Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Successfully Failed Again.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I wrote in my poem, \"Frozen Solid\", \"Failing to being a winner / and winning at being a failure\". I am not one to quote myself too often 😂, but the ending reminded me of that line. Such a relatable poem, this gets a fave from me, my friend. Well done on this. Love the form too.
April 7th, 2025 15:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I wrote in my poem, \"Frozen Solid\", \"Failing to being a winner / and winning at being a failure\". I am not one to quote myself too often 😂, but the ending reminded me of that line. Such a relatable poem, this gets a fave from me, my friend. Well done on this. Love the form too.
April 7th, 2025 15:41
Oh No Not More !!! Wise Man Say (9)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
How I am two days behind reading my regular dose of Wisdom from Tobani is beyond me, but I am. I am sorry for the delay, but it was well timed! I always enjoy these. Please feel free to keep them coming if and as the muse keeps directing! No complaints here. Well done, friend! Much enjoyed! 🌹👏
April 7th, 2025 15:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
How I am two days behind reading my regular dose of Wisdom from Tobani is beyond me, but I am. I am sorry for the delay, but it was well timed! I always enjoy these. Please feel free to keep them coming if and as the muse keeps directing! No complaints here. Well done, friend! Much enjoyed! 🌹👏
April 7th, 2025 15:33
Just a Waste of F------ Time
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Language is nothing to apologize for when well used! And, my friend, you certainly have well used it here. I read this when you published it and thought I had commented on it, but evidently not! My deepest apologies for the extremely delayed engagement my friend! Hope your weekend rocked! 🌹
April 7th, 2025 15:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Language is nothing to apologize for when well used! And, my friend, you certainly have well used it here. I read this when you published it and thought I had commented on it, but evidently not! My deepest apologies for the extremely delayed engagement my friend! Hope your weekend rocked! 🌹
April 7th, 2025 15:30
Successfully Failed Again.
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely said in most poetic form that we are what we tell ourselves that we are. The mind is most powerful and what we believe it makes come true. Very nicely written Tobani
April 7th, 2025 03:40
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely said in most poetic form that we are what we tell ourselves that we are. The mind is most powerful and what we believe it makes come true. Very nicely written Tobani
April 7th, 2025 03:40
Successfully Failed Again.
arqios said:
The greater the effort after failed trials the greater the learning and achievement 🙏🏻🕊️
April 7th, 2025 02:47
arqios said:
The greater the effort after failed trials the greater the learning and achievement 🙏🏻🕊️
April 7th, 2025 02:47
Oh No Not More !!! Wise Man Say (9)
Goldfinch60 said:
Good ones once more Tobani.
Andy
April 7th, 2025 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Good ones once more Tobani.
Andy
April 7th, 2025 01:18
Oh No Not More !!! Wise Man Say (9)
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re too fun herein, though. Dinna leave off, it\'s all too good. I love it. Little bits of good sense concluding with a hilarious finale are too good. Beautifully rendered with a tasteful bit of imagery and haunting poignancy. Thank you, thank you for sharing.
April 6th, 2025 20:35
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re too fun herein, though. Dinna leave off, it\'s all too good. I love it. Little bits of good sense concluding with a hilarious finale are too good. Beautifully rendered with a tasteful bit of imagery and haunting poignancy. Thank you, thank you for sharing.
April 6th, 2025 20:35
Oh No Not More !!! Wise Man Say (9)
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
This real touched me, beautiful one
April 6th, 2025 11:43
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
This real touched me, beautiful one
April 6th, 2025 11:43
To Be Alone
definitelymayank said:
Ahh such a lovely one, sad that I relate to it to some extent.
April 6th, 2025 11:42
definitelymayank said:
Ahh such a lovely one, sad that I relate to it to some extent.
April 6th, 2025 11:42
Oh No Not More !!! Wise Man Say (9)
sorenbarrett said:
No don\'t assume you know the old saying. I have grown to enjoy your Sunday wise man say section it makes my day and I hope it don\'t go away. Have a great day.
April 6th, 2025 05:47
sorenbarrett said:
No don\'t assume you know the old saying. I have grown to enjoy your Sunday wise man say section it makes my day and I hope it don\'t go away. Have a great day.
April 6th, 2025 05:47
Oh No Not More !!! Wise Man Say (9)
arqios said:
Oh yes! Indeed and 10 not far behind 🙏🏻🕊️
April 6th, 2025 03:49
arqios said:
Oh yes! Indeed and 10 not far behind 🙏🏻🕊️
April 6th, 2025 03:49
Is Insanity Now Normality.
NafisaSB said:
i think the answer is obvious - you have clarified it yourself indirectly
scary thought - wish things normalize one day soon
April 6th, 2025 02:32
NafisaSB said:
i think the answer is obvious - you have clarified it yourself indirectly
scary thought - wish things normalize one day soon
April 6th, 2025 02:32
Just a Waste of F------ Time
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a strong poem Tobani. I just cannot understand why people treat children like this.
Andy
April 5th, 2025 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a strong poem Tobani. I just cannot understand why people treat children like this.
Andy
April 5th, 2025 01:21
Just a Waste of F------ Time
sorenbarrett said:
The irony of what people say and do never ceases to amaze me. Being a scape goat does not make one a goat, unless one is a G.O.A.T. A touching write that shows that people use their own disabilities to create further disabilities in others. Tough read
April 4th, 2025 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
The irony of what people say and do never ceases to amaze me. Being a scape goat does not make one a goat, unless one is a G.O.A.T. A touching write that shows that people use their own disabilities to create further disabilities in others. Tough read
April 4th, 2025 03:58
Just a Waste of F------ Time
Mutley Ravishes said:
How effing true! Sad, and funny.
April 4th, 2025 03:38
Mutley Ravishes said:
How effing true! Sad, and funny.
April 4th, 2025 03:38
Just a Waste of F------ Time
arqios said:
It does speak volumes of itself- the one that spoke to me like that is now gone, 2 years this week. How timely 🙏🏻🕊️
April 4th, 2025 02:57
arqios said:
It does speak volumes of itself- the one that spoke to me like that is now gone, 2 years this week. How timely 🙏🏻🕊️
April 4th, 2025 02:57
Just a Waste of F------ Time
orchidee said:
You seen my poem - censored?! (not posted on here). It starts:
Ohhh, F, F, F, and F
And furthermore F, F, F, and F
And so on for 5,483 verses! Ooh!
April 4th, 2025 02:21
orchidee said:
You seen my poem - censored?! (not posted on here). It starts:
Ohhh, F, F, F, and F
And furthermore F, F, F, and F
And so on for 5,483 verses! Ooh!
April 4th, 2025 02:21
Jimmy The Bully Man
Goldfinch60 said:
There were bullies in school that got their comeuppance Tobani, strangely I became good friends with one after we left school, he was fine.
Andy
April 4th, 2025 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
There were bullies in school that got their comeuppance Tobani, strangely I became good friends with one after we left school, he was fine.
Andy
April 4th, 2025 01:10
Jimmy The Bully Man
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yesss! I love the fire in your childhood self and this describes a real life scene I was invovled in where I had to stand up to a bully. The result, the same...not the same exact action, mine a punch to the face...but the laying on the ground and not feeling so big and tough...yup. And bully no longer bullied me anymore. Only that particular one stopped, of course, and there were times I lost and/or was beat up by groups of kids. But in that one instance, I moved like a butterfly and stung like a bee. Well done on this, Nataiella. Thank you for posting this throwback and for its message. A fave from me.
April 3rd, 2025 11:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yesss! I love the fire in your childhood self and this describes a real life scene I was invovled in where I had to stand up to a bully. The result, the same...not the same exact action, mine a punch to the face...but the laying on the ground and not feeling so big and tough...yup. And bully no longer bullied me anymore. Only that particular one stopped, of course, and there were times I lost and/or was beat up by groups of kids. But in that one instance, I moved like a butterfly and stung like a bee. Well done on this, Nataiella. Thank you for posting this throwback and for its message. A fave from me.
April 3rd, 2025 11:43
Jimmy The Bully Man
arqios said:
When you’re the underdog you learn to fight to survive 🙏🏻🕊️
April 3rd, 2025 03:09
arqios said:
When you’re the underdog you learn to fight to survive 🙏🏻🕊️
April 3rd, 2025 03:09
Jimmy The Bully Man
sorenbarrett said:
Standing up to a bully is more important than winning but winning helps. A good write my friend.
April 3rd, 2025 03:07
sorenbarrett said:
Standing up to a bully is more important than winning but winning helps. A good write my friend.
April 3rd, 2025 03:07
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