Comments received on poems by Friendship
The encouragement from true friend.
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful message set in good poetic rhyme and verse nicely said and a fave
September 14th, 2025 13:09
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful message set in good poetic rhyme and verse nicely said and a fave
September 14th, 2025 13:09
Remembrance of Iryna Zarutska, who lost her life on the way home from work.
sorenbarrett said:
A man with mental illness not treated for his past violence.
Courts, agencies, police and judges turned their backs in silence
His own mother said that he was ill
But no one was listening are they listening still?
Worse than his crime were the other on the train
Not a soul tried to stop him none would restrain
And after the deed was done and she lay on the floor
All the other passengers just walked out the door.
A great tribute to a sad case but unfortunately it is not the first or last in a society too numb to notice, to afraid to stand up and to isolated from each other to care. Well written my friend
September 13th, 2025 14:34
sorenbarrett said:
A man with mental illness not treated for his past violence.
Courts, agencies, police and judges turned their backs in silence
His own mother said that he was ill
But no one was listening are they listening still?
Worse than his crime were the other on the train
Not a soul tried to stop him none would restrain
And after the deed was done and she lay on the floor
All the other passengers just walked out the door.
A great tribute to a sad case but unfortunately it is not the first or last in a society too numb to notice, to afraid to stand up and to isolated from each other to care. Well written my friend
September 13th, 2025 14:34
To Charlie Kirk\'s shooter.
TommyDingo said:
Brilliant work thanks for sharing!
September 12th, 2025 15:16
TommyDingo said:
Brilliant work thanks for sharing!
September 12th, 2025 15:16
To Charlie Kirk\'s shooter.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
While I don’t share Charlie’s politics, I connect with the heart here: violence can never be the answer. It doesn’t end division...it deepens it. I does not heal victims, just creates countless of them. Your poem names that with clarity. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Thank you for sharing, my friend!
September 12th, 2025 14:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
While I don’t share Charlie’s politics, I connect with the heart here: violence can never be the answer. It doesn’t end division...it deepens it. I does not heal victims, just creates countless of them. Your poem names that with clarity. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Thank you for sharing, my friend!
September 12th, 2025 14:40
To Charlie Kirk\'s shooter.
NinjaGirl said:
People should absolutely not be shot for what they believe in a country where we claim to stand for freedom of belief.
September 12th, 2025 12:52
NinjaGirl said:
People should absolutely not be shot for what they believe in a country where we claim to stand for freedom of belief.
September 12th, 2025 12:52
To Charlie Kirk\'s shooter.
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful tribute to one now gone but not in memory. A mistake made by the killer, a martyr is far stronger after death than ever in life. Very nicely written with great rhyme and with a powerful and poignant message. Most lovely my friend
September 12th, 2025 12:31
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful tribute to one now gone but not in memory. A mistake made by the killer, a martyr is far stronger after death than ever in life. Very nicely written with great rhyme and with a powerful and poignant message. Most lovely my friend
September 12th, 2025 12:31
To Charlie Kirk\'s shooter.
Syd said:
Although I didn\'t like Charlie Kirks political stance at all, this is a very good poem with a clear message.
Violence doesn’t belong in politics at all. People need to talk to each other more.
- Syd
September 12th, 2025 12:15
Syd said:
Although I didn\'t like Charlie Kirks political stance at all, this is a very good poem with a clear message.
Violence doesn’t belong in politics at all. People need to talk to each other more.
- Syd
September 12th, 2025 12:15
When the Empath Stops Pleasing Everyone.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is fierce and freeing…each line strikes like a hammer shattering glass, breaking illusion after illusion. That moment of closing the empath’s front door tight is vivid, and it makes the final bloom into light feel all the more powerful. A radiant step into strength reclaimed. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ You are a brilliant poet and a beautiful soul, my friend. A fave from me.
September 7th, 2025 18:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is fierce and freeing…each line strikes like a hammer shattering glass, breaking illusion after illusion. That moment of closing the empath’s front door tight is vivid, and it makes the final bloom into light feel all the more powerful. A radiant step into strength reclaimed. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ You are a brilliant poet and a beautiful soul, my friend. A fave from me.
September 7th, 2025 18:48
When the Empath Stops Pleasing Everyone.
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of using ones perceived deficits as strengths turning weakness into a tool and weapon. A lovely write my friend
September 7th, 2025 15:46
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of using ones perceived deficits as strengths turning weakness into a tool and weapon. A lovely write my friend
September 7th, 2025 15:46
My words are consistently misconstrued?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is powerful. The strength in your voice comes through clear...naming what it’s like to be misread and pushed against when you already know your own truth. I relate deeply; I know that terrain all too well. Thank you for writing and sharing this with us...many will find strength in themselves from it. Anywho, dear poet, I am glad to be on here with you and to call you a friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2025 10:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is powerful. The strength in your voice comes through clear...naming what it’s like to be misread and pushed against when you already know your own truth. I relate deeply; I know that terrain all too well. Thank you for writing and sharing this with us...many will find strength in themselves from it. Anywho, dear poet, I am glad to be on here with you and to call you a friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2025 10:09
My words are consistently misconstrued?
sorenbarrett said:
Words so nicely penned and easily understood. Friendship is not the problem but merely getting along. A wonderful poem of misunderstanding that seems easily overcome in conversation. Nicely done Friendship
September 5th, 2025 08:08
sorenbarrett said:
Words so nicely penned and easily understood. Friendship is not the problem but merely getting along. A wonderful poem of misunderstanding that seems easily overcome in conversation. Nicely done Friendship
September 5th, 2025 08:08
A Father\'s Lesson on Trust
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is heartfelt. A father’s wisdom passed down with love and caution feels steady and true. That line...“each broken word, a heavy stone”...I could fee its weight, showing how betrayal lingers heavy. Beautifully done…a lantern lit for the road ahead. 🌹💜🙏🐦⬛
September 4th, 2025 17:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is heartfelt. A father’s wisdom passed down with love and caution feels steady and true. That line...“each broken word, a heavy stone”...I could fee its weight, showing how betrayal lingers heavy. Beautifully done…a lantern lit for the road ahead. 🌹💜🙏🐦⬛
September 4th, 2025 17:12
my world.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is haunting. The loneliness breathes through every line, and that image...“alone, carved deep within my head”...cut especially deep. Beautifully written…stark, true, and lingering. A fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 4th, 2025 16:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is haunting. The loneliness breathes through every line, and that image...“alone, carved deep within my head”...cut especially deep. Beautifully written…stark, true, and lingering. A fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 4th, 2025 16:28
A Father\'s Lesson on Trust
sorenbarrett said:
A truly wonderful message set in splendid rhyme that carries the story forward. Loved the pacing of the words and the flow. Very nicely done self reliance and trust is the most secure.
September 4th, 2025 07:57
sorenbarrett said:
A truly wonderful message set in splendid rhyme that carries the story forward. Loved the pacing of the words and the flow. Very nicely done self reliance and trust is the most secure.
September 4th, 2025 07:57
A Father\'s Lesson on Trust
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, friendship. Good Dad.
September 4th, 2025 07:40
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, friendship. Good Dad.
September 4th, 2025 07:40
my world.
sorenbarrett said:
To feel alien in one\'s own world. Like a puzzle piece without the rest of the puzzle. this poem speaks of fear and alienation in a dark world. There seems little hope and a feeling of directionlessness. Nicely worded it in a most poetic manner looks for answers that are not available leaving a feeling of loneliness and confusion. Well done
September 3rd, 2025 19:55
sorenbarrett said:
To feel alien in one\'s own world. Like a puzzle piece without the rest of the puzzle. this poem speaks of fear and alienation in a dark world. There seems little hope and a feeling of directionlessness. Nicely worded it in a most poetic manner looks for answers that are not available leaving a feeling of loneliness and confusion. Well done
September 3rd, 2025 19:55
At harmony with the rain.
NafisaSB said:
such a soft and gentle verse - truly inspired - it\'s raining here too, but very heavily, and we tend to seek shelter, rather than enjoy the downpour, since lots of epidemics start at this time...
September 2nd, 2025 01:44
NafisaSB said:
such a soft and gentle verse - truly inspired - it\'s raining here too, but very heavily, and we tend to seek shelter, rather than enjoy the downpour, since lots of epidemics start at this time...
September 2nd, 2025 01:44
Words of destiny.
arqios said:
The poem \"Remember\" reflects on a once-deep friendship forged through shared creativity, where silent understanding and acceptance flourished as two friends shaped clay and stories together. Time’s passage has replaced that warmth with distance, leaving the speaker feeling unseen and unaccepted for who they’ve become. Holding onto the vivid, bittersweet memory of those golden moments, they now walk a solitary path, carrying both the beauty of what was and the ache of what’s been lost.
August 29th, 2025 19:20
arqios said:
The poem \"Remember\" reflects on a once-deep friendship forged through shared creativity, where silent understanding and acceptance flourished as two friends shaped clay and stories together. Time’s passage has replaced that warmth with distance, leaving the speaker feeling unseen and unaccepted for who they’ve become. Holding onto the vivid, bittersweet memory of those golden moments, they now walk a solitary path, carrying both the beauty of what was and the ache of what’s been lost.
August 29th, 2025 19:20
Soon to be Home.
Keeter C said:
Beautiful but we won’t rest for he has a job for us. He never gets tired and never stops working and we won’t as well.
August 28th, 2025 17:05
Keeter C said:
Beautiful but we won’t rest for he has a job for us. He never gets tired and never stops working and we won’t as well.
August 28th, 2025 17:05
Words of destiny.
Salvia.S said:
Beautifully written —it is gentle, reflective, and full of meaning. It speaks to the idea that every encounter in life has a purpose, and it does so with grace and warmth. Lovely work. A fave ❤️
August 27th, 2025 20:58
Salvia.S said:
Beautifully written —it is gentle, reflective, and full of meaning. It speaks to the idea that every encounter in life has a purpose, and it does so with grace and warmth. Lovely work. A fave ❤️
August 27th, 2025 20:58
Words of destiny.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is luminous, my friend. Every stanza glows with purpose and interconnectedness…the sense that nothing is wasted, no encounter meaningless. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 27th, 2025 14:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is luminous, my friend. Every stanza glows with purpose and interconnectedness…the sense that nothing is wasted, no encounter meaningless. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 27th, 2025 14:12
Words of destiny.
Cheeky Missy said:
Yes, forsooth. That\'s what I\'ve cherished about the varied individuals I\'ve known through the years and circumstances in which we\'ve engaged, each giving my perspective a wealth or otherwise would have lacked enhancing my little sphere. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a delightfully haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 27th, 2025 13:31
Cheeky Missy said:
Yes, forsooth. That\'s what I\'ve cherished about the varied individuals I\'ve known through the years and circumstances in which we\'ve engaged, each giving my perspective a wealth or otherwise would have lacked enhancing my little sphere. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a delightfully haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 27th, 2025 13:31
At harmony with the rain.
Cheeky Missy said:
Funny, with this beauty you recalled my joy years ago when I occasionally could be in the rain, caught accidentally. There\'s a charming beauty in this piece, though, the alteration in perspective from youth to age offering wisdom. Very lovely, excellently rendered with perfect imagery and a winsome poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 27th, 2025 13:28
Cheeky Missy said:
Funny, with this beauty you recalled my joy years ago when I occasionally could be in the rain, caught accidentally. There\'s a charming beauty in this piece, though, the alteration in perspective from youth to age offering wisdom. Very lovely, excellently rendered with perfect imagery and a winsome poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 27th, 2025 13:28
Words of destiny.
sorenbarrett said:
For those that believe in destiny this poem speaks, telling of how everyone you encounter has a purpose and shapes you in your journey. Very nicely crafted with rhyme this poem speaks of being transformed. Well done my friend
August 27th, 2025 09:08
sorenbarrett said:
For those that believe in destiny this poem speaks, telling of how everyone you encounter has a purpose and shapes you in your journey. Very nicely crafted with rhyme this poem speaks of being transformed. Well done my friend
August 27th, 2025 09:08
At harmony with the rain.
Cassie58 said:
I am reminded of the hymn “All things bright and beautiful”. We need the soft refreshing rain for growth. It is indeed a blessing. A lovely poem Friendship. Have a beautiful day.
August 27th, 2025 05:50
Cassie58 said:
I am reminded of the hymn “All things bright and beautiful”. We need the soft refreshing rain for growth. It is indeed a blessing. A lovely poem Friendship. Have a beautiful day.
August 27th, 2025 05:50
At harmony with the rain.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this felt like being right there...eyes closed, rain soaking, peace in the simple act of being. A quiet joy runs through this piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 26th, 2025 08:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this felt like being right there...eyes closed, rain soaking, peace in the simple act of being. A quiet joy runs through this piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 26th, 2025 08:23
At harmony with the rain.
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of seeing what was seen as adversity as necessary for life and growth. The past rush to get in out of the rain now a recognition and excitement to experience its growing power. A positive view that more people need to feel. Wonderfully written in good meter and rhyme it puts a new face on the world and life a fave
August 26th, 2025 08:04
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of seeing what was seen as adversity as necessary for life and growth. The past rush to get in out of the rain now a recognition and excitement to experience its growing power. A positive view that more people need to feel. Wonderfully written in good meter and rhyme it puts a new face on the world and life a fave
August 26th, 2025 08:04
The Crying Tree
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this felt like standing beneath that tree myself…where sorrow and love meet, and memory becomes a kind of shelter. A powerful and moving piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 25th, 2025 07:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this felt like standing beneath that tree myself…where sorrow and love meet, and memory becomes a kind of shelter. A powerful and moving piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 25th, 2025 07:31
The Crying Tree
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that dedicates meaning to pleasant past memories and a sense of friendship. There is a feeling of loneliness and sense of a need for someone to lean on feeling lost and disoriented. There is a need for a guide. Memories may be the guide and strength to hold onto. Well written
August 24th, 2025 20:43
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that dedicates meaning to pleasant past memories and a sense of friendship. There is a feeling of loneliness and sense of a need for someone to lean on feeling lost and disoriented. There is a need for a guide. Memories may be the guide and strength to hold onto. Well written
August 24th, 2025 20:43
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