Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
The Lies
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Brief but very effective. A brlliant use of word economy. You paint a true picture in this poem, Tobani. Faved!
February 25th, 2025 15:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Brief but very effective. A brlliant use of word economy. You paint a true picture in this poem, Tobani. Faved!
February 25th, 2025 15:06
The Lies
Neville said:
Show me a man who denies ever being led up the garden path by the flutter of eyelashes, or the sway of a hip & by Jove, I\'ll point out a liar .. we are but fools at the end of the day .. Neville
February 25th, 2025 13:55
Neville said:
Show me a man who denies ever being led up the garden path by the flutter of eyelashes, or the sway of a hip & by Jove, I\'ll point out a liar .. we are but fools at the end of the day .. Neville
February 25th, 2025 13:55
Figment of Your Imagination
whats write for me said:
Perception is in the eye of the beholder, wonderful weiting.
February 25th, 2025 13:38
whats write for me said:
Perception is in the eye of the beholder, wonderful weiting.
February 25th, 2025 13:38
The Lies
sorenbarrett said:
So much said in so few lines and more with such pleasing rhyme. This one deserves a fave
February 25th, 2025 06:10
sorenbarrett said:
So much said in so few lines and more with such pleasing rhyme. This one deserves a fave
February 25th, 2025 06:10
The Lies
arqios said:
I am sold out to this as I have encountered for myself eyes like those 🙏🏻🕊
February 25th, 2025 05:35
arqios said:
I am sold out to this as I have encountered for myself eyes like those 🙏🏻🕊
February 25th, 2025 05:35
Figment of Your Imagination
Goldfinch60 said:
Many perceptions are not always wrong Tobani.
Andy
February 25th, 2025 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Many perceptions are not always wrong Tobani.
Andy
February 25th, 2025 02:16
Figment of Your Imagination
RSM0812 said:
People only think they know you. They really don\'t.
February 24th, 2025 23:55
RSM0812 said:
People only think they know you. They really don\'t.
February 24th, 2025 23:55
Figment of Your Imagination
Bloomingdale said:
Simple and sends the message ❤️
February 24th, 2025 11:41
Bloomingdale said:
Simple and sends the message ❤️
February 24th, 2025 11:41
Figment of Your Imagination
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What can be said other than Truth 💯🌹👏 Well done on this brief little poetic reality check!
February 24th, 2025 11:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What can be said other than Truth 💯🌹👏 Well done on this brief little poetic reality check!
February 24th, 2025 11:38
Figment of Your Imagination
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed tis so. And my imagination is a figment itself. A truth well spoken.
February 24th, 2025 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed tis so. And my imagination is a figment itself. A truth well spoken.
February 24th, 2025 04:15
Figment of Your Imagination
arqios said:
Love this. It counters the idea of the objective second set of eyes 🙏🏻🕊️👀
February 24th, 2025 03:47
arqios said:
Love this. It counters the idea of the objective second set of eyes 🙏🏻🕊️👀
February 24th, 2025 03:47
Lazy Sunday Bit of Fun
Goldfinch60 said:
Some true words there Tobani, fun write.
Andy
February 24th, 2025 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Some true words there Tobani, fun write.
Andy
February 24th, 2025 02:44
Lazy Sunday Bit of Fun
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Loving this series, my friend. 🌹👏
February 23rd, 2025 22:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Loving this series, my friend. 🌹👏
February 23rd, 2025 22:29
Lazy Sunday Bit of Fun
Neville said:
No aint that the bloomin truth .. wise men should take it easy on Sundays .. N
February 23rd, 2025 14:10
Neville said:
No aint that the bloomin truth .. wise men should take it easy on Sundays .. N
February 23rd, 2025 14:10
Lazy Sunday Bit of Fun
sorenbarrett said:
Wisdom found here. It is in the trash that we find it and in sadness humor. I love these little gems they always give another look at things and add a smile. Nicely done
February 23rd, 2025 05:44
sorenbarrett said:
Wisdom found here. It is in the trash that we find it and in sadness humor. I love these little gems they always give another look at things and add a smile. Nicely done
February 23rd, 2025 05:44
Lazy Sunday Bit of Fun
arqios said:
This series is becoming a regular delight here🙏🏻🕊️
February 23rd, 2025 03:51
arqios said:
This series is becoming a regular delight here🙏🏻🕊️
February 23rd, 2025 03:51
The Adventures of Mary & Harry(1)
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun words Tobani. I hope Harry recovers.
Andy
February 23rd, 2025 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun words Tobani. I hope Harry recovers.
Andy
February 23rd, 2025 02:48
The Adventures of Mary & Harry(1)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A lot of fun. These are great! Happy weekend, my friend!
February 22nd, 2025 09:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A lot of fun. These are great! Happy weekend, my friend!
February 22nd, 2025 09:55
The Adventures of Mary & Harry(1)
arqios said:
Kinda wondering what happened to Jack… or is this another ‘Mary’? Still a fun read as promised 🙏🏻🕊
February 22nd, 2025 06:02
arqios said:
Kinda wondering what happened to Jack… or is this another ‘Mary’? Still a fun read as promised 🙏🏻🕊
February 22nd, 2025 06:02
The Adventures of Mary & Harry(1)
Mutley Ravishes said:
Harry has balls like balloons
He\'ll be appearing in
A South Park cartoon
Anytime soon!
Enjoyed the read!
February 22nd, 2025 05:39
Mutley Ravishes said:
Harry has balls like balloons
He\'ll be appearing in
A South Park cartoon
Anytime soon!
Enjoyed the read!
February 22nd, 2025 05:39
The Adventures of Mary & Harry(1)
sorenbarrett said:
Poor Harry \'twas not merry because of hairy Mary. Hairy wished to tarry Mary was contrary kicked him in the berry which he was unable to parry. All I want to know is what happened to Larry and Rosemary. A fun read that brightened the day
February 22nd, 2025 04:55
sorenbarrett said:
Poor Harry \'twas not merry because of hairy Mary. Hairy wished to tarry Mary was contrary kicked him in the berry which he was unable to parry. All I want to know is what happened to Larry and Rosemary. A fun read that brightened the day
February 22nd, 2025 04:55
The Adventures of Mary & Harry(1)
David Wakeling said:
Great fun.Brightened my day
February 22nd, 2025 04:51
David Wakeling said:
Great fun.Brightened my day
February 22nd, 2025 04:51
I Can`t Hide It
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Tobani, that anger can be destructive so it is better to keep it hidden.
Andy
February 22nd, 2025 02:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Tobani, that anger can be destructive so it is better to keep it hidden.
Andy
February 22nd, 2025 02:55
« Return to the profile of Poetic Licence
