Comments received on poems by Friendship
As an Artist.
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely! He who creates is a god. To make something out of scattered pieces reverses entropy and sets time backwards. A wonderful write my friend
December 20th, 2025 07:01
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely! He who creates is a god. To make something out of scattered pieces reverses entropy and sets time backwards. A wonderful write my friend
December 20th, 2025 07:01
Oh, pistachio shells,
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this reads as both art-statement and quiet philosophy. The pistachio shells become a metaphor for people, histories, and moments deemed finished, yet still full of potential. Your pairing of poem and image makes that transformation tangible. As for you being an artist, I knew that from the moment I laid my eyes and heart on your poetry. And wow on those pistachio shells! Rock on all around! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 19th, 2025 09:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this reads as both art-statement and quiet philosophy. The pistachio shells become a metaphor for people, histories, and moments deemed finished, yet still full of potential. Your pairing of poem and image makes that transformation tangible. As for you being an artist, I knew that from the moment I laid my eyes and heart on your poetry. And wow on those pistachio shells! Rock on all around! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 19th, 2025 09:45
Oh, pistachio shells,
Jerry Reynolds said:
A good write, Friendship. Good work on the shells—great group of characters. There may be a children\'s book here.
December 19th, 2025 09:14
Jerry Reynolds said:
A good write, Friendship. Good work on the shells—great group of characters. There may be a children\'s book here.
December 19th, 2025 09:14
Oh, pistachio shells,
sorenbarrett said:
The items creative and inventive while the poem in detail and wonderful imagery portrays the construction of wonder from the discarded. Nicely written in rhyme and good meter it flows to the end and makes the metaphor that can be extrapolated to humans as well. Nicely done my friend
December 19th, 2025 07:59
sorenbarrett said:
The items creative and inventive while the poem in detail and wonderful imagery portrays the construction of wonder from the discarded. Nicely written in rhyme and good meter it flows to the end and makes the metaphor that can be extrapolated to humans as well. Nicely done my friend
December 19th, 2025 07:59
Oh, pistachio shells,
Katie B. said:
Very creative and clever piece. Enjoyable read, upbeat and fun!
December 19th, 2025 07:19
Katie B. said:
Very creative and clever piece. Enjoyable read, upbeat and fun!
December 19th, 2025 07:19
Orgasm
Mutley Ravishes said:
The power drain
Life force on the wane
The ancient sages
Knew the game
Who eats the fluids?
Ask a druid
Two sticks rubbing together
Can make some heat
But if their energy
Supply is deple-
-ted
How can they make fire\'s
Light?
Lovers in bygone nights
Knew volcanic eruptions
Lead to destructions
December 18th, 2025 19:20
Mutley Ravishes said:
The power drain
Life force on the wane
The ancient sages
Knew the game
Who eats the fluids?
Ask a druid
Two sticks rubbing together
Can make some heat
But if their energy
Supply is deple-
-ted
How can they make fire\'s
Light?
Lovers in bygone nights
Knew volcanic eruptions
Lead to destructions
December 18th, 2025 19:20
Orgasm
Paul Bell said:
An orgasm a day keeps the doctor away.
In saying that, it can also rush you down to the doctors as well.
But long may it continue, it keeps you young keeps you going.
December 18th, 2025 08:29
Paul Bell said:
An orgasm a day keeps the doctor away.
In saying that, it can also rush you down to the doctors as well.
But long may it continue, it keeps you young keeps you going.
December 18th, 2025 08:29
Orgasm
sorenbarrett said:
A universal explosion of energy unveiled and with it life and growth. Well imaged and nicely worded it unfurls its meaning to those that see. Most lovely
December 18th, 2025 07:46
sorenbarrett said:
A universal explosion of energy unveiled and with it life and growth. Well imaged and nicely worded it unfurls its meaning to those that see. Most lovely
December 18th, 2025 07:46
A Life of Resilience\"
Paul Bell said:
Some will resign to their impairment, others will see it as a challenge that needs to be beaten, and I think at the moment one of those people is trekking the snow heading to the South Pole. The only time I got annoyed with a wheelchair user was during a marathon when he told me he needed past me to beat his time. lol
December 17th, 2025 07:48
Paul Bell said:
Some will resign to their impairment, others will see it as a challenge that needs to be beaten, and I think at the moment one of those people is trekking the snow heading to the South Pole. The only time I got annoyed with a wheelchair user was during a marathon when he told me he needed past me to beat his time. lol
December 17th, 2025 07:48
A Life of Resilience\"
sorenbarrett said:
The human will knows no limits and desire may often overcome deficits. Nicely written
December 17th, 2025 03:29
sorenbarrett said:
The human will knows no limits and desire may often overcome deficits. Nicely written
December 17th, 2025 03:29
Oh Internet, How You Let Me Down!
Megan Blaney said:
Too many ads on the internet now... but there are still sites like these!
December 16th, 2025 19:31
Megan Blaney said:
Too many ads on the internet now... but there are still sites like these!
December 16th, 2025 19:31
Hanukkah to Me of the stories l was told
Megan Blaney said:
Happy Hanukkah! What a lovely poem filled with warmth and cheer for the holiday 😊 💖
December 16th, 2025 19:30
Megan Blaney said:
Happy Hanukkah! What a lovely poem filled with warmth and cheer for the holiday 😊 💖
December 16th, 2025 19:30
Hanukkah to Me of the stories l was told
Paul Bell said:
Poem of hope after the events in Australia, though I\'m not sure if you wrote it before that.
Special occasion, and we can\'t get enough of them.
December 15th, 2025 11:24
Paul Bell said:
Poem of hope after the events in Australia, though I\'m not sure if you wrote it before that.
Special occasion, and we can\'t get enough of them.
December 15th, 2025 11:24
Hanukkah to Me of the stories l was told
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is deeply moving…the family memory, the stubborn flame, the insistence that miracles continue through how we love and act. You honored tradition while speaking directly into the present. Beautiful work, Friendship. Happy Hanukkah. 🕎✡️ 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 14th, 2025 09:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is deeply moving…the family memory, the stubborn flame, the insistence that miracles continue through how we love and act. You honored tradition while speaking directly into the present. Beautiful work, Friendship. Happy Hanukkah. 🕎✡️ 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 14th, 2025 09:14
Hanukkah to Me of the stories l was told
sorenbarrett said:
A seasonal poem of light, history and the present in hope and cheer for a new year. So well written and with a sense of warmth. Nicely written
December 14th, 2025 06:26
sorenbarrett said:
A seasonal poem of light, history and the present in hope and cheer for a new year. So well written and with a sense of warmth. Nicely written
December 14th, 2025 06:26
\"Woven of Earth and Heart\"
Paul Bell said:
The creation of life as we see it.
No mean feat, as every step meticulous as the last.
The hard bit for the creator or the artist is letting go, but let go they must.
December 14th, 2025 04:36
Paul Bell said:
The creation of life as we see it.
No mean feat, as every step meticulous as the last.
The hard bit for the creator or the artist is letting go, but let go they must.
December 14th, 2025 04:36
Oh Internet, How You Let Me Down!
Thomas W Case said:
Very relatable. Great work.
December 13th, 2025 18:19
Thomas W Case said:
Very relatable. Great work.
December 13th, 2025 18:19
Oh Internet, How You Let Me Down!
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh don\'t be like that - this medium has allowed improvement from a very bad start.
December 12th, 2025 17:36
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh don\'t be like that - this medium has allowed improvement from a very bad start.
December 12th, 2025 17:36
Oh Internet, How You Let Me Down!
arqios said:
A lament of our present day. There be suicides because of internet interaction. And now you reveal another aspect of bein in each other’s knickers. It’s like a one night stand and strangers in the night, ships that don’t even signal each other. 8 billion possible connection but lucky for even one. How truly sad. 🕊🙏🏻🌷
December 12th, 2025 16:57
arqios said:
A lament of our present day. There be suicides because of internet interaction. And now you reveal another aspect of bein in each other’s knickers. It’s like a one night stand and strangers in the night, ships that don’t even signal each other. 8 billion possible connection but lucky for even one. How truly sad. 🕊🙏🏻🌷
December 12th, 2025 16:57
Oh Internet, How You Let Me Down!
NinjaGirl said:
There is promise of so much greatness on the internet! But it stands on the suffering of others, and coy deception of its users. Well written my friend!
December 12th, 2025 14:05
NinjaGirl said:
There is promise of so much greatness on the internet! But it stands on the suffering of others, and coy deception of its users. Well written my friend!
December 12th, 2025 14:05
Oh Internet, How You Let Me Down!
Demar Desu said:
I said the Oh! Part in a Italian voice
December 12th, 2025 12:34
Demar Desu said:
I said the Oh! Part in a Italian voice
December 12th, 2025 12:34
Oh Internet, How You Let Me Down!
Paul Bell said:
Ah, the faithful friend, the computer, I let you into my life, gave you my time, and how did you reward me.
Well, the world isn\'t mine for a start, that was supposed to be the easy task.
As for Attila the Hun, I mean, what the hell.
December 12th, 2025 12:26
Paul Bell said:
Ah, the faithful friend, the computer, I let you into my life, gave you my time, and how did you reward me.
Well, the world isn\'t mine for a start, that was supposed to be the easy task.
As for Attila the Hun, I mean, what the hell.
December 12th, 2025 12:26
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