Comments received on poems by Friendship
When collaborations with a higher power fail.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, there’s a clear emotional throughline here…moving from expectation to pressure to that final reclaiming of what friendship should be. It feels grounded, direct, and honest. And that image…that eye holding both intensity and vulnerability…fits this piece perfectly, like it’s seeing and being seen at the same time. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 17th, 2026 11:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, there’s a clear emotional throughline here…moving from expectation to pressure to that final reclaiming of what friendship should be. It feels grounded, direct, and honest. And that image…that eye holding both intensity and vulnerability…fits this piece perfectly, like it’s seeing and being seen at the same time. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 17th, 2026 11:19
When collaborations with a higher power fail.
sorenbarrett said:
I hear a voice calling out for recognition of a friend that will not judge or attempt to change one in their misery but just be their and understand. Nicely written with very nice rhyme. A fave
April 17th, 2026 09:28
sorenbarrett said:
I hear a voice calling out for recognition of a friend that will not judge or attempt to change one in their misery but just be their and understand. Nicely written with very nice rhyme. A fave
April 17th, 2026 09:28
Aries is my soul.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this comes in with real fire…confident, forward-moving, and fully owning its voice. It doesn’t hesitate, and that conviction carries the whole piece. Powerful write, dearest friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 16:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this comes in with real fire…confident, forward-moving, and fully owning its voice. It doesn’t hesitate, and that conviction carries the whole piece. Powerful write, dearest friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 16:29
I offered a Rose, not a Thorn!🌹
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, I apologize for the delay…just came off finishing a composition and it wiped me out a bit. Your poem stands firm in its own voice…calm, but unshaken. There’s strength here that doesn’t need to raise its volume to be felt. It holds its ground beautifully. Powerful write, my friend. Seriously. A fave, just for the title alone, but yeah...it all rocks. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 15:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, I apologize for the delay…just came off finishing a composition and it wiped me out a bit. Your poem stands firm in its own voice…calm, but unshaken. There’s strength here that doesn’t need to raise its volume to be felt. It holds its ground beautifully. Powerful write, my friend. Seriously. A fave, just for the title alone, but yeah...it all rocks. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 15:43
Aries is my soul.
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful description of the qualities under the sign nicely done my friend
April 16th, 2026 10:21
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful description of the qualities under the sign nicely done my friend
April 16th, 2026 10:21
Hello, it\'s me, it\'s always been me.💕
Poetic Licence said:
To me this is a wonderful write and i find it very very relatable, hidden among those words are many fears and reveals, pleasure to read.
April 15th, 2026 13:31
Poetic Licence said:
To me this is a wonderful write and i find it very very relatable, hidden among those words are many fears and reveals, pleasure to read.
April 15th, 2026 13:31
I offered a Rose, not a Thorn!🌹
sorenbarrett said:
This poem to me speaks of giving in a world that only takes, of power that always wins where gentleness is not valued. It speaks of there being strength in softness and the decision to stay as one is and count one\'s strength in that resilience. Well done
April 15th, 2026 13:29
sorenbarrett said:
This poem to me speaks of giving in a world that only takes, of power that always wins where gentleness is not valued. It speaks of there being strength in softness and the decision to stay as one is and count one\'s strength in that resilience. Well done
April 15th, 2026 13:29
I offered a Rose, not a Thorn!🌹
orchidee said:
Good write Rose, erm, Friendship!
April 15th, 2026 12:21
orchidee said:
Good write Rose, erm, Friendship!
April 15th, 2026 12:21
I offered a Rose, not a Thorn!🌹
Allie561 said:
We don’t give our children rocks when they ask to be fed. How often our good actions can be viewed warily as malicious intent.
April 15th, 2026 10:21
Allie561 said:
We don’t give our children rocks when they ask to be fed. How often our good actions can be viewed warily as malicious intent.
April 15th, 2026 10:21
Hello, it\'s me, it\'s always been me.💕
Paul Bell said:
Somedays you don\'t want to be seen and it seems you can\'t hide no matter how hard you try.
Then there\'s the other days when you want the world to acknowledge you, but for some reason you\'re invisible to everyone.
April 15th, 2026 04:07
Paul Bell said:
Somedays you don\'t want to be seen and it seems you can\'t hide no matter how hard you try.
Then there\'s the other days when you want the world to acknowledge you, but for some reason you\'re invisible to everyone.
April 15th, 2026 04:07
Hello, it\'s me, it\'s always been me.💕
NinjaGirl said:
So beautiful
Even when they don\'t see, don\'t hear...scream until your truth is made known.
April 14th, 2026 22:54
NinjaGirl said:
So beautiful
Even when they don\'t see, don\'t hear...scream until your truth is made known.
April 14th, 2026 22:54
Hello, it\'s me, it\'s always been me.💕
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Nice rhyme and a great last 4 lines.
April 14th, 2026 19:30
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Nice rhyme and a great last 4 lines.
April 14th, 2026 19:30
Hello, it\'s me, it\'s always been me.💕
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the anguish of being unseen. hidden in dark and mist. How does one make oneself seen? With a different dialect to communicate a different voice. Well written I feel it
April 14th, 2026 19:25
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the anguish of being unseen. hidden in dark and mist. How does one make oneself seen? With a different dialect to communicate a different voice. Well written I feel it
April 14th, 2026 19:25
Monday
RSM0812 said:
This is hinestly one of the most amazing reads i have read. Your poetry blows my mind. Your artistic talent is immaculate and beautiful.
April 14th, 2026 12:42
RSM0812 said:
This is hinestly one of the most amazing reads i have read. Your poetry blows my mind. Your artistic talent is immaculate and beautiful.
April 14th, 2026 12:42
Monday
sorenbarrett said:
A most fun read that is upbeat and perfect for a Monday morning. The rhyme itself carries on on their way in a cheerful mood. Nicely done Friendship
April 13th, 2026 14:11
sorenbarrett said:
A most fun read that is upbeat and perfect for a Monday morning. The rhyme itself carries on on their way in a cheerful mood. Nicely done Friendship
April 13th, 2026 14:11
Monday
MendedFences27 said:
Why must everything have a beginning and an end? External forces drive us to live within the norms of society. Your poem raised these questions as I read it. Got me to think why everyone hates Mondays. Then you closed with the answer, \"spinning time.\" The clock is ticking, time to respond. These days I hardly know what day it is, but I surely know the end is coming, It\'s a beautiful sunny Spring day here, why worry about tomorrow? -Phil A.
April 13th, 2026 12:22
MendedFences27 said:
Why must everything have a beginning and an end? External forces drive us to live within the norms of society. Your poem raised these questions as I read it. Got me to think why everyone hates Mondays. Then you closed with the answer, \"spinning time.\" The clock is ticking, time to respond. These days I hardly know what day it is, but I surely know the end is coming, It\'s a beautiful sunny Spring day here, why worry about tomorrow? -Phil A.
April 13th, 2026 12:22
Monday
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship… this carries that steady transition into the week…quiet giving way to responsibility without any rush. It feels real and familiar, like stepping into something that just keeps moving. You held that balance really well. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 13th, 2026 08:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship… this carries that steady transition into the week…quiet giving way to responsibility without any rush. It feels real and familiar, like stepping into something that just keeps moving. You held that balance really well. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 13th, 2026 08:42
Because you believed.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship… this hit me hard…there’s a quiet strength in this that just stays with you. It feels steady, like something meant to be held onto. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 13th, 2026 08:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship… this hit me hard…there’s a quiet strength in this that just stays with you. It feels steady, like something meant to be held onto. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 13th, 2026 08:27
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