Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
The World Holds It`s Breath
Doggerel Dave said:
Faved. What could I possibly add?
February 18th, 2025 06:40
Doggerel Dave said:
Faved. What could I possibly add?
February 18th, 2025 06:40
Two People In One
sorenbarrett said:
Anyone who has lived with a borderline personality, a bipolar disorder, even a histrionic personality can feel this. Clever and nicely structured it sends its message powerfully. This deserves a fave
February 18th, 2025 05:09
sorenbarrett said:
Anyone who has lived with a borderline personality, a bipolar disorder, even a histrionic personality can feel this. Clever and nicely structured it sends its message powerfully. This deserves a fave
February 18th, 2025 05:09
Two People In One
arqios said:
Likened into one with multi personality challenges, a Jekyll and a Hyde. Very engaging 🙏🏻🕊
February 18th, 2025 04:11
arqios said:
Likened into one with multi personality challenges, a Jekyll and a Hyde. Very engaging 🙏🏻🕊
February 18th, 2025 04:11
The World Holds It`s Breath
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Tobani very well written, all he cares about is what is in it for him and not care about anybody else.
Andy
February 18th, 2025 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Tobani very well written, all he cares about is what is in it for him and not care about anybody else.
Andy
February 18th, 2025 02:49
The World Holds It`s Breath
MendedFences27 said:
Truth, and nothing but the truth. A well-spoken piece. I feel like it will all come crashing down on him soon. (You reap what you sow). I pray for it to be true. Well spoken, - Phil A.
February 17th, 2025 20:05
MendedFences27 said:
Truth, and nothing but the truth. A well-spoken piece. I feel like it will all come crashing down on him soon. (You reap what you sow). I pray for it to be true. Well spoken, - Phil A.
February 17th, 2025 20:05
The World Holds It`s Breath
E.J. Waling said:
At 72 I’ve been around the block a few times. There was a saying no so long ago that everyone was entitled to their opinion.
I lost friends and family in the last few years as they pushed me away because my opinion did not conform with theirs. Sad….
February 17th, 2025 19:04
E.J. Waling said:
At 72 I’ve been around the block a few times. There was a saying no so long ago that everyone was entitled to their opinion.
I lost friends and family in the last few years as they pushed me away because my opinion did not conform with theirs. Sad….
February 17th, 2025 19:04
The World Holds It`s Breath
Cassie58 said:
That’s quite an itch Tobani. An epic one and I congratulate you on your patience. So much content here and much to be worried about. We wait with bated breath. Hope your Monday has been good.
February 17th, 2025 14:18
Cassie58 said:
That’s quite an itch Tobani. An epic one and I congratulate you on your patience. So much content here and much to be worried about. We wait with bated breath. Hope your Monday has been good.
February 17th, 2025 14:18
The World Holds It`s Breath
Neville said:
Damn, this is about as true as it gets .. and darn near made me cry with frustration and anger .. Needed to be said tho\' .. nuff said .. Neville
February 17th, 2025 13:22
Neville said:
Damn, this is about as true as it gets .. and darn near made me cry with frustration and anger .. Needed to be said tho\' .. nuff said .. Neville
February 17th, 2025 13:22
The World Holds It`s Breath
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Write on! It makes me feel less alone! LOL! That itch will come back, no doubt! Agent Orange Menace will see to that. (Oops, did I say that out loud? 🤣) Well done, on this, though I wish it weren\'t so damn true. 🌹👏
February 17th, 2025 08:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Write on! It makes me feel less alone! LOL! That itch will come back, no doubt! Agent Orange Menace will see to that. (Oops, did I say that out loud? 🤣) Well done, on this, though I wish it weren\'t so damn true. 🌹👏
February 17th, 2025 08:19
The World Holds It`s Breath
David Wakeling said:
There is so much to unpack here. I think recent events have made us all get ready for bad things to happen. Let\'s face it wars are happening around the world so more could be coming.Let\'s hope things improve.An amazing poem
February 17th, 2025 05:38
David Wakeling said:
There is so much to unpack here. I think recent events have made us all get ready for bad things to happen. Let\'s face it wars are happening around the world so more could be coming.Let\'s hope things improve.An amazing poem
February 17th, 2025 05:38
The World Holds It`s Breath
sorenbarrett said:
Strong feelings something that America has not had in a long time. Wait and see if the bull shit that has been spread is a growth stimulant or too strong and burns the roots. When the horrific becomes humorous all we can do is laugh. Good and passionate write.
February 17th, 2025 05:10
sorenbarrett said:
Strong feelings something that America has not had in a long time. Wait and see if the bull shit that has been spread is a growth stimulant or too strong and burns the roots. When the horrific becomes humorous all we can do is laugh. Good and passionate write.
February 17th, 2025 05:10
The World Holds It`s Breath
Mutley Ravishes said:
Not holding my breath!
Taking the journey to the west!
February 17th, 2025 04:54
Mutley Ravishes said:
Not holding my breath!
Taking the journey to the west!
February 17th, 2025 04:54
My Bed For The Night
Parisab said:
Glad you listened as a way of helping-good write
February 17th, 2025 03:35
Parisab said:
Glad you listened as a way of helping-good write
February 17th, 2025 03:35
The World Holds It`s Breath
arqios said:
You held on for as long as you could. That’s all that can be asked of anyone 🙏🏻🕊️
February 17th, 2025 03:09
arqios said:
You held on for as long as you could. That’s all that can be asked of anyone 🙏🏻🕊️
February 17th, 2025 03:09
Just a Bit Of Fun
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Tobani.
\"Wise man say,
If you want the truth,
Don\'t listen to a Politician.\"
Andy
February 17th, 2025 02:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Tobani.
\"Wise man say,
If you want the truth,
Don\'t listen to a Politician.\"
Andy
February 17th, 2025 02:10
Just a Bit Of Fun
David Wakeling said:
This was fun and very clever.Enjoyed reading
February 16th, 2025 16:33
David Wakeling said:
This was fun and very clever.Enjoyed reading
February 16th, 2025 16:33
Just a Bit Of Fun
Cassie58 said:
You ARE a wise man with a great sense of humour Tobani. I like the gardening one especially :) Much fun reading.
February 16th, 2025 12:47
Cassie58 said:
You ARE a wise man with a great sense of humour Tobani. I like the gardening one especially :) Much fun reading.
February 16th, 2025 12:47
Yesterday Was
Cassie58 said:
This is a very touching poem Tobani. A reminder of the lonely people on Valentine’s Day, and there are many of them. I particularly enjoyed the structure and the repetition of some hearts, worked well. A favourite.
February 16th, 2025 12:27
Cassie58 said:
This is a very touching poem Tobani. A reminder of the lonely people on Valentine’s Day, and there are many of them. I particularly enjoyed the structure and the repetition of some hearts, worked well. A favourite.
February 16th, 2025 12:27
Just a Bit Of Fun
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! I love the second edition of this. Well done, Tobani! I hope there will be more! 🌹👏
February 16th, 2025 10:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! I love the second edition of this. Well done, Tobani! I hope there will be more! 🌹👏
February 16th, 2025 10:48
Just a Bit Of Fun
Cheeky Missy said:
Like a silver platter with dark chocolate truffles to tantalize the senses and leave the palette satisfied, how charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a none too subtly haunting poignancy which humor balances off beautifully. Thank you for sharing.
February 16th, 2025 09:21
Cheeky Missy said:
Like a silver platter with dark chocolate truffles to tantalize the senses and leave the palette satisfied, how charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a none too subtly haunting poignancy which humor balances off beautifully. Thank you for sharing.
February 16th, 2025 09:21
Just a Bit Of Fun
sorenbarrett said:
Now one of the qualifications of a fave is something that moves me. The second stanza made me laugh so that gets it. This was a truly fun and satisfying read and I thank you for that.
February 16th, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
Now one of the qualifications of a fave is something that moves me. The second stanza made me laugh so that gets it. This was a truly fun and satisfying read and I thank you for that.
February 16th, 2025 04:09
Yesterday Was
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Tobani and so true, so much emotion comes into our lives.
Andy
February 16th, 2025 02:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Tobani and so true, so much emotion comes into our lives.
Andy
February 16th, 2025 02:43
Yesterday Was
Cheeky Missy said:
There\'s something of sheer solace in this seemingly simple piece which yet so capable says so much more than would seem, covering the bases gently with such a tender hand, likeas a mother\'s. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 15th, 2025 21:50
Cheeky Missy said:
There\'s something of sheer solace in this seemingly simple piece which yet so capable says so much more than would seem, covering the bases gently with such a tender hand, likeas a mother\'s. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 15th, 2025 21:50
Yesterday Was
David Wakeling said:
Yesterday seemed to be filled with hearts broken and otherwise. A very thoughtful poem. Enjoyed reading
February 15th, 2025 21:00
David Wakeling said:
Yesterday seemed to be filled with hearts broken and otherwise. A very thoughtful poem. Enjoyed reading
February 15th, 2025 21:00
Yesterday Was
E.J. Waling said:
Wonderful words. Sensitive write ✍️ PL
John
February 15th, 2025 19:22
E.J. Waling said:
Wonderful words. Sensitive write ✍️ PL
John
February 15th, 2025 19:22
Yesterday Was
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen. You and I are on a similar track this morning. Serendipity. As for your poem, spot on! Well done! 🌹👏
February 15th, 2025 09:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen. You and I are on a similar track this morning. Serendipity. As for your poem, spot on! Well done! 🌹👏
February 15th, 2025 09:30
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