Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Wise Man Says (6) Have Fun On a Sunny Sunday
sorenbarrett said:
Always enjoy your wise men say Sunday version it brightens the day and makes me feel good that I didn\'t go to church. Lovely
March 16th, 2025 06:34
sorenbarrett said:
Always enjoy your wise men say Sunday version it brightens the day and makes me feel good that I didn\'t go to church. Lovely
March 16th, 2025 06:34
Wise Man Says (6) Have Fun On a Sunny Sunday
arqios said:
Knock on door til 21…knock on wood after… 🙏🏻🕊️loving this series☺️
March 16th, 2025 03:18
arqios said:
Knock on door til 21…knock on wood after… 🙏🏻🕊️loving this series☺️
March 16th, 2025 03:18
Do Not Cut Corners
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Tobani with a lot of meaning.
Andy
March 16th, 2025 02:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Tobani with a lot of meaning.
Andy
March 16th, 2025 02:17
Do Not Cut Corners
cellinic said:
A poem with rather deep implications
Well-versed.
March 15th, 2025 20:49
cellinic said:
A poem with rather deep implications
Well-versed.
March 15th, 2025 20:49
Do Not Cut Corners
Cheeky Missy said:
Dang! But, but, but--I love cutting corners. Every angle you can configure on that term, I love engaging. Besides, I\'m forever the square peg in the round hole. La dee! What a handful you\'ve given me to process in such a bitty stanza! Sweetly rendered in brevity with excellently tasteful imagery and a damning poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 15th, 2025 19:34
Cheeky Missy said:
Dang! But, but, but--I love cutting corners. Every angle you can configure on that term, I love engaging. Besides, I\'m forever the square peg in the round hole. La dee! What a handful you\'ve given me to process in such a bitty stanza! Sweetly rendered in brevity with excellently tasteful imagery and a damning poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 15th, 2025 19:34
Do Not Cut Corners
David Wakeling said:
In most circles I am a square.But hey thats just me.Clever piece.
March 15th, 2025 15:25
David Wakeling said:
In most circles I am a square.But hey thats just me.Clever piece.
March 15th, 2025 15:25
Do Not Cut Corners
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ooh...this could almost be another wise man say. Love this my friend! Very profound! Well done, Tobani! 🌹👏
March 15th, 2025 14:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ooh...this could almost be another wise man say. Love this my friend! Very profound! Well done, Tobani! 🌹👏
March 15th, 2025 14:27
To Be Alone
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Almost visceral! Marvelous write. I won\'t say \"loved it\" ... doesn\'t convey the my feelings. Somehow I connected with it, I felt I understood the yearning and the changes
March 15th, 2025 07:34
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Almost visceral! Marvelous write. I won\'t say \"loved it\" ... doesn\'t convey the my feelings. Somehow I connected with it, I felt I understood the yearning and the changes
March 15th, 2025 07:34
Do Not Cut Corners
arqios said:
A square peg would fit is a larger circle to accommodate its unique protrusions- nest of both worlds perhaps, not perfect but workable. Pardon the imagination 💭 brought to the poetic table.🙏🏻🕊
March 15th, 2025 05:39
arqios said:
A square peg would fit is a larger circle to accommodate its unique protrusions- nest of both worlds perhaps, not perfect but workable. Pardon the imagination 💭 brought to the poetic table.🙏🏻🕊
March 15th, 2025 05:39
Do Not Cut Corners
sorenbarrett said:
This is far deeper than the simple and fun verse that it appears to be. There is deep meaning and wisdom in its child innocent illustration. Psychological and sociological as well as ethical implications. It is in the most simple that the profound resides. Lovely a fave
March 15th, 2025 05:34
sorenbarrett said:
This is far deeper than the simple and fun verse that it appears to be. There is deep meaning and wisdom in its child innocent illustration. Psychological and sociological as well as ethical implications. It is in the most simple that the profound resides. Lovely a fave
March 15th, 2025 05:34
Do Not Cut Corners
orchidee said:
Good write PL. Why did I cut the corner off an envelope? The cheque fell out. Doh!
March 15th, 2025 03:39
orchidee said:
Good write PL. Why did I cut the corner off an envelope? The cheque fell out. Doh!
March 15th, 2025 03:39
Blood Brothers
Goldfinch60 said:
Re-uniting will always happen in our lives Tobani.
Andy
March 15th, 2025 02:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Re-uniting will always happen in our lives Tobani.
Andy
March 15th, 2025 02:09
I Thought I saw You Standing There.
Cheeky Missy said:
La, congratulations on your 100th piece of poetry published on this site! How exquisite and so deliciously rendered with gorgeous poignancy and excellent imagery. Thank you so very much for sharing. I love it.
March 14th, 2025 12:48
Cheeky Missy said:
La, congratulations on your 100th piece of poetry published on this site! How exquisite and so deliciously rendered with gorgeous poignancy and excellent imagery. Thank you so very much for sharing. I love it.
March 14th, 2025 12:48
The Water.
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating. The images gradually conjuring a sense of drowning in the seas, I become aware of the unstated detail carefully presented to effect. Winsome and charmingly rendered with nigh exquisite imagery and a hauntingly painful poignancy. Thank you for sharing. Methinks I know the answer.
March 14th, 2025 12:45
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating. The images gradually conjuring a sense of drowning in the seas, I become aware of the unstated detail carefully presented to effect. Winsome and charmingly rendered with nigh exquisite imagery and a hauntingly painful poignancy. Thank you for sharing. Methinks I know the answer.
March 14th, 2025 12:45
Blood Brothers
Cheeky Missy said:
That wry twist in concluding with echoes of O. Henry, leaves more of a smirk than a happy smile as chagrin replies. Superb. Disarmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a tantalizingly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 14th, 2025 12:41
Cheeky Missy said:
That wry twist in concluding with echoes of O. Henry, leaves more of a smirk than a happy smile as chagrin replies. Superb. Disarmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a tantalizingly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 14th, 2025 12:41
Blood Brothers
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Whether taken literally as being about gangs and gang violence, or metaphorically to mean something else, this is a poem with a powerful punch, Tobani. Well done!
March 14th, 2025 09:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Whether taken literally as being about gangs and gang violence, or metaphorically to mean something else, this is a poem with a powerful punch, Tobani. Well done!
March 14th, 2025 09:56
Blood Brothers
David Wakeling said:
That\'s the fate of gangs to be buried with their enemy.An interesting poem.Enjoyable
March 14th, 2025 05:05
David Wakeling said:
That\'s the fate of gangs to be buried with their enemy.An interesting poem.Enjoyable
March 14th, 2025 05:05
Blood Brothers
sorenbarrett said:
Too often things separate us as family and then we have to ask what is family and its value. A most interesting write that asks the reader to dive deep into values of affiliation.
March 14th, 2025 03:59
sorenbarrett said:
Too often things separate us as family and then we have to ask what is family and its value. A most interesting write that asks the reader to dive deep into values of affiliation.
March 14th, 2025 03:59
Blood Brothers
arqios said:
A case study on what is family, truly riveting 🙏🏻🕊️
March 14th, 2025 03:01
arqios said:
A case study on what is family, truly riveting 🙏🏻🕊️
March 14th, 2025 03:01
The Water.
Mutley Ravishes said:
I came across an article that was saying that death (of the body) begins in the legs. Your poem brought back some sweet childhood memories. Thank you!
Now, what did Bruce Lee say ? \"Be like water.\" And of course, I don\'t think he meant stagnant water. Flowing water!
March 13th, 2025 18:27
Mutley Ravishes said:
I came across an article that was saying that death (of the body) begins in the legs. Your poem brought back some sweet childhood memories. Thank you!
Now, what did Bruce Lee say ? \"Be like water.\" And of course, I don\'t think he meant stagnant water. Flowing water!
March 13th, 2025 18:27
The Water.
Jerry Reynolds said:
An inspiring write, PL
Water means everything to everything.
Failed as a beverage, however.
March 13th, 2025 14:31
Jerry Reynolds said:
An inspiring write, PL
Water means everything to everything.
Failed as a beverage, however.
March 13th, 2025 14:31
The Water.
Neville said:
bravo .. I\'ll drink to that PL .. a refreshing treatise on something so often taken for granted but all life depends on .. Neville
March 13th, 2025 08:36
Neville said:
bravo .. I\'ll drink to that PL .. a refreshing treatise on something so often taken for granted but all life depends on .. Neville
March 13th, 2025 08:36
The Water.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wishful thinking is fun to do my friend, and this got me thinking wishfully. Thank you for that. The idea of the waves rolling over your feet and the healing feeling the ocean generally has when in it...barring when its rough...really pulled off well here my friend. And it brought me to the beach in my mind...which is never a bad thing. This need not necessarily be about the ocean, but that is the image I had when I read it. Well done! 🌹👏
March 13th, 2025 07:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wishful thinking is fun to do my friend, and this got me thinking wishfully. Thank you for that. The idea of the waves rolling over your feet and the healing feeling the ocean generally has when in it...barring when its rough...really pulled off well here my friend. And it brought me to the beach in my mind...which is never a bad thing. This need not necessarily be about the ocean, but that is the image I had when I read it. Well done! 🌹👏
March 13th, 2025 07:19
The Water.
Caring dove said:
Cleansing if negative energy and things that weigh us down .
Nice writing ..
March 13th, 2025 07:06
Caring dove said:
Cleansing if negative energy and things that weigh us down .
Nice writing ..
March 13th, 2025 07:06
The Water.
arqios said:
Wonderfully refreshing when these days only wishing thinking is available 🙏🏻🕊
March 13th, 2025 05:33
arqios said:
Wonderfully refreshing when these days only wishing thinking is available 🙏🏻🕊
March 13th, 2025 05:33
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