Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
To Be Alone
Cassie58 said:
Isnβt it strange how things can go full circle and how we can eventually wish for what we once feared. A fine poem dear Tobani.
March 2nd, 2025 17:43
Cassie58 said:
Isnβt it strange how things can go full circle and how we can eventually wish for what we once feared. A fine poem dear Tobani.
March 2nd, 2025 17:43
Fun in (Sun)Day
David Wakeling said:
So much wisdom here.Made me think.Wonderful.
March 2nd, 2025 17:40
David Wakeling said:
So much wisdom here.Made me think.Wonderful.
March 2nd, 2025 17:40
Fun in (Sun)Day
Cassie58 said:
Dear Tobani, I am very much a fan of your wise man says pieces. Combined wisdom and humour. A fine combination for sure.
March 2nd, 2025 17:35
Cassie58 said:
Dear Tobani, I am very much a fan of your wise man says pieces. Combined wisdom and humour. A fine combination for sure.
March 2nd, 2025 17:35
Fun in (Sun)Day
Cheeky Missy said:
Hahaha! There\'s nothing like common sense which herein is rendered to effect with a twinkle of good humor to soften the reality until the imagery daintily trimming it seems like powdered sugar as the poignant facts hang, suspended. Thank you for sharing.
March 2nd, 2025 11:59
Cheeky Missy said:
Hahaha! There\'s nothing like common sense which herein is rendered to effect with a twinkle of good humor to soften the reality until the imagery daintily trimming it seems like powdered sugar as the poignant facts hang, suspended. Thank you for sharing.
March 2nd, 2025 11:59
Fun in (Sun)Day
Neville said:
Wise words indeed .. and now pinned forever upon a most appreciative page .. Neville
March 2nd, 2025 11:40
Neville said:
Wise words indeed .. and now pinned forever upon a most appreciative page .. Neville
March 2nd, 2025 11:40
Fun in (Sun)Day
MDStone said:
Tobani,
Wise words indeed. Thank you for sharing. Enjoyed the read very much.
March 2nd, 2025 07:59
MDStone said:
Tobani,
Wise words indeed. Thank you for sharing. Enjoyed the read very much.
March 2nd, 2025 07:59
Fun in (Sun)Day
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That last one. TRUTH! Well, they all are! Another wonderful series of proverbs from Wise Man. Always looking forward to more. πΉπ
March 2nd, 2025 07:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That last one. TRUTH! Well, they all are! Another wonderful series of proverbs from Wise Man. Always looking forward to more. πΉπ
March 2nd, 2025 07:18
Fun in (Sun)Day
sorenbarrett said:
Tobani these are actually all good advice. Another fun read on a Sunday. Loved then all
March 2nd, 2025 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
Tobani these are actually all good advice. Another fun read on a Sunday. Loved then all
March 2nd, 2025 04:34
Fun in (Sun)Day
cellinic said:
This poem triggers a long train of thoughts. best wishes
March 2nd, 2025 04:02
cellinic said:
This poem triggers a long train of thoughts. best wishes
March 2nd, 2025 04:02
Fun in (Sun)Day
arqios said:
Definitely will come to a volume wherein a book is compiled ππ»ποΈ
March 2nd, 2025 02:27
arqios said:
Definitely will come to a volume wherein a book is compiled ππ»ποΈ
March 2nd, 2025 02:27
Adventures of Mary and Harry (2)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This was a lot of fun, Tobani. I good follow up to your last go \'round with Mary and Harry. It felt a bit like the shell game, trying to figure out under whose shell Mary might appear! LOL! Well done, my friend! πππΉ
March 1st, 2025 08:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This was a lot of fun, Tobani. I good follow up to your last go \'round with Mary and Harry. It felt a bit like the shell game, trying to figure out under whose shell Mary might appear! LOL! Well done, my friend! πππΉ
March 1st, 2025 08:24
Adventures of Mary and Harry (2)
arqios said:
Now thatβs the stuff of popular daytime drama π ππ»π
March 1st, 2025 06:42
arqios said:
Now thatβs the stuff of popular daytime drama π ππ»π
March 1st, 2025 06:42
Adventures of Mary and Harry (2)
sorenbarrett said:
Words are like people they can be a lot of fun but difficult to work with. These brought a smile to the face and I thank you for that.
March 1st, 2025 05:31
sorenbarrett said:
Words are like people they can be a lot of fun but difficult to work with. These brought a smile to the face and I thank you for that.
March 1st, 2025 05:31
Adventures of Mary and Harry (2)
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun writes Tobani.
Andy
March 1st, 2025 02:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun writes Tobani.
Andy
March 1st, 2025 02:53
To Be Alone
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a powerful poem Tobani, I hope all is well now.
Andy
March 1st, 2025 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a powerful poem Tobani, I hope all is well now.
Andy
March 1st, 2025 02:44
The Same Picture Frame
NafisaSB said:
a calm and soothing verse that makes me wish i could enjoy such days too
well written
February 28th, 2025 23:55
NafisaSB said:
a calm and soothing verse that makes me wish i could enjoy such days too
well written
February 28th, 2025 23:55
To Be Alone
Cheeky Missy said:
The wry smile whose sad eyes reflect from this ironic twist in concluding doesn\'t fail to garner affection since this tale cannot but resonate with many. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a delightful twist of humor with a haunting, damning poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing, dear Sir. I love it.
February 28th, 2025 12:06
Cheeky Missy said:
The wry smile whose sad eyes reflect from this ironic twist in concluding doesn\'t fail to garner affection since this tale cannot but resonate with many. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a delightful twist of humor with a haunting, damning poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing, dear Sir. I love it.
February 28th, 2025 12:06
To Be Alone
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love it. The truth of what we wish for and what we ultimately come to long for. That said, perhaps we want that in our older age because it is all we\'ve been accustomed to and, at that point, why bother? Not sure there is an answer as to why, but this poem rings really, really true to me. Well done, my friend! πΉπ
February 28th, 2025 07:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love it. The truth of what we wish for and what we ultimately come to long for. That said, perhaps we want that in our older age because it is all we\'ve been accustomed to and, at that point, why bother? Not sure there is an answer as to why, but this poem rings really, really true to me. Well done, my friend! πΉπ
February 28th, 2025 07:21
To Be Alone
Mutley Ravishes said:
I recall a story where the teller recalls a book case seeming to come alive after a session of meditation. That reminded me of a teacher telling me once that \"we\'re never really alone,\" with a twinkle in his eye.
Great write.
February 28th, 2025 06:59
Mutley Ravishes said:
I recall a story where the teller recalls a book case seeming to come alive after a session of meditation. That reminded me of a teacher telling me once that \"we\'re never really alone,\" with a twinkle in his eye.
Great write.
February 28th, 2025 06:59
To Be Alone
sorenbarrett said:
With so much struggle to be with others we all find in the end that we are all, everyone of us alone. No one can creep inside this shell or lay with our naked thoughts and be as one with us. We are ultimately alone. And that is okay. A wonderful write on the evolution of being alone.
February 28th, 2025 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
With so much struggle to be with others we all find in the end that we are all, everyone of us alone. No one can creep inside this shell or lay with our naked thoughts and be as one with us. We are ultimately alone. And that is okay. A wonderful write on the evolution of being alone.
February 28th, 2025 04:28
If i Were Made Off Glass
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words would always be seen within you Tobani.
Andy
February 28th, 2025 02:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words would always be seen within you Tobani.
Andy
February 28th, 2025 02:46
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