Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Take What`s Left
David Wakeling said:
Oh dear something personal going on here. Still I hope it works out
December 28th, 2024 15:31
David Wakeling said:
Oh dear something personal going on here. Still I hope it works out
December 28th, 2024 15:31
Take What`s Left
Thad Wilk said:
Wow 😳 so poignant
Indeed.
Really pulls on
the heartstrings!!😢
Wonderful brevity my friend,
my pleasure to read!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 28th, 2024 13:35
Thad Wilk said:
Wow 😳 so poignant
Indeed.
Really pulls on
the heartstrings!!😢
Wonderful brevity my friend,
my pleasure to read!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 28th, 2024 13:35
Take What`s Left
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I know this feeling. I am sure the circumstances are different, but I know this feeling. Well expressed my friend! 🌹👏
December 28th, 2024 09:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I know this feeling. I am sure the circumstances are different, but I know this feeling. Well expressed my friend! 🌹👏
December 28th, 2024 09:12
Take What`s Left
sorenbarrett said:
When one is deprived of all one has then it is an opportunity for a new beginning. What is painful at the time becomes a burning of the field for a new crop. Very emotive this poem and the feeling flows out of it
December 28th, 2024 04:50
sorenbarrett said:
When one is deprived of all one has then it is an opportunity for a new beginning. What is painful at the time becomes a burning of the field for a new crop. Very emotive this poem and the feeling flows out of it
December 28th, 2024 04:50
Take What`s Left
Neville said:
Sometimes it is best to get out and move on .. I presume things have improved since 1979 .. Neville
December 28th, 2024 03:44
Neville said:
Sometimes it is best to get out and move on .. I presume things have improved since 1979 .. Neville
December 28th, 2024 03:44
Take What`s Left
Neville said:
Sometimes it is best to get out and move on .. I presume things have improved since 1979 .. Neville
December 28th, 2024 03:44
Neville said:
Sometimes it is best to get out and move on .. I presume things have improved since 1979 .. Neville
December 28th, 2024 03:44
Can You See
NafisaSB said:
exactly - unless the person can actually see the real you, passing judgement would be one sided, and maybe wrong too
good write up - keep it up
December 26th, 2024 02:06
NafisaSB said:
exactly - unless the person can actually see the real you, passing judgement would be one sided, and maybe wrong too
good write up - keep it up
December 26th, 2024 02:06
God`s Gift To Us
domilla said:
God told us to love each other and all that surround us . His gift of love showed how deep it goes . If we are to let our love run as deep we could save those in it so that as it falls we don’t go down with it
December 22nd, 2024 07:02
domilla said:
God told us to love each other and all that surround us . His gift of love showed how deep it goes . If we are to let our love run as deep we could save those in it so that as it falls we don’t go down with it
December 22nd, 2024 07:02
God`s Gift To Us
E.J. Waling said:
Creation is a concept beyond human understanding.
Enjoyed the read.
John
December 21st, 2024 18:13
E.J. Waling said:
Creation is a concept beyond human understanding.
Enjoyed the read.
John
December 21st, 2024 18:13
God`s Gift To Us
David Wakeling said:
Sad but true. God sure has left the Devil in charge, It takes strength and wisdom to understand,
December 21st, 2024 14:55
David Wakeling said:
Sad but true. God sure has left the Devil in charge, It takes strength and wisdom to understand,
December 21st, 2024 14:55
God`s Gift To Us
Cassie58 said:
Sadly we live in troubled times. I have to say for the first time, I believe we have lost direction and I have no confidence in politicians to find answers. They bury their heads in the sand. I fear for my grandchildren for all the reasons you have stated in your poem. Well penned Tobani.
December 21st, 2024 13:36
Cassie58 said:
Sadly we live in troubled times. I have to say for the first time, I believe we have lost direction and I have no confidence in politicians to find answers. They bury their heads in the sand. I fear for my grandchildren for all the reasons you have stated in your poem. Well penned Tobani.
December 21st, 2024 13:36
God`s Gift To Us
RSM0812 said:
The forteiture of humanity. This poem reaches for nothing. A simple clarification of evil and its effects on the world. It hit chords with me. Brilliant.
December 21st, 2024 10:50
RSM0812 said:
The forteiture of humanity. This poem reaches for nothing. A simple clarification of evil and its effects on the world. It hit chords with me. Brilliant.
December 21st, 2024 10:50
God`s Gift To Us
rhmn_7 said:
Despite all the bad things happening, it still wasn\'t enough to burry the good and beauty completely. So I say there is still hope. But a nice poem!
December 21st, 2024 07:38
rhmn_7 said:
Despite all the bad things happening, it still wasn\'t enough to burry the good and beauty completely. So I say there is still hope. But a nice poem!
December 21st, 2024 07:38
God`s Gift To Us
Neville said:
I think you poemed this at just the write time .. sadly & ever so, I fear the world is going to be in the hands & at the mercy of some serious dictators & narcissists
December 21st, 2024 06:49
Neville said:
I think you poemed this at just the write time .. sadly & ever so, I fear the world is going to be in the hands & at the mercy of some serious dictators & narcissists
December 21st, 2024 06:49
God`s Gift To Us
arqios said:
This poem powerfully conveys a sense of urgency and despair regarding the current state of the world. The contrast between the world as a divine gift and the destructive actions of humanity highlights the deep sense of betrayal and sorrow felt in witnessing the degradation of our planet and society.
December 21st, 2024 05:59
arqios said:
This poem powerfully conveys a sense of urgency and despair regarding the current state of the world. The contrast between the world as a divine gift and the destructive actions of humanity highlights the deep sense of betrayal and sorrow felt in witnessing the degradation of our planet and society.
December 21st, 2024 05:59
God`s Gift To Us
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful write and stated with convition. Nicely written
December 21st, 2024 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful write and stated with convition. Nicely written
December 21st, 2024 04:08
God`s Gift To Us
orchidee said:
It\'s surely mankind who are the fools - not that God needs defending by the humans who do believe in Him.
December 21st, 2024 03:42
orchidee said:
It\'s surely mankind who are the fools - not that God needs defending by the humans who do believe in Him.
December 21st, 2024 03:42
God`s Gift To Us
cellinic said:
Rather a serious write with excellent argumentation. Best wishes,
December 21st, 2024 02:21
cellinic said:
Rather a serious write with excellent argumentation. Best wishes,
December 21st, 2024 02:21
God`s Gift To Us
Doggerel Dave said:
Do you believe they are listening, or is there anyone there anyway? Matters llittle for the purposes of your argument, which is engaging and neat.
December 21st, 2024 01:58
Doggerel Dave said:
Do you believe they are listening, or is there anyone there anyway? Matters llittle for the purposes of your argument, which is engaging and neat.
December 21st, 2024 01:58
God`s Gift To Us
Michael Edwards said:
If you are a believer it\'s a world which your God created. A well constructed piece which brings home the stupidity of man - a great (but sad) read.
December 21st, 2024 01:48
Michael Edwards said:
If you are a believer it\'s a world which your God created. A well constructed piece which brings home the stupidity of man - a great (but sad) read.
December 21st, 2024 01:48
Comes Life
Thad Wilk said:
Terrific poem and
I totally agree!! 💯
Just resonates
with greatness,
and penned superbly!!🏆
Much enjoyed my friend!! 😊
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 19th, 2024 20:42
Thad Wilk said:
Terrific poem and
I totally agree!! 💯
Just resonates
with greatness,
and penned superbly!!🏆
Much enjoyed my friend!! 😊
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 19th, 2024 20:42
Comes Life
Kevin Hulme said:
Looks like a Good Recipe. If only everyone went in the Kitchen and cooked it.
Well said.
December 19th, 2024 19:34
Kevin Hulme said:
Looks like a Good Recipe. If only everyone went in the Kitchen and cooked it.
Well said.
December 19th, 2024 19:34
Can You See
Cassie58 said:
So much wisdom in these words Tobani. And so well written, a long time ago too. Much appreciated.
December 19th, 2024 14:19
Cassie58 said:
So much wisdom in these words Tobani. And so well written, a long time ago too. Much appreciated.
December 19th, 2024 14:19
Comes Life
rebellion_in_sanity said:
An uplifting poem. At times I feel the need of a heavy dose. Thankfully I chanced upon it today. Loved it
December 19th, 2024 10:57
rebellion_in_sanity said:
An uplifting poem. At times I feel the need of a heavy dose. Thankfully I chanced upon it today. Loved it
December 19th, 2024 10:57
Comes Life
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Agreed with our friend, arqios...this has the crescendo of a grand orchestra and leads to life-giving truth. Profound, my friend, and 💯 true. Well done and what a timely message...both the year it was written and now! 🌹👏
December 19th, 2024 08:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Agreed with our friend, arqios...this has the crescendo of a grand orchestra and leads to life-giving truth. Profound, my friend, and 💯 true. Well done and what a timely message...both the year it was written and now! 🌹👏
December 19th, 2024 08:00
Comes Life
Cassie58 said:
Life long learning. A wonderful reminder Tobani. Thank you.
December 19th, 2024 07:20
Cassie58 said:
Life long learning. A wonderful reminder Tobani. Thank you.
December 19th, 2024 07:20
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