Lies
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Brief but very effective. A brlliant use of word economy. You paint a true picture in this poem, Tobani. Faved!

February 25th, 2025 15:06

The Lies
Neville said:



Show me a man who denies ever being led up the garden path by the flutter of eyelashes, or the sway of a hip & by Jove, I\'ll point out a liar .. we are but fools at the end of the day .. Neville

February 25th, 2025 13:55

Figment of Your Imagination
whats write for me said:

Perception is in the eye of the beholder, wonderful weiting.

February 25th, 2025 13:38

The Lies
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

February 25th, 2025 08:32

The Lies
sorenbarrett said:

So much said in so few lines and more with such pleasing rhyme. This one deserves a fave

February 25th, 2025 06:10

The Lies
arqios said:

I am sold out to this as I have encountered for myself eyes like those πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

February 25th, 2025 05:35

Figment of Your Imagination
Goldfinch60 said:

Many perceptions are not always wrong Tobani.

Andy

February 25th, 2025 02:16

Figment of Your Imagination
RSM0812 said:

People only think they know you. They really don\'t.

February 24th, 2025 23:55

Figment of Your Imagination
Thomas W Case said:

Boom. You nailed it.

February 24th, 2025 12:05

Figment of Your Imagination
Bloomingdale said:

Simple and sends the message ❀️

February 24th, 2025 11:41

Figment of Your Imagination
Tristan Robert Lange said:

What can be said other than Truth πŸ’―πŸŒΉπŸ‘ Well done on this brief little poetic reality check!

February 24th, 2025 11:38

Figment of Your Imagination
sorenbarrett said:

Indeed tis so. And my imagination is a figment itself. A truth well spoken.

February 24th, 2025 04:15

Figment of Your Imagination
arqios said:

Love this. It counters the idea of the objective second set of eyes πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈπŸ‘€

February 24th, 2025 03:47

Lazy Sunday Bit of Fun
Goldfinch60 said:

Some true words there Tobani, fun write.

Andy

February 24th, 2025 02:44

Lazy Sunday Bit of Fun
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wow! Loving this series, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ‘

February 23rd, 2025 22:29

Lazy Sunday Bit of Fun
hzugman said:

Very nicely done. Good read.

February 23rd, 2025 15:42

Lazy Sunday Bit of Fun
Thomas W Case said:

Superb work.

February 23rd, 2025 15:41

Lazy Sunday Bit of Fun
Neville said:



No aint that the bloomin truth .. wise men should take it easy on Sundays .. N

February 23rd, 2025 14:10

Lazy Sunday Bit of Fun
E.J. Waling said:

Well said. John

February 23rd, 2025 07:10

Lazy Sunday Bit of Fun
sorenbarrett said:

Wisdom found here. It is in the trash that we find it and in sadness humor. I love these little gems they always give another look at things and add a smile. Nicely done

February 23rd, 2025 05:44

Lazy Sunday Bit of Fun
arqios said:

This series is becoming a regular delight hereπŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

February 23rd, 2025 03:51

The Adventures of Mary & Harry(1)
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun words Tobani. I hope Harry recovers.

Andy

February 23rd, 2025 02:48

The Adventures of Mary & Harry(1)
Tony36 said:

Love it

February 22nd, 2025 10:35

The Adventures of Mary & Harry(1)
Tristan Robert Lange said:

A lot of fun. These are great! Happy weekend, my friend!

February 22nd, 2025 09:55

The Adventures of Mary & Harry(1)
arqios said:

Kinda wondering what happened to Jack… or is this another β€˜Mary’? Still a fun read as promised πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

February 22nd, 2025 06:02

The Adventures of Mary & Harry(1)
Mutley Ravishes said:

Harry has balls like balloons
He\'ll be appearing in
A South Park cartoon
Anytime soon!

Enjoyed the read!

February 22nd, 2025 05:39

The Adventures of Mary & Harry(1)
sorenbarrett said:

Poor Harry \'twas not merry because of hairy Mary. Hairy wished to tarry Mary was contrary kicked him in the berry which he was unable to parry. All I want to know is what happened to Larry and Rosemary. A fun read that brightened the day

February 22nd, 2025 04:55

The Adventures of Mary & Harry(1)
David Wakeling said:

Great fun.Brightened my day

February 22nd, 2025 04:51



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