Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Comes Life
teardrop said:
Wpw! What a great write. Love the thought here. Thanks for the read.
December 19th, 2024 05:45
teardrop said:
Wpw! What a great write. Love the thought here. Thanks for the read.
December 19th, 2024 05:45
Comes Life
cellinic said:
It was an interesting and exciting read! Very persuasive! Best wishes. My like
December 19th, 2024 05:20
cellinic said:
It was an interesting and exciting read! Very persuasive! Best wishes. My like
December 19th, 2024 05:20
Comes Life
Michael Edwards said:
Great write and so appropriate in these sad times when the gap between political agendas seems to be coming ever more divisive. .
December 19th, 2024 02:55
Michael Edwards said:
Great write and so appropriate in these sad times when the gap between political agendas seems to be coming ever more divisive. .
December 19th, 2024 02:55
Comes Life
arqios said:
What an orchestral Crescendo, layering and overlapping onto each other to a grand finale!
December 19th, 2024 01:56
arqios said:
What an orchestral Crescendo, layering and overlapping onto each other to a grand finale!
December 19th, 2024 01:56
Can You See
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very impressive, my friend! Seriously love the way you played with the word “see”. Well done! 🌹👏
December 18th, 2024 17:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very impressive, my friend! Seriously love the way you played with the word “see”. Well done! 🌹👏
December 18th, 2024 17:46
Can You See
Thad Wilk said:
Love it! 😍
A wonderful poem
really thought provoking too! 🤔
Learning to write poetry
helped me \"to see\"
more clearly things through! 😊
Thanks for sharing
much enjoyed thank you,!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 18th, 2024 17:10
Thad Wilk said:
Love it! 😍
A wonderful poem
really thought provoking too! 🤔
Learning to write poetry
helped me \"to see\"
more clearly things through! 😊
Thanks for sharing
much enjoyed thank you,!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 18th, 2024 17:10
Can You See
sorenbarrett said:
So well said, if we could only understad others motivation there would be no need for judgement.
December 18th, 2024 14:20
sorenbarrett said:
So well said, if we could only understad others motivation there would be no need for judgement.
December 18th, 2024 14:20
Can You See
teardrop said:
I like reading your poetry. You write as I do, experiences and emotions. I too started writting as a child, to me, it was my only release. Thank you for the read. I enjoyed it!
December 18th, 2024 07:00
teardrop said:
I like reading your poetry. You write as I do, experiences and emotions. I too started writting as a child, to me, it was my only release. Thank you for the read. I enjoyed it!
December 18th, 2024 07:00
Can You See
cellinic said:
A very nice and impressive reflection , provokes many thoughts and emotions... Like
December 18th, 2024 05:23
cellinic said:
A very nice and impressive reflection , provokes many thoughts and emotions... Like
December 18th, 2024 05:23
Can You See
Neville said:
Blindingly brilliant .. & no kidding .. exceptionally well done my friend .. Neville 👍
December 18th, 2024 03:26
Neville said:
Blindingly brilliant .. & no kidding .. exceptionally well done my friend .. Neville 👍
December 18th, 2024 03:26
Can You See
arqios said:
Oh, now here is a mantra of my being! It also sums up quite neatly a major reason why poetry became part of me as a child. thank you for sharing! P.S. the year stamped marks the general time that I began to write as a novice, the early seventies really.
December 18th, 2024 03:08
arqios said:
Oh, now here is a mantra of my being! It also sums up quite neatly a major reason why poetry became part of me as a child. thank you for sharing! P.S. the year stamped marks the general time that I began to write as a novice, the early seventies really.
December 18th, 2024 03:08
Time Cannot Heal
Kerry said:
This reads like my life! I totally understand and hope it’s more based on fiction than fact!
December 18th, 2024 03:02
Kerry said:
This reads like my life! I totally understand and hope it’s more based on fiction than fact!
December 18th, 2024 03:02
Time Cannot Heal
Neville said:
I enjoyed my visit here today .. and before I go on, just wanted to let you know that .. I also suspect from you avatar, you may follow a Buddhist path or at least be familiar with some of our Princes teachings .. Unfortunately, I am too tired having had a long day and night (hence my late visit here) but had I been more alert may have written some of the more salient points he wrote about pain and suffering, not necessarily for you, but for any others that may follow me here .. Kindest of regards, Neville 😎👍
December 18th, 2024 01:54
Neville said:
I enjoyed my visit here today .. and before I go on, just wanted to let you know that .. I also suspect from you avatar, you may follow a Buddhist path or at least be familiar with some of our Princes teachings .. Unfortunately, I am too tired having had a long day and night (hence my late visit here) but had I been more alert may have written some of the more salient points he wrote about pain and suffering, not necessarily for you, but for any others that may follow me here .. Kindest of regards, Neville 😎👍
December 18th, 2024 01:54
Time Cannot Heal
Dan Williams said:
The myth that \"time heals all wounds\" is a foolish attempt at consolation. At best, sometimes it can mitigate. Oh well. nice work.
December 18th, 2024 01:04
Dan Williams said:
The myth that \"time heals all wounds\" is a foolish attempt at consolation. At best, sometimes it can mitigate. Oh well. nice work.
December 18th, 2024 01:04
Time Cannot Heal
Thomas W Case said:
Words and actions can hurt. Very brave writing. Great job.
December 17th, 2024 22:51
Thomas W Case said:
Words and actions can hurt. Very brave writing. Great job.
December 17th, 2024 22:51
Time Cannot Heal
Thad Wilk said:
An awesome poem,
poignant 😢 and emotional
and eloquently penned!! 🖊️
Love the repeated lines!!
Great read my friend!!
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
December 17th, 2024 16:51
Thad Wilk said:
An awesome poem,
poignant 😢 and emotional
and eloquently penned!! 🖊️
Love the repeated lines!!
Great read my friend!!
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
December 17th, 2024 16:51
Time Cannot Heal
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Someone needed to hear this message today. And released hurt through writing, can be therapeutic. A fine write.
December 17th, 2024 15:50
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Someone needed to hear this message today. And released hurt through writing, can be therapeutic. A fine write.
December 17th, 2024 15:50
Time Cannot Heal
David Wakeling said:
You are right.Time does not heal anything.I think that we are meant to suffer for what reason I don\'t know
December 17th, 2024 14:44
David Wakeling said:
You are right.Time does not heal anything.I think that we are meant to suffer for what reason I don\'t know
December 17th, 2024 14:44
Time Cannot Heal
arqios said:
That brought me to a choice, a summation that should we choose it, Time could bring about a distancing that could parallel healing. The other choice stands as well. Sometimes to remain wounded is for some the only way to feel something ever again.
December 17th, 2024 08:17
arqios said:
That brought me to a choice, a summation that should we choose it, Time could bring about a distancing that could parallel healing. The other choice stands as well. Sometimes to remain wounded is for some the only way to feel something ever again.
December 17th, 2024 08:17
Time Cannot Heal
sorenbarrett said:
The message is received and heard I have felt it but even this time can heal
December 17th, 2024 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
The message is received and heard I have felt it but even this time can heal
December 17th, 2024 04:15
Mummy Tomorrow Will Be Better
Dan Williams said:
Another all too frequent story, well told. Nice work.
December 16th, 2024 00:53
Dan Williams said:
Another all too frequent story, well told. Nice work.
December 16th, 2024 00:53
Mummy Tomorrow Will Be Better
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning
a most poignant write!! 😢
Abuse is a horrible thing
for anyone to have to go through,!! 🙏
Thank you for sharing!!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 15th, 2024 18:09
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning
a most poignant write!! 😢
Abuse is a horrible thing
for anyone to have to go through,!! 🙏
Thank you for sharing!!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 15th, 2024 18:09
Mummy Tomorrow Will Be Better
Cassie58 said:
A heart breaking write Tobani. Your notes made it even sadder. To be separated from your sibling and in care must have been extremely painful for you. Sorry you had to experience this.
December 15th, 2024 14:00
Cassie58 said:
A heart breaking write Tobani. Your notes made it even sadder. To be separated from your sibling and in care must have been extremely painful for you. Sorry you had to experience this.
December 15th, 2024 14:00
Mummy Tomorrow Will Be Better
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Very touching, simple lines with high impact. Fantastic!
December 15th, 2024 09:57
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Very touching, simple lines with high impact. Fantastic!
December 15th, 2024 09:57
Mummy Tomorrow Will Be Better
arqios said:
That is so touching. My story is the reverse where Mum got between myself and the flying belt and planks of wood.We we’re both battered and bruised at the end of that beating. I knew then at 6 what it meant for someone to take a bullet with my name on it. Bless you, friend.
December 15th, 2024 08:22
arqios said:
That is so touching. My story is the reverse where Mum got between myself and the flying belt and planks of wood.We we’re both battered and bruised at the end of that beating. I knew then at 6 what it meant for someone to take a bullet with my name on it. Bless you, friend.
December 15th, 2024 08:22
Mummy Tomorrow Will Be Better
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful, tragic, write my friend. I could feel every word in this and, I concur with Soren, this is a great write at any age, let alone 12. I am so sad that this was your sister and your experience. I pray that you and your sister\'s were able to stay in contact and close despite the separation. Well done, friend. Well done! 🌹👏
December 15th, 2024 07:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful, tragic, write my friend. I could feel every word in this and, I concur with Soren, this is a great write at any age, let alone 12. I am so sad that this was your sister and your experience. I pray that you and your sister\'s were able to stay in contact and close despite the separation. Well done, friend. Well done! 🌹👏
December 15th, 2024 07:35
Mummy Tomorrow Will Be Better
Neville said:
This is so very ragged and real .. it read like a kick to the stomach .. such poetry needs to be out here for the world to see what really goes on behind closed borders, shutters and doors .. 💜
December 15th, 2024 05:14
Neville said:
This is so very ragged and real .. it read like a kick to the stomach .. such poetry needs to be out here for the world to see what really goes on behind closed borders, shutters and doors .. 💜
December 15th, 2024 05:14
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