Comments received on poems by Friendship
Rest ,sweet child.
Paul Bell said:
This is a sad one.
Always devastating when its children.
Happened to a friend of mine, his lad fell off a roof.
You never forget them.
Sorry for your neighbour too.
August 21st, 2026 11:49
Paul Bell said:
This is a sad one.
Always devastating when its children.
Happened to a friend of mine, his lad fell off a roof.
You never forget them.
Sorry for your neighbour too.
August 21st, 2026 11:49
Rest ,sweet child.
soheil khodaparasti said:
A deeply moving elegy, blending grief, tenderness, and the supernatural.
August 21st, 2026 11:42
soheil khodaparasti said:
A deeply moving elegy, blending grief, tenderness, and the supernatural.
August 21st, 2026 11:42
Rest ,sweet child.
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem and even sadder author\'s note. Very nicely written in good rhyme and meter it has good flow and the story is most engaging Well done Friendship
August 21st, 2026 10:34
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem and even sadder author\'s note. Very nicely written in good rhyme and meter it has good flow and the story is most engaging Well done Friendship
August 21st, 2026 10:34
The secrets that consume your mind, that never go away.
Kevin Hulme said:
Can\'t tell you how much I enjoyed this.
The lines about Mother is so Touching. Heartfelt. A fave.
August 9th, 2026 14:50
Kevin Hulme said:
Can\'t tell you how much I enjoyed this.
The lines about Mother is so Touching. Heartfelt. A fave.
August 9th, 2026 14:50
Has her therapy gone wrong?
NafisaSB said:
So heart rending and relatable. Beautifully expressed 👌💅
August 9th, 2026 10:42
NafisaSB said:
So heart rending and relatable. Beautifully expressed 👌💅
August 9th, 2026 10:42
The secrets that consume your mind, that never go away.
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work.
August 9th, 2026 07:49
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work.
August 9th, 2026 07:49
The secrets that consume your mind, that never go away.
turningpoint said:
very heartfelt sad could happen
August 7th, 2026 16:37
turningpoint said:
very heartfelt sad could happen
August 7th, 2026 16:37
The secrets that consume your mind, that never go away.
2781 said:
: be ye transformed by the renewing of your mind, that ye may prove what is that good, and acceptable, and perfect, will of God.
August 6th, 2026 02:37
2781 said:
: be ye transformed by the renewing of your mind, that ye may prove what is that good, and acceptable, and perfect, will of God.
August 6th, 2026 02:37
The secrets that consume your mind, that never go away.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this hit me hard…there’s a heartbreaking honesty here that never lets up. What stays with me most is the tragedy of believing we have to carry our deepest wounds alone until the silence becomes its own prison. Powerful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 5th, 2026 20:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this hit me hard…there’s a heartbreaking honesty here that never lets up. What stays with me most is the tragedy of believing we have to carry our deepest wounds alone until the silence becomes its own prison. Powerful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 5th, 2026 20:16
The secrets that consume your mind, that never go away.
Neville said:
Secrets are like the spice box of earth .. a compelling read throughout Friendship .. p.s. the image you used to head the page on which your offering sits is the spit image of a guy I regularly see at the gym .. head tats n all .. Neville
August 5th, 2026 02:10
Neville said:
Secrets are like the spice box of earth .. a compelling read throughout Friendship .. p.s. the image you used to head the page on which your offering sits is the spit image of a guy I regularly see at the gym .. head tats n all .. Neville
August 5th, 2026 02:10
The secrets that consume your mind, that never go away.
MendedFences27 said:
Beautiful poetry. Secrets of the mind that we carry with us through life, along the hard road of destiny. We look back and recall all of the sadness and joy. Loved your poem.- Phil A.
August 4th, 2026 22:28
MendedFences27 said:
Beautiful poetry. Secrets of the mind that we carry with us through life, along the hard road of destiny. We look back and recall all of the sadness and joy. Loved your poem.- Phil A.
August 4th, 2026 22:28
The secrets that consume your mind, that never go away.
peto said:
Your pen is like a wand friendship
This is magical
Particularly enjoyed 2nd verse
An outstanding talent
August 4th, 2026 11:52
peto said:
Your pen is like a wand friendship
This is magical
Particularly enjoyed 2nd verse
An outstanding talent
August 4th, 2026 11:52
The secrets that consume your mind, that never go away.
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and tragic isolation in this poem bring darkness and resignation. Very well written and most compelling.
August 4th, 2026 09:31
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and tragic isolation in this poem bring darkness and resignation. Very well written and most compelling.
August 4th, 2026 09:31
God, can you hear me?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, what a heartfelt prayer. The vulnerability throughout is matched by a quiet trust that keeps reaching toward God, even in the darkest moments. That combination of honesty and hope is something I deeply appreciate and relate to. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 3rd, 2026 16:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, what a heartfelt prayer. The vulnerability throughout is matched by a quiet trust that keeps reaching toward God, even in the darkest moments. That combination of honesty and hope is something I deeply appreciate and relate to. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 3rd, 2026 16:57
God, can you hear me?
soheil khodaparasti said:
This moving, sincere, and relatable poem reminds us that even in life\'s darkest moments, faith can provide strength, comfort, and hope.
August 3rd, 2026 02:52
soheil khodaparasti said:
This moving, sincere, and relatable poem reminds us that even in life\'s darkest moments, faith can provide strength, comfort, and hope.
August 3rd, 2026 02:52
God, can you hear me?
arqios said:
from the very heart prayers are heard and answered 🙏🕊️
August 3rd, 2026 01:04
arqios said:
from the very heart prayers are heard and answered 🙏🕊️
August 3rd, 2026 01:04
God, can you hear me?
peto said:
I\'m pretty sure he can hear us and answers
Sometimes that answer is no
Love the rhyme and flow as always
August 2nd, 2026 18:51
peto said:
I\'m pretty sure he can hear us and answers
Sometimes that answer is no
Love the rhyme and flow as always
August 2nd, 2026 18:51
Oh God ,I tried.
maydanae said:
I adore the rhythm and style of your second stanza! I know it is so hard to say when you need help but the awareness is inspiring and beautifully written, very good read!
August 2nd, 2026 18:21
maydanae said:
I adore the rhythm and style of your second stanza! I know it is so hard to say when you need help but the awareness is inspiring and beautifully written, very good read!
August 2nd, 2026 18:21
Fly
maydanae said:
Friendship, I absolutely love the whimsy combined with elegance in this piece despite the reference being perfectly ordinary ! Wonderful job I am loving your work !
August 2nd, 2026 18:12
maydanae said:
Friendship, I absolutely love the whimsy combined with elegance in this piece despite the reference being perfectly ordinary ! Wonderful job I am loving your work !
August 2nd, 2026 18:12
Has her therapy gone wrong?
maydanae said:
I\'m sorry this happened to you. No one deserves that! As someone who also relates a lot to these words: just remember that it gets a lot better the more you meet people who actually want what\'s best for you. Remember your worth!
August 2nd, 2026 17:54
maydanae said:
I\'m sorry this happened to you. No one deserves that! As someone who also relates a lot to these words: just remember that it gets a lot better the more you meet people who actually want what\'s best for you. Remember your worth!
August 2nd, 2026 17:54
God, can you hear me?
maydanae said:
You got this! Sometimes it gets hard but there will always be support along the way, just keep pushing.
August 2nd, 2026 17:44
maydanae said:
You got this! Sometimes it gets hard but there will always be support along the way, just keep pushing.
August 2nd, 2026 17:44
God, can you hear me?
sorenbarrett said:
There is a heart rending plea for help in this poem. It calls out of the darkness for aid. Well written with wonderful rhyme and great meter. Well done Friendship
August 2nd, 2026 17:39
sorenbarrett said:
There is a heart rending plea for help in this poem. It calls out of the darkness for aid. Well written with wonderful rhyme and great meter. Well done Friendship
August 2nd, 2026 17:39
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