Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
The Same Picture Frame
faie said:
A very good poem that identifies routine and aging.
February 21st, 2025 21:19
faie said:
A very good poem that identifies routine and aging.
February 21st, 2025 21:19
I Can`t Hide It
Salvia.S said:
This makes the readers curious until they read the last line. Powerful and well written!
February 21st, 2025 20:58
Salvia.S said:
This makes the readers curious until they read the last line. Powerful and well written!
February 21st, 2025 20:58
I Can`t Hide It
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The question for me is, why hide it? Of course, there are reasons for doing so, but i have only ever found that hiding my anger makes me even more angry. All the same, brilliant expression my friend. Thought-provoking and worth a fave! 🌹👏
February 21st, 2025 11:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The question for me is, why hide it? Of course, there are reasons for doing so, but i have only ever found that hiding my anger makes me even more angry. All the same, brilliant expression my friend. Thought-provoking and worth a fave! 🌹👏
February 21st, 2025 11:13
I Can`t Hide It
2781 said:
Looks like you can\'t judge a book by its cover.
February 21st, 2025 09:08
2781 said:
Looks like you can\'t judge a book by its cover.
February 21st, 2025 09:08
I Can`t Hide It
Cassie58 said:
All revealed in the final line. Anger is not a pleasant emotion to deal with it. Most people experience it at differing levels. Some can hide it, others not do. I like the way you led us down the garden path to find the solution. Have a good day Tobani.
February 21st, 2025 07:30
Cassie58 said:
All revealed in the final line. Anger is not a pleasant emotion to deal with it. Most people experience it at differing levels. Some can hide it, others not do. I like the way you led us down the garden path to find the solution. Have a good day Tobani.
February 21st, 2025 07:30
I Can`t Hide It
Mutley Ravishes said:
I once read that when anger is purified it leads to clarity.
You kept me guessing what \"it\" is until the last line! Great write.
February 21st, 2025 07:26
Mutley Ravishes said:
I once read that when anger is purified it leads to clarity.
You kept me guessing what \"it\" is until the last line! Great write.
February 21st, 2025 07:26
I Can`t Hide It
David Wakeling said:
Anger is a cross to bare.Powerful poem
February 21st, 2025 06:14
David Wakeling said:
Anger is a cross to bare.Powerful poem
February 21st, 2025 06:14
I Can`t Hide It
arqios said:
Don’t we all have it hardwired. When as a child it used to startle me when my hackles would rise quite suddenly 🙏🏻🕊️
February 21st, 2025 05:39
arqios said:
Don’t we all have it hardwired. When as a child it used to startle me when my hackles would rise quite suddenly 🙏🏻🕊️
February 21st, 2025 05:39
I Can`t Hide It
sorenbarrett said:
I love the way you have left the reveal until the very end it provokes that strong human drive of curiosity and pulls the reader through the poem. Very nicely done.
February 21st, 2025 05:01
sorenbarrett said:
I love the way you have left the reveal until the very end it provokes that strong human drive of curiosity and pulls the reader through the poem. Very nicely done.
February 21st, 2025 05:01
The Same Picture Frame
Goldfinch60 said:
Each morning we awake takes us into a new good day as we are still here Tobani.
Andy
February 21st, 2025 02:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Each morning we awake takes us into a new good day as we are still here Tobani.
Andy
February 21st, 2025 02:14
To Be My Fathers Son
Neville said:
We none of us know what exactly shaped our neighbour until we hear it from them or read it in a newspaper .. What an excellent piece of literature encompassing a life and perfectly poemed, my good man .. Neville
February 20th, 2025 09:34
Neville said:
We none of us know what exactly shaped our neighbour until we hear it from them or read it in a newspaper .. What an excellent piece of literature encompassing a life and perfectly poemed, my good man .. Neville
February 20th, 2025 09:34
The Same Picture Frame
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well done, Tobani! Thought-provoking, that makes me think of the old Heraclitus adage, \"You cannot step into the same river twice\". Change is always a reality...the only constant in a world of utter chaos. Wonderfully expressed. 🌹👏
February 20th, 2025 08:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well done, Tobani! Thought-provoking, that makes me think of the old Heraclitus adage, \"You cannot step into the same river twice\". Change is always a reality...the only constant in a world of utter chaos. Wonderfully expressed. 🌹👏
February 20th, 2025 08:43
The Same Picture Frame
Cassie58 said:
A lovely write Tobani. Has such an air of calm and peace about it. Dawn is a beautiful time of the day. My favourite quiet time. Have a beautiful Thursday.
February 20th, 2025 07:04
Cassie58 said:
A lovely write Tobani. Has such an air of calm and peace about it. Dawn is a beautiful time of the day. My favourite quiet time. Have a beautiful Thursday.
February 20th, 2025 07:04
The Same Picture Frame
teardrop said:
I gotta say, this is so far one of my favorites of yours I have read so far. Love the imagery, the rhymes and the story it tells. Great write.
February 20th, 2025 06:17
teardrop said:
I gotta say, this is so far one of my favorites of yours I have read so far. Love the imagery, the rhymes and the story it tells. Great write.
February 20th, 2025 06:17
The Same Picture Frame
arqios said:
A picture window 🪟 with a new view every day🙏🏻🕊️
February 20th, 2025 05:03
arqios said:
A picture window 🪟 with a new view every day🙏🏻🕊️
February 20th, 2025 05:03
The Same Picture Frame
sorenbarrett said:
Change the only constant. A most beautiful poem of how it happens not just over night but in the blink of an eye. Great metaphors used here and the wording is perfect for the mood.
February 20th, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
Change the only constant. A most beautiful poem of how it happens not just over night but in the blink of an eye. Great metaphors used here and the wording is perfect for the mood.
February 20th, 2025 04:46
The Same Picture Frame
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One Tobani
Reflective And Soothing
February 20th, 2025 04:31
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One Tobani
Reflective And Soothing
February 20th, 2025 04:31
To Be My Fathers Son
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine write Tobani, it is amazing how lives can be changed by one new step in the right direction.
Andy
February 20th, 2025 02:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine write Tobani, it is amazing how lives can be changed by one new step in the right direction.
Andy
February 20th, 2025 02:09
To Be My Fathers Son
Cassie58 said:
An interesting account of someone who turned their life round for the better. Most enjoyable Tobani. He had a rotten start. All good wishes.
February 19th, 2025 17:13
Cassie58 said:
An interesting account of someone who turned their life round for the better. Most enjoyable Tobani. He had a rotten start. All good wishes.
February 19th, 2025 17:13
To Be My Fathers Son
Michael Edwards said:
A real engaging write which held me to the end - a super piece.
February 19th, 2025 06:37
Michael Edwards said:
A real engaging write which held me to the end - a super piece.
February 19th, 2025 06:37
To Be My Fathers Son
arqios said:
I had a cousin who was once a chief of wharfies, they had it rough, those blokes and lads. But hailing from an island, they always had provisions even when sailing and flying were canceled due to the weather and such.
February 19th, 2025 05:35
arqios said:
I had a cousin who was once a chief of wharfies, they had it rough, those blokes and lads. But hailing from an island, they always had provisions even when sailing and flying were canceled due to the weather and such.
February 19th, 2025 05:35
To Be My Fathers Son
David Wakeling said:
Some raw honesty here. But always taking the right lesson from life\'s experience good and bad. Excellent hopeful poem
February 19th, 2025 05:24
David Wakeling said:
Some raw honesty here. But always taking the right lesson from life\'s experience good and bad. Excellent hopeful poem
February 19th, 2025 05:24
To Be My Fathers Son
sorenbarrett said:
Life of hard knocks. A great prodigal son type story that keeps the reader held by the story. Nicely done
February 19th, 2025 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
Life of hard knocks. A great prodigal son type story that keeps the reader held by the story. Nicely done
February 19th, 2025 04:54
Two People In One
Goldfinch60 said:
Our home is the two of us in one mind Tobani where love rules.
Andy
February 19th, 2025 02:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Our home is the two of us in one mind Tobani where love rules.
Andy
February 19th, 2025 02:27
Two People In One
Neville said:
Two minds that think alike in different ways or one undecided mind .. or a portrait of the unity of opposites .. ain’t we complex things eh’ .. Neville 🧠😎👍
February 18th, 2025 14:16
Neville said:
Two minds that think alike in different ways or one undecided mind .. or a portrait of the unity of opposites .. ain’t we complex things eh’ .. Neville 🧠😎👍
February 18th, 2025 14:16
Two People In One
Bloomingdale said:
Our home is a happy pleasurable place❤️
February 18th, 2025 10:05
Bloomingdale said:
Our home is a happy pleasurable place❤️
February 18th, 2025 10:05
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