Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence



God`s Gift To Us
David Wakeling said:

Sad but true. God sure has left the Devil in charge, It takes strength and wisdom to understand,

December 21st, 2024 14:55

God`s Gift To Us
Cassie58 said:

Sadly we live in troubled times. I have to say for the first time, I believe we have lost direction and I have no confidence in politicians to find answers. They bury their heads in the sand. I fear for my grandchildren for all the reasons you have stated in your poem. Well penned Tobani.

December 21st, 2024 13:36

God`s Gift To Us
Tony36 said:

BRAVO

December 21st, 2024 12:34

God`s Gift To Us
RSM0812 said:

The forteiture of humanity. This poem reaches for nothing. A simple clarification of evil and its effects on the world. It hit chords with me. Brilliant.

December 21st, 2024 10:50

God`s Gift To Us
rhmn_7 said:

Despite all the bad things happening, it still wasn\'t enough to burry the good and beauty completely. So I say there is still hope. But a nice poem!

December 21st, 2024 07:38

God`s Gift To Us
Neville said:


I think you poemed this at just the write time .. sadly & ever so, I fear the world is going to be in the hands & at the mercy of some serious dictators & narcissists

December 21st, 2024 06:49

God`s Gift To Us
arqios said:

This poem powerfully conveys a sense of urgency and despair regarding the current state of the world. The contrast between the world as a divine gift and the destructive actions of humanity highlights the deep sense of betrayal and sorrow felt in witnessing the degradation of our planet and society.

December 21st, 2024 05:59

God`s Gift To Us
sorenbarrett said:

A powerful write and stated with convition. Nicely written

December 21st, 2024 04:08

God`s Gift To Us
orchidee said:

It\'s surely mankind who are the fools - not that God needs defending by the humans who do believe in Him.

December 21st, 2024 03:42

God`s Gift To Us
cellinic said:

Rather a serious write with excellent argumentation. Best wishes,

December 21st, 2024 02:21

God`s Gift To Us
Doggerel Dave said:

Do you believe they are listening, or is there anyone there anyway? Matters llittle for the purposes of your argument, which is engaging and neat.

December 21st, 2024 01:58

God`s Gift To Us
Michael Edwards said:

If you are a believer it\'s a world which your God created. A well constructed piece which brings home the stupidity of man - a great (but sad) read.

December 21st, 2024 01:48

Comes Life
Thad Wilk said:

Terrific poem and
I totally agree!! 💯
Just resonates
with greatness,
and penned superbly!!🏆
Much enjoyed my friend!! 😊
Best regards ✌️ Thad

December 19th, 2024 20:42

Comes Life
Kevin Hulme said:

Looks like a Good Recipe. If only everyone went in the Kitchen and cooked it.
Well said.


December 19th, 2024 19:34

Can You See
Cassie58 said:

So much wisdom in these words Tobani. And so well written, a long time ago too. Much appreciated.

December 19th, 2024 14:19

Comes Life
rebellion_in_sanity said:

An uplifting poem. At times I feel the need of a heavy dose. Thankfully I chanced upon it today. Loved it

December 19th, 2024 10:57

Comes Life
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

December 19th, 2024 10:24

Comes Life
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Agreed with our friend, arqios...this has the crescendo of a grand orchestra and leads to life-giving truth. Profound, my friend, and 💯 true. Well done and what a timely message...both the year it was written and now! 🌹👏

December 19th, 2024 08:00

Comes Life
Cassie58 said:

Life long learning. A wonderful reminder Tobani. Thank you.

December 19th, 2024 07:20

Comes Life
Mutley Ravishes said:

Growing pains!
Great write.

December 19th, 2024 05:58

Comes Life
teardrop said:

Wpw! What a great write. Love the thought here. Thanks for the read.

December 19th, 2024 05:45

Comes Life
cellinic said:

It was an interesting and exciting read! Very persuasive! Best wishes. My like

December 19th, 2024 05:20

Comes Life
Michael Edwards said:

Great write and so appropriate in these sad times when the gap between political agendas seems to be coming ever more divisive. .

December 19th, 2024 02:55

Comes Life
arqios said:

What an orchestral Crescendo, layering and overlapping onto each other to a grand finale!

December 19th, 2024 01:56

Can You See
hzugman said:

Now I see. Nice write TN.

December 18th, 2024 19:19

Can You See
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Very impressive, my friend! Seriously love the way you played with the word “see”. Well done! 🌹👏

December 18th, 2024 17:46

Can You See
Thad Wilk said:

Love it! 😍
A wonderful poem
really thought provoking too! 🤔
Learning to write poetry
helped me \"to see\"
more clearly things through! 😊
Thanks for sharing
much enjoyed thank you,!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad

December 18th, 2024 17:10

Can You See
sorenbarrett said:

So well said, if we could only understad others motivation there would be no need for judgement.

December 18th, 2024 14:20

Can You See
teardrop said:

I like reading your poetry. You write as I do, experiences and emotions. I too started writting as a child, to me, it was my only release. Thank you for the read. I enjoyed it!

December 18th, 2024 07:00

Can You See
cellinic said:

A very nice and impressive reflection , provokes many thoughts and emotions... Like

December 18th, 2024 05:23



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