Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
We are not in Control (Ad Man)
evenwheniLie said:
Christmas as is the other holidays, was a gimmick from the start, their origins lie in control; early on the mind was the focus, now they mainly want to control the money, they got years invested in brainwashing the public, now they can reap the benefits of every believer pouring money into the rich pockets every holiday
December 9th, 2024 10:04
evenwheniLie said:
Christmas as is the other holidays, was a gimmick from the start, their origins lie in control; early on the mind was the focus, now they mainly want to control the money, they got years invested in brainwashing the public, now they can reap the benefits of every believer pouring money into the rich pockets every holiday
December 9th, 2024 10:04
We are not in Control (Ad Man)
David Wakeling said:
This is quite an amazing poem.It is an essay about the good and bad aspects of Christmas.Very inspirational.Well done
December 9th, 2024 05:59
David Wakeling said:
This is quite an amazing poem.It is an essay about the good and bad aspects of Christmas.Very inspirational.Well done
December 9th, 2024 05:59
We are not in Control (Ad Man)
arqios said:
The spinner of tales, the town crier corrupted; bought out by those who hold the reigns, Nottinghams in the shire, back to Sherwood most will retire until the Hood rises from lore of yore.
December 9th, 2024 05:53
arqios said:
The spinner of tales, the town crier corrupted; bought out by those who hold the reigns, Nottinghams in the shire, back to Sherwood most will retire until the Hood rises from lore of yore.
December 9th, 2024 05:53
We are not in Control (Ad Man)
rin said:
The poem is like a sharp spear that picks at the contradictions in society. It is amazing.
December 9th, 2024 04:56
rin said:
The poem is like a sharp spear that picks at the contradictions in society. It is amazing.
December 9th, 2024 04:56
Dreams and Nighmares
Neville said:
First we must fall asleep and then just let them happen .. I hope your next ones are golden ..
December 9th, 2024 00:50
Neville said:
First we must fall asleep and then just let them happen .. I hope your next ones are golden ..
December 9th, 2024 00:50
Dreams and Nighmares
Thad Wilk said:
A powerful poem,
thoughts and message indeed!! 🤔
Hauntingly beautiful, poetic
perfection, and my pleasure to read!!💯
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
December 8th, 2024 21:08
Thad Wilk said:
A powerful poem,
thoughts and message indeed!! 🤔
Hauntingly beautiful, poetic
perfection, and my pleasure to read!!💯
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
December 8th, 2024 21:08
Dreams and Nighmares
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sweet dreams are made of...great poetry...and this, my friend is great poetry! Well done Tobani! ❤️🙏
December 8th, 2024 16:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sweet dreams are made of...great poetry...and this, my friend is great poetry! Well done Tobani! ❤️🙏
December 8th, 2024 16:58
Dreams and Nighmares
aDarkerMind said:
a poem worthy of much praise Tobani.
a joy to read.
December 8th, 2024 14:10
aDarkerMind said:
a poem worthy of much praise Tobani.
a joy to read.
December 8th, 2024 14:10
Dreams and Nighmares
Cassie58 said:
Much enjoyed read Tobani. Nicely composed stanzas.
December 8th, 2024 14:00
Cassie58 said:
Much enjoyed read Tobani. Nicely composed stanzas.
December 8th, 2024 14:00
Dreams and Nighmares
David Wakeling said:
This is very insightful revealing a real vulnerability. It is always a mistake to put your faith in religion but sadly we need to put our faith in something. Wonderful poem.It made me think for the first time in decades
December 8th, 2024 05:59
David Wakeling said:
This is very insightful revealing a real vulnerability. It is always a mistake to put your faith in religion but sadly we need to put our faith in something. Wonderful poem.It made me think for the first time in decades
December 8th, 2024 05:59
Dreams and Nighmares
arqios said:
It would be good to have a nice dream every now and again!
December 8th, 2024 05:17
arqios said:
It would be good to have a nice dream every now and again!
December 8th, 2024 05:17
Dreams and Nighmares
Teddy.15 said:
Sending you all the sweetest of dreams. 🌹
December 8th, 2024 04:06
Teddy.15 said:
Sending you all the sweetest of dreams. 🌹
December 8th, 2024 04:06
Dreams and Nighmares
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
Great read wow! I relate to this so much.
December 8th, 2024 03:59
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
Great read wow! I relate to this so much.
December 8th, 2024 03:59
Dreams and Nighmares
teardrop said:
Love, love, love this! Excellent write and beautiful message, understand this all to well1
December 8th, 2024 02:36
teardrop said:
Love, love, love this! Excellent write and beautiful message, understand this all to well1
December 8th, 2024 02:36
Man With The Big Set of Keys
Thad Wilk said:
A very sad 😢 and
heart touching poem
and true story!
So sorry you have had
to experience this
awful abuse, thanks for
sharing, eloquently penned
my friend! 👍
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
December 7th, 2024 18:06
Thad Wilk said:
A very sad 😢 and
heart touching poem
and true story!
So sorry you have had
to experience this
awful abuse, thanks for
sharing, eloquently penned
my friend! 👍
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
December 7th, 2024 18:06
Man With The Big Set of Keys
arqios said:
Heart rending truth and express of that truth. I know the can and I know the abuse. The main difference is the environment it occurred in, I was never in the system and now realise that there is nowhere safe. Thanks for sharing what I still have a bit of a journey to arrive at expressing from my past. Thank you.
December 7th, 2024 14:55
arqios said:
Heart rending truth and express of that truth. I know the can and I know the abuse. The main difference is the environment it occurred in, I was never in the system and now realise that there is nowhere safe. Thanks for sharing what I still have a bit of a journey to arrive at expressing from my past. Thank you.
December 7th, 2024 14:55
Man With The Big Set of Keys
Cassie58 said:
I read this twice Tobani, first thing this morning and again now. It was a hard read and it must have been very difficult for you to compose. Sadly this happens all too often and it sickens me that people in authority, trusted with the care of children should behave in this way. It ruins lives. A courageous write.
December 7th, 2024 12:49
Cassie58 said:
I read this twice Tobani, first thing this morning and again now. It was a hard read and it must have been very difficult for you to compose. Sadly this happens all too often and it sickens me that people in authority, trusted with the care of children should behave in this way. It ruins lives. A courageous write.
December 7th, 2024 12:49
Man With The Big Set of Keys
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I have harboured questions and often disdain towards authority figures as they inveriably slip riding high horses. The abuse of position of power seems to be as old as our \"civilization\". Don\'t know why we keep up the pretense
December 7th, 2024 09:38
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I have harboured questions and often disdain towards authority figures as they inveriably slip riding high horses. The abuse of position of power seems to be as old as our \"civilization\". Don\'t know why we keep up the pretense
December 7th, 2024 09:38
Man With The Big Set of Keys
teardrop said:
I understand your words though they break my heart. I was raised in the same situation also in the 60;s and 70;s. Those days there was no one to tell and even when you didm they just kept it to themselves, sent you back to the den and never spoke of it again. I;m sorry you experienced this.
December 7th, 2024 05:53
teardrop said:
I understand your words though they break my heart. I was raised in the same situation also in the 60;s and 70;s. Those days there was no one to tell and even when you didm they just kept it to themselves, sent you back to the den and never spoke of it again. I;m sorry you experienced this.
December 7th, 2024 05:53
Man With The Big Set of Keys
sorenbarrett said:
Abuse of children is sad and deplorable but more common than anyone would want to believe. The powerless have little recourse but to endure.
December 7th, 2024 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
Abuse of children is sad and deplorable but more common than anyone would want to believe. The powerless have little recourse but to endure.
December 7th, 2024 04:30
Man With The Big Set of Keys
Neville said:
I think you are very brave to post this .. we all know such things go on .. this puts it into perspective .. and is just another reason why I despise so many of my own species .. Neville
December 7th, 2024 04:22
Neville said:
I think you are very brave to post this .. we all know such things go on .. this puts it into perspective .. and is just another reason why I despise so many of my own species .. Neville
December 7th, 2024 04:22
Lady of The Night (Out of Need)
Dan Williams said:
I love your recognition and sympathy for an often wrongly criticized group, just trying to survive like the rest of us. Very nice work.
December 7th, 2024 01:15
Dan Williams said:
I love your recognition and sympathy for an often wrongly criticized group, just trying to survive like the rest of us. Very nice work.
December 7th, 2024 01:15
Lady of The Night (Out of Need)
Thad Wilk said:
A really powerful poem
on this lady of the night! 👍😯
Very moving, and
pulls on the heartstrings!
Love it! 😍 Thank you for
sharing my pleasure to recite!! 🙏
Best wishes 🍀🤗. Thad
December 6th, 2024 15:51
Thad Wilk said:
A really powerful poem
on this lady of the night! 👍😯
Very moving, and
pulls on the heartstrings!
Love it! 😍 Thank you for
sharing my pleasure to recite!! 🙏
Best wishes 🍀🤗. Thad
December 6th, 2024 15:51
Lady of The Night (Out of Need)
arqios said:
The first time we all ever worked at a job we didn’t like or couldn’t do witHout for lack of choice in a sense is prostituting ourself for need. Sometimes any real difference is quite blurred.
December 6th, 2024 08:57
arqios said:
The first time we all ever worked at a job we didn’t like or couldn’t do witHout for lack of choice in a sense is prostituting ourself for need. Sometimes any real difference is quite blurred.
December 6th, 2024 08:57
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