Comments received on poems by Friendship
We need to Stop the verbal abuse!
NafisaSB said:
I hear you loud and clear, and am in complete agreement
you couldn\'t have made it plainer, and so well...
September 23rd, 2025 00:09
NafisaSB said:
I hear you loud and clear, and am in complete agreement
you couldn\'t have made it plainer, and so well...
September 23rd, 2025 00:09
Yard work.
Dan Williams said:
Ah, twenty years ago this could be any number of three season days for me. Now my body demands of me \"go inside, sit down, pretend you got a lot done\". Oh well. Thanks for this.
September 22nd, 2025 23:22
Dan Williams said:
Ah, twenty years ago this could be any number of three season days for me. Now my body demands of me \"go inside, sit down, pretend you got a lot done\". Oh well. Thanks for this.
September 22nd, 2025 23:22
What would it be no siblings to talk too!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is raw and lived...it is honest. That image of “absent love, an empty space” won’t leave me; it distills estrangement into one unforgettable wound. And in your telling, I hear shadows of my own losses, the kind that never fully heal. A powerful and resonant piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 22nd, 2025 20:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is raw and lived...it is honest. That image of “absent love, an empty space” won’t leave me; it distills estrangement into one unforgettable wound. And in your telling, I hear shadows of my own losses, the kind that never fully heal. A powerful and resonant piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 22nd, 2025 20:53
What would it be no siblings to talk too!
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of sad remorse and regret over loss and present isolation. This poem bleeds and won\'t heal from past injury. Nicely written
September 22nd, 2025 10:30
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of sad remorse and regret over loss and present isolation. This poem bleeds and won\'t heal from past injury. Nicely written
September 22nd, 2025 10:30
Yard work.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this one is pure delight. You carry the strain straight through to its payoff, the body’s protest giving way to real pride. And paired with that totes adorbs little gardener, it just glows. 🌹🐒🪴🌻🐦⬛ Love this!
September 21st, 2025 18:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this one is pure delight. You carry the strain straight through to its payoff, the body’s protest giving way to real pride. And paired with that totes adorbs little gardener, it just glows. 🌹🐒🪴🌻🐦⬛ Love this!
September 21st, 2025 18:50
Yard work.
Bella Shepard said:
This is so beautifully rendered both rhythmically and lyrically as I read aloud, the best way to enjoy this poem. It\'s truly amazing how working in tune with natural surroundings can be so satisfying and meaningful. I did feel your joy!
September 21st, 2025 16:44
Bella Shepard said:
This is so beautifully rendered both rhythmically and lyrically as I read aloud, the best way to enjoy this poem. It\'s truly amazing how working in tune with natural surroundings can be so satisfying and meaningful. I did feel your joy!
September 21st, 2025 16:44
Yard work.
sorenbarrett said:
A well rhymed and metered poem about completing a task instead of procrastination and a feeling of contentment and joy at completion. Very nicely done.
September 21st, 2025 13:00
sorenbarrett said:
A well rhymed and metered poem about completing a task instead of procrastination and a feeling of contentment and joy at completion. Very nicely done.
September 21st, 2025 13:00
Just being happy with age.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I love how you’ve turned the aches and silver hairs into celebration. That mix of honesty and humor is exactly what makes life’s journey bearable. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Wonderful job!
September 20th, 2025 19:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I love how you’ve turned the aches and silver hairs into celebration. That mix of honesty and humor is exactly what makes life’s journey bearable. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Wonderful job!
September 20th, 2025 19:26
Just being happy with age.
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful message at the end and peppered with a self laughter at aging. Nicely done
September 20th, 2025 09:09
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful message at the end and peppered with a self laughter at aging. Nicely done
September 20th, 2025 09:09
We need to Stop the verbal abuse!
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This poem speaks about verbal abuse and the personal decision to reclaim one’s own peace. Empowering & Resolute. Nicely written.
September 17th, 2025 16:12
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This poem speaks about verbal abuse and the personal decision to reclaim one’s own peace. Empowering & Resolute. Nicely written.
September 17th, 2025 16:12
We need to Stop the verbal abuse!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is strong and steady, Friendship…naming the abuse, drawing the line, and claiming your light. It reads like both warning and healing, and I admire that. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 17th, 2025 13:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is strong and steady, Friendship…naming the abuse, drawing the line, and claiming your light. It reads like both warning and healing, and I admire that. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 17th, 2025 13:24
If you had one thing to tell your inner child,
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this one cuts straight to the bone…that warning to the child self is heartbreakingly raw. The ache of guarded silence weighs heavy here. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done!
September 17th, 2025 10:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this one cuts straight to the bone…that warning to the child self is heartbreakingly raw. The ache of guarded silence weighs heavy here. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done!
September 17th, 2025 10:28
We need to Stop the verbal abuse!
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful statement made in poetic form. Intended abuse is unacceptable in any form, physical, verbal or emotional. I think that we have all been guilty of such and with recognition and apology might be forgiven. Often words said may cause unintended harm and I agree it is not for us to judge but speak up when we are offended. A lovely and most poignant write.
September 17th, 2025 09:17
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful statement made in poetic form. Intended abuse is unacceptable in any form, physical, verbal or emotional. I think that we have all been guilty of such and with recognition and apology might be forgiven. Often words said may cause unintended harm and I agree it is not for us to judge but speak up when we are offended. A lovely and most poignant write.
September 17th, 2025 09:17
If you had one thing to tell your inner child,
sorenbarrett said:
Solid advice that protects but leaves one in isolation, alone in a hostil world. Very well penned with good rhyme and meter it sends its message well.
September 16th, 2025 20:21
sorenbarrett said:
Solid advice that protects but leaves one in isolation, alone in a hostil world. Very well penned with good rhyme and meter it sends its message well.
September 16th, 2025 20:21
Childhood memories .
Neville said:
this is absolutely delightful .. in fact its a whole lot more than that .. its the kind of poem filled with all the everythings of our individual lives that we have each saved and savour from time to time .. the memories that are so special, so personal and so cherished .. bloomin lovely .. Neville
September 16th, 2025 11:41
Neville said:
this is absolutely delightful .. in fact its a whole lot more than that .. its the kind of poem filled with all the everythings of our individual lives that we have each saved and savour from time to time .. the memories that are so special, so personal and so cherished .. bloomin lovely .. Neville
September 16th, 2025 11:41
To Charlie Kirk\'s shooter.
NafisaSB said:
i completely agree with your comments, and am glad someone had the courage to stand up, and be heard
good job
September 16th, 2025 00:51
NafisaSB said:
i completely agree with your comments, and am glad someone had the courage to stand up, and be heard
good job
September 16th, 2025 00:51
Childhood memories .
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That image of “tiny boats beneath the velvet night” lingers with me…it’s tender and magical, and it makes the later emptiness all the more cutting. Gorgeous work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 15th, 2025 12:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That image of “tiny boats beneath the velvet night” lingers with me…it’s tender and magical, and it makes the later emptiness all the more cutting. Gorgeous work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 15th, 2025 12:58
The encouragement from true friend.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
You’ve captured the moment where advice becomes action…that rare, luminous point when words shift us into a new space. Reading this, I felt your resolve and joy. Keep stepping boldly, my friend, the path is yours. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 15th, 2025 12:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
You’ve captured the moment where advice becomes action…that rare, luminous point when words shift us into a new space. Reading this, I felt your resolve and joy. Keep stepping boldly, my friend, the path is yours. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 15th, 2025 12:19
Childhood memories .
Bella Shepard said:
Memories of childhood can be so powerful, yet when confronted with present reality the distance seems unbridgable. But those memories do bring us comfort while they linger. This is a beautiful, reminiscent poem, and I thank you for sharing.
September 15th, 2025 09:11
Bella Shepard said:
Memories of childhood can be so powerful, yet when confronted with present reality the distance seems unbridgable. But those memories do bring us comfort while they linger. This is a beautiful, reminiscent poem, and I thank you for sharing.
September 15th, 2025 09:11
Childhood memories .
sorenbarrett said:
So many joyous memories of a safe and secure past now just silent pictures after so many years. Nostalgic with a feeling of wistfulness and sadness in their passing. A lovely poem of fond remembrances turned to melancholy. A very nice work my friend
September 15th, 2025 08:41
sorenbarrett said:
So many joyous memories of a safe and secure past now just silent pictures after so many years. Nostalgic with a feeling of wistfulness and sadness in their passing. A lovely poem of fond remembrances turned to melancholy. A very nice work my friend
September 15th, 2025 08:41
The encouragement from true friend.
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Love the imagery of chains and light breaking through. Powerful and uplifting like watching someone step out of fear and into their true self. Nicely written.
September 14th, 2025 22:49
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Love the imagery of chains and light breaking through. Powerful and uplifting like watching someone step out of fear and into their true self. Nicely written.
September 14th, 2025 22:49
The encouragement from true friend.
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful message set in good poetic rhyme and verse nicely said and a fave
September 14th, 2025 13:09
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful message set in good poetic rhyme and verse nicely said and a fave
September 14th, 2025 13:09
Remembrance of Iryna Zarutska, who lost her life on the way home from work.
sorenbarrett said:
A man with mental illness not treated for his past violence.
Courts, agencies, police and judges turned their backs in silence
His own mother said that he was ill
But no one was listening are they listening still?
Worse than his crime were the other on the train
Not a soul tried to stop him none would restrain
And after the deed was done and she lay on the floor
All the other passengers just walked out the door.
A great tribute to a sad case but unfortunately it is not the first or last in a society too numb to notice, to afraid to stand up and to isolated from each other to care. Well written my friend
September 13th, 2025 14:34
sorenbarrett said:
A man with mental illness not treated for his past violence.
Courts, agencies, police and judges turned their backs in silence
His own mother said that he was ill
But no one was listening are they listening still?
Worse than his crime were the other on the train
Not a soul tried to stop him none would restrain
And after the deed was done and she lay on the floor
All the other passengers just walked out the door.
A great tribute to a sad case but unfortunately it is not the first or last in a society too numb to notice, to afraid to stand up and to isolated from each other to care. Well written my friend
September 13th, 2025 14:34
To Charlie Kirk\'s shooter.
TommyDingo said:
Brilliant work thanks for sharing!
September 12th, 2025 15:16
TommyDingo said:
Brilliant work thanks for sharing!
September 12th, 2025 15:16
To Charlie Kirk\'s shooter.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
While I don’t share Charlie’s politics, I connect with the heart here: violence can never be the answer. It doesn’t end division...it deepens it. I does not heal victims, just creates countless of them. Your poem names that with clarity. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Thank you for sharing, my friend!
September 12th, 2025 14:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
While I don’t share Charlie’s politics, I connect with the heart here: violence can never be the answer. It doesn’t end division...it deepens it. I does not heal victims, just creates countless of them. Your poem names that with clarity. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Thank you for sharing, my friend!
September 12th, 2025 14:40
To Charlie Kirk\'s shooter.
NinjaGirl said:
People should absolutely not be shot for what they believe in a country where we claim to stand for freedom of belief.
September 12th, 2025 12:52
NinjaGirl said:
People should absolutely not be shot for what they believe in a country where we claim to stand for freedom of belief.
September 12th, 2025 12:52
To Charlie Kirk\'s shooter.
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful tribute to one now gone but not in memory. A mistake made by the killer, a martyr is far stronger after death than ever in life. Very nicely written with great rhyme and with a powerful and poignant message. Most lovely my friend
September 12th, 2025 12:31
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful tribute to one now gone but not in memory. A mistake made by the killer, a martyr is far stronger after death than ever in life. Very nicely written with great rhyme and with a powerful and poignant message. Most lovely my friend
September 12th, 2025 12:31
To Charlie Kirk\'s shooter.
Syd said:
Although I didn\'t like Charlie Kirks political stance at all, this is a very good poem with a clear message.
Violence doesn’t belong in politics at all. People need to talk to each other more.
- Syd
September 12th, 2025 12:15
Syd said:
Although I didn\'t like Charlie Kirks political stance at all, this is a very good poem with a clear message.
Violence doesn’t belong in politics at all. People need to talk to each other more.
- Syd
September 12th, 2025 12:15
When the Empath Stops Pleasing Everyone.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is fierce and freeing…each line strikes like a hammer shattering glass, breaking illusion after illusion. That moment of closing the empath’s front door tight is vivid, and it makes the final bloom into light feel all the more powerful. A radiant step into strength reclaimed. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ You are a brilliant poet and a beautiful soul, my friend. A fave from me.
September 7th, 2025 18:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is fierce and freeing…each line strikes like a hammer shattering glass, breaking illusion after illusion. That moment of closing the empath’s front door tight is vivid, and it makes the final bloom into light feel all the more powerful. A radiant step into strength reclaimed. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ You are a brilliant poet and a beautiful soul, my friend. A fave from me.
September 7th, 2025 18:48
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